Wander inland to the right.
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...You are nearing the tents when a tall figure, hitherto unspotted stands up from his seat under a tree, casting a shadow in front of the moon... | ...You are nearing the tents when a tall figure, hitherto unspotted stands up from his seat under a tree, casting a shadow in front of the moon... | ||
| - | ...The boy pauses, and deviates from his course, stooping to investigate something. Your heart stops when he lifts it up, and you realize he found your sarong. After a moment of panic, though, he shrugs, folds it neatly and lays it back down... | + | ...The boy pauses, and deviates from his course, stooping to investigate something. Your heart stops when he lifts it up, and you realize he found your sarong. After a moment of your panic, though, he shrugs, folds it neatly and lays it back down... |
| + | ...Finally, he reaches the beach and stops. As you watch, he takes a knee on the dune and begins to pray... | ||
| + | ...Unable to hold off any more, you stand and start to walk towards him. His words slow, and stop as he hears you approach, and a shudder racks his bodt as you run your hands along his neck... | ||
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| + | ..."-be all right." You say, lying beside him. "Anyways, what if it isn't? You learn, and do better next time. Meanwhile, it's still part of the grand plan, still working to fulfill God's vision"... | ||
[[Category: The New God]] [[Category: Susan Deneker Storyline]] | [[Category: The New God]] [[Category: Susan Deneker Storyline]] | ||
Revision as of 08:37, 18 April 2015
...You start inland, after shielding your bare feet from pine needles and rocks. The sounds of the ocean recede quickly, and the once-powerful wind dies away, leaving just a quiet night in the forest...
...On a whim, you shed your flashy silver-gray sarong in a silken puddle. Crouching low, you creep forwards in your black swimsuit...
...You are nearing the tents when a tall figure, hitherto unspotted stands up from his seat under a tree, casting a shadow in front of the moon...
...The boy pauses, and deviates from his course, stooping to investigate something. Your heart stops when he lifts it up, and you realize he found your sarong. After a moment of your panic, though, he shrugs, folds it neatly and lays it back down...
...Finally, he reaches the beach and stops. As you watch, he takes a knee on the dune and begins to pray...
...Unable to hold off any more, you stand and start to walk towards him. His words slow, and stop as he hears you approach, and a shudder racks his bodt as you run your hands along his neck...
..."-be all right." You say, lying beside him. "Anyways, what if it isn't? You learn, and do better next time. Meanwhile, it's still part of the grand plan, still working to fulfill God's vision"...
