User talk:Kanin451 - Revision history

Borkenone at 14:28, 14 October 2013

Borkenone — Mon, 14 Oct 2013 14:28:37 GMT

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	I think in the slime monster storyline started from [[Wake all cozy]],the protagonist is kinda out of her character(shy and lack confidence), what do you think? --[[User:Borkenone\|Borkenone]] 19:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC)		I think in the slime monster storyline started from [[Wake all cozy]],the protagonist is kinda out of her character(shy and lack confidence), what do you think? --[[User:Borkenone\|Borkenone]] 19:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
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		+	But you are the original author, shouldn't you have the authority on some basic setting of the story?--[[User:Borkenone\|Borkenone]] 14:28, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

Borkenone at 19:47, 13 October 2013

Borkenone — Sun, 13 Oct 2013 19:47:05 GMT

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	Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin		Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin
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		+	I think in the slime monster storyline started from [[Wake all cozy]],the protagonist is kinda out of her character(shy and lack confidence), what do you think? --[[User:Borkenone\|Borkenone]] 19:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC)

Kanin451 at 17:04, 13 May 2013

Kanin451 — Mon, 13 May 2013 17:04:21 GMT

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	But other than relatively minor things like that, you've got an interesting thread going. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:49, 13 May 2013 (UTC)		But other than relatively minor things like that, you've got an interesting thread going. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:49, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
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		+	Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin

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Platypus — Mon, 13 May 2013 16:49:07 GMT

Created page with 'If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, please try to watch your grammar and punctuation. Remember that ''it's'' means ''it is'' and ''its…'

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If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, please try to watch your grammar and punctuation.

Remember that ''it's'' means ''it is'' and ''its'' means ''belonging to it''.

End sentences with periods. Don't mash sentences together with commas.

And don't use more than one punctuation mark at the end of a sentence. That's only for comic books and this is not a comic book.

But other than relatively minor things like that, you've got an interesting thread going. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:49, 13 May 2013 (UTC)