Harry Potter - Revision history

Brotally Swagical at 02:53, 27 September 2018

2018-09-27T02:53:52Z

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-	Your name is Harry, Harry Potter. You are ten years old and live with your Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon. And then there’s your cousin, Dudley. He picks on you every day, to no end. You're forced to live with them because they're your only blood relatives left alive. Lily and James Potter, your parents, died in a fatal car crash about 10 years ago. As told by your cousins anyway. Also, you’re forced to sleep in a large cupboard under the staircase because Dudley uses the second guest bedroom for all of his junk. It’s very uncomfortable and full of spiders. They make you do all of the house keeping and cooking around the house, while Dudley plays video games and has fun with his friends.	+	Your name is Harry, Harry Potter. You are ten years old and live with your Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon. And then there’s your cousin, Dudley. He picks on you every day, to no end. You're forced to live with them because they're your only blood relatives left alive. Lily and James Potter, your parents, died in a fatal car crash about nine years ago. As told by your cousins anyway. Also, you’re forced to sleep in a large cupboard under the staircase because Dudley uses the second guest bedroom for all of his junk. It’s very uncomfortable and full of spiders. They make you do all of the house keeping and cooking around the house, while Dudley plays video games and has fun with his friends.

	Suddenly, you hear a loud banging on your door, and you hear a shrill voice screaming, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!" Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...		Suddenly, you hear a loud banging on your door, and you hear a shrill voice screaming, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!" Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...

Brotally Swagical: I revamped everything in the first paragraph, trying to keep some of the original author’s key pieces.

2018-09-27T02:53:00Z

I revamped everything in the first paragraph, trying to keep some of the original author’s key pieces.

←Older revision		Revision as of 02:53, 27 September 2018
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-	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and ~~were left on~~ your Aunt Petunia~~'s doorstep when you were a baby~~. ~~You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son~~, Dudley. As you ~~were told by your aunt~~, your ~~parents,~~ Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. ~~Your bedroom is the~~ cupboard under the ~~stairs,~~ and you ~~are basically~~ the ~~housekeeper.~~	+	Your name is Harry, Harry Potter. You are ten years old and live with your Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon. And then there’s your cousin, Dudley. He picks on you every day, to no end. You're forced to live with them because they're your only blood relatives left alive. Lily and James Potter, your parents, died in a fatal car crash about 10 years ago. As told by your cousins anyway. Also, you’re forced to sleep in a large cupboard under the staircase because Dudley uses the second guest bedroom for all of his junk. It’s very uncomfortable and full of spiders. They make you do all of the house keeping and cooking around the house, while Dudley plays video games and has fun with his friends.
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-	~~You hear a knock on your door~~, and ~~then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"~~	+

-	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...	+	Suddenly, you hear a loud banging on your door, and you hear a shrill voice screaming, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!" Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...

	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]

Gabranth at 15:12, 9 November 2014

2014-11-09T15:12:31Z

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	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...		Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...
-	~~Do you:~~	+
	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]
	*[[Get up]]		*[[Get up]]
	*[[Stay asleep]]		*[[Stay asleep]]
	[[Category: Harry Potter]]		[[Category: Harry Potter]]

Platypus: Reverted edit of Alex Sapre, changed back to last version by Goldenthesteral

2014-07-18T20:02:22Z

Reverted edit of Alex Sapre, changed back to last version by Goldenthesteral

←Older revision		Revision as of 20:02, 18 July 2014
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-	Your name is Harry, Harry Potter. You are ten years old and ~~was~~ left on your Aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.	+	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your Aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.

	You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"		You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"

-	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast,	+	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...
	Do you:		Do you:
	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]

Alex Sapre at 19:23, 18 July 2014

2014-07-18T19:23:10Z

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-	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and ~~were~~ left on your Aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.	+	Your name is Harry, Harry Potter. You are ten years old and was left on your Aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.

	You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"		You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"

-	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, ~~do you...~~	+	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast,
	Do you:		Do you:
	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]

Goldenthesteral at 01:15, 1 June 2014

2014-06-01T01:15:57Z

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	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]
	*[[Get up]]		*[[Get up]]
-	-Stay asleep	+	*[[Stay asleep]]
	[[Category: Harry Potter]]		[[Category: Harry Potter]]

Goldenthesteral at 01:15, 1 June 2014

2014-06-01T01:15:13Z

←Older revision		Revision as of 01:15, 1 June 2014
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	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]
	*[[Get up]]		*[[Get up]]
		+	-Stay asleep
	[[Category: Harry Potter]]		[[Category: Harry Potter]]

Santiagocreativewriting at 12:38, 15 January 2014

2014-01-15T12:38:43Z

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-	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your ~~aunt~~ Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.	+	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your Aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.

	You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"		You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"

Santiagocreativewriting at 12:38, 15 January 2014

2014-01-15T12:38:11Z

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-	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your ~~uncle~~'s doorstep when you were a baby. You live with ~~him~~, ~~his wife Petunia~~ and his son, ~~Duddley~~. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the ~~house's nanny~~.	+	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your aunt Petunia's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with her, her husband Vernon and his son, Dudley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter, died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the housekeeper.

	You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"		You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"

-	Aunt Petunia wants you to ~~wake~~ up to do ~~your chores~~.	+	Aunt Petunia wants you to get up to make breakfast, do you...
	Do you:		Do you:
	*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]		*[[Try to remember the dream you had.]]
	*[[Get up]]		*[[Get up]]
	[[Category: Harry Potter]]		[[Category: Harry Potter]]

Santiagocreativewriting at 12:35, 15 January 2014

2014-01-15T12:35:14Z

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-	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ~~eleven~~ years old and were left on your uncle's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with him, his wife Petunia and his son, Duddley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the house's nanny.	+	Your name is Harry. Harry Potter. You are ten years old and were left on your uncle's doorstep when you were a baby. You live with him, his wife Petunia and his son, Duddley. As you were told by your aunt, your parents, Lily and James Potter died in a car crash. Your bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, and you are basically the house's nanny.

	You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"		You hear a knock on your door, and then your Aunt Petunia says in a shrill voice, "Up! Up! Get up! Right now!"