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Completionist at 04:05, 15 April 2014

Completionist — Tue, 15 Apr 2014 04:05:22 GMT

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-	You are sitting on a balcony of your new home having just become a Jedi Knight. As you sit peacefully, the force flowing through your mind, 3 armed droids drop on your home. Scrambling to your feet, you have to act quickly...	+	''FLASH!''

-	Do you:	+	You find yourself sitting on a balcony of your home. You have just become a Jedi Knight. As you sit peacefully, the force strongly flowing through your mind, you hear strong knocking on the door.
-	*[[SW: ~~run~~ and ~~scream~~\|~~Run~~ and ~~scream~~]]	+
-	*[[SW:~~Fight the droids.\| Fight the droids!~~]]	+	You sigh, knowing only one thing Jedi Knights do. So you:
-	[[Category:Star Wars]]	+	*[[SW:ignore the sound and continue meditating\|ignore the sound and continue meditating]]
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		+	[[Category: The Abandoned Story]][[Category:Star Wars]]

Platypus: Reverted edit of StarWarsLegion, changed back to last version by Platypus

Platypus — Mon, 17 Mar 2014 01:15:39 GMT

Reverted edit of StarWarsLegion, changed back to last version by Platypus

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-	~~Dark Side Future~~	+	You are sitting on a balcony of your new home having just become a Jedi Knight. As you sit peacefully, the force flowing through your mind, 3 armed droids drop on your home. Scrambling to your feet, you have to act quickly...
-		+
-	~~Han Solo fate was to be executed instead of jumping into the frozen Carbonite. He stands on the platform of Cloud City as Leia, Chewbacca, and Lando loom~~ on ~~as Han was killed by~~ a ~~firesquad~~ of Stormtroopers. Vader intended to kill Solo to bring Luke to Bespin as he knows that he can sense their presenses. Boba Fett was displeased by Vaders decision by killing Han as he wanted to bring him to Jabba, he boarded his Slave 1 ship and flown off to Tatootine to give Jabba the new. Chewbacca was next and he too suffered the same fate as Han. Their bodies were eventually cremated inside the facility of Cloud City. Lando was eventually disgusted by Vaders brutality and decided to help out Leia with the situation. Vader senses Lando's intention and immediately cold bloodedly killed him by stabbing his lightsaber through the heart. Lando died instantly from the pure red blade. Cloud City was put under Imperial Control with civilians began to work for the Empire to save their own lives.Vader suddenly recognizes C-3P0 as he knew the Droid from his childhood and decided to defect him to the Empire by erasing his memories. The only thing Vader has to lure Luke Skywalker to Cloud City was Leia herself. "Call out to Luke now" Vader demanded. "I will never let you ~~get him~~, ~~you will have to kill me first" Leia muttered. "If that's~~ the ~~only way" Vader said as he started~~ force ~~choking Leia as he did to Padme, 23 years ago.~~	+
-		+
-	~~Luke was in his X-Wing Starfighter with R2 when he suddenly senses Leia in danger. He can hear her~~ through the Force screaming and choking and realizes it was Vader that was hurting her. He arrived at Cloud City and met no resistance as he enters through the hallways. "No guards, but how, maybe this is a trap..i gotta find Leia and the others" Luke said to himself as he slowly maintain his position with his blaster with R2 at his side. "There he is, stop him" a voice was heard as Luke recognizes a Stormtrooper was in the premises. An Imperial Officer appeared right in front of him with a handheld blaster, but Luke fired first, killing the officer. Suddenly, hundreds of stormtroopers poured in the hallways and cornered Luke with their blasters trained. Luke was outnumbered a hundred to one, he still kept his blaster train on every one of the Troopers. R2 was suddenly stun and powered out by a stun blaster that was fired from a stormtrooper. Luke was defenseless with the amount of Troopers that he can't handle alone. Vader appeared from the crowd and had had Leia in cuffs. "Surrender Skywalker, you cannot win" Vader said. Luke was angried by Vaders word and looked at Leia as she is scared to die. "Luke, please, do what he says, or he'll kill me" Leia said. Luke reluctantly gave in, and put down his blaster and lightsaber on the floor. Two Imperial Troops began cuffing Luke as well and led away in an Imperial Shuttle.	+
-		+
