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Chase after Ellie

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:39:57 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

You follow ellie into the mobile home jut in time to hear her ask whos the jerk just as a man in a white suit and a straw hat walks up from the kitchen he simles cunningly my name is john hammond you both look wide eyed recognizing him as the financier of the site allan comes in and shakes his hand hammond smiles delighted to meet you all he gets to the point why he came I need dc expert minds and oppinions or my latest project its going to be a theme park of sorts as well as a biological preserve alla looks on what kind of park is this hammond replies well its rght up your alley ellie and allan look at each other well this isnt the right time to which he replies well how bout if I finance the dig for another 3 years you all havea jaw drop moment ellie replies so wheres the plane hammond smiles and looks over at you your welcome to join us ofcourse could use as many people as I can get

[[ im in]]

[[Ill consider it]]

[[Category: Jurassic Park Adventure]]

Chase after Ellie

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:39:14 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'You follow ellie into the mobile home jut in time to hear her ask whos the jerk just as a man in a white suit and a straw hat walks up from the kitchen he simles cunningly my nam…'

You follow ellie into the mobile home jut in time to hear her ask whos the jerk just as a man in a white suit and a straw hat walks up from the kitchen he simles cunningly my name is john hammond you both look wide eyed recognizing him as the financier of the site allan comes in and shakes his hand hammond smiles delighted to meet you all he gets to the point why he came I need dc expert minds and oppinions or my latest project its going to be a theme park of sorts as well as a biological preserve alla looks on what kind of park is this hammond replies well its rght up your alley ellie and allan look at each other well this isnt the right time to which he replies well how bout if I finance the dig for another 3 years you all havea jaw drop moment ellie replies so wheres the plane hammond smiles and looks over at you your welcome to join us ofcourse could use as many people as I can get
[[ im in]]

[[Ill consider it]]

[[Category: Jurassic Park Adventure]]

Alert saddler and grant of the intrusion

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:16:37 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

You race over to them as they were unearthing the latest find there screaming about getting everything covered and ellie is furious storming off toward the mobile home

[[Chase after Ellie]]

[[Help cover the bones and equiptment]]

[[Category: Jurrasic Park Adventure]]

Alert saddler and grant of the intrusion

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:15:18 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Alert saddler and grant of the intrusion

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:15:01 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Alert saddler and grant of the intrusion

Geoffreyatln — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 17:13:06 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'You race over to them as they were unearthing the latest find there screaming about getting everything covered and ellie is furious storming off toward the mobile home [[Chase a…'

You race over to them as they were unearthing the latest find there screaming about getting everything covered and ellie is furious storming off toward the mobile home

[[Chase after her]]

[[Help cover the bones and equiptment]]

[[Category Jurrasic Park Adventure]]

Follow grant and saddler to the mobile home

Geoffreyatln — Sun, 20 Sep 2015 00:14:27 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Instinctively you want to give whoever did ths a piece of your mind so you follow the pair inside unknowingly he was already thee waitung the man looked kinda elderly but beams with a smile his distinctive straw hat and white clothes and cane say loudly you could trust him and seconds before u could say anything ellie starts acting angry ok whos the jerk my names john hammond he replies she stops dead in her tracks then you remember this Is the guy behind most of the funding here you just take a step back and look on oh your mr.hammond you say kinda embarrassed he smiles uh yes as you all know I am the funder of the site I am very much interested in maybe refunding alans ears perk up at that then he cntinues however I need expert opinions on my latestet project its a theme park or rather a biological preserve of sorts he gives a half smile and alan interjects what kind of park are you talking about and why would you need our expert advice hammond smiles well you see Its not a ordinary park or zoo its right up your alleys he looks over at you your welcome as well he says I coud use as many paleotoligests and paleobontanists as I can get you remark well im still in traininng but hammond insists anyway he continues its just going to be for the weekend ofcourse soo im sure I can fit in a extra person then alan and ellie look at each other well we dont know we just got a discovery and the timings off hammond resmiles holdin his checkbook when I said id fund your group Id put in for another 3 years you and grant and ellie just gasp wide eyed did he just say that ellie then says a litte overjoyed so wheres the plane

[[Looks like im in]]

[[Ive got work to do here]]

[[Category: Jurassic Park Adventure]]

Follow grant and saddler to the mobile home

Geoffreyatln — Sun, 20 Sep 2015 00:10:28 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Follow grant and saddler to the mobile home

