Neminis: Some grammar fixes.

Neminis — Fri, 06 Mar 2015 18:03:39 GMT

Some grammar fixes.

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-	You are William Faye, a 20 year old university student. You have short dark hair with a clean shaven face. You also have dark (near black) brown eyes and a muscular body.	+	You are William Faye: a 20 year old university student. You have short dark hair, with a clean shaven face. You also have dark (near black) brown eyes and a muscular body.

-	At the moment ~~your~~ are in your apartment in bed but ~~a wake, being~~ a weekend you have stayed at home being a general slob. Your girlfriend ~~tracy~~ has just ~~text~~ you that she is coming around ~~and~~ you are waiting for her to get ~~her~~ watching top gear on the ~~t.v~~. Just then the doorbell rings ~~what~~ do you do.	+	At the moment, you are in your apartment in bed, but awake. Being a weekend you have stayed at home being a general slob. Your girlfriend, Tracy, has just sent you a text, saying that she is coming around. So, you are waiting for her to get here, while watching top gear on the TV, to pass the time. Just then, the doorbell rings. What do you do?

	[[Put some boxers on and answer the door]]		[[Put some boxers on and answer the door]]

-	[[~~quickly~~ get dressed and answer the door]]	+	[[Quickly get dressed and answer the door]]

-	[[~~stay~~ naked and answer the door, that is the only reason ~~tracy~~ is here]]	+	[[Stay naked and answer the door, that is the only reason Tracy is here]]

	[[category: Inevitable]]		[[category: Inevitable]]

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You are William Faye, a 20 year old university student. You have short dark hair with a clean shaven face. You also have dark (near black) brown eyes and a muscular body.

At the moment your are in your apartment in bed but a wake, being a weekend you have stayed at home being a general slob. Your girlfriend tracy has just text you that she is coming around and you are waiting for her to get her watching top gear on the t.v. Just then the doorbell rings what do you do.

[[Put some boxers on and answer the door]]

[[quickly get dressed and answer the door]]

[[stay naked and answer the door, that is the only reason tracy is here]]

[[category: Inevitable]]

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Neminis: Some grammar fixes.

Loose screw: Created page with 'You are William Faye, a 20 year old university student. You have short dark hair with a clean shaven face. You also have dark (near black) brown eyes and a muscular body. At the…'