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Zhriwritin: /* Before We Begin */

Zhriwritin — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 02:26:21 GMT

Before We Begin

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	--Zhriwritin, original author.		--Zhriwritin, original author.
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Zhriwritin: /* Central characters */

Zhriwritin — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 02:25:43 GMT

Central characters

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	# Anise, the talkative hostess. Age 18		# Anise, the talkative hostess. Age 18
	# Georgia, the intimidating manager and owner of DC. Age 29		# Georgia, the intimidating manager and owner of DC. Age 29
-	~~# Cwen, Wynne's younger sister who reveals Wynne's secret(s) to Kinta. Age 15~~
	# Louise, a temperamental waitress. Age 21		# Louise, a temperamental waitress. Age 21
		+	# Abbey, Head cook. Age 22
		+	# Cwen, Wynne's younger sister who reveals Wynne's secret(s) to Kinta. Age 15
	# Sophia, Georgia's sister, and eventually owner of the second DC location. Age 27		# Sophia, Georgia's sister, and eventually owner of the second DC location. Age 27

Zhriwritin: /* Page 1 */

Zhriwritin — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 01:57:41 GMT

Page 1

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	Today is Kinta's first day at DC, one of the most exclusive restaurants on earth. As far as he knows, the employees of this 3-month-old restaurant are the only people to even know what type of food is served there.		Today is Kinta's first day at DC, one of the most exclusive restaurants on earth. As far as he knows, the employees of this 3-month-old restaurant are the only people to even know what type of food is served there.
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	Needless to say, he'd never have landed the job if it weren't for a recommendation put in by Rona, a close friend of his. He had never been a chef, however, so he felt safe assuming that he'd have one of the more menial restaurant jobs.		Needless to say, he'd never have landed the job if it weren't for a recommendation put in by Rona, a close friend of his. He had never been a chef, however, so he felt safe assuming that he'd have one of the more menial restaurant jobs.

	Upon entering through the front door, Kinta found himself in a small, dim, tiled room with a single door. In front of the door was a bright-white velvet rope, and beside it was a small wooden podium with the letters "DC" embedded into it. The woman behind the podium, who appeared to be his own age, was evidently the seating hostess.		Upon entering through the front door, Kinta found himself in a small, dim, tiled room with a single door. In front of the door was a bright-white velvet rope, and beside it was a small wooden podium with the letters "DC" embedded into it. The woman behind the podium, who appeared to be his own age, was evidently the seating hostess.
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	"I'm sorry, We're booked on reservations today," Said the woman. "Please take a reservation form and come again."		"I'm sorry, We're booked on reservations today," Said the woman. "Please take a reservation form and come again."
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	"Actually," said Kinta, "I'm here with an application." He handed a neatly-folded sheet of paper to her.		"Actually," said Kinta, "I'm here with an application." He handed a neatly-folded sheet of paper to her.
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	She opened the paper, looked over the first three questions, and set it onto the podium. After looking back at him for a moment, she checked it.		She opened the paper, looked over the first three questions, and set it onto the podium. After looking back at him for a moment, she checked it.
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	Kinta would've assumed that she'd leave that job to the employer.		Kinta would've assumed that she'd leave that job to the employer.
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	"Okay, then. Welcome to DC! I'm Anise, the greeter."		"Okay, then. Welcome to DC! I'm Anise, the greeter."
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	"Nice to meet you, Anise," said Kinta. "Eh, what job will I have?"		"Nice to meet you, Anise," said Kinta. "Eh, what job will I have?"

Zhriwritin at 01:55, 9 January 2012

Zhriwritin — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 01:55:30 GMT

Zhriwritin: Created page with 'ome to DC!=== Kinta is a 19-year-old boy who has just landed a job at DC, a small and elusive restaurant that is believed to be incredibly popular. Guide our friend Kinta throug…'

Zhriwritin — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 01:53:26 GMT

Created page with 'ome to DC!=== Kinta is a 19-year-old boy who has just landed a job at DC, a small and elusive restaurant that is believed to be incredibly popular. Guide our friend Kinta throug…'

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ome to DC!===
Kinta is a 19-year-old boy who has just landed a job at DC, a small and elusive restaurant that is believed to be incredibly popular. Guide our friend Kinta through this segment of his life, and help him to:

1. Unravel the mysteries of DC

2. Be an influential member of this great establishment.

===Central characters===
# Kinta, the main character. Knows very little about DC. Age 19
# Rona, Kinta's Animated best friend. She works as dishwasher. Age 20
# Lauren, Kinta's shy ex-girlfriend. She works as bartender. Age 19
# Wynne, Busgirl, a suspicious previous acquaintance of Kinta. Age 24
# Anise, the talkative hostess. Age 18
# Georgia, the intimidating manager and owner of DC. Age 29
# Cwen, Wynne's younger sister who reveals Wynne's secret(s) to Kinta. Age 15
# Louise, a temperamental waitress. Age 21
# Sophia, Georgia's sister, and eventually owner of the second DC location. Age 27

===Before We Begin===

Rating: Adult for sexual situations (a major theme) and occasional adult language.