Geoffreyatln — Sun, 20 Sep 2015 00:08:57 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Follow grant and saddler to the mobile home

Geoffreyatln — Sun, 20 Sep 2015 00:02:02 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Instinctively you want to give whoever did ths a piece of your mind so you follow the pair inside unknowingly he was already thee waitung the man looked kinda elderly but beams w…'

Assistant to dr.s Grant and Saddler

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 17:44:38 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Synopsis: its 1993 the desert heat wind can be felt coming over the badlands you stay cool as a cucumber with a bottle water in your hand and a hat on as you along with dr.s gran…'

Synopsis: its 1993 the desert heat wind can be felt coming over the badlands you stay cool as a cucumber with a bottle water in your hand and a hat on as you along with dr.s grant and saddler are overlooking the latest find on the computer you gaze off thinking how lucky you are you got picked out of hundreds to train with mentors like grant and saddler out of the local mntanna college you always had a passion for things dinosaur and primeval it makes your heart race now seeing such a find and that its perfectly preserved you kinda share the same optimisim that ellie has so naturally you look up to her as for grant you stare over and see him tornenting a kid with a rptor razor for lacking respect and you just shake your head you know grant means well but sometimes since living around em for a month you see grant as someone able to relate more to the bones in the groundthan people but the thought is momentarily ruined when you hear overhead loud buzzing and grant and ellie start to scream about seuring the lines and tarps. Ellie is just beside herself that someone would fly in this close to a excavation site

[[Aid in covering up the bones]]

[[Run over to the chopper]]

[[Follow grant and saddler to the mobile home]]

Assistant to dr.Ian mallcom

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 16:45:33 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Synopsis: its 1993 the room is dark with intrigue as everyone listens to ian malcom go over his lstest theroy you ofcourse stay memsmerized you know his voice isnt exactly michea…'

Synopsis: its 1993 the room is dark with intrigue as everyone listens to ian malcom go over his lstest theroy you ofcourse stay memsmerized you know his voice isnt exactly micheal jackson or elton john for that matter but there he is acting like a rockstar and with such pride you just stare into his hypnotic eyes and it doesnt help when he plays like a wannabe playboy and also the fact hes dating someone sarah something you think on it oh yea harding but you fantasize and keep it to yourself as you mannage following his speech notes incase he forgets a word you do wonder why you became his assistant in the first place your not realy in it for the math but helping him does give oppurtunities and course credit since math wasnt a strong suit but while your dazed over you hear the auditorium doors swing open and a man in a white suit and straw hat come limping down to greet malcom you get intrigued

[[Go over to them]]

[[Watch from where your seated]]

[[Look over the speeh notes not paying attention]]

Secretary to mr.Genero

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 16:21:02 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Synopsis: its 1993 your taking in the scenery at your desk the smell of wool and linen suits the stucco wallpaper the smell from your cu of coffee your a bonified secretary and l…'

Synopsis: its 1993 your taking in the scenery at your desk the smell of wool and linen suits the stucco wallpaper the smell from your cu of coffee your a bonified secretary and legal documents is your life sure you like to get all dolled up and wih you could make the partner permossion but for now you just sit back and enjoy working for the office golden boy genero and yea secrtly you kind of have fantasized working late but youd never try to make a move its just not office respectable you look over your files and notice one missplaced huh isnt this the agrievance sheets from that new account were tryng to land yea you look at the ompany labeled on it yep ingen innovative genetics or engineered genetics you dont really care you place it in the appropriate folder as a man in a sharp suit enters the office his glasses and demeanor give off a sense of saying wealth maried power you see hes holding a manilla folder and a file folder heading straight for mr.Generos office

[[Address the man]]

[[Continue filling]]

[[call out to him before he opens the door]]

Best friend of Alexis murphy

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 16:01:56 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Synopsis: its 1993 your leaving class for the afternoon the feeling of friday overwhelmes you as your gathering your bag and purse your b best friend lex is walking your way you …'

Synopsis: its 1993 your leaving class for the afternoon the feeling of friday overwhelmes you as your gathering your bag and purse your b best friend lex is walking your way you quickly stop to gossip to her hey lex you say lex smiles oh hey howd that test go oh not bad but you smirk ofcourse im not you who could you quickly look around ahem hack my grades if I tried lex gives a sharp look but laughs so you wanna check out the mall maybe hit a arcade oh computer wiz lex glares very funny but no she pouts I have somthing up this weekend you look puzzeled like what lex oh like I have a weekend trip with my grandpa and my little brother oh you say does sund boring you wink mayyybee if I could gooo with you smirk lex looks at you and smiles you know thatsva great idea then it should be fun could you go?

