Saya/Black Dress/2 - Revision history

Zoroastra at 10:44, 28 August 2014

Zoroastra — Thu, 28 Aug 2014 10:44:18 GMT

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	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]	+	[[Saya/Black Dress 2/A mighty lord\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]	+	[[Saya/Black Dress 2/A mysterious lord\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra: Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Black Dress moved to Saya/Black Dress/2

Zoroastra — Fri, 02 Mar 2012 21:59:08 GMT

Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. *Black Dress* moved to Saya/Black Dress/2

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Zoroastra at 11:49, 8 February 2012

Zoroastra — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 11:49:03 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|~~Money~~=~~250~~\|~~Possesions~~=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Chlo's-closet: Spelling, capitalization, etc.

Chlo's-closet — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 01:38:09 GMT

Spelling, capitalization, etc.

Zoroastra at 19:04, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 19:04:49 GMT

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	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]		[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand ~~Black_Dress_2~~ \|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]		[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

Zoroastra at 19:03, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 19:03:18 GMT

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	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]		[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2 \|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]		[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

Zoroastra at 19:02, 24 January 2012

Zoroastra — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 19:02:48 GMT

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra at 04:15, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 04:15:16 GMT

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	Duran manages to get a grip on himself and stammers "uh Sure lass, we'll be taking you to... :"		Duran manages to get a grip on himself and stammers "uh Sure lass, we'll be taking you to... :"
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	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Black_Dress_2]]		[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Black_Dress_2]]

Zoroastra at 04:14, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 04:14:09 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Armor''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra at 04:13, 21 January 2012

Zoroastra — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 04:13:44 GMT

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	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]		[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]

-	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana''}}	+	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

←Older revision		Revision as of 10:44, 28 August 2014
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	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]		[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]	+	[[Saya/Black Dress 2/A mighty lord\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]	+	[[Saya/Black Dress 2/A mysterious lord\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Gold=50\|Silver=00\|Copper=00\|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

←Older revision		Revision as of 19:04, 24 January 2012
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	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]		[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand ~~Black_Dress_2~~ \|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black Dress 2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]		[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

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	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]		[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2 \|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]		[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

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-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country as a symbol of our Alliance]]

-	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire Black_Dress_2\|The prince of a neighbouring country to enforce a ceasefire]]

-	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand Black_Dress_2\|An extremely rich trader of noble descent who offered to supply an immense amount of money and resources in return for your hand]]

-	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army Black_Dress_2\|A mighty lord who will provide a great military asset to our army]]

-	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt. Black_Dress_2]]	+	[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt Black_Dress_2\|A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt]]

	{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}		{{Princess Status\|Equipment=''Black Dress''\|Health=100\|Stamina=100\|Mood=Excited\|Money=250\|Possesions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

	[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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-	You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends~~, they~~'re somewhat shocked to see you in feminine clothing and ask you if you're excited to meet your future husband, ~~wich~~ you can't entirely deny. One of them surprises you with a set of ~~Black~~ combat gloves and armguards, along with shin-protectors and combat boots. Judging by the quality of these items and his general income, you'd say he spent at least a year's salary on these.	+	You quickly say your goodbyes to your friends. They're somewhat shocked to see you in feminine clothing and ask you if you're excited to meet your future husband, which you can't entirely deny. One of them surprises you with a set of black combat gloves and armguards, along with shin-protectors and combat boots. Judging by the quality of these items and his general income, you'd say he spent at least a year's salary on these.

-	You're torn between telling him he shouldn't have spent this much money for a farewell gift and the urge to jump him. You end up doing both. He chuckles and puts you down. "I would know of no better investment than your happiness milady" he says ~~with~~ an extremely polite tone while mock bowing.	+	You're torn between telling him he shouldn't have spent this much money for a farewell gift and the urge to jump him. You end up doing both. He chuckles and puts you down. "I would know of no better investment than your happiness, milady" he says in an extremely polite tone while mock bowing.

-	"I.. ~~thanks~~." is all you manage to say before he hugs you and tells you to take care of yourself. Such a sweetie-pie, no wonder you couldn't stop teasing him continuously for the past 4 years. You kiss him on the lips, a very rare thing for you to do. ~~you~~ may be ~~playfull~~ and tease people alot, but you ~~allmost~~ never actually get intimate with them.	+	"I... thanks" is all you manage to say before he hugs you and tells you to take care of yourself. Such a sweetie-pie, no wonder you couldn't stop teasing him continuously for the past 4 years. You kiss him on the lips, a very rare thing for you to do. You may be playful and tease people alot, but you almost never actually get intimate with them.

-	"You take care too sweetie-pie." you say ~~as you~~ turn around and hurry off before he notices the blush on your cheeks. Leaving him standing there dazed.	+	"You take care too sweetie-pie." you say. You turn around and hurry off before he notices the blush on your cheeks. Leaving him standing there dazed.

	You feel invigorated and ready for anything as you run up to your carriage and meet your escort party.		You feel invigorated and ready for anything as you run up to your carriage and meet your escort party.
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	You were never that close to the servants, but most of them are cute-looking boys (the type you love to tease). And a few equally cute maids.		You were never that close to the servants, but most of them are cute-looking boys (the type you love to tease). And a few equally cute maids.

-	You also recognize one of the older maids... Betty. She's been around since you were a 'wee little baby' and has been ~~going~~ on your nerves for about equally long. Your father must have send her along to make sure you behave... probably a wise move, if extremely annoying.	+	You also recognize one of the older maids... Betty. She's been around since you were a 'wee little baby' and has been getting on your nerves for about equally long. Your father must have send her along to make sure you behave... probably a wise move, if extremely annoying.

	You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.		You greet the captain of the guards as he approaches you, he's a large, burly middle aged man with a large scar accros his face. Most girls are scared of him, but you know how to appreciate the company of a veteran warrior such as him.

-	"Ah you've fin-." he interrupts himself mid-sentence as his eyes grow big staring at your dress.	+	"Ah you've fin-" he interrupts himself mid-sentence as his eyes grow big staring at your dress.

	A huge grin splits your face in two as he stands there mouth wide open.		A huge grin splits your face in two as he stands there mouth wide open.

-	"~~never tought~~ I'd see you in a dress m'am. Not that it don't look good on ya. Ye're quite ~~beautifull~~." he stares at you some more .	+	"Never thought I'd see you in a dress, ma'am. Not that it don't look good on ya. Ye're quite beautiful." He stares at you some more .

-	~~you~~ giggle at his embarrasment a little. "Why, thanks for the compliment Duran~~, so~~, since you're going to escort me there I assume you know who my wonderfully ~~unkown~~ suitor will be then?"	+	You giggle at his embarrasment a little. "Why, thanks for the compliment Duran. So, since you're going to escort me there I assume you know who my wonderfully unknown suitor will be, then?"

-	Duran manages to get a grip on himself and stammers "~~uh Sure~~ lass, we'll be taking you to~~... :~~"	+	Duran manages to get a grip on himself and stammers "Uh, sure lass, we'll be taking you to-"