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Talk:Main Page

Theotherguy — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 23:14:38 GMT

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Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea. -AlexCW

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Picures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Main Page

Theotherguy — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 17:21:21 GMT

Theotherguy: /* Main Page Stories */

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc.

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea. -AlexCW

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Picures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

All Mature Stories

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:29:39 GMT

Theotherguy:

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
|-
|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
|-
|[[1943]]||35||Open
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 1+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||2
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[City Life]]|| ||12+
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} ||(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Designing life]]|| ||('''New!''' You are welcome to participate)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| || 35
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 0+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[End of Days]]|| 1+ || Under Construction. Please Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| ||(Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||10+
|-
|[[In The Army]] || 25+
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| ||(the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| ||(JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || 15+
|-
|[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) [PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| ||just began
|-
|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || ||Just Started, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| ||(don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || ||(just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]]|| ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| ||(No editing please)
|-
|[[Perverticus]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||30+ ||Open to Public
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]|| ||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||5+ || Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||333+
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||100+
|-
|[[Random III]]||25+
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| 25+
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] || ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|'''[[Remember]]''' ||70 ||(Do Not Edit Without Permission) ('''<--Previously Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| 36 || (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || 53 || Do NOT edit!.
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || ||(W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||10+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[School Life]]|| ||(WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| 10 ||(W.I.P. pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Sengoku Basara: Romance]]|| ||(Under Construction - No editing)
|-
|[[Serial X]]||25+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| 12+ ||((Do not edit))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||250+ ||(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||25+
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]|| ||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||20+
|-
|[[Smile]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| 38+ || WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || ||(Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[Sonic & Shadow]] ||
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| 0+ ||public but keep it serious
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || ||(First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] || ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||3+
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||90+
|-
|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||25+
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||40+
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]|| ||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || ||(Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || 30+ ||W.I.P.
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || 0+ ||WIP
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || ||Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||40+ || started 6/24/09
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||25+
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 0+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[The Undead]] || ||(WIP. Help Wanted!)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||200+
|-
|[[Tres_Coetus_Coloris]]|| 0 ||WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| ||(WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| 300+ ||under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[University Secrets!]] || ||(Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )
|-
|[[Unknown Tales]] ||2+ ||edit freely)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| 20 || in progress
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| 100+
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || 150+ || in progress)
|-
|[[The Wasteland]]|| ||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||25+
|-
|[[World Undone]] || 15+
|-
|[[ Xozen Infection ]]|| 0+
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || || If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || ||(12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||15+
|-
|[[Zombies]] || ||(Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||35+
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||50+ ||Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] || ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies city]] || ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies: This is getting really old.]] || ||(Go ahead and edit. it's one more zombie story.)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||10+ ||edit freely)
|-
|}
[[Category:System Pages]]

101: Call Help Town

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:29:05 GMT

Theotherguy:

You mind as fucking well, it's not like you have much better chance of doing anything else anyway. Coughing for a moment, you begin to shout. "HELP ME! SOME ONE HELP!" If you are lucky another paratrooper is close by and you did not notice. You continue shouting until your throats dry and the AA guns in the distance begin to die down and far off rifle fire replaces it, you had given up when you hear footsteps nearby and a light voice.

"Wer ist da?" You freeze at the sound, German. You try to grab your rifle with your left arm and prop yourself against the house but you are too clumsy and it falls from your hand. Before long, you see the infantryman walk into the plaza cautiously, his rifle to bear. Looking around he spots you and slowly approaches, your heart slamming in your ears you try to remember the words for surrender.

"I-ich gale aufa?" You say, he frowns as you obviously slaughter the German language like a pig. As he walks over, he lowers his rifle and feels your right arms, you yelp in pain as he presses his fingers into the flesh where your arm used to be socketed in; nodding as he realizes your situation, he wraps one arm around your left side and he pushes the other side of his body into your right. You groan in pain until you hear a vague popping sound and realize the worst is over, you slowly roll your arm and try to push the pain away. Reaching into his belt, he pulls out a canteen and lifts it to your mouth.

*[[101: Drink Water Town|Accept the water, you need a drink]]
*[[101: Attack Town|Now is your chance, try to get him with your knife!]]

'''Drink of water! +5 MP'''

'''Arm relocated! +5 HP'''

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=95|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Ambush Lake

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:28:36 GMT

Theotherguy:

You decide it would be too risky to let him pass or give him a chance to find you, and even though you feel bad for him, he is still dangerous with that weapon. Chances are he did not have much of an idea of how to use it, but a gun is a gun and you could not risk taking a bullet. Your first idea is to toss a grenade, but chances are he had friends near by and you would probably need it for later. After a bit of searching, you find a mossy stone near the boulder you were hiding behind and after shaking it out of the ground you see that it is large and slightly pointed. Carefully, you get into a crouch and slowly slide around the boulder, the soldier oblivious to your movement. After what felt like an hour of sneaking, you find yourself directly behind the German.

Thanking god he does not have a helmet on, you raise the stone up above your head and throw it down to his skull. He lets out a yelp of pain as the rock smashes into his skull with a sickening crack before he fall over, dead. Letting your breath out, you drop the rock and scoop up his KAR98K before realizing you are crying, the tears running freely down your face as you realize you just killed some one even younger than you because he got over eager. Trying your best to fight back the sadness that is creeping up through you, you search his body and take his supplies.

'''Ammo found! +20 KAR98K bullets'''

'''Clip found! +5 KAR98K bullets'''

'''Knife found! +1 Trench Knife'''

*[[101: Be An Idiot Lake|Go to where he came from]]
*[[101: Ambush Bearings Lake|Explore other options]]

{{Status|Equipment=''KAR98K, KAR98K bullets (25), Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade, Trench Knife.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Cut Cord Forest

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:27:42 GMT

Theotherguy:

You will not be getting out of here by sitting there you think to yourself, sighing, you carefully move your hand to your belt and grab your trench knife. Carefully, you bring it up to the cords that hold you to the rest of your parachute. Before you can reach it, the last cord snaps and you go flying to the ground, losing your hold of the knife. An instant after, you feel your self hit the ground, slightly softened by leafs but hard enough to cause a large jolt of pain to shoot through your arm. Gasping loudly, you feel it, squinting in pain when you try to move it out from under you.

Dislocated.

Cursing, you slowly help your self up and you look around to see where you have fallen, your eyes adjusting to the light, you peer into the forest to see if you can see any other parachutes. Instead, you see several different figures slowly moving up to you, and they are not wearing American uniforms.

Quickly, you sprint away, your rifle slamming against your side as you make a run for it. You hear some one scream "AMERIKANER! Erschiessen! Erschiessen! SCHNELL!" You have no idea what he said, but the anger in his voice is apparent enough, you are followed by gun shots as branches crunch under your moving boots, bullets impacting the trees around you and causing the wood to splinter. You keep running and ignoring the screams until the gun shots halt, slowing down and catching a breath.

Realizing you are doomed if they catch up with your arm, you look around, then sit down. Carefully, you push the arm back into place, grinding your teeth as the massive waves of pain shoot through you with monster truck force. After what seems like an hour, it fits in and instantly the pain begins to leave and subside. Realizing you do not have time to cry over it, you stand back up.

'''Adrenaline is pumping! +20 MP'''

'''Light arm wound! -5 Health'''

'''Knife lost in fall! -1 Trench Knife'''

*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help Forest|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=95|MP=110|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Take A Breath Forest

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:27:15 GMT

Theotherguy:

Gulping, you calm yourself down, trying to take stock of the situation at hand. Your heart slowly stops racing so much and your head clears, you hear a slight tap as blood from a cut falls and hits a branch, then you hear a cacophony of other sounds. Branches snap, leaves move and some hushed voices from down below, they are distinctly German.

"Ich sage Ihnen Hans, konnte Schmeling in den Hintern treten."

Three German soldiers carrying rifles walk under you, then stop for a smoke. They all wear field caps besides one who has the standard issue helmet. They all seem unaware of your entrance, most likely just looking around. You try your best not to make any noise, hardly breathing and locking your knees, the only thing moving you is the occasional push of the wind. The Germans stand in a small circle and continuing their conversation, the one with the helmet offering them all cigarettes. If you were to fall you would land right in the middle of them.

"Das ist Scheisse, Schmeling ein Fake ist, ich bin die reale Sache."

Speaks one of the men with the caps, a hint of negativity in his tone. You wonder when they are going to leave when suddenly you hear a tap... your blood hit the branch again.

The Germans heard it too, all of their backs suddenly went straight, slowly, they un-sling their rifles and look around, trying to locate the sound. Your heart begins to race again but you try your best to keep it down. Though you are fairly sure the Germans can hear the massive beat of your heart.

"Johan, was zum Teufel war das?"

Says the same man, the one with the helmet lets out a whisper which you can not hear, they look everywhere but up.

"Hans, Dieter, wir besser sich zu bewegen."

Says the one with the helmet, they all nod and slowly walk off, their guns tilting down. When you are sure they are gone, you thank the lord.

