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TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2016-08-29T11:19:19Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy- his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and quickly find the queen huddling at the back of the ship, in what appears to be some kind of throne room. 

Calling her clothing excessive would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts. And no wonder, under all that fancy cloth and face-paint, she is little more than a girl only just starting puberty.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!

2016-01-20T02:49:00Z

Jkeyes:

Even after all this, you haven't even come close to your own climax. You lift her by the waist, her legs limp around you, and start pressing the bulbous head of your manhood into her flank. She mumbles incoherently, head still fuzzy after her mind-blowing orgasm.
"Sto... Stop!" She mutters thickly, as the realization makes it through to her brain that you are now trying to push something very large into a very tight hole. She struggles with you, hands pushing against you as hard as she can at the moment, futile as the attempt may be. You're almost there, the girl trying frantically to keep you out as you continue to press harder, though it's almost comical seeing such thin arms try to apply any real resistance.
Most of the head of your manhood is through the puckered entrance of her backdoor by the time her strength seems to be returning. From this position, you notice juice (flecked with blood from her obliterated virginity) trickling out of her pussy onto your dick, juice that's already applied a sort of lubricant. Using that to your advantage, you pull back, let it drip down the cleft of her buttocks for a second, and then ram it in. She shouts at the sudden pain as the head of your dick pops into her ass, and then ALL of it slides in at once!

Before, her hands had been pushing against your stomach, trying to keep you from entering, but as you pound repeatedly into the girl's divinely tight ass, they move to rest on her pussy. To your delight, after a moment the fingers of one hand start to play with her clit. As you watch, one of her fingers pushes into her pussy, then another enters her own hole, following your rhythm as you pound into her tight rear over and over again. She moans submissively as you increase the pace, then she jerks as her pussy squirts a few droplets into the air. Her legs close around you and she pulls you closer as her spasms start giving away the overwhelming pleasure she must be feeling, her entire body shaking and beginning to jolt as her pelvis thrusts to meet you as you keep pumping her ass. 
Her eyes open wide as her legs kick out, then her pussy squirts a stream of cum into the air, raining down on her chest and face. Another long squirt, her arms and legs shaking hard with each release as she gasps in a breath, almost sounding as if she were in pain were it not for the blissful expression on her face. Her breasts almost seem to be lactating a bit as she gives one last long squirt, you continuing to thrust into her back passage as she does so. 
[[TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!]] 
[[TPM: Bring another handmaiden into this, make it a threesome!]] 
[[TPM: She's had enough, drop the orgasm-stunned maiden on the floor and grab another one]] 
[[TPM: You're done with the handmaidens, time for a taste of royalty.]] 
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TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2016-01-17T01:20:11Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and finally, you find the queen huddling at the back of the ship, in what appears to be some kind of throne room. 

Calling her clothing excessive would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts. And no wonder, under all that fancy cloth and face-paint, she is little more than a girl, barely starting puberty.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2016-01-17T01:19:56Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and finally, you find the queen huddling at the back of the ship, in what appears to be some kind of throne room. 

Calling her clothing excessive would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts. And no wonder, under all that fancy cloth and face-paint, she looks little more than a girl, barely starting puberty.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Grab his leg and leap up there in his place, one less Jedi to worry about.

2016-01-17T00:51:13Z

Jkeyes:

You grab the Jedi's leg and pull him down, using his momentum and your own force power to launch up to the ramp and enter before it closes, the ship powering towards space. The native boy you nearly flattened with ''Bloodfin'' and another Jedi (a Padawan, if his braid is any indication) immediately come running in, no doubt expecting the bearded Jedi. 
When they see you instead, your robes caked in dust and blazing lightsaber in hand, their shock is clear, the boy backs up in terror and the padawan lights his own saber, watching you with a nervousness that his jedi training cannot completely conceal. 
He opens his mouth to say something, but before he can speak you cut him off with a swift strike toward him with your blade. The two of you engage in a duel, you casting aside your heavy outer cloak to stop it hampering your movements, and the boy creeping around the edges of the room to keep as far away from the two of you as possible. 

His abilities in this battle are fair, but the greater skill was with his master, and you quickly obtain the upper hand. A feint gets him to over-commit with a lunge and with the press of a button, your lightsaber sprouts its second blade- severing both the padawan's thumb and his lightsaber. He sinks to his knees in pain, defenseless and at your mercy. 

[[TPM: Have some fun with the Jedi!]] 
[[TPM: Kill him and have some fun with the boy!]] 
[[TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Tattooine, tracking the queen and her guardians.

2016-01-17T00:19:28Z

Jkeyes:

Following the escape of the Naboo monarch, your Master has sent you to bring her back to Naboo. Kicking and screaming, if need be. Complicating the matter slightly is the presence of the two Jedi that the Chancellor had sent and who seem to have established themselves as the Queen's bodyguards. Still, you've fought Jedi in the past, and come out of each encounter the victor. You don't expect this to be much different. 

Tracking the transmission sent from one of the Naboo officials, you arrive on the desert planet Tatooine. Setting down not far from one of the more densely-populated settlements, you send out several of the Dark Eye probe droids you have stored aboard your ship to explore the settlement.
Meanwhile, you settle down, waiting for the droids to report back. There's a tusken raider camp several clicks to your east, you have a comfortable vessel set up here, and all you need to do now is wait for the droids to give you information on the queen. 

[[TPM: The Jedi, the gungan, and a handmaiden has gone into the settlement, attack while they are divided!]] 
[[TPM: All of their hopes lie in the Boonta Eve race event, see what havoc you can produce there.]] 
[[TPM: They're leaving the planet with a boy, jump on your speeder and go after them!]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Darth Maul

2016-01-16T23:47:36Z

Jkeyes:

''Fear. Fear attracts the fearful, the strong, the weak, the innocent, the corrupt. Fear. Fear is my ally.'' 

You are Darth Maul. Born a son of Dathomir, you have been trained all your life by the Sith lord, Darth Sidious, to be his right hand. At long last, he has pronounced you ready. Now you are free. Free to savage a Republic that has long since grown fat and corrupt. 
Free to slake your thirsts on its complacent people. 
Free to show them why they should fear the Sith. 

Choose your setting. Where do you begin?
 
[[TPM: Coruscant, with your dark and mysterious Sith Master.]] 
[[TPM: Tattooine, tracking the queen and her guardians.]] 
[[TPM: Naboo, awaiting the Naboo retaliation force.]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM:Summon your ship from the surface.

2016-01-10T15:50:21Z

Jkeyes:

You retrieve the control unit from your belt and send a coded command to the ship still hidden on the planet below you. Though the Scimitar is one of the fastest starcraft in the galaxy (credit where it's due, Sienar knew his ships, even if he didn't know who he was selling it to) it will still take time for the dagger-shaped craft to take off and arrive at where the royal starship is orbiting Tatooine. 

You turn to your new (''concubine? Mate?'') companion. The young girl is rubbing her sore breasts, grimacing at the ache from where the underdeveloped mammaries are working overtime to replenish the milk they generated earlier. Unaware or uncaring of your eyes on her she turns slightly, fingers moving down her back to massage her reddened butthole. 
She catches your eye and smiles shyly. "Sore."

