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Talk:Rampage

Deadfishv — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 05:33:49 GMT

Deadfishv:

I got a question. Would it be possible to shift bodies around? For example say: I have the body of a cat. I approach a woman. Can I shift the cats spirit into the woman, and watch her act like a cat? or say I'm a 12 year old girl kidnapped by a 30 year old, can my powers put his mind into the body of the 12 year old girl, and my mind into his body?--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 03:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Are we allowed to create alternate starting points for characters? I recently wrote a few pages to the 6th Grade Boy storyline starting from [[Thrust into the punkette's tight asshole]] and ending where the boy is choking the punk chick. Since there is already a previous start for possessing the punk chick that doesn't correlate to my new storyline, I would just like to know if it was allowed. --DeadFishV 01:10, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

I would think we are allowed to do that. When I first started looking at Rampage the only entry point for Valerie's Father was after he was already engaged in sex with her in his office. I added a line where the cat took a nap on the car and woke up when he got home. --Yihman1 July 19 2011

Now I my question is how do we do it? Do we just use an alternate possession line (i.e. "Possess..." rather than the already used "Shift spirit into...:) or put (alternate starting point) inside the choice brackets? --DeadFishV 01:28, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

I would prefer alternate phrasing, rather than putting (alternate starting point) as part of the page title. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:31, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

Alright I got a question. Does your knowledge stack? For example if you have possessed a doctor, a car mechanic, and a black belt before moving your body into a 10 year old kid would you keep all your knowledge of human health, car mechanics, and fighting as that 10 year old child?--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 03:17, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

You would probably only retain knowledge from any particular host for a limited time after moving on. Otherwise, you'd have an unlimited amount of knowledge skills to call upon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:29, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

You already have theoretically unlimited power as is. If say our protagonist was surrounded by 10 men with machine guns ready to kill him. Simply shift from gunner to gunner killing them all. Immortal basically. Perhaps it should be the longer amount of time spent in a body the more information is absorbed from it. They say the human brain only uses 10% of its capacity. So in theory you could have 10 other people's knowledge all in one head.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 16:25, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

The 10% capacity thing is an urban legend. We do use 100% of our brains, just not all at any one given moment. But given that a demonic spirit is supernatural, science and real-world restrictions don't necessarily apply to it. I would say that the longer you stay with a host and the more use you make of that host's knowledge, the longer you retain that knowledge after moving on.

As a spirit, and a servant of Hell, this character is indeed immortal. But causing too much chaos, such as mass shootings, would likely draw the attention of angelic spirits with similar powers. Your demonic superiors would probably be annoyed with you if your actions cause Heaven to look into what you and your fellow demons have been up to. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:50, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

:I didn't realize that this spirit was necessarily a demon in that sense. Good to know. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 05:25, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

What day of the week is the starting day? What month is it? What is a general location for the start of the story like for example what state?

The fact that there are parties in the evening in some lines yet school during the day leads me to believe it could only be a Friday, but this info is never given directly. As far as location & what month it is that much is difficult to figure out. It could be useful in the story line. This will effect what people are wearing. This will effect things if a Holiday is drawing near such as Halloween.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 13:39, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Other than shifting from body to body, and animating the inanimate (such as vines or a computer) and Increased strength can we add other demonic powers to the arsenal? Such as mind control?--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:16, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Possession should be the character's main power. The character's ability to animate the inanimate is part of that possession ability and the demonic strength is merely enhancing that which is possessed. So I don't think this demon should exhibit mind control powers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:15, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

: The only other power (or limitation really) I've found so far is that you should not allow the player to possess blessed characters, or to display super-human strength within a church. In other words, the daemon seems to be of the Christian faith. [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 15:53, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

What about demon semen? Once you cum in a person they can be mentally controlled? After all part of you is now in them--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 17:21, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

I think I'd prefer to see the story stick with possession. Unless the character happens to acquire some sort of demonic artifact that grants him additional abilities. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:10, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

== story map / choke points? ==

In "Smutty" there are at least five "levels" allowing you to write up a sequence that still returns to the main storyline. Is there any way in Rampage to accomplish the same (and avoid leaving your storyline with all-red choices)?

In other words, are there certain characters you do "first", others "second" and still others even later. Even a very short listing would help me understand where I can take a particular story "back" to existing choices.

Or would it be fine to re-connect to any random character (potentially creating difficult-to-detect story loops)? Is that even wrong (loops, that is)?

Any input appreciated.

[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 15:51, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

Currently, there is no structure of that nature in Rampage, and it might be difficult to impose one after this many pages have already been written. Most of the branches simply diverge without any potential convergence points. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:10, 17 January 2012 (UTC)

:I guessed as much, thanks. No special rules or restrictions, then. By the way, is there any freely available wiki tool to mind map / tree graph a set of pages such as this? Just interested in getting a rough sense of where the major story branches go (essentially which characters or chain of characters have gotten the most attention)? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 23:49, 17 January 2012 (UTC)

I have a question about the demons powers. Since the demon is from hell, and hell as most people imagine is full of fire. Would the demon have a much higher resistance & tolerance than a typical human to being burned? Like the ability to get hit with a flamer thrower and keep on going, or walk out into a burning building like it is normal?--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 23:38, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

One more question, is there any way to configure a search to show only changes to a single story like in recent changes? I see many posts on recent changes about stories I am not really worried about and sometimes miss a new rampage page.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 23:43, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

The way I figure it, the demon would have a higher tolerance for pain, especially the pain from a fire (since it reminds said demon of the lovely hellfires of home), but the human body inhabited by the demon would still burn.

I can't think of any way to limit a recent changes search to a particular story. Anyone? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:56, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

Well you can do a what links here search form the victims menu and find changes that way.

The only way I can think of to see only edits to "Rampage" is to go through every page, including chokepoints, and click the "watch" button. But, knowing from personal experience when I joined this CYOA site, it took probably a day and a half if I had done it continuously, and there were a whole lot less pages then. Then you just check your watchlist everyday, add the new additions, and make your edits. --DeadFishV 05:33, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Have Melissa eat you out

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 10:03:22 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with '"My turn to make you feel good!" Melissa says to you. She positions herself in between your legs and places her mouth on your pussy. She gives a gentle suck on your lips, then sp…'

"My turn to make you feel good!" Melissa says to you. She positions herself in between your legs and places her mouth on your pussy. She gives a gentle suck on your lips, then spreads them with her thumbs to expose your clit. She teasingly touches your clit with her tongue then pulls away. You groan in disappointment and she gives you a little smile. She brings her tongue back to your clit, this time she's intent on making you cum. You can feel your clit pulsating with pleasure as she licks it. Waves of pure enthrallment flow throughout your body. You can feel your orgasm building up, you try holding it back for as long as you can. Finally, you give in. You release a loud moan of ecstasy, as well as a quarter liter of pussy juice onto Melissa's face.

