38 36/PunishW/Scandal - Revision history

WCold at 07:27, 24 April 2014

WCold — Thu, 24 Apr 2014 07:27:38 GMT

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	You ran down to the living room where your wife was.		You ran down to the living room where your wife was.

-	-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos at her.~~<br />~~	+	"What the hell is that?" you shouted and threw photos at her.
-	-Where did you get these? ~~- she~~ was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. She said the next sentence very slowly. - Did you dig through my things?~~<br />~~	+
-	-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ~~ficking~~ boyfriend.~~<br />~~	+	"Where did you get these?" She was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. She said the next sentence very slowly. "Did you dig through my things?"
-	-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.~~<br />~~	+
-	-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?~~<br />~~	+	"Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your fucking boyfriend."
-	-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.	+
		+	"No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that."
		+
		+	"Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?"
		+
		+	"And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was."

	You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.		You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.

WCold at 13:00, 8 April 2014

WCold — Tue, 08 Apr 2014 13:00:03 GMT

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	-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />		-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />
	-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />		-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />
-	-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?	+	-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?<br />
	-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.		-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.

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	'''That's how it's all ended.'''		'''That's how it's all ended.'''

-	(Bad end 1) Divorce after swearing. Not so bad, everything could become much worse.	+	(<font color="red">Bad end 1</font>) Divorce after swearing. Not so bad, everything could become much worse.

-	[[Punishment for your wife]] to start over.	+	Use [[Punishment for your wife]] to start over.

	[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]		[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]
	[[Category:Endings]]		[[Category:Endings]]

WCold at 12:46, 8 April 2014

WCold — Tue, 08 Apr 2014 12:46:05 GMT

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	'''That's how it's all ended.'''		'''That's how it's all ended.'''
		+
		+	(Bad end 1) Divorce after swearing. Not so bad, everything could become much worse.
		+
		+	[[Punishment for your wife]] to start over.

	[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]		[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]
	[[Category:Endings]]		[[Category:Endings]]

DirtyMeStoryTime: Some grammar fix, needs much more though. Should be rewritten, and the tense checked. I didn't change the tense since I am not sure what tense the story has been written in before this point.

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 24 Mar 2014 06:44:59 GMT

Some grammar fix, needs much more though. Should be rewritten, and the tense checked. I didn't change the tense since I am not sure what tense the story has been written in before this point.

←Older revision		Revision as of 06:44, 24 March 2014
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-	You ran down to the living room where ~~was~~ your wife.	+	You ran down to the living room where your wife was.

-	-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos to her.<br />	+	-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos at her.<br />
-	-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. ~~Next sentence she~~ said very slowly. - Did you ~~dug in~~ my things?<br />	+	-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. She said the next sentence very slowly. - Did you dig through my things?<br />
-	-Your purse ~~drop~~ down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />	+	-Your purse fell down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend.<br />
	-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />		-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that.<br />
-	-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? ~~Did~~ you use it when you masturbate?	+	-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Do you use it when you masturbate?
-	-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when ~~was~~ the last time you were a man.	+	-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when the last time you were a man was.

	You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.		You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.
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	[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]		[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]
		+	[[Category:Endings]]

WCold at 06:37, 24 March 2014

WCold — Mon, 24 Mar 2014 06:37:50 GMT

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	You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.		You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.

-	That's how it's all ended.	+	'''That's how it's all ended.'''

	[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]		[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]

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You ran down to the living room where was your wife.

-What a hell is that? - you shouted and threw photos to her. 
-Where did you get these? - she was taken aback at first, but the second emotion was anger. Next sentence she said very slowly. - Did you dug in my things? 
-Your purse drop down and there they were. You and your ficking boyfriend. 
-No, it's obvious you've done much more to get that. 
-Why do you have this crap? Did you think of him? Did you use it when you masturbate?
-And what if I do? Why do you care? I don't even remember when was the last time you were a man.

You two were arguing for 2 hours. After that she collected all her things and left.

That's how it's all ended.

[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]