http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?action=history&feed=atom&title=User_talk%3ASss 2026-06-20T02:35:21Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.15.1 http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?title=User_talk:Sss&diff=214243&oldid=prev 2014-07-07T03:35:27Z

<p>Add PS</p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←Older revision</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">Revision as of 03:35, 7 July 2014</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 2:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 2:</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>Also, you have a page, [[Kiss his perfect mouth]]. The page following has a problem. The story flow here breaks, with the reader being at home in her living room, then, suddenly in the park, and going behind a bush. I think you need to change the flow or break this part and put it on a different branch.</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>Also, you have a page, [[Kiss his perfect mouth]]. The page following has a problem. The story flow here breaks, with the reader being at home in her living room, then, suddenly in the park, and going behind a bush. I think you need to change the flow or break this part and put it on a different branch.</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">P.S. To separate your sentences, hit enter twice, not once. If there is not a blank line between the two sentences, it will end up in the same paragraph as the previous sentence/s.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 7 July 2014 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 7 July 2014 (UTC)</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-06-20 02:35:21 --> </table>

DirtyMeStoryTime http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/?title=User_talk:Sss&diff=214237&oldid=prev 2014-07-07T03:22:06Z

<p>Hello</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>Hello, been reading through your [[Teenage life]] story a bit. I have been making some corrections for you, but I notice you keep changing the category between teenage life and teenage story. You need to be careful of that.<br /> <br /> Also, you have a page, [[Kiss his perfect mouth]]. The page following has a problem. The story flow here breaks, with the reader being at home in her living room, then, suddenly in the park, and going behind a bush. I think you need to change the flow or break this part and put it on a different branch.<br /> <br /> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 7 July 2014 (UTC)</div>

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