Afraid of the Dark - Revision history

Relafen66 at 18:43, 29 December 2013

Relafen66 — Sun, 29 Dec 2013 18:43:31 GMT

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-	Cars passed by the road a blur of color and noise.	+	Cars passed by the road the other side of the road a blur of color and noise.
-	The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but ~~with~~ being sleep deprived each ~~individual~~ song and its lyrics melded in a foggy soup.	+	The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but being sleep deprived each song and its lyrics melded in a foggy incoherent soup.

-	In the other side of the car ~~Mellisa~~ your sister ~~is half asleep as well~~ bundled up shivering ~~from being stuck in the car at night~~.	+	In the other side of the car your sister Melissa slept bundled up shivering.

	Being excused from school was always welcomed, but for some reason you don't remember where you were supposed to be going.		Being excused from school was always welcomed, but for some reason you don't remember where you were supposed to be going.
	(Oh well it probably doesn't matter anyhow.)		(Oh well it probably doesn't matter anyhow.)
-	You put these thoughts away and let the ~~soothing~~ music carry you off to ~~the warm embrace of sleep.~~	+	You put these thoughts away and let the music carry you off like a siren song to your slumber
-		+	BANG!!! followed by a squealing noise then the car turned off.
-	BANG!!! followed by a squealing noise then the car turned off	+
	You were awakened groggily staring out the window wondering where you are.		You were awakened groggily staring out the window wondering where you are.

-	This was your destination?, questions came boiling but nobody to answer them.	+	This was your destination?, questions came boiling up but nobody to answer them.
	The driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember his name ) started walking away from the car.		The driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember his name ) started walking away from the car.
	"Hey, where's he going" you ask noting the anxiousness in your voice, shaking your sister as she ignored your protests.		"Hey, where's he going" you ask noting the anxiousness in your voice, shaking your sister as she ignored your protests.

Relafen66 at 18:32, 29 December 2013

Relafen66 — Sun, 29 Dec 2013 18:32:19 GMT

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	'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''		'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''

-	The dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The canopy of trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. Midnight, and while the darkness was an indication the silhouette of the full moon illuminated the shadowy forest a lighthouse ~~in the sea of shadows~~.	+	The dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The canopy of trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. Midnight, and while the darkness was an indication the silhouette of the full moon illuminated the shadowy forest like a lighthouse.

	(15 minutes ago..)		(15 minutes ago..)

-	Cars passed the road ~~fleeting blurs~~ of color and noise~~. This was supposed to be brief but minutes turned to hours~~.	+	Cars passed by the road a blur of color and noise.
	The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but with being sleep deprived each individual song and its lyrics melded in a foggy soup.		The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but with being sleep deprived each individual song and its lyrics melded in a foggy soup.

Relafen66 at 18:27, 29 December 2013

Relafen66 — Sun, 29 Dec 2013 18:27:47 GMT

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	'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''		'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''

-	The ~~rocky~~ dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. ~~By now it's night~~, and while ~~it's hard to tell while shaded by~~ the ~~thick forest canopy above, you think you can see a hint~~ of full moon ~~peeking through~~ the ~~tangled branches~~.	+	The dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The canopy of trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. Midnight, and while the darkness was an indication the silhouette of the full moon illuminated the shadowy forest a lighthouse in the sea of shadows.

	(15 minutes ago..)		(15 minutes ago..)

