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			<title>BloodsportNaomiSAskDoor</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportNaomiSAskDoor</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You suddenly feel worried the door might not be enough. ''Whoever killed Miss Anderson has to be crazy. Is a door going to stop them?''  You hesitantly speak up. &amp;quot;Um...Monique,&amp;quot; …'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You suddenly feel worried the door might not be enough. ''Whoever killed Miss Anderson has to be crazy. Is a door going to stop them?''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You hesitantly speak up. &amp;quot;Um...Monique,&amp;quot; The older student is startled out of her thoughts.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She appears suspicious of you, but the moment passes quickly when she recognizes you. &amp;quot;Go on.&amp;quot; She commands.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Is the door really going to keep them out?&amp;quot; you finish.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She nods once. &amp;quot;This door will keep out a rhinoceros. I promise. &amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Monique offers you a small smile, then turns to the group of students who came with her. &amp;quot;And it's going to keep us inside, too. I don't want any of us opening that door, alright? Not while some killer is out there.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSObey|Agree and obey]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSAsk|Ask about the people outside]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiS|Try to leave]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=Room 502|Character=Naomi S|Health=Calmer|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jun 2012 23:44:08 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportNaomiSAskDoor</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You don't know what to do or say. Its not like you've ever prepared for your teacher getting murdered. So you let Monique be the first to speak.&lt;br /&gt;
She turns around so quickly it makes you dizzy. The older, yet oddly shorter student scans the class, and her gaze rests on you. Surprise and relief registers in her brown eyes.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Naomi? I thought you were in the restroom...?&amp;quot; she begins. Then she waves the thought away. &amp;quot;Nevermind.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She motions you forward and you follow. The dozen or so of you gather in the middle of the classroom, where the desks have been pushed aside. Monique is in the center, all eyes on the senior and only adult. She sits all of you down before speaking, then stares each of you down in turn.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Everybody, I'm glad you're in here. I don't believe any of you are murderers, but someone killed Miss Anderson and they're out there.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She stays quiet for a moment as the others whisper to themselves. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In an tone that left no room for argument, she says, &amp;quot;So, we are staying in here until the law catches them. No heroics, no leaving, and no letting anyone in who isn't a police officer, alright?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSObey|Agree and obey]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSAsk|Ask about the people outside]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiS|Try to leave]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=Room 502|Character=Naomi S|Health=Calmer|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 02:10:10 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You don't know what to do or say. Its not like you've ever prepared for your teacher getting murdered. So you let Monique be the first to speak. She turns around so quickly it ma…'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You don't know what to do or say. Its not like you've ever prepared for your teacher getting murdered. So you let Monique be the first to speak.&lt;br /&gt;
She turns around so quickly it makes you dizzy. The older, yet oddly shorter student scans the class, and her gaze rests on you. Surprise and relief registers in her brown eyes.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Naomi? I thought you were in the restroom...?&amp;quot; she begins. Then she waves the thought away. &amp;quot;Nevermind.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She motions you forward and you follow. The dozen or so of you gather in the middle of the classroom, where the desks have been pushed aside. Monique is in the center, all eyes on the senior and only adult. She sits all of you down before speaking, then stares each of you down in turn.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Everybody, I'm glad you're in here. I don't believe any of you are murderers, but someone killed Miss Anderson and they're out there.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She stays quiet for a moment as the others whisper to themselves. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In an tone that left no room for argument, she says, &amp;quot;So, we are staying in here until the law catches them. No heroics, no leaving, and no letting anyone in who isn't a police officer, alright?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSObey|Agree and obey]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSAsk|Ask about the people outside]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiS|Try to leave]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 02:07:56 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportNaomiSQuiet</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Little happens over the next couple of days. The two other males in your trench never offer their names to you, so you know them simply as Shorty and Mole.  There was a third boy, but he left the trench. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shells zip over your head at all hours of day or night. Between the sleep deprived haze and hunger, you're almost tempted to jump out there.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The body of the girl begins to decompose. The stench is horrible, beyond anything you've experienced It bloats and the flesh has darkened. A gruesome reminder of your bad judgement.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Every once in a while, you peek over your trench and fire at the machine guns, hoping to disable one. Unlike the real things, these turrets never seem to run out of ammo. Nor do they ever jam. But sooner or later, you'll need food and water.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shorty, the weird boy who was lucky enough to be carrying binoculars, was scouting ahead. Mole, sporting a goofy grin, waves you over toward them.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;We found an opening!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
An opening on the surface, meaning the possibility of food or water. Maybe taking or destroying a machine gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSRaid|Try to raid another trench]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSStay|Stay here]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 01:58:39 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Little happens over the next couple of days. The two other males in your trench never offer their names to you, so you know them simply as Shorty and Mole.  There was a third boy, but he left the trench. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shells zip over your head at all hours of day or night. Between the sleep deprived haze and hunger, you're almost tempted to jump out there.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The body of the girl begins to decompose. The stench is horrible, beyond anything you've experienced It bloats and the flesh has darkened. A gruesome reminder of your bad judgement.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Every once in a while, you peek over your trench and fire at the machine guns, hoping to disable one. Unlike the real things, these turrets never seem to run out of ammo or jam. But sooner or later, you'll need food and water.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shorty, the weird boy who was lucky enough to be carrying binoculars, was scouting ahead. Mole, sporting a goofy grin, waves you over toward them.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;We found an opening!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
An opening on the surface, meaning the possibility of food or water. Maybe taking or destroying a machine gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSRaid|Try to raid another trench]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSStay|Stay here]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 01:55:14 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Little happens over the next couple of days. The two other males in your trench never offer their names to you, so you know them simply as Shorty and Mole.  There was a third boy, but he left the trench. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shells zip over your head at all hours of day or night. Between the sleep deprived haze and hunger, you're almost tempted to jump out there.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The body of the girl begins to decompose. The stench is horrible, beyond anything you've experienced It bloats and the flesh has darkened. A gruesome reminder of your bad judgement.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Every once in a while, you peek over your trench and fire at the machine guns, hoping to disable one. Unlike the real things, these turrets never seem to run out of ammo or jam. But sooner or later, you'll need food and water.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shorty, the weird boy who was lucky enough to be carrying binoculars, was scouting ahead. Mole, sporting a goofy grin, waves you over toward them.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;We found an opening!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
An opening on the surface, meaning the possibility of food or water. Maybe taking or destroying a machine gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSRaid|Try to raid another trench]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSStay|Stay here]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 01:53:38 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Little happens over the next couple of days. The two other males in your trench never offer their names to you, so you know them simply as Shorty and Mole.  There was a third boy…'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Little happens over the next couple of days. The two other males in your trench never offer their names to you, so you know them simply as Shorty and Mole.  There was a third boy, but he left the trench. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shells zip over your head at all hours of day or night. Between the sleep deprived haze and hunger, you're almost tempted to jump out there.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The body of the girl begins to decompose. The stench is horrible, beyond anything you've experienced It bloats and the flesh has darkened.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Every once in a while, you peek over your trench and fire at the machine guns, hoping to disable one. Unlike the real things, these turrets never seem to run out of ammo or jam. But sooner or later, you'll need food and water.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shorty, the weird boy who was lucky enough to be carrying binoculars, was scouting ahead. Mole, sporting a goofy grin, waves you over toward them.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;We found an opening!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
An opening on the surface, meaning the possibility of food or water. Maybe taking or destroying a machine gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSRaid|Try to raid another trench]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSStay|Stay here]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 01:51:09 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSComfort</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSComfort</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'The gravity of what you've just done hits you in full force.  You immediately spring towards her. Her screaming is intensified by your presence. The injured girl weakly kicks at …'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;The gravity of what you've just done hits you in full force.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You immediately spring towards her. Her screaming is intensified by your presence. The injured girl weakly kicks at you with her good leg.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I'm sorry, I-shit, I was just trying to keep you from getting torn by a machine gun. I didn't think it through. I'm so sorry.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
More and more blood gushes out into the mud. She's covered in it now: blood, muddy earth and torn strips of cloth.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She doesn't speak throughout the entire ordeal, and you get the feeling her mind is already partway gone. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSEuth|End her suffering with a shot to the head]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSWaitOut|Wait for her to die]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2012 01:46:05 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSComfort</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You're not sure whose lunch you replaced, but you hope it was Miss Grey's. It would be hilarious,  because you're pretty sure she's never touched the stuff in her life.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Speaking of Miss Grey, the bottle blonde babe was demonstrating stretches for the class. Your eyes were glued to her body as it flexed and bent. As was the eyes of every straight male and lesbian. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Speaking of lesbians...''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric's sister, Erin, was whispering something while staring at Miss Grey. Probably one of her love spells. Erin was into both magic and her gym teacher, and she would often try to use one to get the other. The intense look of concentration in her grey eyes makes you wonder how your gym teacher hasn't noticed. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
To those who aren't aware of her obsessive side, she looks entirely harmless, being a tiny awkward brunette.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Miss Grey shouted for the class to switch exercises, causing your head to snap back toward her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She calls up a random boy and girl to help her demonstrate the next set. Both look apprehensive, but neither have a choice. You and the rest of the class laugh, making it worse and funnier. The teacher assists the girl first, pulling her arms high and legs outward.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The teacher smiles encouragingly, nodding. &amp;quot;Very good! You've got it.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The boy takes up the spot to Miss Grey's left, and all three begin.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Start!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You mimic the movements without thinking about it. You add a little flourish to your moves, trying to look smooth. As you concentrate,  your gaze falls away from the front.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''One, two. One, two. One, two.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You count the rest as well, twenty in all.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You breath deep as you finish. Your performance is flawless.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
As you turn your head forward again,  the lights dim and flicker. The class collectively gasps. The lights die out for several moment. The gym goes pitch black. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;What the...&amp;quot; You wave a hand infront of yourself, and you realize that it's 1 pm. ''I should be able to see just fine. A power outage can't block the sun from the windows.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Without realizing, you inhale deeply. The sharp intake of breath hurts your lungs. You cough and force the air out.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The light returns a moment later. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The first think you look for is Miss Grey. She's clearly nervous, but otherwise apparently fine.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She begins, &amp;quot;Okay, everyone, lets...&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The blonde woman's eyes start to bulge from their sockets, and she drops.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
