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User talk:Anyname

2014-02-10T21:11:17Z

Anyname:

User talk:Platypus

2014-02-10T04:37:49Z

Anyname: /* About my additions */ new section

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
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Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

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User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

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User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

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User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
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Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

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User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
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User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

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I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

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I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

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Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

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I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

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Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

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Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
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Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

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EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

User talk:Anyname

2014-02-10T04:17:18Z

Anyname:

{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:42, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

Better, but make sure you include the status bar as well. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:44, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

Now try adding the hyperlink in the status bar, linking the page to the character being possessed, and put the bullets in front of the choices. Is it possible that you can't see that your pages aren't formatted like the rest of the pages in the story? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:47, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

If you're going to post in one of my stories, the choices must be choices your character can make. Your character can't choose what she's going to see inside a car that pulls up next to her.

And you need to use proper grammar. Review [[punctuation with dialogue]] if you are unfamiliar with the rules.

If you can't use proper grammar, I strongly suggest you post in some other author's story or write your own. I ''will'' delete anything I dislike that is posted in one of mine.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:36, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person playing would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

Modify your outfit to better suit your needs

2014-02-09T08:31:58Z

Anyname: Created page with 'Perhaps that's the safer option. You sashay into a dank alleyway to further change your appearance. Once in the alley way, you start by unbuttoning your blouse quite a few but…'

Perhaps that's the safer option.

You sashay into a dank alleyway to further change your appearance.

Once in the alley way, you start by unbuttoning your blouse quite a few buttons, more than enough than what's needed to see your braless cleavage. Next, you try to rip your skirt short, but unfortunately the material is too thick for you to rip with just your bare hands. Looking in Jessica's purse, you find a tiny pair of scissors, along with a make-up kit and a condom. Apparently Mrs. Jones liked to have fun before you took hold of her body! With the scissors, you manage to cut the skirt to a more appropriate prostitute length. Next, you use Jessica's make-up kit to give yourself a rather trashy look; you've gotten good at applying make-up over the years (you've made a lot of your victims into whores). Now that should be more than good enough for people driving down the street to understand what it is that you're selling. On your way out of the alley, you stop to play with your nipples just a bit, so that they'll stand out more underneath your blouse.

Once out on the street, you do your best to show passersby that your pussy is for sale.

While bent against a pole with your ass stuck out towards the road, a car pulls up behind you and rolls its window rolls down.

Inside the car there is:

*[[A man who's interested]]

*[[A woman who's interested]]

*[[A cop who's very likely not interested]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jessica Jones|Young-Looking, Pretty Mother]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Drive to a shady part of town to walk the streets

2014-02-06T21:39:53Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You drive to a run down area of town. You can see several homeless men panhandling for money and quite of few suspicious characters (who are probably drug dealers). Spotting a …'

You drive to a run down area of town. You can see several homeless men panhandling for money and quite of few suspicious characters (who are probably drug dealers).

Spotting a parking garage, you pull in. No need for a car if you're getting picked up!

Upon exiting the parking garage, you begin walking down the street. After a few minutes you are approached by no one.

What will you do to rectify the situation?

[[Modify your outfit to better suit your needs]]

[[Proposition a drug dealer]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

{{RampageTemplate|who= Young, pretty looking mother}}|}

Pay for the clothes

2014-02-06T02:49:24Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You pay for the clothes and leave the store. Time to really become a whore. On your way out of the mall you get many the stare from men walking by (and a couple women). Your plan…'

You pay for the clothes and leave the store. Time to really become a whore. On your way out of the mall you get many the stare from men walking by (and a couple women). Your plan is working.

Next you:

[[Drive to a bar to try and turn some tricks]]

[[Drive to a shady part of town to walk the streets]]

[[Try to pick up people outside of the mall]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

Get changed in the changing room

2014-02-06T02:44:02Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You don't want just anyone to see you in a state of undress... yet. Once inside of the changing room, you strip down to your bra and panties; looking in the mirror, you can see …'

You don't want just anyone to see you in a state of undress... yet.

Once inside of the changing room, you strip down to your bra and panties; looking in the mirror, you can see that your panties are really dirty in the front and the back. You get them even messier thinking about it. Feeling like you're not going far enough, you enclasp your bra and toss it on the floor. Jessica's ample breasts swing free. Next, you put on the skirt and blouse. Your very erect nipples can show through the fabric of the blouse. Putting on you heels, you walk out of the changing room.

[[Pay for the clothes]]

[[See if you can "cut a deal" with one of the cashiers]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

A tight white blouse and a grey pencil skirt

2014-02-06T02:35:13Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You decide to go for the slutty secretary look. As you go to get changed, you have an idea: Get changed in the changing room Change out here in the open [[Category: R…'

You decide to go for the slutty secretary look.