"You know what the best way of stopping it from hurting when we do that is?" You grin. 
The girl goes to shake her head, then pauses to reconsider. "Doing more of it?" 
You nod. She's a quick learner. 

She looks a little distressed. "Right now?" 

Now there's a thought. 

[[TPM: Fuck her butt again, right there and then.]] 
[[TPM: Hold off until your ship arrives and gather the rest of the handmaidens in the meantime.]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM:Summon your ship from the surface.

2016-01-10T15:45:28Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'You retrieve the control unit from your belt and send a coded command to the ship still hidden on the planet below you. Though the Scimitar is one of the fastest starcraft in the…'

You retrieve the control unit from your belt and send a coded command to the ship still hidden on the planet below you. Though the Scimitar is one of the fastest starcraft in the galaxy (credit where it's due, Sienar knew his ships, even if he didn't know who he was selling it to) it will still take time for the dagger-shaped craft to take off and arrive at where the royal starship is orbiting Tatooine.

You turn to your new (concubine? Mate?) companion. The young girl is rubbing her sore breasts, grimacing at the ache from where the underdeveloped mammaries are working overtime to replenish the milk they generated earlier. Unaware or uncaring of your eyes on her she turns slightly, fingers moving down her back to massage her reddened butthole.
She catches your eye and smiles shyly. "Sore."

"You know what the best way of stopping it from hurting when we do that is?" You grin.
The girl goes to shake her head, then pauses to reconsider. "Doing more of it?"
You nod. She's a quick learner.

She looks a little distressed. "Right now?"

Now there's a thought.

[[TPM: Fuck her butt again, right there and then.]] 
[[TPM: Hold off until your ship arrives and gather the rest of the handmaidens in the meantime.]]
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM:"Take me to the Queen."

2016-01-10T15:06:01Z

Jkeyes:

"Oh," the girl looks awkward for a moment. "I ''am'' the queen. I'm Padmé." 
You raise a brow quizzically. "Then the girl in all the make-up?" 
"Sabé. My decoy. Ever since my coronation we've been switching places anytime we thought there might be a danger to us." She looks stricken for a second. "Please don't hurt them. They probably won't understand about... us." 
"Of course not," you say in what you hope is a soothing manner, "Not so long as they don't do anything stupid." 
Padmé nods nervously, "I'll make sure that they do what you say." 

"Now," you stroke a lock of hair from her face with the back of a two fingers as you speak. "Are you going to come back to Naboo with me and sign Gunray's treaty?" 
The young queen looks conflicted for a moment, and you decide to push her harder. "My Master has a great deal of influence with the Trade Federation, but he will only be able to help your people if you do what I ask." As you speak, you let the tiniest amount of dark power into your voice to aid persuasion. 
Credit where it's due, the girl is tough, her mind does not bow easily (she probably only fell for you in the first place because of the state your fucking left her in), but then she finally nods. "Y-yes. I will." 
You smile, trying not to show too many teeth. 
"Very good. Come," you give her a nudge towards the elevator. "I need to call my ship." 

Padmé wraps herself around your muscled arm, threading her fingers through yours and nuzzling into you as the two of you squeeze into the elevator. 

Once you've returned to the main deck, all that remains is to: 
[[TPM:Round up the decoy and the other handmaidens.]] 
[[TPM:Summon your ship from the surface.]] 
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.

2016-01-10T15:01:38Z

Jkeyes:

Your eyes go wide with shock as the girl mashes her lips onto yours, backing you up against the wall of the small room as she keeps peppering your tattooed face with kisses. She is trying to push her tongue into your mouth by the time you recover enough to prise her off you and hold her at arm's length. She looks up at you, her brown eyes filled with something you cannot identify. 
You finally manage to find your voice, "What the hell..." 
The girl ''smiles'' before responding, "I love you." 
You blink. "What." 
"I love you! I've never met anyone before who I've felt this way about, all I can think about is you, I'll do anything for you!" 
Your brain is having trouble comprehending what your ears are telling it. "Even after all that I did to you?" 
She smiles again, actually starting to blush now. "Especially after all that." 
Incredulous, you reach into the force to search for any evidence of duplicity on the girl's part. There is none, but from the force you glean something of an explanation for all this. It would seem that this is a result of you subconsciously using your dark-side powers to ''bond'' your minds somehow. Combine that with the tumultuous mixture of emotions that she felt as you were fucking her, and the girl has latched onto you. The love she feels for you is absolutely real, you have merely taken emotions that were already there and unconsciously pushed them into something you can use.

You're jerked from your musings by the girl pulling your head down so she can kiss you again, and this time you don't resist as she clumsily sticks her tongue into your mouth. Clearly she is inexperienced in such ways. Plenty of time for that later, for now you break the kiss and tell her to: 

[[TPM:"Take me to the Queen."]] 
[[TPM:"You ever taken a dick in your mouth, girl?".]] 
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM:That's enough fun with the servants, time to get what you came here for.

2016-01-10T14:51:28Z

Jkeyes:

You wipe your dick off on a scrap of cloth left over from one of the handmaiden's clothes and then pull your pants back on. The whole purpose of your mission to this desert shithole was to find this Queen Amidala and bring her back to Naboo so that she could sign the treaty legalizing the Trade Federation's occupation of her planet. A cruel grimace crosses your face, being forced to kneel to a bunch of spineless Neimoidians would be nearly as humiliating for that little bitch as you stripping off her stupid gown. 
A snarl of annoyance bursts from your lips as you re-enter the main hold where you had left the queen earlier, only to find it empty- the stupid girl has run off! You stalk into the forward hold-nothing. Anger growing, you open the doors to the Royal quarters with a twist of the force and find the lavish bedroom empty. You turn back, fuming quietly to yourself as you try to work out where she could have run off to. The ship is in space! Where the hell does she think she can go?! A faint pang of worry stabs at your gut as you wonder if she might have reached one of the tiny escape-pods, but a glance at a control panel on the wall tells you that both of them are still docked to the ship.
You huff through your nose as you try and recall the brief glance you took of the Royal starship's schematics before you set off on your mission. Glancing at the large elevator built into the middle of the ship, you remember the places it goes to, the cockpit above you, and then below you- the droid bay! 
Of course the daft little slut would try and hide in the tiny space of the droid bay, thinking it was a refuge when really there was no escape for her in there. 

Grinning like a predator that's sighted prey, you move into the elevator and punch the icon for the droid bay. When the doors open however, your smile fades. The tiny droid bay is utterly devoid of anything approaching life, aside from the empty shells of several dissembled astromechs piled in the corner. With a snarl of frustration, you flick your wrist and send the empty droids flying across the room with a deafening clatter. So loud is the noise that you miss the initial sound of the elevator's doors opening and only realize that something is wrong when they clunk shut. 

You wheel around, suddenly horribly aware that you've forgotten your lightsaber, to see the brown-haired handmaiden standing there, still naked and her eyes fixed on you.

Before you can react, she lunges towards you and:

[[TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.]] 
[[TPM(HP): She punches you in the mouth.]] 
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{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!