[[You kidding in a heartbeat]]

[[Well I should check with my folks]]

[[I was just kidding lex]]

User talk:Platypus

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 15:43:17 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 15:41:29 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

Best friend of timmy murphy

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 15:07:27 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

Synopsis: its 1993 the dull classroom lecture was making you want to pass out even for elmentary level you kinda hope the lunch bell would ring soon you think on the fact its friday and the weekend ahead will be great though you normally do stuff alone atleast until the day you met your best friend timmy speaking of which hes waving over at you from across the room then the bell finally rings and as you head to the cafeteria timmy starts happily talking bout having a weekend with his grandpa and he asks because he know how boring wekends are at your house if you want to sleep over and go with him itd be fun tim says as your staring off thinking of getting away for the weekend

[[Awesome tim I wanna go]]

[[Ill might need to run it by my folks]]

[[I dont know tim]]

Best friend of timmy murphy

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 15:03:09 GMT

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Clerk of mr.genero's firm

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 14:50:14 GMT

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Synopsis: its 1993 and your work was always precise you never once wanted adventure or leave a city infact the sound outdoors makes you get asthma youd rather sit in a board room and discuss the stock market or maybe insurace rates and taxes you dont even like the fact you have been reduced to a clerk because your still young and you left a law offce you help start because of rising rate hikes and bankwruptcies but then what happens you come here and get put under the companies golden boy genero though whats laughble is the company could go under if they dont get a killing in clientele soon but then like silver lining in comes this aggrivances list directed at some company called ingen and they want genero to seal the deal and bring in the mondo bucks as they say all of a sudden you see a man in a sharp suit and glasses walk into the offices heading for generos door he brings in with him a manillia folder and a file folder

[[Address the man]]

[[Go back to refiling papers]]

[[Act casual]]

Assistant to dr.Ian malcom

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 14:35:34 GMT

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Synopsis: its 1993 your bored out of your mind up in the control box of the auditorium ian is presenting his therory to a group of people at a college and here you are making sure his slides stay up to date sometimes you wonder if I it s his voice that could put you to sleep that and it irks you that he thinks hes mcjagger of the mathmaticans society you never even bothered reading his book on chaos therory but if its as dry as the guy that wrote it then you kinda get the idea then the side doors burst open and you watch as a man in white with cane and a straw hat comes down to malcom with a few pieces of paper and there shaking hands

[[Sit back and watch them talk]]

[[Go down to them]]

[[Fall asleep of boredom]]

Assistant to dr.s Grant and saddler

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 14:19:52 GMT

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Synopsis: its 1993 and the dry desert air hangs over the bad lands you are on loan from the community college in montana its always been your dream to see a world of dinosaurs youve dreamed it since the birthday at the museum and you focusd on the exhibits with bright eyes wondring what it would be to see them alive and up close though settling for the bones being unearthed you got selected from a group as a lucky recipiant to be in training of being a paleontologiest and who better to mentor you than the world renowned Dr.Alan Grant plus theres his tenacious partner in research Dr.Saddler she always could catch your eye with her smile and optimistic attitude you wonder how could life here really change all of a sudden you hear a incoming chopper and its landing near the excavation site

[[Take a look at the chopper]]

[[Quickly cover the unearthed bones]]

[[Alert saddler and grant of the intrusion]]

FEMALE

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 14:03:56 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Ok next step who would you like to team with this is key in the story Assistant to dr.s Grant and Saddler Assistant to dr.Ian mallcom Secretary to mr.Genero [[Bes…'

Ok next step who would you like to team with this is key in the story

[[Assistant to dr.s Grant and Saddler]]

[[Assistant to dr.Ian mallcom]]

[[Secretary to mr.Genero]]

[[Best friend of Alexis murphy]]

MALE

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 13:54:58 GMT

Geoffreyatln: Created page with 'Ok now then who would you like to team with this will play key in the adventure Assistant to dr.s Grant and saddler Assistant to dr.Ian malcom [[Clerk of mr.genero's f…'

Ok now then who would you like to team with this will play key in the adventure

[[Assistant to dr.s Grant and saddler]]

