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Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 01:20:01 GMT

Masterdill22:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

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I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

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I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

Broadsides

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 01:14:04 GMT

Masterdill22:

You rip open the King's seal and read the letter...

"You have been selected as part of the draft to join the Royal Navy, please present yourself on Monday, noon, to your local port for further administration. Sincerely, King Edward III"

Well, well, looks like you have just been recruited into the Navy! Congratulations Mr. ... um... What exactly is your last name?.....

*[[Brown|Brown, the rich and noble]]
*[[Kenway|Kenway, the shady thiefs]]
*[[La'Burge|La'Burge, the intelligent politicians]]
*[[Patton|Patton, vetern sailors]]
*[[Myrick|Myrick, royalty and leadership]]
*[[All these names suck...]]
[[Category:Broadsides]]

Kenway

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 01:09:21 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes. You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure. …'

You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes. You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure.

(note: i would provide back ground to your city in but it is not important for you are going to leave soon anyway)

As you walk up the port you see a line with quite a few sailors. At the front of the line, where the wooden dock starts off into the water, you see a Recruitment Officer at a wooden table taking up names and assigning people into their positions. You take your spot at the end of the line and wait until you are next. When you approach you offer the letter from the king and the officer looks up at you, "Name?". In which you reply, "Mr. Kenway"

The officer smirks, "Rotten group... don't think you've ''earned'' your wealth" and writes your name down onto the list. "You are assigned to the Frigate Defender, you will find the ship at the end of the dock on the left... Next" You take a deep breath and head down towards the end where a decorated Captain awaits you. Upon nearing him he looks you down and says "You're the last one... get on board and I'll tell you the run down"

The Captain seems somewhat stern but battle-hardened, as you go to board the vessel you get a good look at it. The ships beautiful with what looks like a fresh polish added to it. The sails are snow white and you can clearly make out the transcript writing of "The Defender" on the front of the ship. When you board, you stand on the deck along with the other 3 recruits. The Captain gives out the orders to the rest of the crew to leave port and make sail. As they hurry, the captain turns and looks at the lot of you. "Hm... My name is Captain Pearl and if you will, follow me to your quarters. Along the way I will tell you how things are done on this ship."

[[Follow the captain]]

[[Tell the captain to shut up]]

Brown

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 01:05:29 GMT

Masterdill22:

You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes. You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure.

(note: i would provide back ground to your city in but it is not important for you are going to leave soon anyway)

As you walk up the port you see a line with quite a few sailors. At the front of the line, where the wooden dock starts off into the water, you see a Recruitment Officer at a wooden table taking up names and assigning people into their positions.
You take your spot at the end of the line and wait until you are next. When you approach you offer the letter from the king and the officer looks up at you, "Name?". In which you reply, "Mr. Brown"

The officer cracks a smile, "Noble family you are, glad to have you" and writes your name down onto the list. "You are assigned to the Frigate Defender, you will find the ship at the end of the dock on the left... Next" You take a deep breath and head down towards the end where a decorated Captain awaits you. Upon nearing him he looks you down and says "You're the last one... get on board and I'll tell you the run down"

The Captain seems somewhat stern but battle-hardened, as you go to board the vessel you get a good look at it. The ships beautiful with what looks like a fresh polish added to it. The sails are snow white and you can clearly make out the transcript writing of "The Defender" on the front of the ship.
When you board, you stand on the deck along with the other 3 recruits. The Captain gives out the orders to the rest of the crew to leave port and make sail. As they hurry, the captain turns and looks at the lot of you. "Hm... My name is Captain Pearl and if you will, follow me to your quarters. Along the way I will tell you how things are done on this ship."

Do you:

[[Tell the captain to shut up]]

[[Follow the captain]]

Tell the captain to shut up

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 01:02:54 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'The Captain abruptly stops and turns to look at you... 'What did you say?' You swallow and speak up. "I told you to shut up, I dont wanna be here, and I sure as hell am not going…'

The Captain abruptly stops and turns to look at you... 'What did you say?'
You swallow and speak up. "I told you to shut up, I dont wanna be here, and I sure as hell am not going to serve under the Royal Navy when they haven't done me any good."