2016-01-10T14:25:34Z

Jkeyes:

Pulling her up, first with the force, then a hand behind her neck, you bring her upper body up and pop an erect nipple into your mouth, sucking the milk out of the hard teat. The girl shudders as you keep pumping her butt, she's still cumming hard and in this position she's squirting juice onto your stomach. Her hands grab onto your shoulders as her legs wrap around your muscled abdomen, probably against her better judgment, and she moans as she starts getting into the rhythm. 
Bouncing her up and down on your dick, you get a hand down between the two of you and start pumping a couple of fingers into her pussy, sucking harder on the hot breast at your mouth, trying to coax more sweet juice from the overworked mammary. The girl squirms briefly, then just holds on tight, burying her face in your tattooed shoulder as the ride continues. 
Finally you start feeling your load build up, it's about damn time! Pushing her up against the metal wall as you keep pounding her, you suck harder, pumping your fingers as if jerking off as juice gushes around your hand. You can feel her pussy contracting on your fingers, ready to unload... 
[[TPM: Spray your load up her ass.]] 
[[TPM: Pull out and drop her, you're saving your stuff for a royal greeting.]] 
[[TPM: Take it out and ram her mouth for the release]] 
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TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!

2016-01-10T14:25:16Z

Jkeyes:

Pulling her up, first with the force, then a hand behind her neck, you bring her upper body up and pop an erect nipple into your mouth, sucking the milk out of the hard teat. The girl shudders as you keep pumping her butt, she's still cumming hard and in this position she's squirting juice onto your stomach. Her hands grab onto your shoulders as her legs wrap around your muscled abdomen, probably against her better judgment, and she moans as she starts getting into the rhythm.
Bouncing her up and down on your dick, you get a hand down between the two of you and start pumping a couple of fingers into her pussy, sucking harder on the hot breast at your mouth, trying to coax more sweet juice from the overworked mammary. The girl squirms briefly, then just holds on tight, burying her face in your tattooed shoulder as the ride continues.
Finally you start feeling your load build up, it's about damn time! Pushing her up against the metal wall as you keep pounding her, you suck harder, pumping your fingers as if jerking off as juice gushes around your hand. You can feel her pussy contracting on your fingers, ready to unload... 
[[TPM: Spray your load up her ass.]] 
[[TPM: Pull out and drop her, you're saving your stuff for a royal greeting.]] 
[[TPM: Take it out and ram her mouth for the release]] 
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TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!

2016-01-10T14:20:31Z

Jkeyes:

Even after all this, you haven't even come close to your own climax. You lift her by the waist, her legs limp around you, and start pressing the bulbous head of your manhood into her flank. She mumbles incoherently, head still fuzzy after her mind-blowing orgasm.
"Sto... Stop!" She mutters thickly, as the realization makes it through to her brain that you are now trying to push something very large into a very tight hole. She struggles with you, hands pushing against you as hard as she can at the moment, futile as the attempt may be. You're almost there, the girl trying frantically to keep you out as you continue to press harder, though it's almost comical seeing such thin arms try to apply any real resistance.
Most of the head of your manhood is through the puckered entrance of her backdoor by the time her strength seems to be returning. From this position, you notice juice (flecked with blood from her obliterated virginity) trickling out of her pussy onto your dick, juice that's already applied a sort of lubricant. Using that to your advantage, you pull back, let it drip down the cleft of her buttocks for a second, and then ram it in. She shouts at the sudden pain as the head of your dick pops into her ass, and then ALL of it slides in at once!

Before, her hands had been pushing against your stomach, trying to keep you from entering, but as you pound repeatedly into the girl divinely tight ass, they move to rest on her pussy. To your delight, after a moment the fingers of one hand start to play with her clit. As you watch, one of her fingers pushes into her pussy, then another enters her own hole, following your rhythm as you pound into her tight rear over and over again. She moans submissively as you increase the pace, then she jerks as her pussy squirts a few droplets into the air. Her legs close around you and she pulls you closer as her spasms start giving away the overwhelming pleasure she must be feeling, her entire body shaking and beginning to jolt as her pelvis thrusts to meet you as you keep pumping her ass. 
Her eyes open wide as her legs kick out, then her pussy squirts a stream of cum into the air, raining down on her chest and face. Another long squirt, her arms and legs shaking hard with each release as she gasps in a breath, almost sounding as if she were in pain were it not for the blissful expression on her face. Her breasts almost seem to be lactating a bit as she gives one last long squirt, you continuing to thrust into her back passage as she does so. 
[[TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!]] 
[[TPM: Bring another handmaiden into this, make it a threesome!]] 
[[TPM: She's had enough, drop the orgasm-stunned maiden on the floor and grab another one]] 
[[TPM: You're done with the handmaidens, time for a taste of royalty.]] 
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TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!

2016-01-10T14:17:44Z

Jkeyes:

Even after all this, you haven't even come close to your own climax. You lift her by the waist, her legs limp around you, and start pressing the bulbous head of your manhood into her flank. She mumbles incoherently, head still fuzzy after her mind-blowing orgasm.
"Sto... Stop!" She mutters thickly, as the realization makes it through to her brain that you are now trying to push something very large into a very tight hole. She struggles with you, hands pushing against you as hard as she can at the moment, futile as the attempt may be. You're almost there, the girl trying frantically to keep you out as you continue to press harder, though it's almost comical seeing such thin arms try to apply any real resistance.
Most of the head of your manhood is through the puckered entrance of her backdoor by the time her strength seems to be returning. From this position, you notice juice (flecked with blood from her obliterated virginity) trickling out of her pussy onto your dick, juice that's already applied a sort of lubricant. Using that to your advantage, you pull back, let it drip down the cleft of her buttocks for a second, and then ram it in. She shouts at the sudden pain as the head of your dick pops into her ass, and then ALL of it slides in at once!

Before, her hands had been pushing against your stomach, trying to keep you from entering, but as you pound repeatedly into the girl divinely tight ass, they move to rest on her pussy. To your delight, after a moment the fingers of one hand start to play with her clit. As you watch, one of her fingers pushes into her pussy, then another enters her own hole, following your rhythm as you pound into her tight rear over and over again. She moans submissively as you increase the pace, then she jerks as her pussy squirts a few droplets into the air. Her legs close around you and she pulls you closer as her spasms start giving away the overwhelming pleasure she must be feeling, her body shaking and beginning to jolt as her pelvis thrusts to meet you as you keep pumping her ass
Her eyes open wide as her legs kick out, then her pussy squirts a stream of cum into the air, raining down on her chest and face. Another long squirt, her arms and legs shaking hard with each release as she gasps in a breath, almost sounding as if she were in pain were it not for the blissful expression on her face. Her breasts almost seem to be lactating a bit as she gives one last long squirt, you continuing to thrust into her back passage as she does so. 
[[TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!]] 
[[TPM: Bring another handmaiden into this, make it a threesome!]] 
[[TPM: She's had enough, drop the orgasm-stunned maiden on the floor and grab another one]] 
[[TPM: You're done with the handmaidens, time for a taste of royalty.]] 
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TPM: Let go and move down to pop her cherry!