-	Luke woke up to find himself in a cell. He looked around to find the ray shield cell door and Leia was laying at his side. "How long have I been here" Luke said to himself. He suddenly hears Obi-Wan voice through his head. "Luke, I must tell you something that I never told you before" Obi-Wan said. "Tell me Ben, I'm now captured and half of my friends are dead, what do you need to say to me now" Luke said. "The one that is close to you, Master Yoda and I kept for years" Obi-Wan said to the confusion of Luke. "Who's close to me, tell me" Luke asked. "I thought I can tell you when the day has come after completing your training, Master Yoda has spoke that another about Skywalker" Obi-Wan said. Luke was confused than he realizes what Ben was telling him. "Another Skywalker, wait, who's the one" Luke said as he looked at Leia. "Another Skywalker Master Yoda was going to tell you was your twin sister" Obi-Wan answered. Luke suddenly realizes what Ben was telling him. "Leia, Leia is my sister" Luke exclaimed. "Yes, your sister was hidden from the Empire all these years, but now she is in that cell with you, you must find a way to seal off that secret" Obi-Wan said. Luke agreed to avoid exposing Leia's true identity. Vader came in with two stormtroopers. "I hear it all, Obi-Wan" Vader said which Luke realizes he was listening in the whole time. "Wait you were listening all this time...oh man" Luke angrily freaked. "Obi-Wan never told you what happened to your father" Vader said with clear knowledge. "You told me enough, he told me you killed him" Luke replied. "No Luke, I Am your Father" Vader said to the shock of Luke. "No, no, that's not true, that's impossible, no" Luke cried out as he now knows the truth. "Search your feelings Luke and you will no it will be true" Vader said. "No, this can't be happening" Luke cried. "You can destroy the Emperor, he has fore seen it, together you and your sister will rule the Galaxy with me" Vader said. "No, no, I will not turn, you cant make me" Luke shout out. "Thanks I have a better idea, bring those two to the mind ~~chamber" Vader demanded as the stormtroopers escorted Luke and Leia to the chamber.~~	+
-		+
-	~~They were bound to the metal dark flat bed. Leia woke up and find herself and Luke in a dark room. "Luke~~, ~~what's going~~ on, where are we" Leia asked when she freaked. "Leia, I have to tell you about something" Luke said. "Tell me what, we don't have the time for this" Leia said as she struggles with the metal straps. "No, i have to tell you that your ~~real name isn't Organa" Luke said~~. ~~"It's not, than what am i" Leia asked~~ to ~~know the truth. "I learn that you were actually another Skywalker" Luke answered as Leia realizes this. "Wait, I'm~~ your ~~sister...how couldn't I see that..but by the way~~, ~~why are we here" Leia asked. "Vaders is going to brainwash us, I got to tell~~ you~~, that he's our father" Luke said. "Vader, Vader is our father, why is he doing this" Leia criedly asked. "He is going~~ to ~~turn us to the Dark Side" Luke said to the horror of Leia~~. ~~"Turn us~~...oh no" Leia said. The machines on their heads suddenly went off. The two began to suffer from intense headaches. "AAAAHHH, Luke it hurts, AAAAHHH" Leia cried out. "Just hang on" Luke replied. Suddenly, inside your heads were overriding with different minds and thoughts were bouncing everywhere, their memories were flashing inside your minds, than everything turn black for them.	+
-		+
-	Vader was watching from a monitor and realizes the brainwashing is complete. "They will be under my control from now on...tell the Emperor that Luke has made it to his path" Vader ordered. "Yes, Sir" an Imperial Officer obeyed and went to give the news. Vader entered the brainwashing room and observes his two hidden now exposed children and knows they will be the future Siths.	+
-		+
-	Palpatine was on his chair watching the nightsky in space as Vader appears with two hooded figures. "Lord Vader, I see you why you brought them" Palpatine said. "Yes my master, they went through alot of training" Vader replied as the two hooded figures removed their hoods to reveal Luke and Lena. Luke is wearing a dark hooded, sleeveless cloak is made of black fabric that reaches the ankles. The inside of the cloak and hood are lined with a deep red fabric, and the hood is always worn over the head. The cloak is secured closed on the chest, at a point directly under the base of the throat armor and an Imperial Insignia on the right shoulder. Leia is wearing a long dark silk robe with dark long andnwide sleeves that touches the floor, inside dark long pants that reaches to her foot with dark leather shoes and an Imperial insignia on her left shoulder. "They will fine Sith warriors under the Dark Side of the Force" Vader said. "Well, Lord Vader, I apparently sense some disturbance upon us" Palpatine said as he walks towards Vader. "I sense that you are taking me for a fool, these kids of yours are going to become more powerful than yournever imag..." Palpatine said as she is suddenly impaled through the chest by Vader. "Sorry, my master, I wouldn't be needing you any further, you are now removed from your commands" Vader said as Palpatine succumbs to his wounds than died in the eyes of Skywalker's kids.	+
-		+
-	Vader was made the new Emperor of the Imperial Forces and Empire, Luke was the Commander of the Imperial Military Strike Forces and a skilled rogue Dark enforcer of the Sith, Leia was the Supreme Commander of the Imperial Navy Fleet and Grand Moff of the Imperial Government. The Death Star was now in Vaders hand and would use it to destroy other systems to get rid of any oppositions to the Empire.	+
-		+
-	Luke was given every task by his father go an eliminate remaining Rebels with the help of the 501st Legion across the Galaxy which he and Leia would do is to butcher every Rebels without hesitation as their they lose their minds when Vader turn them into to mindless Sith Enforcers	+