[[Assistant to dr.Ian malcom]]

[[Clerk of mr.genero's firm]]

[[Best friend of timmy murphy]]

Jurassic Park Adventure

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 13:47:27 GMT

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Ok before we can begin lets get this down to basics what gender would you like to be
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|[[MALE]]
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|[[FEMALE]]

All PG-13 Stories

Geoffreyatln — Sat, 19 Sep 2015 13:43:16 GMT

Geoffreyatln:

==PG13 Stories==
'''FOR 10+:''' For more advanced readers. Please keep these G - PG-13. Please remove any content that exceeds this.
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|[[Jurassic Park Adventure]]|[[WIP]]|private|have fun eploring along side your faveorite cast during the 1993 isla nublar incident
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|[[2012]]||12||(Public)
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|[[The Sleep over]]|| WIP || public, Zach is the main story read his before editing
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|[[Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| W.I.P || private, just started Please don't edit yet!
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|[[Adventures In The Land Of Pokémon]]|| 10+ ||(Private
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|[[The Adventures of St. Pigeonations]]|| 20+ ||(Private/WIP)
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|[[TheWorld RPG]]|| 0+ ||(Private)
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|[[Wilderness Survival]]|| 0+ ||(Private, heavily WIP
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|[[A Room for 2]]|| 8+ WIP || Private, DO NOT EDIT! Please do not edit as I already have a complete plan of the story!
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|[[An Adventure]]|| 5+ ||(Public)
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|[[Adventure in the City]]|| 30||(Public)
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|[[A Superhero Adventure]]|| 10+ || Semi-Public. Only edit if you are a skilled writer who makes little to no grammatical errors.
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|[[Warrior Cats]]|| 0 || public (Private)
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|[[Adventurous adventures in adventure land]]||3||(Public)
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|[[Adventures in Aincrad]]|| 10+ || (WIP, Currently Private)
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|[[The Adventures of Connie Maheswaran (a Steven Universe CYOA )]]||3|| do not edit yet please W.I.P - private
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|[[The Adventures of Wiki High School!]]|| 3 || do not edit yet
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|[[The Adventures of Pinaria]]||4 ||Under Construction Private for now (Just started on my first Adventure.)
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|[[Adventures in Space ]]|| 40 || edit respectfully)
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|[[Aedificium Vespirtilio]]|| 34 || THIS STORY IS FINISHED. PLEASE DO NOT EDIT CONTENT
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|[[A Half-Blood Story]]|| 1+ || (WIP, Currently Private)
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|[[Airport Standoff]]||23|| (wip dont edit only me and clay)
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|[[Alone and Lost]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Alone and Lost}}+|| Edit only with my Consent
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|[[Along the Way to Town]]|| 5 || Private (for now)
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|[[The Amazing Adventure]] || 40 ||pages DO NOT EDIT!!
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|[[The American Revolution]]||38 ||(Work In Progress PLEASE DON'T EDIT)
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|[[Animal Crossing: A Story of Romance]]||WIP||Not Open At The Moment
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|[[Apocalyptic zombie attack]]|| 27 ||(Public)
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|[[At the Mall with Weevil]] || 15+ || [[User:Charlotte5|Charlotte5]] currently editing; WIP)
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|[[Atom Kid|Atom Kid (a super hero adventure)]] || 30+||(Public)
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|[[Avast!]] A Pirate Story || 180+ || WIP, contact me before editing)
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|[[Average Guy]] || 20+ ||(Public)
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|[[Axquirtel General]]|| 27+||(Public W.I.P, no typos or bad grammar)
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|[[Becoming friends with a Wild horse]]||20 ||(WIP)
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|[[Black Heart]]||3 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[The Band]]|| 9+ ||(Public)
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|[[Basic American Teen1]]||3||(Public)
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|[[A basic, normal, Create-Your-Own-Adventure]] Or '''Piano Lessons'''|| 30+||(Public)
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|[[The Battle of the Best]] || 24+ ||(Public)
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|[[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)]] || 90+ ||(Public)
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|[[The Boss]] || 35+ ||(Public)
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|[[Bravery]]|| 5+ || (WIP, please don't edit without permission)
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|[[Changed]]||1||(Public)
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|[[Character Creation]]|| 50+||(Public)
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|[[The Chosen]]|| 20+ || (WIP, please refrain from editing)
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|[[Clarity]]|| 9+|| Private, please don't edit!!
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|[[Clash of Clans: Sweet Revenge]]|| WIP || Private, DO NOT EDIT! Please do not edit as I already have a complete plan of the story!
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|[[Class Dissmissed]]||3 ||(WIP)