2016-01-10T14:14:59Z

Jkeyes:

You release the maiden's wrists and rise from her chest as it heaves from the relentless movements. You shuffle back a step and then lower again, grabbing her waist and lifting it so that her legs are to either side of your hips.
You position yourself, lock eyes with her again, aim... 
"Wait..." she pants, realizing your intentions a moment too late as you slam your entire length into her at once. 
She screams in pain as you thrust into her painfully tight pussy, but it's too good to let you stop for some simple pain. Her body quivers, her eyes screwing shut, toes curling and legs wrapping around your waist as she screams again, cumming hard from the massive sensory overload. Her pussy clenches on your penis so hard it feels like you're going to lose it as she screams and shudders in the throes of her first, ''massive'' orgasm. Then she goes limp, dazed by the massive dopamine overload flooding her brain, and making her pussy relax for long enough for you to pull out. The girl continues to twitch and jerk as the aftershocks zap through her, blood and pussy juice dripping onto the floor and her eyes rolling back into her head as she spasms again and again... 
[[TPM: Next girl!]] 
[[TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!]] 
[[TPM: That's good enough, time for the queen!]] 
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TPM: Let go and move down to pop her cherry!

2016-01-10T14:14:13Z

Jkeyes:

You release the maiden's wrists and rise from her chest as it heaves from the relentless movements. You shuffle back a step and then lower again, grabbing her waist and lifting it so that her legs are to either side of your hips.
You position yourself, lock eyes with her again, aim... 
"Wait..." she pants, realizing your intentions a moment too late as you slam your entire length into her at once. She screams in pain as you thrust into her painfully tight pussy, but it's too good to let you stop for some simple pain. Her body quivers, her eyes screwing shut, toes curling and legs wrapping around your waist as she screams again, cumming hard from the massive sensory overload. Her pussy clenches on your penis so hard it feels like you're going to lose it as she screams and shudders in the throes of her first, ''massive'' orgasm. Then she goes limp, dazed by the massive dopamine overload flooding her brain, and making her pussy relax for long enough for you to pull out. The girl continues to twitch and jerk as the aftershocks zap through her, blood and pussy juice dripping onto the floor and her eyes rolling back into her head as she spasms again and again... 
[[TPM: Next girl!]] 
[[TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!]] 
[[TPM: That's good enough, time for the queen!]] 
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TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2016-01-10T14:08:13Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and finally, you find the queen huddling at the back of the ship, in what appears to be some kind of throne room. 

Calling her clothing excessive would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
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TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2016-01-10T14:02:12Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and finally, you find the queen. 

Calling her clothing excessive would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
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TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.

2015-12-24T21:04:03Z

Jkeyes:

Your eyes go wide with shock as the girl mashes her lips onto yours, backing you up against the wall of the small room as she keeps peppering your tattooed face with kisses. She is trying to push her tongue into your mouth by the time you recover enough to prise her off you and hold her at arm's length. She looks up at you, her brown eyes filled with something you cannot identify. 
You finally manage to find your voice, "What the hell..." 
The girl ''smiles'' before responding, "I love you." 
You blink. "What." 
"I love you! I've never met anyone before who I've felt this way about, all I can think about is you, I'll do anything for you!" 
Your brain is having trouble comprehending what your ears are telling it. "Even after all that... that stuff I did to you?" 
She smiles again, actually starting to blush now. "Especially after all that." 
Incredulous, you reach into the force to search for any evidence of duplicity on the girl's part. There is none, but from the force you glean something of an explanation for all this. It would seem that this is a result of you subconsciously using your dark-side powers to ''bond'' your minds somehow. Combine that with the tumultuous mixture of emotions that she felt as you were fucking her, and the girl has latched onto you. The love she feels for you is absolutely real, you have merely taken emotions that were already there and unconsciously pushed them into something you can use.

You're jerked from your musings by the girl pulling your head down so she can kiss you again, and this time you don't resist as she clumsily sticks her tongue into your mouth. Clearly she is inexperienced in such ways. Plenty of time for that later, for now you break the kiss and tell her to: 

[[TPM:"Take me to the Queen."]] 
[[TPM:"You ever taken a dick in your mouth, girl?".]] 
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TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...

2015-12-23T04:54:25Z

Jkeyes:

Ignoring the young woman's pleas and wails of protest, you seize a fistful of her hair and pin her to the wall. You grab the robe's fluffy collar and tear it away, soon you are stripping the terrified queen of her eye-searingly awful attire and casting it over your shoulder onto the deck. Once your task is completed you gather up the bale of (no-doubt ridiculously expensive) clothing, stuff it into an ejection tube and with the press of a button, launch it into space.

You turn back to the now-naked queen. Tears of fear and humiliation trickle down her face, smearing her plaster-white makeup as she tries to wipe them away without moving her hands from where they struggle to trying to hide her nudity. The queen's red-robed handmaidens are all trying to squeeze themselves into a corner, desperate to keep away from you and to not suffer the fate of their monarch. The thought enters your head that it would be unfair for the Queen to have to suffer whilst her lowly handmaidens are untouched. You march over to the one at the front, the one the others seem to be trying to hide behind, and yank off her hood, letting her long brown hair fall down. She makes a grab for your wrist as you reach for the front of your robe, but you flick her hand away and rip the front of the orange robe open. The girl yelps and springs back, trying to cover herself as you snag the hem of her robe and tear that off too. This has the amusing side-effect of pulling the girl's legs out from under her, and she falls flat on her back with a painful-sounding ''smack'' sound.

The others protest, one of them even tries to fight you off; but at the end of the day, they're a trio of girls barely into puberty, and you're a Dark lord of the Sith. Their fear becomes your strength as you easily disrobe them and cast their clothing into the vacuum, leaving not to much as fabric between their trembling young flesh and you... 
[[TPM: ORGY Time!]] 
[[TPM: Royalty first, let her have your manhood!]] 
[[TPM: Go grab a handmaiden, you've earned a warmup!]] 
[[TPM: Business calls, you go to the cockpit to set a course.]]
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TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2015-12-23T04:23:19Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, his scream is cut off as you run him through. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards that try to challenge you, and finally, you find the queen. 

Calling her clothing extravagant would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe is accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded frame.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
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TPM:Fall asleep where you stand

2015-12-22T11:47:04Z

Jkeyes:

You are satisfied and utterly spent. You give in to your body's urge to sleep and collapse on the handmaiden, who gives a soft "Oof!" as the air is being pushed from her lungs. Before long, her hoarse cries for help coax another of the handmaidens in, who helps roll you off her companion. They quickly recognize that you've fallen asleep and one of them retrieves your lightsaber from the pile of your discarded robes. After a moment's fiddling with the controls, she ignites it and doesn't hesitate to plunge the glowing blade into your heart.
You awaken at that moment only to fall into a much deeper sleep immediately after seeing the smoldering hole in your chest. A slight smile forms on your lips as you slip into death...

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TPM:"Take me to the Queen."

2015-12-22T10:24:20Z

Jkeyes: Created page with '"Oh," the girl looks awkward for a moment. "I ''am'' the queen. I'm Padmé." You raise a brow quizzically. "Then the girl in all the make-up?" "Sabé. My decoy. Ever sinc…'

"Oh," the girl looks awkward for a moment. "I ''am'' the queen. I'm Padmé." 
You raise a brow quizzically. "Then the girl in all the make-up?" 
"Sabé. My decoy. Ever since my coronation we've been switching places anytime we thought there might be a danger to us." She looks stricken for a second. "Please don't hurt them. They probably won't understand about... us." 
"Of course not," you say in what you hope is a soothing manner, "Not so long as they don't do anything stupid." 
Padmé nods nervously, "I'll make sure that they do what you say." 

