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Talk:War and Sex

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 04 Nov 2012 04:36:43 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

I'd like to say War and Sex is a great "Adventure" and I have created an account just so I can help continue telling this great Conan-escapade.

Cool Rev that you´ve chosen to work on this story, good start! I´ve havent worked on this in a while, althrough I thought about continuing writing, or rewritting some parts of it for some time now. However my computer spontaneously died on me so now I can´t write anything :) [[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Im really impressed by the world setting and Im a sucker for Robert E. Howard stories. I hope to fill in some of the dead links in the beginning. But I hope you and some others will add more as well. Thanks. -[[User:Rev|Rev]]

== Please continue ==

Please continue working on this story, its awesome i mean really its terrific how well this story was made so far i would love to see how all the paths end, and i would like to say good work so far to everywho worked on this it has become my favouite article on this site.

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Glad that you liked it.

I am kind of on a hiatus right now. My real life is simply to time-consuming for writing CYOA. Writing takes a lot of time for me, being dyslextic and not speaking english as my first language I must often double-check the meaning and spelling of words and such. So cranking out pages is a lot of work. That being said, it appears things are begining to loosen up. So I might get back to writing soon enough.

I really don´t know why I never spent more time on this story. It seems to be the one CYOA people like the best among my sparse work. I do have the plot planned out in my head, so that isn´t the problem. (I´m a natural ploter, pretty much inventing the whole story in my head before writing and then see what modifications happen). There´s also some things I´m not satisfied with, like never giving the King a name for instance *facepalm*.

That being said, when I return, I´ll give this story some thought and see what I come up with.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Thank you ==

Good to hear, this is the best article on this entire site, its pages are usally detailed and terricically plotted and its actually seems seriously written,.. i mean typed, not just some cheap pathic half-assed attempt at a article that alot of people post, so id have to say that in my oppion your one of the best authors, or what ever you call the people on here that post articles,on here; so thank you again for planning on working on "War and Sex" article.

== Ok its been awhile. ==

Its been some time since i last posted here. But are you still active on this site and if you are are you goin to continue working on War and Sex. Please do, It is and probably always will be my favorite story on here. -Axeace42

Well thanks for the enthusiasm. I'm still around and checking out the site daily. But with the university and work and everything else free time is basically something I see in movies nowadays (I've noticed this happening to many authors I like also, hehehe). Plus, one also tends to grow a bit weary of writing after finishing the monthly essay or spending times with friends so that the brain is more focused on social activities instead of wordplay, plot structure and how to craft the next sex scene. A story like this is so time-costly. It requires so much patience to build stuff up that it's hard to keep the discipline for an established story-arc when the mind is going off in so many different directions.

But, you know, still a plotter. I'll take a look at the story again. I'm also one of those people who are constantly critical of one's own writhing. I feel like re-writing pretty much every story I've done. So, to be frank, I'm pretty much done with being a regular contributor to the site. I'll maybe add a page from time to time. Sorry if I'm disappointing you, but that's the gist of it

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Order Manuel to face fuck Desire

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:24:05 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Order Manuel to face fuck Desire moved to Order Miguel to face fuck Desire: Changed name.

#REDIRECT [[Order Miguel to face fuck Desire]]

Order Miguel to face fuck Desire

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:24:05 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Order Manuel to face fuck Desire moved to Order Miguel to face fuck Desire: Changed name.

Being strapped down on the footstool made Desires head an easy target. If Miguel would just squat down a bit his dick would be pointing directly at her face. Miguel walks over to Desire and disposed of the ball gag in her mouth which he replaces with an O shaped muzzle. This way her mouth would always remain open when he shoved his dick into her mouth.

While standing right in front of Desire, Miguel removes his pants, you are glad you chose the biggest cock of the bunch because the expression on Desires face is priceless.

“You must have the biggest cock Desire has ever seen if she’s that intimidated by it.” You tell Miguel.

Miguel grabs Desires hair and drives his cock forward into her mouth. It reaches into the back of her throat. Using her hair as leverage Miguel starts thrusting back and forth. Every push into her mouth sends wet sounds of grunts and gags from Desire. Due to his size Desire face quickly became red with anguish. Tears travel down her cheeks from her cringing eyes which begged him to stop, but Miguel continues fucking her face like a cunt. Her pleas mean nothing to him; she’s just another mouth to stick his dick into. He even starts going faster to maximize his pleasure. Soon his balls bang against her chin as the sound of flesh slapping on to flesh fills the room. Saliva squirts out of Desires face drenching both her face and Miguel’s cock. Soon the sounds of Desires gag came so frequently that it sounded like a never-ending loop. It was the sound of a breaking point, the sound of someone choking to death. Right before Desire fainted Miguel pulled his cock out of her mouth making all the saliva flow out onto the floor.

Yin gasped at the sight of her mother’s unconscious face. it looked like shed been beaten, her face bright red and wet with saliva and tears. Then she stared at Miguel cock that looked so threatening, but also arousing in an animalistic kind of way. It was still erected and filled with her mother’s saliva. She comments what just aspired.
“W…Was that sex?”

“To your mother it was, and to you too, but not me. You and your mother are whores Yin. Your bodies are tools for men to take out their sexual aggression on. You’re not real women. Real women have relationship with their men but you are just used on them. You do not deserve, nor ever shall have an intimate relationship with a man. You will begin to love the defilement, the humiliation and submission, inflicted on you by your clients.”

Yin swallows hard at your words and continues to stare at Miguel’s cock. Although what you described wasn’t pretty she believes it full heartily. Her mother is a whore, so she is a whore. She is ready for her first client.

*[[Have Miguel fuck Yin]]

[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:22:56 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Changed name.

The other men voice their disapproval as you take Miguel by the arm and lead him into the bedroom. You give Miguel a smile and a nervous flinch. The nervousity is fake of course; you only want to get Miguel in the right mood. You know how young men work, especially the aggressive ones. They see a pretty young thing smiling nervously at them then all they want to do is fuck her.

Miguel shrugs his shoulders at his pals, disguising his delight at being chosen with a nonchalant body gesture. They see through the poor act of comradeship and continue booing on.

…………………

The moment you close the door behind you Miguel is all over you. “Fuck yea I want to fuck you baby”. He grabs your hips with his strong hands, trying to use his masculine body to impose himself on you mentally.

“Wait.” You shrugs him off and point at the other side of the room. “Miguel meet Desire, a common prostitute and her daughter Yin, an virgin.”

Desire is right were you left her, tied down on a footstool naked and in an extremely humiliating position. Desire has awoken but she decides to keep her mouth shut until she can fully grasp the situation. Stand right next to her is Yin naked and ready to fuck. Her virgin innocence is still there; she avoids eye contact but has learned not to shelter her tits and pussy.

“Miguel you have an big task ahead of you. Desire and Yin are my property.” Hearing the word property Desire shouts out an proclamation of denial. She knows where this is going; women who become property of your cult are dehumanized into mindless fuck slaves. She shouts for help and urges Yin to run away but Yin stand firm. Yin has accepted her fate as a prostitute just like her mother so she offers no resistance. You put an mouth gag on Desire just like you would to a barking dog so that she cannot interrupt you further.

“Where was I? Oh yes I want to turn Desire and Yin into the biggest mother and daughter slut couple ever to walk the planet, however Yin is still an virgin. SO I need a man, a real man, with an really big dick, kind of like yours to deflower her for me.”

By now Deisre is shaking her head back and forth in shame and denial. Right in front of her you are talking about enslaving her and turning her into a fuck toy with her daughter. This complete stranger is about to take her daughters virginity and she is powerless to stop it.

“Do you think you could do that for me? Big boy?”

Miguel swallows hard haven been given the opportunity of a life time. As you told Yin just a moment ago, fucking an mother and daughter at the same time is every guys dream. This young teen from the slums fantasies are being fulfilled by you, a satanic cult member whom he also desires. The bulge in his pants tells you he is ready to serve.

You give him an quick kiss on the cheek before moving back a few steps to let Miguel interact with Desire and Yin on his own. He moves over to the naked teen and her gagged mother. After standing still for a moment, being rendered speechless by the highly erotic privilege he has just been given, Miguel raises his hand at Yin and screams. “Get down on your knees bitch!”

Yin drops down immediately; Miguel knows how to handle the situation that’s for sure. You tell him. "Remember that they are still MY property so if you want to fuck them you'll have to play by my rules."

"Sure chica, whatever you say."

*[[Order Manuel to face fuck Desire|Order Miguel to face fuck Desire]]

*[[Order Miguel to face fuck Yin]]

*[[Fuck Miguel yourself to show whose in charge around here]]

*[[Skip the foreplay and have Miguel deflower Yin right now]]
[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Invite the gang that you meet earlier to take Yin’s virginity.

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:20:11 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

“Cover up, I’m going to get you some real meat instead.”

You remove the strap-on and walk over to a nearby window while Yin looks on confused and disappointed. You open the window and a warm breeze meets your naked body. From here the people down below can see your naked form but it doesn’t bother you. Nothing wrong about arousing others with your perfect figure from time to time. You spot the gang where you left them, they liter the street doing nothing productive instead just hanging out and harassing pedestrians.

“Hey boys!” They spot your tits hanging out the window and instantly give you their collective attention. “I need some men with big cock for a big undertaking, you guys big enough?” You shout the dirty words without Inhibitions which shocks Yin but makes the boys run for the front door in no time. With that taken care of you turn to face Yin who is practically dumbfolded by what you’ve just done.

“Why did you do that?” She asks growing more nervous by the second.

“You should be happy Yin. Those boys will be your first customers.” You respond calmly.

“My first what?”

“Your first customers, you are going to become a whore Yin, just like your mother. You honestly didn’t think that you could have had sex and not be a whore did you? No…. good. They are going to buy you, fuck you and you’ve better accept that damn quick because those boys will be up here soon. Oh and another thing, from now on I am your brothel mistress, your pimp so to say. I will control every detail of your life, accept that quick to.”
Yin meets these words with silent acceptance, had she not been so horny she would refuse your command. She had studied all her life to become a doctor or lawyer but her sexual frustrations are too great. Everyday Yin’s mother would bring home new men to fuck and Yin would have to hear their sexual moans and smell the intoxicating odor of sex. Now her sexual frustrations had reached a boiling point, if becoming a prostitute meant satisfying her sexual urges then she’s ready to make that sacrifice.

But this was not enough for your twisted mind. “Go into your mother’s bedroom and get ready. In the mean time I will choose an appropriate mate.”

Her eyes lightened up in panic at that command. “What? Why?”

“Because she’s your mother stupid! Do you know how much mother daughter couples sell for on the street? It’s every guys dream to fuck a mother and her daughter at the same time. The both of you will make me lots of cash that’s for sure promise.”

This command isn’t as easy to swallow. Yin retreats into her mind to contemplate what this means. The complex plays of emotions sweeping over her face are too many for you to notice. But you do pick up an mixture of arousal and terror. She knows incest is wrong but at the same time Yin accepts the fact that her mother is a whore, a piece of meat.
Yin spends a little too much time in her own mind so you slap her across the tits, making her dart across the room into the bedroom.

…………………

The group of young thugs assembles in the living room just outside the bedroom. You’re determined to find the biggest cock to take Yin’s virginity with. The young thugs snicker and smile proudly as you reach into their jeans and fell out their junk with your hand. You cup and stroke until a clear winner is found. He has gigantic balls and an huge cock. Continuing the evaluation you find that his rock hard abs are particularly appealing. He is Hispanic with curly dark hair. You ask him.

“Does this cock have an name?”

“Miguel, I’m seventeen and ready to fuck!”

*[[Chose Manuel to take Yin’s virginity|Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity]]

*[[Just let everyone fuck Yin at the same time]]
[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

User talk:Manichimon

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:19:58 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

{{incomplete}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:13, 24 March 2011 (UTC)

The platypus is neither a beaver nor a duck, but a defiant creature that straddles the line between mammal and bird, thumbing its nose at the taxonimists who insist on trying to classify it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:21, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Make sure you include the status bar and category on every page you post. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:02, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Also, Smutty Sex Romp has been my pet project for several years now. I expect contributions to it to use proper grammar and punctuation. If you cannot punctuate properly, please do not add anymore pages to this story. They will be deleted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:13, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Second warning. Make sure you include the category on each page you post. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:53, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

{{warn3}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:35, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

When you edit an existing page, be very careful that you don't change any of the blue links. If you do, you break the link and rip pages out of the story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:27, 25 July 2012 (UTC)

....

Hello. I saw that you noticed the naming error in my story and changed it on a few pages. That was quite… embarrassing of me, forgetting a character’s name and then just providing a new one. Of course, this continuity errors needs to be corrected somehow. However, the thing is, I´ll change it to “Miguel” instead of the firstly given “Manuel”. This is merely out of convenience, as much more pages on that story have him named “Miguel” instead of “Manuel” so changing the pages that has the name “Miguel” would be a lot more time consuming that changing the pages that has the name “Manuel”.

This means that I´ll reverse the pages you have corrected. Just wanted to explain why I do that. Oh, and thanks for pointing it out and correcting that you did.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Chose Manuel to take Yin’s virginity

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:15:41 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Chose Manuel to take Yin’s virginity moved to Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity: Changed name.

#REDIRECT [[Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity]]

Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:15:40 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Chose Manuel to take Yin’s virginity moved to Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity: Changed name.

The other men voice their disapproval as you take Manuel by the arm and lead him into the bedroom. You give Manuel a smile and a nervous flinch. The nervousity is fake of course; you only want to get Manuel in the right mood. You know how young men work, especially the aggressive ones. They see a pretty young thing smiling nervously at them then all they want to do is fuck her.

Manuel shrugs his shoulders at his pals, disguising his delight at being chosen with a nonchalant body gesture. They see through the poor act of comradeship and continue booing on.

…………………

The moment you close the door behind you Miguel is all over you. “Fuck yea I want to fuck you baby”. He grabs your hips with his strong hands, trying to use his masculine body to impose himself on you mentally.

“Wait.” You shrugs him off and point at the other side of the room. “Miguel meet Desire, a common prostitute and her daughter Yin, an virgin.”

Desire is right were you left her, tied down on a footstool naked and in an extremely humiliating position. Desire has awoken but she decides to keep her mouth shut until she can fully grasp the situation. Stand right next to her is Yin naked and ready to fuck. Her virgin innocence is still there; she avoids eye contact but has learned not to shelter her tits and pussy.

“Miguel you have an big task ahead of you. Desire and Yin are my property.” Hearing the word property Desire shouts out an proclamation of denial. She knows where this is going; women who become property of your cult are dehumanized into mindless fuck slaves. She shouts for help and urges Yin to run away but Yin stand firm. Yin has accepted her fate as a prostitute just like her mother so she offers no resistance. You put an mouth gag on Desire just like you would to a barking dog so that she cannot interrupt you further.

“Where was I? Oh yes I want to turn Desire and Yin into the biggest mother and daughter slut couple ever to walk the planet, however Yin is still an virgin. SO I need a man, a real man, with an really big dick, kind of like yours to deflower her for me.”

By now Deisre is shaking her head back and forth in shame and denial. Right in front of her you are talking about enslaving her and turning her into a fuck toy with her daughter. This complete stranger is about to take her daughters virginity and she is powerless to stop it.

“Do you think you could do that for me? Big boy?”

Manuel swallows hard haven been given the opportunity of a life time. As you told Yin just a moment ago, fucking an mother and daughter at the same time is every guys dream. This young teen from the slums fantasies are being fulfilled by you, a satanic cult member whom he also desires. The bulge in his pants tells you he is ready to serve.

You give him an quick kiss on the cheek before moving back a few steps to let Manuel interact with Desire and Yin on his own. He moves over to the naked teen and her gagged mother. After standing still for a moment, being rendered speechless by the highly erotic privilege he has just been given, Manuel raises his hand at Yin and screams. “Get down on your knees bitch!”

Yin drops down immediately; Manuel knows how to handle the situation that’s for sure. You tell him. "Remember that they are still MY property so if you want to fuck them you'll have to play by my rules."

"Sure chica, whatever you say."

*[[Order Manuel to face fuck Desire]]

*[[Order Manuel to face fuck Yin]]

*[[Fuck Manuel yourself to show whose in charge around here]]

*[[Skip the foreplay and have Manuel deflower Yin right now]]
[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Invite the gang that you meet earlier to take Yin’s virginity.

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:15:20 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Changed name

“Cover up, I’m going to get you some real meat instead.”

You remove the strap-on and walk over to a nearby window while Yin looks on confused and disappointed. You open the window and a warm breeze meets your naked body. From here the people down below can see your naked form but it doesn’t bother you. Nothing wrong about arousing others with your perfect figure from time to time. You spot the gang where you left them, they liter the street doing nothing productive instead just hanging out and harassing pedestrians.

“Hey boys!” They spot your tits hanging out the window and instantly give you their collective attention. “I need some men with big cock for a big undertaking, you guys big enough?” You shout the dirty words without Inhibitions which shocks Yin but makes the boys run for the front door in no time. With that taken care of you turn to face Yin who is practically dumbfolded by what you’ve just done.

“Why did you do that?” She asks growing more nervous by the second.

“You should be happy Yin. Those boys will be your first customers.” You respond calmly.

“My first what?”

“Your first customers, you are going to become a whore Yin, just like your mother. You honestly didn’t think that you could have had sex and not be a whore did you? No…. good. They are going to buy you, fuck you and you’ve better accept that damn quick because those boys will be up here soon. Oh and another thing, from now on I am your brothel mistress, your pimp so to say. I will control every detail of your life, accept that quick to.”
Yin meets these words with silent acceptance, had she not been so horny she would refuse your command. She had studied all her life to become a doctor or lawyer but her sexual frustrations are too great. Everyday Yin’s mother would bring home new men to fuck and Yin would have to hear their sexual moans and smell the intoxicating odor of sex. Now her sexual frustrations had reached a boiling point, if becoming a prostitute meant satisfying her sexual urges then she’s ready to make that sacrifice.

But this was not enough for your twisted mind. “Go into your mother’s bedroom and get ready. In the mean time I will choose an appropriate mate.”

Her eyes lightened up in panic at that command. “What? Why?”

“Because she’s your mother stupid! Do you know how much mother daughter couples sell for on the street? It’s every guys dream to fuck a mother and her daughter at the same time. The both of you will make me lots of cash that’s for sure promise.”

This command isn’t as easy to swallow. Yin retreats into her mind to contemplate what this means. The complex plays of emotions sweeping over her face are too many for you to notice. But you do pick up an mixture of arousal and terror. She knows incest is wrong but at the same time Yin accepts the fact that her mother is a whore, a piece of meat.
Yin spends a little too much time in her own mind so you slap her across the tits, making her dart across the room into the bedroom.

…………………

The group of young thugs assembles in the living room just outside the bedroom. You’re determined to find the biggest cock to take Yin’s virginity with. The young thugs snicker and smile proudly as you reach into their jeans and fell out their junk with your hand. You cup and stroke until a clear winner is found. He has gigantic balls and an huge cock. Continuing the evaluation you find that his rock hard abs are particularly appealing. He is Hispanic with curly dark hair. You ask him.

“Does this cock have an name?”

“Miguel, I’m seventeen and ready to fuck!”

*[[Chose Manuel to take Yin’s virginity]]

*[[Just let everyone fuck Yin at the same time]]
[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

User talk:Manichimon

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 17:14:58 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

User talk:Snowball

Fletcher Peninsula — Wed, 20 Jun 2012 20:44:36 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Thanks! XD ==

I decided to flip through the recent changes page today, and I noticed that one of my pages had been edited. At first I was scared, but when I went to check, nothing much had changed, besides a spelling error being fixed. So I'd like to thank you for fixing a spelling error. That page took me the longest to complete, and I tried to read it over a few times to fix errors, guess I missed one.

So, thank you for enjoying my story, and thank you for taking the initiative by fixing the spelling error in the page I had made. Can I ask, is it okay by you if you can read through my newest story I've been working on? It's called [[Remember]]. I just need an honest opinion on it. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] October 20 2011

You actually read through the story! Thank you so much! You also edited the some of the pages as well. Which I am forever thankful. I didn't think I'd have that many errors, but then again, at least it wasn't all of the 42 pages. Once again, thank you. Oh and what's your opinion of the story? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] October 21 2011

It's perfectly fine if you edit every mistake. In fact, it makes the website become much more polished and better for people to understand. As for Remember. I was actually going to make it a extremely violent story with lots of death scenes and overall tragedy. But I think at around the second page, I decided to go a bit more of a 'learn about your past' kind of feel. Anyway, I hope you liked the story. Perhaps when I finish writing the story, you can perhaps check it for grammatical errors.

Thank you once again! --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 22 October 2011

First of all. Thank so much again!! I know I've said this to you too many times but I just can't say it enough. The amount of pages I will be throwing out though will become less in the next two weeks. I have tests coming up, so I need to study. Your also going to start reviewing as well? Great! Just make sure you follow the format I use.

Let pages overlap? I kind of don't understand what you mean by that. If you mean that I should use links from other stories, then, I don't want to. That's why I put the 'R:' Before I do anything else. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

Ah I understand. If that happens to you, then the best thing you should do is to call it (( Die(2) )). That's what i'd do. As for the public category thing. Maybe suggest that to the admin Platypus. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

It should look like this:

''This story has some pages that need work. Check the (( discussion )) tab to see them. -- Signature''

You can edit it around and stuff, just stay along these lines. --Heyoeveryone 20:24, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

Hey! I read the review you recently posted up! Try to make your next review longer than this one, as this review was only two lines, say perhaps around one paragraph. You also followed by the format pretty well, except you forgot to bold the names of the different parts, and place italics on the preview. I hope that you will continue to make more reviews, and that with each one, you'll become increasingly better! --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 09:56, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

I actually like that idea! Linking pages that need work in the discussion page of the first, that's some smart thinking. A good idea is to put some sort of little line at the bottom of the page so that other writers know that some pages need some expanding. I suggest you don't do that on the 'DO NOT EDIT' stories though, they wrote that for a reason. Also, make the line in ''italics'', and put your name beside it, so that the reader knows it's a different section. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23:37, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

== [[Genesis]] ==

Hey, I've made the first few pages of that 'God' story we talked about in the idea pitches section. It strayed off the idea I originally had with the gods and such, so uhh I wouldn't know how this would end, but I certainly like this introduction better. I'd like your opinion on it. Links in the title. Also, do you want to do some writing? I put this under as a side project for me, so the updates here will be very slow. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 08:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Read both pages you put up. Needs a lot of polish, what do I mean? It means that you need to re-read your work and check for errors. I know, it's a painful process, but it has to be done. What I've read so far is extremely, do not know how you were able to transition into the god meeting, but hey, you did it.

Oh! I just noticed and read the idea you had for Remember. This is actually an interesting idea, if you had told me this while I was writing Chapter 1, I would have implemented that choice, but now, I'm trying to get through Chapter 2, thus finishing the story (it's only going to be 2 Chapters). If the opportunity arises, I may try to add it in this section of the story. --Heyoeveryone 08:47, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

I'd say leave the Devil out until the reader reaches second highest state (which I think is Holy), then he can be just some sort of vandal, leaving a path of destruction in its wake. Once you notice this, you can do one of two things:

*Call upon your friends to destroy him
*Get rid of him yourself

On the evil side, there should also be a choice to have a 'Saviour' or an 'Angel' to come in and try to stop this madness by helping the people in distress. Again, you will have to choose between two choices when you see this occurring:

*Call upon the Devil
*Get rid of him yourself

Notice anything? It's basically an 'assist' or 'lone wolf' choice. XD. Also, the status indicators, we just need a basic one box and two column setup. That will just basically hold 'Godly state' then beside it will be the state your in. You can add more if you want. --Heyoeveryone 19:38, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

I made a template!!!! Have a look and share your thoughts. It's my first time with that so, if it's a bit odd to use, just tell me.
{{GenesisStat| God State| God State Goes Here }}
Like it? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 08:11, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan. Anyway, we're making a pretty good team. You typing up the page, while I just read it over and expand it. Try to explain new characters or choices so the reader knows what he's doing. More importantly, try to make sure that Harris gets back to his God Building work.--Heyoeveryone 07:36, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

==Special Pages==
"Wanted" pages are unwritten pages that have links leading to them. In other words, it's a list of all the red links in every page on the site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:20, 29 November 2011 (UTC)

There are no "Unwanted" pages; there are ''"Unwatched"'' pages. When you edit a page, there are two check boxes, one for minor edits and one for watching the page. For me, the 'watch' box is always pre-checked, for whatever good that does. Any page anyone creates with that box not checked goes on the Unwatched list. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 29 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads up about the collapsed Adult Section. All I had to do was reverse Jeb's edit to fix it. Somehow I doubt he's going to be around for long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:42, 17 December 2011 (UTC)

== Signature ==

Hi. Thanks for the offer though I haven't noticed myself doing it yet. Probably cause I pointed out it might happen. Isn't that always the way things work? I'm also not sure what you mean by customizing my signature, what signature? o.o -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Toolbar? I don't see that too often... only on certain pages, I think it has to do with my phone not having enough memory to display everything on a page all the time. Thank you for the information, but I think manually including the date would give me too much to type and I'm not sure I could really benefit from setting up a signature on my phone if I need to see the toolbar to add it. :) -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

==Wiki RPG==
Yes, it's advertising, but it's advertising something that used to be part of this site, and it was put there by one this site's original sysops four years ago. I don't think it needs any attention. But good job actually finding it after all this time! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:47, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

== Regarding Bloodsport. ==

Ooh, nice find. I hadn't exactly meant for it to be kept a secret for now, but I guess it technically is without any links anywhere else. xD If you don't mind me asking, exactly how did you find it? Orphaned pages? (Even though it technically is orphaned, it really isn't. >.>)

As for your style, if you like how you do intros, keep doing it that way. No reason to change unless it's something you really want. I kinda like the quick, "Hey, get ready, bro." kind of intros, but I feel like the stories I come up with are better suited for slightly longer intros. There is, by the way, some extra info on Bloodsport. lying around another "project" of mine. Shouldn't be too hard to find, really, but it's out there if you want to know more.

Right now, it's only in a slightly-planned stage. While logic would dictate that I wait until I know more about my own idea to start writing the intro, making that intro sort of solidified the whole "I'm actually going to write this, damnit" feeling that I need for motivation. Of course, the whole part about the page not being shitty after all certainly doesn't hinder that process any. (''After all, I tend to be my own harshest critic for a number of reasons, and I figure that there's at LEAST one inaccuracy or anachronism somewhere on that page, but, oh well.'') Hopefully I will have the first character's intro up by tomorrow, a character who'll experience the bloodsport through the traditional ladder rules.

Anyways, that's just my rambling response. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that's the page. And as for the page view count or whatever, that sounds about right. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 21:52, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

== Mockery ==

I'll give it a once over but I probably won't be adding to it for a little bit. I'd like to hit at least 250 'pages' on Sixty Minutes before I consider writing anything else lest I get too distracted. :)

By that time I'll probably have a better idea of what kind of style you're going for too. Thank you for considering me nonetheless. -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

== A Copy/Pasting Favour... >.> ==

Hi again,

I was wondering if you'd be willing to do me a favour. I've written myself into a bit of a corner (reader has to select a combination, I don't just want to link every wrong combination to a generic "WRONG!" to make it easy to spot the right answer but the time reducing nature prevents me from just making a loop too) and the only solution I see is to write essentially the same thing 8-10 times or just write it once and have someone copypasta it for me (where it'd be easy to adjust as necessary).

I was wondering, if I wrote what I'd like copied and linked you that page, plus the pages I'd like it copied too, would you be willing to take the 5-10 minutes (or less) it'd take to just copy/paste them?

If you have another solution though, I'm open to that too. No worries either way though since I'm sure I'll figure something out if you're too busy or would rather not. :)

I only ask because of your offer to fix my formatting issues, I've bugged Platypus enough (I think >.>) and I'm not sure where else to ask for a hand (nobody seems to check the General Discussion anymore.)

grumblegrumble stupidphone grumblegrumble
-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Hiya,

If you could copy the contents of [[SM:Enter It(BlaBla)|this page]] to the following: [[SM:Enter It(BluBla)|here]], [[SM:Enter It(BluBlu)|here]], [[SM:Hit Black-Black|here]], [[SM:Hit Blue-Blue|here]], [[SM:Hit Blue-Black|here]], [[SM:Hit Enter(BluBlu)|here]], [[SM:Hit Enter(BluBla)|here]], [[SM:Hit Enter(BlaBla)|here]], [[SM:Toggle Black-Black|here]], [[SM:Toggle Blue-Blue|here]], and [[SM:Toggle Blue-Black|here]] that'd be awesome. :)

At your liesure, of course, and anything that needs to be changed from there I can do myself with relative ease. Just call me lazy (or sane) for not wanting to rewrite a 1000 word page, 11 times over. :)

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Thanks again. :) Also I figured out how to do tilde on my phone, so thanks for the tip for the signature there too. -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 17:40, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

==[[Star Wars: A New Adventure]]==
Hey um Snowball I am making a story and it's called [[Star Wars: A New Adventure]] I think you actually edited it before or at least corrected me on a problem I made. I think I fixed it and I still don't have all that many pages but since you said that you like to work on stories that were usually incomplete like the ones in the pit I was wondering if you could maybe help me work on it because I don't have all that much time to work on it or could you maybe edit it once and a while? ( Oh and could you please review what I have so far?) I would really appreciate it if you could help me with some of this. --[[User:UltimaEvill|UltimaEvill]] 14:46, 25 December 2011

== Template Request ==

I'm not sure exactly the sort of look you were going for, so I tossed this together (I had to put in the Area thing, or the equipment part would have only been 1 row big... couldn't figure out a way around it).