"Holy shit! That felt good!" you shout. Melissa nods in agreement. She collapses next to you, and you wrap your arms around her.

What now?

Do you:
*[[Wait for Melissa to fall asleep and sneak off]]
*[[Fall asleep holding Melissa]]
*[[Shift your spirit into Melissa]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Sit next to the Hot Midget Chick

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 09:33:41 GMT

Deadfishv:

You make your way over to sit with the midget chick, she looks up at you with an expression of discontent. She's obviously judging you by your looks. You sit down next to her as she nervously scoots over.

"You know... I get those kinds of looks everyday." You whisper to her. You place your hand on her little thigh and rub up and down it. "Normally, I'll punch them in the face... But you, your too cute." Your hand slowly makes its way to her crotch. she lets out a quiet moan. She can hardly contain herself as you continue to rub her pussy through her pants.

"Please stop... uhn... I'll take you to my... huh uhhh... house when I get off." You remove your hand and wait patiently for her stop. It seemed like it was taking forever, until finally, she stood up in the seat to reach the cord, and the bus rolled to a stop. The two of you walk to the front and step off the bus. She then leads you to her house, invites you in, and promptly leads you to her bedroom.

"What's your name?" you ask.

"Melissa... What's yours?"

"Ari. So, you ever been fucked by a chick before?"

"No. But you got me so hot and horny on the bus, how could I say no now?" You pull her in for a kiss and the two of you fall onto the bed, all the while, unbreaking your lip lock. She rolls over on top of you, you can fell how light she is. She takes off her little shirt, then stands up over you and takes off her pants. You unbutton your pants and slide them down. You then place your hands on her hips and guide her so she is standing over your face. You sit up a little and place your lips on her slit. You stick out your tongue and probe her twat. Melissa places her warm, tiny hands on your head, pulling you into her. She cries out in ecstasy, as you massage her cunt with your tongue. You hum a little to enhance her experience, almost as if you were a vibrator. You can tell that it's working, because now Melissa's legs are spasming and her pussy just got a little juicier.

Do you:
*[[Eat Melissa out until she cums again]]
*[[Finger Melissa's pussy]]
*[[Have Melissa eat you out]]
*[[Possess Melissa]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Sit next to the Hot Midget Chick

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 09:33:05 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You make your way over to sit with the midget chick, she looks up at you with an expression of discontent. She's obviously judging you by your looks. You sit down next to her as …'

You make your way over to sit with the midget chick, she looks up at you with an expression of discontent. She's obviously judging you by your looks. You sit down next to her as she nervously scoots over.

"You know... I get those kinds of looks everyday." You whisper to her. You place your hand on her little thigh and rub up and down it. "Normally, I'll punch them in the face... But you, your too cute." Your hand slowly makes its way to her crotch. she lets out a quiet moan. She can hardly contain herself as you continue to rub her pussy through her pants.

"Please stop... uhn... I'll take you to my... huh uhhh... house when I get off." You remove your hand and wait patiently for her stop. It seemed like it was taking forever, until finally, she stood up in the seat to reach the cord, and the bus rolled to a stop. The two of you walk to the front and step off the bus. She then leads you to her house, invites you in, and promptly leads you to her bedroom.

"What's your name?" you ask.

"Melissa... What's yours?"

"Ari. So, you ever been fucked by a chick before?"

"No. But you got me so hot and horny on the bus, how could I say no now?" You pull her in for a kiss and the two of you fall onto the bed, all the while, unbreaking your lip lock. She rolls over on top of you, you can fell how light she is. She takes off her little shirt, then stands up over you and takes off her pants. You unbutton your pants and slide them down. You then place your hands on her hips and guide her so she is standing over your face. You sit up a little and place your lips on her slit. You stick out your tongue and probe her twat. Melissa places her warm, tiny hands on your head, pulling you into her. She cries out in ecstasy, as you massage her cunt with your tongue. You hum a little to enhance her experience, almost as if you were a vibrator. You can tell that it's working, because now Melissa's legs are spasming and her pussy just got a little juicier.

Do you:
*[[Eat Melissa out until she cums again]]
*[[Finger Melissa's pussy]]
*[[Have Melissa eat you out]]
*[[Possess Melissa]]

{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Ask Dougherty if you can go now

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 08:24:41 GMT

Deadfishv:

"So... can I go now?"

"Yeah, I guess you can. And don't worry about this paperwork. I'll take care of that little snot-nosed prick for ya." Sweet deal. Honestly, you didn't care whether the boy got charged or not. But hey, for the sake of chaos, it actually needed to be done.

You make your way out of the mall and head to the nearest bus stop. You only wait about four minutes before the bus gets there. You casually step on and pay the fare, then decide on a place to sit. There are a few seats open. One next to a teenaged black kid in glasses and holding a deck of Magic: The Gathering cards. Another next to a hot dwarf chick. The last open seat is next to a hot Hindu girl. Who do you sit next to?

Do you:
*[[Sit next to the Token Black Kid]]
*[[Sit next to the Hot Midget Chick]]
*[[Sit nest to the Hot As Curry Chick]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Ask Dougherty if you can go now

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 07:51:27 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with '"So... can I go now?" "Yeah, I guess you can. And don't worry about this paperwork. I'll take care of that little snot-nosed prick for ya." Sweet deal. Honestly didn't care whet…'

"So... can I go now?"

"Yeah, I guess you can. And don't worry about this paperwork. I'll take care of that little snot-nosed prick for ya." Sweet deal. Honestly didn't care whether the boy got charged or not. But hey, for the sake of chaos, it actually needed to be done.

You make your way out of the mall and head to the nearest bus stop. You only wait about four minutes before the bus gets there. You casually step on and pay the fare, then decide on a place to sit. There are a few seats open. One next to a teenaged black kid in glasses and holding a deck of Magic: The Gathering cards. Another next to a hot dwarf chick. The last open seat is next to a hot Hindu girl. Who do you sit next to?

Do you:
*[[Sit next to the Token Black Kid]]
*[[Sit next to the Hot Midget Chick]]
*[[Sit nest to the Hot As Curry Chick]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

"I want to swallow your hot, cop cum."