"Now," you put an arm around her thin shoulders in a companionable fashion. "Are you going to come back to Naboo with me and sign Gunray's treaty?" 
The young queen looks conflicted for a moment, and you decide to push her harder. "My Master has a great deal of influence with the Trade Federation, but he will only be able to help your people if you do what I ask." As you speak, you let the tiniest amount of dark power into your voice to aid persuasion. 
Credit where it's due, the girl is tough, her mind does not bow easily (she probably only fell for you in the first place because of the state your fucking left her in), but then she finally nods. "Y-yes. I will." 
You smile, trying not to show too many teeth. 
"Very good. Come," you give her a nudge towards the elevator. "I need to call my ship." 

Padmé wraps herself around your muscled arm, threading her fingers through yours and nuzzling into you as the two of you squeeze into the elevator. 

Once you've returned to the main deck, all that remains is to: 
[[TPM:Round up the decoy and the other handmaidens.]] 
[[TPM:Summon your ship from the surface.]] 
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TPM(HP): She punches you in the mouth.

2015-12-22T09:31:54Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'The girl's fist smashes into your mouth, rage and hate lending her enough strength to knock you to one knee. She yowls with pain and stumbles back clutching her hand, if you're l…'

The girl's fist smashes into your mouth, rage and hate lending her enough strength to knock you to one knee. She yowls with pain and stumbles back clutching her hand, if you're lucky she might have broken something. She looks around for something to use as a weapon as you shake your head to clear it. With a snarl, you reach through the force and pin her to the wall. 
"Brave of you, girl," you growl as you wipe a smear of blood from the corner of your mouth, "But I'd thought you'd had your fill of fun back in the throne room." 
You apply just a hint of pressure to your telekinetic grip on her throat, making her eyes bulge as she realizes how easy it would be for you to snap her head off completely. 
You move in closer, it would seem another lesson is called for. Then again, you've wasted enough time with this little whore, you need to get down to business. 
What do you do? 

[[TPM:Choke the little bitch into unconsciousness, then tie her up. You can come back for her later.]] 
[[TPM:Crush her throat, finish her off once and for all!]]
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TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.

2015-12-22T09:12:36Z

Jkeyes:

Your eyes go wide with shock as the girl mashes her lips onto yours, backing you up against the wall of the small room as she keeps peppering your tattooed face with kisses. She is trying to push her tongue into your mouth by the time you recover enough to prise her off you and hold her at arm's length. She looks up at you, her brown eyes filled with something you cannot identify. 
You finally manage to find your voice, "What the hell..." 
The girl ''smiles'' before responding, "I love you." 
You blink. "What." 
"I love you! I've never met anyone before who I've felt this way about, all I can think about is you, I'll do anything for you!" 
Your brain is having trouble comprehending what your ears are telling it. "Even after all that... that stuff I did to you?"
She smiles again, actually starting to blush now. "Especially after all that." 
You can only assume that this is a result of you subconsciously using your dark-side powers to corrupt her mind. Combine that with the tumultuous mixture of emotions that she felt as you were fucking her, and the girl has latched onto you. The love she feels for you is absolutely real, you have merely taken emotions that were already there and unconsciously pushed them into something you can use.

You're jerked from your musings by the girl pulling your head down so she can kiss you again, and this time you don't resist as she clumsily sticks her tongue into your mouth. Clearly she is inexperienced in such ways. Plenty of time for that later, for now you break the kiss and tell her to: 

[[TPM:"Take me to the Queen."]] 
[[TPM:"You ever taken a dick in your mouth, girl?".]] 
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TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.

2015-12-22T09:11:27Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'Your eyes go wide with shock as the girl mashes her lips onto yours, backing you up against the wall of the small room as she keeps peppering your tattooed face with kisses. She …'

Your eyes go wide with shock as the girl mashes her lips onto yours, backing you up against the wall of the small room as she keeps peppering your tattooed face with kisses. She is trying to push her tongue into your mouth by the time you recover enough to prise her off you and hold her at arm's length. She looks up at you, her brown eyes filled with something you cannot identify.
You finally manage to find your voice, "What the hell..."
The girl ''smiles'' before responding, "I love you."
You blink. "What."
"I love you! I've never met anyone before who I've felt this way about, all I can think about is you, I'll do anything for you!"
Your brain is having trouble comprehending what your ears are telling it. "Even after all that... that stuff I did to you?"
She smiles again, actually starting to blush now. "Especially after all that."
You can only assume that this is a result of you subconsciously using your dark-side powers to corrupt her mind. Combine that with the tumultuous mixture of emotions that she felt as you were fucking her, and the girl has latched onto you. The love she feels for you is absolutely real, you have merely taken emotions that were already there and unconsciously pushed them into something you can use.

You're jerked from your musings by the girl pulling your head down so she can kiss you again, and this time you don't resist as she clumsily sticks her tongue into your mouth. Clearly she is inexperienced in such ways. Plenty of time for that later, for now you break the kiss and tell her to:
[[TPM:"Take me to the Queen."]] 
[[TPM:"You ever taken a dick in your mouth, girl?".]] 
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TPM:That's enough fun with the servants, time to get what you came here for.

2015-12-22T08:36:00Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'You wipe your dick off on a scrap of cloth left over from one of the handmaiden's clothes and then pull your pants back on. The whole purpose of your mission to this desert shith…'

You wipe your dick off on a scrap of cloth left over from one of the handmaiden's clothes and then pull your pants back on. The whole purpose of your mission to this desert shithole was to find this Queen Amidala and bring her back to Naboo so that she could sign the treaty legalizing the Trade Federation's occupation of her planet. A cruel grimace crosses your face, being forced to kneel to a bunch of spineless Neimoidians would be nearly as humiliating for that little bitch as you stripping off her stupid gown.
A snarl of annoyance bursts from your lips as you re-enter the main hold where you had left the queen earlier, only to find it empty- the stupid girl has run off! You stalk into the forward hold-nothing. Anger growing, you open the doors to the Royal quarters with a twist of the force and find the lavish bedroom empty. You turn back, fuming quietly to yourself as you try to work out where she could have run off to. The ship is in space! Where the hell does she think she can go?! A faint pang of worry stabs at your gut as you wonder if she might have reached one of the tiny escape-pods, but a glance at a control panel on the wall tells you that both of them are still docked to the ship.
You huff through your nose as you try and recall the brief glance you took of the Royal starship's schematics before you set off on your mission. Glancing at the large elevator built into the middle of the ship, you remember the places it goes to, the cockpit above you, and then below you- the droid bay!
Of course the daft little slut would try and hide in the tiny space of the droid bay, thinking it was a refuge when really there was no escape for her in there.

Grinning like a predator that's sighted prey, you move into the elevator and punch the icon for the droid bay. When the doors open however, your smile fades. The tiny droid bay is utterly devoid of anything approaching life, aside from the empty shells of several dissembled astromechs piled in the corner. With a snarl of frustration, you flick your wrist and send the empty droids flying across the room with a deafening clatter. So loud is the noise that you miss the initial sound of the elevator's doors opening and only realize that something is wrong when they clunk shut.

You wheel around, suddenly horribly aware that you've forgotten your lightsaber, to see the brown-haired handmaiden standing there, still naked and her eyes fixed on you.