If you'd like me to move things around, or anything (if you want to change colours just look for bgcolor="#xxxxxx" and change the xxxxxx), just let me know how you'd like me to do it. If you can find another template similar to what you were going for it shouldn't be too hard to copy the general idea.

[[Template:45-51]]
{{45-51}}

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin )-(]] 20:15, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

= Reply from Holygiant =

I am very rarely on here anymore, but still come on occasionally to read stuff when I'm bored. I will edit it if I ever find time, but in the meanwhile there won't be much added to City Life: Manhattan. Also, feel free to keep it on the page. That's a relatively difficult place to get to anyway.

== Wandering to another page ==

The best joke of the century [[special:random|Cheers!]]

== Limerick ==

I love the idea of your [[Limerick]] story. I have added a few pages already; I don't want it to fall into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, because I think it could do well and be fun!--[[User:Impalalevi1]]

== Response ==

I want to suggest that the discussion pages of the first pages of stories used for the all time/ of the year as the vote pages. To
keep voting easy, maybe only previously nominated stories could be used. See what you think.--Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content
Resistance Leader 12:37, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Well, um, that would be another fine way to potentially do it. But the "story of the year" idea never really started and seems pretty dead right now (In all honestly I even forgott it existed in the first place). So it´s unlikely neither of the systems will ever be used anyways.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Previous Featured Stories

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 15 Jun 2012 21:52:01 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Featured Stories for '12==

*[[Megan:Menu|Megan]] 06/15/2012

== Featured Stories for '11==

*[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]] 03/15/2011

*[[Quest of the magician]] 06/08/2011

*[[War Pigs]] 08/03/2011

*[[Remember]] 10/22/2011

== Featured Stories for '10==

*[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] 01/26/2010

*[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] 04/03/2010

*[[DARKNESS]] 05/23/2010

*[[Subject 413]] 07/12/2010

*[[Rescue]] 08/12/2010

*[[Avast!]] 10/31/2010
[[Category:System Pages]]

*[[inyashas fantasy land]] (a key example of how not to write a story: poor grammar, poor spelling, and all-around poor) 12/12/2010

== Featured Stories for '09==
*[[Crusader]] 5/28/09

*[[Hunting again for Red October]]

*[[Evolution]] 9/13/09

*[[Harry Potter]] 10/08/2009

*[[Transylvanian terror]] 12/01/2009

*[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] 12/29/2009

Previous Featured Stories

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 15 Jun 2012 21:51:06 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Added == Featured Stories for '12==

== Featured Stories for '12==

*[[Megan:Menu|Megan]]

== Featured Stories for '11==

*[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]] 03/15/2011

*[[Quest of the magician]] 06/08/2011

*[[War Pigs]] 08/03/2011

*[[Remember]] 10/22/2011

== Featured Stories for '10==

*[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] 01/26/2010

*[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] 04/03/2010

*[[DARKNESS]] 05/23/2010

*[[Subject 413]] 07/12/2010

*[[Rescue]] 08/12/2010

*[[Avast!]] 10/31/2010
[[Category:System Pages]]

*[[inyashas fantasy land]] (a key example of how not to write a story: poor grammar, poor spelling, and all-around poor) 12/12/2010

== Featured Stories for '09==
*[[Crusader]] 5/28/09

*[[Hunting again for Red October]]

*[[Evolution]] 9/13/09

*[[Harry Potter]] 10/08/2009

*[[Transylvanian terror]] 12/01/2009

*[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] 12/29/2009

Featured CYOA Nominations

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 15 Jun 2012 21:49:47 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Removed "Megan" from Nominations

Use this page to nominate stories that you think are worthy of being featured and recommended on the [[Main Page]]. Stories do not need to be listed on this page to be featured, but if you're uncomfortable featuring a story yourself, add it here, and someone else might.

Stories must be at least 25 pages long to be eligible for nomination and should have several paths available. The exception to that is complete stories. Complete stories are eligible regardless of length. Nominations should be grammatically correct and have a consistent theme. Click here for [[How to feature a story]].

 Current Nominations: 

*[[An Epic Adventure]] Hilarious and many ways to finish this quest. Different factions you can take.

*[[High School]] A fun story, you choose your social group (stereotype), then go on about everyday life. All the stories tie together. On most stories, there is a picture or 2 showing what you look like. During concerts, depending on the song, it will show a concert video of that song from youtube. Includes some pretty funny endings, from dying by cyanide to getting your head roundhouse kicked off by Chuck Norris.

*[[Smutty Sex Romp]] A 10,000+ page story regarding sex. LOTS of sex. Oodles of sex.

*[[Bi-sexual Sex stories]] Adult Story {18+}. It's a new story I've been working on, and would like people to add to it.

*[[The Undead]] A good, well-thought out zombie story. I like it because it gives options that a regular person would actually do. It is also written incredibly.

[[Category:System Pages]]

Main Page

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 15 Jun 2012 21:49:24 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Changed Feauture story to "Megan"

== Choose Your Own Adventure ==

Choose Your Own Adventure is a wiki that contains stories where the reader assumes the role of the main character. In each page you choose how the story should progress. If you don't see an option that you would like to pursue, click the edit tab on the top of the page and add a new path to the page. Then you get to write in your own adventure for the character.

Please note that this site is specifically for Choose Your Own Adventure stories. If you choose to post stories that have no choices, your story will be deleted as such stories are not appropriate for this site.

We currently have [[Special:Statistics|{{NUMBEROFARTICLES}}]] [[Special:Allpages|articles]].

If you're new to this site, please read our [[Tutorial]] to learn how to edit stories.

[[How to Edit]]

[[Idea Pitches]]

*Hint: If you don't care enough about your writing to attempt to use proper grammar or spelling, chances are people won't care to read it. If grammar isn't your strong suit, you may want to look over some [[Grammatical Tips]].

If you want to practice editing, you should do so on the [[Sandbox]].

== [[Featured CYOA Nominations|Featured Story]] ==
[[Megan:Menu|Megan]]
 One day, Guide Megan Carter through the simple murder of her best friend. A quick, sometimes gory exercise in insanity. '''Content warning: Intense violence, intense language, dark themes.'''

Nominated by [[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]]

*[[Featured CYOA Nominations]]

*[[Previous Featured Stories]]

*[[How to feature a story]]

==[[Story Reviews]]==
Look here for reviews of existing stories or to add your own reviews. This is still new though, so don't expect your favourite story to be reviewed just yet. Try to stick to constructive criticism only. Deliberate insults or flaming will be deleted.

If you have any questions concerning this section, or you want a certain story to be reviewed and you can't bothered to do it yourself, don't be afraid and ask [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]].

==Family-Friendly Stories==
'''FOR ALL AGES:'''
Suitable for anyone with Basic Reading Level skills. Please keep these G-PG. Please remove any other content that exceeds this.
{|
|Story||Status
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|[[Abigail's Tale]]||(28 pages, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[Afraid of the Dark]] (horror) || (44 pages) (Under construction last update 4/7/2012 story now coherent)
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|[[ An Adventure...]]|| (56+ pages)
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|[[Another Story Of Another Random Person]]||(93+ pages)
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|[[BauBaus!]] (for critter lovers and trainers alike!)|| (20+ pages,under construction)
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|[[ Bus Troubles]]|| (23 pages)
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|[[ Calloway Adventure]]|| (17 pages)
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|[[Carnival]]||(20+ pages)
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|[[Chocolate Man]]|| (W.I.P)
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|[[Choose Your Own Adventure Adventure]]|| (Don't go loco and keep the pages long.) [[Special:Longpages]]
|-
|[[Christmas Time]]|| (21 pages) please don't edit.
|-
|[[The Crimes which FAIL]]|| Public, but no non-crime options except for [[Kill yourself]]
|-
|[[Divorce]]|| (10+ pages please do not edit)
|-
|[[ DUDE WHERES MY CAR]]|| (14 pages)
|-
|[[Earthbound CYOA Bundle]]|| (Just Strarted, Public)
|-
|[[ the get away]]|| (13 pages)
|-
|[[A Giant Chocolate Chip Cookie]] || (45+ pages)
|-
|[[ The Golden Banana]]|| (17 pages)
|-
|[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] || (75+ pages)
|-
|[[Greek Heroes]] || [WIP] You play the roll of an aspiring Greek hero. Please do not edit.
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows]]|| (finished for me, expand the pages, Most are vague.)
|-
|[[Harry Potter]] And the Adventure Chosen by You||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[Hope & Neveah]] (WIP DO NOT EDIT!!)
|-
|[[horror on the subway]]||(w.i.p please don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Jake vs the Mayor of Dragon Valley]]|| (17 pages)
|-
|[[Kalew]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Kitty in the Window]] (Now with PG, hard to find LOTR expansion!)|| (450+ pages)
|-
|[[ Life as a cop]]|| (edit please!)
|-
|[[ The Life of a Wolf]]|| (35+ pages W.I.P Please don't edit for now)
|-
|[[Limerick]]|| (Open to public. Use only Limericks)
|-
|[[Madman's Mansion]]|| (50+ pages; open to public, work on it)
|-
|[[Mario and Luigi: Superstar Saga]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[ Mayday]]|| (13 pages)
|-
|[[ My Crazy Ranch]]|| (18+ pages)
|-
|[[ Newspaper Delivery]]|| (23 pages)
|-
|[[Penguins (The Frozen Adventure)]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[Penguins (just click "Three times a day")]] || (~59 pages) Edit well.
|-
|[[Percy Jackson]]: The adventures of a demigod || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[Princess Carkegee]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[ A Random Day ]]|| (45 pages)
|-
|[[Revisiting the Sneetches]]|| (WIP Feel Free to Edit)
|-
|[[ School's only 4 some people!]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Secretpage|The secrets of SECRETPAGE]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[sewer wars]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[Short and Funny.]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[ Snowboarding at the slope]]|| (19 pages)
|-
|[[Spacewars with GDS ]]|| (20 pages)
|-
|[[Spiral Hill]]|| (W.I.P. Please do not edit.)
|-
|[[ Stealing Marathon]]|| (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Time Machine]]||(15+ page)
|-
|[[Time Vortex]]|| (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]|| (W.I.P PLEASE DO NOT EDIT! As soon as there is enough content, please review!)
|-
|[[Tutorial]]||(Begun 10/28/09. If you have any wisdom to impart, please add to the story.)
|-
|[[Visiting the Zoo]] || (130+ pages)
|-
|[[White Rooms]]|| (WIP, no edits please)
|-
|[[You Gotta Read This]]||(12 pages)
|-
|[[Adventure For the Pencil]]|| (make it funny :D)
|}

==PG13 Stories==
'''FOR 10+:''' For more advanced readers. Please keep these G - PG-13. Please remove any content that exceeds this.
{|
|-
|[[A basic, normal, Choose-Your-Own-Adventure]] Or '''Piano Lessons'''|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Adventure in the City]]|| (Sigh. You may edit, but please do not go crazy. AND KEEP IT G!)
|-
|[[2012]]||(12 pages violent disaster sequences.)
|-
|[[ Adventures in Space ]]|| (40+ pages, edit respectfully)
|-
|[[The Amazing Adventure]] || (40+ pages DO NOT EDIT!!!)
|-
|[[ A New Exciting Adventure]] || (Please do not edit)
|-
|[[The American Revolution]]|| (Work In Progress PLEASE DON'T EDIT)
|-
|[[ Apocalyptic zombie attack]]|| ( 27 pages) (Public story please edit)
|-
|[[At the Mall with Weevil]] || (15+ pages; [[User:Charlotte5|Charlotte5]] currently editing; WIP)
|-
|[[Atom Kid|Atom Kid (a super hero adventure)]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Avast!]] A Pirate Story || (180+ pages, WIP, contact me before editing)
|-
|[[Average Guy]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Band]]|| (9+ Pages Under Construction)
|-
|[[Basic American Teen1]]||
|-
|[[The Battle of the Best]] || (24+ pages)
|-
|[[ Becoming friends with a Wild horse]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Black Heart]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)]] || (90+ pages)
|-
|[[The Boss]] || (35+ pages)
|-[[Battle of worlds, Your quest]]
|[[A Brand New World: Sanyan]]|| (2+ pages) (WIP, Don't Edit unless you contact author.)
|-
|[[Cell]] || (How will you define life?)
|-
|[[Character Creation]]|| (50+)
|-
|[[Classic Roguelike]]|| (WIP, Please do not edit!)
|-
|[[ Class Dissmissed]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Clown]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[Create your own world]]|| (WIP feel free to edit)
|-
|[[To Court!]] || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[Crazy Fantasy Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
|-
||[[Cross the Street]] || (11 pages made by ailenbear123)
|-
|[[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)]] || (337 pages)
|-
|[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] || (375+ pages; [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] currently editing)
|-
|[[Crystal Spires]]|| (WIP Do NOT edit)(16+ Pages 5/28/12)
|-
|[[Cyberspace Invaders]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[DARKNESS]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day as a Hobo]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day At The Races]] || (16 pages -- completed story, do not edit)
|-
|[[A Day in the Life (An action adventure story)]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Day In the Life of a Total Loser]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Day of Doom]]||(10+ pages Do not edit please By Allbis.)
|-
|[[A Day of not Dying]]|| (38 Pages) (Public!) (Please '''DON'T''' edit without permission)
|-
|[[Dead Kid]] || (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Death by zombies]] || (40+ pages)
|-
|[[Detective Ryan 1: Life Crystal]] || (W.I.P) Please don't edit
|-
|[[Digimon Adventure 03]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Digimon Transverse]] || (40+ pages, open to public; fixed a lot of in-game bugs, making editing the options less of a pain now)
|-
|[[Dirt biking in the trails]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball Adventure]] || (About 24+ pages, only edit unmade pages please, add on if you'd like though.)
|-
|[[Dragonball Z]]
|-
|[[Dragonball Z Adventure]] || (DO NOT EDIT +0)
|-
|[[Dr. Dero's Journey]] || (10+ pages, 100% open to pub.)
|-
|[[ Dr. Who's Life]]|| (0+ pages, WIP)
|-
|[[dragon lands]]|| (under construction)
|-
|[[ Dragon's Life]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Dungeon]] (A CLASSIC DUNGEON CRAWL!)||(34+ pages. '''RECENTLY UPDATED!''')
|-
|[[Easily Random]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[ Endless Possibility]]|| (Under construction - feel free to edit)
|-
|[[Escape]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[ Escaping Beelzebub]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Element]] || (W.I.P Free to Editing)
|-
|[[Elephant Quest]]|| (W.I.P. Do not edit!)
|-
|[[An Epic Adventure]] || (50+ pages) NO EDITING PLEASE. Feel free to play!
|-
|[[Evolution|Evolution (an adventure of insignificance)]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Evolution II]] || (20 pages)
|-
|[[Fantasy Quest]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[Fight for Liberty and Freedom]]|| (WIP Please do not edit.)
|-
|[[Freedom]] || (an experiment of free will)
|-
|[[ the first hunt ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[food chain train ]]|| (Wip)
|-
|[[ The Furr Adventure ]]|| (0+ pages)
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|[[Genesis]] || (WIP, Side project, Under Construction)
|-
|[[Gloria]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Grasstealth]]|| (WIP 5+ pages Paired with [[Grasstealth Items]])
|-
|[[ Greek Myth ]]|| (WIP please edit)
|-
|[[Haunted Elementary]]||(20+ pages, WIP, please don't edit)
|-
|[[Haunted Mountain]]||New, please don't edit
|-
|[[High School 2]]|| (3+ pages. Feel free to edit.)
|-
|[[HoboPalooza]]||(WIP Please do not edit)
|-
|[[Hobo Sapiens]]||(32+ Pages, then proceed to life as a rat)
|-
|[[Humanity]]||( General Winthrop has decided to make this unfinished story free for the masses to edit. Just stick to the main idea, and keep it serious...)
|-
|[[Hunting again for Red October]] || (100+ pages)
|-
|[[iCarly Wikia]] || (WIP. DO NOT EDIT.)
|-
|[[ Imara's life in the naruto world ]]|| (Yeah, just go ahead and edit, but stick to the storyline)
|-
|[[Infection]] || (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Is Hunger Your Game?]] || (50+ pages) DO NOT EDIT
|-
|[[It's Choose Your Own Adventure Time!]] || 55 Pages (partially finished)
|-
|[[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[ Jimmy's Big Adventure]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Keyblade Academy]]|| (Under Construction, make any edits/add-ons that you see fit)
|-
|[[Kidnapped!]]|| (26 pages, please don't edit)
|-
|[[THE KINGDOM OF ADVENTURE!]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Kitty Thief]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Life of a rat]]|| (20+ pages, now you may edit, but first pass the hobo adventure)
|-
|[[The Life of a School Kid]]|| (30+ pages '''Updating Again!''')
|-
|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
|-
|[[ Little Miss Disaster]]|| (19+ pages)
|-
|[[Lina Popintop's Adventure]]|| (Work In Progress PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
||[[Livin' like a hobo]]|| (Do not edit)
|-
|[[LoA's Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Love and fireballs]] || (s'like...it's not done yet, don't edit,k?)
|-
|[[A love story]] (NEW) (Free for all)
|-
|[[Magic Keyboard]]|| (New, under construction, and kinda stupid)
|-
|[[ Mall Bunny]]|| (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The many rooms]] || ({{PAGESINCAT:The many rooms}} pages)
|-
|[[Mario's many adventures]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Married Life]] || (10 pages currently, New, Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Medieval Life]] || (W.I.P. Don't Edit This)
|-
|[[Mega Adventure RPG]] || (WIP. Help wanted)
|-
|[[The Memory Makers]]|| (A Science Fiction game about a young man who can't remember his past. WIP--Please DO NOT Edit!)
|-
|[[Minotaur's Laberynth]] || (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The Mirror]] || (Edit all you want. Just keep in the storyline, please! Currently around 20 pages)
|-
|[[Morrowind|Morrowind (An exciting action adventure)]] || (25+pages)
|-
|[[My WWE]] || (Brand new, feel free to add on.)
|-
|[[The Mystical quest for Technochocolate]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[Nancy's Notable Narratives]] || (39+ pages--WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[A Normal Life]]
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Girl Version)]] (Romance) || (Pages are 12 so far, but it's a WIP, so do not edit)
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Guy Version)]] (Romance) || (WIP... just started, don't edit!)
|-
|[[New kid]] ( under construction. Don't edit.)
|-
|[[Night]]|| (Do not edit/WIP)
|-
|[[Nightcaps]] || (10+ Pages)
|-
|[[Nintendo Quest]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[The Night That Will Never Be Forgotten (A Titanic CYOA)]] || (W.I.P, please don't edit without permission)
|-
|[[Niro]]|| (Just Started, please don't edit quite yet)
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|[[No more underwear]] || (free to edit)
|-
|[[Of Tumbleweeds And Teenagers]] || (UNDER CONSTRUCTION)
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|[[ The One Ring]]|| (0+W.I.P Do not edit or delete anything as of yet!)
|-
|[[Organisation]] || (30+ pages WIP-DO NOT EDIT!!!!!)
|-
|[[Organism]] || (16+ pages, WIP, please DO NOT EDIT, Thank you.)
|-
|[[ Pac Man VS E.C.]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[A Penguin Named Evan]] || (15+ Pages)
|-
|[[Phoenix Wright: A new adventure]] || (25+ Pages W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT!)
|-
|[[ Pick Pocket]]|| (WIP Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Pirates! A High Seas Adventure]]|| (50+ Pages)
|-
|[[Pirates of the Caribbean (action-adventure)]] ||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Planet of the Apes]]|| (15+ pages) (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Pokemon Ranger: Lavender Nightmare]]|| (Just started, feel free to add)
|-
|[[My Pokemon Adventure]] (please do not edit)
|-
|[[Pokemon Legends]]|| (W.I.P. Don't edit)
|-
|[[Pokemon - Your Adventure]] ||(45+ pages)
|-Pokemon adventures

|[[Pokemon - Kanto Adventure]] || (Just started,feel free to edit)
|-
|[[Portal]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Puppy Love]]|| (Don't edit)
|-
|[[Quest of the magician]] || (200+ pages)
|-
|[[Quest of the Ninja]] || (W.I.P., please don't edit!)
|-
|[[Questscape]] || (W.I.P., Do not edit)
|-
|[[Ralos]] ||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[Random]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions]] || (66 pages-Completed)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions 2: More Random]] || (WIP, Feel Free to Edit)
|-
|[[A Random Day]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Red Mercenary]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[ Revolt (A United States Futuristic Revolution Story)]]|| (5+ pages PLEASE DO NOT EDIT UNTIL I SAY SO)
|-
|[[ The Revolutionary war ]]|| (Under construction, do not edit plz)
|-
|[[Rick Roll'd Adventure]] || (Completed)
|-
|[[Rodeo Girl]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roleplay]] || (Under Construction...)
|-
|[[ The Roller coaster]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roman Demigod]]|| (WIP PLEASE EDIT FREELY)
|-
|[[Russian Blue]]|| (0+ pages, under construction by projectM1K3, no other editors atm)
|-
|[[Sabatoge (a Star Trek: TNG adventure)]] || (About 10 pages)
|-
|[[Save YouTube Poop!!! ]](Definitely rated PG-13 || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Second Life]]|| (5+ Pages, please edit!)
|-
|[[The_secret_island_of_Utobi|The Secret Island of Utobi]] || (38 pages)
|-
|[[sewer wars]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Shadows of the Past]]||(5+ pages)
|-
|[[ Show off]]|| (wip)
|-
|[[ Silent hill]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Sixty Minutes]]|| (0 Pages)
|-
|[[ Soul Savor]]|| (W.I.P. New)
|-
|[[Spork| Spork: An RPG]] || (100+ pages and third town in progress, please don't edit, put any suggestions in Spork discussion)
|-
|[[Star trek]] (Another adventure) || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Trek: The Original Series]] || (WIP, If you've seen the 60's show, you can go ahead and edit.)
|-
|[[Star Wars: A New Adventure]] || (17 pages, a work in progress but I would like people to help as long as they stick to the story)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Jedi Chronicles ]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Combat Training ]] || (feel free to edit, but stay on the story line)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Republic]] || (26 pages)
|-
|[[The Story of George Miller]] || (WIP, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Story Of My Life]] || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Subject 413]] || (100+ pages, w.i.p, NOW OPEN TO ADDITIONS)
|-
|[[Superhero]] || (25+ pages Its public, so you can add on as well)
|-
|[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]] || (150 + pages)
|-
|[[Insert Title| The Supernatural World]]|| (Under Construction, Don't Touch)
|-
|[[Superwhodunnit]]|| (0+ pages, please don't edit, at least for now)
|-
|[[Survey]] || (DO NOT EDIT!!!!)
|-
|[[Survival of the Colossi]] || (10+ pages, only edit UNWRITTEN (redlinked) pages)
|-
|[[ Surviving a Hetalia Dream]]|| (New story. Touch and die.)
|-
|[[Surviving Today]] || (20 Pages, its not alot since its only one day)(Finished!)
|-
|[[Survivng Today: The Traffic Jam|Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] || (35+ Pages! Not a sequel)(Finished!)
|-
|[[A Tasty Breakfast]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Technomancer]]|| (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[Teddy and Ryan's Adventure]]|| (3+ pages, WORK IN PROGRESS DO NOT TOUCH thank you :-])
|-
|[[Teehee!]] || (60+ Pages!) (Public) (4 Stories in 1)
|-
|[[Temporal]]|| (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Time Chase]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[To the Future]] || (Under construction, no editing please)
|-
|[[Transylvanian terror]]||(150+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Tribute|Tribute: The Greatest and Best Quest in the World]] || (14+ pages)
|-
|[[The Great Adventures of Veredin]] || (WIP, Please don't edit.)
|-
|[[The Trigger And The Hilt]] (a free-roaming action game) || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[To Kill a Salesman]] Do not edit WIP
|-
||[[True Dungeon]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT W.I.P)
|-
|[[ Try Not To Die ]]|| (45 Pages- COMPLETED; please don't edit)
|-
|[[ Trying to Wake Up]]|| (25+ pages so far. WIP)
|-
|[[The Ultimate Battle]] ||(65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Unknown...]]|| (Under Construct, Do whatever you wish but keep it serious and literate!)
|-
|[[Vaped!]]||(Sci-fi, just started.)
|-
|[[ The Walk]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[War of Nations]]|| (65+ pages)
|-
|[[War zone]]|| (20+ pages)(W.i.p)(PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Warphole]]|| (5+ pages, Go [[User:CLOU!7|here]] for what I need you to know before you edit)
|-
|[[Warrior Cats]]|| (hi)
|-
|[[What have they done?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[What Happens In The Forest]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Who Are You?]]|| (Under Construction, Don't Touch)
|-
|[[Windy Lea Stories]]|| (WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[WW2]] || (6+ pages, please don't edit unless asked to. Original writers seem to have abanoned this.)
|-
|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[XMachetter, the dark figure, and the Jewel]]
|-
||[[You Need a Job]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[You're never getting out]]|| {Edit to make it as long as possible}
|-
|[[Your Life]] || (Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
|-
|[[ Your Story]]|| (, Don't Edit, Por favor, 0+ pages)
|-
|[[Z-Day]] || (Under Construction, by skullphantom)
|-
|[[ZX1]] || (54+ pages. PUBLIC!)
|-
|}

==Quizzes and Challenges==
'''Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):'''

{|
|-
|[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[The Price Is Right]]|| (edit if you know how the show goes)
|-
|[[Quiz Show]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[A Quizzy Show]]||(10 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || (25 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[The Rock Paper Scissors game]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Trivia Time]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The Ultimate MMA quiz game!]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz 2]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Game Trivia I]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Games]]|| (Finished, pretty lame, but it's my first.)
|-
|}

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{|
|Story||Status
|-
|[[1943]]|| Open
|-
|[[101st]]|| (Open!)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]|| (WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| (13+ Pages; Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]|| (don't edit!)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||(25 pages)(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||(70 pages)(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| (101+ pages)
|-
|[[Awake]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Badassery]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || (10+ pages, open for editing)
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || (200+ pages) Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || (1+ pages)(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]|| (0+ pages; please do not edit)
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || ({{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} pages)('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| (25+ pages, W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || (Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| (WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[City Life]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||(22+ pages)
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| (10+ pages) Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| (34+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||(24+ pages)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| (Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| (Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| (Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| (Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Designing life]]|| ('''New!''' You are welcome to participate)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| (New! 35 pages)
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| (WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || (Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || (Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||(175+ pages)
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||(20 pages)
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || (New story, under construction)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| (Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| (0+ pages) (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| (25+ Pages, Public)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| (5 pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[In The Army]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| (the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| (JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| (Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Kemp]]|| (Under Construction - 10+ Pages) [PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]|| (3+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || (Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||(175+ pages)(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| (JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| (0+ pages-just began)
|-
|[[A New Life]]||(40+ pages Public)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || (Just Started, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| (don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || (just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || (I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || (Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]] ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| (No editing please)
|-
|[[Perverticus]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||(30+ pages Open to Public)
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||(5+ Pages, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||(333+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Random III]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|'''[[Remember]]''' || (Do Not Edit Without Permission) (70+ Pages)('''<--Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| (36 pages) (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || (53 pages. Do NOT edit!.)
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || (W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||(10+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[School Life]]|| (WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| (W.I.P. 10+ pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Serial X]]|| (25+ pages. Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| (7/15/10 12+ pages ((Do not edit)))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||(250+ pages)(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Smile]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| (38+ pages, WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.)
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || (Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[Sonic & Shadow]] ||
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| (0+ pages,public but keep it serious)
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || (First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||(3+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||(90+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || (30+ pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || (0+ pages WIP)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||(40+ pages, started 6/24/09)
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Undead]] || (WIP. Help Wanted!)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| (WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| (300+ pages under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[University Secrets!]] || (Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )
|-
|[[Violence]]|| (+20 Pages, in progress)
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || (150+ pages, in progress)
|-
|[[The Wasteland]]||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[World Undone]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || (Unknown+ pages If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || (12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombies]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| (35+ pages wip)
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||(50+ Pages,Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies city]] ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies: This is getting really old.]] || (Go ahead and edit. it's one more zombie story.)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||(10+ Pages,edit freely)
|-
|}

==Adult Stories==
[[Adult Stories|Click here]] to enter the adult section. Do not enter if you are underage or if you are offended by adult material.