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 07:01:20 GMT

Deadfishv:

"No problem you little lying bitch!" Officer Dougherty continues to thrust his long cock deep into your throat. You deepthroat the cop, waiting for him to shoot his wad in your mouth. A moment later, Dougherty grunts a little, signaling you that he's about to cum. He grabs hold of the shaft of his dick and starts jerking it as you open your mouth wide to catch every drop of his cock butter. A few jets of cum hit the back of your throat and you softly close your lips around the tip of his prick while it drips out its last drops. You swallow all of it, enjoying the taste.

Now what?

Do you:
*[[Shift into Officer Dougherty]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck your pussy]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck you asshole]]
*[[Ask Dougherty if you can go now]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

"I want to swallow your hot, cop cum."

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 06:59:47 GMT

Deadfishv:

"No problem you little lying bitch!" Officer Dougherty continues to thrust his long cock deep into your throat. You deepthroat the cop, waiting for him to shoot his wad in your mouth. A moment later, Dougherty grunts a little, signaling you that he's about to cum. He grabs hold of the shaft of his dick and starts jerking it as you open your mouth wide to catch every drop of his cock butter. A few jets of cum hit the back of your throat and you softly close your lips around the tip of his prick while it drips out its last drops. You swallow all of it, enjoying the taste.

Now what?

Do you:
*[[Shift into Officer Dougherty]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck your pussy]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck you asshole]]
*[[Ask if you can go now]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

"I want to swallow your hot, cop cum."

Deadfishv — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 06:59:29 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with '"No problem you little lying bitch!" Officer Dougherty continues to thrust his long cock deep into your throat. You deepthroat the cop, waiting for him to shoot his wad in your m…'

"No problem you little lying bitch!" Officer Dougherty continues to thrust his long cock deep into your throat. You deepthroat the cop, waiting for him to shoot his wad in your mouth. A moment later, Dougherty grunts a little, signaling you that he's about to cum. He grabs hold of the shaft of his dick and starts jerking it as you open your mouth wide to catch every drop of his cock butter. A few jets of cum hit the back of your throat and you softly close your lips around the tip of his prick while it drips out its last drops. You swallow all of it, enjoying the taste.

Now what?

Do you:
*[[Shift into Officer Dougherty]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck your pussy]]
*[[Let Dougherty fuck you asshole]]
*[[Ask if you can go now]]

{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Leonard Hartman

Deadfishv — Sun, 28 Aug 2011 22:55:27 GMT

Deadfishv:

Leonard Hartman is your name. You have been a dentist for most of your adult life. Your wife of the past thirty years passed away from a brain tumor about six months ago. She left you with a beautiful daughter Amber, and a set of blue balls.

*[[Shift your spirit into Leonard, the dentist]]

{{back}}
[[Category: Rampage Victims]]

Leonard Hartman

Deadfishv — Sun, 28 Aug 2011 22:55:02 GMT

Deadfishv:

Becca Darling

Deadfishv — Fri, 19 Aug 2011 19:37:44 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are a single 25-year-old woman with a good figure. You work as a rent-a-cop in a local mall. The pay isn't great but the work is always interesting...

However, you get really pissed off when the other officers call you "Becky" due to childhood teasing. Your parent's were huge "Star Trek" fans to the point that they (against your will) dressed you in the uniforms from the show for school, thus making you an object of ridicule for all the other school children. They called you "Trekkie Becky".

Entry point:
*[[Shift your spirit into the mall cop]]

{{back}}

[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Becca Darling

Deadfishv — Fri, 19 Aug 2011 19:28:23 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are a single 25-year-old woman with a good figure. You work as a rent-a-cop in a local mall. The pay isn't great but the work is always interesting... However, you get really pissed off when the other officers call you "Becky",

Entry point:
*[[Shift your spirit into the mall cop]]

{{back}}

[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Talk:Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu

Deadfishv — Fri, 19 Aug 2011 19:11:56 GMT

Deadfishv:

I would just like to voice my disapproval at the notion of a BJJ blackbelt being defeated by a collegiate wrestler without submission training.

That is all.
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[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

PS: And yes I know this is a late reply.

You do realize we are talking about 325 lbs man vs 125 lbs woman right? a 325 pound man with a good amount of grappling experience such a superb college wrestler should be able to handle a 125 pound woman in a grappling match even if said woman is a black belt in BJJ.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 18:38, 19 August 2011 (UTC)

Also where did it say Tyrone has no submission training? --[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 18:42, 19 August 2011 (UTC)

Have we all forgotten that the Disembodied Spirit increases the victim's strength due to the fact that it is a supernatural being? Besides weight or being outnumbered isn't always a factor when it comes to martial arts. Sure she may be 125 lbs but with enough experience and training she could take on someone as big as Andre the Giant. --[[User:deadfishv|deadfishv]]

Talk:Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu

Deadfishv — Fri, 19 Aug 2011 19:08:46 GMT

Deadfishv:

Make the sister lick her honey off your pole

Deadfishv — Tue, 16 Aug 2011 05:57:33 GMT

Deadfishv:

Your sister seems relieved that you've finally pulled out until she realizes what you have in store next. She starts to say no, but before she can get the words out your dick is in her mouth. You grab the back of her head and force her to take it all in.

Do you:

*[[cum down your sister's throat]]
*[[spill your load on her face]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Scatter the kiddie photos around the room and sit in a corner

Deadfishv — Mon, 15 Aug 2011 01:32:59 GMT

Deadfishv:

You pull your pants up to your hips so that you don't trip. You then take a few of the photos and "hide" them around the room. Finally, you walk over to an empty corner, pull your pants down to your ankles, and curl up in the corner. You also force a few tears out just before the office door get busted in. Principal Mann is the first one in, followed by a few other teachers.

"My God! Are you alright, son?" asks Mann. You timidly shake your head, acting as if you had actually been violated. "Someone call the police! Can you tell us what happened?"

"He... He brought me in here after Paul tried to beat me up. Then I sat down in the chair and... (sniff) he tried to calm me down at first, then he removed my pants and put a black thing in my..." You really let the waterworks go at this point.

"Oh Lord. Then what happened?"

"He put his face between my legs and I... I kicked him... then pushed him. I didn't know he was so close to the window, I swear! It was an accident! It was an accident!" By this time you are sobbing so hard that your words are incoherent.