Positioning your legs, you take your knife and slowly saw through the cords of the parachute. You cut the third cord and the rest begin to snap, you lose several inches before the final one gives way and you drop to the ground. Your legs take the impact due to your smart positioning and you are fine, though your legs are sore. Carefully, you stand up, find your knife, and look around.

'''Calmed down! -5 MP'''

*[[101: Move North Forest|Walk to the north]]
*[[101: Move East Forest|Walk to the east, where the Germans went]]
*[[101: Move West Forest|Walk to the west]]
*[[101: Move South Forest|Walk to the south]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=85|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Forest

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:26:37 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing in the forest, though it is massive. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through some trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Oh ''shit'' your destination is tall pointy trees and tons of sharp branches. You try your best not to scream as you tear through the tree line, the wood scratching and ripping at your exposed skin and tearing apart your clothes. Slowly you come to a stop, hanging above the ground, your parachute caught in the branches.

Coming out of the daze, you take stock. You are cut everywhere and there is a horrible pain coming from your thigh, it must have taken a large cut in the fall. Your grenades are not where they should be and your pouch was torn open, some ammo spilling out. You are around fifteen feet in the air, your legs dangling freely below you.

'''Multiple cuts! -10 Health'''

'''Bad thigh wound! -10 Health'''

'''Bleeding! -5 Health"'''

'''Exhausted! -30 MP"'''

'''Grenades lost in fall! -3 Grenades'''

'''Ammo lost in fall! -30 M1-A1 ammo'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help Forest|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=90|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:26:21 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you west, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -40 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Call Help Town

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:26:00 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You mind as fucking well, it's not like you have much better chance of doing anything else anyway. Coughing for a moment, you begin to shout. "HELP ME! SOME ONE HELP!" If you are…'

You mind as fucking well, it's not like you have much better chance of doing anything else anyway. Coughing for a moment, you begin to shout. "HELP ME! SOME ONE HELP!" If you are lucky another paratrooper is close by and you did not notice. You continue shouting until your throats dry and the AA guns in the distance begin to die down and far off rifle fire replaces it, you had given up when you hear footsteps nearby and a light voice.

"Wer ist da?" You freeze at the sound, German. You try to grab your rifle with your left arm and prop yourself against the house but you are too clumsy and it falls from your hand. Before long, you see the infantryman walk into the plaza cautiously, his rifle to bear. Looking around he spots you and slowly approaches, your heart slamming in your ears you try to remember the words for surrender.

"I-ich gale aufa?" You say, he frowns as you obviously slaughter the German language like a pig. As he walks over, he lowers his rifle and feels your right arms, you yelp in pain as he presses his fingers into the flesh where your arm used to be socketed in; nodding as he realizes your situation, he wraps one arm around your left side and he pushes the other side of his body into your right. You groan in pain until you hear a vague popping sound and realize the worst is over, you slowly roll your arm and try to push the pain away. Reaching into his belt, he pulls out a canteen and lifts it to your mouth.

*[[101: Drink Water Town|Accept the water, you need a drink]]
*[[101: Attack Town|Now is your chance, try to get him with your knife!]]

''Drink of water! +5 MP''

''Arm relocated! +5 HP''

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=95|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Houses

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:25:06 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the town, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the town, the forest is to the west of the town and next to those are the lakes, to the east are large fields and farms. Sighing, you try to find something to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing near the town, though none on it. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through the forest to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize that time is passing and look down, you are getting close to the houses. There are about ten of them, one of them is most likely owned by some sort of mayor, the largest one, and sits on a hill to the east. There are nine other houses in front of it, down a cobbled road that leads from its gates. There is a small town square that they are surrounding. It seems completely insignificant and like there is little reason for it to even exist, though you do see Swastika's hanging from the mayors home and you are not sure if he is actually aligned with them or if a German officer lives here or what. Suddenly, you feel a tug and the wind blows you west, you realize your landing zone is suddenly changed from the center of the square to the roof of a two story building and you let out a curse as you hit the side of the building.

You slide down the slanted roof, your speed picking up and you begin spinning. The tiles and shingles of the roof falling off with you and smashing and shattering against the ground. You realize you are shouting as you fall off the side, your body horribly tangled in the parachute and you are unable to move. You fly towards the ground until you are about seven feet, then suddenly stop. You briefly pray to every single deity you can think of and wonder why you are not dead yet when you realize your parachute must of snagged on the chimney. A smile widens on your face and you let out a sigh of relief. You stare at the ground and your helmet and rifle which had fallen off in your fall.

Then you drop a foot, your eyes widening as you hear the tearing noise of your parachute. You scream again when it is torn loose and you fall towards the ground, unable to protect your face due to the cap that is the cords you turn your head to the side to shield it. You smash against the ground, not making another move with all of the gear weighing you down and sit there for a minute. The cords have gone loose now that the parachute is torn in half and you slowly wiggle your way out of them.

Finally getting out, you attempt to grab your helm with your left arm and quickly gasp as you feel a jolt of pain. ''"It is dislocated"'' you think to yourself as you look around. You sigh and grab it with your right hand and drop it on your head. You then grab your rifle with your right as well and try your best to sling it on your shoulder. You look around the square, you probably do not have much time if there are any Germans inside of the manor, but you will need to do something about your arm. You do not have any medical supplies and all of the doors are shut with none of the lights besides one in the manor. You sigh, thinking of what to do.

'''Arm dislocated! -15 Health'''

'''Exhausted! -30 MP'''

*[[101: Knock Doors Town|Knock on a nearby door]]
*[[101: Knock Door Manor|Knock on the doors of the manor]]
*[[101: Call Help Town|Shout for some help]]
*[[101: Leave Town Drop|Leave the town]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=85|MP=90|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

Talk:Main Page

Theotherguy — Thu, 30 Aug 2012 07:10:45 GMT

Theotherguy:

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea. -AlexCW

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Picures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

All Mature Stories

Theotherguy — Tue, 21 Aug 2012 01:21:43 GMT

Theotherguy:

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
|-
|[[101st]]||9||(Open!)
|-
|[[1943]]|| ||Open
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]|| ||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]|| ||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Antarctica, 2042]] ||0||(WIP; Closed Until Further Notice)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]|| ||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]|| ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 1+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]|| ||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || ||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]|| ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[City Life]]|| ||12+
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} ||(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Designing life]]|| ||('''New!''' You are welcome to participate)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| || 35
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 0+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[End of Days]]|| 1+ || Under Construction. Please Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| ||(Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||10+
|-
|[[In The Army]] || 25+
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| ||(the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| ||(JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || 15+
|-
|[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) [PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| ||(Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| ||just began
|-
|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || ||Just Started, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| ||(don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || ||(just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]]|| ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| ||(No editing please)
|-
|[[Perverticus]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||30+ ||Open to Public
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]|| ||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||5+ || Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||333+
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||100+
|-
|[[Random III]]||25+
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| 25+
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] || ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|'''[[Remember]]''' ||70 ||(Do Not Edit Without Permission) ('''<--Previously Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| 36 || (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || 53 || Do NOT edit!.
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || ||(W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||10+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[School Life]]|| ||(WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| 10 ||(W.I.P. pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Sengoku Basara: Romance]]|| ||(Under Construction - No editing)
|-
|[[Serial X]]||25+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| 12+ ||((Do not edit))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||250+ ||(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||25+
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]|| ||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||20+
|-
|[[Smile]]|| ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| 38+ || WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || ||(Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[Sonic & Shadow]] ||
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| 0+ ||public but keep it serious
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || ||(First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] || ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||3+
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||90+
|-
|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||25+
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||40+
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]|| ||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || ||(Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || 30+ ||W.I.P.
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || 0+ ||WIP
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || ||Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||40+ || started 6/24/09
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||25+
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 0+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[The Undead]] || ||(WIP. Help Wanted!)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||200+
|-
|[[Tres_Coetus_Coloris]]|| 0 ||WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| ||(WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| 300+ ||under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[University Secrets!]] || ||(Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )
|-
|[[Unknown Tales]] ||2+ ||edit freely)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| 20 || in progress
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| 100+
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || 150+ || in progress)
|-
|[[The Wasteland]]|| ||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||25+
|-
|[[World Undone]] || 15+
|-
|[[ Xozen Infection ]]|| 0+
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || || If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || ||(12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||15+
|-
|[[Zombies]] || ||(Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||35+
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||50+ ||Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] || ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies city]] || ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies: This is getting really old.]] || ||(Go ahead and edit. it's one more zombie story.)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||10+ ||edit freely)
|-
|}
[[Category:System Pages]]

Male high school student

Theotherguy — Wed, 27 Jun 2012 03:34:13 GMT

Theotherguy:

Next, you pick your social group

Are You:
*[[Athlete (m)|Athlete]]
*[[Druggie (m)|Druggie]]
*[[Emo kid (m)|Emo]]
*[[Goth kid (m)|Goth]]
*[[Hippie (m)|Hippie]]
*[[Jock(m)|Jock/Prep]]
*[[Loner (m)|Loner]]
*[[Nerd(m)|Nerd]]
*[[Punk(m)|Punk]]
*[[Rebel(m)|Rebel]]
*[[Rocker Boy (m) |Rocker Boy]]
*[[Band Geek(m)|Band Geek]]
*[[Cross Dresser (m) |Cross Dresser]]

{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=}}
[[Category: High School]]

101: Land Houses

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 23:07:30 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the town, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the town, the forest is to the west of the town and next to those are the lakes, to the east are large fields and farms. Sighing, you try to find something to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing near the town, though none on it. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through the forest to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize that time is passing and look down, you are getting close to the houses. There are about ten of them, one of them is most likely owned by some sort of mayor, the largest one, and sits on a hill to the east. There are nine other houses in front of it, down a cobbled road that leads from its gates. There is a small town square that they are surrounding. It seems completely insignificant and like there is little reason for it to even exist, though you do see Swastika's hanging from the mayors home and you are not sure if he is actually aligned with them or if a German officer lives here or what. Suddenly, you feel a tug and the wind blows you west, you realize your landing zone is suddenly changed from the center of the square to the roof of a two story building and you let out a curse as you hit the side of the building.