For several terrifying seconds, you wonder if she was poisoned. You start to sweat. Against your better judgement, you blurt out, &amp;quot;Miss Grey! He said it was just pot, I swear-&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She disappears in a puff of smoke.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Huh. Well, that definitely can't be the brownies.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymPhone|Try to find a phone]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymSitBack|Let someone else handle it]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymErin|Confront Erin. She might be responsible]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Gym|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 02 Jun 2012 19:17:26 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You're not sure whose lunch you replaced, but you hope it was Miss Grey's. It would be hilarious,  because you're pretty sure she's never touched the stuff in her life.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Speaking of Miss Grey, the bottle blonde babe was demonstrating stretches for the class. Your eyes were glued to her body as it flexed and bent. As was the eyes of every straight male and lesbian. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Speaking of lesbians...''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric's sister, Erin, was whispering something while staring at Miss Grey. Probably one of her love spells. Erin was into both magic and her gym teacher, and she would often try to use one to get the other. The intense look of concentration in her grey eyes makes you wonder how your gym teacher hasn't noticed. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
To those who aren't aware of her obsessive side, she looks entirely harmless, being a tiny awkward girl with honey colored hair. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Miss Grey shouted for the class to switch exercises, causing your head to snap back toward her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She calls up a random boy and girl to help her demonstrate the next set. Both look apprehensive, but neither have a choice. You and the rest of the class laugh, making it worse and funnier. The teacher assists the girl first, pulling her arms high and legs outward.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The teacher smiles encouragingly, nodding. &amp;quot;Very good! You've got it.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The boy takes up the spot to Miss Grey's left, and all three begin.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Start!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You mimic the movements without thinking about it. You add a little flourish to your moves, trying to look smooth. As you concentrate,  your gaze falls away from the front.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''One, two. One, two. One, two.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You count the rest as well, twenty in all.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You breath deep as you finish. Your performance is flawless.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
As you turn your head forward again,  the lights dim and flicker. The class collectively gasps. The lights die out for several moment. The gym goes pitch black. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;What the...&amp;quot; You wave a hand infront of yourself, and you realize that it's 1 pm. ''I should be able to see just fine. A power outage can't block the sun from the windows.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Without realizing, you inhale deeply. The sharp intake of breath hurts your lungs. You cough and force the air out.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The light returns a moment later. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The first think you look for is Miss Grey. She's clearly nervous, but otherwise apparently fine.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She begins, &amp;quot;Okay, everyone, lets...&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The blonde woman's eyes start to bulge from their sockets, and she drops.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
For several terrifying seconds, you wonder if she was poisoned. You start to sweat. Against your better judgement, you blurt out, &amp;quot;Miss Grey! He said it was just pot, I swear-&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She disappears in a puff of smoke.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Huh. Well, that definitely can't be the brownies.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymPhone|Try to find a phone]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymSitBack|Let someone else handle it]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSGymErin|Confront Erin. She might be responsible]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Gym|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Bloodsport:JackSIntro</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Bloodsport:JackSIntro</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Slight corrections;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;C'mon. Sure you don't want any?&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The scrawny brunet, Eric, waves the bag in your face for you to sniff. 'Special' brownies, but you knew that before the smell gave it away. He gives you a few every week, and you're kinda-sorta-almost friends with him. But you forgot to tell him to skip this week.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You shake your head and tell him no. &amp;quot;Dude, I have a doctor appointment.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric just whines, &amp;quot;But Jackie, man, what am I gonna do with them?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
For effect, he shakes the bag. Like you'd forget something from five seconds ago. It's a wonder the faculty apparently doesn't suspect anything. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You throw your hands up in the air.&amp;quot;If I get caught, my dad will send me to boot camp.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You grumbled under your breath. ''So I pull pranks, and jokes and sometimes get high. Shit, it isn't hurting anybody.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You keep walking, and the disheveled pothead next to you stops in his tracks. He freezes for a second, and his face screws up in a crude mockery of concentration. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You roll your eyes. &amp;quot;Constipated?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric automatically tells you to shut up, and is quiet for another few moments. Thinking takes him a while. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric turns to you, smirks, and motions you to follow him. You take half a second to think, and decide to go along with it. After you start walking, he hands the bag to you, and points to the teachers' lounge.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You nod, understanding immediately. ''&amp;quot;Hey, today's lesson might actually be interesting for once.&amp;quot;''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSorensonIntro2|Later, during Gym class]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Halls|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Bloodsport:Students (Writers)</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Bloodsport:Students_(Writers)</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Below, writers, are those who are currently enrolled at Creekview High, a veritable list of the damned for you to toy with. Physical descriptions should be uniform throughout stories, as what the students arrive in is likely to be what they die in (excluding events you may write that involve the changing of said clothing, of course).&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
(Note: Bolded characters are playable, and some characters will have information filled in when appropriate.)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Template ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Johnny Template&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: &amp;lt;This number should probably range between 15-18.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: &amp;lt;Simple, any number between 9-12.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: &amp;lt;Hit hair, eyes, height and build here. Anything else is up to you.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Clothing: &amp;lt;Add what this asshole's wearing here.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: &amp;lt;Use this for quirks, traits, attitude, etc. If Johnny's a little hyperactive shit who can't sit still for more than three seconds, that goes here. If it doesn't fit in the first four sections, throw it here for good measure.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Character List ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Karen Acer&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Mid-neck length brown hair, green eyes. 5'4&amp;quot; tall, and of a wiry build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: Karen is a real fucking cunt. Just saying. Her nasal voice is considered charming by none, but hasn't driven anyone to punch her in the mouth. Yet.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Stephanie Alvarez: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age:16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description:Brown hair, brown eyes. 5'2&amp;quot;, 105 pounds. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes:Shy, prone to fainting.  Necrophobic. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
Erin Hart&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: chest length, honey colored hair, grey eyes. 5'1&amp;quot;, 116 pounds.  &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: A known &amp;quot;witch&amp;quot;. She might be able to actually cast spells, or she may just be pretending. Has a bit of a fragile psyche. Obsessive. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
John Flanagan: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age:17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: redhead, brown eyes. 6'2&amp;quot;, 188 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes:Average senior in most respects, other than a strong sense of justice. Likely to be killed standing up for another student. Likely to understimate other students' brutality or willingness to kill.&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Devin Kent&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Marissa Proppes'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Shoulder-length reddish/orange dyed hair (Natural color is black), green eyes (Achieved with colored contact lenses. Natural color is brown). Approximately 5'7&amp;quot; (170.18 cm), thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric Richardson&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Naomi Sade'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15 &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Elbow length black hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, about 127 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Clothing: Purple butterfly hairclip, white blouse, jeans. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Jack Sorenson'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Black hair, brown eyes, a bit skinny. 5'11&amp;quot;, 155 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Emily Voss&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Shoulder-length brown hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Randy Werks&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 18&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Extremely short dark brown hair (Few weeks after a buzzcut short), blue eyes. Severely outbroken face. 6'4&amp;quot;, built like John Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Bethany Williams: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: short blonde hair, hazel eyes, slight tan, 6'1&amp;quot;, 160 pounds, muscular. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: She is unusually strong. Plays multiple sports. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
---- &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Bloodsport:Students (Writers)</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Bloodsport:Students_(Writers)</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;tweak of Erin's description&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Below, writers, are those who are currently enrolled at Creekview High, a veritable list of the damned for you to toy with. Physical descriptions should be uniform throughout stories, as what the students arrive in is likely to be what they die in (excluding events you may write that involve the changing of said clothing, of course).&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
(Note: Bolded characters are playable, and some characters will have information filled in when appropriate.)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Template ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Johnny Template&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: &amp;lt;This number should probably range between 15-18.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: &amp;lt;Simple, any number between 9-12.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: &amp;lt;Hit hair, eyes, height and build here. Anything else is up to you.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Clothing: &amp;lt;Add what this asshole's wearing here.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: &amp;lt;Use this for quirks, traits, attitude, etc. If Johnny's a little hyperactive shit who can't sit still for more than three seconds, that goes here. If it doesn't fit in the first four sections, throw it here for good measure.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Character List ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Karen Acer&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Mid-neck length brown hair, green eyes. 5'4&amp;quot; tall, and of a wiry build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: Karen is a real fucking cunt. Just saying. Her nasal voice is considered charming by none, but hasn't driven anyone to punch her in the mouth. Yet.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Stephanie Alvarez: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age:16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description:Brown hair, brown eyes. 5'2&amp;quot;, 105 pounds. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes:Shy, prone to fainting.  Necrophobic. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
Erin Hart&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: chest length, honey colored hair, grey eyes. 5'1&amp;quot;, 116 pounds.  &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: A known &amp;quot;witch&amp;quot;. She might be able to actually cast spells, or she may just be pretending. Has a bit of a fragile psyche. Obsessive. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
John Flanagan: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 Age:17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: redhead, brown eyes. 6'2&amp;quot;, 188 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes:Average senior in most respects, other than a strong sense of justice. Likely to be killed standing up for another student. Likely to understimate other students' brutality or willingness to kill.&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Devin Kent&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Marissa Proppes'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Shoulder-length reddish/orange dyed hair (Natural color is black), green eyes (Achieved with colored contact lenses. Natural color is brown). Approximately 5'7&amp;quot; (170.18 cm), thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Eric Richardson&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Naomi Sade'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 15 &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Elbow length black hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, about 127 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Clothing: Purple butterfly hairclip, white blouse, jeans. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''Jack Sorenson'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Black hair, brown eyes, a bit skinny. 5'11&amp;quot;, 155 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Emily Voss&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Shoulder-length brown hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Randy Werks&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 18&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: Extremely short dark brown hair (Few weeks after a buzzcut short), blue eyes. Severely outbroken face. 6'4&amp;quot;, built like John Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Bethany Williams: &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Physical Description: short blonde hair, hazel eyes, slight tan, 6'1&amp;quot;, 160 pounds, muscular. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: She is unusually strong. Plays multiple sports. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