-	Cars ~~zipped by,~~ fleeting blurs of color and noise. ~~A truck or two, a beat up old van. Time blurs into~~ minutes~~, then~~ hours~~, as abstract as the bright shapes of vehicles passing by your window~~. ~~Your~~ music player, clutched loosely in your ~~hand, pumps soft~~ music ~~up through your headphones. You can remember tunes~~, but ~~through your~~ sleep ~~fogged brain,~~ individual song lyrics ~~meld into one another.~~	+	Cars passed the road fleeting blurs of color and noise. This was supposed to be brief but minutes turned to hours.
-	~~Your sister Mellissa is half asleep as well, curled up~~ in ~~the seat next to you. An excuse from~~ a week of school for both of you proved to be quite the welcomed vacation, but for some reason, you can't quite remember where you're supposed to be going. Oh well, you're probably just tired. It probably doesn't matter anyhow. You let the soothing music carry you off to sleep, and out of the corner of your blurring eyes, you notice your sister drifting off as well.	+	The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but with being sleep deprived each individual song and its lyrics melded in a foggy soup.

-	~~The next thing you know, you're awakened by~~ the ~~soft jerk~~ of the car ~~coming to a stop. Groggily, you pull yourself~~ up by the door frame and stare out the window, wondering where you are. Woods still surrounded you where there was no road ( if you could call it a road ), and though you stare down it's dusty expanse for quite a while, no cars pass. You wonder just how far out you are...	+	In the other side of the car Mellisa your sister is half asleep as well bundled up shivering from being stuck in the car at night.
-	~~Your driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember... ) gets out of~~ the car ~~and calmly crosses the dark expanse of empty road, leaving you parked on the side of it with your sister. You start to worry that maybe he was having car trouble, or maybe..~~. ~~Where were you going again?~~	+

-	~~You lean over to shake your sister awake with a frown. Maybe she knows where~~ you're going. ~~Not~~ to ~~mention~~ the ~~driver... She always had an answer for everything~~.	+	Being excused from school was always welcomed, but for some reason you don't remember where you were supposed to be going.
		+	(Oh well it probably doesn't matter anyhow.)
		+	You put these thoughts away and let the soothing music carry you off to the warm embrace of sleep.

-	~~"Hey, where's he going," you ask, nodding at~~ the ~~driver, who's still heading down~~ the ~~road. Your sister starts to sit up and looks around, she has the same confused, worried expression on her face that~~ you ~~do. Suddenly, there's a cold feeling in the pit of your stomach~~.	+	BANG!!! followed by a squealing noise then the car turned off
		+	You were awakened groggily staring out the window wondering where you are.

-	~~You watch as the driver makes his way~~ to ~~a rickety looking wooden gate~~. ~~It looks like it might have been part of a toll-booth at some point, but you~~ can't ~~be sure. He pushes it up and out of the way, then makes~~ his ~~way back to~~ the car ~~again without looking at~~ you~~. He gets back~~ in ~~and you jump~~ as ~~the engine starts up again with a soft roar~~.	+	This was your destination?, questions came boiling but nobody to answer them.
		+	The driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember his name ) started walking away from the car.
		+	"Hey, where's he going" you ask noting the anxiousness in your voice, shaking your sister as she ignored your protests.

		+	The driver looked at you for a moment then proceeded to the woods.
		+	(OMFG were the hell is he going!!!) flashed in constant sequence in your head.
		+	Taking a handful of your sisters jacket you shake her vehemently.

-	~~(Back to~~ the ~~present..~~.)	+	"WTH WHAT DO YOU WANT!" anger and malice dripping in her voice.
		+	"That guy left us and --" The car door opened and came in the man, you just sat dumbfounded then a jab of pain as your sister took out her frustrations.

-	It's been a while since you passed through the gates. The woods still surround you, and that long stretch of dark road still twists and winds through it before you. Your driver has said nothing, and though you've tried to talk to him, he has refuses to respond. He hasn't tried to hurt you yet though, but you can't help but worry.

-	Your sister, just as worried as you are, clutches her cellphone in front of her, staring desperately into it's glowing screen. She has yet to get a signal though, or maybe it's just that no one will respond. Either way, she hasn't said much. Neither have you. You're both too scared.