==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

==Creating a Story==
If you have an idea for a story, you might like to try [[Idea Pitches|pitching your idea to other users]] and seeing how interested people might be in playing your story, what you could do to make playing your story fun, and who might be interested in collaborating with you to write it. Once you have done that, you can create it by entering your desired name for the Story into the search box and clicking '''Go'''. If the name has not already been taken, click this exact title to start the story. There are three general types of story. The first is the branching-plot story (an example of this is the Choose Your Own Adventure series of gamebooks), which require the reader to make choices but are otherwise like a regular novel. The second type is the role-playing game adventure, which combines the branching-plot novel with simple role-playing rules such as attack points and monster battles. The third type is the trivia quiz, where the player must answer questions as if they were on a game show.

==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
</nowiki>
</pre>

The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

Every page should have the category at the bottom. This keeps track of all the pages in the story. You can copy the category line from the previous page to the one you're working on. The category, obviously, is ''never'' 'name of story you're working on'. You type in the actual name of the story.

For additional help in wiki syntax, click [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing here]

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear red on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

To avoid accidentally crossing with other users' stories, it may be best to create pages with more than just an option name, like [[Unicorns]] or [[Open your eyes]]. Instead, when you create a new page, call it [[You have to slay The Dragon/_Page 1]] or [[YOUR CRAZY/Give up]]. You can have the link name be whatever you want though, like this:
<nowiki>[[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]]</nowiki> will appear as [[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]] on the page.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki> </nowiki>. Example:
*<nowiki>This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.</nowiki> will show as:
This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
*Add a basic, or main, timeline of background events during the period that the character is making choices in - those events are usually out of the character's control. This will help add consistency.
*Pages with major spelling, grammar or other problems, but not problems that render the page spam and a candidate for deletion, should be categorized in the Pages Requiring Attention Category to get other editors to help fix it up. If a page is not yet complete, add it to Category:Pages Under Construction so people know the editor is still working on it and it does not need to have someone improve it.
*Story Endings should be categorized with Category:Endings.

==Meta-Games==
*[[CYOA Drinking Game]] (Teen/Adult, though you can play with soda if you're under the minimum age for drinking alcohol.)
*[[You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When|You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When...]]

[[Category: System Pages]]

Talk:Main Page

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 14 Jun 2012 20:37:14 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Picures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

MOTDE: Enter the underworld B1B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 20:27:56 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with ' Velzaria - known as the black opal of Drow cities. Your majestic home is built in the shape of a half-moon with its back securely against the cavern walls. The thick and tall…'

Velzaria - known as the black opal of Drow cities. Your majestic home is built in the shape of a half-moon with its back securely
against the cavern walls. The thick and tall walls are made in obsidian black metal. They gleam unnaturally in your vision. From
beyond the walls - huge citadels jut out into the sky. They are the homes of the various clans of Velzaria. Yours - the citadel of
Char - is the tallest, and saturated in the middle of the city, both those facts attributed to the dominance your clan has over
the city. With the exception of the clan-citadels only the temples of the most powerful Goddesses tower above the city-walls.

You emerge instantly from the teleported just outside your home city in the underworld. In the distance you see that the gates of the city have been swung open - and the victory march is well on its way. Normally the constant darkness and familiar confinement of the cavern walls would make you feel welcomed and relaxed. Yet there is an uncharacteristic fear and worry in your eyes as your huntresses gather around you. Faylin is nowhere to be seen, and they see the anxiety dyeing you face. There are also highly noticable beads of panicky sweat running down your forehead. It is enough to inform them of what happened.

"T-The Queen was stolen?" Riki stutters in disbelief. "We´ve lost!?"

"High-Huntress!" Trix screams in a hurry, "You can still win the competition with the skull and the statue. Just because Solaria holds the royal-family doesn't mean this had ended! You can still win this so you musn´t show any weakness! Steady yourself!"

"She´s right sister-superior," Treccia adds, whom looked the most stricken as she realized what had happened.

"Y-Yes... yes you´re right..." you say with a voice so meek you can´t believe it belongs to you. "Yes! You are right! I will steady myself! I will not show weakness! This is not over!" You repeat, screaming the words to psyche yourself up and expunge the fear in your body. Your thoughts focus on just how much you hate Solaria - and it hardens you.

Your words also seem to inspire confidence in your huntresses. "There is nothing else for us to do," you tell them, "all that is left is to report to the tribunal and decide the winner of this contest. Treccia, where is the evaluation of the competition to take place?" You ask your little sister.

"At home. In Clan Char´s citadel. Mother wanted it so. Everybody will be there waiting. She said she was to invite delegations from all the clans in the city to bear witness to this occasion."

You make a tiresome sigh. "Well then... time to meet mother."

...

The main-hall of clan Char´s citadel is absolutely packed full. Hundreds of highly-ranked members from the clans of Velzaria and their retinue have gathered to watch the evaluation of the competition. The main-hall is a large, circular-shaped room. The audience has gathered on the sides, giving you room in the middle. Their curious and anxious glares way heavily on you as they try to guess and read you based on your expression how the competition has gone. You hold your chin up high with a cocky smirk on your face - a good disguise. Neither of the items you are to present are on your person - but are to be brought forth at the proper hour for evaluation. You step forward into the middle, surrounded by a sea of people.

On the opposite side of where you entered, stands a small, pyramid-shaped platform elevated well-above the other spectators. On it is situated the black throne of Char. A woman sits on top of it, a grim look owning her face. She is your mother - Mecinia, the High-Matriarch of Char. Her appearance is a lot like yours - the same chiseled bone-structure, voluptuous-figure, and a powerful, predatory gaze. Her age has not diminished her immense beauty however, merely brought forth another aspect of it. Mother always has a stern expression when dealing with these matters. You wonder if she will be able to keep her cool once it´s revealed that Trix acquired both Faylin as well as Isis and Iris. Wondering makes you fearful, so you stop thinking.

Below the pyramid-shaped platform you see the tribunal that is to evaluate the competition. They belong to the goddess of Tzet - she who governs order, law and reverences. Just to the side of them you see Vizzra - Matriarch of clan Valon and the mother of Solaria. She too looks like her daughter, a pretty, oval-shaped face with short, straight hair. Turning you to gaze across the crowd you see many familiar faces. Most noticably, every member of your huntresses are spread out across the room - observing with vigilant faces.

Behind you the front doors are slammed open. Loud gasps of shock are heard from the crowd. You quickly spin around to see what caused that strong reaction and is greeted with a sight you really wished not to see. Solaria - the bitch who has made life so miserable to you - emerges from the doorway striding triumphantly. In her hand she holds three leashes - her pets are the royal family of the Heartwood forest. Faylin, Isis and Iris all crawl on their knees after her like dogs while being completely naked. Their twin-tits shake and their ass-globes wobble freely. For a drow this is the ultimate honor - the most grandiose sight imaginable. Solaria is showing the world how she has conquered your racial enemy, how she has enslaved and dominated a royal family so that they crawl by her feet. Even you must admit that the sight strikes you with awe. Solaria looks, acts and radiates the confidence of a goddess as she strides towards you. Needless to say, her entrance cause a lot more commotion than yours did.

"Silence! Silence!" The tribunal shouts out to quell the many voices going off at Solaria´s grand entrance. You quickly try to assess and analyse the situation. Your don´t think anyone in this room will ever think of Solaria without a helthy-dose of respect ever again. Even your own clan members are dumbstruck impressed. Vizzra - noticing this too - grins like a devil, knowing what a huge victory this is for her clan. The only one not daunted by the situation is your mother. Her right eyebrow is twitching, she must be fuming with rage. To her, status and honor is everything. She´s not bothered about you losing, she´s concerned that what transpierce here will affect the honor of clan on a fundamental level.

Solaria reaches the center of the room and stops close to where you stand. She baths in the moment, showering herself with the disbeliving comments of her enemies and blissful praising of her clan-members. Soon a member of clan Valon darts into the middle of the room and takes the leashes away from Solaria. The impression has been made. You see the Queen´s plump ass wiggle away from you without her even throwing you a glance - the frustration is immense.

"Silence! Silence!" The tribunals frequent cries finally kills off the commotion and allows them to reassess control. The head-tribunal screams at your rival. "Solaria! You where to present the items at the appropriate hour. Have you no reverence for the rules and stipulations of the Goddesses!?" Solaria merely smiles at the scolding.

The head-tribunal begins the ceremony. Your gut fills with nervousness. Everyone is listening intensely. "At the request of High-Matriarch Mecinia of clan Char. We, the servants of Tzset, have pleded our goddess to sanction this challenge. She has responded, and given us the mandate to judge and evaluate this religiously-sanctioned competition with full and unquestionable authority. Any who dispute our judgment, shall be deemed a enemy of all drowkin, and be subjected to the worse atrocious known to our race."

With the introduction complete the head-tribunal looks over at you. "The first participant is High-Huntress Daine, the firstborn daughter of High-Matriarch Mecinia of clan Char." The priestess then twists her neck to talk at Solaria. "And Solaria. The firstborn of Vizzra - Matriarch of clan Valon. Both are powerful and reputable within our city. Their fates shall be decided here today."

You breath coolly, amazed at your own self-constraint. It seems like the encouregment you huntresses gave you really pays off. "First of all," the high-tribunal continues, "everyone but our guards have been disarmed when they entered this hall. Except for you two, hand over your swords until the procedure is over."

The priestesses of Tzset is probably the only party in any drow city that can be considered truly neutral to the quarrels and conflicts between the clans that dominate the political landscape of any dark elf society. Therefore they're the only faction you would ever voluntarily hand over your own weapons to, although you keep an eye on Solaria to make sure she does the same.

"Good," the tribunal exclaims and surveys the room. The soldiers of Tzset are close enough to intervene if either you or Solaria should attempt anything. And they are ready for it. "I shall now repeat the rules for all to hear. You are both to bring three items before the tribunal. A slave, a skull, and a artifact. In each category a judgment of the most valuable item is to commence. The one presenting the most valuable item shall be awarded one point - if the items are of equal value, no points shall be given. If the contest is a draw - you will be equals, co-commanders in every sense of the word. If any of you win by one point, she shall be deemed the superior commander. Under a victory by two points advantage, the standard rules of Humiliation shall apply - the loser shall be forced to kiss the toes of the victor. However, if one of you wins in every item and receives three points, she shall enslave the loser without restriction."

You can feel the air being sucked out of the room as she mentioned ''enslavement''. It´s what´s on everybody´s mind. Humiliation is usually considered a punishment worthy of suicide but enslavement is something else. The thought of a firstborn being enslaved by her rival. It intoxicates them with interest.

"The first items brought forth where to be the slaves. Namely, the surface-Queen Faylin and her two twin daughters Iris and Isis who count as a one due to them being twins. Solaria has already proven herself to have solely mastered the surface-elven scum. Their royal hides crawled at her feet in a manner pleasing to any goddess. She is the undisputed winner of this part of the competition and receives one point.

There is no commotion at the announcement, since everybody already knew it. Your mother changes sitting position though.

"Bring forth the second item, the skull of a fallen foe."

Two women come forth from opposite side-entrances with the skulls in hand. The room is so silent that you can hear their footsteps, but the tension can be cut with a knife. They both present the skulls to a particular member of the tribunal. The member is the sole male tribunal, he is the reader of skulls. The man grabs both skulls and instantly can give his assessment on it´s worth.

"The skull brought to me by Daine of Char is a male general. In life he was loyal, skilled, a veteran of many battles, and charitable as well as possesing many other heinous surface-elven values. His death crippled the arm of our enemy" The man then begins to speak about Solaria´s skull. "The other was a female priestess. She was virtuous and wise, a hated servant of the surface-goddesses."

"Huh," The high-tribunal mutters at his words, "It´s an easy choice then not requering discussion. One was male, the other female. It´s clear which skull is more valuable. Solaria receives one point."

The high-tribunals frank and quick assessment reaches your ears. One point to Solaria. One point to Solaria. The thoughts make you feel dizzy. The crowd is in a uproar. Heated conversations ensure but no one disagrees with the high-tribunals decision. Females, are more worth than males. How could you have picked him?

Suddenly, it's very hard to stand straight. You begin to feel lightheaded, and the fear turns to weakness in your body. The last one is to decide it. The thought of Humiliation seems like a plesant one now. What if you lose the next one? The anxiety is eating you up inside. Flashes of what could happen race though your mind. Kissing Solaria´s feet. Or worse.

"Bring in the third item!" The high-tribunal shouts. All comments die instantly. You look to your mother. She has clenched her fist. Cold, soaking sweat begin running down your forehead. You tilt your head just a bit to see Solaria. The woman is licking her lips lasciviously.

It takes several servants to carry in the solid gold statue of Faylin into the room. But for Solaria´s item only one is required. The woman carries a crown in her hand. It must be the royal crown of Heartwood forest.

All the member of the tribunal gazes at the two items long enough to form their personal opinions. Then they huddle together, discussing silently among themselves.

"Please, let me win," you whisper in desperation. Never have you felt so helpless. Again your gaze falls to your mother, even she is leaning forward on her chair.

The tribunal has made its decision. The head-tribunal speaks. "The statue is a representation of Faylin the surface-Queen. It embodies her honor. Capturing the value of our enemies most important person. The crown - on the other hand - represent a mandate. It represents the power monarchs hold over their subjects. Thus, the crowd not only embodies all the honor and value of Faylin, but also of every Queen who came before her. Thus, SOLARIA HAS WON THE COMPETITION BY THREE POINTS!"

Several soldiers tackle you violently to the ground. The subjegution starts immediately as they wrestle you to the ground and work to restrain you there. Enslavement, it seends desperation running though your body. You struggle, scream, scratch and try to kick your assailants off you. But there are too many! Pinned to your back you can´t see the crowd or your mother. You don´t know if your screams of help affects them. Yet Solaria is the one to step into your field of view. The woman stands between your legs. She stares at you, her prideful glee filled with victory. The look of a goddess burns in her eyes. She ogles you like a pice-of-meat, like a fucktoy. "You where always powerless to stop this slave! Resistance is useless - accept me as your Mistress!"

"NOO! NOO! Help me!" You cry. "Help me! Anybody!"

The guards continue to restrain you. You aren't sure what´s happening in the crowd - although you think several fights have broken out. Yet no one comes to your rescue.

"Soldiers, cut her clothes off. I want to see my prize!" Solaria commands with a tone of mad eagerness.

"NOO! Please NOOO! NOO!!!" You cries for help turns to the pleading of a rape-victim as the soldiers cut your clothes off. Your massive tits are let lose. Their majestic shapes worth their weight in gold free for Solaria´s eyes. The guards also cut away your leather-pants, revealing your now shamefully flaccid yet huge cock.

"SIT YOUR ASS BACK ON THAT THRONE MECINIA!" Solaria screams and points to your mother. "I want you to see this! I want you to see what I´m about to do to your daughter!"

The high-tribunal voice comes next. "You are obligated to witness this Mecinia! Sit down or face the consequences."

The satisfaction flickers in Solaria´s eyes, and her attention returns to you. "Wizard, bring me the wizard!" From some reason she calls out for a wizard. You continue to try and fight back, but it´s futile.

An old man carrying a dusty parchment walks up beside Solaria.

"Listen to me!" Solaria screams to the crowd. "LISTEN TO ME!" She screams again and unbelievable succeeds in silencing them.

"See this!?" Solaria yells to the crowd and steps on your cock and balls. "AHHHGGGRRR!" You shriek in pain.

"Do you see this? Do you know what this is?" Solaria's word now definitely the focus of every drow in the hall. "This is a blessing. A gift of the goddesses!" Solaria steps off your cock, yet you still winch in anguish. "It is a gift given to clan Char from the goddesses due to their might. It makes the vielder into the ultimate drow. With all the superiorities of the female gender mixed with the cock and balls of a male specimen. Daine has never been a separate gender from us, she has only been a female vielding a male fuckstick. It isn´t a natural part of her, it is just a weapon like any others. A weapon to rape her enemies with. Yet now ''I'' have ''enslaved'' her! I have proven my superiority! Subjegated her to my will! Daine no longer deserves this weapon of the goddesses as a slave!" Solaria lets the audience linger on her words as she stares into your eyes. Her rock-hard, triumphant eyes penetrate you, they see your soul - naked in all its fear and panic. She continues, "I, only I, am now worthy of wielding this weapon. Wizard, start the spell."

The wizards start chanting in some archaic language unknown to you while he reads from the parchment. Solaria herself begins quickly stripping. Words of confusion come from the crowd at this turn of events and even you stop struggling in confusion at what´s going on. Solaria sheds every piece of clothing from her body and poses proud in her nakedness.

Then the magic starts. A blue light appears dancing around your cock. As the wizard chants continue the light starts glowing and growing as well as dancing faster.

"I-It burns!" you state.

At the same time the blue glow starts appearing around Solaria´s crotch as well. The light engulfs both your crotch areas as you feel something happening to your cock. It burns, it changes somehow!

"M-My cock! I-It´s disintegrating!" you state in absolute disbelief.

You feel your cock eroding away from your body. And as the blue glow ends and disappears from your crotch all that remains is a smooth, tight, pink, virginal cunt! A pussy! You have a pussy! Clitoris, labia, womb, ovaries and everything! Solaria has dispelled your cock and balls and left you with a perfectly normal pussy!

"GAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" you scream in horrid realization.

The glow ends at Solaria´s crotch also. And now in-between her loins hangs a pair of apple-sized hairy balls and a bull-sized cock with a purplish cockhead! It emerges fully erected and throbbing in excitement with pre-cum gushing out from the pisshole. Solaria´s smile has never been wider. "Now I shall fuck you slave!"

"NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"

*[[MOTDE: Chapter 2: Under Solaria´s will]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |E]]

MOTDE: Grab your sword and rush to the scene of the battle B1B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 19:35:03 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with '"Troll-shit! How did the fucking goblins get lose!?" you yell in fuming frustration as you fumble to get your dick back in your pants. "Rainye follow me!" you command as you leav…'

"Troll-shit! How did the fucking goblins get lose!?" you yell in fuming frustration as you fumble to get your dick back in your pants. "Rainye follow me!" you command as you leave the wagon with sword draw. The guards posted by the wagon see you rushing out and follow in all haste.

You sprint after the messenger who leads you to a wagon that has tipped over. The cage doors have flown open and wild, frenzied goblins are attacking the guards as they try to get to the surface-elven pussy. One chain-gang of female slaves have been attacked and are being wrestled to the ground where they are fucking in every hole by the rampaging goblins. The drow guards fight to both slay the goblins and to prevent the other chain-gangs from fleeing in panic.

You rush into the fray slashing wildly to kill as many goblins as possible with each swing of your blade. The guards rushing in behind you fight with almost equal vigor. But with the opportunity to stick their dicks into a elven-cunt and befoul their orifices with their beastly spunk the goblins have gone mad and are fighting to the death. The goblins whom have gotten their sickly disgusting erections into some elven fuckhole doesn't even take notice of the battle going on. They just fuck with all their power until some drow comes over to cut their head off.

As the last goblin is disemboweled you thoughts suddenly become clear and focus. Faylin. You rush back to your wagon not notifying anybody else. Stepping inside you are dumbstruck. Faylin is gone. The Queen is gone. Your sex-slave, and the one you where to bring to the competition, is nowhere to be found. You circle, looking at each corner of the wagon. You had her tied up and dripping cum in the center but now she´s gone. The statue and skull is still there, but no surface-Queen.

You dart outside. Not screaming. Not slashing wildly. Just looking frantically through the nearby wagons in search for your Queen. The other guards begin to return from the battle with the goblins and they see that something is wrong.

"High-Huntress? What´s wrong!?" Some of them call out.

The messenger who warned you about the goblins steps forward. There is a sly, smug smirk on her face. "Mistress Solaria sends her regards. By now the slave-Queen has already stepped through the teleportation portal and is safely in Velzaria. You have lost you stupid cunt! Mistress Solaria has stolen the surface-Queen from right under your nose. She will make you kneel and service her on your knees after this competition is over you fat pice-of-shit!"

Then she spits at you. The glob of saliva splashes into your chisled face. You´ve just been spat at by the woman who fooled and robbed you of your most valuable possession. The rage is instantaneous and you slash at her head - cutting her head off in one clean sweep. But it won´t bring Faylin back.

Your guards realise your anger and say not a word. You hold your face in your hands, clawing at it, striking yourself in frustration. You bite your lip until it bleeds and scream several times without restraint.

Finally, after you don´t know how long, Rainye takes the word, "High-Huntress, the last wagon steps through the teleportation gate now. It will soon close. We need to leave."

*[[MOTDE: Enter the underworld B1B1|MOTDE: Enter the underworld]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |G]]

MOTDE: Go for the golden statue of Faylin B1B

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 19:21:47 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with '"I shall choce to present that one," you say and point to the golden statue. Your sister looks at it with her usual, neautral glare. "What´s your reasoning?" she asks. "The mo…'

"I shall choce to present that one," you say and point to the golden statue.

Your sister looks at it with her usual, neautral glare. "What´s your reasoning?" she asks.

"The most valuable artifact isn´t just the most expensive one. The prestige associated with it is what the judges will truly value. The statue serves as the embodiment of the Queen and her honor, the symbol of all her pride and power. And since there is no one with more value among the Heartwood-forest elves than their Queen, Solaria won´t be able to produce an item matching the statues worth."

"Seems like sound reasoning to me," Treccia politely comments.

"Treccia, get your guards to transport the statue to the throne-room. I have ordered the others to assemble there. We will go there as well. It´s time we retreat back to the underworld."

"Yes sister-superior" Treccia nods and does so. Faylind has stood silent and listened through you entire reasoning with a expression of total non-understanding, as if your thought process is completely alien to her. Again you yank her leash so that she stumbles forward. "Love time will have to wait slave-Queen, it´s time to get back to ''my'' throne-room."

...

As you return to the throne-room you find everyone there waiting for you. Your second-in-command Trix, your skillful and loyal seductress Rainye, Silvir who holds the skinned-clean skull of the elf general whom you slew and intend to bring back to Velzaria as an item for the competition, your diplomatic little-sister Treccia whom rushed here before you to deliver the statue, the small and nimble Riki whom you give the leash holding Faylin to, as well as all the other huntresses loyal to Char.

You walk past the assembled elite-force and once again park your ass on the royal throne. The others bow, as the hierarchy commands, and Faylin is forced down on her knees in front of her own throne. You feel delightfully superior at this gesture, and decide wear a wide smile as you begin your speech.

"This throne... my mother Mecinia used to sit on one just like this one. But hers was made of black stone and with her enslaved enemies chained to its feet. That was a long time ago..." your words seem to wander off as you reflect deeply on the old grandeur of your clan. "It was before I was even born. Back in the days when she led a march of the dark elves to the surface-world and brought it to its knees before finally being driven back. Our people called her the ''Queen'' of Velzaria once, even our enemies where forced to acknowledge that title. Now, with the loss of the march on the surface world, her honor as well as our clan´s prestige has regressed, and people just call her High-Matriarch," as you speak that last line your voice becomes filled with subtle sorrowful anger. "But that´s about change. Things are to be returned to the way they where. When I return to the underworld and crush Solaria´s clan Valon the people will tremble with fear at my mother's feet - and venerate her like a Queen once again."

The grand room is filled with silence for a moment until you say, "I´m done with my monolog. What do you have to report?"

Trix steps forward. "High-Huntress and commander Daine, I´ve started to organize our march back to the underworld. Our soldiers are loading the plunder onto the wagons as we speak. The caravan will be ready to move within the hour. I calculated that with all the slaves and loot from the raid it should take the entire night to march back to the teleportation gate and return to the underworld. The teleportation gate itself is excepted to expire at sunrise, but that´s enough time to get everyone back safely."

"Good," you mutter, "Treccia, take the items for the competition: the skull of the general, the golden statue, and the surface-Queen, down to my personal wagon and store them there for the journey. Assign our best guards to it. Those bitches from clan Valon might still try and steal them away from us."

"Yes sister-superior." Treccia grabs Faylin by her hair - making the Queen yelp and orders her soldiers to carry the statue and skull down to the wagons.

As Treccia leaves, Trix continues, "but... High-Huntress, we´ve yet to locate Solaria within the city."

You roll your eyes. "And that means we still have no idea what items she brings to the competition or have any chance of re-conquering the surface-Queens daughters. Which in turn means that ''I'' cannot achieve total victory over Solaria in the competition without the twin-princesses. Which means she won´t be my slave... at least for now."

"Y-yes High-Huntress," Trix stutters. "She must be tightly guarded and hidden. Our spies haven't been able to penetrate clan Valon´s headquarters."

"Hrmm," you grunt in disepointment "Maybe I picked the wrong woman to be my second-in-command." Trix bows her head in compliance.

You value the last few seconds your ass sits on the throne. "Well then, there is no more for us to do here. Remember this place huntresses. Remember our enemies. Their cities, their soldiers, the slaves they can become. This won´t be the last time we ascende to the surface-world. Another time shall come. They shall feel our wrath once again."

...

There is a lot of hectic commotion outside the city as the army is just finishing the preparation to march back to the underworld. Thousands upon thousands of surface-slaves as well as the vast riches of plunder are coerced into following along. The more valuable slaves - the nobles, priestess, virgins and all other whom will fetch a hefty price at the slave-market are horded into steal-barred prison wagons. The rest of the naked captives - mostly females since the male population had been put to the sword - are linked together in long chain-gangs and forced to march with the motivation of the whip. Many scream and cry even now when they know their fates to be sealed. There is no army for miles in this huge forest - and even the closest one probably hasn´t even been notified of your attack yet. The sound of all this happening at once is as loud as the battle itself.

The various slave-beasts that the army brought with them as auxiliary troops are also loaded back onto the wagons. The larger beasts like the orc´s have been sedated for the journey, but the goblins madly rattle their cage in frustration at the sight of the naked elves walking besides them. The beauty of an elf is not something found among their woman, so any untrained beast seeing a naked and valuable elf will go mad with lust.

You stand by your own personal wagon located in the end of the caravan. The wagon is enclosed as like a room to give you the privacy you deserve. Faylin, the skull of the general, and the statue are all stored within. Naturally, it´s guarded with your clan´s elite soldiers.

Trix - whom has organized this caravan - comes to you carrying a great horn. "The caravan is ready to depart," she says, "should I give the order?"

You nod - and Trix blows the horn. It´s signal loud enough for everyone to hear. At once the wagons start moving and the whips begin descending down upon the chain-ganged slaves naked backs.

"We shall stay here and guard the rear for as long as it takes," you conclude to your assembled huntresses. "Riki, you shall keep yourself in the front of the caravan and spy after Solaria. Do so until you find her or we reach the teleportation gate."

"Yes High-Huntress!" Riki confirms and darts off.

As a last order you command some of your soldiers to burn down the city. You´ve always planned for this - only the complete and utter destruction and enslavement of your enemies can be considered a true victory. As the soldiers set the city ablaze the flames spread quickly. With every building being made out of wood the entire city is soon burning like a wild-fire. The surface-elves feel the heat fire and turn their heads to witness the place they´ve called home be destroyed by the blazing flames. Even with all the depravities that has befallen them, they still fell fresh tears so innocent that they could belong to children at the destruction of their beloved city.

...

Having marched through the night you´ve finally reach your original encampment where the teleportation gate lie. You can see it´s distinct purple glow in the distance, yet being situated in the back of the caravan there is still quite some time until you can leave this cursed surface-world.

Riki comes to report. "The caravan has reached the teleportation gate High-Huntress. The head of the caravan has begun entering the underworld. However, it will take time for our entire army to enter the underworld."

"I see... So still no sight of Solaria then?"

"N-nothing High-Huntress, there´s still no sign of her... uhh... still, I am happy we left at night. I wouldn´t be able to live another day under that infernal sun." Riki says and squints her eyes into the distance.

The continuous public cowardice of even your elite soldiers annoys you. One cannot reveal such fear for the surface-world like that. Instead of wasting words on her you just throw her an irritated look and Silvir shuts her mouth to prevent further idiocy. Besides, you have other things on your mind. The thought of that Queens fuckhole squeezing your cock until another orgasm has occupied your mind for the entire journey. Preforming mundane tasks that quite frankly are beneath you has becom irritatingly difficult now that the Queen´s tight yet elastic pussy is avaliable to you. Like a hellish tease it has kept your dick hard and sodden in arousal. It´s impossible to fulfill ones obligations as a commander with a whore like Faylin on your mind.

"Trix!" you decide to call over, and your second-in-command comes immediately.

"Yes High-Huntress?"

"Take over for me. The caravan has begun entering the teleported so I want you to move forward and return to the underworld ahead of me and make sure everything runs smoothly there. If we haven´t seen Solaria yet I doubt we´ll catch her at this hour anyways. I´ll retreat to my wagon. Rainye, you´ll follow me, the rest of you go with Trix."