"Don't you worry, son. You're not in trouble." Just then two police officers, one male and the other female, arrive and start asking questions. You continue crying to try and avoid having to tell them your story over again. Instead the principal tells the male officer everything, while the female officer collects the child porn with a disgusted look on her face. Then the male officer approaches you.

"Son... I'm Officer Shotwell from the Special Victims Unit and I have to ask you if the "black thing" is still inside you?" Remaining silent, you nod your head. "Okay. We need you to cooperate with us now because we need to have it removed and collect it as evidence. Is that okay with you?"

"Yes sir. Is it gonna hurt?" you ask innocently. After your remark, the female officer seems to be forcing back some tears. You know that now you've got them wrapped around your finger. Now what?

Do you:
*[[Ask Officer Shotwell to remove the "black thing"]]
*[[Ask the female officer to remove the "black thing"]]
*[[Ask Principal Mann to remove the "black thing"]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Scatter the kiddie photos around the room and sit in a corner

Deadfishv — Mon, 15 Aug 2011 01:27:24 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You pull your pants up to your hips so that you don't trip. You then take a few of the photos and "hide" them around the room. Finally, you walk over to an empty corner, pull you…'

You pull your pants up to your hips so that you don't trip. You then take a few of the photos and "hide" them around the room. Finally, you walk over to an empty corner, pull your pants down to your ankles, and curl up in the corner. You also force a few tears out just before the office door get busted in. Principal Mann is the first one in, followed by a few other teachers.

"My God! Are you alright, son?" asks Mann. You timidly shake your head, acting as if you had actually been violated. "Someone call the police! Can you tell us what happened?"

"He... He brought me in here after Paul tried to beat me up. Then I sat down in the chair and... (sniff) he tried to calm me down at first, then he removed my pants and put a black thing in my..." You really let the waterworks go at this point.

"Oh Lord. Then what happened?"

"He put his face between my legs and I... I kicked him... then pushed him. I didn't know he was so close to the window, I swear! It was an accident! It was an accident!" By this time you are sobbing so hard that your words are incoherent.

"Don't you worry, son. You're not in trouble." Just then two police officers, one male and the other female, arrive and start asking questions. You continue crying to try and avoid having to tell them your story over again. Instead the principal tells them everything. Then the male officer approaches you.

"Son... I'm Officer Shotwell and I have to ask you if the "black thing" is still inside you?" Remaining silent, you nod your head. "Okay. We need you to cooperate with us now because we need to have it removed and collect it as evidence. Is that okay with you?"

"Yes sir. Is it gonna hurt?" you ask innocently. After your remark, the female officer seems to be forcing back some tears. You know that now you've got them wrapped around your finger. Now what?

Do you:
*[[Ask Officer Shotwell to remove the "black thing"]]
*[[Ask the female officer to remove the "black thing"]]
*[[Ask Principal Mann to remove the "black thing"]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Brand the boy's ass

Deadfishv — Sat, 13 Aug 2011 18:47:37 GMT

Deadfishv:

You take Brandon and tie him to the rack with his backside facing you. He continues begging that you release him as you walk over to the drawer and retrieve the ballgag. You walk back over to him and place the ballgag in his mouth, muffling his pleading. Now that his is sufficiently stifled, it's time to have some fun.

You walk back over to the drawer and get out your custom branding iron and blowtorch. You take the striker off of the torch, turn the dial a quarter turn, and strike the striker to light the torch. You adjust the flame to your liking and heat up the iron. The boy tries to see what your doing to no avail, mumbling all the while. Once the branding iron is glowing red hot, you walk back over to Brandon.

"I'm gonna make you my little bitch." you whisper in his ear. You then bring the iron to his face to him your intentions. His eyes widen in fear as the heat radiates onto his face. You take a few steps back and take a final look at his unscarred and unbranded ass. Then you thrust the hot poker onto his right cheek, muffled screaming trying to escape from Brandon's face. His body writhes in pain as you continue to hold the poker to his ass. You remove the iron from Brandon's asscheek. You were so focused on the branding that you didn't even notice that he had passed out from the pain.

All this torturing has gotten you horny.

Do you:

*[[Lay on the bed and touch yourself until Brandon wakes up]]
*[[Get a dildo out of your dildo drawer]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Belinda Barnes|Wet, Naked Woman with Auburn Hair]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Brand the boy's ass

Deadfishv — Sat, 13 Aug 2011 18:43:59 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You take Brandon and tie him to the rack with his backside facing you. He continues begging that you release him as you walk over to the drawer and retrieve the ballgag. You walk…'

You take Brandon and tie him to the rack with his backside facing you. He continues begging that you release him as you walk over to the drawer and retrieve the ballgag. You walk back over to him and place the ballgag in his mouth, muffling his pleading. Now that his is sufficiently stifled, it's time to have some fun.

You walk back over to the drawer and get out your custom branding iron and blowtorch. You take the striker off of the torch, turn the dial a quarter turn, and strike the striker to light the torch. You adjust the flame to your liking and heat up the iron. The boy tries to see what your doing to no avail, mumbling all the while. Once the branding iron is glowing red hot, you walk back over to Brandon.

"I'm gonna make you my little bitch." you whisper in his ear. You then bring the iron to his face to him your intentions. His eyes widen in fear as the heat radiates onto his face. You take a few steps back and take a final look at his unscarred and unbranded ass. Then you thrust the hot poker onto his right cheek, muffled screaming trying to escape from Brandon's face. His body writhes in pain as you continue to hold the poker to his ass. You remove the iron from Brandon's asscheek. You were so focused on the branding that you didn't even notice that he had passed out from the pain.

All this torturing has gotten you horny.

Do you:

*[[Lay on the bed and touch yourself until Brandon wakes up]]
*[[Get a dildo out of you dildo drawer]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Belinda Barnes|Wet, Naked Woman with Auburn Hair]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Check the bureau's third drawer

Deadfishv — Fri, 12 Aug 2011 20:25:56 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You close the drawer with the dildos and open the third drawer. Inside you find a ballgag, a blowtorch, and a branding iron custom designed to burn "BB'S BITCH" on it's victims. …'

You close the drawer with the dildos and open the third drawer. Inside you find a ballgag, a blowtorch, and a branding iron custom designed to burn "BB'S BITCH" on it's victims.

Do you:

*[[Brand the boy's back]]
*[[Brand the boy's ass]]
*[[Brand the boy's chest]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Belinda Barnes|Wet, Naked Woman with Auburn Hair]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Offer to work at that truck stop for the cash

Deadfishv — Fri, 12 Aug 2011 03:18:21 GMT

Deadfishv:

"How about I just go work at the truck stop until I earn the money?"

