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		<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'If you're going to post in one of my stories, please pay attention to your grammar and punctuation.  You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.  Also, stop ''beginning…'</title>
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				<updated>2019-08-09T20:06:57Z</updated>
		
		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;If you&amp;#39;re going to post in one of my stories, please pay attention to your grammar and punctuation.  You may want to review &lt;a href=&quot;/Create_Your_Own_Story/Punctuation_with_dialogue&quot; title=&quot;Punctuation with dialogue&quot;&gt;punctuation with dialogue&lt;/a&gt;.  Also, stop &amp;#39;&amp;#39;beginning…&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, please pay attention to your grammar and punctuation.  You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, stop ''beginning to'' do things and just do them!  ''Begin to'' is a useful phrase to denote continuous action, or for when a character starts to do something but is then interrupted, but mostly, it's just filler words which weaken your sentence.&lt;br /&gt;
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Use commas to separate clauses from the name the clause is directed at It's ''&amp;quot;Fuck me, Brandon!&amp;quot;'' not ''&amp;quot;Fuck me Brandon&amp;quot;''. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:06, 9 August 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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