Subject 413 - Revision history

Platypus: Reverted edit of Sonrodmi, changed back to last version by RandyRift

Platypus — Sun, 07 Apr 2013 22:16:40 GMT

Reverted edit of Sonrodmi, changed back to last version by RandyRift

Sonrodmi — Sun, 07 Apr 2013 20:36:13 GMT

Adventure begins here:

RandyRift — Sat, 29 May 2010 14:30:52 GMT

Description:

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	READ THE DISCUSSION PAGE BEFORE EDITTING THIS STORY!		READ THE DISCUSSION PAGE BEFORE EDITTING THIS STORY!

RandyRift — Sat, 29 May 2010 13:46:08 GMT

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	== Description: ==		== Description: ==
-		+	READ THE DISCUSSION PAGE BEFORE EDITTING THIS STORY!
-	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after May 2010 [tentative date], so I can get the main arcs completed. Thoughts are in italics, spoken words are in bold. Once you read these pages you can suggest ideas in the discussion page and I may include them. [I already have a lot planned.])	+

	== Adventure begins here: ==		== Adventure begins here: ==

RandyRift — Thu, 01 Apr 2010 20:57:35 GMT

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	== Adventure begins here: ==		== Adventure begins here: ==

-	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. ~~Flickering fluorescent~~ lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort, unable to remember how you got here.	+	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Fluorescent lights brighten the room. One of them flickers in an irritating way. You are lying on a cot of some sort, unable to remember how you got here.

	*[[s413 Try to stand up\|Try to stand up]]		*[[s413 Try to stand up\|Try to stand up]]

RandyRift — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 21:17:21 GMT

Adventure begins here:

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	== Adventure begins here: ==		== Adventure begins here: ==

-	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.	+	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort, unable to remember how you got here.

	*[[s413 Try to stand up\|Try to stand up]]		*[[s413 Try to stand up\|Try to stand up]]

RandyRift — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 20:00:06 GMT

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-	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after May 2010 [tentative date], so I can get the main arcs completed.)	+	== Description: ==
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		+	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after May 2010 [tentative date], so I can get the main arcs completed. Thoughts are in italics, spoken words are in bold. Once you read these pages you can suggest ideas in the discussion page and I may include them. [I already have a lot planned.])
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		+	== Adventure begins here: ==

	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.		You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.

RandyRift — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 16:23:04 GMT

←Older revision		Revision as of 16:23, 31 March 2010
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-	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after ~~April~~ 2010 so I can get the main arcs completed.)	+	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after May 2010 [tentative date], so I can get the main arcs completed.)

	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.		You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.

RandyRift — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 16:08:12 GMT

←Older revision		Revision as of 16:08, 31 March 2010
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-	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010, and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after April 2010 so I can get the main arcs completed.)	+	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010], and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after April 2010 so I can get the main arcs completed.)

	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.		You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.

RandyRift — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 16:07:57 GMT

←Older revision		Revision as of 16:07, 31 March 2010
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-	(This is my first CYOA story and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after April 2010 so I can get the main arcs ~~complete~~)	+	(This is my first CYOA story [started March 30, 2010, and would appreciate it if no story edits are made until after April 2010 so I can get the main arcs completed.)

	You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.		You open your eyes to see a white tiled ceiling. Flickering fluorescent lights brighten the room. You are lying on a cot of some sort.