"Are you sure you want to do that? It's not the safest thing to do in the world."

"I'm a big girl. Just let me give a few BJs and I'll have your money. What's the big deal?"

The tow truck driver agrees to drive you out to the truck stop. "If you're gonna get any johns, you'll have to make your self look sluttier than that. Take my utility knife and cut the legs off your jeans." You pull off your pants and do what he says. The driver stops just short of the truck stop and lets you out. "Be careful and watch out for the other girls and their pimp. They might not take kindly to you stepping on their turf."

You walk up to the truck stop. Your cutoff jeans barely cover your asscheeks and crotch, making your legs freeze in the cool night air. Luckily, you don't see any other girls as you look for potential clients.

Do you approach:
*[[the red truck with the sleeper compartment]]
*[[the blue truck with the small cab]]
*[[the white delivery van with the driver staring at you]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Kaya Markham|Kaya]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Continue your assault on the door. It will eventually give.

Deadfishv — Fri, 12 Aug 2011 02:08:50 GMT

Deadfishv:

You keep kicking the door near its lock and finally, after five or six more kicks it finally breaks and swings wide open.

You rush into the room, only to find it empty with the window wide open.

Looking out the window you can see that Valerie has actually jumped down to the front lawn and is attempting to get out to the sidewalk.

It seems however that the jump twisted her ankle, because she can barely walk.

Do you:

*[[Jump after her!]]
*[[Run out the back door.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category:Rampage]]

Continue your assault on the door. It will eventually give.

Deadfishv — Fri, 12 Aug 2011 02:08:00 GMT

Deadfishv:

Ask the gym teacher to kiss you where the nasty boy hurt you

Deadfishv — Thu, 11 Aug 2011 22:51:55 GMT

Deadfishv:

"Katy!" she exclaims, shocked. "I'm sorry but I can't do that."

Do you:
*[[Break down and cry in front of the gym teacher]]
*[[Say okay and get dressed]]
*[[French kiss the gym teacher]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Katy Haas|6th Grade Girl (Katy)]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Stop and offer the homeless man a ride

Deadfishv — Thu, 11 Aug 2011 21:56:10 GMT

Deadfishv:

"Going my way?" you say as you wink opening up your passenger door for the homeless man. He smiles at you showing his rotten teeth saying "My name is Chuck.", and gets in the car closing the door behind him. He smells like moldy cabbage, and is staring you in the eyes. How do you respond?
*[[You say "Hello Chuck, I have a daughter I would like you to fuck."]]
*[[You say "Hello Chuck, Does your dick need a good suck?"]]
*[[You say "My husband has a limp dick Chuck, would you like to fuck?"]]
*[[Shift your spirit into Chuck the homeless man]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=Young-Looking, Pretty Mother}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Remove your panties?

Deadfishv — Thu, 11 Aug 2011 20:51:12 GMT

Deadfishv:

You stand there for a moment, when you realize you have an audience. Time to give them a show!

You head up to the front of the classroom with everyone watching and you blow a kiss to the kids. You then proceed to lift up your skirt so that everyone can see your red hot, lacy panties. You look at the faces of the boys in the room and notice many are turning red. Although you can't see their crotches, you can tell that they are getting aroused.

Hornier than ever, you slip two fingers into the sides of your panties and you yank them down, exposing your hot and wet vagina. Many girls turn away, but you can tell you have the boys attention.

Mr. Greene runs in front of you to shield your slit from the children's eyes. "What do you think you're doing?!" he yells.

Do you:
*[[Ignore Mr. Greene]]
*[[Start making out with Mr. Greene]]
*[[Take even more clothes off]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=Young-Looking, Pretty Mother}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Cook Ruby a delicious Indian curry

Deadfishv — Mon, 25 Jul 2011 21:51:47 GMT

Deadfishv:

You decide on cooking a mildly spicy Chicken Vindaloo. Ruby has always loved the delicious tastes of Indian foods, now was your time to show off. You also decide to make some Pakoras as an appetizer. You're about halfway done when Ruby come ringing your doorbell. You go to answer it, and there she is, a tall, hot redhead with above average size tits. She stands there in her skimpy pink dress waiting for you to invite her in. You do so and lead her to the kitchen.

"So, how was your day?" you ask her.

"I thought it was gonna be boring, and then you called. So, what's the occasion?"

"Oh... uh... nothing really. Just wanted to hang out." you nervously reply.

"Hey, is that a curry I smell?" she asks you, sniffing in between. "Oh man, that smells good!"

"Yes it is. I'm making Chicken Vindaloo with some Pakoras on the side." You two chat a little more before you finally serve up the food. As you're eating, Ruby can't stop complimenting you on the food. After dinner, a few drinks, and a movie, you decide that it's time to tell her.

"Um... Ruby. I wasn't completely honest earlier... when you asked if it was a special occasion. The thing is... Th-the thing is is that I've had a crush on you for a while and I wanted to tell you but I just couldn't." Ruby places her hand on yours. "And the reason for that is the second reason I asked you here... I know the words to say, but I just can't make myself say them. I'm a... I'm... I'm a her... I'm just gonna have to show you." You stand up, unbutton your pants, and pull them down with your panties. Ruby faints.

After a few minutes of trying to help her regain consciousness, Ruby wakes up.

"I uh... I... don't know what to say... except... you're beautiful!" A surprising statement coming from the woman who had just fainted at the sight of your double-junk.

"You mean it?!" you ask her, tears welling up in your eyes. "I'm so happy right now. I had been worrying all day about how you would react. I only thought of all the worst possible scenarios, but not once did I think you would say that."

"Not only do I think you're beautiful... but, um... I want to... uh... ya know." At that statement, your exposed cock perks up like a dog who heard the word 'treats'. "What do you want to do first?"

What first?
*[[Have Ruby suck your cock]]
*[[Have Ruby lick your pussy]]
*[[Ask to eat Ruby out]]
[[Category: Bi-sexual Sex stories]]

Stick the vibrator in her ass

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 13:06:02 GMT

Deadfishv:

You leap into the shower with the redhead and grab her leg. In her shock, she doesn't resist your first thrust of the vibrator into her ass. "Who the fuck are you?" she shouts.

You cover her mouth with your hand and shove her chest against the wall. "Don't worry about that. Just focus on the reaming I'm going to give you."