-	~~Your driver shifts, startling you back~~ to ~~attention. He's barely moved since he got back into~~ the ~~car~~. You ~~watch as he reaches for~~ the ~~radio dial and fiddles with it before settling on a station. The soft hum~~ of ~~classical must floats back to you from~~ the ~~speakers and stiffly,~~ the ~~driver puts his hand back~~ on ~~the steering wheel. It's the only sound in the car. You can't stand it. With no other options though~~, ~~you cram your earbuds back into your ears~~ and ~~turn your own music up as loud as it can go, hoping to drown his music out. It works, for now. You wonder just how long~~ you ~~can stand this though..~~.	+	(Back to the present...)
		+
		+	You had remained silent the rest of the trip.
		+
		+	Melissa now clutched at her cellphone staring into the glowing screen an air of frustration on her face, and you knew why there was no bars no reception no contact with the outside world.

		+	Sounds hum as the car radio turns on (I guess hes bored like we are)
		+	What he chooses though is a classical song.

	You:		You:

Nall1980 at 12:40, 7 April 2012

Nall1980 — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 12:40:02 GMT

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	'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''		'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''

-	The rocky dirt road ~~dipped and~~ rose as it ~~wound~~ endlessly into the forest. The trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. By now it's night, and while it's hard to tell while shaded by the thick forest canopy above, you think you can see a hint of full moon peeking through the tangled branches.	+	The rocky dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. By now it's night, and while it's hard to tell while shaded by the thick forest canopy above, you think you can see a hint of full moon peeking through the tangled branches.

	(15 minutes ago..)		(15 minutes ago..)

-	Cars zipped by, fleeting blurs of color and noise. ~~One, two, a~~ truck or two, a beat up old van. Time blurs into minutes, then hours, as abstract as the bright shapes of vehicles passing by your window. Your music player, clutched loosely in your hand, pumps soft music up through your headphones. You can remember tunes, but through your sleep fogged brain, individual song lyrics meld into one another.	+	Cars zipped by, fleeting blurs of color and noise. A truck or two, a beat up old van. Time blurs into minutes, then hours, as abstract as the bright shapes of vehicles passing by your window. Your music player, clutched loosely in your hand, pumps soft music up through your headphones. You can remember tunes, but through your sleep fogged brain, individual song lyrics meld into one another.
-	Your sister is half asleep as well, curled up in the seat next to you. An excuse from a week of school for both of you proved to be quite the welcomed vacation, but for some reason, you can't quite remember where you're supposed to be going. Oh well, you're probably just tired. It probably doesn't matter anyhow. You let the soothing music carry you off to sleep, and out of the corner of your blurring eyes, you notice your sister drifting off as well.	+	Your sister Mellissa is half asleep as well, curled up in the seat next to you. An excuse from a week of school for both of you proved to be quite the welcomed vacation, but for some reason, you can't quite remember where you're supposed to be going. Oh well, you're probably just tired. It probably doesn't matter anyhow. You let the soothing music carry you off to sleep, and out of the corner of your blurring eyes, you notice your sister drifting off as well.

	The next thing you know, you're awakened by the soft jerk of the car coming to a stop. Groggily, you pull yourself up by the door frame and stare out the window, wondering where you are. Woods still surrounded you where there was no road ( if you could call it a road ), and though you stare down it's dusty expanse for quite a while, no cars pass. You wonder just how far out you are...		The next thing you know, you're awakened by the soft jerk of the car coming to a stop. Groggily, you pull yourself up by the door frame and stare out the window, wondering where you are. Woods still surrounded you where there was no road ( if you could call it a road ), and though you stare down it's dusty expanse for quite a while, no cars pass. You wonder just how far out you are...
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	You lean over to shake your sister awake with a frown. Maybe she knows where you're going. Not to mention the driver... She always had an answer for everything.		You lean over to shake your sister awake with a frown. Maybe she knows where you're going. Not to mention the driver... She always had an answer for everything.