The captain smirks and the other recruits slink away... "Where would you serve? Hm?... Just look at you... You probably still live with your parents! Your lucky you had this chance, but you blew it." He starts to laugh and motions for you to be thrown off.

Some of the crew wrestle you over the ship. As you fall you can hear the captain, "Hm, i thought we had 4 recruits?" and a distant murmur of disagreement from a few voices...

'''You have died'''

[[Broadsides|Restart?]]

Tell the Captain to shut up

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 00:59:23 GMT

The Captain abruptly stops and turns to look at you... 'What did you say?'

You swallow and speak up. "I told you to shut up, I dont wanna be here, and I sure as hell am not going to serve under the Royal Navy when they haven't done me any good."

The captain smirks and the other recruits slink away... "Where would you serve? Hm?... Just look at you... You probably still live with your parents! Your lucky you had this chance, but you blew it." He starts to laugh and motions for you to be thrown off.

Some of the crew wrestle you over the ship. As you fall you can hear the captain, "Hm, i thought we had 4 recruits?" and a distant murmur of disagreement from a few voices...

'''You have died'''

[[Broadsides|Restart?]]

Brown

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 00:51:19 GMT

Masterdill22:

You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes. You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure.

(note: i would provide back ground to your city in but it is not important for you are going to leave soon anyway)

As you walk up the port you see a line with quite a few sailors. At the front of the line, where the wooden dock starts off into the water, you see a Recruitment Officer at a wooden table taking up names and assigning people into their positions.
You take your spot at the end of the line and wait until you are next. When you approach you offer the letter from the king and the officer looks up at you, "Name?". In which you reply, "Mr. Dick"

The officer cracks a smile and writes your name down onto the list. "You are assigned to the Frigate Defender, you will find the ship at the end of the dock on the left. Next" You take a deep breath and head down towards the end where a decorated Captain awaits you. Upon nearing him he looks you down and says "You're the last one... get on board and I'll tell you the run down"

The Captain seems somewhat stern but battle-hardened, as you go to board the vessel you get a good look at it. The ships beautiful with what looks like a fresh polish added to it. The sails are snow white and you can clearly make out the transcript writing of "The Defender" on the front of the ship.
When you board, you stand on the deck along with the other 3 recruits. The Captain gives out the orders to the rest of the crew to leave port and make sail. As they hurry the captain turns and looks at the lot of you. "Hm... My name is Captain Pearl and if you will, follow me to your quarters. Along the way I will tell you how things are run on this ship."

Do you:

[[Tell the captain to shut up]]

[[Follow the captain]]

Brown

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 00:50:03 GMT

You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes. You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure.

(note: i would provide back ground to your city in but it is not important for you are going to leave soon anyway)

As you walk up the port you see a line with quite a few sailors. At the front of the line, where the wooden dock starts off into the water, you see a Recruitment Officer at a wooden table taking up names and assigning people into their positions.
You take your spot at the end of the line and wait until you are next. When you approach you offer the letter from the king and the officer looks up at you, "Name?". In which you reply, "Mr. Dick"

The officer cracks a smile and writes your name down onto the list. "You are assigned to the Frigate Defender, you will find the ship at the end of the dock on the left. Next" You take a deep breath and head down towards the end where a decorated Captain awaits you. Upon nearing him he looks you down and says "You're the last one... get on board and I'll tell you the run down"

The Captain seems somewhat stern but battle-hardened, as you go to board the vessel you get a good look at it. The ships beautiful with what looks like a fresh polish added to it. The sails are snow white and you can clearly make out the transcript writing of "The Defender" on the front of the ship.
When you board, you stand on the deck along with the other 3 recruits. The Captain gives out the orders to the rest of the crew to leave port and make sail. As they hurry the captain turns and looks at the lot of you. "Hm... My name is Captain Pearl and if you will, follow me to your quarters. Along the way I will tell you how things are run on this ship."