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|[[Classic Roguelike]]||6 ||(WIP, Please do not edit!)
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|[[The Clown]] || 50+ ||(Public)
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|[[Create your own world]]|| 6||(Public)
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|[[Crazy Fantasy Adventure]] || 15+ ||(Public)
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|[[Cross the Street]] || 11 ||(Public)
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|[[Crown of Knowledge]] || 0 ||(Private)
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|[[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)]] || 337 ||(Public)
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|[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] || 375+ ||(Public)
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|[[Crystal Spires]]|| 19||(WIP Do NOT edit)
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|[[Cyberspace Invaders]]||11 ||(Public)
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|[[Danganronpa]]||2||(Public)
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|[[DARKNESS]]|| 100+ ||(Public)
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|[[The Day]]|| 2 ||(Public)
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|[[A Day as a Hobo]] || 15+
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|[[A Day At The Races]] || 16 || completed story, do not edit)
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|[[A Day in the Life (An action adventure story)]] || 45 ||(Public)
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|[[A day in the life of a demigod]]||5 ||(Public)
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|[[Day In the Life of a Total Loser]] || 15||(Public)
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|[[ A Day In Hogwarts School ]]|| 35 || public
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|[[Day of Doom]]||10+ ||Do not edit please By Allbis.
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|[[A Day of not Dying]]|| 38 ||(Public) (Please '''DON'T''' edit without permission)
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|[[Dead Kid]] || 100+ ||(Public)
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|[[Dragon Destruction]]|| 0||(Public,Please Edit!)
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|[[Death by zombies]] || 40+||(Public)
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|[[Desperation]]|| 5 || private
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|[[Detective Ryan 1: Life Crystal]] ||13||(W.I.P) Please don't edit
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|[[Digimon Adventure 03]] || 15+||(Public)
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|[[Digimon Transverse]] || 40+||(Public)
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|[[Dirt biking in the trails]]||6 ||(WIP)
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|[[A Disney Princess for a Day]]|| 5 || (WIP, Private please)
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|[[A Distorted Reality Is Now a Necessity to Be Free]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:A Distorted Reality}} || [[User:Ultrabookworm|Ultrabookworm]] editing; contact via discussion page before editing, please
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|[[The Dog House]] || 3+||(Public)
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|[[Dr. Dero's Journey]] || 10+||(Public)
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|[[Dr. Who's Life]]|| 8+||(Public)
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|[[Dragon Ball Adventure]] || 24+||(Public)
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|[[Dragonball Z Adventure]] || 24||(DO NOT EDIT )
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|[[Dragon's Life]]||7||(Public)
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|[[Dungeon]] (A CLASSIC DUNGEON CRAWL!)||34+||(Public)
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|[[Dungeons and Dragons: Tyrrinia]] (Loosely based on D&D version 3.5)|| 14 || ('''WIP''' -- Please Do Not Edit)
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|[[Dungeons and Dragons; Your Story]]|| 0 ||(WIP and 1st story--please don't change without permission ^^)
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|[[Dungeon Master ]]||2 ||UNDER CONSTRUCTION private
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|[[Easily Random]]||20+||(Public)
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|[[Elder Fable]]||300+||(W.I.P please do not edit without permission)
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|[[Endless Possibility]]||20||(Public)
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|[[Escape]]||10+||(Public)
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|[[Escaping Beelzebub]]||16||(Public)
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|[[Element]] ||28||(Public)
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|[[Element Redux]] ||9||(Public)
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|[[Elements of the Earth]]|| 3 ||(Public), but see the [[A Guide to EOE|guide]] before editing.
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|[[ENF]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:ENF}} || Please do NOT edit. Feel free to add suggestions in the talk page.
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|[[An Epic Adventure]] || 50+ || NO EDITING PLEASE. Feel free to play!
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|[[ Escape the Complex]] || 5+ || private (please do not edit)
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|[[Evolution|Evolution (an adventure of insignificance)]] || 25+||(Public)
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|[[Evolution II]] || 20||(Public)
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|[[Faire Isle Adventure]] || 24+ || (WIP, Feel Free To Read But Please Do Not Edit)
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|[[Falling Free]] || 2 || (WIP - PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Fantasy Quest]] || 110+||(Public)
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|[[Fight for Liberty and Freedom]]||54 ||(WIP Please do not edit.)
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|[[Fire in the Skies]] || 0 ||(WIP - Please do not edit)
