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Zoroastra: There's noone you really feel obliged to part with. Light Dress moved to Arturia/Light Dress/1

Zoroastra — Thu, 01 Mar 2012 21:44:00 GMT

There's noone you really feel obliged to part with. *Light Dress* moved to Arturia/Light Dress/1

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Zoroastra at 13:49, 8 February 2012

Zoroastra — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 13:49:57 GMT

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country as a symbol of our Alliance]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighboring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country to enforce a ceasefire]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighboring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Light_Dress_1\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Light_Dress_1\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]
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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Light_Dress_1\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Light_Dress_1\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=~~Nervous~~\|~~Money~~=~~250~~\|~~Possesions~~=''none''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Resigned\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''none''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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Chlo's-closet — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 01:22:52 GMT

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	You feel like it would be a pain to have to listen to everyone making a fuss over this, so you walk over to the carriage where you meet your escort.		You feel like it would be a pain to have to listen to everyone making a fuss over this, so you walk over to the carriage where you meet your escort.

-	There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids. Hardly much of an army, but all you'll be getting. No use moping about, there are some fine swordsmen among the guards and most of the servants look like they could handle a weapon if it came down to it. You recognize one of the older maids, her name is Betty. She has been around since you were little and always complains you aren't ~~lady-like~~ enough. You don't particularly like her, but given the circumstances it may be a good idea to seek her advice on how to behave when you meet your new lord.	+	There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids. Hardly much of an army, but all you'll be getting. No use moping about, there are some fine swordsmen among the guards and most of the servants look like they could handle a weapon, if it came down to it. You recognize one of the older maids; her name is Betty. She has been around since you were little and always complains you aren't ladylike enough. You don't particularly like her, but given the circumstances it may be a good idea to seek her advice on how to behave when you meet your new lord.

-	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you~~, he~~'s a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar ~~accros~~ his face ~~going~~ by the name of Duran. He's one of the few warriors in the castle that can keep up with you in a one-on-one battle, He can even teach you a few moves here and there. You respect him alot and are happy to have him along, even if his drinking habits annoy you a bit.	+	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you. He's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar across his face. He goes by the name of Duran. He's one of the few warriors in the castle that can keep up with you in a one-on-one battle. He can even teach you a few moves here and there. You respect him alot and are happy to have him along, even if his drinking habits annoy you a bit.

-	"Ah you've finally arrived lass." he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. You tolerate it from him since you have known him for a long time and he means no disrespect by it. "Are ye ready to leave fer yer first taste of a real man?"	+	"Ah, you've finally arrived lass." He speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. You tolerate it from him since you have known him for a long time and he means no disrespect by it. "Are ye ready to leave fer yer first taste of a real man?"

-	You blush furiously at his dry remark on your inexperience with men. "Don't just assume I will fail just because this will be my first battle" you blurt out. You instantly regret calling it a 'battle' ~~wich~~ doesn't seem entirely appropriate considering you will have to show yourself as a woman this time around, not as your usual warrior self. You wonder if you should have dressed a little more feminine but quickly dismiss that ~~tought~~ as it would have only made you even more nervous.	+	You blush furiously at his dry remark on your inexperience with men. "Don't just assume I will fail just because this will be my first battle" you blurt out. You instantly regret calling it a 'battle' which doesn't seem entirely appropriate considering you will have to show yourself as a woman this time around, not as your usual warrior self. You wonder if you should have dressed a little more feminine, but quickly dismiss that thought, as it would have only made you even more nervous.

-	You take a deep breath ~~and~~ collect yourself. "~~so,~~ Where will we be going then? Who am I to be a woman for?"	+	You take a deep breath to collect yourself. "So. Where will we be going then? Who am I to be a woman for?"

-	"we'll be taking you to... :"	+	"We'll be taking you to... :"

Zoroastra at 18:48, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 18:48:38 GMT

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Light_Dress_1]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. Light_Dress_1]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Light_Dress_1]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Light_Dress_1\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. Light_Dress_1]]	+	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Light_Dress_1\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Light_Dress_1]]	+	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Light_Dress_1\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Nervous\|Money=250\|Possesions=''none''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Nervous\|Money=250\|Possesions=''none''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra at 11:11, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 11:11:22 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Light_Dress_1]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Light_Dress_1]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=~~Excited~~\|Money=250\|Possesions=''none''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Nervous\|Money=250\|Possesions=''none''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 11:10:55 GMT

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You feel like it would be a pain to have to listen to everyone making a fuss over this, so you walk over to the carriage where you meet your escort.

There's 20 guards, 30 servants and 10 maids. Hardly much of an army, but all you'll be getting. No use moping about, there are some fine swordsmen among the guards and most of the servants look like they could handle a weapon if it came down to it. You recognize one of the older maids, her name is Betty. She has been around since you were little and always complains you aren't lady-like enough. You don't particularly like her, but given the circumstances it may be a good idea to seek her advice on how to behave when you meet your new lord.

You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face going by the name of Duran. He's one of the few warriors in the castle that can keep up with you in a one-on-one battle, He can even teach you a few moves here and there. You respect him alot and are happy to have him along, even if his drinking habits annoy you a bit.

"Ah you've finally arrived lass." he speaks to you without any of the formality people normally treat a member of the royal family with. You tolerate it from him since you have known him for a long time and he means no disrespect by it. "Are ye ready to leave fer yer first taste of a real man?"

You blush furiously at his dry remark on your inexperience with men. "Don't just assume I will fail just because this will be my first battle" you blurt out. You instantly regret calling it a 'battle' wich doesn't seem entirely appropriate considering you will have to show yourself as a woman this time around, not as your usual warrior self. You wonder if you should have dressed a little more feminine but quickly dismiss that tought as it would have only made you even more nervous.

You take a deep breath and collect yourself. "so, Where will we be going then? Who am I to be a woman for?"

"we'll be taking you to... :"

[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. *Light_Dress_1*]]

[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. *Light_Dress_1*]]

[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. *Light_Dress_1*]]

[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. *Light_Dress_1*]]

[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. *Light_Dress_1*]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Excited|Money=250|Possesions=''none''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country as a symbol of our Alliance]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighboring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a ~~neighbouring~~ country to enforce a ceasefire]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Light_Dress_1\|The prince of a neighboring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Light_Dress_1\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Light_Dress_1\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]
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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Light_Dress_1\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Light_Dress_1\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=~~Nervous~~\|~~Money~~=~~250~~\|~~Possesions~~=''none''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Light Dress, Fine Longsword''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Resigned\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''none''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]