Girl Scout Cookies/Editing Notes - Revision history

Shiine at 13:58, 31 March 2011

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	Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.		Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.
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		+	== Endings ==
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		+	Each ending where the girls are happy and satisfied should link to one of the beginnings in the sequel [[Girl Scout Camp]]. See that stories [[Girl Scout Camp/Editing Notes#Beginnings\|editing notes]] for details.

	== Poker ==		== Poker ==

Shiine at 12:19, 9 August 2010

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	== Poker ==		== Poker ==

-	The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress. The entire game is planned out already and most of the sections are done. However, I'm writing this offline and plan to post the entire thing at once. I expect to have it completed this month (August 2010).	+	Editors can feel free to revise some of the sections, expanding the descriptions and adding dialog, etc, but don't change the outcomes of any of the sections.
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-	~~Once it is up, editors~~ can feel free to revise some of the sections, expanding the descriptions, etc, but don't change the outcomes of any of the sections.	+

	== Truth or Dare ==		== Truth or Dare ==
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	* Offering Lin wine		* Offering Lin wine
	* Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)		* Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)
		+	* All of the "good" endings can continue with Claire and Lin coming back for more (possibly bringing the troop with them?)

	This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.		This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.

	[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies\| Girl Scout Cookies]]		[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies\| Girl Scout Cookies]]

Shiine at 08:11, 2 August 2010

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	== Characters ==		== Characters ==

-	Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair.She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight. Claire is on the pill.	+	Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair. She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight. Claire is on the pill.

	Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.		Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.
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	== Poker ==		== Poker ==

-	The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress.	+	The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress. The entire game is planned out already and most of the sections are done. However, I'm writing this offline and plan to post the entire thing at once. I expect to have it completed this month (August 2010).

-	~~There~~ is ~~a pattern~~ to ~~each~~ of the ~~pages: The page named 'HandXYZ' refers to dealing the hand where Claire has X pieces of clothing left~~, ~~Lin has Y and you have Z. There are a maximum of 80 hand pages, although not all of them need to be used. To determine~~ the ~~dealer~~, ~~you add X~~, ~~Y, and Z together and divide by three. If the remaindier is 2, Lin deals; 1 means Claire deals, and 0 is for you. The route that you took to reach that stage of undress doesn~~'t ~~matter.~~	+	Once it is up, editors can feel free to revise some of the sections, expanding the descriptions, etc, but don't change the outcomes of any of the sections.
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-	~~Each hand will have 2 (or 3) options for how to play it that determines who loses a piece~~ of ~~clothing. (It is fair to have no-win scenarios.) These options should be HandXYZa, HandXYZb, etc. Each~~ of ~~those pages will have a single link 'Deal~~ the ~~next hand' that links to the appropriate new Hand page. (The [[Girl Scout Cookies/Poker\|starting page]] could rightly be called 'Hand433'.)~~	+
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-	Note that the game keeps going when you're naked, so 'Hand012' is a legitimate page. The poker game ends when one person loses when they are naked. The undress state of others shouldn't matter (although that has yet to be written). I do '''not''' want every poker game to eventually end up at Hand000, although it might be reasonable to reduce everyone to their underwear and/or maybe make special allowences based on whether others are naked or not.	+
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-	~~As I said, this section is still a work in progress~~.	+

	== Truth or Dare ==		== Truth or Dare ==

Shiine at 06:34, 5 July 2010

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	== Characters ==		== Characters ==

-	Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair. She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. Claire is on the pill.	+	Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair.She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight. Claire is on the pill.

	Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.		Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.
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	The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress.		The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress.

-	There is a pattern to each of the pages: The page named 'HandXYZ' refers to dealing the hand where Claire has X pieces of clothing left, Lin has Y and you have Z. To determine the dealer, you add X, Y, and Z together and divide by three. If the remaindier is 2, Lin deals; 1 means Claire deals, and 0 is for you. The route that you took to reach that stage of undress doesn't matter.	+	There is a pattern to each of the pages: The page named 'HandXYZ' refers to dealing the hand where Claire has X pieces of clothing left, Lin has Y and you have Z. There are a maximum of 80 hand pages, although not all of them need to be used. To determine the dealer, you add X, Y, and Z together and divide by three. If the remaindier is 2, Lin deals; 1 means Claire deals, and 0 is for you. The route that you took to reach that stage of undress doesn't matter.

	Each hand will have 2 (or 3) options for how to play it that determines who loses a piece of clothing. (It is fair to have no-win scenarios.) These options should be HandXYZa, HandXYZb, etc. Each of those pages will have a single link 'Deal the next hand' that links to the appropriate new Hand page. (The [[Girl Scout Cookies/Poker\|starting page]] could rightly be called 'Hand433'.)		Each hand will have 2 (or 3) options for how to play it that determines who loses a piece of clothing. (It is fair to have no-win scenarios.) These options should be HandXYZa, HandXYZb, etc. Each of those pages will have a single link 'Deal the next hand' that links to the appropriate new Hand page. (The [[Girl Scout Cookies/Poker\|starting page]] could rightly be called 'Hand433'.)

-	Note that the game keeps going when you're naked, so 'Hand012' is a legitimate page. The poker game ends when one person loses when they are naked. The undress state of others shouldn't matter (although that has yet to be written). I do '''not''' want every poker game to eventually end up at Hand000.	+	Note that the game keeps going when you're naked, so 'Hand012' is a legitimate page. The poker game ends when one person loses when they are naked. The undress state of others shouldn't matter (although that has yet to be written). I do '''not''' want every poker game to eventually end up at Hand000, although it might be reasonable to reduce everyone to their underwear and/or maybe make special allowences based on whether others are naked or not.
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		+	As I said, this section is still a work in progress.

	== Truth or Dare ==		== Truth or Dare ==

Shiine at 06:11, 5 July 2010

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	This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.		This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.
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		+	[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies\| Girl Scout Cookies]]

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Here are some basic notes about this adventure that may help contributors:

== Characters ==

Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair. She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. Claire is on the pill.

Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.

== Poker ==

The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress.

There is a pattern to each of the pages: The page named 'HandXYZ' refers to dealing the hand where Claire has X pieces of clothing left, Lin has Y and you have Z. To determine the dealer, you add X, Y, and Z together and divide by three. If the remaindier is 2, Lin deals; 1 means Claire deals, and 0 is for you. The route that you took to reach that stage of undress doesn't matter.

Each hand will have 2 (or 3) options for how to play it that determines who loses a piece of clothing. (It is fair to have no-win scenarios.) These options should be HandXYZa, HandXYZb, etc. Each of those pages will have a single link 'Deal the next hand' that links to the appropriate new Hand page. (The [[Girl Scout Cookies/Poker|starting page]] could rightly be called 'Hand433'.)

Note that the game keeps going when you're naked, so 'Hand012' is a legitimate page. The poker game ends when one person loses when they are naked. The undress state of others shouldn't matter (although that has yet to be written). I do '''not''' want every poker game to eventually end up at Hand000.

== Truth or Dare ==

Don't know where I'm going to go with that one, but each page should have the choices 'Truth' and 'Dare' with the page names being the "round" of the game involved. (Truth1 and Dare1 are the first round, Truth2/Dare2 are the second, etc.) Note that the opposite rounds don't need uniqueness since you are picking a question or a action.

== Where to contribute ==

* The Twister section
* The threesome section after Claire returns with the cookies (under the Thin Mints area)
* Offering Lin wine
* Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)

This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.