Do you:

*[[Tell the captain to shut up]]
[[Follow the captain]]

Continue, hoping you might not have to go out to sea

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 00:46:58 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'You keep on acting like an idiot and making a complete fool of yourself, god you are an idiot Mr. Dick... Why couldn't you just play along? You knew this game was about Pirates …'

You keep on acting like an idiot and making a complete fool of yourself, god you are an idiot Mr. Dick... Why couldn't you just play along?

You knew this game was about Pirates and such so why did you NOT wanna go out to sea?...

Anyway! The captain thinks you are going mentally ill and talks with his 2nd in command on what to do with you...

After a brief conversation between them they have agreed to simply throw you overboard...

Congratulations Mr. Dick!!!

'''You have died'''

[[Broadsides|Start over and actually try]]

Start puffing and make strange noises

Masterdill22 — Wed, 20 Mar 2013 00:40:55 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'The captain stares at you strangely.... "Is something wrong recruit?..... We don't tolerate non sense in our crew...." You keep making strangling and gargling noises as if you a…'

The captain stares at you strangely.... "Is something wrong recruit?..... We don't tolerate non sense in our crew...."

You keep making strangling and gargling noises as if you are undergoing some sort of weird disease.... or hysteria.

The captain now looks somewhat concerned...

[[Follow the captain|Stop being an Idiot]]
*[[continue, hoping you might not have to go out to sea]]

All these names suck...

Masterdill22 — Tue, 19 Mar 2013 21:54:56 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'Well.... What do you expect?... Inconsiderate little twat. Guess its up to me to choose for you.... Ah! We will call you Mr. Dick. Fairly reasonable, right? After all, you DID…'

Well.... What do you expect?... Inconsiderate little twat.

Guess its up to me to choose for you.... Ah! We will call you Mr. Dick. Fairly reasonable, right? After all, you DID have a chance.

Ah, where were we... Yes!

You grungily crawl out of bed that monday morning in your parent's home and slip some clothes.
You obviously brush your teeth, eat, etc. etc. and leave to start your adventure.

(note: i would provide back ground to your city in but it is not important for you are going to leave soon anyway)

As you walk up the port you see a line with quite a few sailors. At the front of the line, where the wooden dock starts off into the water, you see a Recruitment Officer at a wooden table taking up names and assigning people into their positions.

You take your spot at the end of the line and wait until you are next. When you approach you offer the letter from the king and the officer looks up at you, "Name?". In which you reply, "Mr. Dick"

The officer cracks a smile and writes your name down onto the list. "You are assigned to the Frigate ''Defender'', you will find the ship at the end of the dock on the left. Next"
You take a deep breath and head down towards the end where a decorated Captain awaits you. Upon nearing him he looks you down and says "You're the last one... get on board and I'll tell you the run down"

The Captain seems somewhat stern but battle-hardened, as you go to board the vessel you get a good look at it. The ships beautiful with what looks like a fresh polish added to it. The sails are snow white and you can clearly make out the transcript writing of "The Defender" on the front of the ship.

When you board, you stand on the deck along with the other 3 recruits. The Captain gives out the orders to the rest of the crew to leave port and make sail. As they hurry the captain turns and looks at the lot of you.
"Hm... My name is Captain Pearl and if you will, follow me to your quarters. Along the way I will tell you how things are run on this ship."

Do you:
*[[Tell the Captain to shut up]]
*[[Follow him quietly]]
*[[Start puffing and make strange noises]]

Broadsides

Masterdill22 — Tue, 19 Mar 2013 21:28:12 GMT

Masterdill22: Created page with 'You rip open the King's seal and read the letter... "You have been selected as part of the draft to join the Royal Navy, please present yourself on Monday, noon, to your local p…'

You rip open the King's seal and read the letter...

"You have been selected as part of the draft to join the Royal Navy, please present yourself on Monday, noon, to your local port for further administration. Sincerely, King Edward III"

Well, well, looks like you have just been recruited into the Navy! Congratulations Mr. ... um... What exactly is your last name?.....

*[[Brown]]
*[[Kenway]]
*[[La'Burge]]
*[[Patton]]
*[[Myrick]]
*[[All these names suck...]]