http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/?action=history&feed=atom&title=User_talk%3AZyrokonUser talk:Zyrokon - Revision history2026-09-30T05:39:16ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.15.1http://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/?title=User_talk:Zyrokon&diff=167227&oldid=prevPlatypus at 03:22, 23 December 20122012-12-23T03:22:44Z<p></p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>If you are going to contribute to Rampage, you need to use proper grammar. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]], and make sure to keep the present tense in the present. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:16, 23 December 2012 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>If you are going to contribute to Rampage, you need to use proper grammar. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]], and make sure to keep the present tense in the present. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:16, 23 December 2012 (UTC)</div></td></tr>
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<tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Did you notice on the first page of Rampage that the family cat is sleeping on the hood of the mother's car? That would imply that the car is parked in front of the Jones' house. The mother hasn't driven Brandon somewhere to meet the bus. The bus has come to them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:22, 23 December 2012 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr>
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</table>Platypushttp://72.14.177.54/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/?title=User_talk:Zyrokon&diff=167206&oldid=prevPlatypus: Created page with 'If you are going to contribute to Rampage, you need to use proper grammar. Please review punctuation with dialogue, and make sure to keep the present tense in the present. -…'2012-12-23T02:16:28Z<p>Created page with 'If you are going to contribute to Rampage, you need to use proper grammar. Please review <a href="/CREATE_YOUR_OWN_STORY/Punctuation_with_dialogue" title="Punctuation with dialogue">punctuation with dialogue</a>, and make sure to keep the present tense in the present. -…'</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>If you are going to contribute to Rampage, you need to use proper grammar. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]], and make sure to keep the present tense in the present. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:16, 23 December 2012 (UTC)</div>Platypus