User talk:Usr

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Revision as of 07:05, 3 December 2013 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

Please review punctuation with dialogue. You need to use punctuation properly if you are going to post in one of my stories. --Platypus 02:44, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow." really should be He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow." --Platypus 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

"Maybe.." You reply with a mysterious wink. should be written as "Maybe," you reply with a mysterious wink. --Platypus 03:34, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

I strongly suggest that you slow down and look at what you are posting. You forgot to include the status bar and category on one page and on your latest, you mis-identified who is being possessed. You're making many little mistakes that are most likely simply because you're posting as fast as you can. Slow it down. I do not want to have to edit every single page you post. --Platypus 07:05, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

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