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Wannabe rockstar: /* Similar websites? */

Wannabe rockstar — Fri, 22 Jan 2016 22:10:29 GMT

Similar websites?

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	[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 15:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)		[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 15:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
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		+	:No worries, I've been really busy lately so I only just logged in to read your comments. Yeah, to be honest, that's a drawback of the site for me too. Even though I'm writing an adult story, I can't really write porn. I envision the Laura storyline of Darklands having some erotic comedy at the most, and the Brenna storyline is going to be pretty serious (the other characters have yet to be thought out). I figure that since it's a public story, if people are interested they can create branches of the story where pornier things happen, if they're so inclined. Since my story is also about adventuring and killing things and being killed, it'll probably also stray over the bounds of "light violence" and the horror is probably going to be more than mild. :/ Anyway, I'd definitely be interested in reading anything new you have in the works, let me know if you get back in the writing groove!
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		+	[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 22:10, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

Wannabe rockstar: /* Similar websites? */

Wannabe rockstar — Mon, 21 Dec 2015 23:11:05 GMT

Similar websites?

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-	I played through your story "Rescue" and enjoyed it, it's much better work from beginning to end than most online interactive stories I've read, and it has the added bonus of actually being readable... Awful ~~gammar~~ = argh.	+	I played through your story "Rescue" and enjoyed it, it's much better work from beginning to end than most online interactive stories I've read, and it has the added bonus of actually being readable... Awful grammar = argh. I had to edit this post because I spelled grammar wrong, ha.

	I just started a story of my own, the link to which you'll see on my user page, but it's a little discouraging to see just how inactive this community seems to be. I've thought about migrating my story to CHYOA.com and continuing it there, ever tried to write something on that site? Not quite sure how it compares.		I just started a story of my own, the link to which you'll see on my user page, but it's a little discouraging to see just how inactive this community seems to be. I've thought about migrating my story to CHYOA.com and continuing it there, ever tried to write something on that site? Not quite sure how it compares.

	[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 15:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)		[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 15:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

Wannabe rockstar at 15:18, 21 December 2015

Wannabe rockstar — Mon, 21 Dec 2015 15:18:36 GMT

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	Yes, my private website I use javascript to enable a collapsible table. So, I have the needed java script, but I don't know how to enable that on a wiki. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 11:43, 8 March 2014 (UTC)		Yes, my private website I use javascript to enable a collapsible table. So, I have the needed java script, but I don't know how to enable that on a wiki. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 11:43, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
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		+	== Similar websites? ==
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		+	I played through your story "Rescue" and enjoyed it, it's much better work from beginning to end than most online interactive stories I've read, and it has the added bonus of actually being readable... Awful gammar = argh.
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		+	I just started a story of my own, the link to which you'll see on my user page, but it's a little discouraging to see just how inactive this community seems to be. I've thought about migrating my story to CHYOA.com and continuing it there, ever tried to write something on that site? Not quite sure how it compares.
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		+	[[User:Wannabe rockstar\|Wannabe rockstar]] 15:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Storyboard */

DirtyMeStoryTime — Sat, 08 Mar 2014 11:43:29 GMT

Storyboard

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	I am trying to create some sort of table that shows the story flow, so you can see the paths, but it is a rather long list, with some options repeating multiple times in the opening. You can see what I am trying at [[Dirty Me/Storyboard]]. I saw someone else do one, and it looked like a nice way to see how it flows, better than the categories since you do not know what leads to what. However, since it is so long, I would like to be able to let people hide and show. So, for example, you start with the opening of the story hidden (All I have added so far) hidden, then can unhide, see what happens first, follow the links to where you want to go, and click on the exact area you want to go, unhiding choice by choice. However, when I tried the Wikipedia template, it seems to not work, and I am not good enough to know what I did wrong. Or maybe there is a better way to do it? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 10:16, 7 March 2014 (UTC)		I am trying to create some sort of table that shows the story flow, so you can see the paths, but it is a rather long list, with some options repeating multiple times in the opening. You can see what I am trying at [[Dirty Me/Storyboard]]. I saw someone else do one, and it looked like a nice way to see how it flows, better than the categories since you do not know what leads to what. However, since it is so long, I would like to be able to let people hide and show. So, for example, you start with the opening of the story hidden (All I have added so far) hidden, then can unhide, see what happens first, follow the links to where you want to go, and click on the exact area you want to go, unhiding choice by choice. However, when I tried the Wikipedia template, it seems to not work, and I am not good enough to know what I did wrong. Or maybe there is a better way to do it? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 10:16, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
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		+	Yes, my private website I use javascript to enable a collapsible table. So, I have the needed java script, but I don't know how to enable that on a wiki. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 11:43, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Storyboard */ new section

