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&lt;div&gt;==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
I should write more or not, probably not, but who knows. I think I edited out my mistakes, but who&lt;br /&gt;
no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I'd like to ask you a favor. In &amp;quot;Mature Stories&amp;quot;, I've started something called &amp;quot;Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness- First Edition&amp;quot;. I would just like to ask you to do a short summary of the splats in the sections that have them like the Ventrue in V:TR, Fairest in C:TL, and Victims of Neglect i.e. the Silent in G:S-E. Please? Link for the core rulebook for those gamelines are in the idea pitch section under &amp;quot;Old World of Darkness, Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness, and Exalted&amp;quot;.  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:11, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot;. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a short description of [[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]]: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a &amp;quot;dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, &amp;quot;dating sim&amp;quot; would be the closest one. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is not like that. Do you like it? Also, about the &amp;quot;character choices&amp;quot; ramblings or the favor? I'll put in FIVE choices in the Exhibitionist. Please?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reply to your comment ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
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no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I'd like to ask you a favor. In &amp;quot;Mature Stories&amp;quot;, I've started something called &amp;quot;Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness- First Edition&amp;quot;. I would just like to ask you to do a short summary of the splats in the sections that have them like the Ventrue in V:TR, Fairest in C:TL, and Victims of Neglect i.e. the Silent in G:S-E. Please? Link for the core rulebook for those gamelines are in the idea pitch section under &amp;quot;Old World of Darkness, Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness, and Exalted&amp;quot;.  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:11, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, dimensional?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I would like to suggest that the protagonist...I don't know, gets a Sugar and Ice Personality? It wouldn't hurt, would it? Here's the link for an explanation:tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SugarAndIcePersonality--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:46, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Uman]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r==&lt;br /&gt;
sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r==&lt;br /&gt;
I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==H0rniWr1t3r==&lt;br /&gt;
I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r==&lt;br /&gt;
sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r==&lt;br /&gt;
I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline.&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly was dangling so hard to avoid the feather touching her bare skin, she didn't notice that her skirt was sliding down her legs. Dan looked with big eyes to her showing waistband of her panties. &amp;quot;So Kelly, are you trying to distract my interrogation by showing your panties to me?&amp;quot; Kelly looked dazzling at him, not knowing what he means. The she looked down at saw her skirt sliding down her legs and bring het panties on show. &amp;quot;Oh no, please pull my skirt up. You can't let me hang like that.&amp;quot; Dan smirked at Kelly and said &amp;quot;No way Kelly, I'am in charge and if your skirt is sliding down it is sliding down. If that is not what you like, then you have a problem because I love what I'am going to see soon.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;What if I tell you where our flag is, would you please pull it up?&amp;quot; Kelly begged. &amp;quot;No, as told before that would be to easy. But if that skirt is bothering you, I could pull it off completly for you. Or we can continue our chat and wait for your skirt to fall down or not. It is up to you Kelly!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly look dumpfounded and thought:&amp;quot;He wants to see me naked waist down one way or another, what should I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly's bra starts to slide down</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Kelly was dangling so hard to avoid the feather touching her bare skin, she didn't notice that her bra was sliding down her chest. Dan looked with big eyes to her showing cleavag…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly was dangling so hard to avoid the feather touching her bare skin, she didn't notice that her bra was sliding down her chest. Dan looked with big eyes to her showing cleavage. &amp;quot;So Kelly, are you trying to distract my interrogation by showing your titties to me?&amp;quot; Kelly looked dazzling at him, not knowing what he means. The she looked down at saw her bra leaving her perky breasts on show. &amp;quot;Oh no, please pull my bra up. You can't let me hang like that.&amp;quot; Dan smirked at Kelly and said &amp;quot;No way Kelly, I'am in charge and if your bra is sliding down it is sliding down. If that is not what you like, then you have a problem because I love the view.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;What if I tell you where our flag is, would you please pull it up?&amp;quot; Kelly begged. &amp;quot;No, as told before that would be to easy. But if that bra is bothering you, I could pull it off completly for you. Or we can continue our chat and wait for your bra to fall down or not. It is up to you Kelly!&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly look dumpfounded and thought:&amp;quot;He wants to see my naked breasts one way or another, what should I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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			<title>Dan starts the interrogation</title>
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&lt;div&gt;Dan started to walk around Kelly and was searching for something in the hideout. &amp;quot;Ah.. found it&amp;quot;he said. Then he walked and faced Kelly once again. He showed her a big feather. Kelly gets stuffy by the look of that feather. She is very tickless, which means this is going to be a real torture for her. &amp;quot;No, please no,&amp;quot; she screams, &amp;quot; don't do this to me, please.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan started to stroke her arms with the feather. Slowly up and down. Kelly starts to dangle to avoid the feather, but since her feet almost didn't touch the ground it was difficult for her to do this. Dan was laughing at Kelly, &amp;quot;Don't you like this little girl. I could ask you where your flag is. But that would be to easy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;So, Kelly, let me start by asking your age?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I'am 17.&amp;quot; said Kelly with blush on her face. &amp;quot;And do you like this game?&amp;quot; Kelly thought a moment and said &amp;quot;Yes, I do actually.&amp;quot; Dan strikes her belly with the feather. Kelly was shivering. &amp;quot;How many hideouts does your team have?&amp;quot; Kelly didn't say a word about the hideouts. That was an agreement with the boys she could not break at any costs.&lt;br /&gt;
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With the feather Dan starts to move up and down Kelly legs, all the way up to her belly. She is still trying to avoid the feather, and is dangling heavy. She sometimes has her tiptoes slip away on the slippery floor. Kelly said:&amp;quot; Please, stop! I will tell you all you want to know. But please let me go. I can't take this anymore.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Dan started to walk around Kelly and was searching for something in the hideout. &amp;quot;Ah.. found it&amp;quot;he said. Then he walked and faced Kelly once again. He showed her a big feather. Kelly gets stuffy by the look of that feather. She is very tickless, which means this is going to be a real torture for her. &amp;quot;No, please no,&amp;quot; she screams, &amp;quot; don't do this to me, please.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan started to stroke her arms with the feather. Slowly up and down. Kelly starts to dangle to avoid the feather, but since her feet almost didn't touch the ground it was difficult for her to do this. Dan was laughing at Kelly, &amp;quot;Don't you like this little girl. I could ask you where your flag is. But that would be to easy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;So, Kelly, let me start by asking your age?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I'am 17.&amp;quot; said Kelly with blush on her face. &amp;quot;And do you like this game?&amp;quot; Kelly thought a moment and said &amp;quot;Yes, I do actually.&amp;quot; Dan strikes her belly with the feather. Kelly was shivering. &amp;quot;How many hideouts does your team have?&amp;quot; Kelly didn't say a word about the hideouts. That was an agreement with the boys she could not break at any costs.&lt;br /&gt;
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With the feather Dan starts to move up and down Kelly legs, all the way up to her belly. She is still trying to avoid the feather, and is dangling heavy. She sometimes has her tiptoes slip away on the slippery floor. Kelly said:&amp;quot; Please, stop! I will tell you all you want to know. But please let me go. I can't take this anymore.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly's top starts to slide down]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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Kelly, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, blond hair, bright blue eyes, stunning girl with a nice butt and b-cup breasts. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
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Paul, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;10 feet, brown hair, nerdy boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dean, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, brown hair, normal looking boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan, 18 years, 6&amp;quot;5' feet, dark blond hair, athletic boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Tim, 15 years, 6&amp;quot;0' feet, black hair, skinny boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Pete, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;10'feet, blond hair, athletic boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods this weekend. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly and her friends were very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to exchange the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes have to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a strapless leather and fur bra and a short skirt of the same material. Because leather boots would be foolish in the heat, Kelly makes flip-flops covered by fur greaves that start from the knee and go down to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes showing. When she had finished, she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly goes to the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Dan starts the interrogation</title>
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&lt;div&gt;Dan started to walk around Kelly and was searching for something in the hideout. &amp;quot;Ah.. found it&amp;quot;he said. Then he walked and faced Kelly once again. He showed her a big feather. Kelly gets stuffy by the look of that feather. She is very tickless, which means this is going to be a real torture for her. &amp;quot;No, please no,&amp;quot; she screams, &amp;quot; don't do this to me, please.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan started to stroke her arms with the feather. Slowly up and down. Kelly starts to dangle to avoid the feather, but since her feet almost didn't touch the ground it was difficult for her to do this. Dan was laughing at Kelly, &amp;quot;Don't you like this little girl. I could ask you where your flag is. But that would be to easy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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With the feather Dan starts to move up and down Kelly legs, all the way up to her belly. She is still trying to avoid the feather, and is dangling heavy. She sometimes has her tiptoes slip away on the slippery floor. Kelly said:&amp;quot; Please, stop! I will tell you all you want to know. But please let me go. I can't take this anymore.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly's top starts to slide down]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;/* Thanks dirtyme */&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