"As you wish High-Huntress" Trix says, and immediately gestures the other huntresses to follow her, probably enjoying the power to do so. You walk over to your own wagon and enter.

...

A few minutes later you need not anguish at the thoughts of the Queen´s fuckhole any more. You are now kneeling in-front of the naked and voluptuous booty of the surface-Queen. You have her tied down like a dog, and your erected cock pointing straight at her squirming sex. Rainye has applied certain ointments to Faylin´s pussy that forces the erogenous genital to burn hotter and needier than she would ever wish it to be. As an result of this, the Queen´s pink pussy-meat is completely drenched and dripping with excitement. The arousal tears at her mind, making her go crazy with unwanted lust.

You take a quick poke at her pussy, the pink, sex-flesh yields and smothers before your hardness. It sends electric waves through the both of you, all your muscles stiffen while the Queen screams like a madwoman.

"You scream so loudly surface-Queen that the whole caravan can hear it!" you mockingly state with a great deal of satisfaction, "Imagine what your subjects must think when they hear their monarch wailing like a whore while they are being horded like cattle to their doom!"

Then you penetrate her with the tip of your cockhead, making the Queen scream once again. Your cockhead is just as sodden with sex-fluids as her pussy is, the contact smears your cum together and mixes the juices between your organs.

"Ohh fucking you one last time on this damned surface-world is going to be great."

Suddenly, the door to your wagon is slammed open and a messenger hastily enters with a startled look on her face.

"Co-Commander Daine! The goblin cages, they fell and broke open. Now their running wild and are raping the slaves!"

*[[MOTDE: Grab your sword and rush to the scene of the battle B1B1|MOTDE: Grab your sword and rush to the scene of the battle]]

*[[MOTDE: Order Rainye to deal with it B1B2|MOTDE: Order Rainye to deal with it]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |G]]

MOTDE: Stomp down on Chalisa´s clit with the heel of your boot B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 19:21:41 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with 'You elevate your leg into the air, keeping the heel pointing downwards at the painfully swollen and defenseless clitoris of Chalisa. With her face still lodged in-between Faylin…'

You elevate your leg into the air, keeping the heel pointing downwards at the painfully swollen and defenseless clitoris of Chalisa. With her face still lodged in-between Faylin´s thighs and mindlessly munching away on that royal pussy, the surface-elf priestess is completely unaware of your oncoming attack.

With great force you slam your leg downwards - the bloated and super-sensitive sex-bud is absolutely crushed and flattened under the heel of your boot.

“MMMMMMMMMMRRRRRRRRAAAAUUUGGGH!” Chalisa screams with her entire body behind the cry. The intense, gutturally sound is muffled by the sloppy pussy nested on top of her mouth. Your chrushing heel not only unleash hellish anguish from the impact - but also sets-off the sexual-climax that was so close to erupting. The blinding pain mixes with the euphoric pleasure already in her body and becomes one nerve-wrecking orgasm that acts as a uncontrollably agonizing exodus of all the built-up desire inside her. The long-awaited orgasm shoots every part of her body into a frenzy. Her limbs strain violently against its bounds, making the table quiver as her body jolts from the orgasmic demolition of her clitoris.

As her body trembles uncontrollable - comes from the depths of Chalisa´s pussy-canal - a stream of clear cunt-fluids that squirts straight outwards into the open and splashes against your svelte leg. The stream of watery cum absolutely soaks the lower part of your leg as your other leg is still crushing Chalisa´s clitoris under its heel. You and Rainye laugh in suprise at the disgraceful and humiliating reaction from the surface-priestess body, while Faylin looks on in horror - her face still painted with blushing lust from the orgasm.

"See slave-Queen? Even pain is pleasure to a surface-elven whore! You cunts get off from anything we inflict on you!" you say with obvious triumph to the horror-struck Queen.

After quite a while of Chalisa´s body jerking and twitching it suddenly stops moving and falls dead-still. Faylin feels the head in-between her loins fall limp as it shuts down and hangs unrestrained over the table edge. The fucktoys mind drifts deeply into unconsciousness from the dreadful pain and overstimulation of the orgasm. Only then do you remove the heel from Chalisa´s smashed clitoris. The erogenous zone is now one blistering red area - as from a horrid wound - with a mangled and disfigured clitoris.

"That was... amazing High-Huntress. You really destroyed her, forced her over the edge!"

"Yes it was entertaining," you say and take another look at your cum-drenched leg, "your preparations are not unappreciated. However, for now, I will ask you something. What are your oppinons of my new second-in-command? Do you think Trix is worthy of the position?"

Rainye answers without questions. "Well, she is young, energetic, merciless, a skilled leader - albeit an inexperienced one. I think she can be everything Minvir failed to be my High-Huntress," Rainye dutifully replies.

"Really, so you fully support Trix as the new second-in-command? She is still unexperienced in actual warfare as you said. You don´t think that there where someone more experienced, more proven and skilled than Trix that deserves the rank?" Your questioning voice unusually authoritarian even for yourself.

Rainye smiles, almost happily, "Are you insulating that ''I'' could have taken the role?" She moves closer to you, stopping within kissing range. Yet the dark elf has her eyes downcast, towards your feet instead of your eyes. "But that id forbidden High-Huntress, only a woman of clan Char is ever allowed to ascend to any leader-position within the Huntresses. For me - a mere vassal of Char, a servant if you will - to even think such a thought, would be treason." Rainye´s voice lowers, it becomes seductive and submissive, "are you testing my loyalties, Mistress Daine?"

You grin at how easily she spotted your rouse, but refrain from responding.

"Well then... I see that I must reaffirm my vows-of-service to clan Char." Rainye whispers and gets down on her hands-and-knees like a dog. She sticks her head forward towards your cum-drenched leg and extends her tongue. With a wide stroke the concupiscent woman begins scooping the glistering squirt-fluids off your leg. She laps very much like an animal, being careful never to use her lips to suck any of the cunt-juices off your leather-clad leg. This is possible with her long, agile and expertly-trained tongue-muscle. The woman seems to be enjoying it too, wiggling her butt playfully side-to-side as she drinks Chalisa´s girl-juices.

You grab the dark elfs white hair and raise her back to her feet where you abruptly force her into a sloppy kiss. The cum-flavor is all over her, stuck in the nooks and crannies of her delicious mouth. As abruptly as you incited the kiss you end it and say to her face, "you slut Rainye! Such slavish actions would be highly-dishonorable if made public."

She smiles. "Vassals need to be kept on a short leash High-Huntress. It would be good for you to have something to blackmail me with if you where to ever suspect my loyalties again."

Her response makes you grin back at her. "You truly are a wanton slut. But your mine slut Rainye. Faylin! Get over here."

The Queen has stood shocked though your conversation, only now does she move her thighs away from Chalisa´s unconscious head. As she does so you grab the leash-of-her-collar again.

"Rainye, I am done with you. Meet me at the throne-room later when we begin to prepare the journey back to the underworld."

"As you wish High-Huntress." Your servant bows, and you leave the temple with Faylin still chained to your leash.

*[[MOTDE: Head for the western-wing where Trix resides B1|MOTDE: Head for the western-wing where Trix resides]]

*[[MOTDE: Go to the market district and look for Silvir B1|MOTDE: Go to the market district and look for Silvir]]

Or.

*[[MOTDE: Head back to the throne room B1|MOTDE: Head back to the throne room]]
[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |S]]

MOTDE: Chapter 1: The raid

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 19:21:39 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

'''Chapter 1: The raid'''

Thousands of years ago the Drows and surface-elves where separated. A great civil war lead to your race´s banishment to the
underworld. The goal was eternal separation between the species. Not only earth, but also a magical barrier established to
separate the underworld and the surface. The barrier makes it impossible to simply dig oneself out of the underworld, alternative
ways must be found to reach the sun lands.
If the entrance is temporary, a raid is declared. If its permanent, a war is declared, a great march to the surface commences. But
due to the extremely splintered nature of Drow´s the war is ultimately a losing one, the march is driven back and the entrance
sealed once again. No permanent stronghold on the surface has been established, but glory and slaves have been brought back to the
underworld.
Drow civilization consists of city-states competing against each other. In each city different Clans vie for power of the city,
and in each Clan families struggle to be the Clans Matriarch. These different factions are always struggling over power, Drow
civilization is a brutal one where war and enslaving others give the ultimate glory.
You are Daine, firstborn of the Matriarch of the Clan Char in the city of Velzaria. Your mother Mecinia is High-Matriarch, the
leader of the most powerful clan in the city, it is through her influence that you achieved the position of co-commander.
A day ago the raid started. Through divine guidance your city managed to produce a magical spell which opened up a teleportation
gate to the surface world. You and your huntresses went on a hunt for surface elves
to get a first taste of what to come, and that´s how you ended up here.

----

Your group trek their way back across the plain, into the forest, and return where the hunt started at base camp. The two slaves are individually strapped by their wrists and ankles too wooden sticks which can then easily be carried across the shoulder. Your huntresses carry the catches while you lead, the two naked women dangling semi-consciously from their restrains. Both are in shock, and both are mentally and spiritually defeated, shells of the frolicking lovers you found by the lake. They make no resistance during the journey.

The teleportation gate opened deep in within the Heartwood forest. Far enough from any settlement to avoid detection, but close enough to conduct raids from. It has the appearance of a giant purple door, glowing and steaming cloudy mist from its base. All around it tents and encampments have sprung up. Each tent carries different symbols to signify which clan they belong to, every Drow knows every symbol for every clan that has ever existed. It´s among the first things thought to children, from slave-child or firstborns of supreme Matriarchs, you all learn it.

No palisade has been built, only a few hastily constructed watchtowers. As the guards signal your approach you spot a lone figure waiting for you by the wooden towers. You smile and turn to your second-in command Minvir.

"Carry the catches to the center of camp and have their bodies displayed and made available to anyone who wish to use them, compliments from the House of Char of course."

"Yes High-Huntress Daine," Minvir says and bows her head.

Your huntresses head for the camps center while you go off to meet the girl waiting for you. She sees your smile and smile back, then bows her head in submission.

She greats you with the phrase. "Welcome back Sister-superior Daine, I see the goddesses blessed your hunt."

"These surface-dwellers cunts were most... exquisite, huntress-sister Treccia" You say and crudely grip your package while smirking at her.

Treccia stands about a head shorter than you. She is very beautiful, her twin breasts and ass cheeks are both large and firm, but not matching your majestic wonders. Her face looks a lot like yours, pouty lips, bright silvery eyes, and a chiseled bone-structure. She´s only slightly more feminine. The young Drow also always keeps her long white hair tightly braided in one string of hair, making it have appearance of a cruel whip.

She´s one of your huntresses, and thus also your subordinate. Normally she would accompany you on the hunt but mother called her back to the underdark for unknown reasons just before you set off.

"I bring news from mother-superior. She has issued that a religiously sanctioned challenge is to be conducted in this raid between you and co-commander Solaria."

"What, why!?" You ask.

"She is unhappy that two warriors lead this raid. It´s unnatural. She will let it proceed but has issued the challenge to determine who the superior Commander is."

Your mother never wanted a co-commander in the first place. Although she is the most powerful and influential woman in the city-state she cannot rule alone. During the planning of the raid Solaria´s clan demanded that a co-commander should be named to balance the power between the clans. If the demand was not meet Solaria´s clan would withdraw its support. Many other clans supported them despite the unorthodoxy of it, so to get their support, your mother was forced to agreed. This challenge is most likely a chance for your mother to regain face, to show that her daughter is the superior commander. But your mother is not known for any favoritism when it comes to religious-sanctioned matters, in all other matters however, she does.

You take a second to melt the information. "What´s the terms of the contest, and more importantly, what´s at stake?"

"I´m under religious-sanctioned law to reveal it to the both of you at the same time. My apologies sister-superior," she says and bows her head again, "but I cannot defy law."

"Hrmm, very well, bring me Solaria and let´s mother has decreed for us."

"May I suggest that the meeting take place in your tent sister-superior?"

*[[MOTDE: "Yes of course, lets head for my tent and call for Solaria to meet us there."]]

*[[MOTDE: "Actually sister, let the challenge wait, lets instead visit the captives and see how they enjoy Drow hospitality."]]

*[[MOTDE: "Actually sister, let the challenge wait, I wish to inspect the beast slaves"]]
[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |C]]

MOTDE: "She should lick your butthole" B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 20 May 2012 19:21:36 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

Trix gives you an exhilarating smile. "Yes that´s an excellent idea High-Huntress. Who knows, maybe high-elves are perverted freaks who enjoy anilingus more than licking clit? She´ll definitely have to perform ''much'' better at licking my ass than licking my clit. Otherwise I will deprive ''much'' pleasure from seeing her breed in the orc dens!"

Trix reaches for a nightstand and grasps a small, metal key lying there. She hurls them at Faylin who fumbles them in the air.

"Untie Trix´s younger harlot Queen-slave," you command the unwilling woman. Faylin doesn't enjoy becoming the slaves handler knowing what´s about to happen to her. But she duly unlocks the shackles fastened around the girls ankles, as well as removing the chains connecting them to her collar.

The high-born regent then reaches for the anal-plug like she would a spider and grasps it. A loud, popping sound is heard as she pulls it from the girls dirty rectum. The girls hair is still wrapped around the end of the butt-plug, so Faylin carefully picks it off, cautious not to touch the messy surface that had been lounged up the poor girls shithole.

Before the unchained girl even has a chance to rise you grab her long, braided ponytail and yank her harshly towards you. She screams sharply as you do so, landing just at your feet. You grab her ponytail by the base of her hairline, holding it and roughly pulling her head back so that she looks straight up into your cold eyes.

"What name did that old cunt over there bestow upon you at birth slave?" You say and jerk your head in the direction of the ambassadors tied-down body.

"Sinalla," she sobs.

"Hmm, the surface-elves always name their children like whores," you say to no one in particular in the room, then aim your piercing eyes at Sinalla´s again. "So tell me high-elf slave Sinalla. Does the thought of squeezing out an annual litter of green, orc babies from your womb for the rest of your life sound appealing?"

The girls meek sobs break out into violent crying at your words. "NO! No please not that! I´ll do anything. J-Just don´t mate me with orcs!"

Trix laughs loudly in amusement at the girls panicky response and begins to get in position. She lies down on her back with her rump at the end of the bed. Then she spreads her legs wide apart and up in the air, so that her butt-globes spread to reveal the valley of her ass. This is easily accomplished with her highly athletic and agile, huntress-trained body. Finally she arches her butt upwards. All this reveals and emphasizes her sheltered, puckered butthole.

"Are you sure you don´t want to be sent to the breeding dens little girl? An orc cock is at least ''three'' times the size of any surface-elven male. They could easily stuff you with so much cock that your holes would burst and so much cum that you won´t have to eat or drink anything else even during your labor," you ask with an serious, non-sarcastic voice, as if imploring her to reconsider.

"No-o-o-o-o," She cries in a fading manner, "a-anything but that please! Please Mistress dark elf, I´m begging you!"

A subtle, derisive smile forms on your lips. "So Sinalla... what would you rather do then?" You inquire with a stern voice that demands a satisfactory answer.

A hyperventilating Sinalla looks over at Trix. She sees her positioning, understands how the pose deliberately spreads her ass-cheeks and emphasizes her vile butthole. She also sees the wicked, leering expression on Trix´s face, and understands it´s dyed with lewd anticipation.

Sinalla begins to answer with a heavy voice, "I... l want to clean my Mistress rectum. I want to tongue her beautiful brown hole until it´s clean and proper. I want to make amends for my poor performance in licking her beautiful pussy last night. I want to prove that high-elf girls are just a bunch of horny sluts who want to be dominated and fucked by dark elves!" She states with a fiery passion streaming from self-preservation.

"Hahahaha!" You and Trix laugh like harpies at the crying girls depraved and degrading speech. Still laughing, you raise your arm and point at the exposed, O-shaped butthole belonging to Trix. The young girl immediately darts off on-all-fours towards her Mistress rear-entrance.

The Queen has been watching the process in silent repulsion. Her silence cracks as a low, barely audible grunt escapes Faylin´s lips as she sees Sinalla quickly crawling on-all-fours towards Trix´s spread butthole in hope of appeasing her evil Mistress. It pains her seeing someone so young and innocent being deprived of elven values in the most appalling way imaginable.

Of course, these emotions don´t go unnoticed to your ever-watching eye."What slave-Queen? Do you somehow object to Sinalla tonguing her Mistress anus!?" You yell with an accusing and threatening voice.

The Queen snaps out of her emotional state of mind and knows she´s once again forced to lie or face punishment at your hand. With a wide, fake smile and equally fake fawning tone she awkwardly says, "no Mistress Daine, I approve of it."

Meanwhile, Sinalla has arrived at Trix´s exposed anus. She´s on-all-fours like a dog, kneeling at the end of the bed where Trix has positioned her sculptured black ass. The blond elf´s deep blue eyes stare at the puckered anus, focusing her determination on the raunchy surface. Her nose is almost poking at the wrinkly, brown hole.

"Hihihihi," Trix giggles and stares at the unyielding surface-elf. Her own eyes are more of a cyan color, and her grin wide and curvy like a banana. "Clean it," Trix says and giggles again.

Sinalla goes cold, experiencing doubt for a fraction-of-a-second. Then, repressing all thought, she throws herself with eyes closed at the deep, dark furrow. The high-born young elf encloses her luscious lips over the buttholes crinkly surface repeatedly. She munches and kisses it, slavishly bringing it pleasure by pressing her soft, wet lips onto the foul ring-shaped hole. Like a mad lover she smooches it sloppily, smearing her wet, gushing saliva onto its dry, meaty surface. With each watery, frenzied kiss Sinalla receives a mouth-full of flavors from Trix´s recipient ass.

"Uhmmmm," Trix has already begun moaning and panting, proof of the pleasure generated by Sinalla´s disgraceful rimjob. Her lust-ridden face lets out moist, feminine cries of arousal, "more, more!"

Sinalla presses her closed, pouted lips onto the fleshy butt-lips hard, then parts her lips to let her nimble tongue poke through her lips onto the puckered asshole. She attacks the anal-crack like a mad lover with wild lapses and probing stabs. Her taste-organ darts in, out and around the crampy backdoor. The transaction of fluids and flavors from Sinalla´s juvenile tongue-kissing makes sure the young elves taste-buds are assaulted by repugnant, offensive tastes that sting and burn at her strained willpower.

Your attention returns to tormenting Faylin. "Oh? So the Queen of Heartwood forest approves of surface-elves tongue-fucking their Mistresses assholes? So you don´t consider it... dirty?" You mock her, subtly inquiring her to specify how she really feels about it.

The spectacle Faylin just witnessed only serves to disgust her more. Her extreme nervousness and revulsion is evident in the cold sweat that has begun running down her forehead. Still she forces herself to answer you,"no-no, on the contrary Mistress I... I find it," Faylin sounds like she's about to barf up the words, "I find it highly erotic, a-and romantic... Mistress." The Queen turns her face away so that you don´t see it contorted in disgust.

Behind the both of you Sinalla´s mother is crying a river of tears for her daughter. But the bondage reassures her passivity, and with the mouth-gag her wails and sobs makes her unable to even voice a protest. Faylin sympathizes, crying tears of her own. You put your hands on her shoulders and massage them gently.

"Keep your eyes on that ass-eating slave," you say and begin molesting her body. You run your hands over her naked thighs and lower abdomen. The Queen´s body begins fluttering with arousal. You hear her girthing her teeth and groaning, she must hate the sexual hormones flushing through her systems in such an immoral and undignified situation.

You rest your chin on her right shoulder, then lean in to whisper in her ear with a sultry voice, "imagine your daughters eating out my shithole like that. Wouldn´t that be just lovely?"

"Oh Goddess!" Fresh trails of tears run down Faylin´s cheeks. Afterwards she grunts throatily and swallows, a loud grunt, as if trying to stop the mother-of-all-insults escaping from her mouth and hurling itself at you.

You nibble on her earlobe and lick up her tears with your long, agile tongue. "Omm Yes, Isis and Iris feasting on my ass. I can just imagine those two young tongues making out inside my asshole while their mom sucks my dick," you say and push your pelvis into her luscious butt.

Faylin makes all manners of pain-filled grimaces as she continues to witness the anilingus before her. Sinalla has her pink lips firmly locked with Trix´s brown, wrinkly shithole. The blond slave has her moist tongue lounged into the filthy and arid depths. She vigorously swirls and twirls her tongue against the fleshy walls of the anal-passageway. The anus worship is filled with indecent, slurping noises.

"Y-Yeah, tongue my rectum... Uahhh!" Trix grunts as Sinalla´s tongue penetrates particularly deep. "Yea, hit those deep spots you dirty bitch! I want even the farthest parts of my anus scraped clean! Ahhhh!" Sinalla immediately obeys, the nimble young elf doing everything she can to avoid a fate in the orc breeding dens. The tip of her tongue scrapes the surface of an uncharted area of Trix´s anus.

The huntress tosses her head around and moans as she twitches lightly on the bed. She has begun pinching her own erected nipples. And although her pussy get´s no direct stimulation it´s still soaked and glistering with clear, Drow juices. The young dominant, successful and beautiful dark elf is close to climax, the rimjob has almost driven her over the edge and her legs are quivering up in the air.

You stop carresing Faylin´s body and point over her shoulder towards Trix."See that clit?" You ask, "see that clit thrumming with need?" Trix has a large, nerve-filled clit that always stands out from under her hood. Faylin sees it clearly as you point at the engorged pleasure hub. "You are a whore surface-Queen, go do what whores do."

The Queen steps on shaky legs towards Trix´s erogenous zone. Neither Trix nor Sinalla acknowledge her as the brown-haired mother kneels down on the side of Sinalla. Faylin quickly goes to work on the erotic box, munching and sucking on its vulnerable flesh.

"Ohh, Uhh, Ahh," Trix moans from the double service. She has the head of an Queen and a ambassadors daughter nested in her sensitive nether regions. The Queen feels incredibly cheap and ashamed, not only over begin exploited like this, but also from being heated with desire from your molesting touch. The ambassadors daughter only feels the fear of being thrown into the orc dens. The pleasure boils over for Trix, her sleek legs go from quivering to full-on vibrate in the air.

"Huhuhuhuhuhu, Oh Goddess!" "Ahhhh I´m gonna cum! I´m cumming with both my ass and my pussy!"

With Faylin and Sinalla working their tongues at full speed through the orgasm Trix squirts out climax-fluids from her cunt as she cums. The jucies sprays like piss onto Sinalla´s head and back, landing in long strings over her already desecrated body. There is a great, satisfactory feeling steaming from both her butt and clit, both lewd pleasures showering her mind.

Ahh... Well that was refreshing," Trix says and then kicks Faylin off her with the sole of her foot.

"Ofhh," Faylin grunts as she falls to the floor. Sinalla remains, having withdrawn her now well-flavored tongue from Trix´s butthole and looking at her Mistress with puppy-dog eyes.

"Am I a good slave Mistress? Have this lowly surface-elves tongue proven itself worthy of being your personal butt-cleaner dark elf Highness?" Sinalla meekly asks, anxious for the answer.

Trix laughs haughtily before answering, it unnerves Sinalla.

"Slave," Trix addresses Sinalla, "you haven´t proven anything. Every day you will have to prove your worth to me. Every day will be a test of how good you can serve me. I only keep my slaves as long as they pleasure me. I´m not the kind of woman who attaches sentimental value to mere fuck-toys. Today you are a fresh, exciting new slave, but how long do you think that feeling will last? Eventually you will become mundane, and that rimjob you just pulled-off nothing special anymore. So unless your tongue starts learning some new tricks fast, you may not pass tomorrows test, or the test the day after that, or any of the tests following that."

Sinalla doesn't have time to accurate portray an sufficient expression of terror and hopelessness before Trix sole kicks the blonde slave off her like she did to Faylin.

You move up to Faylin. "Get up slave," you say and yank her leash to make her stand.

"You leaving High-Huntress?" Trix asks.

"Yes, we´ll meet again at later in the throne room when the match back to the underworld begins."

"Understood High-Huntress."

You walk towards the exit, followed by Faylin who holds her head low and wipes off the cunt juices smeared on her face.

Just as you are at the doorway Trix yells out sharply, "High-Huntress!" You do not turn to face her. "I ''will'' surpass Minvir, I will become the superior second-in-command and bring honor to Char. You will ''not'' regret choosing me." Trix speaks her words with fire and passion, as if having waited long to speak them.

You do not say something for several seconds, and as you do, you still do not turn to face her. "You´ve better surpass the late second-in-command Minvir, young Trix of Char. For if you do not, it is you that will be sold to the orc breeding dens."

You do not turn to asses her reaction, just simply leave having said what needs to be said and heading for your next target.

*[[MOTDE: Look for Rainye in the eastern-wing B1|MOTDE: Look for Rainye in the eastern-wing]]

*[[MOTDE: Go to the market district and look for Silvir B1|MOTDE: Go to the market district and look for Silvir]]

Or.

*[[MOTDE: Head back to the throne room B1|MOTDE: Head back to the throne room]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |S]]

Talk:Adult Stories

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 29 Apr 2012 03:20:41 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Am I Doing the Right Thing? ==

Seeing as how the adult section has been separated from the rest of the stories, it seemed like the general discussion page is not the correct place to be having a discussion of general adult content. If I am false in this belief, feel free to let me know. If this page is going to be deleted, drop me a message and let me know where the appropriate place is for the discussion, thanks. (Oh, and feel free to replace this with some sort of official "this is the place to talk about the adult section" thing.)

--[[User:Nonsense|Nonsense]] 01:43, 29 April 2012 (UTC)

Also, I can't seem to figure out how to make a category box be at the top of the screen, oh well. -[[User:Nonsense|Nonsense]]

== Confidence Issues, and the Writers That Have Them ==

Is anyone else absolutely tired of seeing cock measurements? It is always one of two things, either:
* ...and it is a puny, pathetic measly 5 inch penis lol, how tiny and worthless! No woman could possibly ever be satisfied by such a small and useless penis! The (optional depending on circumstance) woman sees the penis and just laughs! She was going to have sex/be raped but now she just laughs at the pathetic 5 inch penis! You kill yourself for having a worthless pathetic penis/you have sex anyway but it is five seconds long and the woman laughs the whole time and you could never even dream of satisfying her with such a pathetic 5 inch penis!

or...

* ... and you pull out your monster 8-11 inch penis and the woman you about to have sex with/have been hitting on/are trying to rape immediately is super horny and wet and craves your cock because all she has ever had is a pathetic 5 inch penis and she knows she needs a real mans 8-11 inch monster cock up inside of her! She immediately begs you to fuck her and you fuck her good and give her so many orgasms with your monster penis. She is now your sex slave for life and will fuck you whenever she wants just like all women will because you have a monster penis!

(Note: the character may in fact be another individual other than the player character, in which "you" would obviously be replaced with the name of the character or appropriate words like "he, him, etc.")

Is anyone else fucking tired of this pathetic bullshit? Seriously, this sort of writing is just demeaning to everyone involved, and makes it look like the writer has some serious self confidence issues. Even worse than that, it's just a turn off. Which I am pretty sure is something that shouldn't be in my erotica, during the sex scenes! As someone who does appreciate the look of a cock, let me say that these idiotic measurements are something that never come up in my head, because it just doesn't work that way. And by the way, I'll take a 5 inch cock over a 8-11 inch one any day.

--[[User:Nonsense|Nonsense]] 01:43, 29 April 2012 (UTC)

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I´m more impressed by every characters impeccable ability to know which bra-size a woman wears even when she´s wearing thick clothing!

What to say on the subject. Well, having read sex stories on the net for like, 10 years now. I guess you can say that there are two kinds of writers; smut- and erotic authors.

Erotic authors try to write about what´s good about sex stories. Stay classy, be realistic and be intellectual. Stories can still be primal and dirty, yet in a smart way - so nobodies cock size is going to be twice as long as normal and be the sole initiative for arousal.

Smut writers on the other hand... write about ''fetish-worlds''. They like the lewd, wrong, fetishsised part of sex. Yea it´s unrealistic, but that´s the point, it´s a fetish-world. A fetish-world is about creating ''arousal around fake stuff, cock-size fixation is a big part about that''. People know cock size doesn't matter like that in real sex, yet they still like to fantasize about it to spice-up their fantasiez. It´s about imagination and suspension of disbelief; creating a fetish-world in their own head that´s disconnected from the real world. Yea it´s unrealistic, but that´s the point, it´s a fetish-world, how arousing it would be in the real world dosen´t have to matter.

It´s like some of those impractical positions you see in porn, they make it look like some sort of sport and it would never work in real life. That´s about the same, people are aroused by it despite its impractical nature.

