You pretend to faint. - Revision history

Platypus at 21:21, 28 February 2009

2009-02-28T21:21:45Z

←Older revision		Revision as of 21:21, 28 February 2009
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	You knock the air out of him and hear "Oof!"		You knock the air out of him and hear "Oof!"

-	Man his abs feel good.	+	Man, his abs feel good.

	Against your back.		Against your back.
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	HOT.		HOT.

-	"Arrrggh!	+	"Arrrggh! C'mon Arch! Get up! Since when do you faint? Get off me, man!"
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-	C'mon Arch! Get up!	+
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-	Since when do you faint?	+
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-	Get off me man!"	+

	You let him push you off of him.		You let him push you off of him.
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	"Jughead, I'll call 911!"		"Jughead, I'll call 911!"

-	"No Mom! He's fine. I'll take care of it."	+	"No, Mom! He's fine. I'll take care of it."

	"But Jughead, he could be..."		"But Jughead, he could be..."
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	You asked for it."		You asked for it."

-	You ~~get~~ prepare yourself for the worst.	+	You prepare yourself for the worst.

	You feel a drop on your noise.		You feel a drop on your noise.
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	What's he rubbing on your lips?		What's he rubbing on your lips?

-	Purse them ~~close~~ and keep up the "fainted" front.	+	Purse them closed and keep up the "fainted" front.

	"Hmmm. Won't even flinch because of what I put on you?		"Hmmm. Won't even flinch because of what I put on you?
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	[[Ask Jughead why he kissed you.]]		[[Ask Jughead why he kissed you.]]

-	[[Pretend it didn't happen and get off the ground. Where's that water his mom was supposed to bring?	+	[[Pretend it didn't happen and get off the ground. Where's that water his mom was supposed to bring?]]
-	]]	+	[[Category: Archie's Gay Adventure]]

Allyigator at 21:19, 28 February 2009

2009-02-28T21:19:29Z

←Older revision		Revision as of 21:19, 28 February 2009
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-	You look up at the sky, put the back of your hand against your forehead ~~and moan~~, "Oh!" and fall back.	+	You look up at the sky, put the back of your hand against your forehead, moan "Oh!" and fall back.

	You land on Jughead's stomach.		You land on Jughead's stomach.
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	What...		What...

-	is..	+	is..?

-	~~you~~ felt it throb...	+	You felt it throb...

-	~~that~~'s his cock under the right side of your back.	+	That's his cock under the right side of your back.

	You landed right in the middle of his crotch!		You landed right in the middle of his crotch!
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	Get off me man!"		Get off me man!"

-	You let him push ~~yourself~~ off of him.	+	You let him push you off of him.

	"Jughead, I'll call 911!"		"Jughead, I'll call 911!"
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	Eyes still closed.		Eyes still closed.
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		+	Not controlling your body.
		+
		+	Just there.

	You're good.		You're good.

-	You deserve a freakin Oscar!	+	You deserve a freakin Oscar.

	"C'mon Arch! The jig's up!		"C'mon Arch! The jig's up!
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	Sigh. Fine.		Sigh. Fine.

-	You asked for it.	+	You asked for it."

	You get prepare yourself for the worst.		You get prepare yourself for the worst.
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	"Hmmm. Won't even flinch because of what I put on you?		"Hmmm. Won't even flinch because of what I put on you?

-	Alright. ~~You asked for it~~."	+	Alright. Now I'm taking the gauntlet off."
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		+	Hmmm, you wish he'd take your clothes off.
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		+	You're so gay.

	You feel...yourself being lifted...		You feel...yourself being lifted...
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	"I thought some "water" would wake you up. Guess my oral reserves did the trick!"		"I thought some "water" would wake you up. Guess my oral reserves did the trick!"

-	Was that a joke?	+	Was that supposed to be a joke?

	You just stare at him.		You just stare at him.
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	Silence.		Silence.

-	The sun is behind him	+	The sun is behind him,

-	and the way it's shining	+	and the way it's shining,

	lights him up like an angel.		lights him up like an angel.

Allyigator at 21:15, 28 February 2009

2009-02-28T21:15:31Z

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You look up at the sky, put the back of your hand against your forehead and moan, "Oh!" and fall back.

You land on Jughead's stomach.

You knock the air out of him and hear "Oof!"

Man his abs feel good.

Against your back.

Weird.

What...

is..

you felt it throb...

that's his cock under the right side of your back.

You landed right in the middle of his crotch!

HOT.

"Arrrggh!

C'mon Arch! Get up!

Since when do you faint?

Get off me man!"

You let him push yourself off of him.

"Jughead, I'll call 911!"

"No Mom! He's fine. I'll take care of it."

"But Jughead, he could be..."

"He's FINE...ugh...

(He struggles to get you off him, but not drop you)

Mom. If anything happens, I'll take the fall."

"But Juggie...!"

"Mom please! He probably just needs water."

"Okay then! I'll go get some."

Jughead catches you before you hit the ground.

Eyes still closed.

You're good.

You deserve a freakin Oscar!

"C'mon Arch! The jig's up!

Wake up man!

Sigh. Fine.

You asked for it.

You get prepare yourself for the worst.

You feel a drop on your noise.

Now your lips.

Eww.

What's he rubbing on your lips?

Purse them close and keep up the "fainted" front.

"Hmmm. Won't even flinch because of what I put on you?

Alright. You asked for it."

You feel...yourself being lifted...

He's KISSING YOU!

Wow.

Your face is getting warm.

Your body's on fire.

Jughead is KISSING you.

Man, does it feel good.

Can't react...

Ah, screw that.

You kiss back.

His lips are gone.

You feel yourself falling.

Ow!

You hit your head on the grass!

You open your eyes.

"I thought some "water" would wake you up. Guess my oral reserves did the trick!"

Was that a joke?

You just stare at him.

Silence.

The sun is behind him

and the way it's shining

lights him up like an angel.

He even has a crown.

[[Ask Jughead why he kissed you.]]

[[Pretend it didn't happen and get off the ground. Where's that water his mom was supposed to bring?
]]