From MFCmaster123 &lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==egrizzly==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reply to your comment ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reply to your comment ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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Dan started to stroke her arms with the feather. Slowly up and down. Kelly starts to dangle to avoid the feather, but since her feet almost didn't touch the ground it was difficult for her to do this. Dan was laughing at Kelly, &amp;quot;Don't you like this little girl. I could ask you where your flag is. But that would be to easy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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With the feather Dan starts to move up and down Kelly legs, all the way up to her belly. She is still trying to avoid the feather, and is dangling heavy. She sometimes het tiptoes slip away on the slippery floor. Kelly said:&amp;quot; Please, stop! I will tell you all you want to know. But please let me go. I can't take this anymore.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other storeies that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.  &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.  &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reply to your comment ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Uman]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>The Exhibitionist</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/The_Exhibitionist</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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[[Talk:The Exhibitionist|Go here to discuss option ideas]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Hello Master. I guess I should introduce myself. Lets see, I am Dirty Me. I really like to show myself off. Your job is to tell me how to show myself off. But, before we do, there are some rules.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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I hand you a list.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;blockquote&amp;gt;1. If I am arrested, it is over for us.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
2. If I am raped, I will leave your sorry ass for putting me in a stupid situation like that.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
3. If I am killed, well, I will no longer be around to do anything, now will I?&amp;lt;/blockquote&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/div&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You look back at me after reading the rules.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;So, please do not instruct me to do things that will get me arrested, raped, or dead...&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You continue staring at me.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Okay master. I will make it simple. I like to show myself off. A little ankle, a little neck. A little thigh, a little belly. A little nipple, a little pussy. You get the idea. You tell me how you want me to expose myself to others, and I will do it.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Your eyes light up, and I can already see stupid ideas forming.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Hey hey, slow down! Remember the rules. You wouldn't instruct me to do something stupid like walk naked into a police station, would you?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You look away, face showing disappointment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;That doesn't mean I wouldn't, but once I get arrested, it is over for us. You understand, right? I may be your slave, but that doesn't mean I will allow you to destroy my life.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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You nod. I can see the ideas churning in your head.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Okay then, as the master, you tell me how to expose myself. Now, I am not your sex slave. I am not your fuck buddy. Got it? We are not having sex. Your job as my master is to tell me how to expose myself. Here, I will give you an example.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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I tell you about the first time I exposed myself.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;blockquote&amp;gt;&amp;lt;div style=&amp;quot;padding:10px;border:10px groove #FAAFBE;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
My clothes came off, laid in a nice bundle on the back steps.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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It was still daylight, with all the normal traffic this entailed, and I went out, in nothing but my shoes.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Out to the  alley, I peeked around the corner of the car garage. No one was around.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I hid there for a short while, worried about getting caught, yet thrilled about the idea of being seen, wearing nothing but my shoes, by others.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Moving to the mouth of the alley, I again saw no one was there. Turn right, along the sidewalk, tingly all over from my foray out into the world clad in nothing but shoes. The breeze caressed me, flowing along my exposed nipples, between my legs, around my exposed pussy.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Down to the corner, behind a bush, for in front of me was a major street, with cars zipping by. Green cars, silver cars, black and red cars, with nothing separating their view of my naked flesh except a small, scraggly bush. I darted out as the last car drove by, only to see a car driving the opposite way, right past me, now out in the open.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Panic shot through me, wondering if they saw me, if they would turn around and call the police.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I darted back to the alley, down the alley, hiding behind the carport.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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I ran back to the house, picked up my deposited clothes, rushed inside, and hid for the rest of the day.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;So, it is your job to leave me options below on what I will do. But lets start off slow. Lets face it, I haven't done that since I was a teenager, and now that I am a full grown woman, I am more worried and cautious. So, start off slow, please.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Oh, and I am not doing shit until you tell me. So, get busy giving me options.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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I watch you, watching me. I wait, lips parted, wondering what you will have me do.&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[The Exhibitionist/??|Insert some options]]&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[The Exhibitionist/Ride a bicycle through the park wearing nothing but a form-fitting shirt|Ride a bicycle through the park wearing nothing but a form-fitting shirt]]&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[The Exhibitionist/Go have a picnic lunch in the forest clearing wearing only an extra-long shirt that goes a few inches past your butt|Go have a picnic lunch in the forest clearing wearing only an extra-long shirt that goes a few inches past your butt]]&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[The Exhibitionist/Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties|Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties]]&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[The Exhibitionist/Come on my boat with me. We'll go out a mile or two and drop anchor, and you can lie naked on the deck and get a complete tan while I admire your sexy body|Come on my boat with me. We'll go out a mile or two and drop anchor, and you can lie naked on the deck and get a complete tan while I admire your sexy body]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:33, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Uman]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Dan takes Kelly to the hide out</title>
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&lt;div&gt;The walked for through the woods for a little while, when Dan told her to stop. Kelly stood still immediately. Dan reaches in the back of his pants and gets a blindfold out. He puts the blindfold on Kelly, then the walked on. Suddenly Dan tugs the rope to make Kelly step aside. At that moment Kelly feels a cold, hard underground at her bare feet. She shivered a little.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Where are we?&amp;quot;she asked. &amp;quot;Shut up. You are only allowed to speak when I ask you something. Is that clear?&amp;quot; Kelly notted her head to indicate she had understand him.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan started to untie her hands behind her back, so he can put her hands up above her hand. The end of the rope was thrown over a large branch. Dan started to pull the rope and Kelly was lifted a little. Dan stopped pulling the rope when Kelly stood on her tiptoes. Kelly could barely touch the ground. Then all of a sudden Dan took away the blindfold.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;So Kelly, you and I are going to have some fun together. Or at least I'm going to have some fun with you.&amp;quot; said Dan and looked to the tight up Kelly. Her feet barely touched the ground, her long legs, her flat bare belly, nice breasts, hands above her head, she looked so helpless and he is not going to show her any mercy.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;The walked for through the woods for a little while, when Dan told her to stop. Kelly stood still immediately. Dan reaches in the back of his pants and gets a blindfold out. He puts the blindfold on Kelly, then the walked on. Suddenly Dan tugs the rope to make Kelly step aside. At that moment Kelly feels a cold, hard underground at her bare feet. She shivered a little.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Where are we?&amp;quot;she asked. &amp;quot;Shut up. You are only allowed to speak when I ask you something. Is that clear?&amp;quot; Kelly notted her head to indicate she had understand him.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan started to untie her hands behind her back, so he can put her hands up above her hand. The end of the rope was thrown over a large branch. Dan started to pull the rope and Kelly was lifted a little. Dan stopped pulling the rope when Kelly stood on her tiptoes. Kelly could barely touch the ground. Then all of a sudden Dan took away the blindfold.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly gets caught by Dan</title>
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&lt;div&gt;While Kelly searched for clues on the enemies team flag, she wasn't aware of the fact that someone spotted her. She was too busy searching for a way the win this mission. &amp;quot;Well, well what, or better WHO, do we have here?&amp;quot; she heard someone saying. Startled, Kelly looked up to see where the voice was coming from. &amp;quot;Shit&amp;quot; she thought, &amp;quot;Who discovered me?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan looked at his prey and said, &amp;quot;I like what I see. Are you the girl from the other team or just a passenger? I guess not according to your outfit. Do you know what this means?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly looked with fear in her eyes and whispered &amp;quot;I guess so.&amp;quot; Dan reached for her arm and pulled Kelly to her feet. &amp;quot;What's your name bare feeted girl? And in case you didn't notice, you're are my prisoner, so you can walk along with me. We have a lot to chat about. So I'm asking you one more time, what is your name?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Kelly,&amp;quot; she whispered softly and faced her momentary defeat.&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan pushed the girl forward to one of his team's hiding spots. But not before he tied her hands behind her back. &amp;quot;Walk along with me Kelly&amp;quot; he said to her. &lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly start to move, she wanted to walk faster and try to escape, but with Dan so close she couldn't possibly escape.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Dan takes Kelly to the hide out]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime</title>
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&lt;div&gt;==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==egrizzly==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.&lt;br /&gt;
Writ this day 17 March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