You feel her moaning into your hand as you work the vibrator deeper into her. Soon she is no longer struggling against you and is fucking herself on the sex toy. You let go of her mouth and stroke her slit.

Do you:

*[[Pound the redhead's pussy]]
*[[Make her suck your cock]]
*[[Spank the redhead's ass]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=6th Grade Boy}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

User:Deadfishv

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:34:47 GMT

Deadfishv:

== A Little Bit About Me ==

DeadFishV here. I'm sort of new to this, but I've got the desire to be creative. And a site like this is an excellent creative writing exercise. In time I hope to start my own story on here. In life, I live with and take care of my quadriplegic girlfriend, who also enjoys being creative. We have our own YouTube channel, [http://www.youtube.com/user/DeadFishVlogs DeadFishVlogs], which is more about her and being a quad and less about me, who can't stand to hear himself on camera.
== CLUSTERFUCK ==
My idea for a good CYOA story is one that gives a lot of choices. Most of the ones I've read only give about two or three choices per page. And as I've contributed to other people's stories, I feel like I have to conform to the norm, when instead giving a user many option could translate to a better experience. I understand that too many options can overwhelm some users, but I only intend to have a minimum of 5 and maximum of 7 options.

The Rules I Intend To Have:
*Minimum of 5 options
*Maximum of 7 options
*Must be "Real World Fiction" (fiction that can actually happen)
*Violence and Sex must be reasonable. Not every person is willing to have sex and violence can't be over-the-top.
*Characters cannot God-Mode... can't always steal a cop's gun when you get confronted
*No character should ever completely Dead-End
*No two characters' lives should intersect

If you feel that my story would be an awesome idea, please visit my discussion page --DeadFishV 04:51, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

==Some Of My Work==
At the moment, I have only contributed to [[Rampage]], mostly to one particular storyline starting from "[[Thrust into the punkette's tight asshole]]" and ending with "[[Tell Officer Dougherty that you "lied" and asked the boy to choke you]]". I have done a few other pages on this story but none to the extent of the punk chick, [[Ari Rockmore]].

To versus Too versus Two

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:25:23 GMT

Deadfishv:

*'''To'''= preposition used for expressing motion or direction toward a point.
:I am going to the store.

*'''Too'''= Also, as well.
:Can I go, too?

*'''Two'''= the number 2
:I bought two eggs.

Altogether now
:Would you two like to go, too?"

*back to more [[Grammatical Tips]]
*back to the [[Main Page]]
[[Category:Grammatical Tips]]

To versus Too versus Two

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:24:23 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with '*'''To'''= preposition used for expressing motion or direction toward a point. :I am going to the store. *'''Two'''= the number 2 :I bought two eggs. *'''Too'''= Also, as well.…'

*'''To'''= preposition used for expressing motion or direction toward a point.
:I am going to the store.

*'''Two'''= the number 2
:I bought two eggs.

*'''Too'''= Also, as well.
:Can I go, too?

Altogether now
:Would you two like to go, too?"

*back to more [[Grammatical Tips]]
*back to the [[Main Page]]
[[Category:Grammatical Tips]]

Grammatical Tips

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:15:31 GMT

Deadfishv:

Since none of us are telepathic, we have to communicate by transforming our thoughts into words, and hope that whoever reads (or hears) those words gets the thought that we were thinking when we formed the words. If the thought they get doesn't match ours, then the words have failed. The process of thought-word-thought works best if certain rules are followed. Unfortunately, thought and language are both very complicated. So here are some tips to help you communicate more effectively.

*[[Its versus It's]]
*[[Your versus You're]]
*[[Their versus They're]]
*[[To versus Too versus Two]]
*[[Punctuation with dialogue]]
*[[Began to]]
*[[... (The Ellipsis)]]
[[Category:Grammatical Tips]]

Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:02:15 GMT

Deadfishv:

I understand using proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct a character's way of speaking? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". It's like going through Stephen King's "IT" and changing the Irish cop's accented words from "foin" to "fine". How a character speaks shouldn't be edited. I intended for Officer Dougherty to say "I'm..." because if all characters spoke properly, the story would be pretty bland. --DeadFishV 07:52, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

No, it is not necessary for a character's dialogue to be grammatical, and certainly better if different characters have different speech patterns. But if I correct the grammar outside of the dialogue quotes and it's then uncorrected, I am going to be very upset. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:34, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

The only changes I made after Yihman1, were "I'm" and one of the choices had an incorrect use of "too" (i.e. "asked the boy too choke you") --DeadFishV 11:55, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:55:49 GMT

Deadfishv:

I understand using proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct a character's way of speaking? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". It's like going through Stephen King's "IT" and changing the Irish cop's accented words from "foin" to "fine". How a character speaks shouldn't be edited. I intended for Officer Dougherty to say "I'm..." because if all characters spoke properly, the story would be pretty bland. --DeadFishV 07:52, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

No, it is not necessary for a character's dialogue to be grammatical, and certainly better if different characters have different speech patterns. But if I correct the grammar outside of the dialogue quotes and it's then uncorrected, I am going to be very upset. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:34, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

The only changes I made after Yihman, were "I'm" and one of the choices had an incorrect use of "too" (i.e. "asked the boy too choke you") --DeadFishV 11:55, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

Ari Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:44:13 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are the middle child of a working class family. Your father, [[James Rockmore|James]], is the director of the billboard division at a local ad agency. Being the middle child, you are often overlooked, and as an attempt to vie for attention turn to the Punk culture. Although on the outside you don't seem to care about school, authority, or your family, inside you just want to be heard and loved. You often get into trouble, skip school, and play video games at the arcade.

First mentioned:
*[[Your favorite arcade]]

Entry points:
*[[Move your spirit into the Punkette]]
*[[Possess the strangled punkette]]

{{back}}
[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Ari Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:43:58 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are the middle child of a working class family. Your father, [[James Rockmore|James]] is the director of the billboard division at a local ad agency. Being the middle child, you are often overlooked, and as an attempt to vie for attention turn to the Punk culture. Although on the outside you don't seem to care about school, authority, or your family, inside you just want to be heard and loved. You often get into trouble, skip school, and play video games at the arcade.

First mentioned:
*[[Your favorite arcade]]

Entry points:
*[[Move your spirit into the Punkette]]
*[[Possess the strangled punkette]]

{{back}}
[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Ari Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:43:38 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are the middle child of a working class family. Your father, [[Jame Rockmore|James]] is the director of the billboard division at a local ad agency. Being the middle child, you are often overlooked, and as an attempt to vie for attention turn to the Punk culture. Although on the outside you don't seem to care about school, authority, or your family, inside you just want to be heard and loved. You often get into trouble, skip school, and play video games at the arcade.

