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BakaG at 08:28, 7 March 2015

BakaG — Sat, 07 Mar 2015 08:28:40 GMT

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	In this story, you will be a 15 year old freshman, in high school, named Zach. You are tall and thin, but with decent muscles. You have a somewhat outgoing personality; but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house, in an upper-middle class family. Now, lets meet your family!		In this story, you will be a 15 year old freshman, in high school, named Zach. You are tall and thin, but with decent muscles. You have a somewhat outgoing personality; but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house, in an upper-middle class family. Now, lets meet your family!

-	Rick (dad)- An average sized man in his mid forties. Not too bulky, but not skinny, either. He works as a stock broker in down-town Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kid's sporting events.	+	'''Rick (dad)-''' An average sized man in his mid forties. Not too bulky, but not skinny, either. He works as a stock broker in down-town Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kid's sporting events.

-	Kathy (mom)- A short, thick woman in her early forties, with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.	+	'''Kathy (mom)-''' A short, thick woman in her early forties, with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.

-	Josh (brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just likes to be lazy. His hobbies include video games (like a lot of video games), some basketball, watching videos on Youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.	+	'''Josh (brother)-''' A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just likes to be lazy. His hobbies include video games (like a lot of video games), some basketball, watching videos on Youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.
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		+	'''Emily (sister)-''' A tall, yet really skinny, girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a mature body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading, watching TV, singing, and playing with friends.

-	Emily (sister)- A tall, yet really skinny, girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a mature body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading, watching TV, singing, and playing with friends.

	That's just your regular family. Your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.		That's just your regular family. Your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.

-	Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother; slightly shorter than Rick. He is a little more chubby than your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in downtown Seattle. His hobbies are just like Rick's, but Jeff is a little more laid back.	+	'''Jeff (uncle)-''' Rick's brother; slightly shorter than Rick. He is a little more chubby than your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in downtown Seattle. His hobbies are just like Rick's, but Jeff is a little more laid back.

-	Jill (aunt)- A very thick woman with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.	+	'''Jill (aunt)-''' A very thick woman with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.

-	Owen (cousin)- A hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody two-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.	+	'''Owen (cousin)-''' A hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody two-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.

-	Hannah (cousin) - A medium sized girl, in all aspects, with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then Emily's, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.	+	'''Hannah (cousin)-''' A medium sized girl, in all aspects, with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then Emily's, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.

	So that's the family! More characters will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.		So that's the family! More characters will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.

BakaG: You don't need so many goddamned commas. Also, "an herb" is not something you use to treat "a hernia". Only use "an" when the H is silent.

BakaG — Sat, 07 Mar 2015 08:27:05 GMT

You don't need so many goddamned commas. Also, "an herb" is not something you use to treat "a hernia". Only use "an" when the H is silent.

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-	In this story, you will be a 15 year old freshman, in high school, named Zach. You are tall and thin, but with decent muscles. You have a, somewhat, outgoing personality; but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house, in an upper-middle class family. Now, lets meet your family!	+	In this story, you will be a 15 year old freshman, in high school, named Zach. You are tall and thin, but with decent muscles. You have a somewhat outgoing personality; but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house, in an upper-middle class family. Now, lets meet your family!

-	Rick (dad)- An average sized man, in his mid forties. Not too bulky, but not skinny, either. He works as a stock broker, in down-town Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kid's sporting events.	+	Rick (dad)- An average sized man in his mid forties. Not too bulky, but not skinny, either. He works as a stock broker in down-town Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kid's sporting events.

-	Kathy (mom)- A short, thick woman, in her early forties, with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.	+	Kathy (mom)- A short, thick woman in her early forties, with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.

-	Josh (brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid, who usually just likes to be lazy. His hobbies include video games (like a lot of video games), some basketball, watching videos on Youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.	+	Josh (brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just likes to be lazy. His hobbies include video games (like a lot of video games), some basketball, watching videos on Youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.

-	Emily (sister)- A tall, yet really skinny, girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9, so she has yet to develop a mature body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading, watching TV, singing, and playing with friends.	+	Emily (sister)- A tall, yet really skinny, girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a mature body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading, watching TV, singing, and playing with friends.

