User talk:Snowball - Revision history

Pickles at 05:08, 17 May 2020

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	Unfortunately, there are no provisions for blanking groups of pages or blanking entire categories. Or maybe that's fortunate, since vandals would love to be able to blow away entire stories. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:04, 22 February 2015 (UTC)		Unfortunately, there are no provisions for blanking groups of pages or blanking entire categories. Or maybe that's fortunate, since vandals would love to be able to blow away entire stories. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:04, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
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		+	==The Pit of Abandoned Stories==
		+	I suppose that it's fitting that your story ''The Pit of Abandoned Stories'' would end up there. It's a clever meta idea, and it's too bad you didn't go anywhere with it. You would probably enjoy ''The Abandoned Story'' by the Completionist. He/she may have drawn inspiration from your story.
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		+	I have taken a liking to many of the abandoned stubs, like you probably did when you were active here. Nowadays CYOS is mostly dead, its lifeless limbs held together by a few living cells (and Platypus). Not that I've been around long enough to see it any other way. Maybe it's always been like this.
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		+	--[[User:Pickles\|Pickles]] 05:08, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Heyoeveryone: /* Thanks! XD */

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Thanks! XD

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	I actually like that idea! Linking pages that need work in the discussion page of the first, that's some smart thinking. A good idea is to put some sort of little line at the bottom of the page so that other writers know that some pages need some expanding. I suggest you don't do that on the 'DO NOT EDIT' stories though, they wrote that for a reason. Also, make the line in ''italics'', and put your name beside it, so that the reader knows it's a different section. --[[User:Heyoeveryone\|Heyoeveryone]] 23:37, 12 November 2011 (UTC)		I actually like that idea! Linking pages that need work in the discussion page of the first, that's some smart thinking. A good idea is to put some sort of little line at the bottom of the page so that other writers know that some pages need some expanding. I suggest you don't do that on the 'DO NOT EDIT' stories though, they wrote that for a reason. Also, make the line in ''italics'', and put your name beside it, so that the reader knows it's a different section. --[[User:Heyoeveryone\|Heyoeveryone]] 23:37, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
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		+	It's been a while! I check back once every six months really just to see if people request anything such as yourself. Sorry about the late response. As for Remember the story is yours to continue writing! I may check in more to perhaps add a page or two, perhaps tweak the story. Few points I'd like to make sure happens story wise. (Also spoilers)
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		+	Firstly, the captor is obviously the brother. The reason he captured him if I recall correctly was due to your characters constant bullying as a child and few major events recently, these events you can make yourself, but they must be significant (but not unrealistic), you could spin it so the captor 'loved' the girlfriend. Secondly, they got captured when May, William, your captor, and yourself went on a trip to a national park. This was mainly to patch up relationships between yourself and your brother. Obviously this does not work. During the struggle you hit your head against a tree causing the amnesia. Thirdly, ensure that yourself (the main character) feels super bad about what he has done to not only his brother/captor, but to May and William.
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		+	Lastly, the endings. Have as many as you want, but I'd want an ending where you not only save everyone, but save the captor/brother from dying. Why? Because if you manage to escape (by yourself or with others) there'll be one last conversation between you and your brother. Here the reader can choose to spout constant hate at him, causing the brother to either kill himself or try to kill you (again probably), or tell him that you're deeply sorry and mention that you are a new man due to the amnesia and you want to start again. If the reader chooses the latter, your brother is saved. (And promptly sent to jail if you wish).
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		+	That's a lot to take in. If you wish to continue Remember please use these story points. Also, thank you. I've always been meaning to finish Remember, the time just never came around for me to continue it. --[[User:Heyoeveryone\|Heyoeveryone]] 12:10, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

	== [[Genesis]] ==		== [[Genesis]] ==

Platypus at 20:04, 22 February 2015

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	-- [[User:Captain.Devonin\|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 20:15, 4 January 2012 (UTC)		-- [[User:Captain.Devonin\|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 20:15, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