-	"Hey, where's he going," you ask, nodding at the driver, who's still heading down the road. Your sister, ~~though,~~ has the same confused, worried expression on her face that you do. Suddenly, there's a cold feeling in the pit of your stomach.	+	"Hey, where's he going," you ask, nodding at the driver, who's still heading down the road. Your sister starts to sit up and looks around, she has the same confused, worried expression on her face that you do. Suddenly, there's a cold feeling in the pit of your stomach.

	You watch as the driver makes his way to a rickety looking wooden gate. It looks like it might have been part of a toll-booth at some point, but you can't be sure. He pushes it up and out of the way, then makes his way back to the car again without looking at you. He gets back in and you jump as the engine starts up again with a soft roar.		You watch as the driver makes his way to a rickety looking wooden gate. It looks like it might have been part of a toll-booth at some point, but you can't be sure. He pushes it up and out of the way, then makes his way back to the car again without looking at you. He gets back in and you jump as the engine starts up again with a soft roar.
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	(Back to the present...)		(Back to the present...)

-	It's been a while since you passed through the gates. The woods still surround you, and that long stretch of dark road still twists and winds through it before you. Your driver has said nothing, and though you've tried to talk to him, refuses to respond. He hasn't tried to hurt you yet though, but you can't help but worry.	+	It's been a while since you passed through the gates. The woods still surround you, and that long stretch of dark road still twists and winds through it before you. Your driver has said nothing, and though you've tried to talk to him, he has refuses to respond. He hasn't tried to hurt you yet though, but you can't help but worry.

-	Your sister, just as worried as you are, clutches her cellphone ~~before~~ her, staring desperately into it's glowing screen. She has yet to get a signal though, or maybe it's just that no one will respond. Either way, she hasn't said much. Neither have you. You're both too scared.	+	Your sister, just as worried as you are, clutches her cellphone in front of her, staring desperately into it's glowing screen. She has yet to get a signal though, or maybe it's just that no one will respond. Either way, she hasn't said much. Neither have you. You're both too scared.

	Your driver shifts, startling you back to attention. He's barely moved since he got back into the car. You watch as he reaches for the radio dial and fiddles with it before settling on a station. The soft hum of classical must floats back to you from the speakers and stiffly, the driver puts his hand back on the steering wheel. It's the only sound in the car. You can't stand it. With no other options though, you cram your earbuds back into your ears and turn your own music up as loud as it can go, hoping to drown his music out. It works, for now. You wonder just how long you can stand this though...		Your driver shifts, startling you back to attention. He's barely moved since he got back into the car. You watch as he reaches for the radio dial and fiddles with it before settling on a station. The soft hum of classical must floats back to you from the speakers and stiffly, the driver puts his hand back on the steering wheel. It's the only sound in the car. You can't stand it. With no other options though, you cram your earbuds back into your ears and turn your own music up as loud as it can go, hoping to drown his music out. It works, for now. You wonder just how long you can stand this though...

Gramminator at 11:24, 13 November 2011

Gramminator — Sun, 13 Nov 2011 11:24:26 GMT

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-	~~Bump~~, ~~bump~~	+	'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''

-	The dirt road ~~wasn't evenly paved~~ as it ~~continued~~ into forest.	+	The rocky dirt road dipped and rose as it wound endlessly into the forest. The trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. By now it's night, and while it's hard to tell while shaded by the thick forest canopy above, you think you can see a hint of full moon peeking through the tangled branches.

-	(15 ~~mins~~ ago)	+	(15 minutes ago..)
-	~~The cars were passing by. First one.... then a second... a truck then a van...~~	+
-	~~You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.~~	+
-	~~Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.~~	+
-	~~It was relaxing being away from school but where were you going.~~..	+