Rules:

* Feel free to begin redlined pages, but do not edit pages made up of an (IN PROGRESS) tag. This tag indicates that someone else (myself included) has already began writing for this path, even if no writing has been posted yet.

* If a segment has already been written, do not alter it. You may, however, correct spelling or punctuation errors.

* The following themes are blacklisted from the story: Rape, bestiality, pedophilia (involving anyone under 18), scat, furries, intense violence (homicide or suicide) and use of hard drugs (drugs other than alcohol, marijuana, caffeine and tobacco).

* Please contact me before introducing main characters or settings that you've invented. I know it seems like a control-freak policy, but these things get out of hand without that rule.

--Zhriwritin, original author.

===Page 1===
''Today is Kinta's first day at DC, one of the most exclusive restaurants on earth. As far as he knows, the employees of this 3-month-old restaurant are the only people to even know what type of food is served there. ''
''Needless to say, he'd never have landed the job if it weren't for a recommendation put in by Rona, a close friend of his. He had never been a chef, however, so he felt safe assuming that he'd have one of the more menial restaurant jobs.''

''Upon entering through the front door, Kinta found himself in a small, dim, tiled room with a single door. In front of the door was a bright-white velvet rope, and beside it was a small wooden podium with the letters "DC" embedded into it. The woman behind the podium, who appeared to be his own age, was evidently the seating hostess.
''"I'm sorry, We're booked on reservations today,"'' Said the woman. ''"Please take a reservation form and come again."''
''"Actually,"'' said Kinta, ''"I'm here with an application."'' He handed a neatly-folded sheet of paper to her.
She opened the paper, looked over the first three questions, and set it onto the podium. After looking back at him for a moment, she checked it.
Kinta would've assumed that she'd leave that job to the employer.
''"Okay, then. Welcome to DC! I'm Anise, the greeter."
"Nice to meet you, Anise,"'' said Kinta. ''"Eh, what job will I have?''

*[[DC/"We've been looking for a dishwasher."]]
*[[DC/"You'll be the new busboy."]]
*[[DC/"We're going to have you wait tables."]]
*[[DC/"You can bartend, right?"]]

[[Category: DC]]

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	Kinta is a 19-year-old boy who has just landed a job at DC, a small and elusive restaurant that is believed to be incredibly popular. Guide our friend Kinta through this segment of his life, and help him to:		Kinta is a 19-year-old boy who has just landed a job at DC, a small and elusive restaurant that is believed to be incredibly popular. Guide our friend Kinta through this segment of his life, and help him to:

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	===Page 1===		===Page 1===
-	''Today is Kinta's first day at DC, one of the most exclusive restaurants on earth. As far as he knows, the employees of this 3-month-old restaurant are the only people to even know what type of food is served there. ''	+	Today is Kinta's first day at DC, one of the most exclusive restaurants on earth. As far as he knows, the employees of this 3-month-old restaurant are the only people to even know what type of food is served there.
-	''Needless to say, he'd never have landed the job if it weren't for a recommendation put in by Rona, a close friend of his. He had never been a chef, however, so he felt safe assuming that he'd have one of the more menial restaurant jobs.''	+	Needless to say, he'd never have landed the job if it weren't for a recommendation put in by Rona, a close friend of his. He had never been a chef, however, so he felt safe assuming that he'd have one of the more menial restaurant jobs.

-	''Upon entering through the front door, Kinta found himself in a small, dim, tiled room with a single door. In front of the door was a bright-white velvet rope, and beside it was a small wooden podium with the letters "DC" embedded into it. The woman behind the podium, who appeared to be his own age, was evidently the seating hostess.	+	Upon entering through the front door, Kinta found himself in a small, dim, tiled room with a single door. In front of the door was a bright-white velvet rope, and beside it was a small wooden podium with the letters "DC" embedded into it. The woman behind the podium, who appeared to be his own age, was evidently the seating hostess.
-	''"I'm sorry, We're booked on reservations today,"'' Said the woman. ''"Please take a reservation form and come again."''	+	"I'm sorry, We're booked on reservations today," Said the woman. "Please take a reservation form and come again."
-	''"Actually,"'' said Kinta, ''"I'm here with an application."'' He handed a neatly-folded sheet of paper to her.	+	"Actually," said Kinta, "I'm here with an application." He handed a neatly-folded sheet of paper to her.
	She opened the paper, looked over the first three questions, and set it onto the podium. After looking back at him for a moment, she checked it.		She opened the paper, looked over the first three questions, and set it onto the podium. After looking back at him for a moment, she checked it.
	Kinta would've assumed that she'd leave that job to the employer.		Kinta would've assumed that she'd leave that job to the employer.
-	''"Okay, then. Welcome to DC! I'm Anise, the greeter."	+	"Okay, then. Welcome to DC! I'm Anise, the greeter."
-	"Nice to meet you, Anise,"'' said Kinta. ''"Eh, what job will I have?''	+	"Nice to meet you, Anise," said Kinta. "Eh, what job will I have?"

	*[[DC/"We've been looking for a dishwasher."]]		*[[DC/"We've been looking for a dishwasher."]]