==link log page==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Reply to your comment ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Uman]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>User talk:Fredhot16</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/User_talk:Fredhot16</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Do not delete an entire index and replace it with just your story again... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:27, 2 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sorry. I'm a user as of yesterday and I was just trying to start a story of my own. Could the damage be reversed? --[ [User:Fredhot16]] 07:48, 3 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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I have already undone it, but did you seriously think selecting every single bit of text on a page, then suddenly seeing nothing BUT your story was the proper way to go? I know people can get intimidated trying new things, but don't just forget all common sense at the same time...&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you should normally respond on the person's user page, not on your user page, or else they probably won't see it. But make sure is it User talk:, not User:. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I didn't think about that. I'm very sorry for the trouble. --[ [User:Fredhot16:Fredhot16]] 09:38, 3 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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Just to let you know, I alphabetized your stories in the mature section, so if you don't spot them, please note they are in a different location, not removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:37, 16 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:03, 17 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly is [[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] supposed to be?  If it's supposed to be a story, it needs choices and it needs a category.  Please don't post incomplete pages.  Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Why are those choices in Darkness?  Because the story is open for anyone to edit and some people are desperate to read stories about copping a feel, no matter how story-inappropriate that choice is, and some people freak when they realize they've been reading a story from a female perspective and have to force the story into a male perspective, no matter how inappropriate it is given the story thus far. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:05, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One thing you may want to consider is that choices don’t necessarily have to seem logical.  Consider that following scenario: Your son hasn’t come home from school and you’re worried about him.  Do you: A) call the police? B) hire a private detective? C) search the neighborhood? D) get a rowboat and sail out to sea?  A, B, &amp;amp; C are obvious choices, but the ridiculously illogical choice D… is what Gepetto chose in the Adventures of Pinocchio.  And somehow that worked out. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:30, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're typing more than you need to...&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[ Ventrue|Ventrue]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; tells the wiki &amp;quot;Instead of displaying the link to the page titled 'Ventrue' as 'Ventrue', instead display it as 'Ventrue'.&amp;quot;  Kind of redundant, no?  The | is useful when you want the link to display as something ''different''.  For example &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Ventrue|Aristocrats]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; would send people to a page titled 'Ventrue', but the link would display as 'Aristocrats'. &lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:12, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You could just place a note on the page such as &amp;quot;clan descriptions are copyright White Wolf Game Studio&amp;quot;. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:04, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Aren't you going to revise the story anymore?&lt;br /&gt;
[[User : Darky]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly gets caught by Dan</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'While Kelly searches for clues on the enemies team flag, she wasn't aware of the fact that someone spotted her. She was to busy searching for a way the win this mission. &amp;quot;Well, w…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;While Kelly searches for clues on the enemies team flag, she wasn't aware of the fact that someone spotted her. She was to busy searching for a way the win this mission. &amp;quot;Well, well what, or beter WHO doe we have here?&amp;quot; she heard someone saying. Startled Kelly looked up to see where the voice was coming from. &amp;quot;Shit&amp;quot; she thought, &amp;quot;Who discovered me?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan looked at this prey and said:&amp;quot;I like what I see. Are you the girl from the other team of just a passenger? I guess not according to your outfit. Do you know what this means? Kelly looked with fear in her eyes and whispered &amp;quot;I guess so.&amp;quot; Dan reached for her arm and pulled Kelly up her feet. &amp;quot;What's your name bare feeted girl? And in case you didn't notice your are my prisoner, so you can walk along with me. We have a lot to chat about. So I'm asking you one more time, what is your name?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Kelly&amp;quot; she whispered softly and faces her defeat for this moment. Dan pushes the girl forward to one of the hiding spots of his team. But not before he tied her hands behind her back. &amp;quot;Walk along with me Kelly&amp;quot; he said to her. Kelly start to move, she wanted to walk faster but because of the rope that has an line, which was in Dan's hands, she could not escape.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Nothing further happened to Kelly, the game goes on</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Nothing_further_happened_to_Kelly,_the_game_goes_on</link>
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&lt;div&gt;Paul, Dean and Kelly moved on through the bushes. &amp;quot;Maybe it's better to split up,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;We have bigger change of finding the enemies camp and their flag. What do you think guys?&amp;quot; Dean notted in agreement but Kelly wasn't so sure. &amp;quot;I'm sorry Kel, but Dean and I agree so majority wins and we split up. Dean you go the east side, I take the north and you can move to the west side of the field.&amp;quot; Kelly sighed and accepted the choice of the boys although she was not very confident about it. &amp;quot;What if one of us get caught?&amp;quot; she asked. &amp;quot;We'll miss that one and the others will start to search and rescue the caught one.&amp;quot; said Dean&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly starts walking to the west side of the area. Luckily for her this area was covered with lots of grass, so her bare feet didn't hurt as much as they did on the rough parts of the terrain. Insidiously Kelly walked through the fields in search of clues that could lead her team to victory. She looked behind bushes and rocks. Still watching her steps, so her feet won't get hurt in action.&lt;br /&gt;
But suddenly her lucks changes....&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly gets caught by Dan]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly gets caught by Tim]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly gets caught by Pete]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Main characters for this story are:&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly's team:&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, blond, bright blue eyes, stunning girl with a nice butt and b-cup breasts. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
Paul, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;10 feet, brown hair, nerdy boy.&lt;br /&gt;
Dean, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, brown hair, normal looking boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Enemies team:&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan, 18 years, 6&amp;quot;5' feet, darkblond hair, athletic boy.&lt;br /&gt;
Tim, 15 years, 6&amp;quot;0' feet, black hair, skinny boy.&lt;br /&gt;
Pete, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;10'feet, blond hair, athletic boy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods this weekend. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly and her friends were very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a leather and fur bra and a short skirt of the same material. Because leather boots would be foolish in the heat, Kelly makes flip-flops covered by fur greaves that start from the knee and go down to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When she had finished, she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly goes to the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Main characters for this story are:&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly's team:&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, blond, bright blue eyes, stunning girl with a nice butt and b-cup breasts. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
Paul, 17 years, 5&amp;quot;10 feet, brown hair, nerdy boy&lt;br /&gt;
Dean, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;8' feet, brown hair, normal looking boy&lt;br /&gt;
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Enemies team:&lt;br /&gt;
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Dan, 18 years, 6&amp;quot;5' feet, darkblond hair, athletic boy&lt;br /&gt;
Tim, 15 years, 6&amp;quot;0' feet, black hair, skinny boy&lt;br /&gt;
Pete, 16 years, 5&amp;quot;10'feet, blond hair, athletic boy&lt;br /&gt;
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Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods this weekend. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly and her friends were very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a leather and fur bra and a short skirt of the same material. Because leather boots would be foolish in the heat, Kelly makes flip-flops covered by fur greaves that start from the knee and go down to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When she had finished, she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly goes to the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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Kelly&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, has bright eyes the blue of a cloudless sky, a nice butt and b-cup breasts. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods this weekend. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly and her friends were very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a leather and fur bra and a short skirt of the same material. Because leather boots would be foolish in the heat, Kelly makes flip-flops covered by fur greaves that start from the knee and go down to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When she had finished, she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly goes to the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Nothing further happened to Kelly, the game goes on</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Nothing_further_happened_to_Kelly,_the_game_goes_on</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Paul, Dean and Kelly moved on through the bushes. &amp;quot;Maybe it's better to split up,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;We have bigger change of finding the enemies camp and their flag. What do you think guys?&amp;quot; Dean notted in agreement but Kelly wasn't so sure. &amp;quot;I'm sorry Kel, but Dean and I agree so majority wins and we split up. Dean you go the east side, I take the north and you can move to the west side of the field.&amp;quot; Kelly sighed and accepted the choice of the boys although she was not very confident in it. &amp;quot;What if one of us get caught?&amp;quot; she asked. &amp;quot;We'll miss that one and the others will start to search and rescue the caught one.&amp;quot; said Dean&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Nothing further happened to Kelly, the game goes on</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Nothing_further_happened_to_Kelly,_the_game_goes_on</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Paul, Dean and Kelly moved on through the bushes. &amp;quot;Maybe it's better to split up,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;We have bigger change of finding the enemies camp and their flag. What do you think…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Paul, Dean and Kelly moved on through the bushes. &amp;quot;Maybe it's better to split up,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;We have bigger change of finding the enemies camp and their flag. What do you think guys?&amp;quot; Dean notted in agreement but Kelly wasn't so sure. &amp;quot;I'm sorry Kel, but Dean and I agree so majority wins and we split up. Dean you go the east side, I take the north and you can move to the west side of the field.&amp;quot; Kelly sighed and accepted the choice of the boys although she was not very confident in it. &amp;quot;What if one of us get caught?&amp;quot; she asked. &amp;quot;We'll miss that one and the others will start to search and rescue the caught one.&amp;quot; said Dean&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I'm ready for battle, boys. Let's go kick some ass.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said. Kelly nodded her head, she knew the boys won't let her down and protect her and the flag.&lt;br /&gt;