Before you can react, she lunges towards you and:

[[TPM(RP): She kisses you on the mouth.]] 
[[TPM(HP): She punches you in the mouth.]] 
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TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!

2015-12-22T08:32:51Z

Jkeyes:

Pulling her up, first with the force, then a hand behind her neck, you bring her upper body up and pop an erect nipple into your mouth, sucking the milk out of the hard teat. The girl shudders as you keep pumping her butt, she's still cumming hard and in this position she's squirting juice onto your stomach. Her hands grab onto your shoulders as her legs wrap around you, probably against her better judgment, and she starts moaning as she starts getting into the rhythm. Bouncing her up and down on your dick, you bring a hand down between the two of you and start pumping a couple of fingers into her pussy, sucking harder on the hot breast at your mouth, trying to coax more sweet juice from the overworked mammary. The girl squirms briefly, then just holds on tight, burying her face in your tattooed shoulder as the ride continues.
Finally you start feeling your load build up, it's about damn time! Slamming her up against the metal wall as you keep pumping her, you suck harder, pumping your fingers as if jerking off as juice gushes around your hand. You can feel her pussy contracting on your fingers, ready to unload... 
[[TPM: Spray your load up her ass.]] 
[[TPM: Pull out and drop her, you're saving your stuff for a royal greeting.]] 
[[TPM: Take it out and ram her mouth for the release]] 
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TPM: Spray your load up her ass.

2015-12-22T07:49:36Z

Jkeyes:

The maiden goes rigid against you as she cums, pussy juice splattering down onto the deckplate and soaking your legs. You actually feel her teeth sink into your shoulder as she reflexively bites your tattooed flesh.
This proves to be the thing that pushes you over the edge, your manhood swells in the girl's vice-tight asshole and then blasts a torrent of thick cum into her bowels. She quivers and grunts as she feels you spurt into her through her orgasmic haze, the warm goo flooding her back passage trapped in there by the tight seal of her sphincter.

After a moment to work your softening phallus out of her backside, you let the semi-conscious maiden slump to the floor, pearly-white spooge dripping out of her reddened asshole.
What next?

*[[TPM:That's enough fun with the servants, time to get what you came here for.]]
*[[TPM:Stagger to the cockpit to set a course.]]
*[[TPM:Fall asleep where you stand]]
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TPM:Fall asleep where you stand

2015-12-22T07:27:33Z

Jkeyes:

You are satisfied and utterly spent. You give in to your body's urge to sleep and collapse on the handmaiden, who gives a soft "Oof!" as the air is being pushed from her lungs. Before long, her hoarse cries for help coax another of the handmaidens in, who helps roll you off their companion. They quickly recognize that you've fallen asleep and one of them retrieves your lightsaber from the pile of your discarded robes. After a moment's fiddling with the controls, she ignites it and doesn't hesitate to plunge the glowing blade into your heart.
You awaken at that moment only to fall into a much deeper sleep immediately after seeing the smoldering hole in your chest. A slight smile forms on your lips as you slip into death...

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TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!

2015-12-22T07:21:52Z

Jkeyes:

Pulling her up, first with the force, then a hand behind her neck, you bring her upper body up and pop an erect nipple into your mouth, sucking the milk out of the hard teat. The girl shudders as you keep pumping her butt, she's still cumming hard and in this position she's squirting juice onto your stomach. Her hands grab onto your shoulders as her legs wrap around you, probably against her better judgment, and she starts moans as she starts getting into the rhythm. Bouncing her up and down on your dick, you bring a hand down between the two of you and start pumping a couple of fingers into her pussy, sucking harder on the hot breast at your mouth, trying to coax more sweet juice from the overworked mammary. The girl squirms briefly, then just holds on tight, burying her face in your tattooed shoulder as the ride continues.
Finally you start feeling your load build up, it's about damn time! Slamming her up against the metal wall as you keep pumping her, you suck harder, pumping your fingers as if jerking off as juice gushes around your hand. You can feel her pussy contracting on your fingers, ready to unload... 
[[TPM: Spray your load up her ass.]] 
[[TPM: Pull out and drop her, you're saving your stuff for a royal greeting.]] 
[[TPM: Take it out and ram her mouth for the release]] 
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TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!

2015-12-22T07:05:43Z

Jkeyes:

Even after all this, you haven't even come close to your own climax. You lift her by the waist, her legs limp around you, and start pressing the bulbous head of your manhood into her flank. She mumbles incoherently, head still not fuzzy after her mind-blowing orgasm.
"Sto... Stop!" She protests thickly, as it makes it through to her brain that you are now trying to push something very large into a very tight hole. She struggles with you, hands pushing as hard as she can at the moment, futile as the attempt may be. You're almost there, the girl trying frantically to keep you out as you continue to press harder, though it's almost comical seeing such weedy arms try to apply any real resistance.
Most of the head of your manhood is through the puckered entrance of her backdoor by the time her strength seems to be returning. From this position, you notice juice (flecked with blood from her obliterated virginity) trickling out of her pussy onto your dick, juice that's already applied a sort of lubricant. Using that to your advantage, you pull back, let it drip down the cleft of her buttocks for a second, and then ram it in. She shouts at the sudden pain as the head of your dick pops into her ass, and then ALL of it slides in at once!

Before, her hands had been pushing against your stomach, trying to keep you from entering, but as you pound repeatedly into the girl divinely ass, they move rest on her pussy. To your delight, after a moment the fingers on one hand start to play with her clit. As you watch, one of her fingers pushes into her pussy, then another enters her own hole, following your rhythm as you pound into her tight rear over and over again. She moans submissively as you increase the pace, then she jerks as her pussy squirts a few droplets into the air. Her legs close around you and she pulls you closer as her spasms start giving away the overwhelming pleasure she must be feeling, her body shaking and beginning to jolt as her pelvis thrusts to meet you as you keep pumping her ass
Her eyes open wide as her legs kick out, then her pussy squirts a stream of cum into the air, raining down on her chest and face. Another long squirt, her arms and legs shaking hard with each release as she gasps in a breath, almost sounding as if she were in pain were it not for the blissful expression on her face. Her breasts almost seem to be lactating a bit as she gives one last long squirt, you continuing to thrust into her back passage as she does so. 
[[TPM: Those breasts look appetizing, pull her up and give them a good suck as you pump her ass!]] 
[[TPM: Bring another handmaiden into this, make it a threesome!]] 
[[TPM: She's had enough, drop the orgasm-stunned maiden on the floor and grab another one]] 
[[TPM: You're done with the handmaidens, time for a taste of royalty.]] 
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Let go and move down to pop her cherry!

