Saya/Innocent Dress/2 - Revision history

Zoroastra: Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Innocent Dress moved to Saya/Innocent Dress/2

Zoroastra — Fri, 02 Mar 2012 22:23:41 GMT

Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. *Innocent Dress* moved to Saya/Innocent Dress/2

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Zoroastra at 11:40, 8 February 2012

Zoroastra — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 11:40:23 GMT

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country as a symbol of our Alliance]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighboring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country to enforce a ceasefire]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighboring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Innocent_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Innocent_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]
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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Innocent_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Innocent_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|~~Money~~=~~250~~\|~~Possesions~~=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Chlo's-closet: Spelling, capitalization, exclamation point, etc. Also, change sentences to flow better. The actual meaning hasn't changed.

Chlo's-closet — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 01:03:30 GMT

Spelling, capitalization, exclamation point, etc. Also, change sentences to flow better. The actual meaning hasn't changed.

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-	You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends~~, they~~ all wear suspiciously large outfits and offer their condolences for the man you'll be marrying. You wonder why everyone acts as ~~tough~~ your little deception is such a bad thing..? One of them surprises you with a set of ~~Black~~ combat gloves and armguards, along with shin-protectors and combat boots. Judging by the quality of these items and his general income, you'd say he spent at least a year's salary on these.	+	You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends. They all wear suspiciously large outfits and offer their condolences for the man you'll be marrying. You wonder why everyone acts as though your little deception is such a bad thing. One of them surprises you with a set of black combat gloves and armguards, along with shin-protectors and combat boots. Judging by the quality of these items and his general income, you'd say he spent at least a year's salary on these.

-	You're torn between telling him he shouldn't have spent this much money for a farewell gift and the urge to jump him. You end up doing both. He chuckles and puts you down. "I would know of no better investment than your happiness milady" he says with an extremely polite tone while mock bowing.	+	You're torn between telling him he shouldn't have spent this much money for a farewell gift and the urge to jump him. You end up doing both. He chuckles and puts you down. "I would know of no better investment than your happiness, milady" he says with an extremely polite tone while mock bowing.

-	"I.. ~~thanks~~." is all you manage to say before he hugs you and tells you to take care of yourself. Such a sweetie-pie, no wonder you couldn't stop teasing him continuously for the past 4 years. You kiss him on the lips, a very rare thing for you to do. ~~you~~ may be ~~playfull~~ and tease people alot, but you ~~allmost~~ never actually get intimate with them.	+	"I... thanks" is all you manage to say before he hugs you and tells you to take care of yourself. Such a sweetie-pie, no wonder you couldn't stop teasing him continuously for the past 4 years! You kiss him on the lips, a very rare thing for you to do. You may be playful and tease people alot, but you almost never actually get intimate with them.

-	"You take care too sweetie-pie." you say as you turn around and hurry off before he notices the blush on your cheeks. Leaving him standing there dazed.	+	"You take care too, sweetie-pie," you say. Then, you turn around and hurry off before he notices the blush on your cheeks. Leaving him standing there dazed.

	You feel invigorated and ready for anything as you run up to your carriage and meet your escort party.		You feel invigorated and ready for anything as you run up to your carriage and meet your escort party.

-	There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids, a uselessly large entourage ~~as usual~~.	+	There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids. It's the usual, uselessly large entourage.

-	You recognize the guards as some of your favorite sparring partners, your dad must have hand-picked them. You make a mental note to give him a big thanks before leaving.	+	You recognize the guards as some of your favorite sparring partners; your dad must have hand-picked them. You make a mental note to give him a big thanks before leaving.

	You were never that close to the servants, but most of them are cute-looking boys (the type you love to tease). And a few equally cute maids.		You were never that close to the servants, but most of them are cute-looking boys (the type you love to tease). And a few equally cute maids.

-	You also recognize one of the older maids... Betty. She's been around since you were a 'wee little baby' and has been ~~going~~ on your nerves for about equally long. Your father must have send her along to make sure you behave... probably a wise move, if extremely annoying.	+	You also recognize one of the older maids... Betty. She's been around since you were a 'wee little baby' and has been getting on your nerves for about equally long. Your father must have send her along to make sure you behave... probably a wise move, if extremely annoying.

-	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you~~, he~~'s a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar ~~accros~~ his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.	+	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you. He's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar across his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.

-	"Ah you've finally arrived lass." ~~he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. Another reason you like him.~~	+	"Ah you've finally arrived, lass."

-	~~"I see~~ you~~'re really in~~ the ~~mood huh? I pity your poor victim allready" he says in~~ a ~~mock-sympathetic voice~~.	+	He speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. Another reason you like him.

-	"~~Hmm, aren~~'~~t you just jealous that he gets such a delicate flower all for himself?, Duran." you say mockingly. He rolls his eyes. "So~~, ~~we all set to go~~? I ~~can't wait to meet the evil guy that bought me.~~" ~~you say this~~ in a ~~happy~~-voice ~~to lighten the mood. Offcourse its hardly far from the truth~~.	+	"I see you're really in the mood, huh? I pity your poor victim already" he says in a mock-sympathetic voice.

-	"~~Allright then lass~~, I'~~ll drag your sold ass there meself."~~ he ~~plays along while snickering~~.	+	"Hmm, aren't you just jealous that he gets such a delicate flower all for himself, Duran?" you say mockingly. He rolls his eyes.

-	"So ~~since you~~'~~re escorting~~ me ~~there~~ you ~~should finally be able~~ to ~~tell me who I~~'~~m going to be marrying no?"~~	+	"So, we all set to go? I can't wait to meet the evil guy that bought me," you say this in a happy-voice to lighten the mood. Of course, it's hardly far from the truth.