-	~~The car slowed down~~ then ~~parked itself~~ by the ~~side~~ of the ~~road~~. You ~~look at~~ the ~~driver as he gets out~~ and ~~crosses~~ the ~~now empty lane~~ of ~~road.~~	+	Cars zipped by, fleeting blurs of color and noise. One, two, a truck or two, a beat up old van. Time blurs into minutes, then hours, as abstract as the bright shapes of vehicles passing by your window. Your music player, clutched loosely in your hand, pumps soft music up through your headphones. You can remember tunes, but through your sleep fogged brain, individual song lyrics meld into one another.
-	~~You shake~~ your sister ~~"Where's he going??" The same puzzled look on her face~~ as ~~yours~~.	+	Your sister is half asleep as well, curled up in the seat next to you. An excuse from a week of school for both of you proved to be quite the welcomed vacation, but for some reason, you can't quite remember where you're supposed to be going. Oh well, you're probably just tired. It probably doesn't matter anyhow. You let the soothing music carry you off to sleep, and out of the corner of your blurring eyes, you notice your sister drifting off as well.

-	The ~~road was bordered~~ by the ~~forest on both sides~~. ~~You~~ stare at driver as he ~~heads to a wooden post like toll moving~~ it ~~open~~.	+	The next thing you know, you're awakened by the soft jerk of the car coming to a stop. Groggily, you pull yourself up by the door frame and stare out the window, wondering where you are. Woods still surrounded you where there was no road ( if you could call it a road ), and though you stare down it's dusty expanse for quite a while, no cars pass. You wonder just how far out you are...
		+	Your driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember... ) gets out of the car and calmly crosses the dark expanse of empty road, leaving you parked on the side of it with your sister. You start to worry that maybe he was having car trouble, or maybe... Where were you going again?

		+	You lean over to shake your sister awake with a frown. Maybe she knows where you're going. Not to mention the driver... She always had an answer for everything.
		+
		+	"Hey, where's he going," you ask, nodding at the driver, who's still heading down the road. Your sister, though, has the same confused, worried expression on her face that you do. Suddenly, there's a cold feeling in the pit of your stomach.
		+
		+	You watch as the driver makes his way to a rickety looking wooden gate. It looks like it might have been part of a toll-booth at some point, but you can't be sure. He pushes it up and out of the way, then makes his way back to the car again without looking at you. He gets back in and you jump as the engine starts up again with a soft roar.
		+
		+
		+	(Back to the present...)
		+
		+	It's been a while since you passed through the gates. The woods still surround you, and that long stretch of dark road still twists and winds through it before you. Your driver has said nothing, and though you've tried to talk to him, refuses to respond. He hasn't tried to hurt you yet though, but you can't help but worry.
		+
		+	Your sister, just as worried as you are, clutches her cellphone before her, staring desperately into it's glowing screen. She has yet to get a signal though, or maybe it's just that no one will respond. Either way, she hasn't said much. Neither have you. You're both too scared.
		+
		+	Your driver shifts, startling you back to attention. He's barely moved since he got back into the car. You watch as he reaches for the radio dial and fiddles with it before settling on a station. The soft hum of classical must floats back to you from the speakers and stiffly, the driver puts his hand back on the steering wheel. It's the only sound in the car. You can't stand it. With no other options though, you cram your earbuds back into your ears and turn your own music up as loud as it can go, hoping to drown his music out. It works, for now. You wonder just how long you can stand this though...

-	~~(Back to the present)~~
-	~~It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.~~
-	~~You take of your mp3 player wondering where you're going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.~~

	You:		You:

Snowball at 11:10, 21 October 2011

Snowball — Fri, 21 Oct 2011 11:10:09 GMT

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	(15 mins ago)		(15 mins ago)
-	The cars were passing by one.... then a second... a truck then a van...	+	The cars were passing by. First one.... then a second... a truck then a van...
	You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.		You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
	Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.		Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.

Stonetoe at 04:35, 18 August 2011

Stonetoe — Thu, 18 Aug 2011 04:35:21 GMT

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	(Back to the present)		(Back to the present)
	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.		It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.
-	You take of your mp3 player wondering where ~~your~~ going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.	+	You take of your mp3 player wondering where you're going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.

