User talk:ArthurKung - Revision history

Elerneron at 00:21, 1 January 2015

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	I accept the challenge. Give me until the end of July, and also throw in some credit for [[User:Blackadder38\|Blackadder38]] who created the story.		I accept the challenge. Give me until the end of July, and also throw in some credit for [[User:Blackadder38\|Blackadder38]] who created the story.

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	Thanks for adding to my story [[2T4U\|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I hope you are enjoying it and will consider continuing to work on it from time to time. --[[User:Elerneron\|Elerneron]] 22:15, 15 October 2014 (UTC)		Thanks for adding to my story [[2T4U\|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I hope you are enjoying it and will consider continuing to work on it from time to time. --[[User:Elerneron\|Elerneron]] 22:15, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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		+	The direction you are taking is fine; quite enjoyable and promising actually. The janitor is probably important enough to have a character sheet for; to keep him consistent between the different branches of the story. As the one who introduced him, I would prefer that you made his character sheet if you would be willing, if not, drop me a line and I'll do the write-up for him.
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		+	'''A few thoughts on the direction you are going in'''; feel free to use them or ignore them: Maria will obviously do her best to stop the ending of the curse (short of killing the boy). If Aaron is stubborn in his resistance to her temptations, she is likely to tempt the boy to end the curse by giving her another child (which isn't really an end so much as a reprieve) but it would take strong magic to ACTUALLY make a ghost pregnant, and she is not about to volunteer the magic herself (or even the information that she can't get pregnant without strong magic).--[[User:Elerneron\|Elerneron]] 00:21, 1 January 2015 (UTC)

Elerneron at 22:15, 15 October 2014

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	I accept the challenge. Give me until the end of July, and also throw in some credit for [[User:Blackadder38\|Blackadder38]] who created the story.		I accept the challenge. Give me until the end of July, and also throw in some credit for [[User:Blackadder38\|Blackadder38]] who created the story.
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		+	Thanks for adding to my story [[2T4U\|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I hope you are enjoying it and will consider continuing to work on it from time to time. --[[User:Elerneron\|Elerneron]] 22:15, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

ArthurKung at 16:21, 7 March 2014

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	lol, you should try a white girl/Asian boy thing in your [[Interracial Extravganza‎]]. If you do, let me know, because, well, I am a white girl married to a Taiwanese guy xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 16:18, 7 March 2014 (UTC)		lol, you should try a white girl/Asian boy thing in your [[Interracial Extravganza‎]]. If you do, let me know, because, well, I am a white girl married to a Taiwanese guy xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 16:18, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
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		+	I accept the challenge. Give me until the end of July, and also throw in some credit for [[User:Blackadder38\|Blackadder38]] who created the story.

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* So, hopefully ok so far */

2014-03-07T16:18:14Z

So, hopefully ok so far

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	Well, I have added in most of my "good" paths, with one path that has some of the negative results, but only slight. I still have one more highly sexual path, but will probably move on to some of the other stories, the ones with darker undertones, not just sexually charged titillation. I am unsure if I want to go down the school path, which leads to, basically, the first time I was raped irl, or if I want to go down the party girl path, which will be more of a drugs scene, until the actual price of drug use starts to rear its ugly head. Anyways, just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 08:54, 3 March 2014 (UTC)		Well, I have added in most of my "good" paths, with one path that has some of the negative results, but only slight. I still have one more highly sexual path, but will probably move on to some of the other stories, the ones with darker undertones, not just sexually charged titillation. I am unsure if I want to go down the school path, which leads to, basically, the first time I was raped irl, or if I want to go down the party girl path, which will be more of a drugs scene, until the actual price of drug use starts to rear its ugly head. Anyways, just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 08:54, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
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		+	lol, you should try a white girl/Asian boy thing in your [[Interracial Extravganza‎]]. If you do, let me know, because, well, I am a white girl married to a Taiwanese guy xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 16:18, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* So, hopefully ok so far */

2014-03-03T08:54:05Z

So, hopefully ok so far

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	As [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters.		As [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters.
	To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung\|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)		To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung\|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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		+	Well, I have added in most of my "good" paths, with one path that has some of the negative results, but only slight. I still have one more highly sexual path, but will probably move on to some of the other stories, the ones with darker undertones, not just sexually charged titillation. I am unsure if I want to go down the school path, which leads to, basically, the first time I was raped irl, or if I want to go down the party girl path, which will be more of a drugs scene, until the actual price of drug use starts to rear its ugly head. Anyways, just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 08:54, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

ArthurKung at 20:08, 28 February 2014

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	Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC)		Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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		+	As [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters.
		+	To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung\|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* So, hopefully ok so far */ new section

2014-02-28T18:42:49Z

So, hopefully ok so far: new section

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	If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Rampage, you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]] before posting again. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 22:24, 15 February 2014 (UTC)		If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Rampage, you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]] before posting again. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 22:24, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
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		+	== So, hopefully ok so far ==
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		+	Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Platypus at 22:24, 15 February 2014

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	Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014		Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014
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		+	If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Rampage, you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]] before posting again. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 22:24, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

Kanin452 at 22:03, 23 January 2014

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	{{Warn3}}--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 23:59, 3 November 2012 (UTC)		{{Warn3}}--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 23:59, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
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	Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014		Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

Kanin452 at 22:03, 23 January 2014

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-	Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks.	+	Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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	As [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters.		As [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters.
	To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung\|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)		To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung\|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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		+	Well, I have added in most of my "good" paths, with one path that has some of the negative results, but only slight. I still have one more highly sexual path, but will probably move on to some of the other stories, the ones with darker undertones, not just sexually charged titillation. I am unsure if I want to go down the school path, which leads to, basically, the first time I was raped irl, or if I want to go down the party girl path, which will be more of a drugs scene, until the actual price of drug use starts to rear its ugly head. Anyways, just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 08:54, 3 March 2014 (UTC)