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User talk:Platypus

2012-12-23T03:34:58Z

Zyrokon:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

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Zyrokon: I fixed the pages I added, if you want to check them to make sure they are properly in line with the story now feel free to do so.

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Super_Tramp: Why are you being such a 'Nazi' and giving me a hard time on my story? I have to save every once in a while even if the page isn't fully complete because if I don't I get logged out and all content that I did not save gets lost. So how about giving me a break before decided to leave me a new message every couple hours saying I'm not doing it right and deleting my content. I feel I deserve at least a day to organize my content. Merry Christmas.

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Finisher: Sorry about the missing category links and thank you for the heads up. I didn't notice it was missing and assumed it was automatic.

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Goohoojoo: Thanks for cleaning up some of the beginning of my new, back-connected story arc for Rampage. It's still a serious WIP and some of it isn't filled in yet.

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Bahawk: Got your message about adding title to each page. How do I go back to all the submitted pages and add title to each page?

Silentman97: Do what now? I'm at this so what am I supposed to do? OKAY!!! Dear GOd my Computer's been acting funny with this website so I've had a little trouble please get off my back I'll try to fix it okay? but just today it froze up three times.

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Hey bud, how have you been. Remember me?

I got a question for you. I found a different create your own story site. I am writing my own story on it. I was wondering if it is okay or not okay to post a link to said site on my profile so that readers of my work here can find things I write elsewhere? thx for the reply in advance

--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 14:48, 26 October 2012 (UTC)

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Hey Platypus,

Could you delete my pages I created? I need to do a major revision and would prefer to not have history. Thanks in advance. -Terrytens

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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options. -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website
Seth Xozen
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???
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thank you!!! i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]

peeta.luvr
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :]
peeta.luvr
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]

peeta.luvr again
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]

peeta.luvr
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to "catagorize a page" and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :]

peeta.luvr
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.

-- Fin
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL.
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I "fix" the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/<page> to /CYOA/Luka/<page>. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD

Also: apologies; please don't hate me.

-- Fin
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....

i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.

still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me.

anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people.

-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) [[User:DickingCream]]

: I've gotten a message like this as well. The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story. What exactly did I forget to do? [[User:Wonder Boy]]

Platypus,

I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

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== Oops! ==

Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Pokesex ==

Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD
-- Ghengar
== Name of wiki changed ==

More info here:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information

==Pokesex==
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on. You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages. How should I go about it?

Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.
-Thisisme

== Uncategorized pages ==

Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg

== Uncategorized pages ==

I don't know how to categorise stories either. Sorry! That's ok if you edit or delete the page that you think is not correctly written! --[[User: Lovetoread|Lovetoread]]
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Thanks Platypus!! Now I know how to categorise! ^_^

Uh...Plat..can you please tell me which pages I should categorize? I'm sure that every page has been categorized...If the gamebook is Elements of the Earth, can you leave it in the abandoned stories? I'll get back to it later.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 06:18, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

== Story titles in page titles ==

I disagree with your assertion that I should avoid using good page and link structure simply because other authors are not using them. These structure guidelines are outlined on the main page under the heading "Instructions" subheading "How to add a page". Do you feel that it is more important to keep page titles consistent even if they are equally readable, or that we should avoid the possibility of stepping on other stories?

--[[User:Lord Crontab|Lord Crontab]]

Grab the woman and kiss her passionately

2012-12-23T03:27:36Z

Zyrokon:

You walk up to the woman and grab her by the waist. You spin her around to face you and before she can protest, you kiss her deeply. You stop kissing her and move back a step. You could swear she kissed you back before you stopped.

She slaps you across the face. What did you think was going to happen?

She walks hurriedly into her car but doesn't drive away. She seems to be waiting on something.

Do you:
*[[Walk over to the car window]]
*[[Keep walking to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Steal the woman's car

2012-12-23T03:26:07Z

Zyrokon:

As the woman says goodbye to her son, you slip inside her car. You notice the keys are in the car so you decide to take the car for a little 'Test Drive'.

As you drive away, the woman runs after you, shouting, "Help, he stole my car!"

"Dumb bitch," you chuckle as you drive away in a brand new car.

What do you do:
*[[Drive to a strip club]]
*[[Drive to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Steal the woman's car

2012-12-23T03:25:22Z

Zyrokon:

As the woman says goodbye to her son, you slip inside her car. You notice the keys are in the car so you decide to take the car for a little 'Test Drive'.

As you drive away, the woman runs after you, shouting, "Help, he stole my car!"

"Dumb bitch," you chuckle as you drive away in a brand new car.

What do you do:
*[[Drive to the strip club]]
*[[Load up the sat-nav and drive to the woman's house ]]
*[[Drive to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Quickly go to work

2012-12-23T02:16:44Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'You walk hurriedly to work as you are eager to talk with your boss about your upcoming promotion. When you get there he gathers a meeting. Gregory, your boss, tells everyone "As …'

You walk hurriedly to work as you are eager to talk with your boss about your upcoming promotion.
When you get there he gathers a meeting.
Gregory, your boss, tells everyone "As you well know, our sales quota dipped in the last 6 months. But now because of Jack we are back on schedule, so we are offering him the job as Manager!"

Do you:
*[[Graciously accept the job]]
*[[Modestly accept the job]]
*[[Decline the job]]
*[[Make fun of your boss]]
*[[Tell your boss to go fuck a goat]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Let him leave

2012-12-23T02:08:24Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'You get back into your seat and watch Brandon as he sits down next to some emo girl. Do you: *Drop the children off as scheduled *Scan the bus for a body to shift into *…'

You get back into your seat and watch Brandon as he sits down next to some emo girl.

Do you:
*[[Drop the children off as scheduled]]
*[[Scan the bus for a body to shift into]]
*[[Shift your spirit into the bus]]
*[[Ask one pretty girl to stay behind on the bus]]
*[[Take the entire bus on an unscheduled field trip]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tyler Tyler|TieTie]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Take possession of the bus driver

2012-12-23T02:06:54Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'Your name is Tyler Tyler. Your friends call you "TieTie" as a nickname. The nickname was given to you for two reasons. Not only is your name Tyler Tyler, you also have a serious …'

Your name is Tyler Tyler. Your friends call you "TieTie" as a nickname. The nickname was given to you for two reasons. Not only is your name Tyler Tyler, you also have a serious bondage fetish. You have lost two girlfriends in the past because you liked tying them up a bit too much. You have been working as a school bus driver for nine years with a perfect record. You are a single 34-year-old man who lives alone. You are white and have blonde hair.

The man look around, startled that he is on a school bus. He gets ready to leave but you stop him.

Do you:
*[[Break his arm]]
*[[Let him leave]]
*[[Recommend he gets some rest]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tyler Tyler|TieTie]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Go onto the school bus

2012-12-23T02:02:01Z

Zyrokon:

You walk up to the school bus and knock on the door. The bus driver looks at you before opening the door and asking you to stand back as the bus departs. You walk onto the bus and look around at the staring children. Your gaze settles on the bus driver who is now getting out of his seat to evict you from the bus.

Do you:
*[[Scan the bus for a body to shift into]]
*[[Let the bus driver escort you off of the bus]]
*[[Run to the back of the bus]]
*[[Take possession of the bus driver]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-23T02:00:32Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's body. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your host's memory and learn your name is Jack Hill. You recently got engaged to the woman of your dreams after dating her for almost 2 years. He is on his way to work to get the promotion he deserves.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
*[[Grab the woman and kiss her passionately]]
*[[Quickly go to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Rampage

2012-12-23T01:57:55Z

Zyrokon:

You are a bodiless spirit looking to wreak havoc on humans. You come across a young-looking, pretty mother seeing her sixth-grade son get safely onto the school bus. A black cat is curled up on the hood of the mother's car. A man is walking past with a spring in his step. They all seem happy.

Time for you to trash their lives.

Do you take possession of the:
*[[Young, pretty mother]] (Jessica Jones)
*[[Sixth-grade boy]] (Brandon Jones)
*[[Black cat]]
*[[School bus driver]]
*[[Woman's car]]
*[[Man walking past]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=No One... yet}}|}

or if you've read this story before, feel free to skip ahead by going to [http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Category:Rampage_Victims the character index page].

[[Category: Rampage| ]]

Grab the woman and kiss her passionately

2012-12-23T01:55:57Z

Zyrokon:

You walk up to the woman and grab her by the waist. You spin her around to face you and before she can protest, you kiss her deeply. You stop kissing her and move back a step. You could have swore she kissed you back before you stopped.

(Slap) She slapped you across the face. What did you think was going to happen?

She walks hurriedly back to her car but doesn't drive away, she seems to be waiting on something.

Do you:
*[[Walk over to the car window]]
*[[Keep walking to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Grab the woman and kiss her passionately

2012-12-23T01:55:13Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'You walk up to the woman and grab her by the waist. You spin her around to face you and before she can protest, you kiss her deeply. You stop kissing her and move back a step. Yo…'

You walk up to the woman and grab her by the waist. You spin her around to face you and before she can protest, you kiss her deeply. You stop kissing her and move back a step. You could have swore she kissed you back before you stopped.

*Slap* She slapped you across the face.

She walks hurriedly back to her car but doesn't drive away, she seems to be waiting on something.

Do you:
*[[Walk over to the car window]]
*[[Keep walking to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Go onto the school bus

2012-12-23T01:51:37Z

Zyrokon:

You walk up to the school bus and knock on the door. The bus driver looks at you before opening the door and asking you to stand back as the bus departs. You walk onto the bus and look around at the staring children. Your gaze settles on the bus driver who is now getting out of his seat to evict you from the bus.

Do you:
*[[Let the bus driver escort you off of the bus]]
*[[Run to the back of the bus]]
*[[Take possession of the bus driver]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Steal the woman's car

2012-12-23T01:50:35Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'As the woman says goodbye to her son you slip inside her car, you notice the keys are still in the ignition so you decide to take the car for a little 'Test Drive' As you drive…'

As the woman says goodbye to her son you slip inside her car, you notice the keys are still in the ignition so you decide to take the car for a little 'Test Drive'

As you drive away the woman comes running after you shouting "Help, he stole my car"

"Dumb bitch" you chuckle as you drive away in a brand new car.

What do you do:
*[[Drive to the strip club]]
*[[Load up the sat-nav and drive to the woman's house ]]
*[[Drive to work]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man in a green jacket]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Go hang out with Brandon and Vincent

2012-12-23T01:40:30Z

Zyrokon:

You take a nice hot shower, making sure to shave your cunt. Then you put on a sexy black bikini before heading downstairs.

Your husband and son are still playing catch in the backyard. You decide to get a little tan while they are playing catch. You lay facedown on a towel.

"Bradon, Vincent, I don't want to get a sunburn. Would you two please put some suntan lotion on me?"

They immediately stop what they are doing, hurry over, and start rubbing oil all over you.

"I think I'm gonna get out of this bikini so I don't get any tan lines," you giggle.

"Jessica, what the hell?" your husband says.

"I am always right, Vincent," you tell him.

"Of course you're always right," he says.

You slide your bikini bottoms off and remove you top as well, leaving yourself butt naked, except for your amulet of course.

Do you:

*[[Make Vincent be a fluffer for you and Brandon]]
*[[Get double stuffed by father and son]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jessica Jones|Young-Looking, Pretty Mother]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Go onto the school bus

2012-12-23T01:35:09Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'You walk up to the school bus and knock on the door. The bus driver looks at you before opening the door and asking you to stand back as the bus departs. You walk onto the bus an…'

You walk up to the school bus and knock on the door. The bus driver looks at you before opening the door and asking you to stand back as the bus departs. You walk onto the bus and look around at the staring children. Your gaze settles on the bus driver who is now getting out of his seat to evict you from the bus.

Do you:
*[[Let the bus driver escort you off of the bus]]
*[[Run to the back of the bus]]
*[[Take possession of the bus driver]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:26:53Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Man walking past|Jack Hill]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:25:57Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man walking past]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:25:33Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
*[[Go to your house]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man walking past]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:25:09Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
*[[Go back home]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill|Man walking past]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:23:23Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
*[[Go back home]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:22:48Z

Zyrokon:

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Do you:
*[[Go onto the school bus]]
*[[Steal the woman's car]]
*[[Keep walking]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jack Hill]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:19:36Z

Zyrokon: You Are Possessing Jack Hill

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants. You search your hosts memory and learn your name is Jack Hill.

Man walking past

2012-12-21T17:18:04Z

Zyrokon: Created page with 'You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants.'

You take possession of the man's spirit. You are dressed in a green jacket and black pants.

Rampage

2012-12-21T17:15:37Z

Zyrokon:

You are a bodiless spirit looking to wreak havoc on humans. You come across a young-looking, pretty mother seeing her sixth-grade son get safely onto the school bus. A black cat is curled up on the hood of the mother's car. They all seem happy.

Time for you to trash their lives.

Do you take possession of the:
*[[Young, pretty mother]] (Jessica Jones)
*[[Sixth-grade boy]] (Brandon Jones)
*[[Black cat]]
*[[School bus driver]]
*[[Woman's car]]
*[[Man Walking Past]]
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or if you've read this story before, feel free to skip ahead by going to [http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Category:Rampage_Victims the character index page].

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