2015-12-22T05:53:23Z

Jkeyes:

You release the maiden's wrists and rise from her chest as it heaves from the relentless movements. You shuffle back a step and then lower again, grabbing her waist and lifting it so that her legs are to either side of your hips.
You position yourself, lock eyes with her again, aim...
"Wait..." she pants, realizing your intentions a moment too late as you slam your entire length into her at once. She screams in pain as you thrust into her painfully tight pussy, but it's too good to let you stop for some simple pain. Her body quivers, her eyes screwing shut, toes curling and legs wrapping around your waist as she screams again, cumming hard from the massive sensory overload. Her pussy clenches on your penis so hard it feels like you're going to lose it as she screams and shudders in the throes of her first, ''massive'' orgasm. Then she goes limp, dazed by the massive dopamine overload flooding her brain, and making her pussy relax for long enough for you to pull out. The girl continues to twitch and jerk as the aftershocks zap through her, blood and pussy juice dripping onto the floor and her eyes rolling back into her head as she spasms again and again... 
[[TPM: Next girl!]] 
[[TPM: You're not finished yet, grab that ass, let's introduce her to a new hole!]] 
[[TPM: That's good enough, time for the queen!]] 
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Fighters are more fun, drop the whimpering victim on the wall and take the attacker in a tit fuck!

2015-12-22T05:22:18Z

Jkeyes:

You move away from the blond (who takes the opportunity to flee) and knock the brunette back to the floor with a sweep of your leg. Grabbing her other arm, you pin her prone body to the floor-she is dazed by the quick movements as you put both of her wrists in one hand's grip, freeing the other hand to pull down your pants and reveal your large manhood, tattooed just as much as the rest of your body and hard as rock. Straddling her, you thrust between her size B's as she kicks and squirms, your free hand reaching around to her slit (virgin, just as you thought).

You stare into her big brown eyes as your finger rubs back and forth, your manhood sliding between her small breasts. Now she doesn't bother trying to hide it, her eyes reveal a very real fear.
''Perfect'' you think to yourself. With that, your fingers push their way into the wet slit, her struggles stiffening and her head pressing hard against the floor as she groans with unwanted pleasure. Watching as her chocolate-brown hair pools around her head, you begin pumping two fingers in and out, continuing to massage her breasts with your tattooed phallus. Now you add another finger, it's moistening fast inside there...
Her legs kick weakly, as another, louder, moan escapes her. You continue doing this for a while, her nipples hardening into points in the slightly cold air as her struggling slows to a halt; now she simply jolts with whatever shocks of pleasure pulse through her, the blush rising to her cheeks betraying her enjoyment.
She bites her lip, but you still hear a low "ahh.. Ahhh.. Ahh.." escape her mouth. The girl's breathing becomes heavy as her legs quiver, her entire body building to a climax... 
[[TPM: Keep fingering and tit fucking until she unloads!]] 
[[TPM: Let go and move down to pop her cherry!]] 
[[TPM: Let go and move down to jump her backdoor!]] 
[[TPM: She seems more cooperative now, give her mouth a taste of the real thing]] 
[[TPM: Let her go just before she releases and grab some other maiden]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Fighters are more fun, drop the whimpering victim on the wall and take the attacker in a tit fuck!

2015-12-22T05:22:01Z

Jkeyes:

You move away from the blonde (who takes the opportunity to flee) and knock the brunette back to the floor with a sweep of your leg. Grabbing her other arm, you pin her prone body to the floor-she is dazed by the quick movements as you put both of her wrists in one hand's grip, freeing the other hand to pull down your pants and reveal your large manhood, tattooed just as much as the rest of your body and hard as rock. Straddling her, you thrust between her size B's as she kicks and squirms, your free hand reaching around to her slit (virgin, just as you thought).

You stare into her big brown eyes as your finger rubs back and forth, your manhood sliding between her small breasts. Now she doesn't bother trying to hide it, her eyes reveal a very real fear.
''Perfect'' you think to yourself. With that, your fingers push their way into the wet slit, her struggles stiffening and her head pressing hard against the floor as she groans with unwanted pleasure. Watching as her chocolate-brown hair pools around her head, you begin pumping two fingers in and out, continuing to massage her breasts with your tattooed phallus. Now you add another finger, it's moistening fast inside there...
Her legs kick weakly, as another, louder, moan escapes her. You continue doing this for a while, her nipples hardening into points in the slightly cold air as her struggling slows to a halt; now she simply jolts with whatever shocks of pleasure pulse through her, the blush rising to her cheeks betraying her enjoyment.
She bites her lip, but you still hear a low "ahh.. Ahhh.. Ahh.." escape her mouth. The girl's breathing becomes heavy as her legs quiver, her entire body building to a climax... 
[[TPM: Keep fingering and tit fucking until she unloads!]] 
[[TPM: Let go and move down to pop her cherry!]] 
[[TPM: Let go and move down to jump her backdoor!]] 
[[TPM: She seems more cooperative now, give her mouth a taste of the real thing]] 
[[TPM: Let her go just before she releases and grab some other maiden]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Go grab a handmaiden, you've earned a warmup!

2015-12-22T05:02:19Z

Jkeyes:

You grab one of the freshly disrobed handmaidens, a blond with blue eyes. She calls out for help in a trembling voice as you pin her to the wall, leering at her thin, untouched body. Though she's not nearly far along through puberty to have much of a figure (her breasts being little more than bumps on her chest unable to so much as fill your palm at this point), her long slim legs and smooth belly are attractive enough.

One of the brunette handmaidens finally cracks and runs for it, disappearing into another room of the palatial starship. The other brunette, the one you knocked over when you disrobed her, seizes some sort of ornament in her hand and runs at you, swinging it like a weapon. You easily catch her wrist in your free hand, twisting it until she hisses with pain and drops the miniature sculpture.

You stare into the defiant face of the struggling girl, her deep brown eyes wet with fear and disgust.
This girl is different from the others, braver, more authoritative. You'd swear that ''she'' was the one in charge if you hadn't left the sobbing monarch in the other room a moment ago. She tries to pry your fingers from her wrist with her free hand, tugging at your unbreakable grip in an effort to free herself and still unable to look away from you. The blond is silent as you hold struggling brunette's wrist, obviously she ''is'' important to them-maybe she would make a more interesting example... 
[[TPM: Fighters are more fun, drop the whimpering victim on the wall and take the attacker in a tit fuck!]] 
[[TPM: She had her chance, throw her aside and keep going with the first choice.]] 
[[TPM: You could fuck them both at once, bring her into it as well!]] 
[[TPM: Use the force to break her will, make it a little easier]] 
[[TPM: Business calls, you go to the cockpit to set a course.]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...

2015-12-22T04:40:50Z

Jkeyes:

Ignoring the young woman's pleas and wails of protest, you seize a fistful of her hair and pin her to the wall. You grab the robe's fluffy collar and tear it away, soon are stripping the terrified queen of her eye-searingly awful attire and casting it over your shoulder onto the deck. Once your task is completed you gather up the bale of (no-doubt ridiculously expensive) clothing, stuff it into an ejection tube and with the press of a button, launch them into space.

You turn back to the now-naked queen. Tears of fear and humiliation trickle down her face, smearing her plaster-white makeup as she tries to wipe them away without moving her hands from where they struggle to trying to hide her nudity. The queen's red-robed handmaidens are all trying to squeeze themselves into a corner, desperate to keep away from you and to not suffer the fate of their monarch. The thought enters your head that it would be unfair for the Queen to have to suffer whilst her lowly handmaidens are untouched. You march over to the one at the front, the one the others seem to be trying to hide behind, and yank off her hood, letting her long brown hair fall down. She makes a grab for your wrist as you reach for the front of your robe, but you flick her hand away and rip the front of the orange robe open. The girl yelps and springs back, trying to cover herself as you snag the hem of her robe and tear that off too. This has the amusing side-effect of pulling the girl's legs out from under her, and she falls flat on her back with a painful-sounding ''smack'' sound.

