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Snowball: missed a typo

Snowball — Fri, 22 Nov 2013 15:04:53 GMT

missed a typo

←Older revision		Revision as of 15:04, 22 November 2013
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	Authors note:		Authors note:
-	'''~~Speach~~'''	+	'''Speech'''
	''Thought''		''Thought''
	Action/Narrative		Action/Narrative

-	'''~~Zachy~~... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''	+	'''Zachary... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''
	threatened the man, who was smiling		threatened the man, who was smiling

Snowball: typo fixes and a few rewrites (no meanings were changed)

Snowball — Fri, 22 Nov 2013 15:04:12 GMT

typo fixes and a few rewrites (no meanings were changed)

←Older revision		Revision as of 15:04, 22 November 2013
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	'''Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''		'''Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''
-	~~said~~ the man smiling	+	threatened the man, who was smiling

	'''And I assure you...'''		'''And I assure you...'''
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	''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''		''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''

-	'''1!'''	+	''3!'''

-	The Teacher raises his hand ~~alerting~~ the armed soldier to his right to ~~give him~~ his side arm	+	The Teacher raises his hand, signalling for the armed soldier to his right to pass his side arm to the Teacher.

	''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''		''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''
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	'''2!'''		'''2!'''

-	He raises the gun and takes aim	+	He raises the gun and takes aim squarely at your head.

	''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''		''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''

Axehel at 19:08, 30 September 2009

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:08:18 GMT

←Older revision		Revision as of 19:08, 30 September 2009
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	Authors note:		Authors note:
-	'''~~Action~~'''	+	'''Speach'''
	''Thought''		''Thought''
-	~~Speach~~	+	Action/Narrative

-	Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...	+	'''Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''
-	'''said the man smiling~~'''~~	+	said the man smiling

-	~~and~~ I assure you...	+	'''And I assure you...'''

-	This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...	+	'''This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...'''

	''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''		''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''
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	''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''		''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''

-	1!	+	'''1!'''

-	~~'''~~The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm~~'''~~	+	The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm

	''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''		''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''

-	2!	+	'''2!'''

-	~~'''~~He raises the gun and takes aim~~'''~~	+	He raises the gun and takes aim

	''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''		''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''

Axehel at 18:40, 30 September 2009

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:40:53 GMT

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Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...
'''said the man smiling'''

and I assure you...

This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...

''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''

''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''

1!

'''The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm'''

''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''

2!

'''He raises the gun and takes aim'''

''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''

*[[Stand up and enter the game]]

*[[Remain seated...]]

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