First mentioned:
*[[Your favorite arcade]]

Entry points:
*[[Move your spirit into the Punkette]]
*[[Possess the strangled punkette]]

{{back}}
[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Ari Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:42:50 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are the middle child of a working class family. Your father is the director of the billboard division at a local ad agency. Being the middle child, you are often overlooked, and as an attempt to vie for attention turn to the Punk culture. Although on the outside you don't seem to care about school, authority, or your family, inside you just want to be heard and loved. You often get into trouble, skip school, and play video games at the arcade.

First mentioned:
*[[Your favorite arcade]]

Entry points:
*[[Move your spirit into the Punkette]]
*[[Possess the strangled punkette]]

{{back}}
[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

James Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:36:53 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You work at a local ad agency as the director of the billboard division. You have a wife and three kids, the middle child being Ari Rockmore. You always try to do right by yo…'

You work at a local ad agency as the director of the billboard division. You have a wife and three kids, the middle child being [[Ari Rockmore]]. You always try to do right by your family, hoping that your kids will go to college and become successful.

Entry point:
*[[Possess James]]

[[Category: Rampage Victims]]

Possess James

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:31:06 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You switch to James's body, and lie there, waiting for Kimiko to regain control. The awareness hits her in waves, noticing her pants are down, cum seeping down her legs, and fina…'

You switch to James's body, and lie there, waiting for Kimiko to regain control. The awareness hits her in waves, noticing her pants are down, cum seeping down her legs, and finally, your fist is in her ass. It was at that point that she screams. You take your free hand and cover her mouth, the other hand you violently shove further inside her. She winces and lets out a muffled, pain-stricken cry. As tears flow down her face, you bend over and lick them off. You then jerk your fist out of her. She passes out from the pain. You walk over to her printer, take a few sheets of paper, ball them up and shove them in her mouth. You return to her backside and take a good look at her gaping asshole. You remember the pressure that her hole exerted onto your wrist, and now you think about how good that would feel squeezing your cock and balls. The opening is wide enough to easily slip them in and you wait a minute or two for her ass to rebound back to a normal size. The inside of her ass feel exquisite, and those muscles squeezing your junk is divine. You can almost cum without having to do anything.

She's now regaining consciousness. You grab her arms and hold them behind her back. As she struggles to free herself, her loose asshole puckers around your groin, gradually tightening. You then slowly pull backwards and remove your genitals from her ass.

Now what?
*[[Throw her to the floor and stomp her until she passes out]]
*[[Rape Kimiko]]
*[[Take out the paper balls and hear what she has to say]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[James Rockmore]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

To send in the director of the billboard division

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 11:03:03 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with '"Send in James Rockmore." you say, very dominantly. "Yes, ma'am." You hang up the phone and wait for James. You feel quite a bit of heat radiating between your thighs. About a m…'

"Send in James Rockmore." you say, very dominantly.

"Yes, ma'am." You hang up the phone and wait for James. You feel quite a bit of heat radiating between your thighs. About a minute later, there is a faint knock on your door.

"Come in!"

"You wanted to see me." says James, peering in from behind the door.

"Close the door and have a seat." You motion towards the chair in front of your desk, and James sits down. "You know what I like about you James... Your hands. You've got big, strong hands. Let me ask you something James..." You get up, walk around, sit on your desk in front of him. "Have you ever wanted to fist a hot Japanese woman's tight asshole?"

"Um... I'm sorry?"

"You heard me, James. Let me put it to you this way... I want you to fist my asshole."

"I... I can't do that. I'm sorry. I have a wife and three kids, who I love very much."

"If you love them so much then why are you putting your job at risk? You want your little fucking retarded brats to go to college, don't you? Let me make myself crystal clear... If you don't rip off my pants right now and shove your fist in my ass, you won't have a job tomorrow. You got that, James?"

"Yes, Ms. Yoshimuro." he says with a dejected look on his face. You, on the other hand, just creamed your pants. You find it sexually stimulating to crush a man's spirit like you just did.

James stands up, and you turn around and bend over the desk. He then proceeds to pull down your pants and panties. He lays his hands on the cheeks of your ass and squeezes them just a little. He brings his right hand to his mouth and spits on the middle finger, then rubs his spit laden finger on your asshole. A wave of pleasure flows through your body as James continues to probe your ass. He then sticks his finger inside you and thrusts it in and out of your tight Asian ass.

"Can you speed this process up? I want your fist in my ass now." You are very demanding and James reluctantly obliges.He inserts three more fingers inside you and pushes in as deep as he can. Keeping his thumb in close proximity to his palm, he then proceeds to curl his fingers downward to make a fist inside of your warm rectum. He pumps his fist back and forth, while the muscles of your anus tighten around his wrist. You feel an incredible surge of blissful vibe coursing through your body. You pussy is as moist as ever right at this moment.

"Alright James. I want you to take your cock out and shove it in my cunt." He attempts to remove his fist when you snap at him. "I didn't say to stop fisting my ass. Take out your little prick and fuck my pussy."

"Yes, Ms. Yoshimuro." he says, trying to unbutton his pants with one hand. He finally manages to do so, and in one, singular motion, rams his dick into your waiting pussy. He goes at it steadily for a while, doing quite well considering he has his hand up your rectum. He pumps harder and faster, gradually reaching his climax, you reaching yours simultaneously. Your moaning grows louder as he continues to manhandle you.

"Oh, Shit! I'm cumming! Oooooooh, FUCK!" Your legs shake and you can barely make a sound as your orgasm takes over your body.

"I'm cumming, too. I need to pull out!"

"Don't you fucking dare!" you snap. "You're gonna cum inside me right..." Before you finish your sentence, you feel the hot blast of semen splash the inside of your twat. James gives a few more thrusts before finally collapsing onto your back, to tired to ever remove his fist from inside you. You plot your next move.

Do you:
*[[Possess James]]
*[[Suck James's cock]]
*[[Have James lick his cum out of your pussy]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Kimiko Yoshimuro]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Head to your office

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 10:05:48 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'You decide to head up to your office, and have yourself a little fun. You make your way up to the sixth floor, and head down the hall, receiving constant acknowledgment from your…'

You decide to head up to your office, and have yourself a little fun. You make your way up to the sixth floor, and head down the hall, receiving constant acknowledgment from your inferiors. Finally, you reach your office door, unlock it, and walk in, closing the door behind you. You walk over to your desk and sit down. Oh, the power that you have in this building. Thinking about it makes you wet and horny. It's time you had some real fun. You call up your assistant and tell him...