DirtyMeStoryTime — Fri, 07 Mar 2014 10:16:42 GMT

Storyboard: new section

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	By the way, will there be an ending where Megan bypasses all the weapons, fights off the horrible inner voice and survives the day [maybe moving in with Vanessa], or is it merely going to be all killing? [Not that it really matters, but I'm just curious. and a sucker for happy endings.] -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]		By the way, will there be an ending where Megan bypasses all the weapons, fights off the horrible inner voice and survives the day [maybe moving in with Vanessa], or is it merely going to be all killing? [Not that it really matters, but I'm just curious. and a sucker for happy endings.] -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]
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		+	== Storyboard ==
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		+	I am trying to create some sort of table that shows the story flow, so you can see the paths, but it is a rather long list, with some options repeating multiple times in the opening. You can see what I am trying at [[Dirty Me/Storyboard]]. I saw someone else do one, and it looked like a nice way to see how it flows, better than the categories since you do not know what leads to what. However, since it is so long, I would like to be able to let people hide and show. So, for example, you start with the opening of the story hidden (All I have added so far) hidden, then can unhide, see what happens first, follow the links to where you want to go, and click on the exact area you want to go, unhiding choice by choice. However, when I tried the Wikipedia template, it seems to not work, and I am not good enough to know what I did wrong. Or maybe there is a better way to do it? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 10:16, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Teejay at 09:56, 7 March 2014

Teejay — Fri, 07 Mar 2014 09:56:01 GMT

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	I didn't think it was nearly as bad as you described it. I actually liked it. Sure as hell beats having to read even one line of Twilight. -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]		I didn't think it was nearly as bad as you described it. I actually liked it. Sure as hell beats having to read even one line of Twilight. -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]
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		+	== Megan ==
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		+	Nice to see you add a new weapon. That story is depressing but very well written.
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		+	By the way, will there be an ending where Megan bypasses all the weapons, fights off the horrible inner voice and survives the day [maybe moving in with Vanessa], or is it merely going to be all killing? [Not that it really matters, but I'm just curious. and a sucker for happy endings.] -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]

Teejay at 08:48, 20 February 2014

Teejay — Thu, 20 Feb 2014 08:48:42 GMT

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	A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)		A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
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		+	== Rescue ==
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		+	I didn't think it was nearly as bad as you described it. I actually liked it. Sure as hell beats having to read even one line of Twilight. -- [[User:Teejay\|Teejay]]

Lovetoread at 02:53, 2 October 2012

Lovetoread — Tue, 02 Oct 2012 02:53:11 GMT

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	Hey! I have a question. Why did you chose to write things in Polish? Are you Polish? --[[User:Lovetoread\|Lovetoread]] 00:13, 24 September 2012 (UTC)		Hey! I have a question. Why did you chose to write things in Polish? Are you Polish? --[[User:Lovetoread\|Lovetoread]] 00:13, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
		+	Ok, cool! --[[User:Lovetoread\|Lovetoread]]

	== Please help! ==		== Please help! ==

	A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)		A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Lovetoread: /* Bloodsport. */

Lovetoread — Mon, 24 Sep 2012 14:17:57 GMT

Bloodsport.

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	-[[User:Sennen\|Sennen]] 01:13, 2 June 2012 (UTC)		-[[User:Sennen\|Sennen]] 01:13, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Hey! I have a question. Why did you chose to write things in Polish? Are you Polish? --[[User:Lovetoread\|Lovetoread]] 00:13, 24 September 2012 (UTC)

	== Please help! ==		== Please help! ==

	A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)		A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Newman2: /* Please help! */

Newman2 — Tue, 31 Jul 2012 22:31:45 GMT

Please help!

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	== Please help! ==		== Please help! ==

-	A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed.	+	A bunch of people are vandalizing [[User:Platypus\|Platypus's]] page, I did that once on my old account [[User:GreatGrapes4330\|GreatGrapes]] once, but someone (I think) mocked my vandalism because I saw that someone mocked me by trying to undo the page and I think hacked my old account, tell him that I was hacked and I gone on Google Chrome to see if I could be able to make an account again, and I did and I chose my Wikimedia username "Newman2" that I first used on Wikispecies. I had to make a new account because someone changed my old account's password, and the IP changed. --[[User:Newman2\|Newman2]] 22:31, 31 July 2012 (UTC)