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|[[food chain train ]]||9||(Public)
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|[[Footsteps]]|| 4 || (Please do not edit, WIP)
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|[[Forbidden Love]]|| 0 || (WIP Please do not edit.)
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|[[Four Arches]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Four Arches}}+ || (Edit only with my Consent)PLEASE-READ
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|[[Freedom]] ||42||(Public)
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|[[Free Fall]] || 0 || (Do not edit (Will be public after I lay out the basics))
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|[[The Furr Adventure ]]|| 6+||(Public)
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|[[Genesis]] ||29||(Public)
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|[[The Ghost Strip]]|| 15|| private
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|[[Gloria]]||15||(Public)
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|[[Grasstealth]]|| 5+||(Public)
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|[[The Great Adventures of Veredin]] ||12||(WIP, Please don't edit.)
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|[[ A How to Train Your Dragon Fan Adventure]]|| 2 || Semi-Public (read rules)
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|[[Hunting again for Red October]] || 100+||(Public)
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|[[Is Hunger Your Game?]] || 50+ || DO NOT EDIT
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|[[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]] || 30+||(Public)
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|[[THE KINGDOM OF ADVENTURE!]] || 25+||(Public)
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|[[Lina Popintop's Adventure]]||10||(Work In Progress PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Livin' like a hobo]]||38||(Do not edit)
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|[[A Lotr adventure]]|| 15+ || Please don't edit without permission
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|[[LOTW]] (Choose your own Lord of the Rings)||3||(Public)
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|[[Love and fireballs]] ||58||(s'like...it's not done yet, don't edit,k?)
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|[[A Magesword's Journey]] ||4||(Public)
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|[[The many rooms]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The many rooms}}||(Public)
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|[[Mega Adventure RPG]] ||2||(Public)
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|[[The Memory Makers]]||36||(A Science Fiction game about a young man who can't remember his past. WIP--Please DO NOT Edit!)
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|[[Minotaur's Laberynth]] ||18+||(Public)
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|[[The Mirror]] ||20||(Public)
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|[[Morrowind|Morrowind (An exciting action adventure)]] ||25+
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|[[My Little Pony: Adventures is Magic]] || 7+ || (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT!)
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|[[My WWE]] ||47||(Public)
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|[[The Mysterious Facility]]|| 3|| DO NOT EDIT! Private Work!!!
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|[[The Mystical quest for Technochocolate]] ||10+||(Public)
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|[[Myth Maze]] ||1||Do not edit
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|[[Nancy's Notable Narratives]] ||39+||WIP, please don't edit!
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|[[A Normal Life]] ||5||(Public)
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|[[Naruto Dating (Girl Version)]] (Romance) ||12|| WIP, so do not edit)
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|[[Naruto Dating (Guy Version)]] (Romance) ||5||(WIP... just started, don't edit!)
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|[[Naruto's Friend, you]]||0+||(Public)
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|[[Believe It (Naruto Love Story)]] (Romance) ||5|| WIP, do not edit)
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|[[A New Exciting Adventure]] || 27||(Please do not edit)
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|[[New kid]] ||2||( under construction. Don't edit.)
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|[[Night]]||9||(Do not edit/WIP)
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|[[Niro]]||4||(Just started, please don't edit quite yet)
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|[[No more underwear]] ||5||(Public)
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|[[Of Tumbleweeds And Teenagers]] ||4||(Public)
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|[[Okami: Choose your own adventure]]|| 16 || Private DO NOT EDIT PLEASE!
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|[[The Old Sinclair Estate]]|| 3 || (WIP) (need help making chapters longer)
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|[[ The One Ring]]||10||W.I.P Do not edit or delete anything as of yet!
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|[[Orga Dies at the End]] || 0 || (WIP)
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|[[Organisation]] ||30+||WIP-DO NOT EDIT!!!!!
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|[[Organism]] ||16+|| WIP, please DO NOT EDIT, Thank you.
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|[[Pac Man VS E.C.]]||7||(Public)
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|[[A Penguin Named Evan]] ||15+||(Public)
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|[[Phoenix Wright: A new adventure]] ||25+||W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT!
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|[[Pick Pocket]]||8||(WIP Do Not Edit)
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|[[Pirates! A High Seas Adventure]]||50+||(Public)