		+	Do you:
		+	*[[SW: run and scream\|Run and scream]]
		+	*[[SW:Fight the droids.\| Fight the droids!]]
	[[Category:Star Wars]]		[[Category:Star Wars]]

StarWarsLegion at 01:07, 17 March 2014

StarWarsLegion — Mon, 17 Mar 2014 01:07:25 GMT

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-	~~You are sitting~~ on a ~~balcony~~ of ~~your~~ new ~~home having just become a Jedi Knight~~. As you ~~sit peacefully~~, the force ~~flowing~~ through your mind, ~~3 armed droids drop~~ on your ~~home~~. ~~Scrambling~~ to your ~~feet~~, you ~~have~~ to ~~act quickly~~...	+	Dark Side Future
		+
		+	Han Solo fate was to be executed instead of jumping into the frozen Carbonite. He stands on the platform of Cloud City as Leia, Chewbacca, and Lando loom on as Han was killed by a firesquad of Stormtroopers. Vader intended to kill Solo to bring Luke to Bespin as he knows that he can sense their presenses. Boba Fett was displeased by Vaders decision by killing Han as he wanted to bring him to Jabba, he boarded his Slave 1 ship and flown off to Tatootine to give Jabba the new. Chewbacca was next and he too suffered the same fate as Han. Their bodies were eventually cremated inside the facility of Cloud City. Lando was eventually disgusted by Vaders brutality and decided to help out Leia with the situation. Vader senses Lando's intention and immediately cold bloodedly killed him by stabbing his lightsaber through the heart. Lando died instantly from the pure red blade. Cloud City was put under Imperial Control with civilians began to work for the Empire to save their own lives.Vader suddenly recognizes C-3P0 as he knew the Droid from his childhood and decided to defect him to the Empire by erasing his memories. The only thing Vader has to lure Luke Skywalker to Cloud City was Leia herself. "Call out to Luke now" Vader demanded. "I will never let you get him, you will have to kill me first" Leia muttered. "If that's the only way" Vader said as he started force choking Leia as he did to Padme, 23 years ago.
		+
		+	Luke was in his X-Wing Starfighter with R2 when he suddenly senses Leia in danger. He can hear her through the Force screaming and choking and realizes it was Vader that was hurting her. He arrived at Cloud City and met no resistance as he enters through the hallways. "No guards, but how, maybe this is a trap..i gotta find Leia and the others" Luke said to himself as he slowly maintain his position with his blaster with R2 at his side. "There he is, stop him" a voice was heard as Luke recognizes a Stormtrooper was in the premises. An Imperial Officer appeared right in front of him with a handheld blaster, but Luke fired first, killing the officer. Suddenly, hundreds of stormtroopers poured in the hallways and cornered Luke with their blasters trained. Luke was outnumbered a hundred to one, he still kept his blaster train on every one of the Troopers. R2 was suddenly stun and powered out by a stun blaster that was fired from a stormtrooper. Luke was defenseless with the amount of Troopers that he can't handle alone. Vader appeared from the crowd and had had Leia in cuffs. "Surrender Skywalker, you cannot win" Vader said. Luke was angried by Vaders word and looked at Leia as she is scared to die. "Luke, please, do what he says, or he'll kill me" Leia said. Luke reluctantly gave in, and put down his blaster and lightsaber on the floor. Two Imperial Troops began cuffing Luke as well and led away in an Imperial Shuttle.
		+
		+	Luke woke up to find himself in a cell. He looked around to find the ray shield cell door and Leia was laying at his side. "How long have I been here" Luke said to himself. He suddenly hears Obi-Wan voice through his head. "Luke, I must tell you something that I never told you before" Obi-Wan said. "Tell me Ben, I'm now captured and half of my friends are dead, what do you need to say to me now" Luke said. "The one that is close to you, Master Yoda and I kept for years" Obi-Wan said to the confusion of Luke. "Who's close to me, tell me" Luke asked. "I thought I can tell you when the day has come after completing your training, Master Yoda has spoke that another about Skywalker" Obi-Wan said. Luke was confused than he realizes what Ben was telling him. "Another Skywalker, wait, who's the one" Luke said as he looked at Leia. "Another Skywalker Master Yoda was going to tell you was your twin sister" Obi-Wan answered. Luke suddenly realizes what Ben was telling him. "Leia, Leia is my sister" Luke exclaimed. "Yes, your sister was hidden from the Empire all these years, but now she is in that cell with you, you must find a way to seal off that secret" Obi-Wan said. Luke agreed to avoid exposing Leia's true identity. Vader