But hey, it´s a matter of taste, some people just like their fetish-world. Some people don´t.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Talk:The Devils Daughter

Fletcher Peninsula — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 21:34:49 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

[[User:Impalalevi1]] here. I just wanted to say that I love this story! Kudos to you, Mr. Fletcher Peninsula! Excellent character development, and great use of conflict (The mission to find three girls)! It gives the story direction and focus. Your writing style is also very fun to read, very descriptive. I just love it. Thank you.--[[User: Impalalevi1]]

Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

Talk:War and Sex

Fletcher Peninsula — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 23:34:37 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

MOTDE: Go to the market district and look for Silvir B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 17 Nov 2011 22:21:50 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with 'You exit the palace, now returning to the city that you´ve conquered. Still standing on the top of the hill - that makes up the city - you overlook your conquest. Your dark elve…'

You exit the palace, now returning to the city that you´ve conquered. Still standing on the top of the hill - that makes up the city - you overlook your conquest. Your dark elves attacked the capital with great havoc, destroying buildings and statues while slaughtering and plundering at will. Houses have been ransacked, families put to the sword and treasures stolen. Nothing of the natural, forest-integrated beauty that you observed just the other day remains. The stark smell of death is in the air, to Faylin its a foul stench that makes her grimace, but to you it´s a sweet aroma that makes you grin in victory.

The sight of a conquered city is one that you enjoy to linger on. "Magnificent, isn´t it? The craft-of-war exercised to perfection by the dark elf race. And now Queen, you will be lead naked as a slave through the streets and buildings that you ruled for hundreds of years," your gloat the words, rubbing them in her already disgraced face. Faylin knows the simple walk through her befouled city will be a painful one.

A unit of soldiers approaches you from the distance. They consist of twenty soldiers marching under your banner of Char. As their figures grow closer, you see that they are lead by your two huntresses Silvir and Rikki. They bow as they come within speaking distance.

"High-Huntress Daine, it´s a honor to greet you on this day of conquest of our inferior surface-siblings." Silvir ceremonially greets you. She then leers at the Queen. "And that big-titted, trio-of-fuckholes you got there already looks broken in. Did the commanders cock make you beg for more fuck-meat whore-Queen?"

The other Drows chuckle as the Queen blushes at Silvirs indecent remark.

You yank the chain so that she falls to your feet, "answer your overlord slave-Queen!" you spout at her.

"Yes Mistress, my cunt is heated for your cock-meat."

Now that the insults and false confessions have reassured your surface-enemies enslaved status and thus confirmed your racial supremacy you can go on with the conversation. "Huntress Silvir and Rikki, what are you doing here?"

"High-Huntress," Rikki begins, "when I heard you might be going to be feast at the market, I rushed down to fetch Silvir and these troops, as bodyguards for your protection. The feast is founded and organized by clan Valon. Their our enemies, and with the ongoing competition between you and Solaria, I thought extra protection would be a wise precaution," Rikki ends her statement with a subservient, graceful bow.

"Would they attack if we approached?" You ask, "It would be a perfect time to organize a raid and try to steal this surface-Queen away for the competition," as you mention the regent by her title you also yank her chain to hurt her throat. The naked slave growls in pain.

"I highly doubt it, firstborn daughter of High-Matriarch Mecinia." Silvir says, her voice is much louder and authoritarian in tone than Rikki, who has a sweet and charming voice. "Clan Valon proclaimed it to be open for all the clans, breaking such a promise would be tremendously dishonorable. A affront to the Goddesses even. The consequences from the other clans and cities would be utmost hostile - and devastating. But as Rikki pointed out, it´s never foolish to come armed on a day like this."

"And what of that ''bitch'' Solaria, is there any sign of her?" You ask.

No, there is no sign of her High-Huntress Daine. However, other highly ranked members of clan Valon has been seen active in public through the day," as Silvir mentions that hated clan her voice turns detestable. "Many of them are at the market, overseeing and leading the festivites. They´ve organized several ''shows'', for the enjoyment of the masses where they torture, humiliate and rape surface-elven captives."

Rikki quickly chives on Silvirs report, "No doubt a show to win the admiration of the lesser clans High-Huntress! And in doing so, trying to outshine our clan´s prestige and authority," Rikki says it in a tone of sly menace, as if a warning towards you.

"Pssh," you spit on the ground, genuinely angry. "What a back of filthy sows they are!" You growl, "they grow bolder by the minute. Neither I, nor my mother will stand for this insolence. Clan Char are the *unrivaled* rulers of Velzzria. If clan Valon wishes to challenge that fact, then we won´t be far from a civil war once we return to the underworld." Your harsh, hateful voice is filled with subtle longing for the confrontation. "Come on! Lets head for the market district!"

...

The sound of the feast travels far through the devastated city, even from afar the noises of Drow commotion is heard. As you get closer, a sea of people spreads out over the market place. Clan Valon´s festivities have drawn a huge crowd, even from members of your own clan. They´ve speared no expensive, huge barrels containing intoxicating beverages have been opened for given to the public. But the real gifts, and the reason for the feast, are the many enslaved surface-elves that Clan Valon has put on display. Some are given to public use, restrained to the ground and left to suffer the sexual abuse and humiliation of drunken dark elf warriors. Some appear to have died already.

Other surface-elves have been restricted for scenes that clan Valon has organized. Large, wooden platforms have been built to elevate the performers over the crowd. On each platform stands at least one Valonian dominatrix and at least one elf from the Heartwood forest. There, various shows are performed to entertain the masses, where the Valonian women show their skill in sexually domineering their enemies.

Two such scenes catches your eye. At one platform stands a dominatrix holding a chain that leads to a collar strapped around a huge green-skinned orcs neck. Next to them, a young, naked surface-elven girl is in bondage on a stock. On the other platform, a confident, haughty looking dark elves stands holding a whip before a naked surface-elf who seems to still stand tall with pride despite the humiliation of the situation.

*[[MOTDE: Look at the platform with the dominatrix, orc and the young surface-elf B1|MOTDE: Look at the platform with the dominatrix, orc and the young surface-elf]]

*[[MOTDE: Look at the platform with the dark elf woman holding a whip B1|MOTDE: Look at the platform with the dark elf woman holding a whip]]

Or

*[[MOTDE: Show Faylin what happend to the male surface-elves B1|MOTDE: Show Faylin what happend to the male surface-elves]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |G]]

The Devils Daughter

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 11 Nov 2011 12:46:04 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

Notes:
Warning! This story is not politically correct! The actions, ideas and subjects explored in this story are pure fantasy and
should stay that way. If you do not enjoy reading about this sort of things or have trouble seeing difference between fantasy and
reality, STOP NOW.

Story codes so far: MF, Mf, mF, mf, orgy, gang, bd, beast, blackmail, ds, humil, inc (mother/daughter), interr, magic, Mdom, Fdom,
nc, rape, oral, preg, sad, light scat, ws, solo, tort, toys, demonic, rim, sacrilegious.

Feel free to add to this story, but remember the main objective and I would
like this story to have somewhat of a dark tone. I will also keep adding to this story. (Fletcher Peninsula)

The Devil's Daughter

You are Sharon Abrahamson, a teenage girl who also happens to be a Satanic cult member. You have been ordered by your cult leader Vladimir to assist in the summoning of an Archdemon to bring about the Apocalypse. Your task is to find three females who would willingly sacrifice their lives for this event.

Under normal circumstances this would be a non-issue, however there are rules; rules that must be followed else the ritual will fail. These rules are that those who are to be sacrificed must not be worshipers of Satan before they agree to be sacrificed. Therein lies the challenge

The rest of the cult is working on other necessary requirements to summon the Archdemon, so you are alone in finding the necessary women. If it is required, however, you may request help from individual members of the cult, in order to aid you in convincing the women to give up their lives.

And so, your adventure begins...

You are 18 and still in school. You live at home with your mother Anna (your father is dead) She knows nothing of your dark mission and is very bitchy about your satanic lifestyle. The day begins as you wake up. It’s up to you to find the sacrificial females, good hunting!

*[[Put on some modest cloths, so your mom won’t be mad]]

*[[Put on something slutty, to provoke your mom]]

*[[Decide to skip the clothes and walk around naked at home, shocking your mom]]

*[[Satan can wait, go back to sleep]]
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Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 11 Nov 2011 12:45:33 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Taking care of something I probably should have done a long time ago...

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|[[Surviving Today]] || (20 Pages, its not alot since its only one day)(Finished!)
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|[[Survivng Today: The Traffic Jam|Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] || (35+ Pages! Not a sequel)(Finished!)
|-
|[[A Tasty Breakfast]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Technomancer]]|| (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[Teddy and Ryan's Adventure]]|| (3+ pages, WORK IN PROGRESS DO NOT TOUCH thank you :-])
|-
|[[Teehee!]] || (60+ Pages!) (Public) (4 Stories in 1)
|-
|[[Temporal]]|| (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[The Danger Theory]]|| (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
|-
|[[Transylvanian terror]]||(150+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Tribute|Tribute: The Greatest and Best Quest in the World]] || (14+ pages)
|-
|[[The Trigger And The Hilt]] (a free-roaming action game) || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[To Kill a Salesman]]
|-
||[[True Dungeon]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT W.I.P)
|-
|[[ Try Not To Die ]]|| (45 Pages- COMPLETED; please don't edit)
|-
|[[ Trying to Wake Up]]|| (25+ pages so far. WIP)
|-
|[[The Ultimate Battle]] ||(65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Unknown...]]|| (Under Construct, Do whatever you wish but keep it serious and literate!)
|-
|[[Vaped!]]||(Sci-fi, just started.)
|-
|[[ The Walk]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[War of Nations]]|| (65+ pages)
|-
|[[War zone]]|| (20+ pages)(W.i.p)(PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Warphole]]|| (5+ pages, Go [[User:CLOU!7|here]] for what I need you to know before you edit)
|-
|[[The Warp]]|| (Only Grammar and Spelling Edits Please)
|-
|[[What have they done?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[What Happens In The Forest]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Windy Lea Stories]]|| (WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[WW2]] || (6+ pages, please don't edit unless asked to. Original writers seem to have abanoned this.)
|-
|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[XMachetter, the dark figure, and the Jewel]]
|-
|[[You Need a Job]] || (WIP, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[You're never getting out]]|| {Edit to make it as long as possible}
|-
|[[Your Life]] || (Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
|-
|[[ Your Story]]|| (, Don't Edit, Por favor, 0+ pages)
|-
|[[Z-Day]] || (Under Construction, by skullphantom)
|}

==Quizzes and Challenges==
'''Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):'''
{|
|Challenge||Status
|-
|[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Quiz Show]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[A Quizzy Show]]||(10 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || (25 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[The Rock Paper Scissors game]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Trivia Time]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz 2]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Ultimate MMA quiz game!]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Game Trivia I]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Games]]|| (Finished, pretty lame, but it's my first.)
|-
|}

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{|
|Story||
Status
|-
|[[1943]]|| Open
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||(10+ pages Do not edit, I am renovating it)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]|| (don't edit!)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||(25 pages)(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||(70 pages)(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| (101+ pages)
|-
|[[Awake]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Badassery]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || (10+ pages, open for editing)
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || (300+ pages) Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || (1+ pages)(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| (25+ pages, W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || (Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[City Life]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||(22+ pages)
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| (10+ pages) Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| (34+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||(24+ pages)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| (Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| (Under construction)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| (Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| (New! 35 pages)
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || (Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || (Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||(175+ pages)
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||(20 pages)
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || (New story, under construction)
|-
|[[ Harry Potter Fanfiction Adventure]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| (Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| (0+ pages) (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| (25+ Pages, Public)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| (5 pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[In The Army]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| (the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| (JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| (WIP, Do NOT edit please)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Life]] (Just the way you wanted it) Remake!
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]|| (3+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || (Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||(175+ pages)(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| (JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| (0+ pages-just began)
|-
|[[A New Life]]||(40+ pages Public)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || (Just Started, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| (don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || (just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || (I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || (Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]] ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| (No editing please)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||(30+ pages Open to Public)
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||(5+ Pages, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||(333+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Random III]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Remember]] || (Do Not Edit Without Permission) (60+ Pages)('''<--Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| (36 pages) (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || (53 pages. Do NOT edit!.)
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || (W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||(10+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[School Life]]|| (WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Serial X]]|| (25+ pages. Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.]]|| (7/15/10 12+ pages ((Do not edit)))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||(250+ pages)(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Smile]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| (38+ pages, WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.)
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || (Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || (First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||(3+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||(80+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || (30+ pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || (0+ pages WIP)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||(40+ pages, started 6/24/09)
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[ To be named later ]]|| (IDK pages)*Bentenmike*
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| (WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| (+20 Pages, in progress)
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || (150+ pages, in progress)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[World Undone]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || (Unknown+ pages If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || (12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombies]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| (35+ pages wip)
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||(50+ Pages,Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||(10+ Pages,please don't edit!)
|}

==Adult Stories==
'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.

{|

|-
|[[+Infinity]] || (300+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[12MP]]|| (8+ Pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The 007 Stories]] || (50+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[The adventures of Les Adam Chambers]] || (4+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Alien Adventure]]||(20+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[All Alone]] (Lesbian)||(100+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[An Akatsuki Party]] || (4+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Amazon]] || (40+ Pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Another World| Another World(Under Construction)]]|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Another Day At School...]] ||(40+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Anime School]]||(25+ Pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Archie's Gay Adventure]] (Gay)||(75+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Archie's Sexual Adventure]]||(75+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Assassin]]||(20+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Badlands]]|| (15+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Band Forming thing]]||(100+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Beach Vacation]]||(50+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Beautiful Immortal]]||(0+ Pages (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Benighted]]||(10+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A Big Ugly Story]]||(20+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]](Gay)||('''{{PAGESINCAT:Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night}}''' pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Bi-sexual Sex stories]]||(100+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Blackmailed]]||(200+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Bleached]]||(10+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Boarding School Magic]]|| (40+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Cage]]||(12+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Calláte, Cariño (Under Construction)]]|| (15+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Celebrities!]]|| (20+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Choose Your Destiny]]||(80+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Christopher Keenum's Post-Apocalyptic Survival Story]]||(0+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Club Piacere]]||(6+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[College: Freshman Experience]]|| (3+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[College Girls]]||(100+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[ CombustingHerpes THE ADVENTURE]]|| (15+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Creekside University]]|| (4 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[A Day in His Life]]||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Days in the Life of Sammy Simm]]||(40+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Death Will Come]] || (19+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[ Decisions]]|| (0+ pages) (Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Dementa]]|| (5+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Devils Daughter|The Devil's Daughter]] || ('''{{PAGESINCAT:The Devil's Daughter}}''' pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Dirty Bit Of A Teen's Life]]||(1 page)(Public)
|-
|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||(00345 pages) (Hail Eris!) (Public)
|-
|[[Dread]]||(100+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Druglord]]||(26 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Dungeons and Dragons]]||(15 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Echidna Tale]] (Monster girl, transformation)||(31 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Eris of the Red Lions]]||(6 pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Family Ties]]||(80+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Family Possession]]||(38 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Fantasy World]]||(5+ Pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[First Day At College]](Gay)||(18 pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Freshman Dream]] || (14 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Freshman Year]] || (26 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Friday night]] || (43 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Fucking Classy]] || (14 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[ Fucking Me... Fucking You]]|| (0+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Furry World]]||(230+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Another Furry World]]|| (20+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A Gifted Woman]]||(2+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Girl Island]]|| (15+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME]] (Lesbian)||(35+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Cookies]]||({{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}} pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Camp]] (the sequel)||({{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Camp}} pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Girlngirl High]] (Lesbian)||(50+ pages)('''11,000 Views!!''')(Public)
|-
|[[The Greatest Weekend Ever]]|| (19 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Gray Matter]]|| (10+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Hallway of infinity]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Hardon High]] (Gay)||(100+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Harem]]||(0+ pages)(WIP, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex]]||(100+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Hentasy-Fi]]|| (8+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Heroes of Pleasure| Heroes of Pleasure (Under Construction)]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Heroes of Pleasure}} Pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[High School]]||(455+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[High School: Beverly Hills]]|| (0+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[High School Cutie]]|| (2 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[A High School Fantasy]]||(15 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[High school Freshman Year]]|| (2+ pages W.I.P)
|-
|[[High School: A new beginning]]|| (New) (Public)
|-
|[[High School Sophomore Year‎‎]]|| (3 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[High School: The Way It Should Have Been]]|| (60+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Hollywood Romp]]||(26+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Home Early]]|| (45+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Hush (Under Construction)]]|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Icarly: Iwant sex|iCarly: iWant Sex]]|| (80+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[I'll Be Gentle...]]|| (50+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Incubus]] (Bisexual Pirate Fantasy)||(41 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Invisible]]||(45 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Jade Rogue]]||(13 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[A Job]] || (40 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Just Do It Already!]]||({{PAGESINCAT:Just Do It Already!}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Lady Van Helsing]] || ({{PAGESINCAT:Lady Van Helsing}} pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]||(100+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Let's Burn Down a Castle]]||(40+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Life of Unlimited Chances]]||(12 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Lesbian College Girls]]|| (10+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Lone Wolf]] || (Not public, only for reading, UC.)
|-
|[[Lost in the city]]||(W.I.P)(Public)
|-
|[[March of the Dark Elves]]||({{PAGESINCAT:March of the Dark Elves}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Mage ]] (Gay Fantasy)||(30 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Melanie and Michael]]||(12 pages, W.I.P., Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Meet'n'fuck Beach Vacation]] || (0 Pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Mob Story]]|| (12 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Monday Night Combat:Erotica]] || (Public)
|-
|[[Naughty But Delicious]]|| (1 page)(Public)
|-
|[[Naughty Kitten]]|| (0+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Neighborhood]]|| (29 pages) (Public)
|-
||[[ Newly Gay]]|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The New God]] || (80+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Ninja Kittehs From Space!]]||(20+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Obscura]]|| (45+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Numbers]]||(50+ pages) (Kinda Public)
|-
|[[Oops! You're Naked!]] || (79 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Ordinary Life of a Prostitute]]|| WIP (Public)
|-
|[[Pedo romp]]||(250+ Pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Percy Jackson & Friends]]|| (0+ pages)
|-
|[[Perverted Thirteen-Year-Old]]||(81 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Phineas and Ferb: The Erotic Adventures]]|| (8 pages please edit) (Public)
|-
|[[Pi Pi Pi]]|| (63 pages WIP, but open to edits) (Public)
|-
|[[Pimp]]||(50+ pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Prince of Persia]]|| (0+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Pokegirl]]||(0 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Pokesex]]||(90+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Porn Empire]] ||(5+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|A Portrait of an American Girl Named Myra]]||(30+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Possessed]]||(133 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Possessed Little Boy]]||(10+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Power of Will]]|| (30+ pages)(W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Quest For Treguards Treasure]]|| (271 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Rampage]]||('''{{PAGESINCAT:Rampage}}) pages''' (Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
|-
|[[ Rapist]]|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Red Mobster]]||(50+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[School Fun]]||(30 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Sensual Realms]]|| (35+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Second Life]]|| (5+ Pages, please edit!)
|-
|[[The Sexual Adventures of You]]|| (87+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Sex Adventure]]|| (49+ pages)(W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Sex Aging Series]]||(3 stories)
|-
|[[Sexy Gay Vampire Assassin Cult Adventure Erotica!]]|| (5 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Sexy World]]|| (20+ pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[ Sex in Ancient Rome]]|| (0+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[ShapeShifter]] ||(5 page)(Public)
|-
|[[Survival by Evolution]] || (0+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[SimLife]]||(5+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Sisters and other Victims]]||('''{{PAGESINCAT:SAOV}}''' pages)(Public)
|-
|[[SexLife]]||(3+ pages)WIP(Public)
|-
|[[Slave to the Mist]]|| (40+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Smutty Sex Romp]]|| ('''{{PAGESINCAT:Smutty Sex Romp}}''' pages)(Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
|-
|[[Snatch]] || (23 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants is a gangster]]||(8 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Star Trek: A Night with Troi]]|| (29 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]||('''{{PAGESINCAT:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga}}''' pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Stalker]] ||(100+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||(300+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Summer Party]] || (14 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Super Power Fantasy]] || (5+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Supershifter]] || (12+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Survive]] || (18 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Survival Story]] || (35+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Superhero?]] || (12 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Teenager]] || (60+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Testing Facility #80085]]||(18 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Time for fun]]|| (0+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[The Time Lord]]||(Just started) (Public)
|-
|[[The Town]]|| (3 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[This Story Will Piss You Off]]||(55+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Tree of Doom]] || (30+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Ty's Story]] || (100+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[University Daze]]|| ('''600+''' pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Vampire Weekend]]|| (325+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Victim]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Victim}} pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Victorious: Behind the Scenes]]|| (1+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Walt Jizzney's Magic Kingdom]]|| (49+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[War Pigs]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:War Pigs}} pages)(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[War and Sex]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:War and Sex}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Warped]]|| (10 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Where are you?]]||(7 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Whore it Out]]||(87+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Wish Coin]]||(1+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Work Attire]]|| (168+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Wrestling X-rated]]|| (1+ pages, WIP)(Public)
|-
|[[The World is Yours]] || (8 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Yes, Yes, Yes, Your Honor]] || (250+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[ You're Omnipotent!]]|| (0+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Your Summer Diary]]|| (16+ pages) (Public) (Although it's public, please only edit the red parts of the story intended for you writers)
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== Miscellaneous Stories ==
These are stories that are in their own category.
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|Universe Traveler II (Coming Soon) || (250+ pages)

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==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

==Creating a Story==
If you have an idea for a story, you might like to try [[Idea Pitches|pitching your idea to other users]] and seeing how interested people might be in playing your story, what you could do to make playing your story fun, and who might be interested in collaborating with you to write it. Once you have done that, you can create it by entering your desired name for the Story into the search box and clicking '''Go'''. If the name has not already been taken, click this exact title to start the story. There are three general types of story. The first is the branching-plot story (an example of this is the Choose Your Own Adventure series of gamebooks), which require the reader to make choices but are otherwise like a regular novel. The second type is the role-playing game adventure, which combines the branching-plot novel with simple role-playing rules such as attack points and monster battles. The third type is the trivia quiz, where the player must answer questions as if they were on a game show.

==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
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Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
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The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

Every page should have the category at the bottom. This keeps track of all the pages in the story. You can copy the category line from the previous page to the one you're working on. The category, obviously, is ''never'' 'name of story you're working on'. You type in the actual name of the story.

For additional help in wiki syntax, click [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing here]

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear red on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

To avoid accidentally crossing with other users' stories, it may be best to create pages with more than just an option name, like [[Unicorns]] or [[Open your eyes]]. Instead, when you create a new page, call it [[You have to slay The Dragon/_Page 1]] or [[YOUR CRAZY/Give up]]. You can have the link name be whatever you want though, like this:
<nowiki>[[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]]</nowiki> will appear as [[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]] on the page.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki> </nowiki>. Example:
*<nowiki>This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.</nowiki> will show as:
This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
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*Story Endings should be categorized with Category:Endings.

== Poor Taste Stories ==

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|[[My Sister]]||(Under Construction)
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|[[Fuckin Screwed Up]]||(90+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[The Guy Who Held His Breath Forever]]||(Work in Progress)
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|[[Terror in Tibet]]||(DO NOT EDIT, for guys only.)
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|[[Kill As Many People As You Can]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Kill The President]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Molest Little Boys]] (Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[One Messed Up Story]] (A Story For Guys)||(100+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Short and Funni.]]||(5+ pages)
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|[[S.W.A.T.]]||(Just Started, PLEASE HELP WITH IDEAS, ITS PUBLIC)
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|[[Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]||(Just Started, Work On It(please), It's Public)
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User talk:Heyoeveryone

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 11 Nov 2011 12:44:03 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Congratulations! ==

Hey, I can't help but notice that you've finished quite a few stories. On this site, waaaay too many writers start things and never finish them '''cough'''''I'mguiltyofthatsometimes'''''cough'''. I've read through Surviving Today 2, and I actually thought it was pretty cool. You've got a nice style, and a good imagination to fuel it. Keep up the good work! --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 11:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

It's good to know that you enjoyed "Megan". I love getting feedback, and as for your question for the "What If?" situation, I could perhaps do that. It might take some time, however.

Right now I've got the first page of "The Diary Of Bethany Cross" in the works, and after that I might get some work done on [[What Lies Beneath|WLB]]. After WLB and "The Diary", I'm planning on a chapter-by-chapter story that would unite the characters of "Rescue", "Megan", "WLB", and "The Diary" (Dead characters will still appear. Not sure how to explain it yet, but it'll happen) and thrust them into the potential end of the world.

The idea of a "What If?" version is a bit interesting, though. I'm wondering if you mean if Megan didn't kill herself, kill Vanessa, or if Vanessa killed Megan (which happens in one of the pages)? It could be fun to play around with all three of those ideas, really. Believe it or not, I've still got at least six kills to work in eventually in a later update - the gun and power-tools kills - I added the ending in so I could consider it "finished" for now and potentially get it to be the featured story and get it some exposure. As of now, War Pigs is still the featured (and it's quite good if you haven't read it yet), but I can certainly hope. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:29, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Apologies for getting back to you so late, but I think the first and third ideas could work out really well. The first would depend mostly on where the story goes with the idea you started with, but it could work. Reviews would be pretty good, too. Good reviews help motivate writers and constructive criticism helps them improve. The second idea reminds me a bit of Community, though. Which - don't get me wrong - is awesome on its own. Community friggin' rules. It might be harder to get to work, but that could be done too. I guess all the ideas sound good to me. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:29, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Hey, just saw the review, and thanks! Always awesome to get a well written review on something I wrote. As for the story only having one (true) ending, I understand completely. I actually have been toying with other endings (besides the one page where Vanessa kills Megan), including things like Vanessa killing Megan and surviving, Megan wimping out at the end and going home, Megan getting arrested, and stuff like that in my head. As you stated in the review, it's not finished yet, so there's time for me to add those in later. Oh, and I saw you said you only read one of the brutal kills. Which one? In a strange, morbid way I want to know which one it was so I can tell if I wrote it well.

Uh, anyways, besides all of that, thanks again. I'm thinking of doing my own reviews soon, and one of yours shall be in the queue. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:28, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I've actually been periodically checking "Remember" from time to time. Liking it so far. The death-gas is pretty cool, and the story so far is intriguing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 00:09, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

==review area==
Having a section for story reviews sounds like a good idea. Writers usually like feedback, especially constructive criticism. I appreciate being invited to join the review process, but it all depends on how much time I find to work on such a thing. I already do a lot of grammatical and stylistic editing on the stories that I've contributed the most to, as well as doing various functions that are reserved for sysops. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:02, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

The two possibilities I've thought of for a review area are
*a link on the Main Page to a Review Page, like the way there's the link to the Featured Story area.
*adding third column in the story section after Name and Status that links to a review section for that story.

I'm still considering which idea I like better. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:10, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

TheElderOnes also suggested doing a combination of both. It sounds like that might be the way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:11, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

== Re: I Hope you feel slightly special! ==

I don't mind the bad things you said- but how dare you not include a preview and make the score appear bigger like in the rest of your reviews!

Anyways, good review. I know I probably should focus on one character's story before moving on to another, but I get bored if I stay with just one of them for too long.

It's kind of ironic you would like Karen's story the best, because she's my least favorite of the five. Different strokes, I guess.

Thanks for the review. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 20:28, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

The problem with William is I'm not certain what choices the player will have to make while he's in Michael's custody.

I have the main ending for the story planned out, I'm just trying to decide what will happen between Michael and William that will cause them to oppose each other. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:38, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's similar to what I had planned for Michael to go after William. If you're interested in how the final act is supposed to go down between the five main characters (the true ending), I'll post it. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:48, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

Here's a brief summary. Bear in mind that these events only occur if the reader goes down a certain path.

William uses his powers to kill Michael's friends (it's ironic that you would emphasize "accidentally," because he's mostly in control by this point in the story).

William and Michael have their first showdown in a warehouse. At first, William's powers give him the edge, but he soon realizes that Michael is too much for him to handle. Michael savagely beats him in retaliation for the deaths of his friends.

Vincent arrives at Karen's home to kill her. Rebecca also arrives to kill Vincent. The two beat each other senseless, until another figure appears, and then things really go to hell.

As for the true ending, I'll just let you know that all of the endings are named after songs (hint, hint). --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 18:05, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

It's not Karen. I could go further, but that would spoil the final fates of the characters. As for the songs, they were all made before 2000.

I would like to hear what you think should happen to the five leads and their survival odds. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:36, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

== Remember ==

It was really interesting although the plot made it sound a lot like a Saw movie. The background shows a mean person and the guy capturing him sounds like a brother which didn't make a lot of sense. After all, he sounded like an enemy after the hate in the responses to questions.