You slide down the slanted roof, your speed picking up and you begin spinning. The tiles and shingles of the roof falling off with you and smashing and shattering against the ground. You realize you are shouting as you fall off the side, your body horribly tangled in the parachute and you are unable to move. You fly towards the ground until you are about seven feet, then suddenly stop. You briefly pray to every single deity you can think of and wonder why you are not dead yet when you realize your parachute must of snagged on the chimney. A smile widens on your face and you let out a sigh of relief. You stare at the ground and your helmet and rifle which had fallen off in your fall.

Then you drop a foot, your eyes widening as you hear the tearing noise of your parachute. You scream again when it is torn loose and you fall towards the ground, unable to protect your face due to the cap that is the cords you turn your head to the side to shield it. You smash against the ground, not making another move with all of the gear weighing you down and sit there for a minute. The cords have gone loose now that the parachute is torn in half and you slowly wiggle your way out of them.

Finally getting out, you attempt to grab your helm with your left arm and quickly gasp as you feel a jolt of pain. ''"It is dislocated"'' you think to yourself as you look around. You sigh and grab it with your right hand and drop it on your head. You then grab your rifle with your right as well and try your best to sling it on your shoulder. You look around the square, you probably do not have much time if there are any Germans inside of the manor, but you will need to do something about your arm. You do not have any medical supplies and all of the doors are shut with none of the lights besides one in the manor. You sigh, thinking of what to do.

'''Arm dislocated! -15 Health'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Knock Doors Town|Knock on a nearby door]]
*[[101: Knock Door Manor|Knock on the doors of the manor]]
*[[101: Call Help Town|Shout for some help]]
*[[101: Leave Town Drop|Leave the town]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=85|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Ambush Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 20:49:38 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You decide it would be too risky to let him pass or give him a chance to find you, and even though you feel bad for him, he is still dangerous with that weapon. Chances are he di…'

You decide it would be too risky to let him pass or give him a chance to find you, and even though you feel bad for him, he is still dangerous with that weapon. Chances are he did not have much of an idea of how to use it, but a gun is a gun and you could not risk taking a bullet. Your first idea is to toss a grenade, but chances are he had friends near by and you would probably need it for later. After a bit of searching, you find a mossy stone near the boulder you were hiding behind and after shaking it out of the ground you see that it is large and slightly pointed. Carefully, you get into a crouch and slowly slide around the boulder, the soldier oblivious to your movement. After what felt like an hour of sneaking, you find yourself directly behind the German.

Thanking god he does not have a helmet on, you raise the stone up above your head and throw it down to his skull. He lets out a yelp of pain as the rock smashes into his skull with a sickening crack before he fall over, dead. Letting your breath out, you drop the rock and scoop up his KAR98K before realizing you are crying, the tears running freely down your face as you realize you just killed some one even younger than you because he got over eager. Trying your best to fight back the sadness that is creeping up through you, you search his body and take his supplies.

'''Ammo found! +20 KAR98K bullets'''

'''Clip found! +5 KAR98K bullets'''

'''Knife found! -1 Trench Knife'''

*[[101: Be An Idiot Lake|Go to where he came from]]
*[[101: Ambush Bearings Lake|Explore other options]]

{{Status|Equipment=''KAR98K, KAR98K bullets (25), Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade, Trench Knife.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Call for help Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 19:22:28 GMT

Theotherguy:

Pulling your self up, you stumble for a second before you almost trip and fall face first into a rock. Quickly catching yourself, you slide down onto another boulder and sit there for a moment before looking around. "Hello? Is anyone there!?" You shout, hoping a friendly can hear you. Waiting a minute, you call out again, slowly getting up and trying to find some one.

Then you hear a voice.

"Hallo!?" Your eyes shoot up and you smile. Some one is there! Looking around for the source of the noise and trying to figure out if you know the person behind the words.

Wait.

Hallo? Why would they say hallo? It is hello and even then you are supposed to say flash and respond with thun-

Hallo is German for hello.

You curse and quickly look around for the voice, then realizing you have no gun you slide down behind the rock, hoping the German did not spot you. Slowly you crawl into a bush and look through the foliage, your eyes slowly becoming adjusted to the view before you. The grass on the ground is swaying gently, the trees following their movements. The pitch blackness fades slightly and then you see him, a small German boy in a blue uniform, hardly over the age of nineteen.

He holds a K98K and is carefully stepping around the pond, trying to find you. He gets quite close to you and you can make out the fear on his face. This is just a child, he did not want to see war. He is almost passing your bush and you think of options.

*[[101: Ambush Lake|Try to ambush him]]
*[[101: Allow pass Lake|Let the kid pass]]
*[[101: Sneak past Lake|Sneak past him]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 19:21:01 GMT

Theotherguy:

101: Bearings Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 19:20:12 GMT

Theotherguy:

Sighing, you slowly get on your feet, taking a deep breath once you stand. You try to look around into the darkness but you are hardly able to decipher anything. Your eyes slowly adjust to the night and finally you think you are able to see nothing but forest surrounding the lake. Looking at the lake, you realize it is hardly deserving of such a name and now it looks more like a large pond than anything, it is mostly surrounded by rocks or trees but you had gone ashore on the single sand dune.

You look around again and see nothing, suddenly something of interest catches your eye, your rifle! You see it laying on the ground by a large rock, half of it submerged in the water. You must have thrown it when you thrashed about in the water. Slowly walking over, you grab it and sling it on your shoulder, once again searching the area for something of interest a final time.

You almost leave when you search the sky one more time, squinting, you see a single parachute land very close to you, less than a mile to your east, in the large forest between you and the town. There are probably many more there too, though by the sound of rifle and AA fire, the Germans will be in there waiting for them.

You look around, taking a step towards the tree line to the east and then back to the west, you think.

'''Rifle found! +1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip found! +15 Rounds'''

*[[101: Call for help Lake2|Call for anyone]]
*[[101: Move west Lake|Go west]]
*[[101: Move east Lake|Go east]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade.''|Health=10|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 22 Jun 2012 19:17:58 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you west, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Take A Breath Forest

Theotherguy — Fri, 17 Feb 2012 18:03:04 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'Gulping, you calm yourself down, trying to take stock of the situation at hand. Your heart slowly stops racing so much and your head clears, you hear a slight tap as blood from a…'

101: Cut Cord Forest

Theotherguy — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 18:56:55 GMT

Theotherguy:

101: Cut Cord Forest

Theotherguy — Fri, 03 Feb 2012 07:35:13 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You will not be getting out of here by sitting there you think to yourself, sighing, you carefully move your hand to your belt and grab your trench knife. Carefully, you bring it…'

You will not be getting out of here by sitting there you think to yourself, sighing, you carefully move your hand to your belt and grab your trench knife. Carefully, you bring it up to the cords that hold you to the rest of your parachute. Before you can reach it, the last cord snaps and you go flying to the ground, losing your hold of the knife. An instant after, you feel your self hit the ground, slightly softened by leafs but hard enough to cause a large jolt of pain to shoot through your arm. Gasping loudly, you feel it, squinting in pain when you try to move it out from under you.

Dislocated.

Cursing, you slowly help your self up and you look around to see where you have fallen, your eyes adjusting to the light, you peer into the forest to see if you can see any other parachutes. Instead, you see several different figures slowly moving up to you, and they are not wearing American uniforms.

Quickly, you sprint away, your rifle slamming against your side as you make a run for it. You hear some one scream "AMERIKANER! Erschiessen! Erschiessen! SCHNELL!" You have no idea what he said, but the anger in his voice is apparent enough, you are followed by gun shots as branches crunch under your moving boots, bullets impacting the trees around you and causing the wood to splinter. You keep running and ignoring the screams until the gun shots halt, slowing down and catching a breath.

Realizing you are doomed if they catch up with your arm, you look around, then sit down. Carefully, you push the arm back into place, grinding your teeth as the massive waves of pain shoot through you with monster truck force. After what seems like an hour, it fits in and instantly the pain begins to leave and subside. Realizing you do not have time to cry over it, you stand back up.