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They start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods, walking from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke were the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly was used to walking barefoot but the forest was full of things that sting like sharp rocks, thorns, and sticks.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Ahh, that sucks,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;Do you want to continue or do you want to retreat for this moment, Kelly?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly wanted to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
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Paul went up front, followed by Dean and Kelly. Deeper into the woods they moved. Bushes grow more and more tighter. The ground was slippery under Kelly's bare feet, so she had to walk slower then the boys if she didn't wanted to slip.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Is everything going o.k?&amp;quot; Dean asked her. &amp;quot;Yeah, but I have to watch my steps.&amp;quot; she answered. And so she did.&lt;br /&gt;
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Meanwhile in the other camp, Dan, Tim and Pete are also preparing for the battle. Dan said:&amp;quot;I heard the other team have a girl. I hope I can catch and interrogate her.&amp;quot; &amp;quot;Yeah, that would be great. Think of what we can do with her&amp;quot; answered Tim. &amp;quot;If we catch her, we shouldn't ask her &lt;br /&gt;
immediately where their flag is, but we should take her to our camp for a while and have fun with her.&amp;quot; said Pete. The boys smirked with the thought of that.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Nothing further happened to Kelly, the game goes on]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I'm ready for battle, boys. Let's go kick some ass.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said. Kelly nodded her head, she knew the boys won't let her down and protect her and the flag.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
They start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods, walking from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke were the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly was used to walking barefoot but the forest was full of things that sting like sharp rocks, thorns, and sticks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Ahh, that sucks,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;Do you want to continue or do you want to retreat for this moment, Kelly?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly wanted to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Paul went up front, followed by Dean and Kelly. Deeper into the woods they moved. Bushes grow more and more tighter. The ground was slippery under Kelly's bare feet, so she had to walk slower then the boys if she didn't wanted to slip.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Is everything going o.k?&amp;quot; Dean asked her. &amp;quot;Yeah, but I have to watch my steps.&amp;quot; she answered. And so she did.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Meanwhile in the other camp, Dan, Tim and Pete are also preparing for the battle. Dan said:&amp;quot;I heard the other team have a girl. I hope I can catch and interrogate her.&amp;quot; &amp;quot;Yeah, that would be great. Think of what we can do with her&amp;quot; answered Tim. &amp;quot;If we catch her, we shouldn't ask her &lt;br /&gt;
immediately where the flag is, but we should take her to our camp for a while and have fun with her.&amp;quot; said Pete &lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Nothing further happened to Kelly, the game goes on]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_and_her_troops_are_ready_for_the_first_mission</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I'm ready for battle, boys. Let's go kick some ass.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said. Kelly nodded her head, she knew the boys won't let her down and protect her and the flag.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
They start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods, walking from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke were the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly was used to walking barefoot but the forest was full of things that sting like sharp rocks, thorns, and sticks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Ahh, that sucks,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;Do you want to continue or do you want to retreat for this moment, Kelly?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly wanted to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Paul went up front, followed by Dean and Kelly. Deeper into the woods they moved. Bushes grow more and more tighter. The ground was slippery under Kelly's bare feet, so she had to walk slower then the boys if she didn't wanted to slip.&amp;quot;IS everything going ok?&amp;quot; Dean asked her. &amp;quot;Yes I'm fine, but I have to watch my steps.&amp;quot; she answered.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Nothing happened further to Kelly, the game goes on]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_and_her_troops_are_ready_for_the_first_mission</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I'm ready for battle, boys. Let's go kick some ass.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said. Kelly nodded her head, she knew the boys won't let her down and protect her and the flag&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
They start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods, walking from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke were the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly was used to walking barefoot but the forest was full of things that sting like sharp rocks, thorns, and sticks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Ahh, that sucks,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;Do you want to continue or do you want to retreat for this moment, Kelly?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly wanted to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Paul went upfront, followed by Dean and Kelly. Deeper into the woods they moved. Bushes are growned more and more tighter. The ground was slippery under Kelly's bare feet, so she had to walk slower then the boys if she did not wanted to slip.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Nothing happened further to Kelly, the game goes on]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_and_her_troops_are_ready_for_the_first_mission</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I'm ready for the battle. Let's go, boys, and let's kick some ass.&amp;quot; &amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
They start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods, walking from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke were the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly was used to walking barefoot but the forest was full of things that sting like sharp rocks, thorns, and sticks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Ahh, that sucks,&amp;quot; said Paul, &amp;quot;Do you want to continue or do you want to retreat for this moment, Kelly?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly decided to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Nothing happened further to Kelly, the game goes on]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, has bright eyes the blue of a cloudless sky, a nice butt and b-cup breasts. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods this weekend. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly and her friends were very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly decides to make a leather and fur bra and a short skirt of the same material. Because leather boots would be foolish in the heat, Kelly makes flip-flops covered by fur greaves that start from the knee and go down to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When she had finished, she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly goes to the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I am ready for the battle. Let's go boys and let's kick some ass.&amp;quot; &amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said De…'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Kelly decides to go for the challenge and said: &amp;quot;I am ready for the battle. Let's go boys and let's kick some ass.&amp;quot; &amp;quot;You better watch not to let your own ass get kicked.&amp;quot; said Dean. Paul smirked at his remark, &amp;quot;We'll protect you as good as we can, Kelly.&amp;quot; he said.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The start to walk and search for their opponents in the woods. They walked from spot to spot. Kelly had not considered the functionality of her clothing, and the first thing that broke where the flip-flops, leaving her barefoot in the middle of the woods. Kelly have a certain habit of walking barefoot around, but the forest was full of things that sting, sharp rocks and thorns.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Kelly decided to continue, walking in a careful manner so as not to step on sharp things. She was trying not to think that she would have to play this weekend in bare feet, because she had not brought other suitable footwear for the fight with her.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly found out she is not the best tailor in the world]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Nothing happened further and the first day of the battle ends]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly goes to the camp</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_goes_to_the_camp</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;The next Saturday, Kelly and her friends went to the camp. The camp was located in the forest nearby her house but they still had to travel for about an hour to get to the place. After an hour they have arrived and the guys started to build their tent, and their hiding spots to watch their enemies. Kelly made their flag position. The most important place in their camp. Once the flag was captured the fight was over. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Dean?&amp;quot; Kelly asks, &amp;quot;Is this a great spot or what?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;It's beautiful!&amp;quot; said Dean, &amp;quot;Now it's time to get dressed for the fight.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The boys took off the shirts, shorts and shoes and changed them for a fury coat, pants and boots. Kelly, on the other hand, changed in the tent.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
When she walked out the tent, all the boys looked with their eyes wide open. Kelly was dressed in nothing more then her fur bra, a fur/leather skirt with panties underneath, and her self-made furry flip-flops. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Wow,&amp;quot; said Paul,&amp;quot;you look stunning.&amp;quot; Dean and the other boys had to agree with Paul. &amp;quot;With that outfit you can destract our enemies and we can capture their flag with ease.&amp;quot; said Dean. &amp;quot;Victory is in sight.&amp;quot; he smiled, &amp;quot;Or should we stay here at our own camp and have some fun here and wait for the enemy to come to us and defeat them here?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[The boys wanted to see more of Kelly and stay at the camp]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly goes to the camp</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;The next Saturday, Kelly and her friends went to the camp. The camp was located in the forest nearby her house but they still had to travel for about an hour to get to the place. After an hour they have arrived and the guys started to build their tent, and their hiding spots to watch their enemies. Kelly made their flag position. The most important place in their camp. Once the flag was captured the fight was over. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Dean?&amp;quot; Kelly asks, &amp;quot;Is this a great spot or what?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;It's beautiful!&amp;quot; said Dean, &amp;quot;Now it's time to get dressed for the fight.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The boys took off the shirts, shorts and shoes and changed them for a fury coat, pants and boots. Kelly, on the other hand, changed in the tent.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