	You:		You:

Relafen66 at 07:56, 15 January 2010

Relafen66 — Fri, 15 Jan 2010 07:56:26 GMT

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	Bump, bump		Bump, bump

-	The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as ~~the highway as the road~~ continued ~~down deeper in the~~ forest.	+	The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as it continued into forest.

	(15 mins ago)		(15 mins ago)
-	The cars were passing by one.... ~~two~~... a truck then a van... You sit ~~silently~~ looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.	+	The cars were passing by one.... then a second... a truck then a van...
-	~~Here you are traveling~~ with your sister ~~to a relatives house~~ excused ~~from the academy~~ for a week.	+	You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
-	It was ~~nice~~ being ~~excused~~ from school but ~~for what? And~~ where were you going...	+	Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.
		+	It was relaxing being away from school but where were you going...
		+
		+	The car slowed down then parked itself by the side of the road. You look at the driver as he gets out and crosses the now empty lane of road.
		+	You shake your sister "Where's he going??" The same puzzled look on her face as yours.
		+
		+	The road was bordered by the forest on both sides. You stare at driver as he heads to a wooden post like toll moving it open.

-	The car slowed down, and you look in front there was still the highway and then around and realize you stopped at side of the road on a deeply wooded part trees tall on both sides of the road. The driver suddenly getting out crossing the street towards an old wooden gate barring a dusty road into the forest.

	(Back to the present)		(Back to the present)
-	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road ~~pulling off your headphones you realize your~~ sister ~~was still busy talking to someone on~~ the phone.	+	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.
-	~~While~~ your driver ~~was listening to a classical music~~ on the radio.	+	You take of your mp3 player wondering where your going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.

	You:		You:

Relafen66 at 08:01, 8 January 2010

Relafen66 — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 08:01:41 GMT

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	Bump, bump		Bump, bump

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	(Back to the present)		(Back to the present)
-	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road ~~this place~~ was ~~truly private~~.	+	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road pulling off your headphones you realize your sister was still busy talking to someone on the phone.
		+	While your driver was listening to a classical music on the radio.

	You:		You:

Relafen66 at 07:59, 8 January 2010

Relafen66 — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 07:59:13 GMT

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-	~~You were sitting in a car, while outside the trees surrounded you on all sides.~~

-	~~The driver was a pale tall man who wore the formal driver attire~~, ~~and next to you your sister who was trying to get her cellphone to work.~~	+	Bump, bump
-	~~"Stupid thing no signals means were in the middle of nowhere" She sighed then looked out her window.~~	+
-	~~Both of you were supposed to go back to your home for Christmas break but instead..... to some vague destination where your parents were.~~	+

-	~~"Can you please turn on~~ the ~~radio?" your sister was trying to talk to the driver. Without saying a word and with a motion of his hands he turned it on.~~	+	The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as the highway as the road continued down deeper in the forest.
-	~~However.... Ksshhhhh Kshhhhh No stations either u guessed, since there was no cellphone signals sure~~ as ~~hell no radio signals.~~	+
-	~~You truly were~~ in the ~~middle of nowhere......~~.	+

		+	(15 mins ago)
		+	The cars were passing by one.... two... a truck then a van... You sit silently looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
		+	Here you are traveling with your sister to a relatives house excused from the academy for a week.
		+	It was nice being excused from school but for what? And where were you going...

-	~~Turning~~ the ~~knob again the driver fruitlessly wasn't able to find anything but static.~~	+	The car slowed down, and you look in front there was still the highway and then around and realize you stopped at side of the road on a deeply wooded part trees tall on both sides of the road. The driver suddenly getting out crossing the street towards an old wooden gate barring a dusty road into the forest.
-	~~But~~ then a ~~station with a woman singing mournfully in French comes~~ on ~~but her voice chopped up~~. ~~It was~~ a ~~poor reception but still it~~ was ~~something~~.	+
		+	(Back to the present)
		+	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road this place was truly private.

	You:		You: