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User talk:JackalRobot

-Sentinel- — Wed, 09 May 2012 01:34:22 GMT

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== Reviewed! ==

Ooft! 6/10. To be honest, I expected that. I intentionally chose to make the story linear so I wouldn't have had to make a large amount of pages. Chapter 1 was basically just character development, so you would get an understanding of what a grave situation you were in. Chapter 2 will soon see more choices, and probably turn into some action sequence at the end. I'm only going to make three or four endings. If you would like, I can happily tell you what happens in the end.

Liked your review, your review was much tougher than my ones, but, that's not necessarily a bad thing. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 20:44, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha I understand your reasoning, well, I'll just tell you this. Chapter 2 will be the most interesting part of the two, since it will most likely include the endings, so I would then have to flesh out the other three characters.

On a separate note, I hope that the review will not turn off people who are thinking about reading the story, then again, this isn't the film industry, more likely than not they will play through the story, then read the review. Perhaps realise that the story was extremely linear, play it again just to be sure, then agreeing with your points and moving on. XD.

Also, did you only just join this site? I've been wondering since I was the first person to talk on your page. You going to write a story in the future? Or are you just here to edit grammar mistakes and comment? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 08:38, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

== Reply ==

Hey JR! Thanks for leaving me the message. I noticed the same link mistake, which is a mistake mind you (the slang for guys in Australia is Bloke). At first I was deterred to add the (m) or (f) whenever the choices were the same, and just change the story to any gender, but then I remembered the reason that I chose to give people the choice of their gender. So that different scenario's would occur, without the need to be sexist or anything.

Oh, and I borrowed your User background for my own, I hope that's okay. I can get rid of it if you take offence that I didn't ask for permission first. --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 09:32, 22 November 2011 (AUS EST)

I have no Big Plans for Avast!, in fact I surprised myself by adding to it. I figure Sentinel will pick it up at some point but if you or anyone else wants to follow my lead feel free. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Cheers ==

Thanks mate! :D --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 12:52, 23 November 2011 (AUS EST)

==Categorized==

I don't mind at all if someone else helps the newbies get to know how to use the site by issuing the initial warn1 and categorizing their first postings for them. I don't need to be involved unless said newbie blows off the first and second warnings. I certainly appreciate the help on those days when some enthusiastic newbie posts fifty pages with no category! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:49, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==Avast!==

Sorry for the lateness of my reply, my interest in this website comes and goes like the tide. You can edit [[Avast!]] all you want if it floats your boat (pun intended), I kind of abandoned this game. --[[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] 01:32, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

User talk:JackalRobot

-Sentinel- — Wed, 09 May 2012 01:32:25 GMT

-Sentinel-: /* Avast! */

== Reviewed! ==

Ooft! 6/10. To be honest, I expected that. I intentionally chose to make the story linear so I wouldn't have had to make a large amount of pages. Chapter 1 was basically just character development, so you would get an understanding of what a grave situation you were in. Chapter 2 will soon see more choices, and probably turn into some action sequence at the end. I'm only going to make three or four endings. If you would like, I can happily tell you what happens in the end.

Liked your review, your review was much tougher than my ones, but, that's not necessarily a bad thing. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 20:44, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha I understand your reasoning, well, I'll just tell you this. Chapter 2 will be the most interesting part of the two, since it will most likely include the endings, so I would then have to flesh out the other three characters.

On a separate note, I hope that the review will not turn off people who are thinking about reading the story, then again, this isn't the film industry, more likely than not they will play through the story, then read the review. Perhaps realise that the story was extremely linear, play it again just to be sure, then agreeing with your points and moving on. XD.

Also, did you only just join this site? I've been wondering since I was the first person to talk on your page. You going to write a story in the future? Or are you just here to edit grammar mistakes and comment? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 08:38, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

== Reply ==

Hey JR! Thanks for leaving me the message. I noticed the same link mistake, which is a mistake mind you (the slang for guys in Australia is Bloke). At first I was deterred to add the (m) or (f) whenever the choices were the same, and just change the story to any gender, but then I remembered the reason that I chose to give people the choice of their gender. So that different scenario's would occur, without the need to be sexist or anything.

Oh, and I borrowed your User background for my own, I hope that's okay. I can get rid of it if you take offence that I didn't ask for permission first. --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 09:32, 22 November 2011 (AUS EST)

I have no Big Plans for Avast!, in fact I surprised myself by adding to it. I figure Sentinel will pick it up at some point but if you or anyone else wants to follow my lead feel free. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Cheers ==

Thanks mate! :D --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 12:52, 23 November 2011 (AUS EST)

==Categorized==

I don't mind at all if someone else helps the newbies get to know how to use the site by issuing the initial warn1 and categorizing their first postings for them. I don't need to be involved unless said newbie blows off the first and second warnings. I certainly appreciate the help on those days when some enthusiastic newbie posts fifty pages with no category! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:49, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==Avast!==

Sorry for the lateness of my reply, my interest in this website comes and goes like the tide. You can edit Avast! all you want if it floats your boat (pun intended), I kind of abandoned it. --[[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] 01:32, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

User talk:JackalRobot

-Sentinel- — Wed, 09 May 2012 01:31:29 GMT

-Sentinel-:

== Reviewed! ==

Ooft! 6/10. To be honest, I expected that. I intentionally chose to make the story linear so I wouldn't have had to make a large amount of pages. Chapter 1 was basically just character development, so you would get an understanding of what a grave situation you were in. Chapter 2 will soon see more choices, and probably turn into some action sequence at the end. I'm only going to make three or four endings. If you would like, I can happily tell you what happens in the end.

Liked your review, your review was much tougher than my ones, but, that's not necessarily a bad thing. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 20:44, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha I understand your reasoning, well, I'll just tell you this. Chapter 2 will be the most interesting part of the two, since it will most likely include the endings, so I would then have to flesh out the other three characters.

On a separate note, I hope that the review will not turn off people who are thinking about reading the story, then again, this isn't the film industry, more likely than not they will play through the story, then read the review. Perhaps realise that the story was extremely linear, play it again just to be sure, then agreeing with your points and moving on. XD.

Also, did you only just join this site? I've been wondering since I was the first person to talk on your page. You going to write a story in the future? Or are you just here to edit grammar mistakes and comment? --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 08:38, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

== Reply ==

Hey JR! Thanks for leaving me the message. I noticed the same link mistake, which is a mistake mind you (the slang for guys in Australia is Bloke). At first I was deterred to add the (m) or (f) whenever the choices were the same, and just change the story to any gender, but then I remembered the reason that I chose to give people the choice of their gender. So that different scenario's would occur, without the need to be sexist or anything.

Oh, and I borrowed your User background for my own, I hope that's okay. I can get rid of it if you take offence that I didn't ask for permission first. --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 09:32, 22 November 2011 (AUS EST)

I have no Big Plans for Avast!, in fact I surprised myself by adding to it. I figure Sentinel will pick it up at some point but if you or anyone else wants to follow my lead feel free. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Cheers ==

Thanks mate! :D --[[User:Brunosius|Brunosius]] 12:52, 23 November 2011 (AUS EST)

==Categorized==

I don't mind at all if someone else helps the newbies get to know how to use the site by issuing the initial warn1 and categorizing their first postings for them. I don't need to be involved unless said newbie blows off the first and second warnings. I certainly appreciate the help on those days when some enthusiastic newbie posts fifty pages with no category! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:49, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==Avast!==

Sorry for the lateness of my reply, my interest in this website comes and goes like the tide. You can edit Avast! all you want if it floats your boat (pun intended), I kind of abandoned it.

Exit the building immediately

-Sentinel- — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 20:29:22 GMT

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"You, walk ahead of us," you order Lord Colton, putting your rapier under his throat. Then you turn to one of your men : "Jorge, try to support Edward. We're getting out of here."

"Captain," protests Jorge, "he's dying. We should take care of him immediately."

"We don't ''have'' that kind of time! Do as I say."

You get out of the small office and make your way to the jail's exit as quickly as possible. Your progress slows almost to a crawl when Edward passes out from loss of blood. Just as you are about to reach the exit, four armed guards arrive from outside, blocking your path. Their uniforms are slightly more elaborate and their muskets look brand-new... They look like some sort of elite unit.

"I'll kill the governor if you try anyth--" you begin. Before you finish your sentence, one of the guards shoots you in the right shoulder. Your arm goes numb and you drop the rapier. Your men cannot fire back, as you did not give them the time to reload their pistols before you left the office. With perfect discipline, the other three guards aim their muskets at your men and shoot in unison. Before you know it, you are the last pirate standing. Edward the Red succombs to his wound just a moment later.

You are hanged on the public place the next morning.

'''THE END.'''

[[Category: Avast!]]

Open fire at the guards

-Sentinel- — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 20:08:13 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'You nod briefly to your men in a silent signal. Then, as one, you all point your pistols at the guards and open fire. A brief but violent shootout ensues... When the smoke clears…'

You nod briefly to your men in a silent signal. Then, as one, you all point your pistols at the guards and open fire. A brief but violent shootout ensues... When the smoke clears, two of your men and all of the guards blocking your path are dead. A long, tense silence follows. Then a bell rings nearby... the jail's alarm, no doubt. You do not have much time left to clear the building.

"You're all going to hang for this," Lord Colton promises quietly.

The wounded Edward lets out a moan of pain, and you notice that the pool of blood under his leg is expanding at an alarming rate.

[[Exit the building immediately]]

[[Administer first aid to Edward]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

You lose control

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 14:42:06 GMT

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You wake up several hours later on a sandy beach with a dry throat and a painful lump on your head. All of your weapons and equipment have been taken away, except for a single pistol. The sun is about to set... and ''Midnight'' is nothing but a black dot at the horizon. Oh, great. You have been marooned.

"Ah. You're finally awake," notes Raquel, standing right next to you. "Roderigo hit you a little hard when he took command..."

"Where are we?" you ask.

"No idea... It's a small island. It took me only a few minutes to walk around it. We're the only ones here. At least there are fruits and drinkable water, but I don't think we'll see civilization ever again." She sits on your lap with an enigmatic little smile. "But things could be a hell of a lot worse, couldn't they?"

Darn right they could.

'''THE END.'''

[[Category: Avast!]]

You keep your crew under control

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 14:11:40 GMT

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You swear to your men that you will bear responsibility for Edward's missing eye and that no one else has to fear the Pirate King's revenge. Thanks to your commanding voice and a lot of rum, you manage to bring them under some sort of control. They still resent you and Raquel for this, and '''YOU LOSE 2 AUTHORITY POINTS.'''

A few days later, [[you reach Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Allow the duel

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 14:02:40 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'The duel is violent but short. Edward the Red is undeniably a good fighter, but even his fancy training at a fencing school did not prepare him for Raquel's dirty tricks. Less th…'

The duel is violent but short. Edward the Red is undeniably a good fighter, but even his fancy training at a fencing school did not prepare him for Raquel's dirty tricks. Less than half a minute after the beginning, the young man is down, badly winded by a kick in the guts. Before you can stop her, Raquel reaches down and plucks out his left eye with her bare fingers. He is taken thrashing and screaming to the infirmary.

Your men stare at Raquel in horror.

"The Pirate King will have us flayed for this!" exclaims Roderigo.

"All because of her!"

"And the captain, too," agrees a third. "He shouldn't have allowed this duel. Now we're all dead men."

"I say we maroon her!"

"Maroon 'em both!"

Looks like you have a mutiny on your hands... Time to count your [[Authority Points]].

'''If you have 5 or more,''' [[you keep your crew under control]].

'''If you have 4 or less,''' [[you lose control]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

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-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:55:10 GMT

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|[[ The Walk]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[War of Nations]]|| (65+ pages)
|-
|[[What have they done?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[What Happens In The Forest]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[WW2]] || (6+ pages, please don't edit unless asked to. Original writers seem to have abanoned this.)
|-
|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[Your Life]] || (Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
|-
|[[You Need a Job]] || (WIP, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Z-Day]] || (Under Construction, by skullphantom)
|}

==Quizzes and Challenges==
'''Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):'''

{|
|[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Quiz Show]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[A Quizzy Show]]||(10 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || (25 pages)
|-
|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[The Rock Paper Scissors game]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Trivia Time]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz 2]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Game Trivia I]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Games]]|| (Finished, pretty lame, but it's my first.)
|-
|}

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''
{|
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||(10+ pages Do not edit, I am renovating it)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||(25 pages)(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||(70 pages)(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| (101+ pages)
|-
|[[Awake]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Badassery]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || (10+ pages, open for editting)
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || (200+ pages) Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || (Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[City Life]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||(22+ pages)
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| (34+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||(24+ pages)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| (Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| (New! 35 pages)
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The Foreign Devil]]|| (Under construction, so please don't edit)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || (Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||(175+ pages)
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||(20 pages)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| (JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ High School]]|| (WIP)Please Do Not Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| (Warning: Gruesome)||(Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| (25+ Pages, Public)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[In The Army]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| (the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| (JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] (GREAT RIBS. UNLIMITED POSSIBILITIES.) || (15.5+ pages BUT SO MUCH MORE)
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || (Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||(175+ pages)(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[A New Life]]||(40+ pages Public)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || (just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || (I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[out in the woods]] ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| (No editing please)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||(30+ pages Open to Public)
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[A random story]]||(333+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Random III]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| (36 pages) (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || (53 pages. Do NOT edit!.)
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || (W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||(10+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[School Life]]|| (WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Serial X]]|| (25+ pages. Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.]]|| (7/15/10 12+ pages ((Do not edit)))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||(250+ pages)(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| (38+ pages, WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||(3+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||(80+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || (30+ pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||(40+ pages, started 6/24/09)
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[ To be named later ]]|| (IDK pages)*Bentenmike*
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| (WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| (+20 Pages, in progress)
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || (150+ pages, in progress)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[World Undone]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || (12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||(50+ Pages,Work on It, It's Public)
|}

==Adult Stories==
'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.

{|
|-
|[[Alien Adventure]]||(15+ pages) (Prepare for Close Encounters.)
|-
|[[All Alone]] (Lesbian)||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Archie comics vore]]||(10 pages)
|-
|[[Archie's Gay Adventure]] (Gay)||(75+ pages) (Public) (The popular cartoon character is gay and looking for some action!)
|-
|[[Archie's Sexual Adventure]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Assassin]]||(20+ pages) (WIP no edit)
|-
|[[Band Forming thing]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Barge Story]]||(5+ pages) (WIP)
|-
|[[Benighted]]||(10+ pages) (WIP no edit)
|-
|[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]]||('''600+''' pages) (Gay erotica, WIP, please don't edit)
|-
|[[Blackmailed]]||(200 pages)
|-
|[[Bleached]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Boy They Called Hero]] || (Public) (Gay adventurers in a fantasy world!)
|-
|[[The Cage]]||(12 pages, WIP. Sabbat Creation Rites. Please don't edit yet)
|-
|[[Choose Your Destiny]]||(80+ pages)
|-
|[[College Girls]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Creekside University]]|| (Just Started)
|-
|[[Days in the Life of Sammy Simm]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Death Will Come]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Dementa]]|| (5+ pages)(Sexualized Survival Horror - new work in progress)
|-
|[[The Devils Daughter]] || (430+ pages)(Public) (Satan needs sacrifices and you're the girl to get them!)
|-
|[[Digimon Blue]]|| (Under Construction)(Public)
|-
|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||(00345 pages) (Hail Eris!)
|-
|[[Druglord]]||(26 pages)
|-
|[[Freelancer: The Universe of Possibility]]||(18 pages)
|-
|[[Freshman Year]] || (20 pages so far, Feel free to add more)
|-
|[[Friday night]] || (43 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Fucking Classy]] || (WIP, feel free to edit)
|-
|[[Furry World]]||(230+ pages) (Public) (The funny and sexy adventures of anthros.)
|-
|[[A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME]] (Lesbian)||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Cookies]]||({{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}} pages) (Public -- see [[Girl Scout Cookies/Editing Notes|editing notes]] first please)
|-
|[[Girlngirl High]] (Lesbian)||(32 pages)
|-
|[[The Greatest Weekend Ever]]|| (19 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Hardon High]] (Gay)||(50 pages)
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[High School]]||(270+ pages)(Public-Just don't edit Gothic Male or Female)
|-
|[[High School: The Way It Should Have Been]]|| (50+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Hollywood Romp]]||(17 pages)
|-
|[[Home Early]]|| (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[iCarly: iAm Horny]]|| (Just Started, Do not edit!)
|-
|[[Icarly: Iwant sex]]|| (80+ pages)
|-
|[[I'll Be Gentle...]]|| (50+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Incubus]] (Bisexual Pirate Fantasy)||(41 pages)
|-
|[[Invisible]]||(45 pages) (Public) (You're invisible and the possibilities are endless!)
|-
|[[Jade Rogue]]|| (Just Started...kitana134 editing) (13 pages)
|-
|[[A Job]] || (40 pages)
|-
|[[Lady Van Helsing]]||(80+ pages) (The sexual adventures of the world's greatest monster hunter.]]
|-
|[[left 4 sex]]|| (Just started)
|-
|[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Let's Burn Down a Castle]]||(40+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Life of Unlimited Chances]]||(12 pages)(An every Kind of Story)
|-
|[[Mage Games]] (Gay Fantasy)||(30 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Mob Story]]|| (12 pages)
|-
|[[Neighborhood]]|| (29 pages)
|-
|[[Ninja Kittehs From Space!]]||(20+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Oops! You're Naked!]] || (55 pages)(open to edit)
|-
|[[Pedo romp]] (Pedo story)||(54 Pages)
|-
|[[Perverted Thirteen-Year-Old]]||(43 pages)
|-
|[[Pokesex]]||(35+ pages) (Pokemon sex story)
|-
|[[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|A Portrait of an American Girl Named Myra]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Possessed]]||(123 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[The Quest For Treguards Treasure]]|| (271 pages)
|-
|[[Rampage]]||('''600+''' pages) (Public) (An evil soul goes on a sexual rampage.)
|-
|[[Red Mobster]]||(31 pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Sensual Realms]]|| (36 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[The Sexual Adventures of You]]|| (70+ pages)
|-
|[[The World is Yours]] || (Anything, and everything, can happen.)
|-
|[[Scarlet Lovers]]|| (2 pages) (Vampire romance in a city of blood.)
|-
|[[School is Hell]] || (5+ pages) (The new girl enrolls at an evil high school.)
|-
|[[Sex Zombies]]|| (Do not edit)
|-
|[[ShapeShifter]] || (Just Started) (Public)
|-
|[[SimLife]]||(5+ pages) (WIP)
|-
|[[Slave to the Mist]]|| (42 pages)
|-
|[[Smutty Sex Romp]]|| ('''10,000+''' pages)
|-
|[[Star Trek: A Night with Troi]]|| (29 pages)
|-
|[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]||('''500+''' pages) (Public) (The Star Wars Universe at your command.)
|-
|[[Stalker]] ||(100+ pages) (The love of your life is back and this time you're not letting her get away.)
|-
|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||(300+ pages)
|-
|[[Summer Party]] || (14 pages) (Public, please help)
|-
|[[Supershifter]] || (12+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Survive]] || (18 pages) (2 choices, 1 life)
|-
|[[Survival Story]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Supervillain]] || (6 pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Teenager]] || (60+ pages)
|-
|[[Testing Facility #80085]]|| (An erotic story of a Man/Girl being experimented on) (All and every edit is appreciated)
|-
|[[The 007 Stories]] || (20+ pages) (Public, so you may edit, but ask for permission from me first)
|-
|[[The New God]] || (Just started, public)
|-
|[[This Story Will Piss You Off]]||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[Tree of Doom]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[University Daze]]|| ('''600+''' pages)
|-
|[[Vampire Weekend]]|| (200+ pages, gorish and disturbing, avoid if you're not into it, [[Vampire weekend:help|help]] and [[Vampire weekend:Comments| comments]] much appreciated)
|-
|[[Victim]]|| (150+ pages) (Public)
|-
|[[War and Sex]]|| (170+) (A low fantasy adult story)
|-
|[[Where are you?]]||(Just started, feel free to edit)
|-
|[[X-Men Academy]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|}

==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

==Creating a Story==
If you have an idea for a story, you might like to try [[Idea Pitches|pitching your idea to other users]] and seeing how interested people might be in playing your story, what you could do to make playing your story fun, and who might be interested in collaborating with you to write it. Once you have done that, you can create it by entering your desired name for the Story into the search box and clicking '''Go'''. If the name has not already been taken, click this exact title to start the story. There are three general types of story. The first is the branching-plot story (an example of this is the Choose Your Own Adventure series of gamebooks), which require the reader to make choices but are otherwise like a regular novel. The second type is the role-playing game adventure, which combines the branching-plot novel with simple role-playing rules such as attack points and monster battles. The third type is the trivia quiz, where the player must answer questions as if they were on a game show.

==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
</nowiki>
</pre>

The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

Every page should have the category at the bottom. This keeps track of all the pages in the story. You can copy the category line from the previous page to the one you're working on. The category, obviously, is ''never'' 'name of story you're working on'. You type in the actual name of the story.

For additional help in wiki syntax, click [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing here]

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear red on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

To avoid accidentally crossing with other users' stories, it may be best to create pages with more than just an option name, like [[Unicorns]] or [[Open your eyes]]. Instead, when you create a new page, call it [[You have to slay The Dragon/_Page 1]] or [[YOUR CRAZY/Give up]]. You can have the link name be whatever you want though, like this:
<nowiki>[[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]]</nowiki> will appear as [[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]] on the page.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki> </nowiki>. Example:
*<nowiki>This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.</nowiki> will show as:
This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
*Add a basic, or main, timeline of background events during the period that the character is making choices in - those events are usually out of the character's control. This will help add consistency.
*Pages with major spelling, grammar or other problems, but not problems that render the page spam and a candidate for deletion, should be categorized in the Pages Requiring Attention Category to get other editors to help fix it up. If a page is not yet complete, add it to Category:Pages Under Construction so people know the editor is still working on it and it does not need to have someone improve it.
*Story Endings should be categorized with Category:Endings.

== Poor Taste Stories ==

'''FOR 21+''' No limits to content. Don't blame us.

{|
|-
|[[Dark Nights]] ||(3 pages)
|-
|[[Fuckin Screwed Up]]||(90+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[The Guy Who Held His Breath Forever]]||(Work in Progress)
|-
|[[Terror in Tibet]]||(DO NOT EDIT, for guys only.)
|-
|[[Kill As Many People As You Can]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Kill The President]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Molest Little Boys]] (Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[One Messed Up Story]] (A Story For Guys)||(100+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Short and Funny.]]||(5+ pages)
|-
|[[S.W.A.T.]]||(Just Started, PLEASE HELP WITH IDEAS, ITS PUBLIC)
|-
|[[Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]||(Just Started, Work On It(please), It's Public)
|}

==Meta-Games==
*[[CYOA Drinking Game]] (Teen/Adult, though you can play with soda if you're under the minimum age for drinking alcohol.)
*[[You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When|You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When...]]

[[Category: System Pages]]

Disallow the duel

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:50:58 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with '"Sorry," you declare, "I won't allow it. Edward, please stay away from Raquel from now on." "I don't need you to protect me from him," protests Raquel angrily. "No, you don't. …'

"Sorry," you declare, "I won't allow it. Edward, please stay away from Raquel from now on."

"I don't need you to protect me from him," protests Raquel angrily.

"No, you don't. But Edward needs me to protect him from you."

Both would-be duellists look disappointed, but accept your decision. A few days later [[you reach Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Just wait and watch

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:45:03 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'After a while, Raquel grows tired of Edward's advances. "Listen, boy. You're far from the first man who tries to get into my pants, and you won't be the last. So I'm making you …'

After a while, Raquel grows tired of Edward's advances.

"Listen, boy. You're far from the first man who tries to get into my pants, and you won't be the last. So I'm making you the same offer I make everyone who wants me. Fight me in a duel. If I lose, I'm yours for a whole night. If I win, I rip one of your eyes out."

"I accept," says the young man without hesitation.

Roderigo takes you by the arm.

"You can't allow this, captain," he warns. "Edward the Red is the Pirate King's son. If Raquel kills or maims him, the Pirate King will blame us. He's known as a vengeful man."

[[Allow the duel]]

[[Disallow the duel]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Break his nose

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:34:19 GMT

-Sentinel-:

You walk over to Edward and, without preamble, smash his nose in a sickening ''crunch''. He collapses, and his astonishment quickly turns to outrage. All of your crewmen stare at you with wide, horrified eyes... What's the matter with them? You were sure they'd be happy to see you teach a lesson to this little asshole.

Later, at sunset, Father Pedro finds you alone as you stand at the prow.

"Captain," he says, clearing his throat, "I'm afraid Edward's nose will stay crooked."

"So? Serves him right."

"You don't understand, captain," says Pedro softly. "You just hit ''the Pirate King's own son''. Now your men are afraid of the consequences. They think the Pirate King will want revenge for this. The King's reputation for cruelty and ruthlessness is probably exaggerated, but some of the men still think you've made us a terrible enemy."

Turns out '''YOU HAVE LOST 1 AUTHORITY POINT.'''

A few days later, [[you reach Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Break his nose

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:32:30 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'You walk over to Edward and, without preamble, smash his nose in a sickening ''crunch''. He collapses, and his astonishment quickly turns to outrage. All of your crewmen stare at…'

You walk over to Edward and, without preamble, smash his nose in a sickening ''crunch''. He collapses, and his astonishment quickly turns to outrage. All of your crewmen stare at you with wide, horrified eyes... What's the matter with them? You were sure they'd be happy to see you teach a lesson to this little asshole.

Later, at sunset, Father Pedro finds you alone as you stand at the prow.

"Captain," he says, clearing his throat, "I'm afraid Edward's nose will stay crooked."

"So? Serves him right."

"You don't understand, captain," says Pedro softly. "You just hit ''the Pirate King's own son''. Now your men are afraid of the consequences. They think the Pirate King will want revenge for this. The King's reputation for cruelty and ruthlessness is probably exaggerated, but the men are still afraid."

Turns out '''YOU HAVE LOST 1 AUTHORITY POINT.'''

A few days later, [[you reach Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Politely but firmly put him back in his place

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:14:16 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'You walk over to the smug young man. "Listen to me, lad," you tell him with a cold smile, "you may be the Pirate King's son, but I'm the only king aboard ''Midnight''. And, you …'

You walk over to the smug young man.

"Listen to me, lad," you tell him with a cold smile, "you may be the Pirate King's son, but I'm the only king aboard ''Midnight''. And, you see, I'd really appreciate it if you stopped annoying my crewmen... and crew-woman."

"Oh yeah? Is she your girl?" he asks, smirking.

Before you can even think of an answer, Raquel violently slams you against the railing and presses her lips against yours... her wet, warm tongue worming its way into your mouth and licking your front teeth with a somewhat alarming eagerness. Edward the Red watches the scene with dismay and jealousy while your men cheer and laugh. For the rest of the travel, your young passenger is no longer quite as arrogant...

For teaching him this lesson in humility, '''YOU GAIN 1 AUTHORITY POINT.'''

A few more days later, [[you reach Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Return to Skull Crag

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:56:25 GMT

-Sentinel-:

The wind blows in your favor on your way back to Skull Crag, and you make very good time. You and your men are happy to have fulfilled this dangerous mission. If the rumors are true, the Pirate King rewards handsomely those who succeed in their tasks.

There is only one thing that annoys you, though : Edward the Red. The young man proves to be quite an arrogant young bastard, always acting like he owns the place. He also takes a liking to Raquel and regularly looks at her with obvious interest. Today, he is even trying to flirt with her. She looks rather irritated...

[[Politely but firmly put him back in his place]]

[[Break his nose]]

[[Just wait and watch]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Return to Skull Crag

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:54:51 GMT

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The wind blows in your favor on your way back to Skull Crag, and you make very good time. You and your men are happy to have fulfilled this dangerous mission. If the rumors are true, the Pirate King rewards handsomely those who succeed in their tasks.

There is only one thing that annoys you, though : Edward the Red. The young man proves to be quite an arrogant young bastard, always acting like he owns the place. He also takes a liking to Raquel and regularly looks at her with obvious interest. Today, he is even trying to flirt with her. She looks rather irritated...

[[Politely but firmly put him back in his place]]

[[Punch him in the face]]

[[Just wait and watch]]

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They come for you

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:15:31 GMT

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Several weeks pass at the penal colony.

One night, as you dig a grave on the beach for a fellow convict who just died of cholera, your gaze catches a black shape on the sea, some distance away from the coast. Could it be... ''Midnight''? No, it can't be... Surely it's nothing but a hallucination. You blink, get back to work, then look up again. No, ''Midnight'' is really here, apparently waiting for you. Trembling with excitement, you throw your shovel aside, dive in the sea and swim as fast as you can to your ship.

Your men haul you on board, grinning. They welcome you back at the head of the crew and drink in your honor. You thank them warmly.

Time to sail back to [[the high seas]].

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You are left to your own devices

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:05:18 GMT

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Turns out your crewmen can do without you : they do not seem to think it worth their trouble to come and free you from this place. By now, they have probably already elected a new captain. You spend the rest of your life at the penal colony.

'''THE END.'''

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The penal colony

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 02:02:36 GMT

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Captured by the forces of law and order, you have been shipped to a tiny penal colony on a remote island of the Caribbean. It's a dreary existence made of toil, sweat, fear and despair. You are always hungry and disease runs rampant. Your fellow convicts are all thugs and murderers. But there is hope... Perhaps your men are very loyal to you. Perhaps they are so incredibly loyal that they will come and get you.

Hey, it ''could'' happen...

'''If you have 8 or more Authority Points,''' [[they come for you]].

'''If you have 7 or less,''' [[you are left to your own devices]].

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Surrender to the guards

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:57:35 GMT

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You and your men drop your weapons : you are too greatly outnumbered to have any hope. The guards promptly tie you down and throw you in cells for the rest of the night. The next morning, you are all given a cursory trial for piracy and sent to [[the penal colony]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Execute Lord Colton

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:55:37 GMT

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You casually put a bullet in Lord Colton's head in retaliation. Congratulations, you just killed your hostage... now the guards are free to butcher you and your men. Which they promptly do.

'''THE END.'''

[[Category: Avast!]]

They are with you

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:52:10 GMT

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After an instant of hesitation, your men draw their own pistols and aim them at the governor and his bodyguards. Outnumbered, the two bodyguards slowly lay down their weapons.

"Thank you for your cooperation," you say with cheerful smile. "We've been sent to get Captain Edward the Red out of this hellhole. Bring him here and no one gets hurt." Then, almost as an afterthought: "Bring also Miguel, please."

"Do it," Lord Colton tells his bodyguards, his voice calm and collected despite the guns pointed at his face.

The two bodyguards throw you a hateful glare, then leave the room. Just a moment later, they come back with two prisoners. One of them is Miguel. The other is a strapping, red-haired youth with a goatee, whose expression is a mixture of boredom and vague amusement.

"I take it my father sent you?" the young man asks.

"That's right, Eddie," you answer, "we're getting you out of here."

"You are not getting ''anyone'' out of here," Lord Colton warns you, his voice chilling. "You really think you can get away with this?"

You realize there is a gaggle of guards blocking your exit. They are pointing their muskets at you.

"I won't let Edward the Red escape," spits Lord Colton. He turns to a guard: "Shoot our prisoner in the knee."

The guard dutifully fires his musket at Edward's knee. The young man collapses with a startled yelp, a lot of blood escaping from his wound... You see he needs immediate medical attention and will be unable to run for a while. This makes escape considerably more complicated.

[[Open fire at the guards]]

[[Have your men tend to Edward's wound]]

[[Execute Lord Colton]]

[[Surrender to the guards]]

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They are with you

-Sentinel- — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 01:30:10 GMT

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Fight your way out

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 23:19:44 GMT

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Bad idea... The guards not only outnumber you massively, they are also more disciplined and better trained. You and your men attempt a glorious last stand, but it ends up being a tad too messy and one-sided to have much glory in it.

'''THE END.'''

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They do nothing

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 23:18:23 GMT

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"Screw that," spits one of your men. "Yer insane. I ain't taking a governor hostage." The others nod in agreement.

A cold smile touches Lord Colton's lips. "I don't know what the hell you're trying to do, young man," he chuckles mirthlessly, "but it looks like you're doing it alone. If I were you, I'd drop that pistol immediately."

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

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Take Lord Colton hostage

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 23:13:34 GMT

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You draw your pistol and point it straight at Lord Colton's forehead. The governor's two bodyguards immediately grab their own muskets and point them at you. A tense silence fills the room. Your men just stand there, nervous and confused... They stare at you as if you've gone insane.

"Well," you tell them impatiently, "are you with me or not?"

'''If you have 6 or more [[Authority Points]],''' [[they are with you]].

'''If you have 5 or less,''' [[they do nothing]].

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Accept the gold and leave

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 23:02:51 GMT

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Your men stare at you with puzzlement as you leave the jail.

"Why did you do that?!" exclaims one. "We were supposed to free Edward the Red while we were inside!"

"Yeah," agrees another, "and now we gave them Miguel."

Your men blame you for the failure of the plan but, being pirates, they must admit that Lord Colton's hefty reward makes the situation somewhat more bearable. While you lose no Authority Points (this time), it is time to think of another plan... maybe [[storm the jail by night]] or [[kidnap one of Lord Colton's relatives]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Offer to buy Edward the Red's freedom with the gold

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 22:49:44 GMT

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Lord Colton's eyes grow cold.

"Why in the world would you want to free him?" he asks suspiciously. "You're not his accomplices, I hope? There's not enough gold in the world to buy that rascal's freedom."

[[Accept the gold and leave]]

[[Take Lord Colton hostage]] to get Edward out of prison

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Who pays us the reward?

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 22:46:13 GMT

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"Lord Colton himself, I believe," answers the guard. "For him, it's a personal matter."

He calls more guards, who take Miguel away --- your friend looks understandably confused, since this was not part of the plan. You are then led to a small office and told to wait here for your reward. You do not have to wait long. A tall, richly-dressed man with a short silver beard soon enters the room, followed by two heavily armed bodyguards.

"Ah... So you are the ones who brought in the dog who defiled my daughter," Lord Colton says. "I owe you a lot for this. Mr Jones?"

One of his bodyguards hands you a heavy pouch filled with gold coins.

"You have my eternal gratitude. But I'm afraid I'm too busy for more formalities. That will be all, I think."

[[Accept the gold and leave]]

[[Offer to buy Edward the Red's freedom with the gold]]

[[Take Lord Colton hostage]] to get Edward out of prison

[[Category: Avast!]]

Who pays us the reward?

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 22:40:41 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with '"Lord Colton himself, I believe," answers the guard. "For him, it's a personal matter." He calls more guards, who take Miguel away --- your friend looks understandably confused…'

"Lord Colton himself, I believe," answers the guard. "For him, it's a personal matter."

He calls more guards, who take Miguel away --- your friend looks understandably confused, since this was not part of the plan. You are then led to a small office and told to wait here for your reward. You do not have to wait long. A tall, richly-dressed man with a short silver beard soon enters the room, followed by two heavily armed bodyguards.

"Ah... So you are the ones who brought in the dog who defiled my daughter," Lord Colton says. "I owe you a lot for this. Mr Jones?"

One of his bodyguards hands you a small chest filled with gold coins... at least two hundred crowns by your estimates. Your men are impressed, and '''YOU GAIN 1 AUTHORITY POINT.'''

"Again, thank you. But I'm afraid I'm too busy for more formalities. That will be all, I think."

[[Accept the gold and leave]]

[[Offer to buy Edward the Red's liberty with the gold]]

[[Take Lord Colton hostage]] to get Edward out of prison

[[Category: Avast!]]

Ignore him and keep walking

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 20:25:25 GMT

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Your unflinching walk unnerves the guard : "I told you to---" '''''BANG!'''''

The guard abruptly drops dead. One of your men reaches the top of the stairs, his pistol smoking, and grins at you.

"Good job, Diego," you congratulate him.

Followed by your men, you march Edward out of the jail. The guards keep a safe distance but continue to follow you. Right now you are standing in the open, but Drakesport's winding backstreets are not far.

"Here's what we're going to do," you say in a low voice. "As soon as we reach the backstreets, we all take different directions and run as fast as we can to the harbor. We meet at ''Midnight''."

"I'm pretty sure it's well past midnight," replies Edward.

"''Midnight'' is the name of my ship."

"...Oh, I see."

"Ready?" you murmur when you reach the nearest buildings.

"Aye," your men agree.

'''"NOW!"'''

You dart into a random backstreet while Edward and your men do the same. The guards' commander shouts : "After them!", but you after just a few twists and turns you have already lost your pursuers in the labyrinthine city. You sprint towards the port, but get lost a few times. You are the last one to reach the port. Luckily, all of your men (and, most importantly, Edward) have made it.

Thanks to the success of the breakout, '''YOU GAIN 2 AUTHORITY POINTS.'''

Time now to [[return to Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Drop the pistol

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 20:15:43 GMT

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You drop your pistol... but before it hits the ground, Edward the Red pulls out a dagger (how the hell did he sneak it into his cell?) and casually buries it to the hilt under the guard's jaw. The guard collapses with a gurgle, and you quickly retrieve your pistol before the other guards can react.

"Thank you," you whisper to your hostage.

"Hey, you're the one breaking me out," he smiles lazily.

Followed by your men, you march him out of the jail. The guards keep a safe distance but continue to follow you. Right now you are standing in the open, but Drakesport's winding backstreets are not far.

"Here's what we're going to do," you say in a low voice. "As soon as we reach the backstreets, we all take different directions and run as fast as we can to the harbor. We meet at ''Midnight''."

"I'm pretty sure it's well past midnight," replies Edward.

"''Midnight'' is the name of my ship."

"...Oh, I see."

"Ready?" you murmur when you reach the nearest buildings.

"Aye," your men agree.

'''"NOW!"'''

You dart into a random backstreet while Edward and your men do the same. The guards' commander shouts : "After them!", but you after just a few twists and turns you have already lost your pursuers in the labyrinthine city. You sprint towards the port, but get lost a few times. You are the last one to reach the port. Luckily, all of your men (and, most importantly, Edward) have made it.

Thanks to the success of the breakout, '''YOU GAIN 2 AUTHORITY POINTS.'''

Time now to [[return to Skull Crag]].

[[Category: Avast!]]

Shoot the guard

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:46:54 GMT

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Lightning-quick, you whirl to face the scarred guard and shoot him point-blank in the face. About half of his head is blown up. But now your pistol is empty... and next thing you know, five guards simultaneously open fire on you. You are dead before you hit the ground.

'''THE END.'''

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Take Edward hostage

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:41:58 GMT

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You aim your pistol at Edward's head, yelling : "Try something stupid and I kill him!" The Pirate King's son glances at you with vague puzzlement, but not a trace of fear. He just looks... bored.

Some of the guards take aim, but their commander barks at them : "Don't! Edward the Red is too precious! If he dies, we lose our only means of pressure over the Pirate King!"

"Better get out of our way," you say.

The commander hesitates. "Do as he says," he orders at last.

Of course, you know they must be preparing to set a trap of some sort, so you stay wary as you march Edward along the corridors and up the stairs. The guards leave the way open, but keep their muskets pointed at you and your men. No doubt they're preparing to shoot as soon as your hostage is in no immediate danger.

You reach the top of the stairs... and feel the cold muzzle of a musket pressing against your temple.

"Drop your gun," whispers the musket's owner, a burly guard with a large facial scar.

[[Drop the pistol]]

[[Ignore him and keep walking]]

[[Shoot the guard]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Take Edward hostage

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:39:27 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'You aim your pistol at Edward's head, yelling : "Try something stupid and I kill him!" The Pirate King's son glances at you with vague puzzlement, but not a trace of fear. He jus…'

You aim your pistol at Edward's head, yelling : "Try something stupid and I kill him!" The Pirate King's son glances at you with vague puzzlement, but not a trace of fear. He just looks... bored.

Some of the guards take aim, but their commander barks at them : "Don't! Edward the Red is too precious! If he dies, we lose our only means of pressure over the Pirate King!"

"Better get out of our way," you say.

The commander hesitates. "Do as he says," he orders at last.

Of course, you know they must be preparing to set a trap of some sort, so you stay wary as you march Edward along the corridors and up the stairs. The guards leave the way open, but keep their muskets pointed at you and your men. No doubt they're preparing to shoot as soon as your hostage is in no immediate danger.

You reach the top of the stairs... and feel the cold muzzle of a musket pressing against your temple.

"Drop your gun," whispers the musket's owner, a burly guard with a large facial scar.

[[Drop the pistol]]

[[Keep walking]]

[[Shoot the guard]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Take the middle-aged guard hostage

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:18:27 GMT

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You put the middle-aged guard in front of you as a human shield, pressing your pistol against his temple.

"Don't shoot!" you warn. "Get out of our way!"

Without hesitation, one of the guards takes aim with his musket and shoots your hostage in the head. He collapses at your feet.

Well, crap... Didn't see that coming, did you?

[[Take Edward hostage]]

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Order the guard to unlock the cell door

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:09:39 GMT

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You point your pistol at the man.

"Open this door."

The guard frowns. "Is it the Pirate King who sends you?" he asks as he grudgingly turns one of his keys into the lock. Captain Edward the Red watches the whole scene with a kind of lazy detachment, as if only semi-interested in his own liberation. As soon as the red-haired young man drags his feet out of his cell, another guard on patrol turns a corner.

"Get reinforcements!" the middle-aged guard shouts at him. "They're freeing the Pirate King's son!"

The other guard blinks in surprise, then runs back the way he came. A moment later, more guards burst into the corridor, their muskets raised. "Drop your weapons!" one of them commands. "You're surrounded!"

[[Take the middle-aged guard hostage]]

[[Take Edward hostage]]

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Let the tailor live

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 18:01:53 GMT

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Satisfied, you leave the tailor's workshop with your new uniforms. You go back to ''Midnight'', handcuff Miguel and take him with you. Then, dressed as Royal Navy officers, you and your four men walk Miguel to Drakesport's jail, a squat grey building that sits right next to the sea. Two guards are standing at the door.

"Halt! Who goes there?" shouts a big, red-haired guard.

"We're bringin' this prisoner," you grunt, trying to imitate a dour British soldier. "He's called Miguel, surely ye've heard of him."

"Ah, yes. Of course we have." He squints at you strangely. "Wait here please." He goes back inside the building.

A minute later, a dozen armed guards burst out of the jail: "Hands up! Drop your weapons!"

"But we're officers of the Navy!" you protest.

"No you're not," replies the red-haired guard as his colleagues surround you. "These uniforms are fake. The badges are all wrong."

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Pay 45 crowns

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 18:00:44 GMT

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You pay the tailor 45 gold crowns (quite a hefty sum even by pirate standards) and leave his workshop with your new uniforms. You go back to ''Midnight'', get Miguel and tie his hands behind his back. Then, dressed as Royal Navy officers, you and your four men walk Miguel to Drakesport's jail, a squat grey building that sits right next to the sea. Two guards are standing at the door.

"Halt! Who goes there?" shouts a big, red-haired guard.

"We're bringin' this prisoner," you grunt, trying to imitate a dour British soldier. "He's called Miguel, surely ye've heard of him."

"Ah, yes. Of course we have." He squints at you strangely. "Wait here please." He goes back inside the building.

A minute later, a dozen armed guards burst out of the jail: "Hands up! Drop your weapons!"

"But we're officers of the Navy!" you protest.

"No you're not," replies the red-haired guard. "These uniforms are fake. The badges are all wrong."

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Pay 45 crowns

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 18:00:27 GMT

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Buy his silence with your rapier

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:58:23 GMT

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You skewer the smug little counterfeiter with your rapier and leave his basement with your new uniforms. You go back to ''Midnight'', get Miguel and handcuff him. Then, dressed as Royal Navy officers, you and your four men walk Miguel to Drakesport's jail, a squat grey building that sits right next to the sea. Two guards are standing at the door.

"Halt! Who goes there?" shouts a big, red-haired guard.

"We're bringin' this prisoner," you grunt, trying to imitate a dour British soldier. "He's called Miguel, surely ye've heard of him."

"Ah, yes. Of course we have." He squints at you strangely. "Wait here please." He goes back inside the building.

A minute later, a dozen armed guards burst out of the jail: "Hands up! Drop your weapons!"

"But we're officers of the Navy!" you protest.

"No you're not," replies the red-haired guard as his colleagues surround you. "These uniforms are fake. The badges are all wrong."

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Just tell us where he is and no one gets hurt.

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:55:59 GMT

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The guard blinks at you in astonishment, then his expression turns to contempt.

'''"INTRUDERS!"''' he roars.

Mere heartbeats later, you and your men are surrounded by a dozen armed guards

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Hey, need some gold?

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:54:30 GMT

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The middle-aged guard glances at your purse. "Ah, sure. Follow me."

He leads you through the corridors until he reaches what appears to be the guards' room. A dozen guards are busy eating or gambling.

"Arrest these men," he barks at them. "They tried to bribe me to tell them where we keep Edward the Red. They were sent by the Pirate King, no doubt."

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Fight your way out

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:52:50 GMT

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Bad idea... The guards outnumber you two to one, and are also more disciplined and better trained. You and your men attempt a glorious last stand, but it ends up being a tad too messy and one-sided to have much glory in it.

'''THE END.'''

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Surrender to the guards

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:47:13 GMT

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Order the guard to unlock the cell door

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:43:03 GMT

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You point your pistol at the man.

"Open this door."

The guard frowns. "Is it the Pirate King who sends you?" he asks as he grudgingly turns one of his keys into the lock. Captain Edward the Red watches the whole scene with a kind of lazy detachment, as if only semi-interested in his own liberation. As soon as the red-haired young man drags his feet out of his cell, another guard on patrol turns a corner.

"Get reinforcements!" the middle-aged guard shouts at him. "They're freeing the Pirate King's son!"

A moment later, guards burst into the corridor, their muskets raised. "Drop your weapons!" one of them commands. "You're surrounded!"

[[Take the middle-aged guard hostage]]

[[Take Edward hostage]]

[[Surrender to the guards]]

[[Fight your way out]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

Kill the guard

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:26:07 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with 'You leap at the guard and slit his throat with your rapier. He collapses in a pool of blood. You grab his keychain and test the keys one by one in the cell door. "Ah, my father…'

You leap at the guard and slit his throat with your rapier. He collapses in a pool of blood. You grab his keychain and test the keys one by one in the cell door.

"Ah, my father sends you?" asks Edward the Red calmly, his voice a lazy drawl.

"Yes, we're getting you out of here. Which key is it?"

"How should I know?" says Edward with an indifferent shrug. "Never noticed."

Another guard on patrol turns a corner. He immediately notices his colleague's corpse, then you and your men. With a gasp, he disappears from view and screams : "Intruders! Somebody help!"

"Better hurry up," mutters Edward.

"Thank you, I'm ''trying''," you say, exasperated, as you try yet another key.

Too late! Just as you manage to find the right key to open the cell door, several guards arrive from both sides of the corridor, their muskets pointed at you. When they see their dead colleague, they don't even bother arresting you... They open fire in unison, instantly killing all six of you before you can even draw a weapon.

'''THE END.'''

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Where do we lock him up?

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 17:12:23 GMT

-Sentinel-: Created page with '"Follow me," the guard says. He leads you downstairs, to the jail's basement. You look distractedly at the convicts, who glare back at you from behind their bars. "This one," …'

"Follow me," the guard says.

He leads you downstairs, to the jail's basement. You look distractedly at the convicts, who glare back at you from behind their bars.

"This one," whispers one of your men, grabbing your sleeve and pointing at a prisoner. "It's Edward the Red. I met him once, a few years back."

Indeed, the man looks different from the others, not quite as thuggish or shifty-eyed. He is young and red-haired, with a goatee, and he seems to keep an attitude of insolent dignity despite his condition. He is not too dirty or unkempt... He has obviously been here for a rather short time, maybe a week at most. You are sure that this is your man.

The guard stops and turns to you, suspicious : "It's this way. What are you looking at?"

[[Kill the guard]]

[[Order the guard to unlock the cell door]]

[[Category: Avast!]]

We've been ordered to interrogate him.

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:55:09 GMT

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The guard's suspicion grows.

"You're not Lord Colton's official interrogator... I suppose you have an official mandate?"

''*Jingle purse*'' "[[Hey, need some gold?]]"

''*Draw pistol*'' "[[Just tell us where he is and no one gets hurt.]]"

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Hey, need some gold?

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:50:50 GMT

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The middle-aged guard glances at your purse. "Ah, sure. Follow me."

He leads you through the corridors until he reaches what appears to be the guards' room. A dozen guards are busy eating or gambling.

"Arrest these men," he barks at them. "They tried to bribe me to tell them where we keep Edward the Red. Sent by the Pirate King, no doubt."

You are immediately surrounded and put under arrest. "Not everyone's corrupt, you know," the middle-aged guard tells you coldly as your are taken to your cells. All six of you are hanged the next morning.

'''THE END.'''

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Just tell us where he is and no one gets hurt.

-Sentinel- — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 16:40:59 GMT

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The guard blinks at you in astonishment, then his expression turns to contempt.

"INTRUDERS!" he roars.

Mere heartbeats later, you and your men are surrounded by a dozen armed guards, who promptly lock you up with the other convicts. You are hanged for piracy the next morning.

'''THE END.'''

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