Talk:The Devils Daughter - Revision history

Impalalevi1 at 01:33, 2 January 2012

2012-01-02T01:33:56Z

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	Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]		Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]
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	Makes sense. Three girls works perfectly well.		Makes sense. Three girls works perfectly well.

-	I especially like the ~~bthroom~~ scene, with Karla. All the situations in this story, in fact, are very fun to work with, as a writer.--[[User:Impalalevi1]]	+	I especially like the bathroom scene, with Karla. All the situations in this story, in fact, are very fun to work with, as a writer.--[[User:Impalalevi1]]

Impalalevi1 at 01:33, 2 January 2012

2012-01-02T01:33:08Z

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	Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]		Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]
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		+	I especially like the bthroom scene, with Karla. All the situations in this story, in fact, are very fun to work with, as a writer.--[[User:Impalalevi1]]

Fletcher Peninsula at 21:34, 1 January 2012

2012-01-01T21:34:49Z

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	[[User:Impalalevi1]] here. I just wanted to say that I love this story! Kudos to you, Mr. Fletcher Peninsula! Excellent character development, and great use of conflict (The mission to find three girls)! It gives the story direction and focus. Your writing style is also very fun to read, very descriptive. I just love it. Thank you.--[[User: Impalalevi1]]		[[User:Impalalevi1]] here. I just wanted to say that I love this story! Kudos to you, Mr. Fletcher Peninsula! Excellent character development, and great use of conflict (The mission to find three girls)! It gives the story direction and focus. Your writing style is also very fun to read, very descriptive. I just love it. Thank you.--[[User: Impalalevi1]]
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		+	Thanks man. Glad to hear it. Humorously enough I originally wrote 10 girls, but just seeing how large this story has already become with just three victims - 10 victims would just be a bizzare overstretch.[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

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[[User:Impalalevi1]] here. I just wanted to say that I love this story! Kudos to you, Mr. Fletcher Peninsula! Excellent character development, and great use of conflict (The mission to find three girls)! It gives the story direction and focus. Your writing style is also very fun to read, very descriptive. I just love it. Thank you.--[[User: Impalalevi1]]