When she walked out the tent, all the boys looked with their eyes wide open. Kelly was dressed in nothing more then her fur bra, a fur/leather skirt with panties underneath, and her self-made furry flip-flops. &lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Wow,&amp;quot; said Paul,&amp;quot;you look stunning.&amp;quot; Dean and the other boys had to agree with Paul. &amp;quot;With that outfit you can destract our enemies and we can capture their flag with ease.&amp;quot; said Dean. &amp;quot;Victory is in sight.&amp;quot; he smiled.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[The boys wanted to see more of Kelly]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kelly and her troops are ready for the first mission]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>All Mature Stories</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Mature Stories==&lt;br /&gt;
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Awakened World: 7yrs Later]]|| 43 || Private WIP, Please Don't Edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Alorias Glory]]|| WIP || public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[1943]]||35||Open&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A D&amp;amp;D Adventure]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please don't edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A New Persona]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A YOUNG BOY'S NIGHT]] (GAY) ||89+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Unsuspecting Adventurer]]|| 1 ||(Just starting it, please don't edit for now.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Touch Of Fear]]|| WIP || (Private, Please do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]||  13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute	&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write  in it, please do it well =/)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Amnesia]]||50+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Am I Dreaming?]]|| 13+ || (WIP. Private)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Awake]] || 45 &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[An Apocalypse Story]]|| 0 || private (feel free to edit grammar and spelling)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Back To Freddy's]]|| 0 ||  private&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Badassery]] || 20+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Batman vs Joker]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Batman vs Joker}} || W.I.P  Private, Do NOT edit!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Bio Wars]]|| WIP|| Public (Do not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Bleach: An RPG]]|| W.I.P || Public -Do NOT Edit!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[ The blood disease]]|| 3 || (Please don't edit the story! I'm hopeless when it comes to coding though so if someone could help me with that, it would be great! I'm keeping an open mind though, and welcoming new ideas please ask before you add though!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Bloodshed]]||16+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Book of Darkness]]||0||(WIP- '''DO NOT EDIT.''' I am the writer so I make the story.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Book of Satan]]||13+||WIP- Do not edit please&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Carnage]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;Red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Cartoonish Chronicles]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Choice of Arms]]||5||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Choosing a Fiancé has never been so fun ]]|| 0 || (OPEN NO EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Chronicle]]||0|| Work in Progress (Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[City Life]]|| 12 || &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Collapse]]|| W.I.P. || private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[College Wars]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Wars}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[College of Killings]]||{{PAGESINCAT: College of Killings}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;lt;b&amp;gt;Private&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt; Don't Edit &amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;[updated every weekend]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;purple&amp;quot;&amp;gt;W.I.P please do not edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dave's Crazy Day]]|| W.I.P || public, do whatever the fuck you want. It's america after all.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ A day at high school]]|| 0 || Under construction.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[D-Day|D-Day 1944]]|| WIP || (Just started do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dead Town]]|| 0 || Under Construction/DO NOT EDIT PLEASE&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dishonored]]||WIP||('''SPECIFIC EDITING RULES TO BE FOUND INSIDE.''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||  &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||3+ ||(Do not edit, only play)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 19+ ||WIP, NO EDITING&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Elder Scrolls]] || 10+ || WIP Feel free to add a branch&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Encounter With Your Ex]]|| 3+ || Under Construction. Do Not Edit. Private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 160+ || WIP, please don't edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Faction (Gay)]]|| WIP || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[F.R. Theory]]||20+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Flu]]|| W.I.P. || (Please don't edit the story without consulting first) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+ |&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Furry Romance]]|| 0 || private &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Game of Thrones]]|| 0 || (WIP, Private)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20 &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 5+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Harry Potter: New Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| WIP || private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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||[[High School Drama and Romance is Stupid]]|| 10+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[HighSchool]]|| WIP || (Just Started, please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hitman]]|| 11+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hollywood U (based on the game)]]|| W.I.P || private for now, please don't edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hunteria's Rising ]]||10+ ||Collaboration with Rwenmax and Michaltheanhur (Still Editing)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 ||  (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Identity Gun]]|| W.I.P|| (DO NOT EDIT please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[I like Cookie]]||10+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Immortal You]]||W.I.P|| Under construction, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[In The Army]] || 25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[In The Beginning]]||3+||Closed&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Infectional Survival]] || 13+ || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;DO NOT EDIT&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[InFeRnO]]|| 4 ||(the under construction epic)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Inside the Big Brother House ]]|| (W.I.P) || public &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Insert Word Here]]|| 2 ||(JUST STARTED)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]|| WIP || Please Do Not Edit Unless You Are Authorized by [[User:Potato King|me]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| 5 ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[It's Only Wednesday]]|| 5+ || WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[James Baxter is Idle]]|| 0 || private - (Do Not Edit Without Permission)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Jim's Barbeque]]  || 15+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[July 5-6, 1944]]||6|| Private, Do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Katarina's Adventures]]||20+ || WIP, please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]|| 5 || WIP, please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;[PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A KlAksakAR's adventures in the Empire of MikkoMMM]]|| 10 || Discontinued&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Kidnapped]]|| 31 ||(Under Construction ) &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;[DO NOT edit without my permission(but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors) ]&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Krime or Kop King]]||7+ ||(No Editing.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of a Legend]]||2+ ||(No Editing.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life Of a Rouge]] || 2+ ||(WIP, don't edit without my permission. Warrior Cats BTW)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Life of Rayne]]|| 0 || (Under Construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of Who?]]|| 2+ ||(WIP, do not edit without my permission, thanks.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] (Romance) || 12 ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Machine of Magic]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Machine of Magic}} || Private, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Magical World of Hetalia ]]|| 25+ || Private DO NOT EDIT. ( Any pages added will be immediately removed. SO DON'T WASTE TIME MAKING SOMETHING THAT WILL BE REMOVED. )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| 8 ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| 8 ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Martyred]]|| WIP ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;BASED OFF AN ORIGINAL WORK DO NOT EDIT&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| 11 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| 50+ ||(WIP) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Monster Hunter]]|| WIP ||Private for now, please no editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[moon light]]||8+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[My Only Stars!]]|| WIP || (Public, but it's preferred if you're part of the Ensemble Stars fandom before editing!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ My Little Pony Love is Magic]]|| 0 || Private WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] || 0||(Work in progress.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Naruto's Friend, you]]|| 25+||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;orange&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Private, no editing&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nation Building]]||W.I.P||private please dont  edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| 7 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A New Beginning]]|| 12 ||just began &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The New Overmind]]|| 10+ || public (I reserve the right to delete and/or edit pages)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Next Day]] || 3 ||Just Started, Do Not Edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[the night at home]] || 14 ||(just started)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nikon Academy]] || (Just Started please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nothing Hidden]] || 0 || In progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nudisma Terena]]|| 0 || WIP, Edits are Welcome&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Obelisk]] || WIP || Private, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Office Lady]] || 5 ||(just started, public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || 9 ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[On a Boat]] || 7 ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[One Princess, Four Princes, Choices|'''One Princess''', ''Four Princes?'' '''Choices'''.]]|| 15 || (Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Only One]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Our Way]] || 7+ ||(Private, To be taken seriously)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[out in the woods]]|| 6 ||(in construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Outbreak]]|| 7 ||(No editing please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Perverticus]]|| 4 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Piggy's Day]]|| 373 || (WIP) (open)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Points of Light]]|| 0 || private &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Politica]]||4 ||(Spanish) (No editing please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Poke]]|| 5 || (first time so please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Powers That Be]]|| 2 || don't edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Prom]]|| W.I.P|| private - please don't edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Pure]](Lesbian romance stories)|| &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;0 WIP&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt; || ''' &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;PRIVATE&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt; Rated mature for lesbian content but no adult content''' &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Psychodude]]||30+ ||Open to Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]|| 6 ||(Its Your Call)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Rebellion]]||5+ || Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A random story]]||333+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||100+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Random III]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Random Four]]|| 25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Random Quota]] || 5 ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])&lt;br /&gt;
