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Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, '''He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow."''' really should be '''He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow."''' --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC) | Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, '''He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow."''' really should be '''He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow."''' --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
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| + | '''"Maybe.." You reply with a mysterious wink. ''' should be written as '''"Maybe," you reply with a mysterious wink. ''' --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:34, 3 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 03:34, 3 December 2013
Please review punctuation with dialogue. You need to use punctuation properly if you are going to post in one of my stories. --Platypus 02:44, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow." really should be He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow." --Platypus 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
"Maybe.." You reply with a mysterious wink. should be written as "Maybe," you reply with a mysterious wink. --Platypus 03:34, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