---- &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSWaitOut</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSWaitOut</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;There are three other students in your trench to your left, staring at you in shocked silence. No one dares to move.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You've done enough already, so you gently place your rifle on the ground. You can't make it worse if you aren't holding the gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The injured girl whimpers for a couple of minutes as her blood flows freely. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
When she stops, you realize you just watched someone die by your hand.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]] &lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSWaitOut</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSWaitOut</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;There are three other students in your trench to your left, staring at you in shocked silence. No one dares to move.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You've done enough already, so you gently place your rifle on the ground. You can't make it worse if you aren't holding the gun.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The injured girl whimpers for a couple of minutes as her blood flows freely. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
When she stops, you realize you just watched someone die by your hand.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]] &lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Bloodsport.]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSWaitOut</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'There are three other students in your trench to your left, staring at you in shocked silence. No one dares to move.  You've done enough already, so you gently place your rifle o…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;There are three other students in your trench to your left, staring at you in shocked silence. No one dares to move.&lt;br /&gt;
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You've done enough already, so you gently place your rifle on the ground. You can't make it worse if you aren't holding the gun.&lt;br /&gt;
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The injured girl whimpers for a couple of minutes as her blood flows freely. &lt;br /&gt;
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When she stops, you realize you just watched someone die.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]] &lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 02 Jun 2012 02:46:25 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSWaitOut</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSEuth</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Leaving the girl suffering would just be unnecessarily cruel. You brace yourself, trying not to think about whether this makes you a murderer or not.  You edge a little closer. T…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Leaving the girl suffering would just be unnecessarily cruel. You brace yourself, trying not to think about whether this makes you a murderer or not.&lt;br /&gt;
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You edge a little closer. The dying girl digs her hands into the mud. She only manages to crawl a few inches while you take aim at the back of her head.&lt;br /&gt;
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In the distance someone shouts for you to stop, but you ignore it.&lt;br /&gt;
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You squeeze the trigger three times. The bullets rip into her skull and neck, hidden by a muddied mass of  hair.&lt;br /&gt;
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The figure on the grounds stills. &lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1aKill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]] &lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 02 Jun 2012 02:16:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSEuth</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Bloodsport:Students (Writers)</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;forgot to add &amp;quot; after inches&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Below, writers, are those who are currently enrolled at Creekview High, a veritable list of the damned for you to toy with. Physical descriptions should be uniform throughout stories, as what the students arrive in is likely to be what they die in (excluding events you may write that involve the changing of said clothing, of course).&lt;br /&gt;
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(Note: Bolded characters are playable, and some characters will have information filled in when appropriate.)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Template ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Johnny Template&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: &amp;lt;This number should probably range between 15-18.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: &amp;lt;Simple, any number between 9-12.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: &amp;lt;Hit hair, eyes, height and build here. Anything else is up to you.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Clothing: &amp;lt;Add what this asshole's wearing here.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: &amp;lt;Use this for quirks, traits, attitude, etc. If Johnny's a little hyperactive shit who can't sit still for more than three seconds, that goes here. If it doesn't fit in the first four sections, throw it here for good measure.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Character List ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Karen Acer&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Mid-neck length brown hair, green eyes. 5'4&amp;quot; tall, and of a wiry build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: Karen is a real fucking cunt. Just saying. Her nasal voice is considered charming by none, but hasn't driven anyone to punch her in the mouth. Yet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Stephanie Alvarez: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age:16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description:Brown hair, brown eyes. 5'2&amp;quot;, 105 pounds. &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes:Shy, prone to fainting.  Necrophobic. &lt;br /&gt;
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Erin Hart&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: chest length  light brown hair, grey eyes. 5'1&amp;quot;, 116 pounds.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: A known &amp;quot;witch&amp;quot;. She might be able to actually cast spells, or she may just be pretending. Has a bit of a fragile psyche.&lt;br /&gt;
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John Flanagan: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age:17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: redhead, brown eyes. 6'2&amp;quot;, 188 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Notes:Average senior in most respects, other than a strong sense of justice. Likely to be killed standing up for another student. Likely to understimate other students' brutality or willingness to kill.&lt;br /&gt;
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Devin Kent&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Marissa Proppes'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Shoulder-length reddish/orange dyed hair (Natural color is black), green eyes (Achieved with colored contact lenses. Natural color is brown). Approximately 5'7&amp;quot; (170.18 cm), thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Eric Richardson&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Naomi Sade'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15 &lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Elbow length black hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, about 127 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Clothing: Purple butterfly hairclip, white blouse, jeans. &lt;br /&gt;
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'''Jack Sorenson'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Black hair, brown eyes, a bit skinny. 5'11&amp;quot;, 155 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Emily Voss&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Shoulder-length brown hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Randy Werks&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 18&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Extremely short dark brown hair (Few weeks after a buzzcut short), blue eyes. Severely outbroken face. 6'4&amp;quot;, built like John Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bethany Williams: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: short blonde hair, hazel eyes, slight tan, 6'1&amp;quot;, 160 pounds, muscular. &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: She is unusually strong. Plays multiple sports. &lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Bloodsport:Students (Writers)</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Below, writers, are those who are currently enrolled at Creekview High, a veritable list of the damned for you to toy with. Physical descriptions should be uniform throughout stories, as what the students arrive in is likely to be what they die in (excluding events you may write that involve the changing of said clothing, of course).&lt;br /&gt;
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(Note: Bolded characters are playable, and some characters will have information filled in when appropriate.)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Template ==&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
Johnny Template&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: &amp;lt;This number should probably range between 15-18.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: &amp;lt;Simple, any number between 9-12.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: &amp;lt;Hit hair, eyes, height and build here. Anything else is up to you.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Clothing: &amp;lt;Add what this asshole's wearing here.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Notes: &amp;lt;Use this for quirks, traits, attitude, etc. If Johnny's a little hyperactive shit who can't sit still for more than three seconds, that goes here. If it doesn't fit in the first four sections, throw it here for good measure.&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Character List ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Karen Acer&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Mid-neck length brown hair, green eyes. 5'4&amp;quot; tall, and of a wiry build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: Karen is a real fucking cunt. Just saying. Her nasal voice is considered charming by none, but hasn't driven anyone to punch her in the mouth. Yet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Stephanie Alvarez: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age:16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description:Brown hair, brown eyes. 5'2, 105 pounds. &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes:Shy, prone to fainting.  Necrophobic. &lt;br /&gt;
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Erin Hart&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: chest length  light brown hair, grey eyes. 5'1, 116 pounds.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: A known &amp;quot;witch&amp;quot;. She might be able to actually cast spells, or she may just be pretending. Has a bit of a fragile psyche.&lt;br /&gt;
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John Flanagan: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age:17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: redhead, brown eyes. 6'2, 188 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Notes:Average senior in most respects, other than a strong sense of justice. Likely to be killed standing up for another student. Likely to understimate other students' brutality or willingness to kill.&lt;br /&gt;
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Devin Kent&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Marissa Proppes'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Shoulder-length reddish/orange dyed hair (Natural color is black), green eyes (Achieved with colored contact lenses. Natural color is brown). Approximately 5'7&amp;quot; (170.18 cm), thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Eric Richardson&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: ?&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Naomi Sade'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 15 &lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 10&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Elbow length black hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, about 127 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Clothing: Purple butterfly hairclip, white blouse, jeans. &lt;br /&gt;
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'''Jack Sorenson'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 17&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Black hair, brown eyes, a bit skinny. 5'11&amp;quot;, 155 pounds.&lt;br /&gt;
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Emily Voss&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Shoulder-length brown hair, blue eyes. 5'6&amp;quot;, thin build.&lt;br /&gt;
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Randy Werks&lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 18&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade: 12&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: Extremely short dark brown hair (Few weeks after a buzzcut short), blue eyes. Severely outbroken face. 6'4&amp;quot;, built like John Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bethany Williams: &lt;br /&gt;
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Age: 16&lt;br /&gt;
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Grade:11&lt;br /&gt;
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Physical Description: short blonde hair, hazel eyes, slight tan, 6'1&amp;quot;, 160 pounds, muscular. &lt;br /&gt;
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Notes: She is unusually strong. Plays multiple sports. &lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 02 Jun 2012 01:24:16 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Bloodsport:Students_(Writers)</comments>		</item>
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&lt;div&gt;Please make sure you include the category and status bar on the pages you post. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:29, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oops, yeah. Sorry, forgot that. Knew something was wrong. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:45, 27 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please don't make me keep reminding you about the category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:47, 27 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damnit! Sorry, still getting a hang of this wiki, keep forgetting that part. Are you the only mod? Cause I haven't seen any other ones, and if you have to do all of this on your own, then I'll definitely keep a better eye out. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:20, 2 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the only syop here on a regular basis.  RobKohr is the admin, but he only pops in now and then.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for adding a link to a pic, I'm not entirely sure how to do that.  Given time, I'll see if I can research an answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:44, 1 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sounds good to me, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:20, 2 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the warning.  You can't always tell a person's age by the maturity of their writing, though.  Besides, it doesn't look like he's coming back to write more.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:59, 7 May 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I would just like to congratulate you on finishing your story. This makes you a member of a very, VERY small and privileged club! i enjoyed reading it so good luck with the next one!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I definitely agree with you about the tags.  If I can find a way to remove them, a lot of tags are going away! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I know you've been working on the story &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;, and it's your story [and very good, if depressing], but I hope you don't mind that I added one page to it. I tried to keep to the spirit of the story. Your work is excellent. --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Since you asked, I do like the story &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. The theme is incredibly depressing, so it reminds me of my poetry. So far, my favorite kill is the quick one in the kitchen, where Megan snaps Vanessa's neck. I look forward to the rest of the story. --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey thanks. Do you recognize the faces I used for the status bars? --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:15, 29 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congrats on finishing &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. Great story! --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem go right ahead and use it. It's not copywritten and it does have a nice ring to it. --[[User:The Hand|The Hand]]&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Thank You!!''' I haven't technically 'finished' it yet (kind of not read through and checked for grammar errors yet), but thank you so much for reading through it.&lt;br /&gt;
