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Starry: Grammar and spelling, continuity of narrative

Starry — Tue, 13 Nov 2012 23:11:04 GMT

Grammar and spelling, continuity of narrative

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	Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.		Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.

-	She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in he pew, praying, and there is a young ~~catholic~~ girl ~~your~~ age sitting alone on the last row. Visitors ~~muct~~ be welcome to come and go as they please.	+	She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in the front pew, praying, and there is a young Catholic girl about Cecilia's age sitting alone in the last row. Visitors must be welcome to come and go as they please.

	What does Cecilia do?		What does Cecilia do?

Bigcutlip92 at 17:07, 29 July 2012

Bigcutlip92 — Sun, 29 Jul 2012 17:07:54 GMT

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	Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.		Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.

-	She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in he pew, praying. Visitors muct be welcome to come and go as they please.	+	She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in he pew, praying, and there is a young catholic girl your age sitting alone on the last row. Visitors muct be welcome to come and go as they please.

	What does Cecilia do?		What does Cecilia do?
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	*[[Cecilia/Priest\|She finds a priest to talk to about her troubles.]]		*[[Cecilia/Priest\|She finds a priest to talk to about her troubles.]]
	*[[Cecilia/Old Man\|She talks to the old man. He probably needs a friend.]]		*[[Cecilia/Old Man\|She talks to the old man. He probably needs a friend.]]
		+	*[[Cecilia/catholic girl\|Go sit with the young catholic girl]]
	[[Category: Cecilia\|Church]]		[[Category: Cecilia\|Church]]

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Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.

She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in he pew, praying. Visitors muct be welcome to come and go as they please.

What does Cecilia do?
*[[Cecilia/Confession|She confesses her sins.]]
*[[Cecilia/Priest|She finds a priest to talk to about her troubles.]]
*[[Cecilia/Old Man|She talks to the old man. He probably needs a friend.]]
[[Category: Cecilia|Church]]