For some strange reason I keep having an obligation to edit every time I see a mistake. Well, I'll check the minor edit box next time.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:45, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, [[Remember]] was good, so I decided to topple war pigs.(I was getting kind of sick of it being there, in any case) Hopefully I can finish the two stories I'm working on now(that I want to complete straight away) so I can start reviewing stuff as well. Keep writing [[Remember]]. I want to know more about the story!:)

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 15:47, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right, I wanted to ask for an opinion on something I thought about. Most pages don't place a letter or title before the page names. So, the only two courses that can be done,(without plowing through every story to start over) is to let certain pages overlap. [[Kill yourself]] has eleven categories. Tell me what you think, because eventually, if nothing is done, what with pages being added, page names will be so long we could let the option be clicking the stroy in itself, just to not allow overlaps.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:12, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

For example, if someone else put R, for another story, the page would be edited and it may seem like a small thing but it would get very annoying if it happens repeatedly. However, if for pages like [[Kill yourself]], the story works well, it can be some sort of intersection. It'll probably only work on endings, but it gets annoying. Once I made a page [[Die]] and it was already taken and completely inappropiate. Since it is a very small title it does seem weird. Besides, it would be easier than going through large stories, pulling them out and repasting them. It would be fine for simple stories. However, a lot go into near 100 and there is a 200 pager(The Kitty in the Window) which would probably lose pages in the process. Oh, right and it might be slightly easier to make a category, like '''Public''' to place the... public stories.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:42, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll write the page you wanted. And I hope it will be satisfactory, you can always edit it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Story of the year ==

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured
in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called ((
Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide
the winner. --Heyoeveryone 23 October 2011

Well the problem with that is that the ''page views functtion'' isn´t based on individual viewers, but on how many times that page has been accsesed no matter if it was the same person. So one person could click on a link a thousand times and thus give that option a thousand votes. It´s not a functional voting system. Users would need to leave their signature on which story they vote on (a public vote so to say). Sure that system could be cheated to by creating new accounts and using them to vote. But that requiers a lot more effort, and would get suspective seeing so many new members being created and all of them voting for the same guy.

Other than that it´s seems like a fun and intruiging idea. Alternatively you could do a "story of all time" vote with the first one.

PS: Apologize for lateness of the reply.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Re: Hey, uhh ==

No, I'm not a mod. xD

I have, however, been known to patrol the recent changes to see what's been going on, and I'll visit the "uncategorized pages" at least once per site visit.

Hell, Sunday night I brought it from uncategorized 40 pages to the normal 4 (5 if you count the blanked page that I couldn't do anything about) and warned a pair of authors. I just help out around the site, seeing as I've pretty much always got the recent changes page open in another tab at all times, and I just try to lessen the workload for Platypus when he gets back on. He can handle the spammers and vandals, I'll handle the categorization. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:29, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

== Long page ==

My god. 10 933 characters. That's the highest amount I've ever seen in a very long time.

There is a page on this site that counts the words on each page and list them.

http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Special:LongPages

I remeber the days when a 10.000 story was enough to get you in the number 1 spot. Oh how things have changed...

Crouch down and take a shit on Vicky´s bed

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 10 Nov 2011 23:44:48 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with 'There is a thrill running down your spine as you take the decision. Your anus is still buzzing with post-orgasmic pleasure and the thought of squeezing one out right now just blo…'

There is a thrill running down your spine as you take the decision. Your anus is still buzzing with post-orgasmic pleasure and the thought of squeezing one out right now just blows your mind. Even being the fanatical and loyal follower of Satan that you are you´ve never taken your depravity this far before. You immediately begin un-strapping your strap-on to prepare yourself.

"Lay still anal-slave!" You yell at Vicky without a explanation who promptly goes limp as a dead fish. You quickly remove the dildo and throw it aside, then squat down on top of the Queen-sized bed. You´re in a hurry to squeeze one out while still high from the orgasm.

"Uhhhggg!" You grunt. "Keep those eyes fixed on my anus anal-slave! Uhhhggg!" You scream and grunt in exertion.

Vicky gasps. She must see the contorting efforts of your brown-hole. She realizes you´re squeezing something out, and you intend to do it right in front of her on her bed.

"Oh Lord!" You moan sharply as you feel the first brown turd bumps up against your wrinkly A-hole. You actually begin laughing as you feel your spiracle-muscle loosen and the excrement's start dropping out from your ass. The soft sound of the first one falling onto the bed just rocks you with excitement. It´s just as great as you´d thought it would be. Shitting on her bed while she watches is like the ultimate act of dominance.

"Ahahaha! Are you watching this anal-slave? Do you see how little your fucking life and your possessions are worth in your Mistress eyes?"

"Yes," she says and sobs, "I´m watching Mistress. It´s..." Vicky sobs loudly again, "It´s very beautiful. Your anus is very beautiful. Your shit looks exquisite Mistress."

"I can take a fucking dump right here on your bed and your opinion doesn't even matter! Hell, I might even give up on toilets all together and just turn your entire house into my own private shitting-ground!"

"Whatever you wish Mistress. Please shit all over my possessions if you desire too," the sobs are still there, but the sadness is gone in her voice. This bitch will accept any kind of rule you impose on her.

With your bowels emptied you dismount the Queen-sized bed. You grab some of the bed sheets and wipe your ass with it. "Clean this bed anal-slave. Then buy a new one! I don´t fuck my slaves in a bed that I´ve shat on, I´m not some depraved, ass-fixated slut like you are."

Having left your clothes with Karla, you grab a random dress from Vicky´s closet, not bothering with any underwear. Then you once again face Vicky.

"Tomorrow I´m going to take your daughter out to a night club and get her pussy stuffed with its first male cock. By now you know never to disobey or hinder me in any way anal-slave, but just as you know, if you even cross me again, my next shit is going to go down your mouth!"

You stroll out of there with all the confidence and self-satisfaction of a female God. In your wake you leave a mother and daughter in immense sexual gratification and subservience to your will. There is no doubt in your mind that one, or possibly both, of these women will become a perfect sacrifice for your cult.

...

The next day.

For unusualities sake you´ve decided to do something different with your hair. It´s pulled back into a tight ponytail, your long, golden and straight hair falling as a single lock down your back. On top you wear a skin-tight jet-black shirt. It perfectly encloses around your huge DD breasts as to capture their illustrious shape and form. In contrast it also hugs tightly around your stomach as to highlight your model-slim waistline. The equally black sweat-pants your wearing has the same quality of hugging your hips like a second-skin. All this is made to present your fantastic hourglass-shaped figure in all its glory.

You have a reason for all this, you´ve been summoned by your cult leader Vladimir to your cult´s headquarters. Vladimir is the man of your dreams, he is your leader, and the most desirable man you know of. You use all the tricks known to you to make yourself as attractive as possible for his pleasure.

There is a downside through - the caller. You where contacted by Natasha, Vladimir´s primary lover and bodyguard. She is a insanely beautiful half-white, half-black, former super-model whom you´ve clashed with numerous times in the past over Vladimir´s attention. Every time you´ve clashed, she has come out on top. You´re hoping this mission will finally be the tipping point where you overtake her as Vladimir´s favorite.

You do three inspection in the mirror to make sure that everything is perfect before leaving your room and heading for your cult´s headquarters.

...

You´ve arrived at the cult´s headquarters. It´s a great mansion located in the richer part of town. Just by looking at the outside you´d never guess it housed a cult of devil-worshipping, sexual predators. But blending in is what made the cult survive for all these years, and with the time of the summoning of the demon is so close, no one will be able to stop you.

You enter the doors and find yourself in a large hall. You nod at some other Satanists that you recognize, but heed them no large attention. Your steps immediately take you in the direction of Vladimir´s private chamber.

You climb the stairs, go through a corridor, take a right turn that leads straight to Vladimir´s door, and come face-to-face with Natasha.

The mulato woman smiles at you, it´s a devilish smile, a smile of utmost contempt.

You flash her a grin of distain in response, not a particularly wide grin though, Natasha is the most deadly woman you´ve ever encountered. So although you know full well that she isn´t allowed to hurt you, the danger she represents affects you even on a subconscious level. You´re simply hardwired not to push this woman to far, no matter the situation. She seems to know this.

"Sharon," she greets.

"Natasha, my dear," you reply. Both your words are as cold as a sociopathic killer.

"Vladimir has summoned you..." she seems to linger on her sentence, as if not wanting to complete it, "so I´ll give you access to his private chamber. Hurry."

You walk past her, hating the woman even more since you last meet her. How can she be so beautiful and strong at the same time? It makes your blood boil. But the hate for her is quickly overtaken for the longing of Vladimir. You´ve been given a chance to be alone with him! It´s a situation you could only dream about! With fast steps you walk up to the door and enter his chamber.

Vladimir, the center of your universe, is sitting by his desk reading reports. It´s a spacious chamber, large as a house, so you begin walking towards him. Vladimir is in his sixties, his hair is gray, but the rest of him looks half that age.

As you arrive by his desk, he looks up at you. Suddenly it´s hard to stand up straight or keep a dignified face. Vladimir is just perfect, when he looks at you, your word spins. There is no arousal to be found as the one radiating from his body.

"Sharon, It´s been seven days, give me a report."

"Yes Master!" You say and stand at attention. You do however arch your chest upwards, as to emphasize your best assets for Vladimir´s inspecting eyes, your humongous boobs.

You report your progress with the same professionalism of a Marine reporting a kill. Vladimir listens with keen eyes. You tell him about how you forcibly seduced Karla and then later that same day raped her mom anally. You tell him about the great lengths you´ve gone through to get Karla´s trust and how Vicky has fallen so far as to declare herself your anal-slave. It isn´t easy keeping a straight tone, just being this close to Vladimir is enough for your heart to pump faster and your hormones to stir up your female emotions. You end on the plans for tonight, how you intend to take Karla to a nightclub and corrupt her with sexual deviances.

"Hmm, interesting Sharon. You do have talent for breaking peoples mind."

Before you can have a chance to react to his words two arms wraps around your body.

"Wha..." you exclaim before being quickly interrupted by Vladimir.

"Keep your hands at your sides Sharon! Look me straight in the eyes!"

It´s a nervous situation, the hands came out of nowhere, you never heard them coming. But meeting Vladimir´s dark gaze makes your icy-blue irises melt in desire. "Y-Yes, M-Master," you whisper with a moan.

The hands grip your large breasts and begin stroking them with its palm and fingers. You slip out a meek, feminine moan from the touch. Their an easy target for the assailant, jutting out from your tiny frame like two ripe melons restrained by the constrictive fabric of your bra and black shirt. You can´t see the hands, but know they belong to Natasha. They have her characteristic feminine smoothness but also a unsuspecting strength to their touch.

"Ahh..." You moan again, louder this time, and with more passion. If you weren´t sure it is Natasha forcing this pleasure upon your body this would be ecstatic. But the pleasure is still welcomed, seeing as it´s displayed in front of Vladimir.

"You have highly sensitive breasts, don´t you Sharon?" Vladimir asks you.

"Their all natural Master," you respond.

"You´re blushing my dear, your white cheeks are all red," He retorts.

Hearing Vladimir say that makes you blush even more. You flash him a wide, happy smile that shows of your perfect-set of bleach white teeth. "It´s all for you Master," you say with a youthful and sultry voice. Your desire for him is evident. High from lust you reach across the table for his crotch, but a brown hand grips your wrist and yank your arm behind your back.

"Ahgg," you moan, this time in pain.

Natasha then cups your breasts upwards from underneath. Your moans immediately returns to being pure pleasure-sounds, a large O forming on your mouth.

"Your body is a perfect specimen Sharon, the quintessential young blonde-beauty. You even posses a plentiful, but firm and sensitive ass. That´s a rare gift on a white, American girls body."

Natasha moves her hands down to your butt and gropes the two large ass-mounds. The reaction from you is the same, a steady stream of small moans.

"T-Thanks you Master!" You squeal, it´s practically impossible to keep a composed tone with Vladimir complimenting you like this and Natasha touching you at the same time.

All this pleasure radiates down to your crotch. Your pussy is wet and throbbing, desperate for attention.

"Tell me," says Vladimir, "after you´ve enslaved this Vicky and Karla, what do you intend to do with them?"

*[[Both Karla and Vicky will be made sacrifices]]

*[[Karla will be made a sacrifice, Vicky will remain my personal slave]]

*[[Vicky will be made a sacrifice, Karla will remain my personal slave]]

*[[Both Karla and Vicky will remain my personal slaves, sacrifices can be found elsewhere]]
[[Category:The Devil's Daughter]]

Turn around and demand she tongue lapses your dirty brown-hole

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 10 Nov 2011 23:42:50 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

"Anal-slave," you tell Vicky with a broad wolf-like grin, "It´s time to prove your devotion to your Mistress."

You quickly spin yourself around 180 degrees on her pinned body. Now you're still sitting down on her fat breast, the pressure that your thighs put on her tit-meat mashes the mammaries flatly to the sides. But now it isn´t the six-inch strap-on dildo facing her, it´s your wondrously ripe and firm white teenage buttocks.

The black straps that hold the dildo in place runs around your thighs and around your tailbone, thus neatly enclosing your ass. You let her stare in wonder at the glorious bottom for a while before yelling, "Spread your Mistress ass-globes anal-slave!"

You feel the flesh of your big but stone-hard ass-mounds being gripped by weak, feminine and hesitant fingers. Slowly they are beginning to be spread apart, your slave opening them with the same care and nervousness that normal people use to open a holy book.

You allow Vicky to spreads your bum-globes far before you say anything. "That´s far enough anal-slave. Now, what do you see, describe it," you ask with a sneering voice.

"It´s... it´s your tight, puckered anal-opening Mistress," Vicky replies with a faltering voice.

"Hmhmhm, and what do you think of it anal-slave?" you ask her.

"It is very beautiful Mistress, elegant... a-and attractive,"

"Haha, yes it´s not as loose and over-fucked as yours. Do you find it attractive?"

"Y-yes," she replies.

"Good," you purr. "Now, stick your nose in it, I want to feel you smell it´s insides."

All you hear from the woman is a weak whimper. "Hmhmhm, yes your Mistress likes anal sex to, I just like being worshipped instead of grotesquely spread open like you."

You then feel the gentle tip of her nose touch your tight anal-ring. You hiss from the forbidden sensation, and moan as you feel the full length of her nose being pressed into your dark and dirty a-hole. Vicky takes a heavy breath of inside your rectum, inhaling the heavy, shit-odor straight from its vile source.

"Ahhh..." You moan as the smoothing, cool air fills your butthole.

"Urghh, Uhhgg..." Vicky coughs and sounds like she´s about to spew.

"Ahhh, that´s the smell of your Mistress anal-slave. So how does the asshole of a beautiful, American blond-haired girl smell like anal-slave?" You ask her.

"Urrghh, heavenly Mistress Sharon," the mother forces herself to say. Despite her coughs of disgust you clearly see that her cunt is brimming over with lube, even the filthiest part of your body arouses this woman.

"Good, now clean it with your tongue anal-slave, slurp that crack like it was my clit!" you say with a heavy, lust-littered voice.

Instantly your orders are followed. The wet tongue pokes at your puckered crack, the lewd sexual contact sends shivers of blissful pleasure up your spine. The normally so dry entrance is soaked with Vicky´s saliva as she drags her tongue along the entrance, scooping with her nerve-filled red muscle along your shit-flavored anal-ring.

"Gahh... penetrate it, penetrate it you stupid cow!" You grunt in impatience.

Her quick tongue nudges gently at your wrinkly, O-shaped hole, then pushes against it hard. The softness of the tongue penetrates you, it enters your unclean shithole and then wiggles around against the stained rectum-walls.

"Ohhh... Ohhhh... Ahhhhaaaa!" Your panting and moaning like a girl getting her clit worshipped, but in fact all the pleasure comes directly from your ass. You aren´t even touching your clit but your pussy is soaked with arousal.

The tongue snakes its way in deeper, it fills you with an unbelievable lewd arousal that your nerve-clustered crapper is being cleaned out by someone's tongue. Your anal-ring cramps down on the base of her tongue while the tip continues to vigorously stimulate your black hole.

Ahhhh! Uhhhh! Yea, slurp that dark shithole you dirty bitch... This is what stupid cunt´s like you are made for... You won´t ever be able to kiss your daughter or husband again without being reminded that your lips where on my ass," you scream in ecstasy in between your loud moans.

Vicky locks her soft, watery lips with your butthole. She sloppily kisses the acrid hole with more passion than she has ever kissed a man with. Pleasure concentrates and cramps down in your butthole making you grit your teeth in ecstasy. The mother continues to dart her tongue in and out of your bum, now that her lips are locked she manages to penetrate deeper than ever before.

"AAAAHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAA!!! I fucking own the horny women of this family!" You scream out like a victorious Valkyria. "You are my slaves, I took your daughters virginity and you are my rectum-cleaner Vicky!" You say and spout out her *real* name for the last time with a tone of mockery.

A great amount of fluids have now been exchanged between her saliva filled mouth and your feces littered butthole. Now Vicky just retracts her tongue and suck on your butthole with great strength and enthusiasm. The motherly vacuuming of your ass drives you over the edge.

"AHAHAHAAHAHHAHA!" You scream crazily as your head flings around on your shoulders. "I´m cumming with my ass! I´m cumming with my ass! Your tongue in my ass is making me cum! I Sharon Abrahamson is cumming from having anal-slave clean my ass AAHHHRGGGGG!"

Your orgasm is fierce, loud and prideful, like all of your tongue worshipping anal-orgasms. You shriek loudly and squirt gushes out of your cunt and splashes on Vicky´s naked belly. The thrumming pleasure in your butthole is blissfully unholy. Vicky continues to suck on throughout the orgasm, sending small waves of delightful aftershocks streaming through your body.

"Ahhhh..." you moan in a fading manner and then dismount Vicky´s face.

"That was... exquisite," you state and stretch your body like a feline in pleasure.

"I only wish to pleasure you," Vicky states meekly.

You ignore her and just focus on the muscle-tensing pleasure that consumes your body. It feels like you´ve just satisfied some deeply rotted and primal evolutionary purpose, a purpose to fuck and dominate. Your wicked mind is just reveling in the situation, maybe you should go for a devilishly lewd finish?

*[[Crouch down and take a shit on Vicky´s bed]]

*[[Throw the strap-on to Vicky and tell her to fuck her husband with it later tonight]]
[[Category:The Devil's Daughter]]

Straddle her chest and make her clean her daughters juices off your dick

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 10 Nov 2011 23:42:25 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

You jump onto the bed and go forward on your knees toward Vicky. She lays there trembling like a frightened animal, so weak and helpless.

"Ever dreamt about tasting your daughters virgin fluids?" You imposingly ask her.

"NO, no Mistress please don´t make me do that! Please!" She pleads, now crying.

With catlike vigor you jump onto her chest and sit down. Your thighs cramping down on her fat breast and the cock drenched in girl-syrup pointing straight at her face.

"NOOO!" She screams. The mother shuts her eyes and mouth tightly while turning her head as far to the side as she can, fighting to try to get away from the six-incher.

"Smell it! Smell it so I can hear anal-slave!" You scream at her, demanding cruel satisfaction.

"NooOOO! I can´t! I-I just can´t!"

You smile wickedly as you slap her hard across the cheek. Her cheeks turn red but she´s still stubbornly refusing.

"I FUCKING OWN YOU ANAL-WHORE! So smell that fucking girl-cum fresh from your daughters virgin twat you stupid pig-slut!"

Her mental bonds to you are too strong for her motherly instincts to overcome. What you´ve done to her, what you´ve made her become, makes her unable to resist. The mother of one turns her head to face the cock, whose helmet is starring her right in the eyes. Seeing no other alternative she inhales the aroma that might just as well be toxic to her.

"Uhuhuh! Eshh! Uessh!" The mother coughs and gasps.

"I know it doesn't smell as heavenly as your eighteen-years old Mistress pussy, but you should at least show a bit more love for your daughters snatch-fluids anal-slave!"

"Please, no more Mistress. I beg you."

You ignore her plea. "Now," you say with sultry menace, "taste it!"

Uesshhh, Noohohoho!" Her cries stop and her tears turn into full fledged sobbing.

"Come on you anal-loving stupid bitch! You where fucking finger-raping your old cunt-hole while I broke in your dyke daughter to womanhood you horny pig! But now that I bring the action to you right here you won´t even drink her snatch-juices!?"

"Can´t you just fuck me! Just fuck my ass or pussy Mistress but not this!" She screams in desperation.

"Oh bitch I could fuck you anywhere at anytime I want. Here, at my house, in public, anywhere. Maybe I should because it's the only thing you seem to be able to do! But hear this, you belong to me, now and forever, and my desire is to train you to obey and love me more than your daughter! So LICK that fucking dildo."

Like if she´s about to puke the anal-loving mother opens her mouth and enclose her lips on the wet cockhead. She slowly runs her lips up and down the shaft, her eyes closed, but you can see the pure disgust inside her. Her mind is fully aware of just how disgraceful her actions are, but her bodies loyalty to you overcomes that motherly instinct. Rewarding her you reach behind your back and dig three fingers into her wet and hungry snatch. You finger fuck her while she sucks on it. As orgasm builds up she gets more brave and tastes more of her babies cum. Finally her legs flaps across the bed as her cunt-walls clamps down on your fingers and splashes with orgasm.

She throws her head off the rubber-cock, panting heavily while being mortified with shame and lust.

"Whose Anal-slave are you?" You yell at her like a drill sergeant.

"I´m Mistress Sharon Abrahamson's anal-slave!" She yells, now believing it more than ever before.

"Did you like your daughters cunt-juices?"

"Yes Mistress, all cum tastes good!" She says from her brain-melting arousal.

"She´s your fucking daughter. Are you telling my you like the dirty wet stuff spitting out of your daughters baby-squeezer?"

"Uhhh, Yes I do. I´m a fucking anal-slave who likes cum. Let me pleasure you Mistress!"

"You´ll do anything?"

"Anything Mistress, I was born to serve you with my ass and cunt!"

*[[Turn around and demand she tongue lapses your dirty brown-hole]]

*[[Begin violently face-rape her until she chokes]]
[[Category:The Devil's Daughter]]

Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and return to the rock to look for clues about the American´s whereabouts"

Fletcher Peninsula — Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:45:41 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with '"I-I..." Sergey stutters, this is the first time you´ve seen him hesitate. "I suppose you´re right Vladimir. We need to locate the American base and find out what their intenti…'

"I-I..." Sergey stutters, this is the first time you´ve seen him hesitate. "I suppose you´re right Vladimir. We need to locate the American base and find out what their intentions are."

The others nod along, you can see it calms them to have some sort of clear directions.

"A few of us should stay here however to watch the spaceship and see if the communicator becomes operational. Vladimir, Yamuna, Kerim, you three take a rover and return to that rock where we placed our flag. See if you can find some evidence of American presence and where they might have gone, return here if you find anything. I and Aelita will stay here and watch the ship."

"Yes comrade cosmonaut!" the three of you confirm as one.

...

You drive out into the desolate, red wasteland with Kerim and Yamuna in the rover. It doesn't take long to reach the rock, and this time, nobody complains or even speaks a word as you proceed with the arduous climb to its top.

The Red Banner still stands, you´d almost except it to have been stolen in revenge.

"Alright," you say and breath heavily in your helmet, "let´s search the area, try to look for clues or tracks in the ground."

"Hey Vladimir, maybe we should check the base of the rock for rover tracks?" Kerim asks.

"Good idea, really good idea actually! But you´ll have to climb down to do that," you reply.

Kerim looks irritated that he came up with the idea. But begins the climb back down again without verbal complaint.

"Let´s just start looking," Yamuna says, whose already hunching over - looking at the ground.

You too begin keeping your eyes on the ground as you casually stroll on the flat top of the giant sandstone rock-complex. The top is covered with red earth and small red rocks. They lay like sand over the hard material that leaves footprints as you walk upon it, but no footprints can be found of the Americans.

"Found anything?" You shout to Yamuna after a minutes search - just to uphold contact.

"No... Wait, yes! Get over here Vladimir!" Yamuna yells back with excitement.

You perform a instant U-turn and run over to her as fast as you can. Yamuna is kneeling down, holding something in her hands.

"What is it?" You ask.

Yamuna holds up her open palm, "I saw it shining on the ground," she says. The item is a Christian cross in silver with a chain attached to it forming a necklace.

"A cross?" You say as if asking.

"You sound surprised Vladimir. Isn´t it what you´d except to find from the American´s?" Yamuna retorts with a clever voice.

"I guess so," you admit, feeling a bit dumb that you said so.

Suddenly Kerim´s voice is heard from the base of the rock, "Come here!"

The voice ends your fascination with the cross, and Yamuna puts the cross in her suits pocket. Both you and Yamuna quickly run down the rock to where the sound came from. Kerim stands by the base on the opposite side where you arrived from. On the ground there are clear tracks from rovers. Two tracks to be precise, one leading to the north, the other, to the west.

"This is it - these tracks will take us to them," Kerim says, excited that these mysterious Americans might finally be seen in the flesh.

"But which track leads to their base? And why is there two tracks?" you wonder, stating the obvious questions. "We´ll need to split up, we can drive back to the Volga-3 and report this and then get the second rover so that we can cover both tracks."

"Agree," Kerim says determinedly.

"That... sounds good," Yamuna says with a bit more nervousness in her voice.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Take Kerim with you and follow the tracks to the west]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Take Yamuna with you and follow the tracks to the north]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|W]]

MOTDE: Head back to the throne room B1

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 03 Nov 2011 19:18:16 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with 'Without warning you yank the Queen´s leash towards you, making Faylin stumble into your chest. She grunts and wraps her arms around you to not fall. The woman's soft, naked fles…'

Without warning you yank the Queen´s leash towards you, making Faylin stumble into your chest. She grunts and wraps her arms around you to not fall. The woman's soft, naked flesh presses against your body and her fat udders flattens against your armored tits. You enjoy abusing her with the leash, it´s such a direct solution.

"So do you like what you´ve seen today surface-Queen?" You tell her while she continues to instinctually cling to you. "Does the sexual slavery of your subjects arouse your fuckholes?"

Faylin tries to pull away, but you grab her shoulders and press her body against yours. You grind into her, molesting her with your hands, trust into her pelvis with yours, knowing that she feels your hardened man-meat as you do so.

You kiss your slave on her lips. She meekly tries to pull away, groaning lightly as you play with her body. "Hmm, I found this day ''highly'' arousing. I can´t wait for our second night together," you whisper at her with a sultry voice.

"Goddess..." Is all Faylin can mutter as she tries to pull away from you.

"Hmm, this is just the start my slave-Queen. Imagine what we´ll do to your race once we´ve entered the underworld," you end your words by starting to lick her lips with your snakelike tongue.

You think Faylin is about to scream. But then a voice rings out. "Co-commander Daine!"

Your kiss with Faylin is broken off, and you stare with an irritated frown upon the origins of the interruption.

A lone male soldier of your clan comes running and quickly kneels deeply at your feet. "I´m sorry for the interruption High-Huntress of Char! But your blood-sister the huntress Treccia ordered me to summon you immediately!"

"Treccia ey?" All this time you´ve been wondering what your sister has been up to. You release Faylin, who breathe a almost invisible sigh of momentary relief. "Take me to her!" You order the man.

...

You follow the messenger, walking at a pace that Faylin almost can´t keep up with. He leads you downwards into the palace, towards the cellars. As you reach the cellars two guards stand posted there by the cellar door. They are both carrying clan Char´s emblem, and are fiercely armed. Treccia must consider this place valuable.

The two guards bow as they see you approach. The messenger opens the door, and then bows down himself by the opening. You enter the room without him, dragging Faylin behind you.

Upon entering the room you see gold coins lying on-top of each other in large piles taller than yourself. It´s the treasury chamber of the Heartwood forest elves! Jewels, gems, diamonds, emeralds, jades, rubies, topazes and all other forms of riches lie scattered around the treasure chamber. The room absolutely glitters with wealth.

"Sister-superior," your sister Treccia greats you and bows deeply. She stands in the middle of the room, surrounded by the riches.

"Greetings sister," you say while continuing to take in the various riches of the room. "I presume you´ve seized this treasury for clan Char. Well done," you compliment her.

"Thank you sister-superior. But I did not call you here to inspect the bounty," she states.

Faylin also looks through what used to be her treasury. She´s sad, but after seeing what terrible fate has befallen her subjects, the looting of her treasury simply fails to compeer.

Your sister continues, "Let me explain. After you raped and viciously conquered the surface-elven Queen in the name of Char and the dark elf race last night, I took a band of soldiers and secured this treasury. It went without problems, as most dark elves where chasing surface-elven rape-meat. But I didn´t secure it for its wealth, I was thinking about the competition..."

"Hahahah! Good work little sister," you laugh happily, pleased with her performance. "I´m sure to find a item most valuable here in the royal treasury. Surely that ''bitch'' Solaria won´t be able to find any item matching ones that can be found in here! It´s simply perfect! Now I will have a advantage over Solaria, one point for me in the competition."

Treccia bows at your words, Faylin adds the emotion of confused to her normally anxiety ridden face.

"Sister-superior, may I recommend this item?" Your sister picks up a golden scepter from the riches. Faylins eyes widen at its sight. "It is the royal scepter of the Queen of the Heartwood forest sister. Surely it would be a worthy item to bring before the judges of the competition?" The reaction Faylin gave tells you that your sister is not mistaken.