Oh and i've read through &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. My god, that story is simply put, magnificent. Especially the first time I read through it, yes I did read it through more than once. I hope that you continue making stories. Hey, maybe you can do a 'what if?' edition to this story. I'd like to see what would have happened if she didn't go through with, you know. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 17 September 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, the 'What If?' idea was for if Megan didn't do the kill, and there is a page where Vanessa kills Megan! The gun and power-tool kills? That sounds nasty, but, my violent side (which is very limited) still wants to read them.&lt;br /&gt;
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And i've played through a bit of War Pigs, that is a pretty tough one to beat. Though, i'm sure you will.&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh and one last question. I need you give your thoughts on these three ideas, as it will come into consideration of what I will do next. Should I?:&lt;br /&gt;
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*Story about a man who has lost his memory, locked in a room with no walls, only item he has is a walkie talkie, where the kidnapper says he can leave, or he can save another person.&lt;br /&gt;
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*High School Story. Didn't really have a good idea on this, it's either going to be about a war that starts happening around them, or they have a huch paintball match for a prize.&lt;br /&gt;
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*Story Reviews. Going to look at three different sections, Grammar, Story, Ending/Completion.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 18 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reviewed! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! I just finished typing up my review for your story, Megan. I know it's not finished and such, but i'm right now reviewing all the stories that have been nominated for becoming featured, and your one was on the top of the list. So [[Review: Megan|here's]] the review, and enjoy! --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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If you really want to know, it was the first one with the plastic bag.  Oh my god that was brutal. That page was really well done, and I can still imagine it in my head. Ow... Anyways thanks in advance if you do write a review. I hope that more people get into the reviewing so it feels less empty. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 8 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! Recently, I've been working on this new story called [[Remember]], and I was wondering, if you aren't to busy, maybe perhaps to read through it? If you would like a little premise, you find yourself locked inside a room with no windows, one door, and a walkie talkie, you also have forgotten who you are. The whole point is to escape the room and find out who you actually are. I'd just want to have an honest opinion about the story. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 17 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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I recently read your review that you posted up today. What a way to start off, Inyasha's Fantasy Land. XD. To be honest, I haven't had a chance to actually take a read through this story, but with all this 'hype' about it being extremely bad, I was wondering if it was really that bad. Guess it turns out with your review it is! Great review I must say. You going to do more? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 10:08, 12 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==e-cig spammers==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads-up.  I'd noticed the e-cig spammers, but I figure that as long as they confine their spam to talk pages, there's no need to delete them.  If they spread their spam to regular pages or post on anyone else's talk pages, then they'll be banned and their postings removed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:05, 17 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Question on something that could be considered a &amp;quot;nonstory&amp;quot;==&lt;br /&gt;
It seems to me that marking story supplement material as part of the Elderpedia would be the best way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 15 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Having an IRC chat is an interesting idea.  It's something that should probably be run past RobKohr using the 'Request a Feature' link.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:37, 17 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Time Stopper proposal reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey TheElderOnes, Thanks for your praise on my new story I am glad you've enjoyed it so far.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for the proposal of letting you write a few pages I will accept with a few conditions and details of the characters&lt;br /&gt;
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Firstly I would like you to '''only''' do the city visit where the protaginist will cause trouble as I have everything of the highschool visit planned already.&lt;br /&gt;
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Secondly I would like you to keep with my linking method which is [Time Stopper/Action|AddedText] or [TimeStopper/PersonAction|AddedText]&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to the character(s).&lt;br /&gt;
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The protagonist is very intellectual being able to deduce a situation very quickly&lt;br /&gt;
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before gaining powers he grew to hate the world that hated him but upon getting his powers he has grown to be a bit sadistic and full of hatred.&lt;br /&gt;
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also I plan to make a rival in the story with a different 'God-given' power... but I plan on introducing said character after the city arc has ended.&lt;br /&gt;
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which brings me to a big point... try to keep the protagonist a little diguised so he doesn't just get caught so that he can still go to bed at the end of the day without having SWAT teams bursting through his window lol.&lt;br /&gt;
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also try to reference previous dialogue/actions it brings more emotion to it I reckon.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll note before finishing that the School arc is a dead end or just a fanservice arc whilst City leads into the next part of the story I have planned (Which again will split into 2 paths if you wish to continue writing after the city arc.)&lt;br /&gt;
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as a closing statement be sure to add a few spots where the reader can get a sex scene as the story is an 18+ adult story after all...&lt;br /&gt;
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well anyway I made a big wall of text on your page sorry bout' that ha ha... anyways glad to have you aboard. --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 14:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Firstly good that you understand the protgonist, so yes cleverly orchestrated incidents that could perhaps cause massive whirlwinds of chaos while the protagonist sits and watchs it unfold&lt;br /&gt;
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as for specfic events in the city I would like only 2 things the introduction of Merissa Silvers, a childhood friend of the protagonist who he hasn't seen since he way 10, her personality is outwardly happy but she hides a few secrets behind her smiles, I would like her only covered quickly though since I want the readers to feel the mystery of the character as she WILL be important later in the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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the other things I want covered is a visit to 'Green Horn Bar' the bar that the protagonists mom gets drunk at. I would like the protagonist to help an innocent chick that is being taken advantage of by the patrons of the bar this could be a good spot also to introduce Merissa I guess. the green horn bar reeks of alcohol and is usually full of shady people.&lt;br /&gt;
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anything else is left to your imagination, be as gory in description as you wish go nuts :P --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 15:16, 10 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, every time I issue a warning about the category, I think about just creating a template instead of re-typing it.  Maybe next time I'll do that. Next time is likely to be soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 1 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hey, uhh ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Are you like a moderator of some sorts now? I've noticed you having a higher amount of activity than most other users, with many of your recent changes just categorizing page after page. Whether you are or not, I'd like to say good job! Someone needed to help Platypus with all the maintenance of the site. Heyoeveryone 07:24, 8 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Now I've been thinking, would it be a good idea if make [[R: Try to remember who you are|this page]] and the pages after it into a new story (I'd call it a new Chapter). I'm thinking of naming this 'Chapter 2' or 'Remember: Escape'. I am doing this because I was originally going to make it three parts, 'Remember' , 'Remember: The Waiting', then 'Remember: Escape'. If the story was popular, I would do a 'Remember: Epilogue' section as well.  Why am I telling you this? Well, I need another persons opinion on it, and with the amount of stories that you've read, your opinion is more influential than others. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 04:59, 16 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked you because you were one of the only two people who would reply to my question in less than 24hrs (the other being Platypus). Anyway, thanks for your reply. Have fun doing what ever you do! --Heyoeveryone 06:14, 17 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi. Thanks for fixing up my spelling/grammar there and (I'm guessing) reading. :) I am not sure how I totally missed that error. -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt Devonin]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Found it! I'm ''pretty'' sure. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, I think I found your upcoming project. [[Bloodsport:Menu|Noonegetstoseewhat'sherebecauseit'satitleandntoinmyplacetorevealthetitlebutdon'tclickoonitanyway.]]. It's not shitty at all, by the way. Great introduction. Myself, I prefer to just throw someone into the fray with only a description of who they are. Reckon I should change that. Good job on finishing everything though. Just make another page so no one can seee it through the special pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, great job, hope you can finish it so... wait, I think putting the link over there kinda takes it out of the orphaned bit. Well, I'll go search for the other part then. Figure it should be the Elderpedia. Hmmm...&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 04:01, 21 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I found the other bit then.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Elderpedia:Bloodsport. (Story)|Thisisevenmorerevealingsonooneelsegetstotouchthis.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The page has only been acessed 5 times and several are probably you typing more, so, 1 other person?--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 04:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Small Request...  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi TheElderOnes,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd like to make a teensy request that you refrain from editing my half-written pages (even to add the category) for at least an hour or two to give me time to finish it and add it myself. (If I haven't done it after an hour or two, something must have come up to pull me AFK).&lt;br /&gt;
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I mainly ask because you just edited a page I was writing and since I couldn't copy/paste to merge the two (or find any other way to merge them aside from rewriting or c/p) I ended up having to rewrite the whole thing, very slowly, even though after I'd have saved it, it would have had the category added... ^^&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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I have to occasionally save pages early/before finishing cause I either forget something I need on the previous page, or, do it just in case my phone crashes (which it likes to do from time to time) so I don't lose everything. Especially on longer pages. And by doing it on my phone it takes me a bit longer to type pages than it would if I had a keyboard.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not bothered or anything, I've lost whole pages before due to my phone crashing so the fact that I could save this one after I wrote it a way I was sorta happy with was good. I just thought I'd toss the request out there to save me having to do this too often... ^^&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you, -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 07:36, 26 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The life of a medieval princess ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Started writing again after a bit of a break, too busy with work ^^&lt;br /&gt;
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btw, I think I noticed a major error in my spelling/grammatica&lt;br /&gt;
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I always use 's and recently heard sometimes it's supposed to be s'&lt;br /&gt;
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like :&lt;br /&gt;
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the boy's car / the boys' car&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't really know when exactly to use s' tho. Best guess so far : after names and plurals.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dunno if its really something important either so I figured I'd ask.&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S.: I read bloodsport, its still only a beginning, but it didn't sound half bad. I think it might be an interesting read once its finished.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==deleteme==&lt;br /&gt;
I understand what you're trying to do by tagging pages with the deleteme category, but categorizing those pages actually makes them stand out less for me.  They're much easier to spot when they're uncategorized. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:42, 27 March 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Bloodsport.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, I'm glad to hear you like Naomi and Jack so far. Any feedback on Jack specifically would be helpful, since I'm not used to writing teenage males. By the way, if you see any typos/grammar errors in any of my pages, feel free to correct them. I write on my phone and it's sometimes impossible to scroll through an input box. &lt;br /&gt;
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I'd really like to see you continue Marissa and Bloodsport. Her story stopped before any blood was spilled.&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Sennen|Sennen]] 14:14, 31 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're free to use Erin if you'd like. I'll go ahead and fill in her description and a couple others. I'm pretty comfortable with most of my named characters being borrowed, actually. The only one I consider off limits is Monique, and that's only because I haven't shown her personality yet-after a few pages, she's free as well.&lt;br /&gt;