	That's just your regular family. Your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.		That's just your regular family. Your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.

-	Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother ~~and is~~ slightly shorter ~~then~~ Rick. He is a little more chubby ~~then~~ your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in ~~down-town~~ Seattle. His hobbies are just like ~~Ricks~~, but Jeff is a little more laid back.	+	Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother; slightly shorter than Rick. He is a little more chubby than your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in downtown Seattle. His hobbies are just like Rick's, but Jeff is a little more laid back.

	Jill (aunt)- A very thick woman with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.		Jill (aunt)- A very thick woman with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.

-	Owen (cousin)- An hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody ~~too~~-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.	+	Owen (cousin)- A hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody two-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.

	Hannah (cousin) - A medium sized girl, in all aspects, with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then Emily's, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.		Hannah (cousin) - A medium sized girl, in all aspects, with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then Emily's, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.

Neminis: Woman (singular). Women (plural).

Neminis — Fri, 06 Mar 2015 22:49:04 GMT

Woman (singular). Women (plural).

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	Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother and is slightly shorter then Rick. He is a little more chubby then your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in down-town Seattle. His hobbies are just like Ricks, but Jeff is a little more laid back.		Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother and is slightly shorter then Rick. He is a little more chubby then your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in down-town Seattle. His hobbies are just like Ricks, but Jeff is a little more laid back.

-	Jill (aunt)- A very thick ~~women~~ with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.	+	Jill (aunt)- A very thick woman with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.

	Owen (cousin)- An hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody too-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.		Owen (cousin)- An hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody too-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.

Neminis: Grammar, punctuation and spelling fixes. I left the contradictions, in the descriptions, untouched. Someone else can deal with those.

Neminis — Fri, 06 Mar 2015 22:47:54 GMT

Grammar, punctuation and spelling fixes. I left the contradictions, in the descriptions, untouched. Someone else can deal with those.

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-	In this story you will be a 15 year old freshman in high school named Zach. You are tall thin, but with decent muscles. You ~~gave~~ a somewhat outgoing personality, but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house in a upper middle class family. Now lets meet your family!	+	In this story, you will be a 15 year old freshman, in high school, named Zach. You are tall and thin, but with decent muscles. You have a, somewhat, outgoing personality; but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house, in an upper-middle class family. Now, lets meet your family!

-	Rick(dad)- An average sized man in his mid forties. Not to bulky, but not skinny ~~ether~~. He works as a stock broker in ~~downtown~~ Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his ~~kids~~ sporting events.	+	Rick (dad)- An average sized man, in his mid forties. Not too bulky, but not skinny, either. He works as a stock broker, in down-town Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kid's sporting events.

-	Kathy(mom)- A ~~shorts women~~ in her early forties~~. A pretty thick women~~ with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.	+	Kathy (mom)- A short, thick woman, in her early forties, with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.

-	Josh(brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just ~~like~~ to be lazy. His hobbies include video games like a lot of video games, some basketball, watching videos on ~~youtube~~, reading, and hanging out with friends.	+	Josh (brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid, who usually just likes to be lazy. His hobbies include video games (like a lot of video games), some basketball, watching videos on Youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.

-	Emily(sister)-A tall yet really skinny girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a ~~real~~ body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading,watching tv, singing, and playing with friends.	+	Emily (sister)- A tall, yet really skinny, girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9, so she has yet to develop a mature body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading, watching TV, singing, and playing with friends.

-	That's just your regular family~~, your~~ aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.	+	That's just your regular family. Your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.

-	Jeff(uncle)-~~Ricks~~ brother and is slightly shorter then ~~rick~~. He is a little more chubby then your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in ~~downtown~~ Seattle. His hobbies are just like Ricks, but Jeff is a little more laid back.	+	Jeff (uncle)- Rick's brother and is slightly shorter then Rick. He is a little more chubby then your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in down-town Seattle. His hobbies are just like Ricks, but Jeff is a little more laid back.