came in with two stormtroopers. "I hear it all, Obi-Wan" Vader said which Luke realizes he was listening in the whole time. "Wait you were listening all this time...oh man" Luke angrily freaked. "Obi-Wan never told you what happened to your father" Vader said with clear knowledge. "You told me enough, he told me you killed him" Luke replied. "No Luke, I Am your Father" Vader said to the shock of Luke. "No, no, that's not true, that's impossible, no" Luke cried out as he now knows the truth. "Search your feelings Luke and you will no it will be true" Vader said. "No, this can't be happening" Luke cried. "You can destroy the Emperor, he has fore seen it, together you and your sister will rule the Galaxy with me" Vader said. "No, no, I will not turn, you cant make me" Luke shout out. "Thanks I have a better idea, bring those two to the mind chamber" Vader demanded as the stormtroopers escorted Luke and Leia to the chamber.
		+
		+	They were bound to the metal dark flat bed. Leia woke up and find herself and Luke in a dark room. "Luke, what's going on, where are we" Leia asked when she freaked. "Leia, I have to tell you about something" Luke said. "Tell me what, we don't have the time for this" Leia said as she struggles with the metal straps. "No, i have to tell you that your real name isn't Organa" Luke said. "It's not, than what am i" Leia asked to know the truth. "I learn that you were actually another Skywalker" Luke answered as Leia realizes this. "Wait, I'm your sister...how couldn't I see that..but by the way, why are we here" Leia asked. "Vaders is going to brainwash us, I got to tell you, that he's our father" Luke said. "Vader, Vader is our father, why is he doing this" Leia criedly asked. "He is going to turn us to the Dark Side" Luke said to the horror of Leia. "Turn us...oh no" Leia said. The machines on their heads suddenly went off. The two began to suffer from intense headaches. "AAAAHHH, Luke it hurts, AAAAHHH" Leia cried out. "Just hang on" Luke replied. Suddenly, inside your heads were overriding with different minds and thoughts were bouncing everywhere, their memories were flashing inside your minds, than everything turn black for them.
		+
		+	Vader was watching from a monitor and realizes the brainwashing is complete. "They will be under my control from now on...tell the Emperor that Luke has made it to his path" Vader ordered. "Yes, Sir" an Imperial Officer obeyed and went to give the news. Vader entered the brainwashing room and observes his two hidden now exposed children and knows they will be the future Siths.
		+
		+	Palpatine was on his chair watching the nightsky in space as Vader appears with two hooded figures. "Lord Vader, I see you why you brought them" Palpatine said. "Yes my master, they went through alot of training" Vader replied as the two hooded figures removed their hoods to reveal Luke and Lena. Luke is wearing a dark hooded, sleeveless cloak is made of black fabric that reaches the ankles. The inside of the cloak and hood are lined with a deep red fabric, and the hood is always worn over the head. The cloak is secured closed on the chest, at a point directly under the base of the throat armor and an Imperial Insignia on the right shoulder. Leia is wearing a long dark silk robe with dark long andnwide sleeves that touches the floor, inside dark long pants that reaches to her foot with dark leather shoes and an Imperial insignia on her left shoulder. "They will fine Sith warriors under the Dark Side of the Force" Vader said. "Well, Lord Vader, I apparently sense some disturbance upon us" Palpatine said as he walks towards Vader. "I sense that you are taking me for a fool, these kids of yours are going to become more powerful than yournever imag..." Palpatine said as she is suddenly impaled through the chest by Vader. "Sorry, my master, I wouldn't be needing you any further, you are now removed from your commands" Vader said as Palpatine succumbs to his wounds than died in the eyes of Skywalker's kids.
		+
		+	Vader was made the new Emperor of the Imperial Forces and Empire, Luke was the Commander of the Imperial Military Strike Forces and a skilled rogue Dark enforcer of the Sith, Leia was the Supreme Commander of the Imperial Navy Fleet and Grand Moff of the Imperial Government. The Death Star was now in Vaders hand and would use it to destroy other systems to get rid of any oppositions to the Empire.
		+
		+	Luke was given every task by his father go an eliminate remaining Rebels with the help of the 501st Legion across the Galaxy which he and Leia would do is to butcher every Rebels without hesitation as their they lose their minds when Vader turn them into to mindless Sith Enforcers