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Tribal warfare sounds fantastic, like the kind of thing the Królowa Krwis would have done in the past. Plus, given some of the unusual practices that obscure tribes sometimes have, it has a gold mine of potential inspiration.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You stay put. It would be stupid to move. There are machine guns and a crazy woman who can remotely control people.&lt;br /&gt;
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The girl to your left pulls herself up, kicking up bits of dirt in your face. Once she hits ground level, she quickly disappears from view. You brush off dust.&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahead of you, you hear sounds like a turret firing. You look skyward. Above, multiple sprays of blood fly over your head. There is a distinct thud. You're certain the girl is dead.&lt;br /&gt;
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Any hope of escape seems to die then and there along with her.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLH1Kill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You stay put. It would be stupid to move. There are machine guns and a crazy woman who can remotely control people.&lt;br /&gt;
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The girl to your left pulls herself up, kicking up bits of dirt in your face. Once she hits ground level, she quickly disappears from view. You brush off dust.&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahead of you, you hear sounds like a turret firing. You look skyward. Above, multiple sprays of blood fly over your head. There is a distinct thud. You're certain the girl whose name you never knew is dead and now the second casualty of this craziness.&lt;br /&gt;
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Any hope of escape seems to die then and there along with her.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchLHNoKill|Resign yourself to life in the Trenches]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;''She's going to die out there.''&lt;br /&gt;
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You don't fully think it through, because there's no time. One bullet is less dangerous than thirty. You take the rifle by your side, aim for her lower leg, and fire.&lt;br /&gt;
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The sound is deafening. Lead flies out of the barrel of the gun and it tears through her calf. She lets out a blood-curdling shriek before tumbling. &lt;br /&gt;
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Blood gushes from her leg. Immediately you realize that the bullet must have struck an artery. &lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSEuth|End her suffering with a shot to the head]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSComfort|Try to comfort her and apologize]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You take the rifle by your side, aim for her torso, and fire.&lt;br /&gt;
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The sound is deafening. Lead flies out of the barrel of the gun and it tears across her gut. She lets out a blood-curdling shriek before tumbling onto her shredded stomach. &lt;br /&gt;
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Blood, bits of stringy meat and bile pour onto the floor. The smell of half-digested food and fluids nearly overwhelm you. &lt;br /&gt;
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You're no doctor,  but it's obvious she won't make it.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSEuthAlt|End her suffering with a shot to the head]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSComfortAlt|Try to comfort her and apologize]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;''She's going to die out there.''&lt;br /&gt;
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The sound is deafening. Lead flies out of the barrel of the gun and it tears through her calf. She lets out a blood-curdling shriek before tumbling. &lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSEuth|End her suffering with a shot to the head]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You dig your hands into the muddy earth. It's difficult to get a grip, but underneath the layer of mud is solid dirt.&lt;br /&gt;
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You're just barely able to peek over the edge-beyond which you see that multiple ditches have been torn into the ground. The grass is gone, replaced with dirt and rock. There are machine gun placements at the base of several ditches, perhaps two dozen out of maybe a hundred. No students are above ground. All of you have fallen into the earth.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns. Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
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''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
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From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<title>BloodsportJackSFootball3</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSFootball3</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;John is the first person to speak.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Does anyone else think that maybe,&amp;quot; He pauses to point toward the office, &amp;quot;that woman just killed our classmate just now?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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None of the other students dare to either agree or disagree with him. At least, not while you all stand ten feet from the office door.&amp;quot;We should check...&amp;quot; John looks directly at you, obviously hoping for backup. &amp;quot;Anybody?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You inhale sharply. &amp;quot;If she did murder Erin, then you're asking us to face a killer. And obviously, getting past her to call the police isn't possible.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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He sputters, &amp;quot;...but the girl...&amp;quot;.&lt;br /&gt;
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The students stare at the taller boy, waiting for his response. John seems to deflate as your reasoning sinks in. He'll die if he goes in alone, but it isn't fair to ask the others to risk their lives.&lt;br /&gt;
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John sighs, and taps your shoulder. &amp;quot;Maybe someone else'll have a working phone at the field. &amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You nod. The two of you start walking toward the football field, and soon, the rest of the class falls in step behind you. The short journey to the football field is a&lt;br /&gt;
silent and awkward. Halfway through, other classes join you in marching.&lt;br /&gt;
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John glances at various students in  the crowd. Without tearing his eyes away from his target, he asks &amp;quot;You didn't do anything to Miss Grey, right?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You hesitate, but answer honestly. He looks you over, and nods once. &amp;quot;I believe you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Before long, you arrive at the grassy field. The grass is dry and you can tell it hasn't been cut in a while. The sun overhead is bearing down on you. Sweat drips across your face. You and your classmates take a spot near the middle.&lt;br /&gt;
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You know for a fact the loudspeakers can only just barely be heard from here. However, the problem seems to have been fixed today as an announcement comes in at a deafening volume.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;I've been studying your country's bloody history. So many wars in such a short existence. I find it fascinating. &amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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For a brief moment, all the students begin talking at once.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;SILENCE!'''&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Definitely not an office worker.''&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;'''I particularly like the ones you call World Wars.&amp;quot;''' She pauses. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The next statement and the giddiness in her tone leaves you floored.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;'''You are going to reenact them for me, children.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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You shout back at the disembodied voice, &amp;quot;Are you nuts?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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However, the grass underneath your feet shifts, and you are plunged downward towards the earth. Through it, about six feet down.&lt;br /&gt;
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In your hands is a rifle.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackS3a|Peek over the top of the ditch]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackS3b|Stay put and process what just happened.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSOffice</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSOffice</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;It's a risk, yet you can't in good conscience leave your almost-friend's sister. You have to check on her.&lt;br /&gt;
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So you ignore the loudspeaker (and the nagging voice in the back of your mind saying you're in over your head). You head for the doors. A couple kids break from the line to follow. &lt;br /&gt;
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Opening the heavy door, you see a curiously empty office. The papers, phones, chairs and clock are all in order, but there's only one assistant instead of the usual five. She is a blonde woman wearing all white.&lt;br /&gt;
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You open your mouth to speak, but a massive force slams into your throat. It pins you to the wall in an instant. Blood and grey matter from the back of your head is splattered onto it. There are screams behind you, but they sound far off, as if it came from the edge of the world. &lt;br /&gt;
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A dizzy feeling overtakes your mind. Your eyelids flutter. The world grows dark. Your last thoughts are of sleep.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Office|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]][[Category:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
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The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
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Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]][[Category:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]][[Categoy:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportNaomiSIntroPossesion</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportNaomiSIntroPossesion</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;There is a blinding flash across your vision.&lt;br /&gt;
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A crushing force greater than anything you've ever felt causes you to drop to the floor.&lt;br /&gt;
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You are propelled outward, out of your body, through the roof. She (your former self) writhes in agony, while your consciousness drifts ever upward.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The last thing you hear is laughter, filling your head.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 {{Bloodsport.|Location=The Afterlife |Character=Naomi (Spirit) |Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]][[Category:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath2</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath2</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]][[Category:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportNaomiSCarry</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with '&amp;quot;I'll help you carry Stephanie.&amp;quot;  The blonde athlete says nothing and simply grabs ahold of her friend's arms. You take the legs, and together you begin to shuffle off to the off…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;I'll help you carry Stephanie.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The blonde athlete says nothing and simply grabs ahold of her friend's arms. You take the legs, and together you begin to shuffle off to the office building. The two of you walk in silence. Mostly, you're trying to focus on not dropping your classmate. The girl is heavier than she looks. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I'm Beth, by the way.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''She knew I didn't know her her name?'' Though embarrassing as it might be, you silently thank her for saving you the trouble of asking.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
You cross the asphalt slowly. The sun is hot. It's making you sweat quite a lot. You nearly lose your grip on Stephanie, but catch yourself in time. The friend (whom you now know is Beth) doesn't seem at all bothered by the heat. &lt;br /&gt;
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''She must get lots of practice running when it's hot,'' you muse quietly.&lt;br /&gt;
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The legs you hold in your arms twitch a couple times, causing you to nearly drop the unconscious girl.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
As you near the nurse's office, you are startled by feedback from a loudspeaker just ten feet from you. You don't recognize the announcer, but that hardly seems important at the moment. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;This is your assistant principal. I have a grave announcement to make.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Oh crud. This can't be good.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;Someone in this school is a murderer. I can't tell who, or why, but someone here is out to kill you. Please, secure yourself and your fellow classmates until security may be brought in to root them out.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''We need to get inside, now.'' &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You and Beth glance at each other. She seems to read your mind, and you both pick up the pace. You shift Stephanie's weight onto your left arm, and pull the door with your right.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It refuses to open. Beth gasps.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She says, &amp;quot;How can they lock us out? They just said there's a killer out here!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportNaomiSBashDoor|Try to ram or kick the door]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSHide|Try to find a hiding place]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=Outside the Nurse's Office |Character=Naomi S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSFootball1</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSFootball1</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You have no choice but to do as she commands, as you are no longer in control.  Despite being unable to actually do anything, you spend the entire walk to the football field mentally resisting your possession. This of course fails, only increasing your level of panic. Outwardly it doesn't show. She controls even your breathing. The feeling of someone other than you pushing air through your lungs is extremely unsettling at best.&lt;br /&gt;
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Before long, you arrive at the grassy field. Once there, the woman in white relinquishes control. You fall on your knees, coughing. Your heart and lungs protest against the abuse inflicted by that crazy woman.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Said crazy woman then vanishes. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
A redheaded boy just in front of you, named John, snaps around. His face is contorted in terror.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Did Erin...summon her?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You tell him, &amp;quot;I'm sure of it. She was chanting. Miss Grey disappeared. Then that woman kills her when she tries to reverse her spell. You saw.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