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|[[Pirates of the Caribbean (action-adventure)]] ||50+||(Public)
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|[[Planet of the Apes]]||15+||(Public)
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|[[Pokémon]]||5||W.I.P No editing.
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|[[pokemon academy]]||wip|| dont look yet im finishing it
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|[[Pokemon Ranger: Lavender Nightmare]]||12||(Public)
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|[[My Pokemon Adventure]] ||23||(please do not edit)
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|[[Pokemon: Canatran Region Adventures!]]|| 2 || (WIP) And no Editing, Please
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|[[Pokemon Legends]]||47||(W.I.P. Don't edit)
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|[[Pokemon - Your Adventure]] ||45+||(Public)
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|[[Pokemon - Kanto Adventure]] ||5||(Public)
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|[[Prank War Introduction|Prank War]]||5||||(Public), but please remember to create the proper loop to the next character for retaliation pranks. And, no "adult" pranks.
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|[[Quest for the CANDY]] || 8||(Public)
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|[[Quest Life]]||9||(W.I.P, please don't edit)
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|[[Quest of the magician]] ||200+||(Public)
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|[[Questscape]] ||4||(W.I.P., Do not edit)
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|[[Random]]||25+||(Public)
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|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions]] ||66||Completed
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|[[A Random Day]] ||25+||(Public)
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|[[Red Mercenary]] ||10+||(Public)
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|[[ Revolt (A United States Futuristic Revolution Story)]]||5+||PLEASE DO NOT EDIT UNTIL I SAY SO)
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|[[The Scary Forest]]||2||This is my first story y'all!!! You are welcome to read, but please do not edit it.
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|[[ The Revolutionary war ]]||38||(Under construction, do not edit plz)
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|[[Rick Roll'd Adventure]] ||15||(Completed)
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|[[Rodeo Girl]]||7||(Public)
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|[[A Role]]|| 17||(Public)
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|[[Roleplay]] ||10||(Public)
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|[[The Roller coaster]]||14||(Public)
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|[[Russian Blue]]||3|| under construction by projectM1K3, no other editors atm
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|[[Ryoko the Psychic Prosecutor]] || 0 ||(work in progress, do not edit)
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|[[Sabatoge (a Star Trek: TNG adventure)]] ||10||(Public)
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|[[Sailor Moon: Adventures of the Senshi]]||4+||Underconstruction; please do not edit
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|[[Save YouTube Poop!!! ]](Definitely rated PG-13 ||15||(Public)
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|[[ Saving Twilight (An unexpected adventure)]]|| 30+ || (edit respectfully, not completed)
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|[[ School Drama]]|| 2 || Public
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|[[Second Life]]||5+||(Public)
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|[[The Secret Door]]||4|| WIP, (don't edit without permission)
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|[[The_secret_island_of_Utobi|The Secret Island of Utobi]] ||38||(Public)
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|[[Shadows of the Past]]||5+||(Public)
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|[[ Shin Megami Tensei: Persona]]|| 0 || private
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|[[Sixty Minutes]]||259||(Public)
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|[[Soap Opera producer]] || || (WIP, please don't edit for now)
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|[[Spork| Spork: An RPG]] || 100+ || third town in progress, please don't edit, put any suggestions in Spork discussion)
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|[[Star trek]] (Another adventure) || 65+||(Public)
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|[[Star Trek: Next Generation: A Q-urious Dilemma]] || WIP || You can fix any errors, but please do not edit the storyline at this time.
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|[[Star Trek: The Original Series]] ||12||(WIP, If you've seen the 60's show, you can go ahead and edit.)
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|[[Star Wars: A New Adventure]] || 17||(Public)
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|[[Star Wars: Jedi Chronicles ]] || 20+||(Public)
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|[[Star Wars: Republic]] || 26||(Public)
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|[[Stardust]]|| WIP || (Private DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Sticky Adventure]]|| 50+||(Public)
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|[[A Story About You]]|| 0 || (Don't Edit, Please! [WIP])
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|[[The Story of George Miller]] ||75||(WIP, DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Story Of My Life]] || 15||(Public)
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|[[Subject 413]] || 100+||(Public)
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|[[Superhero]] || 25+ ||(Public)
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|[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]] || 150||(Public)
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|[[Insert Title| The Supernatural World]]||10||(Under Construction, Don't Touch)
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|[[Superwhodunnit]]||3||please don't edit, at least for now