The others protest, one of them even tries to fight you off; but at the end of the day, they're a trio of girls barely into puberty, and you're a Dark lord of the Sith. Their fear becomes your strength as you easily disrobe them and cast their clothing into the vacuum, leaving not to much as fabric between their trembling young flesh and you... 
[[TPM: ORGY Time!]] 
[[TPM: Royalty first, let her have your manhood!]] 
[[TPM: Go grab a handmaiden, you've earned a warmup!]] 
[[TPM: Business calls, you go to the cockpit to set a course.]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2015-12-22T04:14:10Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, as you run him through he screams before being cut off immediately. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards, disrobe a few handmaidens, and finally, you find the queen. 

Calling her clothing extravagant would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded form.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

TPM: Kill them both and look for the queen!

2015-12-22T04:00:57Z

Jkeyes:

Dispatching the young Jedi with a quick motion of your blade, you turn to the boy, as you run him through he screams before being cut off immediately. Moving on through the ship, you cut down a few Guards, disrobe a few handmaidens, and finally, you find the queen. 

Calling her clothing extravagant would be an understatement; her huge, wide-shouldered red robe accented by some kind of gold embroidery and a series of illuminated jewels just above the robe's wide, furred hem. In addition to this robe, the queen wears a bizarre ornate gold face frame, and has her hair combed over a padded form.

You suppose this hilariously extravagant outfit is meant to project an aura of regal confidence, but any kind of confidence is shattered, however, by the young woman's wobbling lip as she clings to the whimpering robed handmaidens trying to hide behind her skirts.

You can feel their fear through the force, and it is ''good''. A smile curls your lips, making the girls tremble in terror, presumably wondering if you intend to eat them.

[[TPM: She looks like a featherduster, run her through!]] 
[[TPM: That saying about clothes looking better on the floor? You figure they'd look better ejected into space...]] 
[[TPM: Get her and some handmaidens together for an orgy!]]
[[Category:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]][[Category: Star Wars Episode I]][[Category: Dark Side]]
{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

User talk:Jkeyes

2015-09-25T22:36:55Z

Jkeyes:

Please don't post in my stories unless you know how to punctuate. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:30, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

You can't see the problems because I corrected them already. Here are some examples of poor punctuating:

You posted:

''Hastily, you reply.

''"Yeah, its me."''

This should be:

''Hastily, you reply, "Yeah, it's me."''

You posted:

''Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:

''"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."''

This should be:

''Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond, "Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."''

You posted:

''"Alex, is that you?" The woman calls from within the bathroom.''

This should be:

''"Alex, is that you?" the woman calls from within the bathroom.''

--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:27, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

I see what you mean, thanks for clearing that up for me.--[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 22:36, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

2015-09-25T21:46:41Z

Jkeyes:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

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Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

2015-09-25T21:42:46Z

Jkeyes:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

Say yes.

2015-09-25T21:27:47Z

Jkeyes:

Hastily, you reply.

"Yeah, its me."

The woman's reply sounds slightly confused.

"I thought you said you wouldn't come over until later?"

Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:

"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."
The woman giggles and you relax slightly.

"Cute. I just got out of the shower, could you go and wait in the bedroom?"

Before you can do anything, she continues; "Oh, and could you see if my glasses are in there? I thought I brought them in here, but I can't find them."

What now?
*[[Go and wait in the bedroom.]]
*[[Wait outside the bathroom door and jump her when she comes out.]]
*[[Leg it]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Say yes.

2015-09-25T21:18:42Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'Hastily, you reply. "Yeah, its me." The woman's reply sounds slightly confused. "I thought you said you wouldn't come over until later?" Starting to panic slightly, you quickly r…'

Hastily, you reply.
"Yeah, its me."
The woman's reply sounds slightly confused.
"I thought you said you wouldn't come over until later?"
Starting to panic slightly, you quickly respond:
"Oh, I thought I'd drop by early. Surprise you."
The woman giggles and you relax slightly.
"Cute. I just got out of the shower, could you go and wait in the bedroom?"
Before you can do anything, she continues; "Oh, and could you see if my glasses are in there? I thought I brought them in here, but I can't find them."

What now?
*[[Go and wait in the bedroom.]]
*[[Wait outside the bathroom door and jump her when she comes out.]]
*[[Leg it]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Steal the woman's glasses

2015-09-25T20:47:05Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'You quickly swipe the glasses off the sink and duck out of the bathroom. Just in time, as it happens, you hear the sound of the shower shutting off and the door opening. You stan…'

You quickly swipe the glasses off the sink and duck out of the bathroom. Just in time, as it happens, you hear the sound of the shower shutting off and the door opening. You stand outside the bathroom door, listening intently as you hear the woman step out of the shower. Then a muffled curse as she gropes in vain for her glasses. Smirking, you shift your weight onto your back foot in preparation to take flight. The floorboard under your foot lets out a loud creak that makes you freeze in place.

"Alex, is that you?" The woman calls from within the bathroom.

How do you respond?

*[[Say yes.]]
*[[Say nothing]]
*[[Leg it.]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Tell your ship to come and meet with this one.

2015-05-23T22:28:53Z

Jkeyes:

Standing up, you reach for the control unit on your wrist and tap in the combination that will make your ship home in on this one.
Before long, a status light flashes on the unit, and you glance out of a viewport to see the welcome sight of your ship: the ''Scimitar'' appear, microdisortions rippling along its length as the cloaking device disengages. She moves out of your field of view, the long, dagger-shaped starship cutting through vacuum like a blade through oil.
A faint jolt through the floor of the royal starship tells you that your ship has docked with that of the Naboo. A feral smile curls your lips. ''Let the fun begin'', you think to yourself.

*[[You have a job to do, go in search of the Queen.]]
*[[Go to your ship to remove some of the torture devices for use on those feisty handmaidens, let's have some more fun.]]

{{StarStatus|char=Darth Maul |movie=The Phantom Menace}}

[[Category: Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]

Talk:6 Months

2015-05-23T22:17:17Z

Jkeyes: Created page with 'Pretty interesting, but I can't seem to find the path to this option without getting it straight from the page archive. Anyone have any pointers?'

Pretty interesting, but I can't seem to find the path to this option without getting it straight from the page archive. Anyone have any pointers?

Josh Take a seat at the table.

2015-05-23T21:42:13Z

Jkeyes:

You sit down and your mom places your plate of bacon, eggs, and toast in front of you. As she leans down you glance right down her top revealing her wonderful cleavage.

"What would you like to drink baby?"

*[[A glass of water please, Mom.]]
*[[Milk]]
*[[Orange Juice.]]
*[[Beer.]]

{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 15}}
[[Category: Hot and Horny]]

Josh Take a seat at the table.

2015-05-23T21:25:43Z

Jkeyes:

You sit down and your mom places your plate of bacon, eggs, and toast in front of you. As she leans down you glance right down her top revealing her wonderful cleavage.

"What would you like to drink baby?"

*[["Just a glass of water please, Mom."]]
*[[*Leer* "Milk."]]
*[["Orange Juice."]]
*[["Beer."]]

{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 15}}
[[Category: Hot and Horny]]