'''Adrenaline is pumping! +20 MP'''

'''Light arm wound! -5 Health'''

'''Knife lost in fall! -1 Trench Knife'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help Forest|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=95|MP=125|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Fri, 03 Feb 2012 07:35:05 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you west, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Thu, 02 Feb 2012 00:41:17 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you west, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Call for help Lake

Theotherguy — Thu, 02 Feb 2012 00:39:42 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'Pulling your self up, you stumble for a second before you almost trip and fall face first into a rock. Quickly catching yourself, you slide down onto another boulder and sit ther…'

Pulling your self up, you stumble for a second before you almost trip and fall face first into a rock. Quickly catching yourself, you slide down onto another boulder and sit there for a moment before looking around. "Hello? Is anyone there!?" You shout, hoping a friendly can hear you. Waiting a minute, you call out again, slowly getting up and trying to find some one.

Then you hear a voice.

"Hallo!?" Your eyes shoot up and you smile. Some one is there! Looking around for the source of the noise and trying to figure out if you know the person behind the words.

Wait.

Hallo? Why would they say hallo? It is hello and even then you are supposed to say flash and respond with thun-

Hallo is German for hello.

You curse and quickly look around for the voice, then realizing you have no gun you slide down behind the rock, hoping the German did not spot you. Slowly you crawl into a bush and look through the foliage, your eyes slowly becoming adjusted to the view before you. The grass on the ground is swaying gently, the trees following their movements. The pitch blackness fades slightly and then you see him, a small German boy in a blue uniform, hardly over the age of nineteen.

He holds a K98K and is carefully stepping around the pond, trying to find you. He gets quite close to you and you can make out the fear on his face. This is just a child, he did not want to see war. He is almost passing your bush and you think of options.

*[[101: Ambush Lake|Try to ambush him]]
*[[101: Allow pass Lake|Let the kid pass]]
*[[101: Sneak past Lake|Sneak past him]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Bearings Lake

Theotherguy — Thu, 02 Feb 2012 00:29:01 GMT

Theotherguy:

101: Bearings Lake

Theotherguy — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 20:53:42 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'Sighing, you slowly get on your feet, taking a deep breath once you stand. You try to look around into the darkness but you are hardly able to decipher anything. Your eyes slowly…'

Sighing, you slowly get on your feet, taking a deep breath once you stand. You try to look around into the darkness but you are hardly able to decipher anything. Your eyes slowly adjust to the night and finally you think you are able to see nothing but forest surrounding the lake. Looking at the lake, you realize it is hardly deserving of such a name and now it looks more like a large pond than anything, it is mostly surrounded by rocks or trees but you had gone ashore on the single sand dune.

You look around again and see nothing, suddenly something of interest catches your eye, your rifle! You see it laying on the ground by a large rock, half of it submerged in the water. You must have thrown it when you thrashed about in the water. Slowly walking over, you grab it and sling it on your shoulder, once again searching the area for something of interest a final time.

You almost leave when you search the sky one more time, squinting, you see a single parachute land very close to you, less than a mile to your east, in the large forest between you and the town. There are probably many more there too, though by the sound of rifle and AA fire, the Germans will be in there waiting for them.

You look around, taking a step towards the tree line to the east and then back to the west, you think.

'''Rifle found! +1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip found! +15 Rounds'''

*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]
*[[101: Move west Lake|Go west]]
*[[101: Move east Lake|Go east]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=10|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Houses

Theotherguy — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 02:01:20 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the town, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the town, wedged between the far to the east of the lake and next to the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing near the town, though none on it. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through the forest to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize that time is passing and look down, you are getting close to the houses. There are about ten of them, one of them is most likely owned by some sort of mayor, the largest one, and sits on a hill to the east. There are nine other houses in front of it, down a cobbled road that leads from its gates. There is a small town square that they are surrounding. It seems completely insignificant and like there is little reason for it to even exist, though you do see Swastika's hanging from the mayors home and you are not sure if he is actually aligned with them or if a German officer lives here or what. Suddenly, you feel a tug and the wind blows you west, you realize your landing zone is suddenly changed from the center of the square to the roof of a two story building and you let out a curse as you hit the side of the building.

You slide down the slanted roof, your speed picking up and you begin spinning. The tiles and shingles of the roof falling off with you and smashing and shattering against the ground. You realize you are shouting as you fall off the side, your body horribly tangled in the parachute and you are unable to move. You fly towards the ground until you are about seven feet, then suddenly stop. You briefly pray to every single deity you can think of and wonder why you are not dead yet when you realize your parachute must of snagged on the chimney. A smile widens on your face and you let out a sigh of relief. You stare at the ground and your helmet and rifle which had fallen off in your fall.

Then you drop a foot, your eyes widening as you hear the tearing noise of your parachute. You scream again when it is torn loose and you fall towards the ground, unable to protect your face due to the cap that is the cords you turn your head to the side to shield it. You smash against the ground, not making another move with all of the gear weighing you down and sit there for a minute. The cords have gone loose now that the parachute is torn in half and you slowly wiggle your way out of them.

Finally getting out, you attempt to grab your helm with your left arm and quickly gasp as you feel a jolt of pain. ''"It is dislocated"'' you think to yourself as you look around. You sigh and grab it with your right hand and drop it on your head. You then grab your rifle with your right as well and try your best to sling it on your shoulder. You look around the square, you probably do not have much time if there are any Germans inside of the manor, but you will need to do something about your arm. You do not have any medical supplies and all of the doors are shut with none of the lights besides one in the manor. You sigh, thinking of what to do.

'''Arm dislocated! -15 Health'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Knock Doors Town|Knock on a nearby door]]
*[[101: Knock Door Manor|Knock on the doors of the manor]]
*[[101: Call Help Town|Shout for some help]]
*[[101: Leave Town Drop|Leave the town]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=85|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Forest

Theotherguy — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:58:09 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing in the forest, though it is massive. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through some trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Oh ''shit'' your destination is tall pointy trees and tons of sharp branches. You try your best not to scream as you tear through the tree line, the wood scratching and ripping at your exposed skin and tearing apart your clothes. Slowly you come to a stop, hanging above the ground, your parachute caught in the branches.

Coming out of the daze, you take stock. You are cut everywhere and there is a horrible pain coming from your thigh, it must have taken a large cut in the fall. Your grenades are not where they should be and your pouch was torn open, some ammo spilling out. You are around fifteen feet in the air, your legs dangling freely below you.

'''Multiple cuts! -10 Health'''

'''Bad thigh wound! -10 Health'''

'''Bleeding! -5 Health"'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP"'''

'''Grenades lost in fall! -3 Grenades'''

'''Ammo lost in fall! -30 M1-A1 ammo'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help Forest|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Houses

Theotherguy — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:57:41 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You slowly descend towards the town, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the town, wedged between the far to the east of th…'

You slowly descend towards the town, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the town, wedged between the far to the east of the lake and next to the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing near the town, though none on it. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through the forest to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize that time is passing and look down, you are getting close to the houses. There are about ten of them, one of them is most likely owned by some sort of mayor, the largest one, and sits on a hill to the east. There are nine other houses in front of it, down a cobbled road that leads from its gates. There is a small town square that they are surrounding. It seems completely insignificant and like there is little reason for it to even exist, though you do see Swastika's hanging from the mayors home and you are not sure if he is actually aligned with them or if a German officer lives here or what. Suddenly, you feel a tug and the wind blows you west, you realize your landing zone is suddenly changed from the center of the square to the roof of a two story building and you let out a curse as you hit the side of the building.

You slide down the slanted roof, your speed picking up and you begin spinning. The tiles and shingles of the roof falling off with you and smashing and shattering against the ground. You realize you are shouting as you fall off the side, your body horribly tangled in the parachute and you are unable to move. You fly towards the ground until you are about seven feet, then suddenly stop. You briefly pray to every single deity you can think of and wonder why you are not dead yet when you realize your parachute must of snagged on the chimney. A smile widens on your face and you let out a sigh of relief. You stare at the ground and your helmet and rifle which had fallen off in your fall.

Then you drop a foot, your eyes widening as you hear the tearing noise of your parachute. You scream again when it is torn loose and you fall towards the ground, unable to protect your face due to the cap that is the cords you turn your head to the side to shield it. You smash against the ground, not making another move with all of the gear weighing you down and sit there for a minute. The cords have gone loose now that the parachute is torn in half and you slowly wiggle your way out of them.

Finally getting out, you attempt to grab your helm with your left arm and quickly gasp as you feel a jolt of pain. ''"It is dislocated"'' you think to yourself as you look around. You sigh and grab it with your right hand and drop it on your head. You then grab your rifle with your right as well and try your best to sling it on your shoulder. You look around the square, you probably do not have much time if there are any Germans inside of the manor, but you will need to do something about your arm. You do not have any medical supplies and all of the doors are shut with none of the lights besides one in the manor. You sigh, thinking of what to do.

'''Arm dislocated! -15 Health'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP"'''

*[[101: Knock Doors Town|Knock on a nearby door]]
*[[101: Knock Door Manor|Knock on the doors of the manor]]
*[[101: Call Help Town|Shout for some help]]
*[[101: Leave Town Drop|Leave the town]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=85|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Forest

Theotherguy — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:27:41 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing in the forest, though it is massive. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through some trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Oh ''shit'' your destination is tall pointy trees and tons of sharp branches. You try your best not to scream as you tear through the tree line, the wood scratching and ripping at your exposed skin and tearing apart your clothes. Slowly you come to a stop, hanging above the ground, your parachute caught in the branches.