What do you tell him?
*[[To come into your office]]
*[[To send in the director of the billboard division]]
*[[To send in the director of the magazine division]]
*[[To send in the director of the television division]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Kimiko Yoshimuro]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Ari Rockmore

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 09:10:06 GMT

Deadfishv:

You are a punk chick. You don't give a damn about school. You'd rather play arcade games.

First mentioned:
*[[Your favorite arcade]]

Entry points:
*[[Move your spirit into the Punkette]]
*[[Possess the strangled punkette]]

{{back}}
[[Category:Rampage Victims]]

Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 08:16:15 GMT

Deadfishv:

Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 08:12:37 GMT

Deadfishv:

I understand using proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct someone's vernacular? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". It's like going through Stephen King's "IT" and changing the Irish cop's accented words from "foin" to "fine". How a character speaks shouldn't be edited. I intended for Officer Dougherty to say "I'm..." because if all characters spoke properly, the story would be pretty bland. --DeadFishV 07:52, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

Tell Officer Dougherty that you "lied" and asked the boy to choke you

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 08:05:05 GMT

Deadfishv:

"So, Ari..." he says, as he gets out a pen and the necessary form. "Tell me what happened."

"Actually, Officer Dougherty, I lied. I wanted him to choke me." You stand up and lean over his desk, grab the collar of his shirt and pull him towards you. "You know what? I've always loathed authority... But maybe you can change that." You then lock lips with him, thrusting your tongue into his mouth. "You want to teach this little punk bitch some respect for authority?"

"Uh..." Officer Dougherty is dumbfounded at your proposition. "Uh-huh."

"You wanna cuff me and make me do whatever you want?" The officer doesn't even answer, he just reaches for his cuffs. You offer your wrists to him, he takes one arm and snaps them on. Then he pulls your cuffed arm behind you and grabs your other arm to snap the other cuff on. "Now, slam me down onto the table and frisk me!"

He grabs you by the back of the neck and thrusts you on the table, holds you down with one hand and forces his other hand between your legs. He rubs two fingers up and down your slit. You moan as his fingers slowly probe your twat. He then lifts you back up and commands that you get on your knees. You do as he says, know exactly what he wants you to do. He unzips his pants and pulls out his cock. Before you start sucking, you tell him...

What do you say:
*[["I want to swallow your hot, cop cum."]]
*[["I want your hot, cop cum all over my face."]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Ari Rockmore|Punk Chick]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 08:02:43 GMT

Deadfishv:

I understand proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct someone's vernacular? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". It's like going through Stephen King's "IT" and changing the Irish cop's accented words from "foin" to "fine". How a character speaks shouldn't be edited. I intended for Officer Dougherty to say "I'm..." because if all characters spoke properly, the story would be pretty bland. --DeadFishV 07:52, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 07:53:04 GMT

Deadfishv:

You switch to the body of the strangled punk chick. The boy's grip loosens around your throat as he regains control of his own body. You start coughing and gasping for air, all the while planning your next move. You make yourself start crying as the mall cop pulls the boy off of you. The boy is finally coming around.

"Whuh... Where am I? How'd I get here?" The boy says.

Another mall cop enters the bathroom and helps you up. He says: "I'm Officer Dougherty. Are you alright?"

"No! That little shit raped me and then tried to choke me," You exclaim, still faking your tears.

"Miss, we're gonna need you to come with us to the security office, and tell us what happened. Is that okay with you?"

"I guess," you tell him in the punkest of fashions. You follow Officer Dougherty to the security office, then into his office. He asks you to sit down and requests your name.

"Ari Rockmore," you tell him, after accessing the punk's memories. He asks you what happened.

Do you:
*[[Tell Officer Dougherty the "truth", omitting that you enjoyed it]]
*[[Tell Officer Dougherty an exaggeration of what happened]]
*[[Tell Officer Dougherty that you "lied" and asked the boy to choke you]]
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Talk:Possess the strangled punkette

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 07:52:08 GMT

Deadfishv: Created page with 'I understand proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct someone's vernacular? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". …'

I understand proper grammar outside of dialogue but is it really necessary to correct someone's vernacular? No one I know ever says "I am..." all the time, it's mostly "I'm...". It's like going through Stephen King's "IT" and changing the Irish cops accented words from "foin" to "fine". How a character speaks shouldn't be edited. I intended for Officer Dougherty to say "I'm..." because if all characters spoke properly, the story would be pretty bland. --DeadFishV 07:52, 21 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Deadfishv

Deadfishv — Thu, 21 Jul 2011 07:42:41 GMT

Deadfishv:

== A Little Bit About Me ==

DeadFishV here. I'm sort of new to this, but I've got the desire to be creative. And a site like this is an excellent creative writing exercise. In time I hope to start my own story on here. In life, I live with and take care of my quadriplegic girlfriend, who also enjoys being creative. We have our own YouTube channel, [http://www.youtube.com/user/DeadFishVlogs DeadFishVlogs], which is more about her and being a quad and less about me, who can't stand to hear himself on camera.
== CLUSTERFUCK ==
My idea for a good CYOA story is one that gives a lot of choices. Most of the ones I've read only give about two or three choices per page. And as I've contributed to other people's stories, I feel like I have to conform to the norm, when instead giving a user many option could translate to a better experience. I understand that too many options can overwhelm some users, but I only intend to have a minimum of 5 and maximum of 7 options.

The Rules I Intend To Have:
*Minimum of 5 options
*Maximum of 7 options
*Must be "Real World Fiction" (fiction that can actually happen)
*Violence and Sex must be reasonable. Not every person is willing to have sex and violence can't be over-the-top.
*Characters cannot God-Mode... can't always steal a cops gun when you get confronted
*No character should ever completely Dead-End
*No two characters' lives should intersect

If you feel that my story would be an awesome idea, please visit my discussion page --DeadFishV 04:51, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

==Some Of My Work==
At the moment, I have only contributed to [[Rampage]], mostly to one particular storyline starting from "[[Thrust into the punkette's tight asshole]]" and ending with "[[Tell Officer Dougherty that you "lied" and asked the boy to choke you]]". I have done a few other pages on this story but none to the extent of the punk chick, [[Ari Rockmore]].