-	Jill(aunt)- A very thick women with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like ~~Kathys~~ as they are best friends.	+	Jill (aunt)- A very thick women with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathy's, as they are best friends.

-	Owen(cousin)-A hilariously high strung and annoying goody too-shoes. ~~Hes~~ not to tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.	+	Owen (cousin)- An hilariously high strung, and annoying, goody too-shoes. He's not too tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.

-	Hannah(cousin)-A medium sized girl in all aspects with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then ~~emilys~~, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.	+	Hannah (cousin) - A medium sized girl, in all aspects, with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then Emily's, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.

-	So that's the family! More ~~charactors~~ will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.	+	So that's the family! More characters will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.

	*[[start story]]		*[[start story]]
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	[[Category:Im just a boy]]		[[Category:Im just a boy]]

Platypus at 02:01, 21 October 2013

Platypus — Mon, 21 Oct 2013 02:01:36 GMT

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	*[[start story]]		*[[start story]]
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Bambam32 at 00:17, 21 October 2013

Bambam32 — Mon, 21 Oct 2013 00:17:03 GMT

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	So that's the family! More charactors will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.		So that's the family! More charactors will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.

-	*[[~~begin~~]]	+	*[[start story]]

Bambam32 at 00:16, 21 October 2013

Bambam32 — Mon, 21 Oct 2013 00:16:20 GMT

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	Josh(brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just like to be lazy. His hobbies include video games like a lot of video games, some basketball, watching videos on youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.		Josh(brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just like to be lazy. His hobbies include video games like a lot of video games, some basketball, watching videos on youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.

-	Emily(sister)-A tall yet really skinny girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a real body. She is high strung and ~~hares~~ you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading,watching tv, singing, and playing with friends.	+	Emily(sister)-A tall yet really skinny girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a real body. She is high strung and hates you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading,watching tv, singing, and playing with friends.
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		+	That's just your regular family, your aunt and uncle live around the corner and you're really close to them.
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		+	Jeff(uncle)-Ricks brother and is slightly shorter then rick. He is a little more chubby then your dad, but still pretty thin. He works in real estate in downtown Seattle. His hobbies are just like Ricks, but Jeff is a little more laid back.
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		+	Jill(aunt)- A very thick women with large breasts and a large ass. She is very straight forward, but loves to have fun. Her hobbies are just like Kathys as they are best friends.
		+
		+	Owen(cousin)-A hilariously high strung and annoying goody too-shoes. Hes not to tall for a sixth grader and is pretty chubby. His hobbies are reading, writing, and playing video games.
		+
		+	Hannah(cousin)-A medium sized girl in all aspects with a shy personality. Her body is a little more developed then emilys, but she is still young. She mostly does stuff with friends.
		+
		+	So that's the family! More charactors will be introduced as the story goes on. 18+ so if you're offended by that type of stuff don't read, others enjoy.
		+
		+	*[[begin]]

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In this story you will be a 15 year old freshman in high school named Zach. You are tall thin, but with decent muscles. You gave a somewhat outgoing personality, but you can be a little shy. You live in a large house in a upper middle class family. Now lets meet your family!

Rick(dad)- An average sized man in his mid forties. Not to bulky, but not skinny ether. He works as a stock broker in downtown Seattle. He is a pretty strict parent, but can pretty laid back. His hobbies include football, beer, and going to his kids sporting events.

Kathy(mom)- A shorts women in her early forties. A pretty thick women with D cup breasts and a nice ass. She is almost always really nice, but can be strict like your dad. Her hobbies include computer games, drinking, and hanging out with friends.

Josh(brother)- A kinda tall, but a little chubby boy in 7th grade. An almost always laid back kid who usually just like to be lazy. His hobbies include video games like a lot of video games, some basketball, watching videos on youtube, reading, and hanging out with friends.

Emily(sister)-A tall yet really skinny girl in 3rd grade. She is only 9 so she has yet to develop a real body. She is high strung and hares you most of the time. Her hobbies include reading,watching tv, singing, and playing with friends.