Coming out of the daze, you take stock. You are cut everywhere and there is a horrible pain coming from your thigh, it must have taken a large cut in the fall. Your grenades are not where they should be and your pouch was torn open, some ammo spilling out. You are around fifteen feet in the air, your legs dangling freely below you.

'''Multiple cuts! -10 Health'''

'''Bad thigh wound! -10 Health'''

'''Bleeding! -5 Health"'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP"'''

'''Grenades lost in fall! -3 Grenades'''

'''Ammo lost in fall! -30 M1-A1 ammo'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:27:07 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you west, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=105|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Forest

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 05:26:50 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing in the forest, though it is massive. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through some trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Oh ''shit'' your destination is tall pointy trees and tons of sharp branches. You try your best not to scream as you tear through the tree line, the wood scratching and ripping at your exposed skin and tearing apart your clothes. Slowly you come to a stop, hanging above the ground, your parachute caught in the branches.

Coming out of the daze, you take stock. You are cut everywhere and there is a horrible pain coming from your thigh, it must have taken a large cut in the fall. Your grenades are not where they should be and your pouch was torn open, some ammo spilling out. You are around fifteen feet in the air, your legs dangling freely below you.

'''Multiple cuts! -10 Health"'''

'''Bad thigh wound! -10 Health"'''

'''Bleeding! -5 Health"'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP"'''

'''Grenades lost in fall! -3 Grenades'''

'''Ammo lost in fall! -30 M1-A1 ammo'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (70), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Forest

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 05:18:17 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town…'

You slowly descend towards the forest, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there. Finding yourself about to land in the forest, wedged between the lake and the town, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you and some are landing in the forest, though it is massive. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through some trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Oh ''shit'' your destination is tall pointy trees and tons of sharp branches. You try your best not to scream as you tear through the tree line, the wood scratching and ripping at your exposed skin and tearing apart your clothes. Slowly you come to a stop, hanging above the ground, your parachute caught in the branches.

Coming out of the daze, you take stock. You are cut everywhere and there is a horrible pain coming from your thigh, it must have taken a large cut in the fall. Your grenades are not where they should be and your pouch was torn open, some ammo spilling out. You are around fifteen feet in the air, your legs dangling freely below you.

'''Multiple cuts! -10 Health"'''

'''Bad thigh wound! -10 Health"'''

'''Bleeding! -5 Health"'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP"'''

'''Grenades lost in fall! -3 Grenades'''

'''Ammo lost in fall! -30 M1-A1 ammo'''

*[[101: Cut Cord Forest|Cut your cords and fall]]
*[[101: Take A Breath Forest|Take a breath]]
*[[101: Call For Help|Call for help]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=105|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 04:58:56 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you east, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=105|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 04:26:52 GMT

Theotherguy:

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you east, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Carbine M1-A1 bullets (85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101: Land Lake

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 04:16:38 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it,…'

You slowly descend towards the lake, praying some other paratroopers have tried to get there or at least have seen it. Finding yourself about to land on the grass surrounding it, just outside of a forest, you sigh and look around for anything to occupy your time. You check your gear, everything is perfectly fine. Your adrenaline is pumping from the sudden action in the plane and time is going slow, only a minute has passed. You look at the sky, you see plenty of paratroops above you but none are landing near the lake. Several planes are flying and two of them are on fire, yours is spinning out of control and you see it tear through from trees to your west until it finally comes to a stop, fire catching on some of the trees.

You realize the trees are coming close and look down, you are almost at your destination. Suddenly you feel something tugging at you and the wind pulls you east, towards the lake. You have no time to think about it, you are going into the lake! You submerge and find yourself unable to breath, quickly swiping in a vein attempt to break the surface under the water. You never learnt how to swim and suddenly wish as you attempt to get higher. Finally you find your head above water as you gasp for air before you are pulled back down. Your parachute!

You hastily try and find your knife as you are drowned by the cloth, finally grabbing the leather that is sticking out of its holster, you tear the knife from it. Time slows yet again as you find the cords on the parachute and saw them off. Finally the last and fourth one is gone and you try your best to mimic your brothers who both knew how to swim. Finding yourself making some progress and getting closer to air, you push with all your strength. Your head finally comes out of the prison and you breath as fast as you possibly can. You only landed a short way from the shore and you use all of your effort to simply stay afloat as you drift towards the small sand dune.

When you feel ground, you desperately drag your self up onto the lot, finding your whole entire body above water level, you fall onto your back. Staring at the planes and the AA guns firing at them. You try your best to breath slowly but you can not control your self as your lungs desperately fill themselves with precious oxygen.

Finally you are calm at the least, though you are tired from the event. You do a quick check of your gear and let out a sigh as you realize how much you lost. Your helmet is gone, as well as a grenade and your rifle. Your ammo is still with you of course. You also lost grip of your knife after you sawed away the cords.

You sigh, thinking of options.

'''Rifle lost in water! -1 Carbine M1-A1'''

'''Clip lost in water! -15 Rounds'''

'''Knife lost in water! -1 Trench Knife'''

'''Grenade lost in water! -1 Grenade'''

'''Helmet lost in water! -1 Helmet'''

'''Exhausted! -15 MP'''

*[[101: Bearings Lake|Get your bearings]]
*[[101: Call for help Lake|Call for anyone]]

{{Status|Equipment=''(85), Grenade (2), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=80|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 03:44:54 GMT

Theotherguy:

'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers was killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The green suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. Feeling like you are about to puke, you desperately grab the wire on your parachute and pull, the white sheet like parachute flying out of the pack and stopping your free fall with a painful yank. After recovering, you look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

'''Adrenaline is pumping! +20 MP!'''

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=120|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 03:43:04 GMT

Theotherguy:

'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers was killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The green suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. Feeling like you are about to puke, you desperately grab the wire on your parachute and pull, the white sheet like parachute flying out of the pack and stopping your free fall with a painful yank. After recovering, you look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=100|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 01:06:49 GMT

Theotherguy:

'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers was killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The green suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. You look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=100|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

Category:101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 01:04:33 GMT

Theotherguy: Created page with 'An index of the pages in the story ''101st''. Category:Mature stories'

An index of the pages in the story ''[[101st]]''.

[[Category:Mature stories]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 00:55:03 GMT

Theotherguy:

'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers were killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The light suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. You look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=100|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 00:50:42 GMT

Theotherguy:

'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers were killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The green suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. You look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=100|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

101st

Theotherguy — Sun, 29 Jan 2012 00:49:33 GMT

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'''Warning: Might contain strong language and minor sexual references, but WILL contain intense violence'''

Your name is Davis... Davis Trentavious Greene, everyone just calls you Green Bean, why they do you do not know. When you were nineteen, you were playing baseball with some friends of yours when all of a sudden a man named Joseph, a local store owner came sprinting over. You wondered what was wrong when he started shouting about something on the radio and something somewhere being attacked, you could hardly understand a thing he said he was talking so fast. This was the first you heard of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

A while later, you were sitting at home, comforting your crying mother after your family were told your two brothers was killed in the attack. You wanted to cry but you tried your best to stay strong for her, you hardly talked since then.

Less than a week later, you were at the recruiting station despite your parents anger at you for considering to join. They had killed your brother, the Japanese, you wanted revenge, something to fill the void you felt since they died at the least, you stood in a line for six hours as they processed all the young men with similar stories. You were the only one there who wanted to go with the brand new and by everyone at the stations standards, insane, division. Airborne.

Now you are twenty three, sitting in some old rickety cargo plane; decked out in as much gear as the US Army could afford to weigh you down in. You had gone through Currahee, living hell for the army recruit. You had constantly considered dropping out of the training but after the torture, you made it out as a member of the 101st airborne division. Despite the hell you went through with the other soldiers, you barely said anything to them when you had the chance. You considered them your friends at least, did not mean you had to interact with them when it was not business. Your thoughts took up enough time.

You are in third team, a fireteam consisting of you, private Greene, private Dillicks, private Omerra and led by corporal Nimmin. Your fireteam is one of three in second squad, though there are too many soldiers who will have little interaction with you in a combat situation for you to have memorized. Dillicks must be your closest friend in the 101st if that is much. You occasionally talk to him about life, but that is about where it ends.

That was the past, this is the present.

You sit there, idly reading a book your mother has sent you from home, just your standard 'hardly got published fifty cent war story' that she found while looking around a book store. Still, it keeps your time and it is better than nothing. The only thing you know is this is the big surge into Europe. You will dive out of a plane hundreds of feet in the air at night and then regroup and destroy bunkers and AA guns to aid in the Normandy invasion. Simple enough.

Omerra tries to break the obvious tension in the room.

"Hey guys! I got a good one!"

"Not another one god fucking damn it." Shouts Nimmin over the engines, everyone was sick of his jokes and Nimmin was not a very happy guy to start.

