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		<title>Platypus at 21:22, 22 May 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:42, 22 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:42, 22 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Stories don't move out of the pit by themselves.&amp;nbsp; Someone has to edit the Main Page and the Pit to move the story.&amp;nbsp; And while you've upped the page count on [[Star Wars]] to 11, it's barely a story.&amp;nbsp; It's nothing but abrupt dead ends.&amp;nbsp; Where did the droids come from?&amp;nbsp; Who is this main character?&amp;nbsp; How do you discover that you're a Sith?&amp;nbsp; You have to be trained in the dark use of the Force to become a Sith!&amp;nbsp; It doesn't just ''happen''.&amp;nbsp; Why would someone as insightful as Yoda accuse someone of murder unless they really had committed murder?&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<title>Platypus at 18:42, 22 May 2011</title>
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				<updated>2011-05-22T18:42:23Z</updated>
		
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Welcome aboard, Lord Vader.&amp;nbsp; The first bit of advice I'd give a newbie is to check out the [[tutorial]].&amp;nbsp; There's a lot of help in there to get you started.&amp;nbsp; Have fun, and don't be &lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;afriad &lt;/del&gt;to ask questions if something's got you stumped. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:53, 22 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Welcome aboard, Lord Vader.&amp;nbsp; The first bit of advice I'd give a newbie is to check out the [[tutorial]].&amp;nbsp; There's a lot of help in there to get you started.&amp;nbsp; Have fun, and don't be &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;afraid &lt;/ins&gt;to ask questions if something's got you stumped. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:53&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;, 22 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;To create a link, put a pair of square brackets around the title of your link, like so:&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#160;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;If your link is red after you save the page, the link goes to a page that hasn't been written yet.&amp;nbsp; If the link is blue, you've linked to an existing page.&amp;nbsp; If you accidentally link to a page in someone else's story, edit your page and change the link.&amp;nbsp; It's easy to tell what story a page belongs to because every page has a category at the bottom, showing the name of the story.&amp;nbsp; The cateogry is entered just like entering a link:&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Welcome aboard, Lord Vader.  The first bit of advice I'd give a newbie is to check out the tutorial.  There's a lot of help in there to get you started.  Have fun, and don't …'</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;Welcome aboard, Lord Vader.  The first bit of advice I&amp;#39;d give a newbie is to check out the &lt;a href=&quot;/Create_Your_Own_Story/Tutorial&quot; title=&quot;Tutorial&quot;&gt;tutorial&lt;/a&gt;.  There&amp;#39;s a lot of help in there to get you started.  Have fun, and don&amp;#39;t …&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;Welcome aboard, Lord Vader.  The first bit of advice I'd give a newbie is to check out the [[tutorial]].  There's a lot of help in there to get you started.  Have fun, and don't be afriad to ask questions if something's got you stumped. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:53, 22 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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