-	"Sure lass, we'll be taking you to~~... :~~"	+	"Alright then lass, I'll drag your sold ass there myself," he plays along while snickering.
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		+	"So since you're escorting me there you should finally be able to tell me who I'm going to be marrying, no?"
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		+	"Sure, lass, we'll be taking you to-"

Zoroastra at 19:10, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 19:10:40 GMT

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Innocent_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. Innocent_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Innocent_Dress_2]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Innocent_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. Innocent_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Innocent_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Innocent_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Innocent_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra at 10:25, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 10:25:10 GMT

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	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.		You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.

-	"Ah you've finally arrived lass." he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. Another reason you like him~~. His drinking habits are something you like alot less however~~.	+	"Ah you've finally arrived lass." he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. Another reason you like him.

-	"~~Ah, nothing beats the smell of alcohol~~ in the ~~morning does it, Duran.~~" ~~you say sarcastically~~. ~~"So, are we all ready to go?"~~	+	"I see you're really in the mood huh? I pity your poor victim allready" he says in a mock-sympathetic voice.

-	"~~Ready whenever you are~~, ~~didn~~'t ~~think~~ you'~~d be so eager~~ to ~~get going tough~~. ~~Something good happen?~~"	+	"Hmm, aren't you just jealous that he gets such a delicate flower all for himself?, Duran." you say mockingly. He rolls his eyes. "So, we all set to go? I can't wait to meet the evil guy that bought me." you say this in a happy-voice to lighten the mood. Offcourse its hardly far from the truth.

-	"uh, ~~nothing really..." -you quickly change the topic to avoid the faint blush you feel rising to~~ your ~~cheeks- "so Duran, since you're escorting me~~ there ~~you should finally be able to tell me who I'm going to be marrying no?~~"	+	"Allright then lass, I'll drag your sold ass there meself." he plays along while snickering.

-	~~Duran smirks, he's sure to have noticed the way~~ you're ~~acting~~ "~~sure~~ lass, we'll be taking you to... :"	+	"So since you're escorting me there you should finally be able to tell me who I'm going to be marrying no?"
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		+	"Sure lass, we'll be taking you to... :"

Zoroastra at 10:22, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 10:22:31 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Innocent_Dress_2]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Innocent_Dress_2]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Money=250\|Possesions='', Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra at 10:22, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 10:22:02 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Innocent_Dress_2]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Innocent_Dress_2]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=~~Excited~~\|Money=250\|Possesions='', Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Money=250\|Possesions='', Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends, they all wear suspiciously large outfits and offer their condolences for the man you'll be marrying. You wonder why everyone acts as tough your little deception is such a bad thing..? One of them surprises you with a set of Black combat gloves and armguards, along with shin-protectors and combat boots. Judging by the quality of these items and his general income, you'd say he spent at least a year's salary on these.

You're torn between telling him he shouldn't have spent this much money for a farewell gift and the urge to jump him. You end up doing both. He chuckles and puts you down. "I would know of no better investment than your happiness milady" he says with an extremely polite tone while mock bowing.

"I.. thanks." is all you manage to say before he hugs you and tells you to take care of yourself. Such a sweetie-pie, no wonder you couldn't stop teasing him continuously for the past 4 years. You kiss him on the lips, a very rare thing for you to do. you may be playfull and tease people alot, but you allmost never actually get intimate with them.

"You take care too sweetie-pie." you say as you turn around and hurry off before he notices the blush on your cheeks. Leaving him standing there dazed.

You feel invigorated and ready for anything as you run up to your carriage and meet your escort party.

There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids, a uselessly large entourage as usual.

You recognize the guards as some of your favorite sparring partners, your dad must have hand-picked them. You make a mental note to give him a big thanks before leaving.

You were never that close to the servants, but most of them are cute-looking boys (the type you love to tease). And a few equally cute maids.

You also recognize one of the older maids... Betty. She's been around since you were a 'wee little baby' and has been going on your nerves for about equally long. Your father must have send her along to make sure you behave... probably a wise move, if extremely annoying.

You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.

"Ah you've finally arrived lass." he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. Another reason you like him. His drinking habits are something you like alot less however.

"Ah, nothing beats the smell of alcohol in the morning does it, Duran." you say sarcastically. "So, are we all ready to go?"

"Ready whenever you are, didn't think you'd be so eager to get going tough. Something good happen?"

"uh, nothing really..." -you quickly change the topic to avoid the faint blush you feel rising to your cheeks- "so Duran, since you're escorting me there you should finally be able to tell me who I'm going to be marrying no?"

Duran smirks, he's sure to have noticed the way you're acting "sure lass, we'll be taking you to... :"

[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. *Innocent_Dress_2*]]

[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. *Innocent_Dress_2*]]

[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. *Innocent_Dress_2*]]

[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. *Innocent_Dress_2*]]

[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. *Innocent_Dress_2*]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Excited|Money=250|Possesions='', Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country as a symbol of our Alliance]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighboring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country to enforce a ceasefire]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Innocent_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighboring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Innocent_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Innocent_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]
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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Innocent_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Innocent_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|~~Money~~=~~250~~\|~~Possesions~~=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Innocent Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=playfull\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Saya/Innocent Dress/2 - Revision history

Zoroastra: Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. *Innocent Dress* moved to Saya/Innocent Dress/2

Zoroastra at 11:40, 8 February 2012

Chlo's-closet: Spelling, capitalization, exclamation point, etc. Also, change sentences to flow better. The actual meaning hasn't changed.

Zoroastra at 19:10, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra at 10:25, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra at 10:22, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra at 10:22, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra: Created page with 'You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends, they all wear suspiciously large outfits and offer their condolences for the man you'll be marrying. You wonder why everyone acts a…'

Zoroastra: Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Innocent Dress moved to Saya/Innocent Dress/2