"No no! This is a good one!"

"Just let the kid talk!" Shouts a guy in the back, an older man of at least forty, sergeant Deblen, your squad leader.

"Alright, so, two guys walk into a bar full of Krau-" begins Omerra, he is suddenly cut off at the sound of AA fire. He begins to continue but then tons of holes tear through his side of the plane. Several men slump over, covered in bullets, including Omerra. The plane begins to sag and sway from side to side as it loses control, the force of it suddenly tilting causes the book to fly from your hand, a bullet flies through the flying piece of text and barely avoids your shoulder as you duck down and try to cover your head. Through your forearms you see Omerra and three other soldiers slumped over in their seats. One other is hunched over, a man trying to comfort him as he screams in pain. The man next to you, some one called Helix, is dead with a star shaped hole in his right eye. Everyone is screaming out different things until Lieutenant Hanes tells everyone to shut up and stand up.

You all stand and check each others packs, the light flashes red and casts an ominous glow on the entire plane. The planes tilts even further and slowly you can see the ground taking up more of the view from the open door way.

The green suddenly flashes green after you all scream clear, the first man jumps out, then the second, then the third. You are the sixth and stand at the door way, everything going in a blur. You brace yourself and prepare to jump as the lieutenant screams for you to go. You want to but your legs refuse to budge, you have never been this high in your life and you are staring straight at hell. You hear more people screaming and look behind you, everyone is yelling at you to go.

Suddenly the engine of the plane explodes, a fire engulfs the back as everyone presses away from it. The planes slow tilt begins to quicken, the lieutenant is screaming in your ear and everyone is being trapped between you and the fire. You realize thirty seconds have passed, thirty seconds too long and hate your self as your legs finally loosen and you dive out of the plane.

You fall, spinning as your view quickly switches between the ground and the burning plane, contrasted on the dark blue sky. You look at land marks that show you a landing sight but see nothing but ground and other parachutes. Finally you make out three distinct features.

*[[101: Land Lake|A lake]]
*[[101: Land Forest|A forest]]
*[[101: Land Houses|A few houses]]

{{Status|Equipment=''Parachute, Carbine M1-A1 (100), Grenade (3), Trench Knife, Helmet.''|Health=100|MP=100|Level=0}}

[[Category: 101st]]

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Theotherguy — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 22:53:21 GMT

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==Family-Friendly Stories==
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Suitable for anyone with Basic Reading Level skills. Please keep these G-PG. Please remove any other content that exceeds this.
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|[[Abigail's Tale]]||(28 pages, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Afraid of the Dark]] (horror) || (44 pages) (Under construction last update 10/27/09 story now coherent)
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|[[ An Adventure...]]|| (56+ pages)
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|[[Another Story Of Another Random Person]]||(93+ pages)
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|[[Areas 45-51]]|| (Do not edit)
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|[[BauBaus!]] (for critter lovers and trainers alike!)|| (20+ pages,under construction)
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|[[Bored]]|| (WIP)
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|[[ Bus Troubles]]|| (23 pages)
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|[[ Calloway Adventure]]|| (17 pages)
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|[[Carnival]]||(20+ pages)
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|[[Chocolate Man]]|| (W.I.P)
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|[[Choose Your Own Adventure Adventure]]|| (Don't go loco and keep the pages long.) [[Special:Longpages]]
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|[[Christmas Time]]|| (21 pages) please don't edit.
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|[[The Crimes which FAIL]]|| Public, but no non-crime options except for [[Kill yourself]]
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|[[ DUDE WHERES MY CAR]]|| (14 pages)
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|[[Example uh]]|| (WIP)
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|[[ the get away]]|| (13 pages)
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|[[A Giant Chocolate Chip Cookie]] || (45+ pages)
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|[[ The Golden Banana]]|| (17 pages)
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|[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] || (75+ pages)
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|[[Greek Heroes]] || [WIP] You play the roll of an aspiring Greek hero. Please do not edit.
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|[[Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows]]|| (finished for me, expand the pages, Most are vague.)
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|[[Harry Potter]] And the Adventure Chosen by You||(200+ pages)
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|[[horror on the subway]]||(w.i.p please don't edit)
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|[[Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[ HUNGER]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT ENGLISH PROJECT)
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|[[Jake vs the Mayor of Dragon Valley]]|| (17 pages)
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|[[Kalew]] || (65+ pages)
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|[[The Kitty in the Window]] (Now with PG, hard to find LOTR expansion!)|| (450+ pages)
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|[[Limerick]]|| (Open to public. Use only Limericks)
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|[[Madman's Mansion]]|| (50+ pages; open to public, work on it)
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|[[Mario and Luigi: Superstar Saga]] || (30+ pages)
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|[[ Mayday]]|| (13 pages)
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|[[Mockery]]|| (Do not Edit Unless asked to)
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|[[ My Crazy Ranch]]|| (18+ pages)
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|[[ Newspaper Delivery]]|| (23 pages)
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|[[Penguins (The Frozen Adventure)]] || (10+ pages)
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|[[Penguins (just click "Three times a day")]] || (~59 pages) Edit well.
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|[[Portal 3: Wheatley Returns]] Under Construction
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|[[Percy Jackson]]: The adventures of a demigod || (35+ pages)
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|[[Point Of View]] || (Pick up a dead story or just throw it in the pit.
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|[[Princess Carkegee]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[ A Random Day ]]|| (45 pages)
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|[[Revisiting the Sneetches]]|| (WIP Feel Free to Edit)
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|[[ School's only 4 some people!]]|| (W.I.P)
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|[[Secretpage|The secrets of SECRETPAGE]] || (25+ pages)
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|[[sewer wars]]||(11 pages)
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|[[Short and Funny.]]||(11 pages)
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|[[ Snowboarding at the slope]]|| (19 pages)
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|[[Spacewars with GDS ]]|| (20 pages)
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|[[ Stealing Marathon]]|| (20+ pages)
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|[[The Time Machine]]||(15+ page)
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|[[Time Vortex]]|| (20+ pages)
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|[[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]|| (W.I.P PLEASE DO NOT EDIT! As soon as there is enough content, please review!)
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|[[Tutorial]]||(Begun 10/28/09. If you have any wisdom to impart, please add to the story.)
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|[[Unicorn Tamer]]||(5+ pages)
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|[[Visiting the Zoo]] || (130+ pages)
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|[[White Rooms]]|| (WIP, no edits please)
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|[[You Gotta Read This]]||(12 pages)
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|}