As you go to get changed, you have an idea:

[[Get changed in the changing room]]

[[Change out here in the open]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

Go to a clothing store

2014-02-06T02:31:08Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You go to a rather generic clothing store. There, your heart flutters at all of the possible ways that you can make yourself look cheap. Do you buy: [[A tight white blouse and …'

You go to a rather generic clothing store. There, your heart flutters at all of the possible ways that you can make yourself look cheap.

Do you buy:

[[A tight white blouse and a grey pencil skirt?]]

[[Low riding black skinny jeans and a red tank-top?]]

[[A lime green boob tube and a spandex minskirt, both two sizes too small?]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

"I want my belly-button, my nose, and my clit bejeweled."

2014-02-06T02:25:47Z

Anyname: Created page with 'The kiosk lady obliges, but gives you a look of disgust when she has to pierce your clit. Apparently you're starting to smell down there. The nose piercing doesn't hurt too much,…'

The kiosk lady obliges, but gives you a look of disgust when she has to pierce your clit. Apparently you're starting to smell down there. The nose piercing doesn't hurt too much, but the other two hurt like hell (where you're from). But the pain should be worth it, because these piercings are probably going to get you a lot of pleasure...

On the way out you get dressed in your now only damp clothes, pay for the piercing job, and buy a set of slutty looking hoop earrings.

Next for your "makeover":

[[Go to clothing store]]

[[Go to tattoo parlor]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

Piercing kiosk

2014-02-06T02:16:34Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You decide that you need to whore up your act, so you go to the piercing kiosk to get Jessica some body modification. When you get there , the lady running the kiosk asks you wha…'

You decide that you need to whore up your act, so you go to the piercing kiosk to get Jessica some body modification. When you get there , the lady running the kiosk asks you what you want.

[["I want my belly-button, my nose, and my clit bejeweled"]]

[["I just want some new earrings, make them whorey please"]]

[[" Pierce everything that you can!"]]

[[Category: Rampage]]

You pull your pants up and leave. No need to wipe, your panties will do that for you

2014-02-05T23:46:08Z

Anyname:

You slink on out of the men's room, your dirty pussy and ass feeling delicious against your once clean panties.

You get a couple odd stares at your still wet pants as you walk around the mall, but no one calls the cops, so that's good.

Where will you go next, you dirty slut?

[[The clothing store]]

[[The electronics store]]

[[Back to this chick's family]]

[[Piercing kiosk]]

You pull your pants up and leave. No need to wipe, your panties will do that for you

2014-02-05T23:44:32Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You slink on out of the men's room, your dirty pussy and ass feeling delicious against your once clean panties. You get a couple odd stares at your still wet pants as you walk …'

Pull down your pants and finish peeing

2014-02-05T23:32:37Z

Anyname:

You sit down and pee. Just as you're about to finish, you feel the sudden urge to take a shit. Before you have any time to think of something else kinky to do, the turd slips right out into the bowl. But alas, all is not lost! You can still make this a fucked up situation yet.

What's you move?

[[You chicken out, wipe your pussy and ass, and leave]]

[[You pull your pants up and leave. No need to wipe, your panties will do that for you]]

[[Get up and leave, sans pants.]]

Pull down your pants and finish peeing

2014-02-05T23:31:34Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You sit down and pee. Just as you're about to finish, you feel the sudden urge to take a shit. Before you have any time to think of something else kinky to do, the turd slips rig…'

Lock yourself in a stall

2014-02-05T23:20:13Z

Anyname:

You are now in the stall.

Do you:

[[Sit down and pee]]

[[Pull down you pants and finish peeing]]

[[Shove your hand in you slippery cunt]]

Lock yourself in a stall

2014-02-05T23:18:56Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You are now in the stall. Do you: Sit down and pee Pull down you pants and finish peeing Masturbate'

You are now in the stall.

Do you:

[[Sit down and pee]]

[[Pull down you pants and finish peeing]]

[[Masturbate]]

You scurry into the bathroom

2014-02-05T23:15:47Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You rush to the bathrooms, unfortunately, the women's bathroom is closed for cleaning when you get there. So you therefore decide to duck into the men's bathroom. Once inside, yo…'

You rush to the bathrooms, unfortunately, the women's bathroom is closed for cleaning when you get there. So you therefore decide to duck into the men's bathroom. Once inside, you:

[[Lock yourself in a stall]]

[[Go in a stall, but don't lock it]]

[[Finish pissing in the sink]]

[[Pull of you piss-stained panties and and pant, and get the hell out of there]]

Pee in your pants

2014-02-05T23:09:47Z

Anyname:

You relax you bladder and let your piss come out right there. Your pants quickly become wet with the combination of urine and your own pussy juices.

What happens next?

[[You scurry into the bathroom]]

[[You pull down your pants, sit down, and frig yourself right there]]

[[You decide to crap in your pants]]

Pee in your pants

2014-02-05T23:02:56Z

Anyname: Created page with 'You relax you bladder and let your piss come out right there. Your pants quickly become wet with the combination of urine and your own pussy juices.'

You relax you bladder and let your piss come out right there. Your pants quickly become wet with the combination of urine and your own pussy juices.