"Hmm, good choice sister," you mutter, but proceed to inspect the room for yourself.

You look through the various riches, trying to find something that stands out. You soon find it, it´s a foot-long golden statue of the Queen Faylin.

You burst out in laughter at the sight of the extravagant treasure, "hahahah, and what is this? Something to satisfy your royal ego I presume slave?" You ask Faylin.

"It... it was a gift from a dwarven clan. They gave it to me, as a sign of friendship," Faylins voice seems to hurt, the recollection must bring her strong memories conflicting with her current state. "They... they said I was pure-of-heart, that I cared about them as equals, not looking down upon them like some highbrow, self-indulgent elf," Faylin lowers her head as she finishes speaking.

You snicker some more about it, clearly interested in choosing the statue. it would be quite a sight bringing it before the tribunal, your mother and Solaria.

You continue to look around the treasury chamber. After a minutes searching you find another item that makes you raise a eyebrow. It´s a blood-red diamond, bigger than your fist, and carved into the shape of a hearth. The diamond intrigues you in a way that you can´t put your finger on. It looks important. But you don´t know anything about it, choosing it would be a gamble.

*[[MOTDE: Chose the scepter your sister offered you B1A|MOTDE: Chose the scepter your sister offered you]]

*[[MOTDE: Go for the golden statue of Faylin B1B|MOTDE: Go for the golden statue of Faylin]]

*[[MOTDE: Go for the mysterious heart-shaped diamond B1C|MOTDE: Go for the mysterious heart-shaped diamond]]

[[Category: March of the Dark Elves |H]]

Malinovyĭ: Agree, and follow them back to the spaceship

Fletcher Peninsula — Mon, 31 Oct 2011 19:24:07 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with '"Alright Sergey, we´ll do as you wish, let´s take the American flag and return to base. You leave the rock with the Red Banner flying proudly on its peak. Sergey carries the A…'

"Alright Sergey, we´ll do as you wish, let´s take the American flag and return to base.

You leave the rock with the Red Banner flying proudly on its peak. Sergey carries the American flag in his chest as the four of you climb down the rock back to the vehicle . The rover is filled with nervous silence as you drive back to the spaceship. The apparent lifelessness of this red planet only enhances your anxiety about the situation. The red earth continues into the horizon, with only the occasional rock formation enchanting the view.

...

The four of you return to the spaceship Volga 3 - and as soon as the airlocks doors closes behind you Aelita enters fresh and healthy. Her friendly smile dissolves into a astonished, O-shaped gape as her jaw drops at the sight of the American flag in Sergey´s hands.

"Aelita," you tell her, "We found it on the rock where we were going to place the Red Banner. Sergey removed it, and placed our flag in it´s place."

A mixture of the words, "what? "why?" and "how?" spring out of Aelita´s mouth to form a inaccurate word of confusion.

You take your the time explaining the situation - telling her the long version instead of the short one. Kerim and Yamuna chime in during your story. When you´re done, and Aelita has understood what you have been telling her, Sergey says.

"Aelita. Go to the cockpit. Get on the communicator and report to base what´s happened here. Ask what our orders are," Sergey commands.

"Yes professor!" Aelita says and salutes the projects leader. She then runs off - towards the cockpit.

It takes a considreble while for her to get back, so the four of you get out of your spacesuits while she´s away. You can hear the young cosmonauts running back towards you before you can see her.

"Commander! T-The communicator - it is broken!" Aelita spouts with clear anxiety.

"What!?" Sergey shouts in surprise with an undertone of anger.

"There is just a buzzing sound coming from the communicator when I try to call base-command!"

"Sounds like atmospheric interference," you quickly say to diffuse any sudden emotions of panic among the crew. "I´ve experienced it a few times when landing on unvisited planets. Just never on one with such a calm weather as this."

"So what do we do!" Yamuna says - looking for answers. "Can´t we just fly back into space and contact them from there."

"We only have enough fuel for a straight journey back home," you quickly counter, "If we decide to fly off into space - then we wouldn´t have enough fuel to re-land and return home after that. Base-command might want us to continue the mission or investigate the situation, which we wouldn´t be able to do once in out space, we would be forced to perform the space-leap home."

You feel the need to chose an option on this issue.

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and scout the area to find the American base"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and return to the rock to look for clues about the American´s whereabouts"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and continue the mission as planned"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should take off into space and report this to base-command]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|A]]

Start Story: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet

Fletcher Peninsula — Mon, 31 Oct 2011 19:23:36 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet ==

You´ve only crashed two times in your career, and this red planet didn´t make it a third. The descent went smoothly and you quickly found a plain with an even landscape to land on, that to, was performed with minimal difficulty.

As regulations dictates when landing on an unvisited and unclaimed planet the first procedure is to actually walk on the planet's surface. You unstrap yourself from your familiar pilot chair and leave the cockpit to put your spacesuit on.

.....

The spacesuits are located in the ships airlock. You quickly head there, but find the rest of the crew half-dressed as you arrive. They are all new faces to you, so you give them a quick greeting and observe them while getting dressed yourself.

First there is the projects leader, professor Sergey. He´s just slightly older than you, probably in his early forties. The man is Moscow born and a member of the party all his life. He is the one holding the red banner in his chest, the flag of the USSR rolled up on a pole. He stares out a window as he dresses, the same focused look he gave in the cockpit.

The there is Yamuna, a biologist from Armenia. She must be about thirty you guess. What´s also noticeable about the woman is her well-kept, long and straight, bronze-colored hair. "Smooth landing pilot," she compliments.

"Thank you," you reply and then look at the two youths in the group.

"Clumsy these spacesuits," a blond man of Ukrainian origins says. He appears about twenty, and acts like it´s the first time he´s put on one of these spacesuits.

"You should appreciate them Kerim," you tell the youth. "When I was at your age we were still using the same basic spacesuit design that Yuri Gagarin wore. Could barely walk in them."

The youth flashes you a grin. He is a engineer, and if needed, a spare pilot.

The last person on the ship is Aelita, another Russian like you and Sergey. She looks even younger than Kerim, almost like a teenager. The girl seems a bit off, as if hazy, as she puts on the red space suit. She has short, jet-black hair, and is the ships medic.

Sergey puts his hand on the leaver that opens the airlock. "Well are you all ready?" he asks with a smile.

"Aye," you and you shipmates all confirm.

Sergey pulls the leaver and the gates fly open. All five of you walk out onto the planet Malinovyĭ. The first five people to ever thread on its red surface. You take your time soaking in the feeling and atmosphere, savoring that unique sensation. Kerim and Yamuna has the wonder of small children on their faces. Sergey, however, spots the prideful glare of a conquering general as his expression. All three of them looks so emotional - but not you, this isn´t the first time you´ve walked one an uncharted planet. Instead you allow yourself a small smile, and stare happily into the distance at what appears to be an easy, unproblematic mission.

Almost a minute goes by.

"So..." you say. "Are you going to set up that flag Sergey?"

The professor turns around to look at you, then at Kerim, Yamuna and Aelita. He doesn't say anything, but appears to be thinking.

Deciding that he´s taking too long you add, "you need to set up the flag Sergey before I can report to base that this planet is under the possession of the USSR."

"I know - but this is not the right place to put it." Sergey concludes. "It´s a featureless plain. Look over there," Sergey says and points at a large, sandstone rock formation - that rises from the ground like a large monolith nearby. "That place is much more... majestic. The red banner deserves to stand on a place people can admire," he says with a kingly voice.

"Okay," you simply reply, "just seems a bit... unnecessary that all," you end with a bit of hesitation in your voice.

"Oh come on now Mikhail, you´re not worried the Americans are going to land right next to us and claim this planet are you?" Kerim says with a humorous tone.

Yamuna chuckles, "Now, now Kerim, Mikhail has been on hundreds of planets..."

"Eighty-nine," you correct her.

"He has just been jaded by all that space-exploring that he doesn't see the wonder in claiming planets anymore. I agree with professor Sergey, let´s put the flag somewhere it will look glorious," Yamuna ends.

Sergey watches the bantering as if waiting for it to stop. "Well then, let´s go," he says as it finaly ends.

You haven´t been able to take your first step before Aelita unexpectedly collapses to her knees.

"Aelia!?" What happend?" Kerim is fist at her side, kneeling down and holding her so that she doesn't fall to her back.

You are at her side just after him, watching her face through the transparent visor. "It´s just drowsiness from the space-leap," you conclude. "It´s harmless, she just hasn´t recovered yet." You shift from speaking generally to confronting Aelita alone, "you should have told us you where still feeling the effects Aelita."

The young woman pants heavily, "yes, I know. It was stupid off me," and muscles herself to her feet, but still stands on unstable feet. "You go on without me. Place the flag on that rock. I´ll wait here in the spaceship."

"You´ll need help Aelita," you insist.

"No, no I´m perfectly fine," she retorts, but experience tells you to keep an eye on her.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the other place the flag on the rock|Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the others place the flag on the rock]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|S]]

Malinovyĭ: You shouldn´t start the mission without Sergey´s orders, sit down and continue the conversation with Aelita

Fletcher Peninsula — Mon, 31 Oct 2011 19:23:24 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

You pour yourself your own cup of coffee and sit down next to Aelita.

"Aelita, that´s a interesting name. You know where it originally comes from?" You ask her.

Aelita responds, "no, I just thought it was a ordinary name."

"In the 1920´s - just after the revolution - there was a hit movie called Aelita. It was about a engineer, who travelled to Mars and meet the Queen of the Martians - called Aelita."

"Oh? Is that so?" Aelita asks with a voice of interest.

"Since the movie became such a smash hit - remember that people back then had never seen such a futuristic film before, parents started naming their daughters after that Martian Queen. Soon Aelita became regular name in Russia. And here you are - a cosmonaut - on a red planet, just like Mars."

The conversation kinds of dries up after that. You sit there, sipping your coffee, feeling the time drift by, until suddenly Aelita pulls her phazer out of her utility belt and puts it on the dining table. "Ever used one of these in action Mikhail?" she asks.

You look at the weapon. It´s a standard Red Army phazer that all cosmonauts wear. It´s white, oval-shaped on the handle and barrel with a trigger just like on normal pistols.

"As a medic you really shouldn´t take such interest in firing phazers Aelita," you sternly inform her, brushing the question away in a authoritarian manner.

"I-I´m sorry," Aelita says and puts the phazer away. You have a change of heart through - and decide to answer the question.

"To answer your question, yes Aelita, I have had to pull my phazer many times."

" Extraterrestrial?" She asks, clearly curious.

"Yes..." you say with a nod, "and Americans."

You suddenly hear an alarm ringing, it signifies that the airlocks have been opened.

"They're back!" states Aelita and runs off to great them. You calmly follow her - arriving to find all four of them in shock. They just stand still looking at each other with worried faces. Sergey is holding a flag in his hand, but it isn´t the Red Banner, it´s the American flag.

...

"We found it mounted on the top of that rock where we were going to place our flag," Sergey informs you and Aelita. "I removed it - and placed the Red Banner in it´s place."

The five of you stand in the meeting room - none sit down. The American flag is laid out across the table. There is no mistaken it. Red stripes and white stars on a blue background. It is the symbol of the capitalist America. In your ten years you´ve never encountered a situation like this before. You stand there staring at it for a long while.

"This is... A bad situation," Kerim states the obvious.

"No, really - you think so?" Yamuna sarcastically retorts.

Whoever is the first human to arrive on a planet and put ones flag there is its rightful owner. Planets are marked in a database if they belong to either the USSR or the Americans. The database is shared without secrets, and is updated as soon as the claim is made. The entire system is designed to prevent events that can lead into international conflicts such as this. This is a crisis, a situation you´ve never encountered or even heard of before.

"Aelita," Sergey says.

"Y-Yes," the black-haired youth replies.

"Go to the cockpit. Get on the communicator and report to base what´s happened here. Ask what our orders are," Sergey commands.

"Yes professor!" Aelita says and salutes the projects leader. She then runs off - towards the cockpit.

You sigh heavily. "So, can anyone tell me what might have gone wrong here? Anybody?" When nobody replies to your question you say, "well, could you at least tell me why you removed the flag and returned it here?"

Sergey takes a deep breath. "This planet, planet Malinovyĭ-T361, was not listed as an American planet in the database. Since it is not listed in the database, it is not an American planet. Thus, I proclaim this planet a colony of the Soviet union."

"Well what if the Americans are still here? We don´t know how many they are - or why they´re here in the first place. The capitalist could even have built a military base on this planet - you don´t think they´d take offence that we pull their flag down?" you question Sergey.

Sergey groans lightly, as if annoyed at having to think about it. "Perhaps," he simply states, "let´s just wait for Aelita to give us the response from base.

You can hear the young cosmonauts running towards you before you can see her.

"Commander! T-The communicator - it is broken!"

"What!?" Sergey shouts in surprise with an undertone of anger.

"There is just a buzzing sound coming from the communicator when I try to call base-command!"

"Sounds like atmospheric interference," you quickly say to diffuse any sudden emotions of panic among the crew. "I´ve experienced it a few times when landing on unvisited planets. Just never on one with such a calm weather as this."

"So what do we do!" Yamuna says - looking for answers. "Can´t we just fly back into space and contact them from there."

"We only have enough fuel for a straight journey back home," you quickly counter, "If we decide to fly off into space - then we wouldn´t have enough fuel to re-land and return home after that. Base-command might want us to continue the mission or investigate the situation, which we wouldn´t be able to do once in out space, we would be forced to perform the space-leap home."

You feel the need to chose an option on this issue.

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and scout the area to find the American base"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and return to the rock to look for clues about the American´s whereabouts"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and continue the mission as planned"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should take off into space and report this to base-command"]]

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Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 00:01:48 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

As you may know, I am the author of, [[Surviving Today]], the sequel (sorta) [[Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]], the upcoming [[Remember]], and am now technically the supervisor/contributor for [[User:Unkowhero23|Unkowhero23]]'s stories. With the help of Platypus, I've managed to set up the [[Story Reviews]] section, which I hope will become successful. At this moment I'm the ''only'' reviewer, so I hope sooner or later someone will do some of their own as well. I wouldn't consider my stories to be the best in the site, but I hope that my new story, Remember, can be featured on this site and finally topple War Pigs, which has been there for a while. Below is a list of my works or stories where I have contributed a fair deal in.

== [[Story Reviews]] ==
Why was this made? Well for two reasons actually:

*To encourage writers to continue writing

*To increase publicity for stories

Now, this section is still new and I am right now figuring out how I should set this page out. So if you would like to help me, by all means go ahead. Reviews will be rated out of ten, with ten being the highest. I've also set up a How To guide for setting up Reviews. Be sure to read through that first if you want to do your own.
As of this moment, i'm trying to review all of the nominated stories that want be featured. Besides the +18 ones. So that's 3 reviews coming soon.

With the Review section up and running, I now move on to promoting other people to make reviews. Hopefully someone will eventually write one. That was one of the reasons I wanted to do it besides promoting stories and giving constructive criticism. To build more of a community, because there isn't exactly much going on in this site in terms of interaction. All I can do is hope and pray.

If you have any questions or would like me to review a certain story, feel free to ask in the discussion tab.

== [[Remember]] (40+ Pages) '''(Featured from 22/10/2011)''' ==

Upcoming story about a man waking up in a room, not remembering who and where he is. I'm putting more effort into this story than I had previously done, so I hope it goes down well, maybe even becoming featured.

'''Little Taste:'''

You lift open your eyes, all you can see is a bright light. You get up and take a look around you, you are in a very tight room, no windows, one door, everything is painted in white, beside the door is a small walkie talkie, it looks brand new.

You begin to think, where are you? ''Who'' are you? You steady yourself and stumble towards the door, you tightly grab the knob and begin to twist it open. It's locked. ''Damn.'' You take another spin around the place. You don't know where you are, you don't know who you are, and you are trapped inside this small room. You pace slowly around the room, with your mind thinking intensly on what to do.

You pick up the walkit talkie, you press the button for the microphone and begin to speak.

''"Hello? Is anyone there?"''

'''Update 1''': Preview of some of the first page up. This story is probably going to take the longest to complete, since I am trying to pump as much information into the story as possible.

'''Update 2''': With the construction of the review section taking place, this story will now take a bit longer to complete, not saying it won't be finished, just that it will be finished later than expected.

'''Update 3''': Slowly but surely, the story is being completed. I'm trying to nudge in about one or two per day, but that may only go down to only one per week! Sorry about that, but I have school and such.

'''Update 4''': I was going to post this update sooner but I couldn't be bothered till now, so Remember recently passed the 20 pages mark and at this moment is situated at 24. Once it goes above say 30, I will be nominating this story to be feaured, then hopefully someone brave enough will switch the featured story from War Pigs to this one, though, I'd like this to be finished before it becomes featured.

'''Update 4.5''': I finally nominated it! Hopefully this self promotion will get someone else to fall in love with it and put it up as being featured soon, though I doubt it will happen soon.

'''Update 5''': Just noticed that this story recently passed 40 pages! It's officially the biggest story I've ever written.!

'''Update 6''': '''Remember got featured!!''' Hooray! Thanks to [[User:Snowball|Snowball]] for featuring me. I didn't think that my story would be featured that early on! I'm only just halfway through writing this story too! Now, I have around two months for me to finish my story until my story gets replaced by a just as amazing adventure. As of now, there are 46 pages on the story.

== [[Surviving Today]] (Finished 20 Pages)==
My first every story! Its about some guy who wakes up one day to find out that a tornado is about to destroy his town of Netrue and he has to escape.

'''Little Taste:'''

''"Breaking News: A huge category 5 tornado is heading straight for the town of Netrue. This tornado is the wildest and most dangerous ever recorded since 1950. The Police came knocking on every house in that area to see who had left or stayed. The Police reported that everyone in the area has evacuated except for a few people who are brave enough to stay inside and brave the storm or want to watch the tornado in action. For anyone still in the town of Netrue, i beg of you to please stay inside or evacuate immediately. Onto other news now..."''

== [[Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] (35+ Pages!!) ==
You are a guy, who happens to wake up one morning to find out that there is a tornado heading for your town! Achievements are now available!

'''Little Taste:'''

''"What the hell were you doing in the middle of the road!"''

You explain your story to him, you then ask why are they here too. The girl turns around and see her face, somehow you are entranced by her deep eyes.

''"Well, can't you tell,"'' She speaks loudly, ''"we're storm chasers, this is actually my first time doing this, so i'm not sure on what to do here."''

''"You should be recording the tornado!"'' The driver interrupts, ''"No one else is getting pictures of these, and the pay is really high this time of year."''

== [[Teehee!]] (Contributed)(60+ Pages) ==
I decided to do some new pages on this story since it wasn't really finished. I only finished one of the 5 stories. But you can still check it out. I wouldn't say this I take much effort into making the pages here, as the pages before were very short to begin with, so I should just keep the style like that and continue that process.

== [[Element]] (Work In Progress)==
This is just a Turn-Based Strategy. You choose an Element (Wind,Fire,Earth or Water), then battle an opponent. I'm right now looking for people to help out and finish this project sooner since this should take a while by myself. I'm still doing battle one as i type here. If you are interested or would like to read this story, just click on [[Element]] or go on the Main Page to find it.

[[Category: User Pages]]

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 00:01:47 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Uhh... damit put the text on the wrong page. I´m getting to old for this shit.

== Congratulations! ==

Hey, I can't help but notice that you've finished quite a few stories. On this site, waaaay too many writers start things and never finish them '''cough'''''I'mguiltyofthatsometimes'''''cough'''. I've read through Surviving Today 2, and I actually thought it was pretty cool. You've got a nice style, and a good imagination to fuel it. Keep up the good work! --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 11:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

It's good to know that you enjoyed "Megan". I love getting feedback, and as for your question for the "What If?" situation, I could perhaps do that. It might take some time, however.

Right now I've got the first page of "The Diary Of Bethany Cross" in the works, and after that I might get some work done on [[What Lies Beneath|WLB]]. After WLB and "The Diary", I'm planning on a chapter-by-chapter story that would unite the characters of "Rescue", "Megan", "WLB", and "The Diary" (Dead characters will still appear. Not sure how to explain it yet, but it'll happen) and thrust them into the potential end of the world.

The idea of a "What If?" version is a bit interesting, though. I'm wondering if you mean if Megan didn't kill herself, kill Vanessa, or if Vanessa killed Megan (which happens in one of the pages)? It could be fun to play around with all three of those ideas, really. Believe it or not, I've still got at least six kills to work in eventually in a later update - the gun and power-tools kills - I added the ending in so I could consider it "finished" for now and potentially get it to be the featured story and get it some exposure. As of now, War Pigs is still the featured (and it's quite good if you haven't read it yet), but I can certainly hope. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:29, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Apologies for getting back to you so late, but I think the first and third ideas could work out really well. The first would depend mostly on where the story goes with the idea you started with, but it could work. Reviews would be pretty good, too. Good reviews help motivate writers and constructive criticism helps them improve. The second idea reminds me a bit of Community, though. Which - don't get me wrong - is awesome on its own. Community friggin' rules. It might be harder to get to work, but that could be done too. I guess all the ideas sound good to me. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:29, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Hey, just saw the review, and thanks! Always awesome to get a well written review on something I wrote. As for the story only having one (true) ending, I understand completely. I actually have been toying with other endings (besides the one page where Vanessa kills Megan), including things like Vanessa killing Megan and surviving, Megan wimping out at the end and going home, Megan getting arrested, and stuff like that in my head. As you stated in the review, it's not finished yet, so there's time for me to add those in later. Oh, and I saw you said you only read one of the brutal kills. Which one? In a strange, morbid way I want to know which one it was so I can tell if I wrote it well.

Uh, anyways, besides all of that, thanks again. I'm thinking of doing my own reviews soon, and one of yours shall be in the queue. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:28, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I've actually been periodically checking "Remember" from time to time. Liking it so far. The death-gas is pretty cool, and the story so far is intriguing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 00:09, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

==review area==
Having a section for story reviews sounds like a good idea. Writers usually like feedback, especially constructive criticism. I appreciate being invited to join the review process, but it all depends on how much time I find to work on such a thing. I already do a lot of grammatical and stylistic editing on the stories that I've contributed the most to, as well as doing various functions that are reserved for sysops. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:02, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

The two possibilities I've thought of for a review area are
*a link on the Main Page to a Review Page, like the way there's the link to the Featured Story area.
*adding third column in the story section after Name and Status that links to a review section for that story.

I'm still considering which idea I like better. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:10, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

TheElderOnes also suggested doing a combination of both. It sounds like that might be the way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:11, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

== Re: I Hope you feel slightly special! ==

I don't mind the bad things you said- but how dare you not include a preview and make the score appear bigger like in the rest of your reviews!

Anyways, good review. I know I probably should focus on one character's story before moving on to another, but I get bored if I stay with just one of them for too long.

It's kind of ironic you would like Karen's story the best, because she's my least favorite of the five. Different strokes, I guess.

Thanks for the review. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 20:28, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

The problem with William is I'm not certain what choices the player will have to make while he's in Michael's custody.

I have the main ending for the story planned out, I'm just trying to decide what will happen between Michael and William that will cause them to oppose each other. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:38, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's similar to what I had planned for Michael to go after William. If you're interested in how the final act is supposed to go down between the five main characters (the true ending), I'll post it. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:48, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

Here's a brief summary. Bear in mind that these events only occur if the reader goes down a certain path.

William uses his powers to kill Michael's friends (it's ironic that you would emphasize "accidentally," because he's mostly in control by this point in the story).

William and Michael have their first showdown in a warehouse. At first, William's powers give him the edge, but he soon realizes that Michael is too much for him to handle. Michael savagely beats him in retaliation for the deaths of his friends.

Vincent arrives at Karen's home to kill her. Rebecca also arrives to kill Vincent. The two beat each other senseless, until another figure appears, and then things really go to hell.

As for the true ending, I'll just let you know that all of the endings are named after songs (hint, hint). --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 18:05, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

It's not Karen. I could go further, but that would spoil the final fates of the characters. As for the songs, they were all made before 2000.

I would like to hear what you think should happen to the five leads and their survival odds. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:36, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

== Remember ==

It was really interesting although the plot made it sound a lot like a Saw movie. The background shows a mean person and the guy capturing him sounds like a brother which didn't make a lot of sense. After all, he sounded like an enemy after the hate in the responses to questions.

For some strange reason I keep having an obligation to edit every time I see a mistake. Well, I'll check the minor edit box next time.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:45, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, [[Remember]] was good, so I decided to topple war pigs.(I was getting kind of sick of it being there, in any case) Hopefully I can finish the two stories I'm working on now(that I want to complete straight away) so I can start reviewing stuff as well. Keep writing [[Remember]]. I want to know more about the story!:)

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 15:47, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right, I wanted to ask for an opinion on something I thought about. Most pages don't place a letter or title before the page names. So, the only two courses that can be done,(without plowing through every story to start over) is to let certain pages overlap. [[Kill yourself]] has eleven categories. Tell me what you think, because eventually, if nothing is done, what with pages being added, page names will be so long we could let the option be clicking the stroy in itself, just to not allow overlaps.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:12, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

For example, if someone else put R, for another story, the page would be edited and it may seem like a small thing but it would get very annoying if it happens repeatedly. However, if for pages like [[Kill yourself]], the story works well, it can be some sort of intersection. It'll probably only work on endings, but it gets annoying. Once I made a page [[Die]] and it was already taken and completely inappropiate. Since it is a very small title it does seem weird. Besides, it would be easier than going through large stories, pulling them out and repasting them. It would be fine for simple stories. However, a lot go into near 100 and there is a 200 pager(The Kitty in the Window) which would probably lose pages in the process. Oh, right and it might be slightly easier to make a category, like '''Public''' to place the... public stories.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:42, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

== Story of the year ==

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured
in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called ((
Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide
the winner. --Heyoeveryone 23 October 2011

Well the problem with that is that the ''page views functtion'' isn´t based on individual viewers, but on how many times that page has been accsesed no matter if it was the same person. So one person could click on a link a thousand times and thus give that option a thousand votes. It´s not a functional voting system. Users would need to leave their signature on which story they vote on (a public vote so to say). Sure that system could be cheated to by creating new accounts and using them to vote. But that requiers a lot more effort, and would get suspective seeing so many new members being created and all of them voting for the same guy.

Other than that it´s seems like a fun and intruiging idea. Alternatively you could do a "story of all time" vote with the first one.

PS: Apologize for lateness of the reply.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

User:Heyoeveryone

Fletcher Peninsula — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 00:00:12 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Whops, forgot to leave signature

Category:Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:49:31 GMT

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The Index for the story [[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]

Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:47:43 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Prolog ==

Launch initiated, countdown commencing in three... two... one... takeoff.

The vast, black, emptiness of space immediately explodes into a thunder of bright, all-consuming light. The spacecraft shakes violently - but in total silence. The sheer force of it numbs your senses, drowsiness overwhelms your body, and your vision vanishes in the white brightness. Sitting in the cockpit seat, your body is rocked with the terrifying, but harmless reactions that the human organism experiences when folding space. A ''space-leap'' it´s called.

...

102,200,000,000,000 kilometers away from home.

"Report Volga 3 to base, over," An old voice with a Georgian accent speaks over the communicator.

You reach for the handheld transceiver, but still incredibly drowsy from the space-leap you miss the equipment twice before finally getting your hands on it.

"This is Volga 3´s pilot Mikhail Oleinik reporting," you say into the communicator. "We´ve arrived at planet Malinovyĭ-T361 and are ready to land. The telescopes observations seems to be accurate. It is a red planet, signs of water but no plant life, and about the same size as earth, over"

As you finish giving the report you feel the last of the space-drowsiness exit your body. You are fully awake and facing the red, mars-like planet through the stainless glass of the cockpit windows.

"Understood comrade Mikhail. Proceed with the mission as planned. Over and out."

No sooner has the slightly-distorted voice on the communicator ended that anther voice emerges from behind you.

"So this is the red planet - Malinovyĭ."

You quickly spin your head to the side to see whose talking to you. "Professor Sergey!? You aren't experiencing any drowsiness from the space-leap?" you tell the identifyed figure.

"Yes I did comrade, but it passed quickly." The revelation genuinely surprises you. Having flown through space for over 10 years you´ve never seen a non-pilot recover as fast as Sergey. The professor stares at the red planet with fixed, focus eyes, almost as if in trance.

"Hrm," you grunt, "you should have become a pilot then."

Sergey chuckles a bit at your response, "science needs me more than the fleet does comrade Mikhail. Take us down, the sooner we land the better."

"Yes professor." Sergey is in command. You fly the ship. As you´re position dictates, Sergey returns to the rest of the crew while you guide the ship down to the planets red surface.

*[[Start Story: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]

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Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the other place the flag on the rock

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:47:39 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

You lift Aelita´s arm over your shoulder. "I´ll look after Aelita, you guys can go and put the flag in place," you tell them.

"Sound decision Mikhail," Sergey states, but without much emotion. "Kerim, roll out the rover. It will take us there faster."