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|[[A basic, normal, Choose-Your-Own-Adventure]] Or '''Piano Lessons'''|| (17+ pages)
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|[[Adventure in the City]]|| (Sigh. You may edit, but please do not go crazy. AND KEEP IT G!)
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|[[2012]]||(12 pages violent disaster sequences.)
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|[[ Adventures in Space ]]|| (40+ pages, edit respectfully)
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|[[ Adventures in the Kingdom]]|| (WIP Please do not edit.)
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|[[Adventure RPG 1]]|| (WIP- free to edit) (Chapter One)
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|[[Adventure RPG 2]]|| (Same as before)
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|[[Aliens in the future]] (NEW)
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|[[The Amazing Adventure]] || (40+ pages DO NOT EDIT!!!)
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|[[An Adventurous and Magical Tale]] || (WIP Expanded almost daily! Public but write only on blank pages. DO NOT DELETE ANYTHING PLEASE. )
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|[[ Anna and the Aliens]]|| (WIP)
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|[[ Apocalyptic zombie attack]]|| ( 27 pages) (Public story please edit)
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|[[At the Mall with Weevil]] || (15+ pages; [[User:Charlotte5|Charlotte5]] currently editing; WIP)
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|[[Atom Kid|Atom Kid (a super hero adventure)]] || (30+ pages)
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|[[Avast!]] A Pirate Story || (160+ pages, WIP, contact me before editing)
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|[[Average Guy]] || (20+ pages)
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|[[The Battle of the Best]] || (24+ pages)
|-
|[[ Becoming friends with a Wild horse]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)]] || (90+ pages)
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|[[The Boss]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Cell]] || (How will you define life?)
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|[[Character Creation]]|| (50+)
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|[[ Classic Roguelike]]|| (WIP, Please do not edit!)
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|[[ Class Dissmissed]]|| (WIP)
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|[[The Clown]] || (50+ pages)
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|[[To Court!]] || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
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|[[Crazy Fantasy Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
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||[[Cross the Street]] || (11 pages made by ailenbear123)
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|[[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)]] || (337 pages)
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|[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] || (375+ pages; [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] currently editing)
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|[[Cyberspace Invaders]]||(11 pages)
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|[[DARKNESS]]|| (100+ pages)
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|[[A Day as a Hobo]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[A Day in the Life (An action adventure story)]] || (45 pages)
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|[[Day In the Life of a Total Loser]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[Day of Doom]]||(10+ pages Do not edit please By Allbis.)
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|[[Dead Kid]] || (100+ pages)
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|[[Death by zombies]] || (40+ pages)
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|[[No more underwear]] || (free to edit)
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|[[Digimon Adventure 03]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[Digimon Transverse]] || (40+ pages, open to public; fixed a lot of in-game bugs, making editing the options less of a pain now)
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|[[Dirt biking in the trails]]|| (WIP)
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|[[Dragon Ball Adventure]] || (About 24+ pages, only edit unmade pages please, add on if you'd like though.)
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|[[Dragonball Z Adventure]] || (DO NOT EDIT +0)
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|[[Dr. Dero's Journey]] || (10+ pages, 100% open to pub.)
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|[[Dragon Quest]] || (under construction)
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|[[ Dragon's Life]]|| (Under Construction)
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|[[Dungeon]] (A CLASSIC DUNGEON CRAWL!)||(20+ pages)
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|[[Easily Random]]||(20+ pages)
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|[[ Endless Possibility]]|| (Under construction - feel free to edit)
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|[[Escape]]||(10+ pages)
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|[[ Escaping Beelzebub]]|| (W.I.P)
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|[[Element]] || (W.I.P Free to Editing)
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|[[Elephant Quest]]|| (W.I.P. Do not edit!)
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|[[An Epic Adventure]] || (50+ pages) NO EDITING PLEASE. Feel free to play!
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|[[Evolution|Evolution (an adventure of insignificance)]] || (25+ pages)
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|[[Evolution II]] || (20 pages)
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|[[Fantasy Quest]] || (110+ pages)
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|[[Freedom]] || (an experiment of free will)
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|[[To the Future]] || (Under construction, no editing please)
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|[[ the first hunt ]]|| (WIP)
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|[[food chain train ]]|| (Wip)
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|[[ The Furr Adventure ]]|| (0+ pages)
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|[[Genesis]] || (WIP, Side project, Under Construction)
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|[[Gloria]]|| (WIP)
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|[[Grasstealth]]|| (WIP 5+ pages Paired with [[Grasstealth Items]])
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|[[ Greek Myth ]]|| (WIP please edit)
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|[[Haunted Elementary]]||(20+ pages, WIP, please don't edit)
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|[[Haunted Mountain]]||New, please don't edit
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|[[High School 2]]|| (3+ pages. Feel free to edit.)
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|[[HoboPalooza]]||(WIP Please do not edit)
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|[[Hobo Sapiens]]||(32+ Pages, then proceed to life as a rat)
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|[[Humanity]]||( General Winthrop has decided to make this unfinished story free for the masses to edit. Just stick to the main idea, and keep it serious...)
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|[[Hunting again for Red October]] || (100+ pages)
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|[[ Imara's life in the naruto world ]]|| (Yeah, just go ahead and edit, but stick to the storyline)
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|[[Infection]] || (DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Is Hunger Your Game?]] || (50+ pages) DO NOT EDIT
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|[[It's Choose Your Own Adventure Time!]] || 51 Pages (partially finished)
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|[[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]] || (30+ pages)
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|[[ Jimmy's Big Adventure]]|| (Under Construction)
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|[[Kidnapped!]]|| (26 pages, please don't edit)
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|[[THE KINGDOM OF ADVENTURE!]] || (25+ pages)
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|[[The Kitty Thief]]|| (WIP)
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|[[Life of a rat]]|| (20+ pages, now you may edit, but first pass the hobo adventure)
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|[[The End Of Life As We Know It]]|| (0+ pages) (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[The Life of a School Kid]]|| (30+ pages '''Updating Again!''')
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|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
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|[[ Little Miss Disaster]]|| (19+ pages)
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|[[Lina Popintop's Adventure]]|| (Work In Progress PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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||[[Livin' like a hobo]]|| (Do not edit)
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|[[LoA's Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
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|[[Love and fireballs]] || (s'like...it's not done yet, don't edit,k?)
|-
|[[A love story]] (NEW) (Free for all)
|-
|[[Magic Keyboard]]|| (New, under construction, and kinda stupid)
|-
|[[ Mall Bunny]]|| (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The many rooms]] || (200+ pages)
|-
|[[Mario's many adventures]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Married Life]] || (10 pages currently, New, Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Memory Makers]]|| (A Science Fiction game about a young man who can't remember his past. WIP--Please DO NOT Edit!)
|-
|[[Minotaur's Laberynth]] || (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The Mirror]] || (Edit all you want. Just keep in the storyline, please! Currently around 20 pages)
|-
|[[Morrowind|Morrowind (An exciting action adventure)]] || (25+pages)
|-
|[[My WWE]] || (Brand new, feel free to add on.)
|-
|[[The Mystical quest for Technochocolate]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[Nancy's Notable Narratives]] || (39+ pages--WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[A Normal Life]]
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Girl Version)]] (Romance) || (Pages are 12 so far, but it's a WIP, so do not edit)
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Guy Version)]] (Romance) || (WIP... just started, don't edit!)
|-

[[New kid]] ( under construction. Don't edit.)

|[[Night]]|| (Do not edit/WIP)
|-
|[[Nightcaps]] || (10+ Pages)
|-
|[[Nintendo Quest]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[The Night That Will Never Be Forgotten (A Titanic CYOA)]] || (W.I.P, please don't edit without permission)
|-
|[[Niro]]|| (Just Started, please don't edit quite yet)
|-
|[[Of Tumbleweeds And Teenagers]] || (UNDER CONSTRUCTION)
|-
|[[o.c.d. story]] || (? pages, w.i.p. please don't edit)
|-
|[[Organisation]] || (30+ pages WIP-DO NOT EDIT!!!!!)
|-
|[[Organism]] || (10+ pages, WIP, please DO NOT EDIT, Thank you.)
|-
|[[ Pac Man VS E.C.]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[A Penguin Named Evan]] || (15+ Pages)
|-
|[[Phoenix Wright: A new adventure]] || (25+ Pages W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT!)
|-
|[[Pirates! A High Seas Adventure]]|| (50+ Pages)
|-
|[[Pirates of the Caribbean (action-adventure)]] ||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Planet of the Apes]]|| (15+ pages) (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Platypus]]|| (8 pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Poke]]||(3 pages)
|-
|[[Pokemon Ranger: Lavender Nightmare]]|| (Just started, feel free to add)
|-
|[[Pokemon Legends]]|| (W.I.P. Don't edit)
|-
|[[Pokemon - Your Adventure]] ||(45+ pages)
|-
|[[Portal]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Puppy Love]]|| (Don't edit)
|-
|[[Quest of the magician]] || (200+ pages)
|-
|[[Questscape]] || (W.I.P., Do not edit)
|-
|[[Ralos]] ||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[Random]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions]] || (66 pages-Completed)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions 2: More Random]] || (WIP, Feel Free to Edit)
|-
|[[A Random Day]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Rebirth]]|| (New Story)
|-
|[[Red Mercenary]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[ Revolt (A United States Futuristic Revolution Story)]]|| (5+ pages PLEASE DO NOT EDIT UNTIL I SAY SO)
|-
|[[Rick Roll'd Adventure]] || (Completed)
|-
|[[Rodeo Girl]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roleplay]] || (Under Construction...)
|-
|[[ The Roller coaster]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roman Demigod]]|| (WIP PLEASE EDIT FREELY)
|-
|[[Russian Blue]]|| (0+ pages, under construction by projectM1K3, no other editors atm)
|-
|[[Sabatoge (a Star Trek: TNG adventure)]] || (About 10 pages)
|-
|[[Save YouTube Poop!!! ]](Definitely rated PG-13 || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Second Life]]|| (5+ Pages, please edit!)
|-
|[[The_secret_island_of_Utobi|The Secret Island of Utobi]] || (38 pages)
|-
|[[sewer wars]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Shadows of the Past]]||(5+ pages)
|-
|[[ Show off]]|| (wip)
|-
|[[ Silent hill]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Sixty Minutes]]|| (0 Pages)
|-
|[[ Soul Savor]]|| (W.I.P. New)
|-
|[[Spork| Spork: An RPG]] || (100+ pages and third town in progress, please don't edit, put any suggestions in Spork discussion)
|-
|[[Star trek]] (Another adventure) || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Trek: The Original Series]] || (WIP, If you've seen the 60's show, you can go ahead and edit.)
|-
|[[Star Wars: A New Adventure]] || (17 pages, a work in progress but I would like people to help as long as they stick to the story)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Jedi Chronicles ]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Combat Training ]] || (feel free to edit, but stay on the story line)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Republic]] || (26 pages)
|-
|[[Story Of My Life]] || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Subject 413]] || (100+ pages, w.i.p, NOW OPEN TO ADDITIONS)
|-
|[[Superhero]] || (25+ pages Its public, so you can add on as well)
|-
|[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]] || (150 + pages)
|-
|[[Superwhodunnit]]|| (0+ pages, please don't edit, at least for now)
|-
|[[Survey]] || (DO NOT EDIT!!!!)
|-
|[[Survival of the Colossi]] || (10+ pages, only edit UNWRITTEN (redlinked) pages)
|-
|[[ Surviving a Hetalia Dream]]|| (New story. Touch and die.)
|-
|[[Surviving Today]] || (20 Pages, its not alot since its only one day)(Finished!)
|-
|[[Survivng Today: The Traffic Jam|Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] || (35+ Pages! Not a sequel)(Finished!)
|-
|[[A Tasty Breakfast]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Technomancer]]|| (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[Teddy and Ryan's Adventure]]|| (3+ pages, WORK IN PROGRESS DO NOT TOUCH thank you :-])
|-
|[[Teehee!]] || (60+ Pages!) (Public) (4 Stories in 1)
|-
|[[Temporal]]|| (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[The Danger Theory]]|| (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
|-
|[[Time Chase]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Transylvanian terror]]||(150+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Tribute|Tribute: The Greatest and Best Quest in the World]] || (14+ pages)
|-
|[[The Trigger And The Hilt]] (a free-roaming action game) || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[To Kill a Salesman]] Do not edit WIP
|-
||[[True Dungeon]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT W.I.P)
|-
|[[ Try Not To Die ]]|| (45 Pages- COMPLETED; please don't edit)
|-
|[[ Trying to Wake Up]]|| (25+ pages so far. WIP)
|-
|[[The Ultimate Battle]] ||(65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Unknown...]]|| (Under Construct, Do whatever you wish but keep it serious and literate!)
|-
|[[Vaped!]]||(Sci-fi, just started.)
|-
|[[ The Walk]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[War of Nations]]|| (65+ pages)
|-
|[[War zone]]|| (20+ pages)(W.i.p)(PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Warphole]]|| (5+ pages, Go [[User:CLOU!7|here]] for what I need you to know before you edit)
|-
|[[The Warp]]|| (Only Grammar and Spelling Edits Please)
|-
|[[What have they done?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[What Happens In The Forest]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Windy Lea Stories]]|| (WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[WW2]] || (6+ pages, please don't edit unless asked to. Original writers seem to have abanoned this.)
|-
|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[XMachetter, the dark figure, and the Jewel]]
|-
|[[You're never getting out]]|| {Edit to make it as long as possible}
|-
|[[Your Life]] || (Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
|-
|[[ Your Story]]|| (, Don't Edit, Por favor, 0+ pages)
|-
|[[Z-Day]] || (Under Construction, by skullphantom)
|-
|[[ZX1]] || (54+ pages. PUBLIC!)
|-
|[[ Pick Pocket]]|| (WIP Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Insert Title]]|| (Under Construction, Don't Touch)
|-
{|