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|'''[[Remember]]''' ||70 ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit Without Permission&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;) (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;Orange&amp;quot;&amp;gt;'''&amp;lt;--Previously Featured!'''&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Rescue]]|| 36 || (Complete, Do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Resident evil]] || 53 || Abandoned, therefore public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || 3 ||(W.I.P. Please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Run From The Mob]]||10+ || Work On It, It's Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Say Goodbye]]|| 11+ || WIP PRIVATE&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[School Life]]|| 6 ||(WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Seek]]|| 10 ||(W.I.P.  pages. No editing please!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Segon]]|| 103 ||(W.I.P. No editing please!) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sengoku Basara: Romance]]|| 24 ||(Under Construction - No editing) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Serial X]]||25+ || Work On It, It's Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| 12+ ||((Do not edit))&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Short And Random Stories]]||250+ ||(25 stories)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Short of Darkness]]|| 2 ||(W.I.P) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sisters Love]]|| 15+ || (W.I.P) (please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]|| 80+ ||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing) ('''Previously Featured''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Skyrim Adventures]]||W.I.P|| private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Sleepless Night ]]|| 0 || Private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Smile]]|| 180+ ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sniper]]|| 38+ || WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sonic 1]] || 10 ||(Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sonic &amp;amp; Shadow]] || 26&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[soul evolution]]|| 6+ ||public but keep it serious&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || 14 ||(First Mission complete, more to come!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spirit Warp]] || 40+ ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ splinter cell]]||3+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||90+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||40+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]|| 8 ||(Just started, feel free to add on)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob Gone Wrong]]||5+||(Edit, sure, but please use proper grammar and spelling!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || 13 ||(Just started)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Stay Away From The Rebel ]]|| 0 || private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Survival]] || 30+ ||W.I.P.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Survivor: Zombie Apocalypse]]|| 4 || (Just started. Please DO NOT edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Super Self-Help Survival Guide]]|| WIP || No editplz!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Super Survival]] || 17+ ||WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Swimming Pools]] || (Work In Progress)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[the sword of death]]|| 0 ||(w.i.p do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || 30+ ||Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||40+ || started 6/24/09&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ The Bracelet Mystery]]|| 1 || private, do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Thought Of Me]]||200+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Tres_Coetus_Coloris]]|| 50 ||WIP DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Triforce ]]|| 30+ ||(WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ The Never Ending Quest for Prison]]|| 0 || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Twin Empires]]||10+ (W.I.P)||(Ask for permission)Continuing the main storyline, seeking other writers to help grow the story by adding their own characters&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The War Fighter Program]]||W.I.P ||Collaboration with Michaltheanhur&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Undead]] || 50+ ||(WIP. Help Wanted!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| 7+ ||under work do not modify without permission please.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[University Secrets!]] || 14 ||(Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Unknown Tales]] ||2+ ||edit freely)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Urban Explorer: A Descent Into Madness ]]|| 30+ || In Progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Violence]]|| 20 || in progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[AMC's The Walking Dead]]|| WIP|| Based on the Walking Dead show by AMC. This is a fan story, I do not own Walking Dead or it's content. Written by Alex Brownstone&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Ward]]|| 0 || Private: my first time so refrain from editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ war in Europe ]]|| 100+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || 150+ || in progress)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Warhammer 40,000: Renegade]]|| 6 || in progress (public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Wasteland]]|| 11 ||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Week of the Zombies]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Welcome, Governor: A tale of the Terran Commonwealth]]|| 0 || (Semi-private. PM for details.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Whodunit?]]|| 0 || (WIP do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[With Great Power Comes Great Girls]]|| 0 || work in progress, please don't edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[  Wolverine Adventure]]|| 10+ || public &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A World Blooms]]|| 88 || WIP; please ask before editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[World of Warcraft: Paths of Destiny]] || 0&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[World Undone]] || 15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Xozen Infection ]]|| 34+|| A zombie Story, (Sensible editing is welcomed but please contact me before you)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || 18 ||(People can work on this) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Your Own Game of Life]]|| 1 || WIP, Edits are Welcome&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zach]]||15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zed Day]] ||3||| (WIP. Please don't edit) !!  &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombies]] || 6 ||(Just started)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| 8 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombie blood]]||35+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| 35+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||50+ || (Work on It, It's Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] || 13 ||(Just Started please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombies city]] || 3 ||(Just Started please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombehz]] ||10+ ||edit freely)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombies 2.0]] ||  ||  |Edit I don't care about grammar|| &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zombie Apocalypse: Reverse Harem?!]]||(Please don't edit without permission)&lt;br /&gt;
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Next saturday Kelly and her friends went to the camp. It was in the forest nearby her house. But still they have to travel for about an hour to get to the place. After an hour they have arrived and the guys started to build their tent, and their hiding spots to watch their enemies. Kelly made their flag position. The most important place in their camp. Once the flag was captured the fight was over. &amp;quot;Dean?&amp;quot; Kelly asks, &amp;quot;Is this a great spot or what?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;It's beautiful!&amp;quot; said Dean, &amp;quot;Now it is time to get dressed for the fight. The boys took off the shirts, shorts and shoes and changed them for a fury coat, pants and boots. Kelly on the otherhand did change in the tent.&lt;br /&gt;
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When she walked out the tent, all the boys looked with their eyes wide open. Kelly was dressed in her fury bra, with nothing underneath, a fur/leather skirt, of course she wore panties underneath it, and her selfmade fury flipflops. &amp;quot;Wow,&amp;quot; said Paul,&amp;quot;you look stunning.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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			<title>Kelly decides to stay home because of the temperature</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Kelly called her friend Paul. &amp;quot;Hi Paul, I am very sorry but it is far to hot to LARP. I have decided to stay at home this time and enjoy the sun. I wish you and the guys a lot of…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly called her friend Paul. &amp;quot;Hi Paul, I am very sorry but it is far to hot to LARP. I have decided to stay at home this time and enjoy the sun. I wish you and the guys a lot of fun with the barbarian fight.&amp;quot; Paul was, of course, dissapointed at Kelly's decision but he knows she will join another time.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, a nice butt and b-cup breast. She like to act in live act role play games together with her friends. &lt;br /&gt;
Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods. The game was in the hottest summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly was very excited about the game and so are her friends. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavy clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a bra by leather and fur, and a short skirt of the same material. Because of the heat her boots would be to warm, Kelly mad flip-flops covered by fur greaves, which covered from the knee to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When the were ready she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, a nice butt and b-cup breast. She like to act in live act role play games. &lt;br /&gt;
Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods. The game was in the hotterst summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly was very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavt clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a bra by leather and fur, and a short skirt of the same material. Because of the heat her boots would be to warm, Kelly mad flip-flops covered by fur greaves, which covered from the knee to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When the were ready she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl ]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 08 Mar 2016 11:45:55 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Darky</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Kelly plays a barbarian girl</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Kelly_plays_a_barbarian_girl</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, a nice butt and b-cup breast. She like to act in live act role play games.  Her story starts when she got an …'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Kelly is a 17 year old girl. She's a natural blond, about 5&amp;quot;8' feet, a nice butt and b-cup breast. She like to act in live act role play games. &lt;br /&gt;
Her story starts when she got an invitation for a LARP-game in the woods. The game was in the hotterst summer in years. Kelly and her friends has to play a barbarian fight. Kelly was very excited about the game. Because of the heat she decided to change the normal, heavt clothes for some clothes which were a little bit lighter. According to the dresscode the clothes had to be leather and fur.&lt;br /&gt;
