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	You sit down on the sofa opposite hers so you can talk face to face. 'Thanks for taking the case,' she says. 'I didn't think you would after you found out that Marty Riordan was involved.'		You sit down on the sofa opposite hers so you can talk face to face. 'Thanks for taking the case,' she says. 'I didn't think you would after you found out that Marty Riordan was involved.'

-	'I haven't taken it yet,' you say. 'Tell me everything. And no holding back secrets this time.'	+	'I haven't taken it yet,' you say. 'Tell me everything. Especially everything concerning Marty. And no holding back secrets this time.'

	The blonde smiles. 'Of course.' She takes a sip of her drink. If she looked good in your office that morning, she looks even more beautiful in the darkened room with the sound of the rain coming through the window.		The blonde smiles. 'Of course.' She takes a sip of her drink. If she looked good in your office that morning, she looks even more beautiful in the darkened room with the sound of the rain coming through the window.

-	'~~My husband~~ is ~~rich, Mr. Horne~~,' she says. '~~I am not. At least, I wasn't till I married him. He~~ is ~~also not a young man. He wasn't young when I married him either~~.'	+	'Marty Riordan is my brother-in-law,' she says. 'My husband is Arthur Riordan.'

-	'~~When we announced our engagement his lawyers drew up a document for me to sign~~.' She ~~smiles. 'Apparently his family didn~~'t ~~believe that a girl like me~~ was ~~interested in him just because of his boyish charm~~...'	+	You're surprised. She wasn't joking when she said her husband was rich. But this raises more questions too.

		+	'So what's Marty's angle on this?' you ask.

		+	'My husband's an honest man,' Estelle Riordan says. 'That much you can say for him at least. So he's never hit it off with his brother anyway. Then a couple of years ago, just after we got married, Arthur broke off relations with Marty entirely.
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		+	[[ND/Oakland details 2 (Riordan 1)\|Ask her if she knows the reason]]
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		+	[[ND/Oakland details 2 (Riordan 2)\|Let her continue]]

-	~~[[ND/Oakland details 2 (relationship)\|'And were you?']]~~

-	~~[[ND/Oakland details 2 (document)\|'What was the document about?']]~~

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	[[Category:Chapter 1A - The Call]]		[[Category:Chapter 1A - The Call]]

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-	You sit down on the sofa opposite ~~the one she sits in~~. 'Thanks for taking the case,' she says. 'I didn't think you would after you found out that Marty Riordan was involved.'	+	You sit down on the sofa opposite hers so you can talk face to face. 'Thanks for taking the case,' she says. 'I didn't think you would after you found out that Marty Riordan was involved.'

	'I haven't taken it yet,' you say. 'Tell me everything. And no holding back secrets this time.'		'I haven't taken it yet,' you say. 'Tell me everything. And no holding back secrets this time.'
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	The blonde smiles. 'Of course.' She takes a sip of her drink. If she looked good in your office that morning, she looks even more beautiful in the darkened room with the sound of the rain coming through the window.		The blonde smiles. 'Of course.' She takes a sip of her drink. If she looked good in your office that morning, she looks even more beautiful in the darkened room with the sound of the rain coming through the window.

-	'My husband is rich, Mr. Horne,' she says ~~finally~~. 'I am not. At least, I wasn't till I married him. He is also not a young man. He wasn't young when I married him either.'	+	'My husband is rich, Mr. Horne,' she says. 'I am not. At least, I wasn't till I married him. He is also not a young man. He wasn't young when I married him either.'

	'When we announced our engagement his lawyers drew up a document for me to sign.' She smiles. 'Apparently his family didn't believe that a girl like me was interested in him just because of his boyish charm...'		'When we announced our engagement his lawyers drew up a document for me to sign.' She smiles. 'Apparently his family didn't believe that a girl like me was interested in him just because of his boyish charm...'
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You sit down on the sofa opposite the one she sits in. 'Thanks for taking the case,' she says. 'I didn't think you would after you found out that Marty Riordan was involved.'

'I haven't taken it yet,' you say. 'Tell me everything. And no holding back secrets this time.'

The blonde smiles. 'Of course.' She takes a sip of her drink. If she looked good in your office that morning, she looks even more beautiful in the darkened room with the sound of the rain coming through the window.

'My husband is rich, Mr. Horne,' she says finally. 'I am not. At least, I wasn't till I married him. He is also not a young man. He wasn't young when I married him either.'

'When we announced our engagement his lawyers drew up a document for me to sign.' She smiles. 'Apparently his family didn't believe that a girl like me was interested in him just because of his boyish charm...'

[[ND/Oakland details 2 (relationship)|'And were you?']]

[[ND/Oakland details 2 (document)|'What was the document about?']]

[[Category:Noir Detective]]