John braces himself, and shiveres. &amp;quot;I thought you were lying.&amp;quot; He laughs bitterly. &amp;quot;I thought I heard you shout something incriminating-sounding before Miss Grey went poof, but there isn't any mistaking what just happened.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Given what you've just seen, you shrug. The woman clearly has some kind of magic. Only an idiot would deny it.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You and John jump when a loudspeaker interrupts your thoughts.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;I've been studying your country's bloody history. So many wars in such a short existence. I find it fascinating. &amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
For a brief moment, all the students begin talking at once.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;SILENCE!'''&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Definitely not an office worker.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;'''I particularly like the ones you call World Wars.&amp;quot;''' She pauses. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The next statement and the giddiness in her tone leaves you floored.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;'''You are going to reenact them for me, children.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You shout back at the disembodied voice, &amp;quot;Are you nuts?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
However, the grass underneath your feet shifts, and you are plunged downward towards the earth. Through it, about six feet down.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In your hands is a rifle.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackS3a|Peek over the top of the ditch]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackS3b|Stay put and process what just happened.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath2</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.  The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bull…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS2b</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You don't bother to try to look out there. You have watched enough war movies to know it won't end well. Guys out of the trenches are dead meat.   '''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of y…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You don't bother to try to look out there. You have watched enough war movies to know it won't end well. Guys out of the trenches are dead meat.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Those words promise that it's exactly as bad you think.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
People curse or cry out from their various trenches. It's unjust, it's unfair, it's messed up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
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From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You look toward her. She starts crawling out of the trench. You watch, but you've got a bad feeling.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath2|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchKill2|Shoot her]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchIdle2|Do nothing]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Mostly Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 01 Jun 2012 00:00:33 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS2b</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS2a</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You dig your hands into the muddy earth. It's difficult to get a grip, but underneath the layer of mud is solid dirt.   You're just barely able to peek over the edge-beyond which…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You dig your hands into the muddy earth. It's difficult to get a grip, but underneath the layer of mud is solid dirt. &lt;br /&gt;
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You're just barely able to peek over the edge-beyond which you see that multiple ditches have been torn into the ground. The grass is gone, replaced with dirt and rock. There are machine gun placements at the base of several ditches, perhaps two dozen out of maybe a hundred. No students are above ground. All of you have fallen into the earth.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns. Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
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People curse or cry out from their various trenches. It's unjust, it's unfair, it's messed up.&lt;br /&gt;
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''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You look toward her. She starts crawling out of the trench. You watch, but you've got a bad feeling.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath2|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchKill2|Shoot her]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchIdle2|Do nothing]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Mostly Fine|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:56:45 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS2a</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS3b</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You don't bother to try to look out there. You have watched enough war movies to know it won't end well. Guys out of the trenches are dead meat.   '''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of y…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You don't bother to try to look out there. You have watched enough war movies to know it won't end well. Guys out of the trenches are dead meat.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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Those words promise that it's exactly as bad you think.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
People curse or cry out from their various trenches. It's unjust, it's unfair, it's messed up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You look toward her. She starts crawling out of the trench. You watch, but you've got a bad feeling.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchKill|Shoot her]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchIdle|Do nothing]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:48:50 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS3b</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.  The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bull…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
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Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:36:40 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS3a</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackS3a</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You dig your hands into the muddy earth. It's difficult to get a grip, but underneath the layer of mud is solid dirt.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You're just barely able to peek over the edge-beyond which you see that multiple ditches have been torn into the ground. The grass is gone, replaced with dirt and rock. There are machine gun placements at the base of several ditches, perhaps two dozen out of maybe a hundred. No students are above ground. All of you have fallen into the earth.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns. Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
People curse or cry out from their various trenches. It's unjust, it's unfair, it's messed up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You look toward her. She starts crawling out of the trench. You watch, but you've got a bad feeling.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSTrenchKill|Shoot her]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackSTrenchIdle|Do nothing]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:33:30 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS3a</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS3a</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Posted wrong pages, whoops&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You dig your hands into the muddy earth. It's difficult to get a grip, but underneath the layer of mud is solid dirt.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You're just barely able to peek over the edge-beyond which you see that multiple ditches have been torn into the ground. The grass is gone, replaced with dirt and rock. There are machine gun placements at the base of several ditches, perhaps two dozen out of maybe a hundred. No students are above ground. All of you have fallen into the earth.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
'''&amp;quot;You may notice not all of your trenches received machine guns. Only 30 trenches have them, along with other goodies. The rest of you will have to capture or disable one. Dehydration sets in at about 3 days, just in case you didn't know.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''Dehydration? Oh, shit.''&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
People curse or cry out from their various trenches. It's unjust, it's unfair, it's messed up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
''How can she possibly think she'll get away with this?'' &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
From your left, you hear a girl yell out, &amp;quot;You can't do this to us! Our parents...the ''police'' will come and stop you.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You look toward her. She starts crawling out of the trench. You watch, but you've got a bad feeling.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSTrenchDeath|Get out as well]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[BloodsportJackSTrenchKill|Shoot her]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSTrenchIdle|Do nothing]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:32:35 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS3a</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackS3a</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.  The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bull…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;One of the mounted machine guns springs to life, barrels spinning and spitting out hundreds of rounds per minute.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The girl is torn into shredded meat infront of you and the bullets tear into you, too. Your sides, your lungs, and your stomach are pierced. Stomach acid starts to eat at you. Breathing is simply agonizing. You howl in pain from the effort.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Mercifully, another bullet hits you dead in the eyes and ends your suffering instantly.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Dead|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 23:30:33 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackS3a</comments>		</item>
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			<title>BloodsportJackSGymTaunt</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/BloodsportJackSGymTaunt</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;A voice from the crowd rises up just as you were about to speak. You recognize the boy as one John Flanagan.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Now wait just one minute. Just what are you trying to do, Jack?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can feel the heat on your back, but you ignore him to concentrate on the spellcaster before you.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You killed her. Because she didn't love you. She barely knew you existed.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
There's tangible anger in the air, both in front and behind you. A restraining hand grips your shoulder. You know it's John's. In front, Erin's breathing is harsh, and she's shaking.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;The only way to get what you want was by force, and that's what did, you-&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The younger and smaller teen launches herself at you. She rakes her nails across your arms and face. It's painful, but not debilitating. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You punch her. Hard. She falls backward, but springs back up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
A group of fellow students pull John away from you, and join in. As for Erin, the mob kicks, scratches, and pins her down. People are shouting, cheering you on.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She's far stronger than she looks, because it takes four bigger teens just to keep her down. One boy takes ahold of her left arm. You take the right, and on the count of three you both pull. The sickly noise of cracking bones fills your ears. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The pinned girls screams herself hoarse cursing her attackers, flailing in all directions. Blood pours from gashes. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She manages to kick a girl right in the nose, smashing it. The owner of that nose immediately lets go of Erin's leg.  Erin slides out from under her assailants.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You kick her in the ribs, and you hear that cracking sound. Her chest caves in under your feet.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Moments later, she stops struggling. Just like that, it's over. You and your helpers back away from the body of your classmate. Deadly silence fills the room after that, for minutes on end. &lt;br /&gt;
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After some time, you laugh. &amp;quot;We just killed a witch.&amp;quot; you tell your audience. &lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You scan the crowd, and find a second body, that of John Flanagan.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You and the others are startled as the loudspeakers crackle to life. A female voice that you don't recognize speaks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Football field, children. Now.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSFootball2|Leave for the football field]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Gym|Character=Jack S|Health=Minor Blood Loss|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 15:18:11 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSGymTaunt</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;A voice from the crowd rises up just as you were about to speak. You recognize the boy as one John Flanagan.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Now wait just one minute. Just what are you trying to do, Jack?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
You can feel the heat on your back, but you ignore him to concentrate on the spellcaster before you.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You killed her. Because she didn't love you. She barely knew you existed.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
There's tangible anger in the air, both in front and behind you. A restraining hand grips your shoulder. You know it's John's. In front, Erin's breathing is harsh, and she's shaking.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;The only way to get what you want was by force, and that's what did, you-&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The younger and smaller teen launches herself at you. She rakes her nails across your arms and face. It's painful, but not debilitating. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You punch her. Hard. She falls backward, but springs back up.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
A group of fellow students pull John away from you, and join in. As for Erin, the mob kicks, scratches, and pins her down. People are shouting, cheering you on.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She's far stronger than she looks, because it takes four bigger teens just to keep her down. One boy takes ahold of her left arm. You take the right, and on the count of three you both pull. The sickly noise of cracking bones fills your ears. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The pinned girls screams herself hoarse cursing her attackers, flailing in all directions. Blood pours from gashes. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She manages to kick a girl right in the nose, smashing it. The owner of that nose immediately lets go of Erin's leg.  Erin slides out from under her assailants.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You kick her in the ribs, and you hear that cracking sound. Her chest caves in under your feet.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Moments later, she stops strughling. It's over. Deadly silence fills the room after that, for minutes on end. &lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
After some time, you laugh. &amp;quot;We just killed a witch.&amp;quot; you tell your audience. &lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You scan the crowd, and find a second body, that of John Flanagan.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
You and the others are startled as the loudspeakers crackle to life. A female voice that you don't recognize speaks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Football field, children. Now.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[BloodsportJackSFootball2|Leave for the football field]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 &lt;br /&gt;