-	= Reply from Holygiant =	+	== Reply from Holygiant ==

	I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.		I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.
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	But things are always open to change and any feedback on the changes will be considered. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:16, 18 August 2012 (UTC)		But things are always open to change and any feedback on the changes will be considered. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:16, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
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		+	==Mass Blanking==
		+	Unfortunately, there are no provisions for blanking groups of pages or blanking entire categories. Or maybe that's fortunate, since vandals would love to be able to blow away entire stories. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:04, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

Platypus at 15:16, 18 August 2012

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	--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula\|Fletcher Peninsula]]		--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula\|Fletcher Peninsula]]
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		+	==Main Page Changes==
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		+	The decision to revamp the Main Page was made by RobKohr, not me, but I certainly agree with him that something had to be done. The Main Page was way too full and was probably scaring newbies away from the site instead of drawing them in. He felt it would be best to simply display a few of the longer and/or well-written stories on the Main Page. In particular, he wanted room for some adult stories on the Main Page again, since the bulk of our traffic is adult.
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		+	But things are always open to change and any feedback on the changes will be considered. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:16, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

TheElderOnes: Replying.

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Replying.

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	Yeah, that's the page. And as for the page view count or whatever, that sounds about right. --[[User:TheElderOnes\|TheElderOnes]] 21:52, 21 December 2011 (UTC)		Yeah, that's the page. And as for the page view count or whatever, that sounds about right. --[[User:TheElderOnes\|TheElderOnes]] 21:52, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
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		+	Replying here because you replied in your original Bloodsport. section. :I
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		+	First off, man, no need to apologize for anything. I love feedback, positive or negative, and you were right about having to clarify that bit. I've done that now, and thanks. But yes, I currently have all the stories I've written woven together in a sort of miniverse. Bloodsport. is in that miniverse, but it's a separate story from what I had planned for Bethany and those around her. If I ever get some more work done in Bloodsport. I might go back to The Diary, as there's plenty to go on in there... --[[User:TheElderOnes\|TheElderOnes]] 06:24, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

	== Mockery ==		== Mockery ==

Fletcher Peninsula at 20:44, 20 June 2012

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	I love the idea of your [[Limerick]] story. I have added a few pages already; I don't want it to fall into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, because I think it could do well and be fun!--[[User:Impalalevi1]]		I love the idea of your [[Limerick]] story. I have added a few pages already; I don't want it to fall into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, because I think it could do well and be fun!--[[User:Impalalevi1]]
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		+	== Response ==
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		+	I want to suggest that the discussion pages of the first pages of stories used for the all time/ of the year as the vote pages. To
		+	keep voting easy, maybe only previously nominated stories could be used. See what you think.--Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content
		+	Resistance Leader 12:37, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Well, um, that would be another fine way to potentially do it. But the "story of the year" idea never really started and seems pretty dead right now (In all honestly I even forgott it existed in the first place). So it´s unlikely neither of the systems will ever be used anyways.
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		+	--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula\|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Impalalevi1: /* Limerick */ new section

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Limerick: new section

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	The best joke of the century [[special:random\|Cheers!]]		The best joke of the century [[special:random\|Cheers!]]
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		+	== Limerick ==
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		+	I love the idea of your [[Limerick]] story. I have added a few pages already; I don't want it to fall into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, because I think it could do well and be fun!--[[User:Impalalevi1]]

Zoroastra: /* Wandering to another page */ new section

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Wandering to another page: new section

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	I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.		I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.
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		+	== Wandering to another page ==
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		+	The best joke of the century [[special:random\|Cheers!]]

Snowball: /* Reply from Holygiant */

2012-01-16T12:22:25Z

Reply from Holygiant

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	I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.		I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.
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Snowball at 12:22, 16 January 2012

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		+	-- [[User:Captain.Devonin\|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 20:15, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

	= Reply from Holygiant =		= Reply from Holygiant =