Mia/Red Dress - Revision history

Zoroastra at 19:20, 1 March 2012

2012-03-01T19:20:34Z

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	With that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.		With that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.

-	[[They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down Red_Dress\|They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down]]	+	[[Mia/Red Dress/Surprise Party\|They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down]]

-	[[You make it to your carriage without running into anyone Red_Dress\|You make it to your carriage without running into anyone]]	+	[[Mia/Red Dress/Departure\|You make it to your carriage without running into anyone]]

	[[Category: The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category: The life of a medieval princess]]

Zoroastra: A beatifull red dress that makes your face blush in a matching color moved to Mia/Red Dress

2012-03-01T19:16:46Z

A beatifull red dress that makes your face blush in a matching color moved to Mia/Red Dress

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Chlo's-closet: Spelling/grammar

2012-02-13T22:55:55Z

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-	To your horror, the maids pull out a gorgeous red dress~~, you~~ start to panic but are soon muffled by the maids putting the dress on you. When they are done, they turn you to face the mirror. They all gasp at the sight of you, giggling excitedly.	+	To your horror, the maids pull out a gorgeous red dress. You start to panic, but are soon muffled by the maids putting the dress on you. When they are done, they turn you to face the mirror. They all gasp at the sight of you, giggling excitedly.

-	~~with~~ tears welling up in your eyes you look at the mirror. The cute upset girl in a gorgeous red dress staring back at you makes you want to run over and hug her to make her feel better. You barely have the time to realize ~~its~~ actually your own mirror image before the maids decide to do exactly what you'd planned.	+	With tears welling up in your eyes, you look at the mirror. The cute upset girl in a gorgeous red dress staring back at you makes you want to run over and hug her to make her feel better. You barely have the time to realize it's actually your own mirror image before the maids decide to do exactly what you'd planned.

-	After they spent some time hugging and kissing you all over the place, you feel really ~~gratefull~~ when someone knocks on the door. The maids quickly detach from you, straighten up and open the door.	+	After they spent some time hugging and kissing you all over the place, you feel really grateful when someone knocks on the door. The maids quickly detach from you, straighten up and open the door.

-	A servant is standing in the entrance looking somewhat flustered, ~~untill~~ he catches sight of you and he goes from being slightly nervous to completely fascinated. It takes him a while to collect himself~~, you~~ hide behind one of the maids when he looks as if he could run over and hug you at any time. The maids, finally starting to get impatient, urge him to state why he came to your room.	+	A servant is standing in the entrance looking somewhat flustered, until he catches sight of you and he goes from being slightly nervous to completely fascinated. It takes him a while to collect himself. You hide behind one of the maids when he looks as if he could run over and hug you at any time. The maids, finally starting to get impatient, urge him to state why he came to your room.

-	"ah, err I- they, your escort i mean, prepared the carriage and are waiting for you downstairs" he nervously manages to stammer out, tripping over his tongue all the way.	+	"Ah, err I- they, your escort I mean, prepared the carriage and are waiting for you downstairs" he nervously manages to stammer out, tripping over his tongue all the way.

-	~~with~~ that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.	+	With that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.

	[[They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down Red_Dress\|They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down]]		[[They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down Red_Dress\|They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down]]

Zoroastra at 19:17, 24 January 2012

2012-01-24T19:17:25Z

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	with that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.		with that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.

		+	[[They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down Red_Dress\|They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down]]

-	[[~~They decided~~ to ~~throw you a surprise party and ambush you on~~ your ~~way down.~~ Red_Dress]]	+	[[You make it to your carriage without running into anyone Red_Dress\|You make it to your carriage without running into anyone]]
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-	[[You make it to your carriage without running into anyone. Red_Dress]]	+

	[[Category: The life of a medieval princess]]		[[Category: The life of a medieval princess]]

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2012-01-21T14:20:29Z

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To your horror, the maids pull out a gorgeous red dress, you start to panic but are soon muffled by the maids putting the dress on you. When they are done, they turn you to face the mirror. They all gasp at the sight of you, giggling excitedly.

with tears welling up in your eyes you look at the mirror. The cute upset girl in a gorgeous red dress staring back at you makes you want to run over and hug her to make her feel better. You barely have the time to realize its actually your own mirror image before the maids decide to do exactly what you'd planned.

After they spent some time hugging and kissing you all over the place, you feel really gratefull when someone knocks on the door. The maids quickly detach from you, straighten up and open the door.

A servant is standing in the entrance looking somewhat flustered, untill he catches sight of you and he goes from being slightly nervous to completely fascinated. It takes him a while to collect himself, you hide behind one of the maids when he looks as if he could run over and hug you at any time. The maids, finally starting to get impatient, urge him to state why he came to your room.

"ah, err I- they, your escort i mean, prepared the carriage and are waiting for you downstairs" he nervously manages to stammer out, tripping over his tongue all the way.

with that, the maids pack up and prepare to walk you to the carriage waiting outside.

[[They decided to throw you a surprise party and ambush you on your way down. *Red_Dress*]]

[[You make it to your carriage without running into anyone. *Red_Dress*]]

[[Category: The life of a medieval princess]]