{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Gym|Character=Jack S|Health=Minor Blood Loss|Kills=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 15:12:03 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:BloodsportJackSGymTaunt</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:Sennen</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Hey, just dropping in to say that I'm so goddamned happy that someone else has taken an interest in Bloodsport. After going through the pages you've created so far, I wanted to note that I'm liking Naomi and Jack's stories. I honestly had a lot planned and pre-written for Marissa, but I started to lose motivation when I felt like nobody was reading it. And then I log on and see that someone has started not one, but two new characters? I applaud you, sir. I applaud you. Perhaps now I'll get some serious work done on miss Proppes... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:13, 31 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 14:14:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Sennen</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Sennen</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:TheElderOnes</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Please make sure you include the category and status bar on the pages you post. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:29, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oops, yeah. Sorry, forgot that. Knew something was wrong. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:45, 27 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please don't make me keep reminding you about the category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:47, 27 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damnit! Sorry, still getting a hang of this wiki, keep forgetting that part. Are you the only mod? Cause I haven't seen any other ones, and if you have to do all of this on your own, then I'll definitely keep a better eye out. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:20, 2 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the only syop here on a regular basis.  RobKohr is the admin, but he only pops in now and then.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for adding a link to a pic, I'm not entirely sure how to do that.  Given time, I'll see if I can research an answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:44, 1 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sounds good to me, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:20, 2 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the warning.  You can't always tell a person's age by the maturity of their writing, though.  Besides, it doesn't look like he's coming back to write more.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:59, 7 May 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I would just like to congratulate you on finishing your story. This makes you a member of a very, VERY small and privileged club! i enjoyed reading it so good luck with the next one!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I definitely agree with you about the tags.  If I can find a way to remove them, a lot of tags are going away! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I know you've been working on the story &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;, and it's your story [and very good, if depressing], but I hope you don't mind that I added one page to it. I tried to keep to the spirit of the story. Your work is excellent. --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Since you asked, I do like the story &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. The theme is incredibly depressing, so it reminds me of my poetry. So far, my favorite kill is the quick one in the kitchen, where Megan snaps Vanessa's neck. I look forward to the rest of the story. --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey thanks. Do you recognize the faces I used for the status bars? --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:15, 29 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congrats on finishing &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. Great story! --[[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem go right ahead and use it. It's not copywritten and it does have a nice ring to it. --[[User:The Hand|The Hand]]&lt;br /&gt;
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'''Thank You!!''' I haven't technically 'finished' it yet (kind of not read through and checked for grammar errors yet), but thank you so much for reading through it.&lt;br /&gt;
Oh and i've read through &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot;. My god, that story is simply put, magnificent. Especially the first time I read through it, yes I did read it through more than once. I hope that you continue making stories. Hey, maybe you can do a 'what if?' edition to this story. I'd like to see what would have happened if she didn't go through with, you know. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 17 September 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, the 'What If?' idea was for if Megan didn't do the kill, and there is a page where Vanessa kills Megan! The gun and power-tool kills? That sounds nasty, but, my violent side (which is very limited) still wants to read them.&lt;br /&gt;
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And i've played through a bit of War Pigs, that is a pretty tough one to beat. Though, i'm sure you will.&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh and one last question. I need you give your thoughts on these three ideas, as it will come into consideration of what I will do next. Should I?:&lt;br /&gt;
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*Story about a man who has lost his memory, locked in a room with no walls, only item he has is a walkie talkie, where the kidnapper says he can leave, or he can save another person.&lt;br /&gt;
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*High School Story. Didn't really have a good idea on this, it's either going to be about a war that starts happening around them, or they have a huch paintball match for a prize.&lt;br /&gt;
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*Story Reviews. Going to look at three different sections, Grammar, Story, Ending/Completion.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 18 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reviewed! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! I just finished typing up my review for your story, Megan. I know it's not finished and such, but i'm right now reviewing all the stories that have been nominated for becoming featured, and your one was on the top of the list. So [[Review: Megan|here's]] the review, and enjoy! --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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If you really want to know, it was the first one with the plastic bag.  Oh my god that was brutal. That page was really well done, and I can still imagine it in my head. Ow... Anyways thanks in advance if you do write a review. I hope that more people get into the reviewing so it feels less empty. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 8 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! Recently, I've been working on this new story called [[Remember]], and I was wondering, if you aren't to busy, maybe perhaps to read through it? If you would like a little premise, you find yourself locked inside a room with no windows, one door, and a walkie talkie, you also have forgotten who you are. The whole point is to escape the room and find out who you actually are. I'd just want to have an honest opinion about the story. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 17 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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I recently read your review that you posted up today. What a way to start off, Inyasha's Fantasy Land. XD. To be honest, I haven't had a chance to actually take a read through this story, but with all this 'hype' about it being extremely bad, I was wondering if it was really that bad. Guess it turns out with your review it is! Great review I must say. You going to do more? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 10:08, 12 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==e-cig spammers==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads-up.  I'd noticed the e-cig spammers, but I figure that as long as they confine their spam to talk pages, there's no need to delete them.  If they spread their spam to regular pages or post on anyone else's talk pages, then they'll be banned and their postings removed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:05, 17 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Question on something that could be considered a &amp;quot;nonstory&amp;quot;==&lt;br /&gt;
It seems to me that marking story supplement material as part of the Elderpedia would be the best way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 15 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Having an IRC chat is an interesting idea.  It's something that should probably be run past RobKohr using the 'Request a Feature' link.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:37, 17 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Time Stopper proposal reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey TheElderOnes, Thanks for your praise on my new story I am glad you've enjoyed it so far.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for the proposal of letting you write a few pages I will accept with a few conditions and details of the characters&lt;br /&gt;
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Firstly I would like you to '''only''' do the city visit where the protaginist will cause trouble as I have everything of the highschool visit planned already.&lt;br /&gt;
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Secondly I would like you to keep with my linking method which is [Time Stopper/Action|AddedText] or [TimeStopper/PersonAction|AddedText]&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to the character(s).&lt;br /&gt;
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The protagonist is very intellectual being able to deduce a situation very quickly&lt;br /&gt;
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before gaining powers he grew to hate the world that hated him but upon getting his powers he has grown to be a bit sadistic and full of hatred.&lt;br /&gt;
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also I plan to make a rival in the story with a different 'God-given' power... but I plan on introducing said character after the city arc has ended.&lt;br /&gt;
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which brings me to a big point... try to keep the protagonist a little diguised so he doesn't just get caught so that he can still go to bed at the end of the day without having SWAT teams bursting through his window lol.&lt;br /&gt;
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also try to reference previous dialogue/actions it brings more emotion to it I reckon.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll note before finishing that the School arc is a dead end or just a fanservice arc whilst City leads into the next part of the story I have planned (Which again will split into 2 paths if you wish to continue writing after the city arc.)&lt;br /&gt;
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as a closing statement be sure to add a few spots where the reader can get a sex scene as the story is an 18+ adult story after all...&lt;br /&gt;
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well anyway I made a big wall of text on your page sorry bout' that ha ha... anyways glad to have you aboard. --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 14:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Firstly good that you understand the protgonist, so yes cleverly orchestrated incidents that could perhaps cause massive whirlwinds of chaos while the protagonist sits and watchs it unfold&lt;br /&gt;
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as for specfic events in the city I would like only 2 things the introduction of Merissa Silvers, a childhood friend of the protagonist who he hasn't seen since he way 10, her personality is outwardly happy but she hides a few secrets behind her smiles, I would like her only covered quickly though since I want the readers to feel the mystery of the character as she WILL be important later in the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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the other things I want covered is a visit to 'Green Horn Bar' the bar that the protagonists mom gets drunk at. I would like the protagonist to help an innocent chick that is being taken advantage of by the patrons of the bar this could be a good spot also to introduce Merissa I guess. the green horn bar reeks of alcohol and is usually full of shady people.&lt;br /&gt;
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anything else is left to your imagination, be as gory in description as you wish go nuts :P --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 15:16, 10 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, every time I issue a warning about the category, I think about just creating a template instead of re-typing it.  Maybe next time I'll do that. Next time is likely to be soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 1 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hey, uhh ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Are you like a moderator of some sorts now? I've noticed you having a higher amount of activity than most other users, with many of your recent changes just categorizing page after page. Whether you are or not, I'd like to say good job! Someone needed to help Platypus with all the maintenance of the site. Heyoeveryone 07:24, 8 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Now I've been thinking, would it be a good idea if make [[R: Try to remember who you are|this page]] and the pages after it into a new story (I'd call it a new Chapter). I'm thinking of naming this 'Chapter 2' or 'Remember: Escape'. I am doing this because I was originally going to make it three parts, 'Remember' , 'Remember: The Waiting', then 'Remember: Escape'. If the story was popular, I would do a 'Remember: Epilogue' section as well.  Why am I telling you this? Well, I need another persons opinion on it, and with the amount of stories that you've read, your opinion is more influential than others. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 04:59, 16 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I asked you because you were one of the only two people who would reply to my question in less than 24hrs (the other being Platypus). Anyway, thanks for your reply. Have fun doing what ever you do! --Heyoeveryone 06:14, 17 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi. Thanks for fixing up my spelling/grammar there and (I'm guessing) reading. :) I am not sure how I totally missed that error. -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt Devonin]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Found it! I'm ''pretty'' sure. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, I think I found your upcoming project. [[Bloodsport:Menu|Noonegetstoseewhat'sherebecauseit'satitleandntoinmyplacetorevealthetitlebutdon'tclickoonitanyway.]]. It's not shitty at all, by the way. Great introduction. Myself, I prefer to just throw someone into the fray with only a description of who they are. Reckon I should change that. Good job on finishing everything though. Just make another page so no one can seee it through the special pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, great job, hope you can finish it so... wait, I think putting the link over there kinda takes it out of the orphaned bit. Well, I'll go search for the other part then. Figure it should be the Elderpedia. Hmmm...&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 04:01, 21 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I found the other bit then.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Elderpedia:Bloodsport. (Story)|Thisisevenmorerevealingsonooneelsegetstotouchthis.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The page has only been acessed 5 times and several are probably you typing more, so, 1 other person?--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 04:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Small Request...  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi TheElderOnes,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd like to make a teensy request that you refrain from editing my half-written pages (even to add the category) for at least an hour or two to give me time to finish it and add it myself. (If I haven't done it after an hour or two, something must have come up to pull me AFK).&lt;br /&gt;
