Say something/boy (Lil) - Revision history

Sarah926 at 02:06, 20 January 2011

Sarah926 — Thu, 20 Jan 2011 02:06:30 GMT

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-	''Hi, what's your name?'' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.	+	"Hi, what's your name?"' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.

	The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him,		The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him,
-	''Jeremy.'' he replies.	+	"Jeremy." he replies.

-	''Jeremy... That's a nice name.''	+	"Jeremy... That's a nice name."

-	''Erm... thanks.''	+	"Erm... thanks."

	there's an awkward silence...		there's an awkward silence...

Sarah926 — Tue, 04 Jan 2011 02:56:29 GMT

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-	~~< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]~~
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	''Hi, what's your name?'' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.		''Hi, what's your name?'' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.

Sarah926 — Tue, 04 Jan 2011 02:56:15 GMT

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	< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]		< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]

-	''Hi, what's your name?''	+	''Hi, what's your name?'' you ask in a rather cheerful tone.

-	''Jeremy.''	+	The boy looks up, with a smile that shows how happy he is that someone is speaking to him,
		+	''Jeremy.'' he replies.

	''Jeremy... That's a nice name.''		''Jeremy... That's a nice name.''

-	''Erm... thanks.''	+	''Erm... thanks.''

		+	there's an awkward silence...
	*[[say nothing/boy (Lil)\|say nothing]]		*[[say nothing/boy (Lil)\|say nothing]]
	*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]		*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]

	[[Category:9th Grade]]		[[Category:9th Grade]]

Sarah926 — Tue, 04 Jan 2011 02:51:29 GMT

Sarah926 — Tue, 04 Jan 2011 02:51:04 GMT

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	< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]		< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]

-	''"Hi, what's your name?"''	+	''Hi, what's your name?''

-	~~the boy looks up.~~ ''~~"Kyle~~."''	+	''Jeremy.''

-	'~~''"~~That's a nice name. ~~Common. But fitting."~~''	+	'Jeremy... That's a nice name.''

-	''"Erm... thanks."'''	+	''Erm... thanks.''

	*[[say nothing/boy (Lil)\|say nothing]]		*[[say nothing/boy (Lil)\|say nothing]]

Sarah926 — Mon, 03 Jan 2011 04:17:50 GMT

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	*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]		*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]

-	[[Category:~~Yet Another High School Story~~]]	+	[[Category:9th Grade]]

Platypus — Mon, 03 Jan 2011 03:34:18 GMT

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	*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]		*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]

-	~~Category:~~ [[Yet Another High School Story]]	+	[[Category:Yet Another High School Story]]

Sarah926 — Mon, 03 Jan 2011 03:32:44 GMT

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	''"Erm... thanks."'''		''"Erm... thanks."'''

-	*[[say nothing ~~more~~/boy (Lil)\|say nothing ~~more~~]]	+	*[[say nothing/boy (Lil)\|say nothing]]
	*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]		*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]

	Category: [[Yet Another High School Story]]		Category: [[Yet Another High School Story]]

Sarah926 — Mon, 03 Jan 2011 03:19:06 GMT

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		+	< [[With a boy you've never seen before (Lil)]]
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	''"Hi, what's your name?"''		''"Hi, what's your name?"''

Sarah926 — Mon, 03 Jan 2011 03:15:00 GMT

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	*[[say nothing more/boy (Lil)\|say nothing more]]		*[[say nothing more/boy (Lil)\|say nothing more]]
	*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]		*[[keep talking/boy (Lil)\|keep talking]]
		+
		+	Category: [[Yet Another High School Story]]