TRTC/Backpack - Revision history

Completionist: a lot of retouching; re-editing; etc etc

Completionist — Thu, 17 Apr 2014 23:38:28 GMT

a lot of retouching; re-editing; etc etc

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-	''No choice'' you think~~, who~~ knows what they ~~already did~~ to ~~you backpack. You grab your pants and slide~~ it ~~on, the cold wet fabric makes you squirm and struggle to get the pants over your waist. You hear voices and laughter, quickly you grab your shirt and hop into a stall.~~	+	''No choice'' you think. You definitely need your backpack back. Who knows what they might do to it?

-	~~"Haha! Did~~ you ~~see her face? So red!"~~	+	You grab your pants and slide it on; the cold wet fabric makes you squirm and struggle to get the pants over your waist.

-	~~Laughter~~.	+	You hear voices and laughter, and quickly grab your shirt and hop into a stall.
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		+	"Haha! Did you see her face? So red!"

-	~~"I know! She got what she deserved~~. ~~What should we do with her backpack?"~~	+	Laughter. You peek in from the stall's small opening. Three girls.

-	~~''They have my backpack~~.~~'' you feel rage as your shirt makes its way over you body~~.	+	"I know, right?" Another girl says. "She got what she deserved. What should we do with her backpack?"

-	~~"Soak the stuff inside~~!"	+	''They have my backpack!'' You feel rage as your shirt makes its way over your body.

-	~~Right as you burst out of~~ the ~~stall the door opens and..~~.	+	"Soak the stuff inside!" The third one suggests.

-	~~[[Jake;~~ the ~~most popular boy]]~~	+	Right as you are about to burst out of the stall, someone opens the door and stands in front of you.

-	[[Sarah~~; the girl you laughed at~~]]	+	You finish pulling down your shirt and say:
		+	*[[TRTC/Sarah\|"Hi, Sarah."]]

-	~~stands in the doorway.~~	+	[[Category: The Rush To Class]][[Category: The Abandoned Story]]

Completionist: Wear the wet close to get you backpack moved to TRTC/Backpack: Fixed. Page never even got linked to the main story; integrated

Completionist — Thu, 17 Apr 2014 23:26:56 GMT

Wear the wet close to get you backpack moved to TRTC/Backpack: Fixed. Page never even got linked to the main story; integrated

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Revision as of 23:26, 17 April 2014

Writing=Life: Created page with '''No choice'' you think, who knows what they already did to you backpack. You grab your pants and slide it on, the cold wet fabric makes you squirm and struggle to get the pants …'

Writing=Life — Sun, 13 Oct 2013 19:43:34 GMT

Created page with '''No choice'' you think, who knows what they already did to you backpack. You grab your pants and slide it on, the cold wet fabric makes you squirm and struggle to get the pants …'

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''No choice'' you think, who knows what they already did to you backpack. You grab your pants and slide it on, the cold wet fabric makes you squirm and struggle to get the pants over your waist. You hear voices and laughter, quickly you grab your shirt and hop into a stall.

"Haha! Did you see her face? So red!"

Laughter.

"I know! She got what she deserved. What should we do with her backpack?"

''They have my backpack.'' you feel rage as your shirt makes its way over you body.

"Soak the stuff inside!"

Right as you burst out of the stall the door opens and...

[[Jake; the most popular boy]]

[[Sarah; the girl you laughed at]]

stands in the doorway.