==Quizzes and Challenges==
'''Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):'''

|-
|[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Quiz Show]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[A Quizzy Show]]||(10 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || (25 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[The Rock Paper Scissors game]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Trivia Time]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz 2]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Ultimate MMA quiz game!]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Game Trivia I]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Games]]|| (Finished, pretty lame, but it's my first.)
|-
|}

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{|
|Story||
Status
|-
|[[1943]]|| Open
|-
|[[101st]]|| (Open!)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||(Public)
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|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]|| (don't edit!)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||(25 pages)(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||(70 pages)(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| (101+ pages)
|-
|[[Awake]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Badassery]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || (10+ pages, open for editing)
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || (200+ pages) Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || (1+ pages)(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| (25+ pages, W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || (Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]] (WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[City Life]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||(22+ pages)
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| (10+ pages) Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| (34+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||(24+ pages)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| (Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| (Under construction)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| (Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| (New! 35 pages)
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || (Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || (Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||(175+ pages)
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||(20 pages)
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || (New story, under construction)
|-
|[[ Harry Potter Fanfiction Adventure]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| (Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| (0+ pages) (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| (25+ Pages, Public)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| (5 pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[In The Army]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| (the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| (JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| (Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Life]] (Just the way you wanted it) Remake!
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]|| (3+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || (Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||(175+ pages)(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| (JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| (0+ pages-just began)
|-
|[[A New Life]]||(40+ pages Public)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || (Just Started, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| (don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || (just started)
|-
|[[Oddworld: Abe's Revolution]] || (W.I.P Please don't edit.)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || (I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || (Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]] ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| (No editing please)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||(30+ pages Open to Public)
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||(5+ Pages, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||(333+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Random III]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Remember]] || (Do Not Edit Without Permission) (60+ Pages)('''<--Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| (36 pages) (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| (300+ pages under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || (53 pages. Do NOT edit!.)
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || (W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||(10+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[School Life]]|| (WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| (W.I.P. 10+ pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Serial X]]|| (25+ pages. Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.]]|| (7/15/10 12+ pages ((Do not edit)))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||(250+ pages)(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Smile]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| (38+ pages, WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.)
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || (Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| (0+ pages,public but keep it serious)
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || (First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||(3+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||(90+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || (30+ pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || (0+ pages WIP)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||(40+ pages, started 6/24/09)
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|[[The Wasteland]]||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[ To be named later ]]|| (IDK pages)*Bentenmike*
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| (WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| (+20 Pages, in progress)
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || (150+ pages, in progress)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[World Undone]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || (Unknown+ pages If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || (12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombies]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| (35+ pages wip)
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||(50+ Pages,Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies: This is getting really old.]] || (Go ahead and edit. it's one more zombie story.)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||(10+ Pages,please don't edit!)
|}

==Adult Stories==
[[Adult Stories|Click here]] to enter the adult section. Do not enter if you are underage or if you are offended by adult material.

==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

==Creating a Story==
If you have an idea for a story, you might like to try [[Idea Pitches|pitching your idea to other users]] and seeing how interested people might be in playing your story, what you could do to make playing your story fun, and who might be interested in collaborating with you to write it. Once you have done that, you can create it by entering your desired name for the Story into the search box and clicking '''Go'''. If the name has not already been taken, click this exact title to start the story. There are three general types of story. The first is the branching-plot story (an example of this is the Choose Your Own Adventure series of gamebooks), which require the reader to make choices but are otherwise like a regular novel. The second type is the role-playing game adventure, which combines the branching-plot novel with simple role-playing rules such as attack points and monster battles. The third type is the trivia quiz, where the player must answer questions as if they were on a game show.

==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
</nowiki>
</pre>

The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

Every page should have the category at the bottom. This keeps track of all the pages in the story. You can copy the category line from the previous page to the one you're working on. The category, obviously, is ''never'' 'name of story you're working on'. You type in the actual name of the story.

For additional help in wiki syntax, click [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing here]

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear red on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

To avoid accidentally crossing with other users' stories, it may be best to create pages with more than just an option name, like [[Unicorns]] or [[Open your eyes]]. Instead, when you create a new page, call it [[You have to slay The Dragon/_Page 1]] or [[YOUR CRAZY/Give up]]. You can have the link name be whatever you want though, like this:
<nowiki>[[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]]</nowiki> will appear as [[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]] on the page.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki> </nowiki>. Example:
*<nowiki>This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.</nowiki> will show as:
This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
*Add a basic, or main, timeline of background events during the period that the character is making choices in - those events are usually out of the character's control. This will help add consistency.
*Pages with major spelling, grammar or other problems, but not problems that render the page spam and a candidate for deletion, should be categorized in the Pages Requiring Attention Category to get other editors to help fix it up. If a page is not yet complete, add it to Category:Pages Under Construction so people know the editor is still working on it and it does not need to have someone improve it.
*Story Endings should be categorized with Category:Endings.

==Meta-Games==
*[[CYOA Drinking Game]] (Teen/Adult, though you can play with soda if you're under the minimum age for drinking alcohol.)
*[[You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When|You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When...]]

[[Category: System Pages]]

-Carly grabs your dick, making it hard

Theotherguy — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 20:13:23 GMT

Theotherguy:

Carly quickly undoes the button and zipper on your pants, smiling. She slowly grabs your dick and carefully runs her hand up and down, you lean back and moan. She smiles at this and begins to jack your cock faster and faster. She carefully licks the tip of it while she jacks off anything she can not cover, getting her mouth off briefly, she looks up at you with big eyes.

"Do you like it?"

She quickly begins licking it all over again.

[[-say yes ]]

[[-say no and run ]]

[[-stare at Carly]]

[[Category:Icarly: Iwant sex]]

-Carly grabs your dick, making it hard

Theotherguy — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 20:10:55 GMT

Theotherguy:

carly opens your pants button and starts rubing you dick she ask duse it feel good ?

[[-say yes ]]

[[-say no and run ]]

[[-stare at Carly]]

[[Category:Icarly: Iwant sex]]

Icarly: Iwant sex

Theotherguy — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 20:06:09 GMT

Theotherguy:

Your name is Freddie Benson, you and your best friends; Carly and Sam have been nothing but friends for a long time. Recently you had kissed Sam in the heat of the moment yet nothing had ever changed after that. You want it to though, you want Sam and Carly, or even better; a threesome. Can you make your dreams reality?

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It's 5:00 on Friday. Icarly will be in an hour. What do you want to do?

[[-Visit Carly]]

[[-Visit Sam]]

[[-Masturbate]]

[[-Call Carly]]

[[-Call Sam]]

[[-Call them both at the same time]]

[[-Rape your mother]]

[[-Get ready for Icarly]]

[[-Watch some cartoons]]

[[-Sam calls you]]

[[-Sneak in Carly's house]]

[[-Go to the groovy smoothie]]

[[-Go to the Cheesecake Warehouse]]

[[-Go over to the Shays' and try to have a threesome with Carly and Spencer]]

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