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Kelly decides to make a bra by leather and fur, and a short skirt of the same material. Because of the heat her boots would be to warm, Kelly mad flip-flops covered by fur greaves, which covered from the knee to the top of the foot, leaving the sole and toes discoveries. When the were ready she was proud of her work.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>All Mature Stories</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/All_Mature_Stories</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Mature Stories==&lt;br /&gt;
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Awakened World: 7yrs Later]]|| 43 || Private WIP, Please Don't Edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Alorias Glory]]|| WIP || public&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[1943]]||35||Open&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A D&amp;amp;D Adventure]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please don't edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A New Persona]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A YOUNG BOY'S NIGHT]] (GAY) ||89+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Unsuspecting Adventurer]]|| 1 ||(Just starting it, please don't edit for now.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Touch Of Fear]]|| WIP || (Private, Please do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]||  13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute	&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write  in it, please do it well =/)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Amnesia]]||50+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Am I Dreaming?]]|| 13+ || (WIP. Private)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Awake]] || 45 &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[An Apocalypse Story]]|| 0 || private (feel free to edit grammar and spelling)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[ Back To Freddy's]]|| 0 ||  private&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Badassery]] || 20+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Batman vs Joker]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Batman vs Joker}} || W.I.P  Private, Do NOT edit!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Bio Wars]]|| WIP|| Public (Do not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Bleach: An RPG]]|| W.I.P || Public -Do NOT Edit!&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[ The blood disease]]|| 3 || (Please don't edit the story! I'm hopeless when it comes to coding though so if someone could help me with that, it would be great! I'm keeping an open mind though, and welcoming new ideas please ask before you add though!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Bloodshed]]||16+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Book of Darkness]]||0||(WIP- '''DO NOT EDIT.''' I am the writer so I make the story.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Book of Satan]]||13+||WIP- Do not edit please&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Carnage]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;Red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Cartoonish Chronicles]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Choice of Arms]]||5||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Choosing a Fiancé has never been so fun ]]|| 0 || (OPEN NO EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Chronicle]]||0|| Work in Progress (Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[City Life]]|| 12 || &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[ Collapse]]|| W.I.P. || private&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[College Wars]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Wars}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[College of Killings]]||{{PAGESINCAT: College of Killings}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;lt;b&amp;gt;Private&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt; Don't Edit &amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;[updated every weekend]&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;purple&amp;quot;&amp;gt;W.I.P please do not edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Dave's Crazy Day]]|| W.I.P || public, do whatever the fuck you want. It's america after all.&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[ A day at high school]]|| 0 || Under construction.&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+ &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[D-Day|D-Day 1944]]|| WIP || (Just started do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Dead Town]]|| 0 || Under Construction/DO NOT EDIT PLEASE&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction) &lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
|-&lt;br /&gt;
|[[Dishonored]]||WIP||('''SPECIFIC EDITING RULES TO BE FOUND INSIDE.''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||  &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||3+ ||(Do not edit, only play)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 19+ ||WIP, NO EDITING&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Elder Scrolls]] || 10+ || WIP Feel free to add a branch&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Encounter With Your Ex]]|| 3+ || Under Construction. Do Not Edit. Private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 160+ || WIP, please don't edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Faction (Gay)]]|| WIP || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[F.R. Theory]]||20+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Flu]]|| W.I.P. || (Please don't edit the story without consulting first) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+ |&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Furry Romance]]|| 0 || private &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Game of Thrones]]|| 0 || (WIP, Private)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20 &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 5+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Harry Potter: New Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| WIP || private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)&lt;br /&gt;
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||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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||[[High School Drama and Romance is Stupid]]|| 10+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[HighSchool]]|| WIP || (Just Started, please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hitman]]|| 11+ || (WIP Don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hollywood U (based on the game)]]|| W.I.P || private for now, please don't edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Hunteria's Rising ]]||10+ ||Collaboration with Rwenmax and Michaltheanhur (Still Editing)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 ||  (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Identity Gun]]|| W.I.P|| (DO NOT EDIT please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[I like Cookie]]||10+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Immortal You]]||W.I.P|| Under construction, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[In The Army]] || 25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[In The Beginning]]||3+||Closed&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Infectional Survival]] || 13+ || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;DO NOT EDIT&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[InFeRnO]]|| 4 ||(the under construction epic)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Inside the Big Brother House ]]|| (W.I.P) || public &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Insert Word Here]]|| 2 ||(JUST STARTED)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]|| WIP || Please Do Not Edit Unless You Are Authorized by [[User:Potato King|me]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| 5 ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[It's Only Wednesday]]|| 5+ || WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[James Baxter is Idle]]|| 0 || private - (Do Not Edit Without Permission)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Jim's Barbeque]]  || 15+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[July 5-6, 1944]]||6|| Private, Do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Katarina's Adventures]]||20+ || WIP, please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Kelly plays a barbarian girl]]|| 0 || WIP, please do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;[PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A KlAksakAR's adventures in the Empire of MikkoMMM]]|| 10 || Discontinued&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Kidnapped]]|| 31 ||(Under Construction ) &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;[DO NOT edit without my permission(but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors) ]&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Krime or Kop King]]||7+ ||(No Editing.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of a Legend]]||2+ ||(No Editing.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life Of a Rouge]] || 2+ ||(WIP, don't edit without my permission. Warrior Cats BTW)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Life of Rayne]]|| 0 || (Under Construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Life of Who?]]|| 2+ ||(WIP, do not edit without my permission, thanks.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] (Romance) || 12 ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Machine of Magic]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Machine of Magic}} || Private, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Magical World of Hetalia ]]|| 25+ || Private DO NOT EDIT. ( Any pages added will be immediately removed. SO DON'T WASTE TIME MAKING SOMETHING THAT WILL BE REMOVED. )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| 8 ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| 8 ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;green&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Public&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Martyred]]|| WIP ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;BASED OFF AN ORIGINAL WORK DO NOT EDIT&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| 11 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| 50+ ||(WIP) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Monster Hunter]]|| WIP ||Private for now, please no editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[moon light]]||8+&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[My Only Stars!]]|| WIP || (Public, but it's preferred if you're part of the Ensemble Stars fandom before editing!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ My Little Pony Love is Magic]]|| 0 || Private WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] || 0||(Work in progress.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Naruto's Friend, you]]|| 25+||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;orange&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Private, no editing&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nation Building]]||W.I.P||private please dont  edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| 7 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A New Beginning]]|| 12 ||just began &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The New Overmind]]|| 10+ || public (I reserve the right to delete and/or edit pages)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Next Day]] || 3 ||Just Started, Do Not Edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[the night at home]] || 14 ||(just started)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nikon Academy]] || (Just Started please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nothing Hidden]] || 0 || In progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Nudisma Terena]]|| 0 || WIP, Edits are Welcome&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Obelisk]] || WIP || Private, please do not edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Office Lady]] || 5 ||(just started, public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || 9 ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[On a Boat]] || 7 ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[One Princess, Four Princes, Choices|'''One Princess''', ''Four Princes?'' '''Choices'''.]]|| 15 || (Public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Only One]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Our Way]] || 7+ ||(Private, To be taken seriously)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[out in the woods]]|| 6 ||(in construction)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Outbreak]]|| 7 ||(No editing please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Perverticus]]|| 4 ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Piggy's Day]]|| 373 || (WIP) (open)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Points of Light]]|| 0 || private &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Politica]]||4 ||(Spanish) (No editing please)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Poke]]|| 5 || (first time so please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Powers That Be]]|| 2 || don't edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Prom]]|| W.I.P|| private - please don't edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Pure]](Lesbian romance stories)|| &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;0 WIP&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt; || ''' &amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;PRIVATE&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt; Rated mature for lesbian content but no adult content''' &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Psychodude]]||30+ ||Open to Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]|| 6 ||(Its Your Call)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Rebellion]]||5+ || Do Not Edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A random story]]||333+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||100+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Random III]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Random Four]]|| 25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Random Quota]] || 5 ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])&lt;br /&gt;