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|[[Survey]] ||40||(DO NOT EDIT!!!!)
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|[[Survival of the Colossi]] || 10+||(Public)
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|[[Surviving a Hetalia Dream]]||9||(Public)
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|[[Surviving Today]] || 20 || (it's not a lot since its only one day)(Finished!)
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|[[Survivng Today: The Traffic Jam|Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] || 35+ || Not a sequel(Finished!)
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|[[Tales from Ahtora]]|| 1 || W.I.P., Please do not edit
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|[[A Tasty Breakfast]]||20+||(Public)
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|[[Technomancer]]||11||(Work In Progress)
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|[[Teddy and Ryan's Adventure]]|| 3+ || WORK IN PROGRESS DO NOT TOUCH thank you :-])
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|[[Teehee!]] || 60+ ||||(Public)
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|[[Temple of the Forgotten]] ||1||(Public)
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|[[Temporal]]||15||(Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[The Creation]]||WIP||(PRIVATE UNTIL READY. DO NOT EDIT!!)
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|[[Time Chase]] ||39||(Public)
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|[[To Court!]] ||15 ||(W.I.P. Do not edit)
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|[[Tough Luck!]]|| 11+ || private, complete
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|[[Transylvanian terror]]||150+||(Public)
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|[[Tribute|Tribute: The Greatest and Best Quest in the World]] || 4||(Public)
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|[[The Shipping Witches]]||29|| (completed! please don't edit. for a school project.)
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|[[The Trigger And The Hilt]] (a free-roaming action game) || 20+||(Public)
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|[[To Survive]]||19+ ||(WIP, do not edit without permission)
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|[[To Kill a Salesman]] ||7||Do not edit WIP
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||[[True Dungeon]]||4|| DO NOT EDIT W.I.P
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|[[ Try Not To Die ]]|| 45 || COMPLETED; please don't edit
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|[[ Trying to Wake Up]]|| 25+||(Public)
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|[[ The Six]]||0+||(Public)
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|[[The Ultimate Battle]] ||65+||(Public)
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|[[Ultra Invasion!!!]]|| WIP || private
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|[[The Unknown...]]||9||(Public)
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|[[Vaped!]]||12||(Public)
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|[[Vampires Vs. Werewolfs]] ||7||( wip i just started and this is my first story!! so please do NOT edit... please!!!!!!!!!)
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|[[Video Game High]]||3
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|[[ The Walk]]||13||(W.I.P)
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|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||20+||(Public)
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|[[War for Transquent]]|| 6 || Private (Please contact me if you want to edit)
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|[[War of Nations]]|| 65+||(Public)
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|[[War zone]]|| 20+ ||(W.i.p)(PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Warphole]]|| 5+||(Public)
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|[[Warrior Cats!]]||3||(Public)
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|[[Warrior Cats evil]]||4|| (do not edit)
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|-[[ Warrior Cats Survival]]|| (Do NOT edit without my permission)
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|[[Warriors: Your Destiny]]||0||(W.I.P, feel free to edit!)
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|[[A Wedgie-Filled Family]]||10||(WIP Please don't edit!!!!)
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|[[What Do You Want To Do?]]||?||WIP private
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|[[What have they done?]]||20+||(Public)
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|[[What Happens In The Forest]] ||11||(Public)
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|[[Who Are You?]]||3||(Under Construction, Don't Touch)
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|[[Wibbly Wobbly Adventure]]||0||(Private, WIP)
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|[[Windy Lea Stories]]||269||(WIP, please don't edit!)
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|[[Wings of Purity]]|| 11||(Public)
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|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)|| 55+||(Public)
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|[[What Horror Story Would You Survive?]]||0||(Public)
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|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || 50+||(Public)
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|[[XMachetter, the dark figure, and the Jewel]] ||15||(Public)
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|[[You Need a Job]]||18||(Public)
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|[[You're never getting out]]||12||(Public)
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|[[Your Life]] ||14||(Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
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|[[ Your Story]]||9||(Don't Edit, Por favor, 0+ pages)
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|[[Z-Day]] ||3||(Public)
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|[[ZX1]] || 54+||(Public)
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