-	~~Do you:~~
-	*[[SW: run and scream\|Run and scream]]
-	*[[SW:Fight the droids.\| Fight the droids!]]
	[[Category:Star Wars]]		[[Category:Star Wars]]

Platypus at 23:54, 14 December 2013

Platypus — Sat, 14 Dec 2013 23:54:16 GMT

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	*[[SW: run and scream\|Run and scream]]		*[[SW: run and scream\|Run and scream]]
-	*[[SW: ~~fight~~ the droids.\| Fight the droids!]]	+	*[[SW:Fight the droids.\| Fight the droids!]]
	[[Category:Star Wars]]		[[Category:Star Wars]]

Krocken: Total re-vamp of story opener

Krocken — Sat, 14 Dec 2013 23:34:09 GMT

Total re-vamp of story opener

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-	You are sitting on a balcony of your new home having just become a Jedi Knight, ~~when~~ 3 droids drop on your home.~~You jump down~~ to ~~the~~	+	You are sitting on a balcony of your new home having just become a Jedi Knight. As you sit peacefully, the force flowing through your mind, 3 armed droids drop on your home. Scrambling to your feet, you have to act quickly...
-	~~driods~~.	+

	Do you:		Do you:
-	[[run and scream]]	+	*[[SW: run and scream\|Run and scream]]
-	[[fight the droids.]]	+	*[[SW: fight the droids.\| Fight the droids!]]
	[[Category:Star Wars]]		[[Category:Star Wars]]

Epictrooper122 at 13:35, 24 December 2011

Epictrooper122 — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 13:35:45 GMT

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		+	driods.

	Do you:		Do you:

Epictrooper122 at 04:36, 24 December 2011

Epictrooper122 — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 04:36:24 GMT

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	Do you:		Do you:
-	*[[run and scream]]	+	[[run and scream]]
-	*[[fight the droids.]]	+	[[fight the droids.]]
	[[Category:Star Wars]]		[[Category:Star Wars]]

Epictrooper122 at 03:49, 24 December 2011

Epictrooper122 — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 03:49:04 GMT

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Platypus at 14:39, 24 May 2010

Platypus — Mon, 24 May 2010 14:39:20 GMT

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	Do you:		Do you:
-		+	*[[run and scream]]
-	[[run and scream]]	+	*[[fight the droids.]]
-	[[fight the droids.]]	+	[[Category:Star Wars]]

Yougo1000: Created page with 'you are sitting on a balcony having just become a jedi. When droids drop on your home. Do you: run and scream fight the droids.'

Yougo1000 — Sun, 23 May 2010 22:37:30 GMT

Created page with 'you are sitting on a balcony having just become a jedi. When droids drop on your home. Do you: run and scream fight the droids.'

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you are sitting on a balcony having just become a jedi. When droids drop on your home.

Do you:

[[run and scream]]
[[fight the droids.]]