http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?action=history&feed=atom&title=User_talk%3ATealbird 2026-10-01T05:16:18Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.15.1 http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?title=User_talk:Tealbird&diff=236502&oldid=prev 2015-02-17T00:38:21Z

<p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←Older revision</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">Revision as of 00:38, 17 February 2015</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>Please allow actions to happen.&nbsp; You do not need to have 'began to' or 'started to' in front of so many verbs.&nbsp; It begins to get tiresome reading about things starting to begin to happen instead of just happening! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:22, 17 February 2015 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>Please allow actions to happen.&nbsp; You do not need to have 'began to' or 'started to' in front of so many verbs.&nbsp; It begins to get tiresome reading about things starting to begin to happen instead of just happening! &nbsp;</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">You might also want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&nbsp; And don't forget to hyphenate compound modifiers!</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">If you're going to post in one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, you need to get your grammar and punctuation right.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:22, 17 February 2015 (UTC)</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-10-01 05:16:18 --> </table>

Platypus http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?title=User_talk:Tealbird&diff=236493&oldid=prev 2015-02-17T00:22:14Z

<p>Created page with &#39;Please allow actions to happen. You do not need to have &#39;began to&#39; or &#39;started to&#39; in front of so many verbs. It begins to get tiresome reading about things starting to begin t…&#39;</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>Please allow actions to happen. You do not need to have 'began to' or 'started to' in front of so many verbs. It begins to get tiresome reading about things starting to begin to happen instead of just happening! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:22, 17 February 2015 (UTC)</div>

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