"Yes professor," Kerim says and quickly fetches one of the spaceships automobile then drives it out onto the planet.

Yamuna and Sergey enters it. "We will return after putting the flag on that rock. Then we´ll start with the mission." Sergey says, and then they´ll swiftly drive off.

You help Aelita back onto the spaceship, and out of her spacesuit. You then sit her down on the plastic couch of the dining table. "Wait here, I´ll bring you some coffee," you tell her.

You fix the coffee, not thinking much while you do so. But when you walk over to her and offer it to the young woman she seems to be reluctant to accept. Aelita shakes her head, and won´t look you in the eye. The rejection doesn't bother you, just youthful stubbornness to pull one's own weight before fully understanding the rules of space, nothing new to you. Knowing that she can´t resist the coffee for long you poke her shoulder with the cup one time.

"Uhh... thanks," she says and grabs the cup.

"First space-leap I presume?" you ask her.

"Yes, I´m not good at hiding it clearly," She says and takes a sip of the liquid.

"Everyone reacts to a space-leap differently. And don´t worry, it´s gets a lot easier when you´ve done it a couple of times."

Despite your words embarrassment seems to flood over her. "I bet you´re barely effected by it."

You shrug your shoulders, "yes, that´s why they made me a pilot I guess."

Aelita takes another sip from the coffee. "Listen, you don´t have to watch over me. I´m already feeling better. Tell you what, there is a lake not far from here. Why don´t you start with the mission prematurely and go look if there is any indigenous life forms on this planet?"

The young woman emotions are clear. She feels no ill-will or anger that you´ve decided to watch over her. She´s just doesn't want to be a bother to you and pull her own weight. You´d doubt she would be disappointed if you sat down and had a conversation.

*[[Malinovyĭ: You shouldn´t start the mission without Sergey´s orders, sit down and continue the conversation with Aelita]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Say goodbye to Aelita and drive one of the rovers to a nearby lake]]

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Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:47:36 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet ==

You´ve only crashed two times in your career, and this red planet didn´t make it a third. The descent went smoothly and you quickly found a plain with an even landscape to land on, that to, was performed with minimal difficulty.

As regulations dictates when landing on an unvisited and unclaimed planet the first procedure is to actually walk on the planet's surface. You unstrap yourself from your familiar pilot chair and leave the cockpit to put your spacesuit on.

.....

The spacesuits are located in the ships airlock. You quickly head there, but find the rest of the crew half-dressed as you arrive. They are all new faces to you, so you give them a quick greeting and observe them while getting dressed yourself.

First there is the projects leader, professor Sergey. He´s just slightly older than you, probably in his early forties. The man is Moscow born and a member of the party all his life. He is the one holding the red banner in his chest, the flag of the USSR rolled up on a pole. He stares out a window as he dresses, the same focused look he gave in the cockpit.

The there is Yamuna, a biologist from Armenia. She must be about thirty you guess. What´s also noticeable about the woman is her well-kept, long and straight, bronze-colored hair. "Smooth landing pilot," she compliments.

"Thank you," you reply and then look at the two youths in the group.

"Clumsy these spacesuits," a blond man of Ukrainian origins says. He appears about twenty, and acts like it´s the first time he´s put on one of these spacesuits.

"You should appreciate them Kerim," you tell the youth. "When I was at your age we were still using the same basic spacesuit design that Yuri Gagarin wore. Could barely walk in them."

The youth flashes you a grin. He is a engineer, and if needed, a spare pilot.

The last person on the ship is Aelita, another Russian like you and Sergey. She looks even younger than Kerim, almost like a teenager. The girl seems a bit off, as if hazy, as she puts on the red space suit. She has short, jet-black hair, and is the ships medic.

Sergey puts his hand on the leaver that opens the airlock. "Well are you all ready?" he asks with a smile.

"Aye," you and you shipmates all confirm.

Sergey pulls the leaver and the gates fly open. All five of you walk out onto the planet Malinovyĭ. The first five people to ever thread on its red surface. You take your time soaking in the feeling and atmosphere, savoring that unique sensation. Kerim and Yamuna has the wonder of small children on their faces. Sergey, however, spots the prideful glare of a conquering general as his expression. All three of them looks so emotional - but not you, this isn´t the first time you´ve walked one an uncharted planet. Instead you allow yourself a small smile, and stare happily into the distance at what appears to be an easy, unproblematic mission.

Almost a minute goes by.

"So..." you say. "Are you going to set up that flag Sergey?"

The professor turns around to look at you, then at Kerim, Yamuna and Aelita. He doesn't say anything, but appears to be thinking.

Deciding that he´s taking too long you add, "you need to set up the flag Sergey before I can report to base that this planet is under the possession of the USSR."

"I know - but this is not the right place to put it." Sergey concludes. "It´s a featureless plain. Look over there," Sergey says and points at a large, sandstone rock formation nearby. "That place is much more... majestic. The red banner deserves to stand on a place people can admire," he says with a kingly voice.

"Okay," you simply reply, "just seems a bit... unnecessary that all," you end with a bit of hesitation in your voice.

"Oh come on now Mikhail, you´re not worried the Americans are going to land right next to us and claim this planet are you?" Kerim says with a humorous tone.

Yamuna chuckles, "Now, now Kerim, Mikhail has been on hundreds of planets..."

"Eighty-nine," you correct her.

"He has just been jaded by all that space-exploring that he doesn't see the wonder in claiming planets anymore. I agree with professor Sergey, let´s put the flag somewhere it will look glorious," Yamuna ends.

Sergey watches the bantering as if waiting for it to stop. "Well then, let´s go," he says as it finaly ends.

You haven´t been able to take your first step before Aelita unexpectedly collapses to her knees.

"Aelia!?" What happend?" Kerim is fist at her side, kneeling down and holding her so that she doesn't fall to her back.

You are at her side just after him, watching her face through the transparent visor. "It´s just drowsiness from the space-leap," you conclude. "It´s harmless, she just hasn´t recovered yet." You shift from speaking generally to confronting Aelita alone, "you should have told us you where still feeling the effects Aelita."

The young woman pants heavily, "yes, I know. It was stupid off me," and muscles herself to her feet, but still stands on unstable feet. "You go on without me. Place the flag on that rock. I´ll wait here in the spaceship."

"You´ll need help Aelita," you insist.

"No, no I´m perfectly fine," she retorts, but experience tells you to keep an eye on her.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the other place the flag on the rock|Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the others place the flag on the rock]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|S]]

Malinovyĭ: You shouldn´t start the mission without Sergey´s orders, sit down and continue the conversation with Aelita

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:47:34 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

You pour yourself your own cup of coffee and sit down next to Aelita.

"Aelita, that´s a interesting name. You know where it originally comes from?" You ask her.

Aelita responds, "no, I just thought it was a ordinary name."

"In the 1920´s - just after the revolution - there was a hit movie called Aelita. It was about a engineer, who travelled to Mars and meet the Queen of the Martians - called Aelita."

"Oh? Is that so?" Aelita asks with a voice of interest.

"Since the movie became such a smash hit - remember that people back then had never seen such a futuristic film before, parents started naming their daughters after that Martian Queen. Soon Aelita became regular name in Russia. And here you are - a cosmonaut - on a red planet, just like Mars."

The conversation kinds of dries up after that. You sit there, sipping your coffee, feeling the time drift by, until suddenly Aelita pulls her phazer out of her utility belt and puts it on the dining table. "Ever used one of these in action Mikhail?" she asks.

You look at the weapon. It´s a standard Red Army phazer that all cosmonauts wear. It´s white, oval-shaped on the handle and barrel with a trigger just like on normal pistols.

"As a medic you really shouldn´t take such interest in firing phazers Aelita," you sternly inform her, brushing the question away in a authoritarian manner.

"I-I´m sorry," Aelita says and puts the phazer away. You have a change of heart through - and decide to answer the question.

"To answer your question, yes Aelita, I have had to pull my phazer many times."

" Extraterrestrial?" She asks, clearly curious.

"Yes..." you say with a nod, "and Americans."

You suddenly hear an alarm ringing, it signifies that the airlocks have been opened.

"Their back!" states Aelita and runs off to great them. You calmly follow her - arriving to find all four of them in shock. They just stand still looking at each other with worried faces. Sergey is holding a flag in his hand, but it isn´t the Red Banner, it´s the American flag.

...

"We found it mounted on the top of that rock where we were going to place our flag," Sergey informs you and Aelita. "I removed it - and placed the Red Banner in it´s place."

The five of you stand in the meeting room - none sit down. The American flag is laid out across the table. There is no mistaken it. Red stripes and white stars on a blue background. It is the symbol of the capitalist America. In your ten years you´ve never encountered a situation like this before. You stand there staring at it for a long while.

"This is... A bad situation," Kerim states the obvious.

"No, really - you think so?" Yamuna sarcastically retorts.

Whoever is the first human to arrive on a planet and put ones flag there is its rightful owner. Planets are marked in a database if they belong to either the USSR or the Americans. The database is shared without secrets, and is updated as soon as the claim is made. The entire system is designed to prevent events that can lead into international conflicts such as this. This is a crisis, a situation you´ve never encountered or even heard of before.

"Aelita," Sergey says.

"Y-Yes," the black-haired youth replies.

"Go to the cockpit. Get on the communicator and report to base what´s happened here. Ask what our orders are," Sergey commands.

"Yes professor!" Aelita says and salutes the projects leader. She then runs off - towards the cockpit.

You sigh heavily. "So, can anyone tell me what might have gone wrong here? Anybody?" When nobody replies to your question you say, "well, could you at least tell me why you removed the flag and returned it here?"

Sergey takes a deep breath. "This planet, planet Malinovyĭ-T361, was not listed as an American planet in the database. Since it is not listed in the database, it is not an American planet. Thus, I proclaim this planet a colony of the Soviet union."

"Well what if the Americans are still here? We don´t know how many they are - or why they´re here in the first place. The capitalist could even have built a military base on this planet - you don´t think they´d take offence that we pull their flag down?" you question Sergey.

Sergey groans lightly, as if annoyed at having to think about it. "Perhaps," he simply states, "let´s just wait for Aelita to give us the response from base.

You can hear the young cosmonauts running towards you before you can see her.

"Commander! T-The communicator - it is broken!"

"What!?" Sergey shouts in surprise with an undertone of anger.

"There is just a buzzing sound coming from the communicator when I try to call base-command!"

"Sounds like atmospheric interference," you quickly say to diffuse any sudden emotions of panic among the crew. "I´ve experienced it a few times when landing on unvisited planets. Just never on one with such a calm weather as this."

"So what do we do!" Yamuna says - looking for answers. "Can´t we just fly back into space and contact them from there."

"We only have enough fuel for a straight journey back home," you quickly counter, "If we decide to fly off into space - then we wouldn´t have enough fuel to re-land and return home after that. Base-command might want us to continue the mission or investigate the situation, which we wouldn´t be able to do once in out space, we would be forced to perform the space-leap home."

You feel the need to chose an option on this issue.

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and scout the area to find the American base"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and return to the rock to look for clues about the American´s whereabouts"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and continue the mission as planned"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should take off into space and report this to base-command]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|Y]]

Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 23:47:32 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

"Yea, it´s probably nothing. Just get back in the spaceship and focus on recuperating," you inform Aelita.

"Yes, thank you, good luck," Aelita says staggers back into the spaceship.

Sergey watches the proceedings without much apparent interest. "Kerim, roll out the rover. It will take us there faster." He orders as Aelita is back on the ship.

"Yes professor," Kerim says and quickly fetches one of the spaceships automobile then drives it out onto the planet. You, Sergey, and Yamuna climb into the vehicle and take off.

...

The strenuous climb up the steep rock is taxing on your body, but not really dangerous. You climb in second place, just behind Sergey.

"Almost there," you hear Yamuna say behind you. When she and Kerim discovered that it wasn´t going to be a easy climb up the rock they both silently pulled their support for Sergey´s plan to set up the flag on its top.

Sergey unwraps the flag, letting the red symbol flow free in the wind, the golden hammer and sickle proudly represented on this red planet. He reaches the top, and abruptly stops. Sergey drops the flag, his grip on it just losing all it´s strength. You swiftly grab it before it can fall down the rocks steep sides.

"Watch it Sergey you almost dropped the flag!" you yell at him and grunt in annoyance. Then you get up to the top, and yourself stop abruptly. Yamuna comes after, and experiences exactly the same reaction. Then finally Kerim arrives, and is completely alike his three cosmonauts. All four of you stand shocked in silence. All eight of your eyes staring straight at an American flag mounted on the top.

There is no mistaken it. Red stripes and white stars on a blue background. It is the symbol of the capitalist America. In your ten years you´ve never encountered a situation like this before. You stand there staring at it for a long while.

A heated argument ensures.

Whoever is the first human to arrive on a planet and put ones flag there is its rightful owner. Planets are marked if they belong to either the USSR or the Americans. The database is shared without secrets, and is updated as soon as the claim is made. The entire system is designed to prevent events that can lead into international conflicts such as this. This is a crisis, a situation you´ve never encountered or even heard of before.

"How could this happen!?"

"The American´s where here before us!?

"Why didn´t base-command report that the Americans had claimed this planet!?"

You are all verbalizing your thought and questions. Confusion, nervousness and even a hint of fear runs through your bodies. Something like this was never supposed to happen, where was the mistake made?

Sergey breaks the pattern. He seems to find his cool quickly and grabs the red banner out of your hands.

"Wha..." you begin to say but Sergey is already walking, straight for the American flag.

"What are you doing Sergey?" Yamuna shouts at him.

Sergey starts wrapping the American flag around it´s pole.

"Stop that! What are you doing!?" Kerim yells.

"This planet, planet Malinovyĭ-T361, was not listed as an American planet in the database." Sergey says and finishes wrapping the red, white and blue flag around the pole. He then yanks the pole out of the ground and replaces it with your own USSR flag. "Since it´s not listed in the database, it is not an American planet. Thus, I hereby proclaim planet Malinovyĭ-T361 a colony of the Soviet union." Sergey turns around to face you with a sly, confident smile.

"Think about what you´re doing Sergey. This is an international crisis, removing their flag isn´t going to help things," you warn him.

"I agree with Mikhail, Sergey, let´s not make things worse." Yamuna agrees with you.

"Yea, besides we don´t know what Americans are out there. It could be an entire military base!" Kerim exclaims.

"Hmm," Sergey chuckles, "I am the leader of this mission, so I say we replace our flag for theirs, and take this flag back to base. We´ll report this to the base. They´ll decide what to do next. Agree?"

"Agree," Kerim says.

"... Agree," Yamuna says after some hesitation.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Agree, and follow them back to the spaceship]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Agree, but say you should stay behind to look for clues]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Disagree, and tell Sergey to put the American flag back down]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet|G]]

Malinovyĭ: You shouldn´t start the mission without Sergey´s orders, sit down and continue the conversation with Aelita

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 22:51:20 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with 'You pour yourself your own cup of coffee and sit down next to Aelita. "Aelita, that´s a interesting name. You know where it originally comes from?" You ask her. Aelita respond…'

You pour yourself your own cup of coffee and sit down next to Aelita.

"Aelita, that´s a interesting name. You know where it originally comes from?" You ask her.

Aelita responds, "no, I just thought it was a ordinary name."

"In the 1920´s - just after the revolution - there was a hit movie called Aelita. It was about a engineer, who travelled to Mars and meet the Queen of the Martians - called Aelita."

"Oh? Is that so?" Aelita asks with a voice of interest.

"Since the movie became such a smash hit - remember that people back then had never seen such a futuristic film before, parents started naming their daughters after that Martian Queen. Soon Aelita became regular name in Russia. And here you are - a cosmonaut - on a red planet, just like Mars."

The conversation kinds of dries up after that. You sit there, sipping your coffee, feeling the time drift by, until suddenly Aelita pulls her phazer out of her utility belt and puts it on the dining table. "Ever used one of these in action Mikhail?" she asks.

You look at the weapon. It´s a standard Red Army phazer that all cosmonauts wear. It´s white, oval-shaped on the handle and barrel with a trigger just like on normal pistols.

"As a medic you really shouldn´t take such interest in firing phazers Aelita," you sternly inform her, brushing the question away in a authoritarian manner.

"I-I´m sorry," Aelita says and puts the phazer away. You have a change of heart through - and decide to answer the question.

"To answer your question, yes Aelita, I have had to pull my phazer many times."

" Extraterrestrial?" She asks, clearly curious.

"Yes..." you say with a nod, "and Americans."

You suddenly hear an alarm ringing, it signifies that the airlocks have been opened.

"Their back!" states Aelita and runs off to great them. You calmly follow her - arriving to find all four of them in shock. They just stand still looking at each other with worried faces. Sergey is holding a flag in his hand, but it isn´t the Red Banner, it´s the American flag.

...

"We found it mounted on the top of that rock where we were going to place our flag," Sergey informs you and Aelita. "I removed it - and placed the Red Banner in it´s place."

The five of you stand in the meeting room - none sit down. The American flag is laid out across the table. There is no mistaken it. Red stripes and white stars on a blue background. It is the symbol of the capitalist America. In your ten years you´ve never encountered a situation like this before. You stand there staring at it for a long while.

"This is... A bad situation," Kerim states the obvious.

"No, really - you think so?" Yamuna sarcastically retorts.

Whoever is the first human to arrive on a planet and put ones flag there is its rightful owner. Planets are marked in a database if they belong to either the USSR or the Americans. The database is shared without secrets, and is updated as soon as the claim is made. The entire system is designed to prevent events that can lead into international conflicts such as this. This is a crisis, a situation you´ve never encountered or even heard of before.

"Aelita," Sergey says.

"Y-Yes," the black-haired youth replies.

"Go to the cockpit. Get on the communicator and report to base what´s happened here. Ask what our orders are," Sergey commands.

"Yes professor!" Aelita says and salutes the projects leader. She then runs off - towards the cockpit.

You sigh heavily. "So, can anyone tell me what might have gone wrong here? Anybody?" When nobody replies to your question you say, "well, could you at least tell me why you removed the flag and returned it here?"

Sergey takes a deep breath. "This planet, planet Malinovyĭ-T361, was not listed as an American planet in the database. Since it is not listed in the database, it is not an American planet. Thus, I proclaim this planet a colony of the Soviet union."

"Well what if the Americans are still here? We don´t know how many they are - or why they´re here in the first place. The capitalist could even have built a military base on this planet - you don´t think they´d take offence that we pull their flag down?" you question Sergey.

Sergey groans lightly, as if annoyed at having to think about it. "Perhaps," he simply states, "let´s just wait for Aelita to give us the response from base.

You can hear the young cosmonauts running towards you before you can see her.

"Commander! T-The communicator - it is broken!"

"What!?" Sergey shouts in surprise with an undertone of anger.

"There is just a buzzing sound coming from the communicator when I try to call base-command!"

"Sounds like atmospheric interference," you quickly say to diffuse any sudden emotions of panic among the crew. "I´ve experienced it a few times when landing on unvisited planets. Just never on one with such a calm weather as this."

"So what do we do!" Yamuna says - looking for answers. "Can´t we just fly back into space and contact them from there."

"We only have enough fuel for a straight journey back home," you quickly counter, "If we decide to fly off into space - then we wouldn´t have enough fuel to re-land and return home after that. Base-command might want us to continue the mission or investigate the situation, which we wouldn´t be able to do once in out space, we would be forced to perform the space-leap home."

You feel the need to chose an option on this issue.

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and scout the area to find the American base"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and return to the rock to look for clues about the American´s whereabouts"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should stay here on Malinovyĭ and continue the mission as planned"]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: "We should take off into space and report this to base-command]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]

User:Heyoeveryone

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 20:06:39 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

Start Story: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 19:10:46 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: I actually wrote space biologist!?...

== Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet ==

You´ve only crashed two times in your career, and this red planet didn´t make it a third. The descent went smoothly and you quickly found a plain with an even landscape to land on, that to, was performed with minimal difficulty.

As regulations dictates when landing on an unvisited and unclaimed planet the first procedure is to actually walk on the planet's surface. You unstrap yourself from your familiar pilot chair and leave the cockpit to put your spacesuit on.

.....

The spacesuits are located in the ships airlock. You quickly head there, but find the rest of the crew half-dressed as you arrive. They are all new faces to you, so you give them a quick greeting and observe them while getting dressed yourself.

First there is the projects leader, professor Sergey. He´s just slightly older than you, probably in his early forties. The man is Moscow born and a member of the party all his life. He is the one holding the red banner in his chest, the flag of the USSR rolled up on a pole. He stares out a window as he dresses, the same focused look he gave in the cockpit.

The there is Yamuna, a biologist from Armenia. She must be about thirty you guess. What´s also noticeable about the woman is her well-kept, long and straight, bronze-colored hair. "Smooth landing pilot," she compliments.

"Thank you," you reply and then look at the two youths in the group.

"Clumsy these spacesuits," a blond man of Ukrainian origins says. He appears about twenty, and acts like it´s the first time he´s put on one of these spacesuits.

"You should appreciate them Kerim," you tell the youth. "When I was at your age we were still using the same basic spacesuit design that Yuri Gagarin wore. Could barely walk in them."

The youth flashes you a grin. He is a engineer, and if needed, a spare pilot.

The last person on the ship is Aelita, another Russian like you and Sergey. She looks even younger than Kerim, almost like a teenager. The girl seems a bit off, as if hazy, as she puts on the red space suit. She has short, jet-black hair, and is the ships medic.

Sergey puts his hand on the leaver that opens the airlock. "Well are you all ready?" he asks with a smile.

"Aye," you and you shipmates all confirm.

Sergey pulls the leaver and the gates fly open. All five of you walk out onto the planet Malinovyĭ. The first five people to ever thread on its red surface. You take your time soaking in the feeling and atmosphere, savoring that unique sensation. Kerim and Yamuna has the wonder of small children on their faces. Sergey, however, spots the prideful glare of a conquering general as his expression. All three of them looks so emotional - but not you, this isn´t the first time you´ve walked one an uncharted planet. Instead you allow yourself a small smile, and stare happily into the distance at what appears to be an easy, unproblematic mission.

Almost a minute goes by.

"So..." you say. "Are you going to set up that flag Sergey?"

The professor turns around to look at you, then at Kerim, Yamuna and Aelita. He doesn't say anything, but appears to be thinking.

Deciding that he´s taking too long you add, "you need to set up the flag Sergey before I can report to base that this planet is under the possession of the USSR."

"I know - but this is not the right place to put it." Sergey concludes. "It´s a featureless plain. Look over there," Sergey says and points at a large, sandstone rock formation nearby. "That place is much more... majestic. The red banner deserves to stand on a place people can admire," he says with a kingly voice.

"Okay," you simply reply, "just seems a bit... unnecessary that all," you end with a bit of hesitation in your voice.

"Oh come on now Mikhail, you´re not worried the Americans are going to land right next to us and claim this planet are you?" Kerim says with a humorous tone.

Yamuna chuckles, "Now, now Kerim, Mikhail has been on hundreds of planets..."

"Eighty-nine," you correct her.

"He has just been jaded by all that space-exploring that he doesn't see the wonder in claiming planets anymore. I agree with professor Sergey, let´s put the flag somewhere it will look glorious," Yamuna ends.

Sergey watches the bantering as if waiting for it to stop. "Well then, let´s go," he says as it finaly ends.

You haven´t been able to take your first step before Aelita unexpectedly collapses to her knees.

"Aelia!?" What happend?" Kerim is fist at her side, kneeling down and holding her so that she doesn't fall to her back.

You are at her side just after him, watching her face through the transparent visor. "It´s just drowsiness from the space-leap," you conclude. "It´s harmless, she just hasn´t recovered yet." You shift from speaking generally to confronting Aelita alone, "you should have told us you where still feeling the effects Aelita."

The young woman pants heavily, "yes, I know. It was stupid off me," and muscles herself to her feet, but still stands on unstable feet. "You go on without me. Place the flag on that rock. I´ll wait here in the spaceship."

"You´ll need help Aelita," you insist.

"No, no I´m perfectly fine," she retorts, but experience tells you to keep an eye on her.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the other place the flag on the rock|Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the others place the flag on the rock]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]

Start Story: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 11:02:32 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula:

== Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet ==

You´ve only crashed two times in your career, and this red planet didn´t make it a third. The descent went smoothly and you quickly found a plain with an even landscape to land on, that to, was performed with minimal difficulty.

As regulations dictates when landing on an unvisited and unclaimed planet the first procedure is to actually walk on the planet's surface. You unstrap yourself from your familiar pilot chair and leave the cockpit to put your spacesuit on.

.....

The spacesuits are located in the ships airlock. You quickly head there, but find the rest of the crew half-dressed as you arrive. They are all new faces to you, so you give them a quick greeting and observe them while getting dressed yourself.

First there is the projects leader, professor Sergey. He´s just slightly older than you, probably in his early forties. The man is Moscow born and a member of the party all his life. He is the one holding the red banner in his chest, the flag of the USSR rolled up on a pole. He stares out a window as he dresses, the same focused look he gave in the cockpit.

The there is Yamuna, a space biologist from Armenia. She must be about thirty you guess. What´s also noticeable about the woman is her well-kept, long and straight, bronze-colored hair. "Smooth landing pilot," she compliments.

"Thank you," you reply and then look at the two youths in the group.

"Clumsy these spacesuits," a blond man of Ukrainian origins says. He appears about twenty, and acts like it´s the first time he´s put on one of these spacesuits.

"You should appreciate them Kerim," you tell the youth. "When I was at your age we were still using the same basic spacesuit design that Yuri Gagarin wore. Could barely walk in them."

The youth flashes you a grin. He is a engineer, and if needed, a spare pilot.

The last person on the ship is Aelita, another Russian like you and Sergey. She looks even younger than Kerim, almost like a teenager. The girl seems a bit off, as if hazy, as she puts on the red space suit. She has short, jet-black hair, and is the ships medic.

Sergey puts his hand on the leaver that opens the airlock. "Well are you all ready?" he asks with a smile.

"Aye," you and you shipmates all confirm.

Sergey pulls the leaver and the gates fly open. All five of you walk out onto the planet Malinovyĭ. The first five people to ever thread on its red surface. You take your time soaking in the feeling and atmosphere, savoring that unique sensation. Kerim and Yamuna has the wonder of small children on their faces. Sergey, however, spots the prideful glare of a conquering general as his expression. All three of them looks so emotional - but not you, this isn´t the first time you´ve walked one an uncharted planet. Instead you allow yourself a small smile, and stare happily into the distance at what appears to be an easy, unproblematic mission.

Almost a minute goes by.

"So..." you say. "Are you going to set up that flag Sergey?"

The professor turns around to look at you, then at Kerim, Yamuna and Aelita. He doesn't say anything, but appears to be thinking.

Deciding that he´s taking too long you add, "you need to set up the flag Sergey before I can report to base that this planet is under the possession of the USSR."

"I know - but this is not the right place to put it." Sergey concludes. "It´s a featureless plain. Look over there," Sergey says and points at a large, sandstone rock formation nearby. "That place is much more... majestic. The red banner deserves to stand on a place people can admire," he says with a kingly voice.

"Okay," you simply reply, "just seems a bit... unnecessary that all," you end with a bit of hesitation in your voice.

"Oh come on now Mikhail, you´re not worried the Americans are going to land right next to us and claim this planet are you?" Kerim says with a humorous tone.

Yamuna chuckles, "Now, now Kerim, Mikhail has been on hundreds of planets..."

"Eighty-nine," you correct her.

"He has just been jaded by all that space-exploring that he doesn't see the wonder in claiming planets anymore. I agree with professor Sergey, let´s put the flag somewhere it will look glorious," Yamuna ends.

Sergey watches the bantering as if waiting for it to stop. "Well then, let´s go," he says as it finaly ends.

You haven´t been able to take your first step before Aelita unexpectedly collapses to her knees.

"Aelia!?" What happend?" Kerim is fist at her side, kneeling down and holding her so that she doesn't fall to her back.

You are at her side just after him, watching her face through the transparent visor. "It´s just drowsiness from the space-leap," you conclude. "It´s harmless, she just hasn´t recovered yet." You shift from speaking generally to confronting Aelita alone, "you should have told us you where still feeling the effects Aelita."

The young woman pants heavily, "yes, I know. It was stupid off me," and muscles herself to her feet, but still stands on unstable feet. "You go on without me. Place the flag on that rock. I´ll wait here in the spaceship."

"You´ll need help Aelita," you insist.

"No, no I´m perfectly fine," she retorts, but experience tells you to keep an eye on her.

*[[Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock]]

*[[Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the other place the flag on the rock|Malinovyĭ: Help Aelita to recuperate while the others place the flag on the rock]]

[[Category: Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]

Malinovyĭ: Go with the rest of the group and place the flag on the rock

Fletcher Peninsula — Thu, 27 Oct 2011 00:54:07 GMT

Fletcher Peninsula: Created page with '"Yea, it´s probably nothing. Just get back in the spaceship and focus on recuperating," you inform Aelita. "Yes, thank you, good luck," Aelita says staggers back into the spac…'