Through the city

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Revision as of 13:14, 25 June 2009

You start riding your bike and you cross by Hot Topic, The Silverware Store, and Wal-Mart.

As you're looking around, you suddenly feel a hard blow to the back of your head. You stop the bike and try to stay upright.

You say, "Where am I?"

You hear a voice from too close behind you say, "Ya gots any money fors me?"

You say:

{{HSTemplate|Health=90|Gender=Male|Social Group=Emo|Equipment=|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=

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-You start riding your bike, and you cross by Hot Topic, The Silverware Store, and Wal-Mart.
+You start riding your bike and you cross by Hot Topic, The Silverware Store, and Wal-Mart.
-As you're looking around, you suddenly feel big smash in your head.
+As you're looking around, you suddenly feel a hard blow to the back of your head.  You stop the bike and try to stay upright.
 You say, "Where am I?"
-You hear a voice from above say, "Ya gots any money fors me?"
+You hear a voice from too close behind you say, "Ya gots any money fors me?"
 You say:
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 *[[Maybe(M emo)|Maybe]]
 *[[Yes...(M emo)|Yes...]]
-{{HSTemplate|Health=90|Gender=Male|Clique=Emo|Equipment=}}
+{{HSTemplate|Health=90|Gender=Male|Social Group=Emo|Equipment=|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=
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