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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Also */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
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=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
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I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help with links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Uuuummmm........ Platypus i need help i dont know how to make the words links please help&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks platypus ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Your the best so whatcha want to talk about (sorry im a horrible conversation starter ohh i think thats why i dont get dates)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Editing is fun ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Im editing right now SO MUCH FUN thanks for teaching me platypus&lt;br /&gt;
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== Items ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey um how do you make items for people to add to there inventory in the storys&lt;br /&gt;
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== Also ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How do i get a story from that pit to the main i added more then 10 pages to it but its still in the pit&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 20:23:39 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Items */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
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=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
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I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Help with links ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Uuuummmm........ Platypus i need help i dont know how to make the words links please help&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks platypus ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Your the best so whatcha want to talk about (sorry im a horrible conversation starter ohh i think thats why i dont get dates)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Editing is fun ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Im editing right now SO MUCH FUN thanks for teaching me platypus&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Items ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hey um how do you make items for people to add to there inventory in the storys&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 20:21:36 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Turn yourself in</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Turn_yourself_in</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You die  Thanks for playing'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You die&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for playing&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 20:19:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Turn_yourself_in</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Face the consequences</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Face_the_consequences</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;Created page with 'You get thrown in jail for the rest of your life  Thanks for playing'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You get thrown in jail for the rest of your life&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for playing&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:18:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Face_the_consequences</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Try to kill him</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Try_to_kill_him</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;Created page with 'He kills you    Thanks for playing'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;He kills you &lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for playing&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:17:39 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Try_to_kill_him</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Editing is fun */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Help with links ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Uuuummmm........ Platypus i need help i dont know how to make the words links please help&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks platypus ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Your the best so whatcha want to talk about (sorry im a horrible conversation starter ohh i think thats why i dont get dates)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Editing is fun ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Im editing right now SO MUCH FUN thanks for teaching me platypus&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:16:30 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fight them yourself</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Fight_them_yourself</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;Created page with 'U destroy 4 of them the other gets away   Yoda comes out and says &amp;quot;what happened MURDERER &amp;quot; he starts running   You  try to kill him  face the consecunsius'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;U destroy 4 of them the other gets away &lt;br /&gt;
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Yoda comes out and says &amp;quot;what happened MURDERER &amp;quot; he starts running &lt;br /&gt;
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You&lt;br /&gt;
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[[try to kill him]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[face the consecunsius]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:15:31 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Fight_them_yourself</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Call master yoda to help</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Call_master_yoda_to_help</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;Created page with '&amp;quot;HELP YODA PLEASE&amp;quot;  While you yell the droids shoot you and you die   Thank you for playing'&lt;/p&gt;
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While you yell the droids shoot you and you die&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for playing&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:11:40 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Call_master_yoda_to_help</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Thanks platypus */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Help with links ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Uuuummmm........ Platypus i need help i dont know how to make the words links please help&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Thanks platypus ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Your the best so whatcha want to talk about (sorry im a horrible conversation starter ohh i think thats why i dont get dates)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 19:06:38 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Help with links */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help with links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Uuuummmm........ Platypus i need help i dont know how to make the words links please help&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 17:46:48 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Thanks keep in contact */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks keep in contact ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Ok thank you platypus i just woke up and ill read it and ill most likly get stumped multibule times thanks keep in contact&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 17:39:04 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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&lt;div&gt;Hello im lord vader all jedi will die MMMUUUUHHHHH *cough* hi please feel free to talk to me&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord vader:&amp;#32;/* Hi platypus im new */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.&lt;br /&gt;
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=Missing category=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about that, still new at this.  Thanks for the fix. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a &amp;quot;grammar nazi&amp;quot; --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Article Tags=&lt;br /&gt;
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I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Hello, Platypus!=&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello again Platypus!&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.&lt;br /&gt;
I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)&lt;br /&gt;
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=Whose adventure?=&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hi platypus im new ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi platypus im new here and everyone is saying u help us out So any advice or anything&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 May 2011 07:27:54 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord vader</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Platypus</comments>		</item>
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