Frozenrapids at 20:28, 4 May 2010

Frozenrapids — Tue, 04 May 2010 20:28:20 GMT

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-	McBean left the town all a mess	+	Sylvester McMonkey McBean left the town all a mess

-	Everyone's wallets now contain much less.	+	Everyone's wallets now contain much much less.

	The chaos of this effort to become one another,		The chaos of this effort to become one another,

-	Everyone can now see is not worth the bother.	+	Everyone can now see is not quite worth the bother.

-	~~Within~~ the beaches everyone can see,	+	All over the beaches everyone can see,

-	A new way to work together, as you and me.	+	A new way to work together, simply as you and me.


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	A new place to sit,		A new place to sit,

-	to play, laugh, talk ~~and sometimes~~ nit.	+	to play, laugh, talk or nit.

	Improving conditions for Sneetches all around,		Improving conditions for Sneetches all around,

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HelyxChase — Tue, 04 May 2010 05:37:00 GMT

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McBean left the town all a mess

Everyone's wallets now contain much less.

The chaos of this effort to become one another,

Everyone can now see is not worth the bother.

Within the beaches everyone can see,

A new way to work together, as you and me.

Across lines of difference Sneetches now reach,

To see through the lies in that old McBean's speech.

To be like each other is not really the answer,

But instead leads to jealousy that spreads like a cancer.

For you and for me,

They planted a tree,

A new place to sit,

to play, laugh, talk and sometimes nit.

Improving conditions for Sneetches all around,

Through McBean's selfish deception a new lesson has been found.

[[Category: Revisiting the Sneetches]]

New Way - Revision history

Frozenrapids at 20:28, 4 May 2010

HelyxChase: Created page with 'McBean left the town all a mess Everyone's wallets now contain much less. The chaos of this effort to become one another, Everyone can now see is not worth the bother. Within…'