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|'''[[Remember]]''' ||70 ||(&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;red&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Do Not Edit Without Permission&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;) (&amp;lt;font color=&amp;quot;Orange&amp;quot;&amp;gt;'''&amp;lt;--Previously Featured!'''&amp;lt;/font&amp;gt;)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Rescue]]|| 36 || (Complete, Do not edit.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Resident evil]] || 53 || Abandoned, therefore public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || 3 ||(W.I.P. Please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Run From The Mob]]||10+ || Work On It, It's Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Say Goodbye]]|| 11+ || WIP PRIVATE&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[School Life]]|| 6 ||(WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Seek]]|| 10 ||(W.I.P.  pages. No editing please!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Segon]]|| 103 ||(W.I.P. No editing please!) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sengoku Basara: Romance]]|| 24 ||(Under Construction - No editing) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Serial X]]||25+ || Work On It, It's Public&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| 12+ ||((Do not edit))&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Short And Random Stories]]||250+ ||(25 stories)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Short of Darkness]]|| 2 ||(W.I.P) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sisters Love]]|| 15+ || (W.I.P) (please don't edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]|| 80+ ||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing) ('''Previously Featured''')&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Skyrim Adventures]]||W.I.P|| private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Sleepless Night ]]|| 0 || Private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Smile]]|| 180+ ||(WIP)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sniper]]|| 38+ || WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sonic 1]] || 10 ||(Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Sonic &amp;amp; Shadow]] || 26&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[soul evolution]]|| 6+ ||public but keep it serious&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || 14 ||(First Mission complete, more to come!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spirit Warp]] || 40+ ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ splinter cell]]||3+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||90+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||40+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]|| 8 ||(Just started, feel free to add on)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Spongebob Gone Wrong]]||5+||(Edit, sure, but please use proper grammar and spelling!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || 13 ||(Just started)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Stay Away From The Rebel ]]|| 0 || private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Survival]] || 30+ ||W.I.P.&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Survivor: Zombie Apocalypse]]|| 4 || (Just started. Please DO NOT edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Super Self-Help Survival Guide]]|| WIP || No editplz!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Super Survival]] || 17+ ||WIP&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Swimming Pools]] || (Work In Progress)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[the sword of death]]|| 0 ||(w.i.p do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || 30+ ||Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||40+ || started 6/24/09&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ The Bracelet Mystery]]|| 1 || private, do not edit&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Thought Of Me]]||200+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Tres_Coetus_Coloris]]|| 50 ||WIP DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Triforce ]]|| 30+ ||(WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ The Never Ending Quest for Prison]]|| 0 || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Twin Empires]]||10+ (W.I.P)||(Ask for permission)Continuing the main storyline, seeking other writers to help grow the story by adding their own characters&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The War Fighter Program]]||W.I.P ||Collaboration with Michaltheanhur&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Undead]] || 50+ ||(WIP. Help Wanted!)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| 7+ ||under work do not modify without permission please.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[University Secrets!]] || 14 ||(Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Unknown Tales]] ||2+ ||edit freely)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Urban Explorer: A Descent Into Madness ]]|| 30+ || In Progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Violence]]|| 20 || in progress&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[AMC's The Walking Dead]]|| WIP|| Based on the Walking Dead show by AMC. This is a fan story, I do not own Walking Dead or it's content. Written by Alex Brownstone&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Ward]]|| 0 || Private: my first time so refrain from editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ war in Europe ]]|| 100+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || 150+ || in progress)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Warhammer 40,000: Renegade]]|| 6 || in progress (public)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[The Wasteland]]|| 11 ||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Week of the Zombies]]||25+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Welcome, Governor: A tale of the Terran Commonwealth]]|| 0 || (Semi-private. PM for details.)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Whodunit?]]|| 0 || (WIP do not edit)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[With Great Power Comes Great Girls]]|| 0 || work in progress, please don't edit!&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[  Wolverine Adventure]]|| 10+ || public &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[A World Blooms]]|| 88 || WIP; please ask before editing&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[World of Warcraft: Paths of Destiny]] || 0&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[World Undone]] || 15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Xozen Infection ]]|| 34+|| A zombie Story, (Sensible editing is welcomed but please contact me before you)&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || 18 ||(People can work on this) &lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Your Own Game of Life]]|| 1 || WIP, Edits are Welcome&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&lt;br /&gt;
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|[[Zach]]||15+ &lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 08 Mar 2016 11:42:55 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Darky</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:All_Mature_Stories</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Cassie will help Dan</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Cassie_will_help_Dan</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;Ok,&amp;quot;sighed Cassie, &amp;quot;I wil help you out, what do I have to do?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Dan smirked at her and said:&amp;quot; First you have to prove me that you your tools&amp;quot; and walked to the toolsstation. He took out a screwdriver, a key nut and a pipe wrench. Then he laid them on the floor. &amp;quot;So,&amp;quot;he said,&amp;quot;why don't you give the pipe wrench?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Cassie looked puzzled at the tools. She bends over to pick up the pipe wrench and then....&lt;br /&gt;
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[[her dress rides up her bare butt]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[nothing happened Cassie hands over the pipe wrench]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[category: Cassie's Horrible Family]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 07 Mar 2016 18:38:38 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Darky</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Cassie_will_help_Dan</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Cassie will help Dan</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Cassie_will_help_Dan</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with '&amp;quot;Ok,&amp;quot;sighed Cassie, &amp;quot;I wil help you out, what do I have to do?&amp;quot; Dan smirked at her and said:&amp;quot; First you have to prove me that you your tools&amp;quot; and walked to the toolsstation. He t…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;Ok,&amp;quot;sighed Cassie, &amp;quot;I wil help you out, what do I have to do?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Dan smirked at her and said:&amp;quot; First you have to prove me that you your tools&amp;quot; and walked to the toolsstation. He took out a screwdriver, a key nut and a pipe wrench. Then he laid them on the floor. &amp;quot;So,&amp;quot;he said,&amp;quot;why don't you give the pipe wrench?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Cassie looked puzzled at the tools. She bends over to pick up the pipe wrench and then....&lt;br /&gt;
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[her dress rides up her bare butt]&lt;br /&gt;
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[nothing happened Cassie hands over the pipe wrench]&lt;br /&gt;
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[category: Cassie's Horrible Family]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 07 Mar 2016 18:36:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Darky</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Cassie_will_help_Dan</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Errands with Mrs. Dowd - Car Repair</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Errands_with_Mrs._Dowd_-_Car_Repair</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Darky:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Cassie and Mrs. Dowd went to the nearest garage in town. When they arrived Cassie get's out of the truck. &amp;quot;Hello&amp;quot;, Cassie calls out in search for someone who could help them. &amp;quot;Hi…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Cassie and Mrs. Dowd went to the nearest garage in town. When they arrived Cassie get's out of the truck. &amp;quot;Hello&amp;quot;, Cassie calls out in search for someone who could help them. &amp;quot;Hi there missy&amp;quot; said a dark voice. Cassie looks up to the voice and found out it came from a man who was at least 6 foot 5, muscilair and rough. &amp;quot;Can I help ya missy?&amp;quot; he asked her. Mrs. Dowd, who has arrived a little later, explains the problem to the mechanic.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I can fix your problem&amp;quot;, said the mechanic, &amp;quot;but one condition&amp;quot; he grins at Cassie.&lt;br /&gt;
Mrs. Dowd asked:&amp;quot;What is that condition sir?&amp;quot; The mechanic, named Dan, said:&amp;quot;Missy has to assist me, because I'm all alone today.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;That would not be a problem, would it Cassie?&amp;quot; asked Mrs. Dowd.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Cassie will help Dan]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Cassie will not help Dan, Mrs. Dowd wil punish Cassie]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Wed, 02 Mar 2016 18:44:40 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Darky</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Talk:Errands_with_Mrs._Dowd_-_Car_Repair</comments>		</item>
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