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I mainly ask because you just edited a page I was writing and since I couldn't copy/paste to merge the two (or find any other way to merge them aside from rewriting or c/p) I ended up having to rewrite the whole thing, very slowly, even though after I'd have saved it, it would have had the category added... ^^&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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I have to occasionally save pages early/before finishing cause I either forget something I need on the previous page, or, do it just in case my phone crashes (which it likes to do from time to time) so I don't lose everything. Especially on longer pages. And by doing it on my phone it takes me a bit longer to type pages than it would if I had a keyboard.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not bothered or anything, I've lost whole pages before due to my phone crashing so the fact that I could save this one after I wrote it a way I was sorta happy with was good. I just thought I'd toss the request out there to save me having to do this too often... ^^&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you, -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 07:36, 26 December 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The life of a medieval princess ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Started writing again after a bit of a break, too busy with work ^^&lt;br /&gt;
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btw, I think I noticed a major error in my spelling/grammatica&lt;br /&gt;
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I always use 's and recently heard sometimes it's supposed to be s'&lt;br /&gt;
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like :&lt;br /&gt;
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the boy's car / the boys' car&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't really know when exactly to use s' tho. Best guess so far : after names and plurals.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dunno if its really something important either so I figured I'd ask.&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S.: I read bloodsport, its still only a beginning, but it didn't sound half bad. I think it might be an interesting read once its finished.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==deleteme==&lt;br /&gt;
I understand what you're trying to do by tagging pages with the deleteme category, but categorizing those pages actually makes them stand out less for me.  They're much easier to spot when they're uncategorized. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:42, 27 March 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Bloodsport.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, I'm glad to hear you like Naomi and Jack so far. Any feedback on Jack specifically would be helpful, since I'm not used to writing teenage males. By the way, if you see any typos/grammar errors in any of my pages, feel free to correct them. I write on my phone and it's sometimes impossible to scroll through an input box. &lt;br /&gt;
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I'd really like to see you continue Marissa and Bloodsport. Her story stopped before any blood was spilled.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You feel your heart jump into your throat. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Miss Anderson is dead?&amp;quot; you tentatively ask.&lt;br /&gt;
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The athlete nods and slumps her friends over her shoulder. She wanders off with Stephanie, probably going to the school nurse.&lt;br /&gt;
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Other students pour out of room 502. None of them want to be in the same room as a dead body. You head inside to see if you can help your English teacher.&lt;br /&gt;
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The desks are all shoved toward the edges of the room in a circle, as are crumpled homework assignments. You go up to your apparently deceased teacher's desk.&lt;br /&gt;
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There is a distinct lack of a body, however. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;...wha...&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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''This isn't a prank, is it?'' you think. ''Can Stephanie faint on command? I don't think so.''&lt;br /&gt;
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You turn your head to the door and call your classmates. &amp;quot;Um, Miss Anderson isn't in here.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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The words come out too soft for them to hear.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just above your head, a loudspeaker booms over your head. Frightened badly, you jump backwards and land on your rear.&lt;br /&gt;
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The voice is feminine and regal, yet subtly unpleasant. '''&amp;quot;This is your assistant principal. I have a grave announcement to make.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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A chill runs down your spine.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;Someone in this school is a murderer. I can't tell who, or why, but someone here is out to kill you. Please, secure yourself and your fellow classmates until security may be brought in to root them out.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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About ten students rush back into your class. The final student is the teacher's assistant, Monique Delaney. She locks the door from the inside, and two boys help her barricade it with a large cabinet.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSTellMoni|Tell Monique that Miss Anderson's body is gone.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSAskDoor|Ask how secure the door is]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSQuiet|Wait for Monique to speak]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=Room 502 |Character=Naomi S|Health=Terrified|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You feel your heart jump into your throat.   &amp;quot;Miss Anderson is dead?&amp;quot; you tentatively ask.  The athlete nods and slumps her friends over her shoulder. She wanders off with Stepha…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You feel your heart jump into your throat. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Miss Anderson is dead?&amp;quot; you tentatively ask.&lt;br /&gt;
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The athlete nods and slumps her friends over her shoulder. She wanders off with Stephanie, probably going to the school nurse.&lt;br /&gt;
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Other students pour out of room 502. None of them want to be in the same room as a dead body. You head inside to see if you can help your English teacher.&lt;br /&gt;
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The desks are all shoved toward the edges of the room in a circle, as are crumpled homework assignments. You go up to your apparently deceased teacher's desk.&lt;br /&gt;
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There is a distinct lack of a body, however. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;...wha...&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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''This isn't a prank, is it?'' you think. ''Can Stephanie faint on command? I don't think so.''&lt;br /&gt;
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You turn your head to the door and call your classmates. &amp;quot;Um, Miss Anderson isn't in here.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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The words come out too soft for them to hear.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just above your head, a loudspeaker booms over your head. Frightened badly, you jump backwards and land on your rear.&lt;br /&gt;
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The voice is feminine and regal, yet subtly unpleasant. '''&amp;quot;This is your assistant principal. I have a grave announcement to make.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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A chill runs down your spine.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;Someone in this school is a murderer. I can't tell who, or why, but someone here is out to kill you. Please, secure yourself and your fellow classmates until security may be brought in to root them out.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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About ten students rush back into your class. The final student is the teacher's assistant, Monique Delaney. She locks the door from the inside, and two boys help her barricade it with a large cabinet.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSTellMoni|Tell Monique that Miss Anderson's body is gone.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSAskDoor|Ask how secure the door is]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSQuiet|Wait for Monique to speak]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=Room 502 |Character=Naomi S|Health=Terrified|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Sennen:&amp;#32;Created page with '''It's just a scraped knee. I'll be okay.'' you think. ''Even if I'd like to put off class a little longer...''  You shake your head. No excuses.  You're a big girl, you can face…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;''It's just a scraped knee. I'll be okay.'' you think. ''Even if I'd like to put off class a little longer...''&lt;br /&gt;
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You shake your head. No excuses.  You're a big girl, you can face the teacher. Favoring your scraped leg, you shuffle over to your class. The sting dissipates after a few steps.&lt;br /&gt;
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Out of nowhere, the light of the sun starts to dim. Panicking, you search the sky for that comforting light, even though you know you shouldn't.&lt;br /&gt;
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The sky turns black. The sun goes dark along with it, minus even the ring of light that comes with an eclipse. ''This isn't natural.''&lt;br /&gt;
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A cold breeze hits the back of your neck, giving you goosebumbs. The air starts to become heavy, and you breathe it in short, ragged gasps.&lt;br /&gt;
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The blood in your veins feels icy. Your heart starts pumping faster.&lt;br /&gt;
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As suddenly as it began, the color returns to the world, and your body is warm again.&lt;br /&gt;
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You stand there for a minute, stunned.&lt;br /&gt;
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The slam of a door ahead of you startles you. Ten feet ahead is your class, and it was your classroom door you heard. You walk towards room 502&lt;br /&gt;
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A tall athletic blond girl whose name you can't remember jumps out, along with a mousy brown haired girl named Stephanie. They turn to you in sync.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Miss Anderson...&amp;quot; Stephanie says, shaking badly.&lt;br /&gt;
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You freeze. &amp;quot;What happened to Miss Anderson?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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The shaking girl collapses. Her friend immediately drops to her side. The stronger blonde pulls Stephanie into her arms. &lt;br /&gt;
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While lifting her friend, the blonde says to you, &amp;quot;Miss Anderson started to shake, and scream, and she just...&amp;quot; The girl mumbles the next part. &amp;quot;she wasn't breathing, no pulse. Miss Anderson just died.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSCarry|Offer to carry Stephanie to the nurse]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportNaomiSCheck|Check on Miss Anderson]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Hallway |Character=Naomi S|Health=Terrified|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Hey, just dropping in to say that I'm so goddamned happy that someone else has taken an interest in Bloodsport. After going through the pages you've created so far, I wanted to note that I'm liking Naomi and Jack's stories. I honestly had a lot planned and pre-written for Marissa, but I started to lose motivation when I felt like nobody was reading it. And then I log on and see that someone has started not one, but two new characters? I applaud you, sir. I applaud you. Perhaps now I'll get some serious work done on miss Proppes... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:13, 31 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure if I should reply here or on your page (I'm new to wikis and editthis), but I'm glad to hear you like the characters I added. Honestly,  I'm kinda surprised no one else added on to this CYOA. I'd love to see Marissa continued! &lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You have no choice but to do as she commands, as you are no longer in control.  Despite being unable to actually do anything, you spend the entire walk to the football field mentally resisting your possession. This of course fails, only increasing your level of panic. Outwardly it doesn't show. She controls even your breathing. The feeling of someone other than you pushing air through your lungs is extremely unsettling at best.&lt;br /&gt;
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Before long, you arrive at the grassy field. Once there, the woman in white relinquishes control. You fall on your knees, coughing. Your heart and lungs protest against the abuse inflicted by that crazy woman.&lt;br /&gt;
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Said crazy woman then vanishes. &lt;br /&gt;
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A redheaded boy just in front of you, named John, snaps around. His face is contorted in terror.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Did Erin...summon her?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You tell him, &amp;quot;I'm sure of it. She was chanting. Miss Grey disappeared. Then that woman kills her when she tries to reverse her spell. You saw.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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John braces himself, and shiveres. &amp;quot;I thought you were lying.&amp;quot; He laughs bitterly. &amp;quot;I thought I heard you shout something incriminating-sounding before Miss Grey went poof, but there isn't any mistaking what just happened.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Given what you've just seen, you shrug. The woman clearly has some kind of magic. Only an idiot would deny it.&lt;br /&gt;
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You and John jump when a loudspeaker interrupts your thoughts.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;I've been studying your country's bloody history. So many wars in such a short existence. I find it fascinating. &amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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For a brief moment, all the students begin talking at once.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''&amp;quot;SILENCE!'''&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
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''Definitely not an office worker.''&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;'''I particularly like the ones you call World Wars.&amp;quot;''' She pauses. &lt;br /&gt;
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The next statement and the giddiness in her tone leaves you floored.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;'''You are going to reenact them for me, children.&amp;quot;'''&lt;br /&gt;
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You shout back at the disembodied voice, &amp;quot;Are you nuts?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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However, the grass underneath your feet shifts, and you are plunged downward towards the earth. Through it, about six feet down.&lt;br /&gt;
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In your hands is a rifle.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackS1a|Peek over the top of the ditch]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[BloodsportJackS1b|Stay put and process what just happened.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Bloodsport.|Location=The Trenches|Character=Jack S|Health=Fine|Kills=N/A}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Bloodsport.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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